Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Habits (Gerrylegister)
Those things that we do do have consequences but mostly the consequences...
May 9th, 2019 15:21 - It\'s not a crime to rhyme (Poetic Dan)
It is amazing how words written down can take the hurt and sorrow from...
May 9th, 2019 03:20 - LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words about a beautiful flower Fay.
May 9th, 2019 03:17 - TEA ~ WORLDS FAVOURITE DRINK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We drink leaf tea, we used to drink Kenya Tea until many years ago the guy...
May 9th, 2019 03:16 - Refuge Reassurance (Orchidee)
I have serious doubts about the last line of the first stanza!
Good write...
May 9th, 2019 03:12 - God and Religion Again. (Goldfinch60)
A very true way to be Michael. In the passed when I was at teenager I went...
May 9th, 2019 02:20 - dear J (Dusk arising)
Strong emotive write d a.
May 9th, 2019 00:58 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57 - Quiet Lion (WL Schuett)
May that peace be forever with you WL.
May 9th, 2019 00:53 - My quote of the day #17 (Jon Nakapalau)
A very true thought.
May 9th, 2019 00:51 - WHERE\'S MY DADDY? (Shayl)
Very sad write.
May 9th, 2019 00:43 - Helplessly hoping (H. Ray Davis)
The longing of love wonderfully portrayed in your words HRD.
May 9th, 2019 00:40 - of elspenore (Dusk arising)
Those creatures from hell are all around us and in various disguises, at...
May 9th, 2019 00:32 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
There are so many paths in our lives, those in power try to send you down...
May 9th, 2019 00:28 - WINDING DOWN. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful, another look back into our past as did dusk arising\'s \'new...
May 8th, 2019 03:19 - Royalty Reflections (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 8th, 2019 02:59 - COFFEE A LA MODE ~ A Sonnet in Internal Rhyme ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write but I will argue with you on the taste of Americano - Gods...
May 8th, 2019 02:59 - Untitled - IX (Suresh)
Yes moderation in all is the key to life.
May 8th, 2019 02:56 - Your touch is like the seabreeze in summer (Jon Nakapalau)
Wonderful words of passion.
May 8th, 2019 02:55 - Lost In Thought (W c)
I will see you on Mars soon.
May 8th, 2019 02:55 - Skylark (Moordykspot2)
The skylarks are so wonderful, their song always lifts the spirits as do...
May 8th, 2019 02:54 - new world (Dusk arising)
What a wonderful write, the resilience of our life as kids \'back in the...
May 8th, 2019 02:52 - TASTEFUL. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write about a wonderful era, we like art deco and have three of...
May 8th, 2019 00:54 - CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We all enjoy chocolate in all its forms but I am afraid I need my caffeine...
May 8th, 2019 00:50 - Rest Request (Orchidee)
That burden is a bit onerous in my life at the moment Orchi. A good write...
May 8th, 2019 00:42 - The Forest Shrine (SerenWise)
Forests are so special, they will always be with us as your words will be.
May 8th, 2019 00:40 - Untitled - VIII (Suresh)
So true Suresh.
May 7th, 2019 00:28 - COME HOME (Ternic73)
Those days can be so hard when we lose someone but rest assured they will...
May 7th, 2019 00:27 - Breath Of A Soul. (Camille)
WE come from the Spirit and return top the Spirit after our brief life on...
May 7th, 2019 00:25 - Moving On (Part 0) (Nafis Light)
The light is there ahead of you, never stop going towards it. Good...
May 7th, 2019 00:23 - SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.)
Such a tragic accident but becoming all too common these days when speed...
May 7th, 2019 00:16 - Dear Capricorn (Neville)
Very emotive write Neville.
May 6th, 2019 15:04 - Light And The Spirit (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
May 6th, 2019 15:02 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as...
May 6th, 2019 00:53 - In this unquelled storm you beckon to me (Jon Nakapalau)
Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.
May 6th, 2019 00:50 - A Peck Above the Brow (Neville)
The tenderness flows through you words in wonder.
May 6th, 2019 00:48 - MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR ~ A SONNET OF DOUBLETS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It was obviously a great eight days and you have proved to yourselves that...
May 6th, 2019 00:46 - If you were in my place (Poetic Dan)
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
May 6th, 2019 00:44 - Living In The Light (Orchidee)
May that LIGHT be with us forever.
May 6th, 2019 00:41 - SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO (Michael Edwards)
It can be surprising how peoples ideas of vulgarity are drawn.
One...
May 5th, 2019 01:04 - Untitled - VII (Suresh)
So true Suresh, step back and look at it all.
May 5th, 2019 00:55 - Moodswings (Moordykspot2)
In all the greyness be assured that the sun will shine and new life will...
May 5th, 2019 00:53 - Hope (Brycycle)
That hope is with us all - all WILL be well.
May 5th, 2019 00:51 - Weighty worries? 😋 (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Beauty should always be seen within the eyes of the person, external looks...
May 5th, 2019 00:40 - Roll up, roll up! (Poetic Dan)
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far...
May 5th, 2019 00:38 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
Very good and very true write.
I too am me and agree with all your
May 5th, 2019 00:33 - Prayer Pleas (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, the Psalms are worth reading.
May 5th, 2019 00:32 - NOW IS THE HOUR 🧡 WHEN WE MUST SAY GOODBYE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your tears of sadness are understandable but you know it is not forever...
May 5th, 2019 00:31 - FROM COMMENTS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Clever write Michael, thank you.
\"I was passing Beethoven\'s grave and...
May 5th, 2019 00:25 - The Hawthorn (SerenWise)
Beautiful loving write Suresh.
May 4th, 2019 00:32 - My Holiday Kitchen (W c)
Cooking and sharing food is wonderful, cooking is one of my passions, I...
May 4th, 2019 00:31 - Composting a Hymn (MendedFences27)
Those rests filled with silence can be so meaningful.
May 4th, 2019 00:29 - perhaps wanting is a kind of negation (Jon Nakapalau)
True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.
May 4th, 2019 00:27 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing...
May 4th, 2019 00:25 - UNFETTERED. (Fay Slimm.)
That curtain has now lifted and the light is there to shine on your life.
May 4th, 2019 00:22 - Gender revealing (Poetic Dan)
May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her....
May 4th, 2019 00:16 - In All Things..... (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 4th, 2019 00:12 - BRIAN 🧡 I LOVE YOU BECAUSE 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\"Home is where My BRIAN is\" - such telling words Angela, that time will...
May 3rd, 2019 01:34 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
Intriguing write and artwork Michael, both could be studied for many
May 3rd, 2019 01:31 - A Stroll through the Willows (MendedFences27)
Super write, I was walking with you. You certainly nailed it with your...
May 3rd, 2019 00:58 - Nightfall (Brycycle)
God emotive write, the world will die unless those who have the power and...
May 3rd, 2019 00:55 - Mindless (MrNobody40)
Those infinite spaces surround us all and each moment we can get lost in...
May 3rd, 2019 00:53 - Rainy Hangout (Nafis Light)
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning...
May 3rd, 2019 00:52 - WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful structure and words Fay.
May 3rd, 2019 00:45 - ANGELA 🧡 MY BEST FRIEND 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wonderful write, true lovers and true friends that you are shine through...
May 3rd, 2019 00:42 - In The Beginning (Neville)
Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve...
May 3rd, 2019 00:40 - Ramblings?! (Orchidee)
It\'s a great pity that you rambled down to the beach in 1066, if you had...
May 3rd, 2019 00:36 - The question (Poetic Dan)
May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.
May 2nd, 2019 02:59 - FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Like the artwork, it must look wonderful in real life.
May 2nd, 2019 00:35 - FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
I will cross that line
and clear the view
to find the way
to your words...
May 2nd, 2019 00:35 - Auralism (SerenWise)
Words are not required when love is in the air.
May 2nd, 2019 00:33 - Naive and In Love (Brie)
Love can come at strange times but just go with it.
May 2nd, 2019 00:29 - Today\'s Gratitude (Nafis Light)
May those smiles and hope fill you with joy as your words do to me.
May 2nd, 2019 00:26 - My True Best Friend (DonnaDJ59)
Those special people in our lives will always be there, so glad that you...
May 2nd, 2019 00:25 - Let it roll of the tongue (Poetic Dan)
Fun is so important in our lives, like the fun in your words. May your...
May 2nd, 2019 00:19 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Happiness
Was reading your words
Flowing from your heart
Onto the page...
May 2nd, 2019 00:14 - Between Mountains (Neville)
Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so...
May 2nd, 2019 00:11 - THE ARTHURS PASS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You closeness is shown in your words, your life together will be full of...
May 2nd, 2019 00:08 - The best time to plant a tree (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Very good and very true write Andrew, man is destroying our beautiful...
May 2nd, 2019 00:04 - Waiting A While (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
May 2nd, 2019 00:01 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Though it has to be said
that I do prefer red,
I\'ll always say yah
to...
May 1st, 2019 01:10 - disappointed (Dusk arising)
This rings so true with me at the present moment d a. as you know I am...
May 1st, 2019 00:52 - Your Lips To Mine. (Kevin browne)
That light is there for you both Kevin, your words show that.
May 1st, 2019 00:41 - At The Edge Of Life (W c)
Your life is there before you, no matter what has happened in the past the...
May 1st, 2019 00:40 - Concerto of Dreams (Moordykspot2)
May your concerto of dreams become reality. Very good write Moordy.
April 30th, 2019 15:18 - Following examples (Poetic Dan)
You have moved your life onwards Dan into a great place, let others share...
April 30th, 2019 15:15 - Prone to bouts of melancholy (Andrew Charles Forrest)
That place is there for all of us, it can be left behind though as we see...
April 30th, 2019 15:13 - FRANZ JOSEF GLACIER BY HELICOPTER ! DOUBLE SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful trip you have had.
The next trip will be the one into...
April 30th, 2019 15:12 - WILD. (Fay Slimm.)
Great sensuous write Fay.
April 30th, 2019 15:08 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
Many look but only some see the colours that can brighten our lives.
April 30th, 2019 15:07 - Providential Plenitude (Orchidee)
May the fruits of the earth be always with us.
April 30th, 2019 15:05 - The Joker in Me (Nafis Light)
Those smiles and laughter in our lives are great healers.
April 30th, 2019 15:03 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
So true Michael, it can get confusing.
Brilliant artwork Michael. You...
April 30th, 2019 01:20 - No Longer Loved (W c)
Failure in love can be so hard but be assured all will be well in the end.
April 30th, 2019 00:28 - konstantin tréplev (Jon Nakapalau)
Clever write Jon, that symbolism can be so meaningless at times.
April 30th, 2019 00:27 - The Quiet Man (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So you should be proud of him Andrew, he did his country proud.
April 30th, 2019 00:25 - For the record (Poetic Dan)
You have come so far Dan to let your finances bring you down, as you said...
April 30th, 2019 00:18 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
Unfortunately this is still true today and if it weren\'t for the crumbs...
April 30th, 2019 00:14 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
Your words will draw love to you Fay.
April 30th, 2019 00:11 - Walking In Wisdom (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi but He is not there for me and Joyce.
April 30th, 2019 00:10
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