Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Yes, Dear? (Cheeky Missy)
The flood gate opened and I have to say the second was my favorite but all...
November 2nd, 2024 10:22 - lifes journey (Jim56)
So true it is. Life full of twists and turn and more than anything else a...
November 2nd, 2024 10:16 - Waiting for snow (Maplespal)
I loved the personification of the snowflake and the metaphor of people...
November 2nd, 2024 10:14 - Old world (Lorenz)
Wonderfully worded this poem portrays for me a world rusting and aging...
November 2nd, 2024 10:09 - All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby) (Arqios)
Ah Cryptic you have captured the feel of sleep and that peaceful hour....
November 2nd, 2024 08:39 - Snack Attack (Tony36)
It happens. Fun write.
November 2nd, 2024 08:11 - Two Times Four Plus One (Teddy.15)
I look everywhere I can to find the joys of madness but yea, that would...
November 2nd, 2024 05:22 - Swing From Paris Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write about times of joy brought by a group of musicians. Music...
November 2nd, 2024 05:18 - ~> We Must Be Doing Something Right (Thad Wilk)
Sweet and romantic it holds a charm for the one loved
November 1st, 2024 15:34 - Time to Live (Arqios)
As I read this I see the rising and falling of each breath and I think of...
November 1st, 2024 15:32 - If Only Things Had Been Different (Neville)
Highly identifiable the what if. I think everyone has, at one time or...
November 1st, 2024 04:02 - Get Yer Diction Right for Starters…. (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I remember well that song in that my parents played it frequently. Do...
November 1st, 2024 03:59 - Aftermath (Teddy.15)
Some say humor for me more like reality. In my neighborhood all the kids...
November 1st, 2024 03:55 - Samhain Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful! I have no other word.
November 1st, 2024 03:48 - Vagabond Wind (Thomas W Case)
I can hear the wail of the desert wind whistling through this poem Thomas....
November 1st, 2024 03:44 - Trubba Man (Dan Williams)
It took me a while to get the neologism then it all made sense. Just a bit...
November 1st, 2024 03:41 - Horrors! (Orchidee)
It is Halloween so I\'ll give you that one Orchi but even after tonight...
October 31st, 2024 12:26 - Sometimes it\'s Different (Raj Singh(Bcom. Commerce) Roll Number :- 2446054, KIIT)
I think I have had several of those days. Very relateable.
October 31st, 2024 12:23 - This is ... fun. (Kerry)
We are all wearing many hats which is confusing. Expectation weigh on us...
October 31st, 2024 11:18 - ~> If Love Was A Planet (Thad Wilk)
The chain of love is strong and passion is revealed in this poem. Very...
October 31st, 2024 09:45 - Reach iut (Tony36)
The needs are many. Too few are those that care. Thanks for raising...
October 31st, 2024 09:43 - Strange (2781)
A feeling shared by many and you are right it may be too late. Good write.
October 31st, 2024 09:40 - Exclusion (Tristan Robert Lange)
If it is a physical restriction that is still you if it is what others...
October 31st, 2024 09:35 - The Write Crowd (Tom Dylan)
I too do my writing alone and it is a therapy that I wouldn\'t have with a...
October 31st, 2024 07:28 - Renejaded (Mutley Ravishes)
I too a drone with the fate of after populating expulsion. No work no...
October 31st, 2024 06:30 - WHAT A COUNTRY! (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
What a great senryu with such deep meaning
October 31st, 2024 06:24 - break up (Jim56)
A very positive approach and lovely write
October 31st, 2024 06:11 - Flight (Lorenz)
(Death has this sticky sweetnes) a great line that conveys its meaning...
October 31st, 2024 06:10 - heavenly bodice (Arqios)
A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last...
October 31st, 2024 06:07 - A drop\'s view (Maplespal)
This to me held a strong metaphor of how the sea in this life separates...
October 31st, 2024 05:00 - Looking Beyond Spring (Neville)
Neville I had to read this over a couple of times to get the sense of...
October 31st, 2024 04:51 - With The Absolute Very Best Of Love (Teddy.15)
A great metaphor and each heart could use a periodic cleaning. The imagery...
October 31st, 2024 04:38 - Conduits (E.J. Waling)
This poem gave a sense of conectedness in a universe of relationships very...
October 31st, 2024 04:35 - Beyond Words (Aloo Denish Obiero)
Very nice this poem speaks wisdom in very few words. It seems Budistic or...
October 31st, 2024 04:27 - Flame that Flickers (Rin the Magnificent)
A poem that feels old and of another time. There is a sense of foreboding...
October 31st, 2024 04:23 - MY HOKEY POKEY PLAN (Bobby O)
Bobby is it the dirty old man in me or did you leave a lot of metaphorical...
October 31st, 2024 04:20 - Halloween Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A most fun read Gold and very appropriate for the day
October 31st, 2024 04:07 - Invented Confusion (Dan Williams)
Some very mind provoking lines with deep meaning. (Sincerity, handcuffed...
October 31st, 2024 04:04 - this is a poem (MR.apocalypse)
Let me think about that.... loved the rhyme and the paradoxical twist of...
October 31st, 2024 03:54 - Works (2781)
A call to all to follow their belief. Nice write
October 30th, 2024 12:15 - Self Obsessed (Sunshine777)
October 30th, 2024 11:22 - Self Obsessed (Sunshine777)
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22 - THE SIN OF JEALOUSY (Qurrathul Ain)
A most interesting story with great images. Nicely written
October 30th, 2024 11:18 - The south (Lorenz)
An exotic setting with vivid images covers a metaphor that supports the...
October 30th, 2024 07:53 - Teddy Bear (Tony36)
Comfort in childhood we have to ask what are our adult Teddy bears? A...
October 30th, 2024 07:50 - Beauty In The Pain (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
A poem with a message that all things have a positive side written in...
October 30th, 2024 06:02 - everybody ages (Jim56)
So true Jim I keep asking where has the time gone?
October 30th, 2024 06:00 - untitled (autumn sijo) (Arqios)
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49 - 6 poorly written poems sorry (Maplespal)
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this...
October 30th, 2024 05:05 - Hail (Neville)
Nature strikes back. Am I hypersensitive Neville or are there some hidden...
October 30th, 2024 05:00 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
Beautiful positive and encouraging. Yes keep writing Teddy!
October 30th, 2024 04:51 - Bad To Best. (Goldfinch60)
Gold I have for many years believed that everything happens for the best...
October 30th, 2024 04:48 - Corridors of Decaying Dreams (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky...
October 30th, 2024 04:41 - We Are Worthy (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Great thoughts in your write and well expressed.
October 29th, 2024 16:13 - Woodstock Summer (Gray0328)
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic...
October 29th, 2024 13:38 - The Invisible (Tristan Robert Lange)
Isolation felt more by some than others. Humans are social animals and we...
October 29th, 2024 12:18 - Reminders (Jojojoking)
A wistful poem in more than one way. It speaks to the bonds of friendship...
October 29th, 2024 12:14 - ~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Sounds familiar. Think I tried it but built up an immunity. For the hard...
October 29th, 2024 12:12 - A Wish (Kerry)
A great message with a most positive focus. Lovely
October 29th, 2024 09:05 - Sounds the knell (Lorenz)
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow...
October 29th, 2024 09:03 - Starvation (Sunshine777)
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the...
October 29th, 2024 08:19 - Dark Hallway (Tony36)
We all look to our fears to find what lies inside. A poem deeper than at...
October 29th, 2024 08:16 - SWIMMING IN MORONIC DREAMS (Rebellion_in_sanity)
An so were named the seas and moon anciently, the moon a she the sun a he...
October 29th, 2024 08:14 - let the fireworks fly (Jim56)
Such an upbeat and fun poem of celebration. Loved it.
October 29th, 2024 05:04 - Whispers of a Wandering Soul (Arqios)
Beautifully stated is such solid verse it sounds classic and serves as a...
October 29th, 2024 05:03 - The Last Word (Tom Dylan)
I love how I was lulled into the rhyme to be hit in the face with the last...
October 29th, 2024 04:58 - Unilaterally Mine (Neville)
I think you have something there Neville. I like the taste of that.
October 29th, 2024 04:50 - An Old Fashioned Soul (Teddy.15)
What a simple world it would be if the smile was always guaranteed....
October 29th, 2024 04:09 - Croquet Again Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A fun read where I felt like I was there. Thanks for the invitation my...
October 29th, 2024 03:52 - If We (Sunshine777)
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is...
October 28th, 2024 19:55 - Universal Suffrage for All..! (Doggerel Dave)
In the US election this would apply. Who do you vote for if your choice is...
October 28th, 2024 19:47 - The mask (Neilton)
A strong metaphor. We all wear a mask most of us wear many. To remove that...
October 28th, 2024 19:41 - Stuck (Orchidee)
Not too much water please. Nice to read you again.
October 28th, 2024 17:01 - Coldplay (Neilton)
A fun read and reminder of past conserts
October 28th, 2024 16:58 - The Womb (Thomas W Case)
This one I have been there wishing to be back in the womb pulling a...
October 28th, 2024 13:41 - Marienburg (Lorenz)
Historical and metaphorical the end of the vanquished and in some ways the...
October 28th, 2024 13:39 - Cold it is (Maplespal)
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this...
October 28th, 2024 10:01 - Wandering2 (E.J. Waling)
Life an endless treck of learning and experiences. Poetically said
October 28th, 2024 09:59 - Walking the beach (Tony36)
A picturesque image painted but with metaphoric meaning as well. We all...
October 28th, 2024 09:58 - Soul Ascendant (Tristan Robert Lange)
The recognition of strength in another and one\'s own weakness\' is a sign...
October 28th, 2024 09:55 - ~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ] (Thad Wilk)
A beautiful tribute to a father on a special day. Most lovely and lovingly...
October 28th, 2024 09:53 - Caro (Kerry)
A fun read I know that in Italian it means my dear in Spanish it means...
October 28th, 2024 09:50 - snowfall (Jim56)
A lovely sight welcomed by me in my childhood. Well written and rhymed
October 28th, 2024 09:41 - Another Moment Lost (Neville)
Carpe diem, those that hesitate are lost. Some opportunities come only...
October 28th, 2024 09:39 - Nothing (Tristan Robert Lange)
So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be...
October 28th, 2024 08:42 - Oktoberfest (Arqios)
Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and...
October 28th, 2024 08:33 - Just One Day. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy one step at a time is the only way to reach the goal very...
October 28th, 2024 05:05 - Unrepentant Ventriloquist (Dan Williams)
A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to...
October 28th, 2024 04:45 - Whispers To The Ocean (Young Fella)
Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the...
October 27th, 2024 16:43 - ~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry ) (Thad Wilk)
Thieves they are. Had them try to pilfer from me too. When was younger...
October 27th, 2024 15:07 - Try \"What Was I Thinking\" Eh? (Cheeky Missy)
Too much work makes Cheeky tired and sad. Thanks for sharing the everyday...
October 27th, 2024 15:04 - The Mask of Deception (Ezekiel Olayemi)
Nicely written this poem is applicable to everything from society, to...
October 27th, 2024 08:48 - TALKING ENVELOPE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A wake up call to action. Beautifully written.
October 27th, 2024 08:45 - ying and yang (Devil_dear)
A very thoughtful piece that provokes the reader to think deeper than the...
October 27th, 2024 08:43 - SINKING SHIP (Ezekiel Olayemi)
A great metaphor that is applicable in each stanza and line it applies to...
October 27th, 2024 08:41 - Be the light (Tony36)
A great message Tony
October 27th, 2024 08:20 - My Father, Scholar of the Unwritten Halls (Gray0328)
Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage...
October 27th, 2024 06:10 - That day\'s call (Maplespal)
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our...
October 27th, 2024 06:07 - Vincent (Lorenz)
You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls...
October 27th, 2024 06:05 - winters night (Jim56)
In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts...
October 27th, 2024 05:54
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