Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Meadow Meanderings (Orchidee)
The hymn master does it again!
August 29th, 2017 12:06 - Death Walks Beside (Kurt Philip Behm)
This man will never be ready to go! Thought provoking and as usually so...
August 29th, 2017 12:04 - To all out there (Poetic Dan)
Great writing, P D! Now if only everybody in this world would think like...
August 29th, 2017 11:50 - Enmeshed. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem, Fay. Like the last two lines. They could apply to our...
August 29th, 2017 11:38 - Frozen (Aa Harvey)
Well written, Aa. I saw the movie, heard the sound track like a million...
August 29th, 2017 11:33 - The Wonders of Space (GeraldineTaylor)
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! I love the universe, and I love your...
August 29th, 2017 02:59 - Life as a foster kid (Beyondvoid)
bv, welcome to MPS! I do like your straight forward honest style of...
August 29th, 2017 02:57 - The Theatre of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Great writing, Goldfinch! Yes, we do have to be careful about which door...
August 29th, 2017 02:42 - MY FRIEND\'S A WITCH ! ~ AN EERIE ETHEREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wouldn\'t mind to be bewitched by a witch looking like the one in your...
August 29th, 2017 02:41 - A Rant On Behalf of Planet Earth! (Sue.evans)
Thanks for bringing this up in such a caring poem!
August 29th, 2017 02:37 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Glass (Aa Harvey)
I like it. It is really hard to explain the unexplainable!
August 29th, 2017 02:36 - Shoulder exercises (Poetic Dan)
Just keep on giving them all that love! My kids are now married, have...
August 29th, 2017 02:35 - MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, you said it all. Thank you!
August 29th, 2017 02:24 - AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
This is good, but personally, I did like winter better!
August 29th, 2017 02:18 - Winter (Michael Edwards)
Again, you dazzle us with a beautiful picture and a beautiful poem! Can\'t...
August 29th, 2017 02:17 - Yellow card (soccer game) (Myself and me)
I like it, used to be a goalie!
August 29th, 2017 02:13 - The First Time... (Niallprideaux)
Great metaphor for a broken love. But think, if you can paint one, you can...
August 29th, 2017 02:11 - I always loved you (Tanvir H)
Very nice declaration of love, tanvir!
August 29th, 2017 02:09 - THE PRICE (Louis Gibbs)
Socrates supposedly said: I know that I don\'t know anything. There is no...
August 29th, 2017 02:05 - Otherwise (Baylee)
I do like your poem, actually, I like it a lot. And you are right on the...
August 29th, 2017 01:51 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Eclipse (Aa Harvey)
Yes, Aa, love can be all of the above, but it is so much more.....
August 28th, 2017 18:15 - I\'LL LET YOU KNOW (Louis Gibbs)
Love it so far, but will let you know for sure when I see where it goes!
August 28th, 2017 18:14 - Marriage (FredPeyer)
Thanks so much Santita, you are very kind!
August 28th, 2017 18:01 - Tango (Myself and me)
And what a beautiful story it is! Great writing, M&M!
August 28th, 2017 18:01 - Okay? (Lost-but-not-broken17)
So well written. All it takes is one person to change somebody\'s outlook...
August 28th, 2017 17:59 - Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60)
The lino cut is incredible, and so is your poem.
August 28th, 2017 17:55 - Bursting (Baylee)
Nicole, this is beautiful! Breathing memories, and hope in my...
August 28th, 2017 12:21 - Heart to heart ❤️ (Malubotelho)
Very nicely said, Malu. Sometimes hearts are hard to hear and hard to...
August 28th, 2017 12:16 - Ubuntu (Poetic Dan)
After reading your incredible poem, PD, I looked up the meaning...
August 27th, 2017 21:55 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love your prayer/poem, Brian. So many times in life we DO need this...
August 27th, 2017 03:03 - Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60)
I really, really like this poem, Goldfinch! You are so right, but there is...
August 27th, 2017 02:46 - A late summer\'s evening - a potent spell! (Sue.evans)
Sue, I am floored, or maybe I should have said I am bbq\'d. This is a...
August 27th, 2017 02:43 - Forbidden (Malubotelho)
Wow, Malu, and you said you are missing vocabulary! Well I guess you found...
August 27th, 2017 02:39 - Beauty like you (Vincent jodi)
Whether or not you have a future in writing is entirely up to you Vincent....
August 27th, 2017 02:36 - SUMMER (Michael Edwards)
This time I am not sure if I like the painting better than the poem. I...
August 27th, 2017 02:33 - Memories of the past (Estrella Torres)
A sad, yet uplifting poem Estrella!
Yes, sometimes it is hard to overcome...
August 26th, 2017 22:11 - Maybe (Mel Marz)
....and some people wait a lifetime for a poem like this!
\'Maybe\' I...
August 26th, 2017 22:08 - Scar (Faye99)
Very well written, Faye. You know, we all have scars and bruises, some...
August 26th, 2017 22:05 - Trapped in the Day (Faye99)
Good writing, tight, letting the emotions seep through the words.
Great...
August 26th, 2017 22:03 - Soaring Wings (Faye99)
Beautiful writing, Faye. It is the age-old question of \'what if\' and you...
August 26th, 2017 22:01 - Same Old Town (Faye99)
A sad story, but beautifully written!
August 26th, 2017 21:59 - Nature\'s Symphony (Christina8)
Beautiful poem, Christina. Reminds me of the mountain brooks of my youth!
August 26th, 2017 20:42 - Farewell -cinquain (Myself and me)
Farewells are always difficult, and you said it so well, M&M, from both...
August 26th, 2017 20:15 - you are the most I need the most (Tanvir H)
This poem is really beautiful, tanvir.
August 26th, 2017 20:13 - Words Of My Reluctance (Kurt Philip Behm)
Haven\'t read her book, but am in awe of your writing.
August 26th, 2017 16:12 - Victory Vindications (Orchidee)
Orchidee, you definitely are the master of hymn-poems! Beautiful writing.
August 26th, 2017 15:05 - Sirens (Lowkey)
Welcome to MPS.
You make the ordinary sound special! Love the last line.
August 26th, 2017 15:03 - A Beautiful Butterfly (Mandi)
Beautiful story, beautifully written poem! We all have some \'spots\' we...
August 26th, 2017 14:58 - A Broken Old Man (Mandi)
Beautifully written, well rhymed, with a lot of emotion. Very good work!
August 26th, 2017 14:51 - thoughts on time (Dusk arising)
Great poem, great rhyming, and I especially like the ending.
August 26th, 2017 14:45 - One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan)
Read the above, agree completely.
August 26th, 2017 13:54 - Life (Malubotelho)
Wonderful, Malu!
If that poem would hang on everybody\'s wall, this world...
August 26th, 2017 13:38 - The Boy of Gold and Stone. (Niallprideaux)
Niall, this is a great, great metaphor. False love, lies, and greed,...
August 26th, 2017 13:36 - One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan)
A very powerful, well written poem, PD! You are touching on some very deep...
August 26th, 2017 13:14 - Out of gas (Running on empty) (Aa Harvey)
Great write, Aa.
Running on fumes is something I guess we all know and...
August 26th, 2017 13:07 - Celebrate 🎉 (Sue.evans)
Congratulations, Sue!
Now I would like to see your very own 40th poem...
August 26th, 2017 03:58 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great...
August 26th, 2017 03:49 - The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60)
You write so well, Goldfinch. And trees are so interesting!
August 26th, 2017 03:47 - STORY UNTOLD (Vincent jodi)
Very good writing, but once a lady makes up her mind, it is very hard to...
August 26th, 2017 03:44 - SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Really like all of them Michael, and I can see why that painting is...
August 26th, 2017 03:40 - Inhale (Edthepoet)
\'Sinking in a sea of what ifs\'
Very good writing, when I finished...
August 25th, 2017 21:57 - Desolate (Poetboy123)
Very well written, poetboy. A dark and unwelcome future!
August 25th, 2017 21:52 - dear you (Alissa)
As beautiful as friendship is, it can and often does become a burden. You...
August 25th, 2017 15:43 - Early morning. (Docstorm)
What a beautiful picture, and an excellent poem that goes with it!
August 25th, 2017 15:40 - Blurry (Baylee)
Very powerful, Nicole.
I love your poems.
August 25th, 2017 13:45 - Unknown lover (ShannonXx)
So well written, and so powerfully emotional. While I am one of the lucky...
August 25th, 2017 13:44 - Enamored (Malubotelho)
Romance of the first degree!
You are giving Harlequin a run for their...
August 25th, 2017 13:37 - OCD (NOX)
Of course you do!
Anybody who can write as good as you do, NOX, deserves...
August 25th, 2017 12:47 - Situationship (NOX)
Very well written poem!
Love the first two lines, and also agree with...
August 25th, 2017 12:44 - Help Me (NOX)
So well written, NOX. You were all alone in the woods, crying for...
August 25th, 2017 12:42 - THOUGHTS ON MADNESS (Louis Gibbs)
Absolutely love your poem, Louis!!!!!
I was born a nut, live as a nut,...
August 25th, 2017 12:32 - Gravitational Pull (Niallprideaux)
The earth - moon metaphor can work in so many ways and in so many...
August 25th, 2017 12:27 - True Love! (Sue.evans)
I read your comment first, so knew when I started to read the poem that...
August 25th, 2017 12:25 - The Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I...
August 25th, 2017 12:18 - Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey)
Aa, this is a beautiful poem and everything that can or should be said...
August 25th, 2017 12:04 - Love is just a name away (Poetic Dan)
Very beautifully said, PD, and absolutely true! Getting goosebumps reading...
August 25th, 2017 12:00 - Kisses (Christina8)
So beautiful Christina! I just love it!
August 25th, 2017 02:35 - The Poetic Tree (Accidental Poet)
AP, thank you, thank you, thank you!
You captured the essence of MPS...
August 25th, 2017 02:33 - Art is Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful writing, and I agree 100% with you Goldfinch, on the subject...
August 25th, 2017 02:27 - \\\\\\\" FOR HER \\\\\\\" (Vincent jodi)
Welcome to MPS, Vincent!
I like the way you write, honest and from the...
August 25th, 2017 02:21 - It Kills Me.. (Florina77)
So well written, with so much emotion, Florina. You are a good writer. As...
August 25th, 2017 02:09 - Breaking Me Down.. (Florina77)
Florina, I do like your writing. This is a very emotional poem, well...
August 25th, 2017 02:05 - Due Season (GeraldineTaylor)
Geraldine, all I can say is I LOVE IT!
August 25th, 2017 02:01 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Picture (Aa Harvey)
Totally agree Aa, love really is the only way. Just posted a very mushy,...
August 25th, 2017 01:59 - arrow (Dusk arising)
dusk arising, beautifully penned. I agree with the readers before me. Your...
August 25th, 2017 01:53 - PAST DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in...
August 25th, 2017 01:44 - The Road not Taken (C.L.)
Very well penned, C.L.
We tend to wonder if the other road would have...
August 24th, 2017 20:14 - Just Thinking (Thoff1)
Well written, Tomo!
As for the subject, I do not know you, but from what...
August 24th, 2017 20:08 - You can\'t take it with you. (Docstorm)
We arrive with nothing...we leave with nothing. Love your poem,...
August 24th, 2017 18:47 - First Cut The Deepest (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love both of them! Thank you!
August 24th, 2017 18:44 - Help for Heroes (Bibbeck)
Bibbeck, this is a beautiful ode to the fallen soldier. In my mind they...
August 24th, 2017 18:25 - All in the mix! (Sue.evans)
Thank you so much Sue! Now I finally know where the expression \"one in...
August 24th, 2017 18:22 - Ring In The Sand (Myself and me)
If found objects could only talk!
I love your poem, M&M.
August 24th, 2017 18:17 - The candy girl (Malubotelho)
Very well written, Malu. I love it. And the \'old man\' twist at the end,...
August 24th, 2017 13:30 - Questions. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a...
August 24th, 2017 13:18 - Now He’s Really Lost It (Accidental Poet)
Nostalgic ramblings of a middle aged baby boomer
Or nocturnal...
August 24th, 2017 03:40 - The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Love this poem, Goldfinch. And thank God don\'t we know what is going to...
August 24th, 2017 03:34 - Jaded (Baylee)
Beautiful poem, Nicole.
But there is a danger if you, as you write so...
August 24th, 2017 03:29 - THE LETTER (Michael Edwards)
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words....
August 24th, 2017 00:26 - Mine. (C.L.)
I truly like your poem, C.L. When you are in love this is exactly how it...
August 23rd, 2017 22:39
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