Comments on community poems by Christina8

• Pilgrim (Sorenbarrett) Very well done I liked the rhyme and rhythm very much. Great poem about...
  April 6th, 2022 13:47
• Differing Words. (Goldfinch60) Great write Andy!! A lovely thought.
  April 6th, 2022 13:44
• Easy to say, another to be or do (Poetic Dan) Oh Dan, \"every inch of my life is falling apart\"...that\'s so sad! If...
  April 6th, 2022 13:37
• storm (Dusk arising) Goodness gracious that alarm clock ruins everything! What a great story! A...
  April 6th, 2022 13:33
• tulip\'s twilight (Crystal Hope) Beautiful writing, imagery and rhyming. Tulips are some of the first...
  April 6th, 2022 00:44
• ODE TO THE BLUE JAY (MDStone) I really like this poem, great rhymes. I do love a cardinal too, but much...
  April 6th, 2022 00:40
• Lord, I put you first (Crowns4Christ) Hi blue orchid I agree with your sentiment. Very well done!
  April 6th, 2022 00:37
• Amphigory (Sorenbarrett) I really like this style, don\'t believe I\'ve ever seen it done before. ...
  April 5th, 2022 09:36
• Living Lady Lilac (Rocky Lagou) Well first off, I love the name, Hello, I adore lilacs, prefaced by my...
  April 5th, 2022 09:32
• I’ve stopped caring. (Razlin) Hey I might write happy poems for the most part now but I\'ve been there....
  April 5th, 2022 09:17
• What I want (Jyoti Singh) Nice write, i hope you find that person who will listen to you. Cute...
  April 5th, 2022 09:13
• Home (Jessi) This is really touching and relatable because the home I grew up in was...
  April 5th, 2022 09:10
• the stars i see with closed eyes (Fernaaz) You are so young to have such a grasp on poetry and the universe. Your...
  April 5th, 2022 09:02
• Lightbringer (Albert Elod) This is beautiful, like Rocky says, it\'s art! So many beautiful...
  April 5th, 2022 08:55
• =showering with lilacs= (Dean langmuir) As you can see from my picture here, I love lilacs to the nth degree, your...
  April 5th, 2022 08:46
• Escape to the Dark. (Goldfinch60) Very good write andy!
  April 5th, 2022 05:07
• lustfully greedily (Dusk arising) This is wonderful! I just love reading these types of writes....Christina
  April 5th, 2022 05:05
• ROSES ARE RED (Michael Edwards) I\'m laughing at your poems and also dusk arising\'s response! Great job!
  April 5th, 2022 05:04
• We Are One (Crowns4Christ) God works in mysterious ways. It is more common than you think for poets...
  April 4th, 2022 16:30
• Numbers (Nobody special) A hauntingly good write...mostly because it seems to be true. Great job on...
  April 4th, 2022 13:36
• Sleepless Night (Iychan) Welcome to MPS! I can relate a little to this, I have insomnia. And last...
  April 4th, 2022 13:32
• May You Await Me on the Moon? (Rocky Lagou) Rocky, as a mother, I gotta say I love this!! You were conceived out of...
  April 4th, 2022 13:22
• My Prime Number (Adventuressmalik) I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is...
  April 4th, 2022 10:52
• I don’t want to get better (Razlin) I\'ve been there, but trust me you DO want to get better because then you...
  April 4th, 2022 10:45
• arrow (Dusk arising) Love your write! It has grief and sadness but you portray them so well. I...
  April 4th, 2022 10:44
• A Mouse\'s Tale (Bella Shepard) Dear Bella, I read every word, all the rhymes so wonderful! When I read...
  April 3rd, 2022 13:01
• Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor) Oh my goodness, this was beautiful Kevin! Yes, it\'s sad but I find the...
  April 3rd, 2022 12:53
• Simp Collection: You\'re as beautiful as ever (Jem) That last stanza is really beautiful! Great job!
  April 3rd, 2022 11:09
• A bride\'s steps (NafisaSB) I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride...
  April 3rd, 2022 11:02
• A Smile Across your Lips (Adventuressmalik) I think this is really nice, I like your rhymes too! Christina
  April 3rd, 2022 09:53
• HEAR THE SOUND (Michael Edwards) Love the rhyme format! Beautiful! Christina
  April 3rd, 2022 09:51
• Peter\'s Preparation (Orchidee) Happy Sunday! Great hymn Steve!
  April 3rd, 2022 09:49
• -The Arrange of Art- (Dean langmuir) Very nice write! Well done!--Christina
  April 3rd, 2022 09:43
• Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media (Sorenbarrett) I love your AAB rhyme scheme! Anyway, \"pretend warriors\'--video games. ...
  April 3rd, 2022 09:37
• Four Seasons In A Day. (Goldfinch60) I can relate to the changing of seasons in one day, with michigan weather...
  April 3rd, 2022 09:31
• The Mending of a Very Broken Man (Neville) Very nice write N! Sexy too! ...C
  April 3rd, 2022 09:28
• forever (Dusk arising) Lovely emotions and images dear Dusk! A compelling poem of love and don\'t...
  April 2nd, 2022 14:09
• Another Wonderful Day, (Goldfinch60) Wonderful write, Andy! Beautiful music too!
  April 2nd, 2022 12:25
• An artist\'s entrapment (Jimmy Daun) Welcome to MPS! I thought this was a really great write, thank for
  April 2nd, 2022 12:23
• April in England (Kevin Michael Bloor) A wonderful ode to april and the land you love! Great poem!
  April 2nd, 2022 09:42
• Our road trips (Crowns4Christ) Hi Blue Orchid! Nice poem about travel, it is always fun, we are going...
  April 1st, 2022 16:07
• Where I Need To Be. (Goldfinch60) Great positive write Andy!
  April 1st, 2022 12:43
• Love (Asilent_voice) I really like this message and the line \"love is a song sang by...
  April 1st, 2022 11:35
• Giving Up Poetry (Rocky Lagou) I\'m so glad it\'s a metaphorical title and not for real even though it is...
  April 1st, 2022 09:40
• LIMERICKS 100 101 & 102 (Michael Edwards) Thanks for the giggles! These are great!
  April 1st, 2022 08:55
• The Poet\'s Cat (Kevin Michael Bloor) Wonderful rhymes, Kevin!
  April 1st, 2022 08:51
• We all deserve a Lifeline (Adventuressmalik) You said it well in your poem, we all live this life only once and we have...
  March 31st, 2022 12:06
• Praise, Perusal, Penitence (Orchidee) Very good hymn Orchi!
  March 31st, 2022 12:04
• Pure Heart Sick Dirty Dark Mind Don\\\\\\\'t Go Along (Emmanoel Obalim) This is a great poem, truly! Thanks for sharing your heart with us. ...
  March 31st, 2022 11:56
• Lost and alone (Kayewaye) A well written deep poem. I think life is what you make it, you just have...
  March 31st, 2022 11:53
• The Darkness (Rosey) I\'m sorry you are in this place, I have some dark past poetry too. Great...
  March 31st, 2022 11:44
• Goodnight (Draven) Very nice write. Cute! Thanks for sharing.
  March 31st, 2022 11:41
• There’s a Wildfire in Hollywood (AuburnScribbler) Very powerful poem indeed. What will smith did was unthinkable and he...
  March 31st, 2022 11:35
• Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet) (Rocky Lagou) Very good sonnet they are hard to do!! I like your take on life and...
  March 31st, 2022 09:44
• -some 5-7-5 thoughts- (Dean langmuir) I most like the one about smiles sipping the giggles within the wine. ...
  March 31st, 2022 09:05
• Gutter Gardening. (Goldfinch60) Wow, you are very lucky to have a conservatory and then to have the birds...
  March 31st, 2022 09:00
• dusk arises (Dusk arising) This is just beautiful, dusk! I really don\'t have words to convey how...
  March 31st, 2022 08:51
• Let us Not Forget Syria (Neville) Wonderful write...nobody deserves to suffer the way these folks are....C
  March 31st, 2022 08:42
• Paralyzed (Sorenbarrett) Sorry about the circumstances but great poem! Hope things get better.
  March 30th, 2022 17:45
• Venus (Kevin Michael Bloor) Very nice, Kevin! Nice touch that you added a pic of your Goddess! She is...
  March 30th, 2022 17:37
• Mary Had A Little Lamb 16. (Goldfinch60) LOL a good bit o fun here. Good job!
  March 30th, 2022 17:35
• slowly into a shadow (Dusk arising) I really like this poem, Dusk, it is so descriptive...wonderful and i...
  March 30th, 2022 17:33
• Let me Leave (Ajax (he/xe)) I feel your pain I really really do. I spent too many years feeling the...
  March 30th, 2022 17:25
• Waves Roll Off of Me (Rocky Lagou) This is another great poem! My favorite line is \"Is the jewels and...
  March 30th, 2022 17:22
• Drowning In Gray (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nice! I really like this piece!
  March 29th, 2022 11:48
• Back to Hell Where you came From (Rochelle63@) I too know someone who just ended a relationship with a narcissist and i...
  March 29th, 2022 11:44
• Poet in the Beast (Rocky Lagou) I love this piece, Rocky! Yes, I see you in the cracked reflection. Your...
  March 29th, 2022 11:39
• the cunning puppet (Dusk arising) Taking from your poem I think you found those words to \"colour a picture...
  March 29th, 2022 08:56
• I will always be grateful for you (Sophenia) Since I lost my mother to cancer, and quickly, I can so relate to your...
  March 28th, 2022 19:05
• To my wife (Greg57) My 20 years of marriage is nothing next to your 50+! But I think, and this...
  March 28th, 2022 18:58
• projected violence (Jon Nakapalau) Very good and clever write!! Spot on!
  March 28th, 2022 18:46
• Blurry assumptions (Mimie) Just don\'t give up. The fantasy does happen. I\'ve been married for 20...
  March 28th, 2022 18:45
• A Swan, Named Freedom, Swims (Rocky Lagou) Well, I took half a day to read it but I got it done. What a read!! Such...
  March 28th, 2022 14:24
• I\'m Slowly Dying (Kinsey Peterson) this is really relatable to me and some of my poetry---I really liked how...
  March 28th, 2022 11:22
• To The Top Of The Hill. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful! Thats it, thats all I need to say.....Christina
  March 28th, 2022 11:15
• Suicidal thoughts (Mbulelo) The last two lines of your poem convey truth! You have to fight! I have...
  March 28th, 2022 11:11
• Song Of The Swans (Kurt Philip Behm) this is a really moving poem. Great job Kurt! Always enjoy reading your...
  March 28th, 2022 10:04
• 16... and still sane (A Little Handcrafted Paradise) (Rocky Lagou) This is absolutely wonderful! You describe your acne..each one like a...
  March 28th, 2022 09:04
• These Words (Kevin Michael Bloor) Very nice uplifting poem Kevin! A nice dreamy ending!
  March 28th, 2022 08:42
• Zen Tree (Neville) Very descriptive and beautiful. I do detect a bit of lonely/empty I...
  March 28th, 2022 08:37
• Squeeze (Alexander J. Wolfe) I admire your courage and I like that you wrote at the end that you...
  March 27th, 2022 16:15
• Mykonos (ModernBard) This is a really beautiful poem with a great rhyme scheme and cadence to...
  March 27th, 2022 14:34
• The Perfect Smile (FirstTimePoet) Welcome to MPS!! This is REAL. I love how wonderful this write is and the...
  March 27th, 2022 12:47
• Seasons of the Heart (Peppino) This is really beautiful! It\'s a very well written song!
  March 27th, 2022 11:19
• Mothering (Fay Slimm.) This is so beautifully written! For us, mothers day doesn\'t come till...
  March 27th, 2022 11:17
• Sailing With Love. (Goldfinch60) Short but sweet. Good write Andy!
  March 27th, 2022 11:15
• postcard home to mother russia (Dusk arising) Sad, filled with emotion and the tragic outcomes of what Putin is doing....
  March 27th, 2022 10:23
• The Welcoming Song (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This evokes such strong imagery. Loved this poem!
  March 27th, 2022 10:21
• On the Cusp of a Sneeze .. (Neville) Such strong imagery in these lines! I really like this write. This is a...
  March 27th, 2022 10:17
• Poetry (Kevin Michael Bloor) This is a really wonderful poem, I almost called it a \"write\" because...
  March 27th, 2022 10:14
• Never Going Nowhere Maybe (Neville) Once a love is in our hearts its hard to let them go and like you said...
  March 26th, 2022 11:14
• Don\'t Tell Anyone! (Goldfinch60) Sorry to hear you had COVID. It\'s definitely not grass cutting weather in...
  March 23rd, 2022 13:22
• Daylight Savings Time (Greg57) Great rhyme about our ridiculous daylight savings time! Awesome job!...
  March 23rd, 2022 13:15
• Blush (Neville) This is a great tribute to Spring. The cherry blossoms are blooming. You...
  March 23rd, 2022 13:10
• Am I A Romantic. (Goldfinch60) Nothing wrong with being a romantic! Wonderful write, Gold!!
  March 22nd, 2022 10:37
• Poet of Pain (Kevin Michael Bloor) I really love your poems and your rhymes. They kindve remind me of...
  March 22nd, 2022 10:36
• Daily test! (Poetic Dan) Loved this write dear Dan! I used to struggle with other people being...
  March 22nd, 2022 10:33
• Not Just An Old Fella Passing (Neville) This is a wonderful tribute, N! As you said \"Lay him down gently\" I got...
  March 22nd, 2022 08:51
• Hacked (Rrodriguez) True and haunting accounts of whats happening in Ukraine. I just can\'t...
  March 17th, 2022 15:39
• Hey Little Kitty (Bella Shepard) This is a wonderful informative poem (Well done rhymes by the way) because...
  March 17th, 2022 15:36