Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Second letter to my younger self (Poetic Dan)
Very good write. That light is there for us all and recently it has been...
May 14th, 2019 00:14 - Faithful Following (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 14th, 2019 00:12 - Nix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So very true, saying and doing are worlds apart.
May 13th, 2019 01:34 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards)
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with...
May 13th, 2019 01:33 - Thinker (Suresh)
The way the humans are treating the earth is abominable but once homo...
May 13th, 2019 01:31 - when out of my thoughts (Dusk arising)
Such a strong write d a.
She is blessed to have a dad like you. May...
May 13th, 2019 01:12 - One More Chance (Daydreaming)
In life there are many obstacles put in our way, once these have been...
May 13th, 2019 00:55 - Worth (Poetic Dan)
So very true Dan, I too am s step dad and have been for nearly forty...
May 13th, 2019 00:27 - We should meet more people not like us (Andrew Charles Forrest)
They do get along because surely opposites attract.
May 13th, 2019 00:24 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : A BLANK VERSE SONNET : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Both are so wonderful, I always see them both.
May 13th, 2019 00:22 - Untitled - XI (Suresh)
Trust is a things that can be so undermining.
May 13th, 2019 00:21 - Panoramic Praise (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 13th, 2019 00:20 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (3) (Michael Edwards)
I hope those crumpets are Warburtons!
May 12th, 2019 00:22 - ARETHA (FineB)
Good tribute to a wonderful singer.
May 12th, 2019 00:20 - 11 years of absorbing, thank you to all (Poetic Dan)
WE go through our lives and find all kinds of obstacles in the way but...
May 12th, 2019 00:18 - No-one cares (Lulu Boatwright)
Very emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
May 12th, 2019 00:06 - Afford To Love You (Yorelzinala)
That love is priceless.
May 12th, 2019 00:05 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? ANGELA for BRIAN ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Telling each other we love each other are the last words we say to each...
May 12th, 2019 00:04 - Spirit Symbols (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 12th, 2019 00:02 - Ordered Serenity. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Orchi.
May 11th, 2019 01:55 - Riddle of the Dark Kind (Suresh)
A riddle that is hard to answer.
May 11th, 2019 00:36 - Untitled - X (Suresh)
That exploitation is within all of us.
May 11th, 2019 00:34 - RESEARCH IN THE RAINFOREST ~ A PANTOUM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Homo sapiens is destroying our world and those in power who can do...
May 11th, 2019 00:31 - We\'re all needed (Poetic Dan)
That inner you is healing day by day Dan and before very long that process...
May 11th, 2019 00:29 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
That light is always there we just have different ways of seeing it. Good...
May 11th, 2019 00:27 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09 - it just wouldnt rhyme (Dusk arising)
This softy sometimes gives his poems to those he writes about, normally...
May 10th, 2019 01:08 - Dawn (SerenWise)
That life will be filled with love and wonder.
May 10th, 2019 01:02 - Thank You For Smiling (Nafis Light)
A smile can be so important in life, I feel that if I can make somebody...
May 10th, 2019 00:58 - Coos Bay Drive in Late Summer (Jon Nakapalau)
The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.
May 10th, 2019 00:56 - Motherhood (Jennie Devallon)
I am sure your child will be brought up in love and joy into a wonderful...
May 10th, 2019 00:46 - From A Distance (Variable (Moordykspot2)
Very good write Moordy, nature in all its guises is wonderful. Have a...
May 9th, 2019 15:25 - Habits (Gerrylegister)
Those things that we do do have consequences but mostly the consequences...
May 9th, 2019 15:21 - It\'s not a crime to rhyme (Poetic Dan)
It is amazing how words written down can take the hurt and sorrow from...
May 9th, 2019 03:20 - LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words about a beautiful flower Fay.
May 9th, 2019 03:17 - TEA ~ WORLDS FAVOURITE DRINK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We drink leaf tea, we used to drink Kenya Tea until many years ago the guy...
May 9th, 2019 03:16 - Refuge Reassurance (Orchidee)
I have serious doubts about the last line of the first stanza!
Good write...
May 9th, 2019 03:12 - God and Religion Again. (Goldfinch60)
A very true way to be Michael. In the passed when I was at teenager I went...
May 9th, 2019 02:20 - dear J (Dusk arising)
Strong emotive write d a.
May 9th, 2019 00:58 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57 - Quiet Lion (WL Schuett)
May that peace be forever with you WL.
May 9th, 2019 00:53 - My quote of the day #17 (Jon Nakapalau)
A very true thought.
May 9th, 2019 00:51 - WHERE\'S MY DADDY? (Shayl)
Very sad write.
May 9th, 2019 00:43 - Helplessly hoping (H. Ray Davis)
The longing of love wonderfully portrayed in your words HRD.
May 9th, 2019 00:40 - of elspenore (Dusk arising)
Those creatures from hell are all around us and in various disguises, at...
May 9th, 2019 00:32 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
There are so many paths in our lives, those in power try to send you down...
May 9th, 2019 00:28 - WINDING DOWN. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful, another look back into our past as did dusk arising\'s \'new...
May 8th, 2019 03:19 - Royalty Reflections (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 8th, 2019 02:59 - COFFEE A LA MODE ~ A Sonnet in Internal Rhyme ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write but I will argue with you on the taste of Americano - Gods...
May 8th, 2019 02:59 - Untitled - IX (Suresh)
Yes moderation in all is the key to life.
May 8th, 2019 02:56 - Your touch is like the seabreeze in summer (Jon Nakapalau)
Wonderful words of passion.
May 8th, 2019 02:55 - Lost In Thought (W c)
I will see you on Mars soon.
May 8th, 2019 02:55 - Skylark (Moordykspot2)
The skylarks are so wonderful, their song always lifts the spirits as do...
May 8th, 2019 02:54 - new world (Dusk arising)
What a wonderful write, the resilience of our life as kids \'back in the...
May 8th, 2019 02:52 - TASTEFUL. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write about a wonderful era, we like art deco and have three of...
May 8th, 2019 00:54 - CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We all enjoy chocolate in all its forms but I am afraid I need my caffeine...
May 8th, 2019 00:50 - Rest Request (Orchidee)
That burden is a bit onerous in my life at the moment Orchi. A good write...
May 8th, 2019 00:42 - The Forest Shrine (SerenWise)
Forests are so special, they will always be with us as your words will be.
May 8th, 2019 00:40 - Untitled - VIII (Suresh)
So true Suresh.
May 7th, 2019 00:28 - COME HOME (Ternic73)
Those days can be so hard when we lose someone but rest assured they will...
May 7th, 2019 00:27 - Breath Of A Soul. (Camille)
WE come from the Spirit and return top the Spirit after our brief life on...
May 7th, 2019 00:25 - Moving On (Part 0) (Nafis Light)
The light is there ahead of you, never stop going towards it. Good...
May 7th, 2019 00:23 - SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.)
Such a tragic accident but becoming all too common these days when speed...
May 7th, 2019 00:16 - Dear Capricorn (Neville)
Very emotive write Neville.
May 6th, 2019 15:04 - Light And The Spirit (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
May 6th, 2019 15:02 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as...
May 6th, 2019 00:53 - In this unquelled storm you beckon to me (Jon Nakapalau)
Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.
May 6th, 2019 00:50 - A Peck Above the Brow (Neville)
The tenderness flows through you words in wonder.
May 6th, 2019 00:48 - MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR ~ A SONNET OF DOUBLETS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It was obviously a great eight days and you have proved to yourselves that...
May 6th, 2019 00:46 - If you were in my place (Poetic Dan)
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
May 6th, 2019 00:44 - Living In The Light (Orchidee)
May that LIGHT be with us forever.
May 6th, 2019 00:41 - SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO (Michael Edwards)
It can be surprising how peoples ideas of vulgarity are drawn.
One...
May 5th, 2019 01:04 - Untitled - VII (Suresh)
So true Suresh, step back and look at it all.
May 5th, 2019 00:55 - Moodswings (Moordykspot2)
In all the greyness be assured that the sun will shine and new life will...
May 5th, 2019 00:53 - Hope (Brycycle)
That hope is with us all - all WILL be well.
May 5th, 2019 00:51 - Weighty worries? 😋 (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Beauty should always be seen within the eyes of the person, external looks...
May 5th, 2019 00:40 - Roll up, roll up! (Poetic Dan)
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far...
May 5th, 2019 00:38 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
Very good and very true write.
I too am me and agree with all your
May 5th, 2019 00:33 - Prayer Pleas (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, the Psalms are worth reading.
May 5th, 2019 00:32 - NOW IS THE HOUR 🧡 WHEN WE MUST SAY GOODBYE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your tears of sadness are understandable but you know it is not forever...
May 5th, 2019 00:31 - FROM COMMENTS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Clever write Michael, thank you.
\"I was passing Beethoven\'s grave and...
May 5th, 2019 00:25 - The Hawthorn (SerenWise)
Beautiful loving write Suresh.
May 4th, 2019 00:32 - My Holiday Kitchen (W c)
Cooking and sharing food is wonderful, cooking is one of my passions, I...
May 4th, 2019 00:31 - Composting a Hymn (MendedFences27)
Those rests filled with silence can be so meaningful.
May 4th, 2019 00:29 - perhaps wanting is a kind of negation (Jon Nakapalau)
True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.
May 4th, 2019 00:27 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing...
May 4th, 2019 00:25 - UNFETTERED. (Fay Slimm.)
That curtain has now lifted and the light is there to shine on your life.
May 4th, 2019 00:22 - Gender revealing (Poetic Dan)
May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her....
May 4th, 2019 00:16 - In All Things..... (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 4th, 2019 00:12 - BRIAN 🧡 I LOVE YOU BECAUSE 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\"Home is where My BRIAN is\" - such telling words Angela, that time will...
May 3rd, 2019 01:34 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
Intriguing write and artwork Michael, both could be studied for many
May 3rd, 2019 01:31 - A Stroll through the Willows (MendedFences27)
Super write, I was walking with you. You certainly nailed it with your...
May 3rd, 2019 00:58 - Nightfall (Brycycle)
God emotive write, the world will die unless those who have the power and...
May 3rd, 2019 00:55 - Mindless (MrNobody40)
Those infinite spaces surround us all and each moment we can get lost in...
May 3rd, 2019 00:53 - Rainy Hangout (Nafis Light)
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning...
May 3rd, 2019 00:52 - WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful structure and words Fay.
May 3rd, 2019 00:45 - ANGELA 🧡 MY BEST FRIEND 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wonderful write, true lovers and true friends that you are shine through...
May 3rd, 2019 00:42 - In The Beginning (Neville)
Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve...
May 3rd, 2019 00:40 - Ramblings?! (Orchidee)
It\'s a great pity that you rambled down to the beach in 1066, if you had...
May 3rd, 2019 00:36
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