Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- The silliest (Malubotelho)
Thank you for putting the text below the picture as well. Tried to read it...
August 23rd, 2017 19:51 - The Artist (Mugsdaddy)
I like your poem, Mugsdaddy, and it makes me want to write another poem!...
August 23rd, 2017 10:22 - No Cabbage For You....Well, Maybe (WriteBeLight)
Greatly enjoyed your \'cabbage\' poem, WBL!
Love goes through the...
August 23rd, 2017 10:17 - Covenant Communings (Orchidee)
Beautifully penned, orchidee!
August 23rd, 2017 10:11 - Ring for Santita (Myself and me)
You are quite the artist, M&M!
August 23rd, 2017 10:08 - BLINDING REFLECTIONS (Louis Gibbs)
I love you philoetry, Louis. And this one speaks to me since I have always...
August 23rd, 2017 10:07 - Where has summer gone? (Sue.evans)
Nice little poem, sue! I really feel for you (and all you UK people)....
August 23rd, 2017 10:02 - My Little Girl (Jennylynn0324)
This poem is so beautifully written, so full of longing and hope.
August 23rd, 2017 04:28 - In Sequence. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay you know how to make a sunrise very, very special!
August 23rd, 2017 04:10 - Stumbling Service. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem Goldfinch. No matter how stumbling the service is, as long as...
August 23rd, 2017 04:09 - Happiness is fleeting (Sara Storkson)
PS: Don\'t know why exactly, but somehow you brought Charles Bukowski to...
August 23rd, 2017 01:04 - Happiness is fleeting (Sara Storkson)
Sara, you said it all, you evoked the right feelings, used the right...
August 23rd, 2017 01:02 - Unfinished (Sara Storkson)
Wow, you are making even an old guy like me ponder.
Here are my 5 cents...
August 23rd, 2017 01:00 - Untitled (Sara Storkson)
Beautifully written, and so true. How many times do we grab at straws,...
August 23rd, 2017 00:57 - Ugh (Sara Storkson)
Very good writing, Sara.
I did say this in another comment, but I think...
August 23rd, 2017 00:55 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Song (Aa Harvey)
You are right, Aa, love is 24/7
August 23rd, 2017 00:50 - woman (Dusk arising)
Welcome to MPS, Dusk. Love your poem, what an entrance!
August 23rd, 2017 00:40 - FRESHLY COOKED (Michael Edwards)
Michael, a poem close to my heart too. The form is perfect, but the...
August 23rd, 2017 00:23 - Nonsense (Baylee)
Right you are, see you later alligator!
August 23rd, 2017 00:18 - Rise (Lost-but-not-broken17)
I know you will!
Like this poem very much, so full of energy, hope, and...
August 22nd, 2017 21:57 - Diamond for Santita (Myself and me)
You did the perfect shape, and even got the right words!
August 22nd, 2017 21:55 - Belief (Its Raskolnikov)
Nicely penned, Ras. With love you can do anything!
August 22nd, 2017 21:54 - in my dreams (Ummbree)
Beautifully written, ummbree! You turned this nightmare into a beautiful,...
August 22nd, 2017 20:29 - Confessions (Adrianna Kjeld)
A beautifully written poem, sad, but with a lot of meaning.
But,...
August 22nd, 2017 20:21 - Dark Thought (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant! Nuff said. Had to make this a favorite.
August 22nd, 2017 14:29 - Naked (Malubotelho)
I really like this poem, Malu!
The older I get the more I realize that...
August 22nd, 2017 14:26 - Relativity - a moral tale! (Sue.evans)
Beautiful writing, nice rhyming, with a great message.
And while money...
August 22nd, 2017 14:08 - Not for Me (Tirzah Juarez)
Great poem Tirzah, I like all of it, but these lines somehow stuck out and...
August 22nd, 2017 12:16 - Creation Cycles (Orchidee)
Your first line could easily refer to your writing!
I do like it.
August 22nd, 2017 12:09 - Miss You Too! (WriteBeLight)
I was looking for the red glasses too,
which means I sorely missed you!
August 22nd, 2017 12:04 - Unconventional Beauty (Florence arla)
Welcome to MPS, florence!
I do like your beautifully written poem. It is...
August 22nd, 2017 11:54 - Weight Lifting (Tony36)
Well said Tony! And it is the hardships of life too that make us better...
August 22nd, 2017 11:49 - Read Rightly. (Fay Slimm.)
War sucks! But you said it much more eloquently!
August 22nd, 2017 04:18 - Insignificance. (Goldfinch60)
I agree with sue, Kat, and Michael.
While we are totally insignificant...
August 22nd, 2017 04:12 - ()
Santita, incredible writing. So intellectual, so astonishing, so...
August 22nd, 2017 04:08 - STRIKE OUT COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many...
August 22nd, 2017 04:00 - Say Goodbye (MissileOfUncertainty)
Very good, thought provoking poem, MoU! Hope you don\'t say goodbye to us...
August 21st, 2017 22:55 - Friendship forever (Tanvir H)
You are so right tanvir, true friendship comes from the heart. Lost touch...
August 21st, 2017 22:52 - Mental illness (Lost-but-not-broken17)
I do hope the writing helps, but have to agree with the first comment. All...
August 21st, 2017 22:48 - Friendship. (Docstorm)
Tough love....I really like this poem.
August 21st, 2017 17:22 - Journey (Sue.evans)
And your writing continues to be excellent!
August 21st, 2017 16:33 - Perspective (Baylee)
And there you go again, Nicole, with another incredible four-liner!
Love...
August 21st, 2017 16:31 - Nail without head (Myself and me)
So easy, hit it on the side that does not hurt when sticking it into your...
August 21st, 2017 16:30 - Saudade (Poetic Dan)
Do I ever know where you are coming from! All my kids and grand-kids are...
August 21st, 2017 16:29 - Mixed mind (Malubotelho)
Good write, Malu. I think we all go through this at one time or another....
August 21st, 2017 16:27 - As I was writing out checks, i realized... (Avigail)
Avigail, I completely agree with your poem, but as a leftie who was forced...
August 21st, 2017 16:25 - THE GRAND ILLUSION (Louis Gibbs)
So true and so well written, Louis.
Since we all see the world...
August 21st, 2017 16:21 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, love the subject and love how you say it! Beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 16:16 - Panic Over. (Goldfinch60)
Great write Goldfinch, if only all \"problems\" had such easy solutions!
August 21st, 2017 16:14 - god as a woman (Queer-with-a-pen)
Your poem reminded me of a religion class a long time ago where the...
August 21st, 2017 16:11 - JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards)
Michael you are such an accomplished writer AND painter! Would not be...
August 21st, 2017 15:59 - Not For (Baylee)
Nicole you are getting better and better! And I think that if you believe...
August 21st, 2017 15:56 - My demons (Egyptianqt79)
Great writing Aysha! So many of us build walls, not only against demons,...
August 21st, 2017 15:53 - A Summer Afternoon (Myself and me)
A most beautiful way to describe a lazy afternoon. Since I would do that...
August 21st, 2017 15:47 - We little ants in the universe (Avigail)
Now, if we could also work together like ants do, this world would be a...
August 21st, 2017 15:44 - He made her (Malubotelho)
Absolutely love this poem! Don\'t even think about your imagined...
August 21st, 2017 15:42 - Together. (Fay Slimm.)
Now if only everybody in this world would subscribe to your...
August 21st, 2017 15:32 - New Times. (Goldfinch60)
So beautiful, Goldfinch. Kudos!
August 21st, 2017 15:27 - Superstition! (Sue.evans)
I\'m not superstitious, cross my fingers!
August 21st, 2017 15:26 - ALONE (Michael Edwards)
That abstract and that poem are one of a kind. Print it onto the picture...
August 21st, 2017 15:13 - Past (Baylee)
And \'never do I want\' to stop reading your poems!
August 21st, 2017 15:10 - Loneliness Complies. (Kevin browne)
Great write as usual!
August 21st, 2017 15:09 - BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Bravo! Brian, you wrote something that we all needed. Terror is ugly, but...
August 18th, 2017 03:53 - The shapes of my life! (Sue.evans)
Sue, your beautiful poem describes domestic life perfectly! Somebody once...
August 18th, 2017 03:19 - Losing You. (Fay Slimm.)
Faye, this is so beautiful, so tender, I think only a writer with a lot of...
August 18th, 2017 03:15 - Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that...
August 18th, 2017 01:52 - Alone (Germanamericanchurch)
An interesting poem, gac. But I think that \'alone\' is a physical state,...
August 18th, 2017 01:44 - Here I lie (Scarlite)
Aloha Cheshie, welcome to MPS!
Your really well written poem drew me in...
August 18th, 2017 01:00 - A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards)
Michael, I like this poem. Reminds me so much of the get-togethers we had...
August 18th, 2017 00:48 - To Fathers With Daughters (Kbreinich)
You say it like it is, kb, and very eloquently!
Good poem, and I like the...
August 17th, 2017 22:00 - She left (Myself and me)
Creativity at it\'s best! Read one, then write one!
You are amazing mam...
August 17th, 2017 21:55 - Sigh *Crude Language* (ElenaGrace)
Elena, all the comments ahead of me express exactly the way I feel about...
August 17th, 2017 20:32 - Flower (Lizzy Renee)
This lovely poem reminds me of my rose garden in St.Eustache. For the last...
August 17th, 2017 20:23 - Looking at the Sky (Lizzy Renee)
A beautiful poem, Lizzy. It starts so nice, all happy.....and then the...
August 17th, 2017 20:18 - A Letter to Foster Kids (Heidijaworskie)
Welcome to MPS, Heidi!
This is such a well written letter, very...
August 17th, 2017 20:15 - That\'s why I really want you (Tanvir H)
Ah tanvir, the eternal triangle of love, hate and trust. Well said!
August 17th, 2017 20:11 - Ill (Nicholas Browning)
To you Nicholas, it might have been \'just a simple work to pass the...
August 17th, 2017 18:30 - Bongo Drum (Tony36)
Well written, Tony, I can nearly hear the beat! And it is so true, music...
August 17th, 2017 18:23 - I have nothing (Aa Harvey)
You have memories
You have regrets
You have hope
You have everything...
August 17th, 2017 17:37 - Crystal (Malubotelho)
Malu, this one-liner is excellent!
You might have added \'because I am...
August 17th, 2017 17:14 - A broken mind (ShannonXx)
Shannon, you scared the you know what out of me! For your sake I hope this...
August 17th, 2017 17:11 - IT BREAKS MY HEART (Louis Gibbs)
Your excellent and to the point poem reminded me of an interview I heard...
August 17th, 2017 17:07 - Let It Be (Its Raskolnikov)
Great poem, Ras! Don\'t know why you consider it \'lower quality\'.
You...
August 17th, 2017 16:55 - I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Can I call you when I want to sell my house?
August 17th, 2017 04:00 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Amen!
August 17th, 2017 03:29 - Time (Sue.evans)
Absolutely love \'We are the magicians of our time\', sue. Just great, and...
August 17th, 2017 03:26 - Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60)
And I dance with your beautiful poem, Goldfinch!
August 17th, 2017 03:25 - LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards)
Thank you so much Michael. As a Swiss I am so happy Koblenz is in Germany...
August 17th, 2017 03:24 - It\'s Time (Baylee)
Nicole you wrote this one with authority! There is a problem, think about...
August 17th, 2017 00:17 - Once Upon A Time (Kbreinich)
kb, I do like your poem, your writing style....straight forward, easy to...
August 16th, 2017 23:06 - Empty Room (Mandi)
When reading your well written poem, one can feel the loneliness seeping...
August 16th, 2017 22:47 - DON\'T (Kaychee)
Well penned with a (very) clear message!
August 16th, 2017 21:42 - You are the only one (Tanvir H)
Good poem, tanvir. A very strong declaration of love.
August 16th, 2017 21:29 - No Longer (Kesha)
Kesha, like the poem, like the structure, and like that you still call him...
August 16th, 2017 21:27 - counting sighs (Heather T)
You were already an accomplished poet at 18 years of age,...
August 16th, 2017 13:08 - To Share With You My Love (Tony36)
Very nicely penned, Tony! The last line says it all!
August 16th, 2017 13:02 - Dead love (Alissa)
I just love these shorties! Very well written, Alissa.
Now I know why I...
August 16th, 2017 12:16 - The Snowstorms of the Heart (Alissa)
A very powerful, yet thoughtful poem, nicely penned, Alissa.
I think you...
August 16th, 2017 12:13 - Saved. (Alissa)
Great writing, Alissa! The hardest part is walking out.
August 16th, 2017 12:11 - The Question (Caden)
Nice one, Caden!
You are looking at a beautiful person who will find...
August 16th, 2017 12:04
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