Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Existence (Aa Harvey) Talk about a mental desert, but very well written Aa. It takes skill to...
  August 16th, 2017 11:23
• Fear (The Drunk Pirate) Dark and scary! But so well written!
  August 16th, 2017 11:15
• The ballerina (The Drunk Pirate) Drunk Pirate, you must have been completely sober when writing this...
  August 16th, 2017 11:14
• Nithing (Nicholas Browning) Nicholas, while it may not take prowess or skill to write about oneself,...
  August 16th, 2017 11:07
• Follow Your Dreams (Alf W) Alf, you are not only a great poet, you are a great philosopher as well....
  August 16th, 2017 10:49
• what do you do in the 20%? (Avigail) Avigail, you know I am usually 100% behind your writing. With this one I...
  August 16th, 2017 10:36
• Lost without you (Sue.evans) Sorry for getting emotional, but sue, you so accurately depicted the last...
  August 16th, 2017 10:27
• Rising tides (Malubotelho) Living on an island, your lovely poem reminded me of a few instances where...
  August 16th, 2017 10:23
• Mystery (Lakiea) A fine poem with a true message! But sometimes we might read something in...
  August 16th, 2017 10:19
• DEAFENING SILENCE (Louis Gibbs) You found the words, very eloquently, I might add, to say that sometimes...
  August 16th, 2017 10:13
• Changeling. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, you are making me look at air and wind in a whole different, much...
  August 16th, 2017 10:07
• All Promise Was Gone (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Advice to live by! Please keep it coming, I am still learning. Like how...
  August 16th, 2017 10:04
• the curtains are closed (Stefan badham) Stefan, I really like this poem. There is a haunting quality to it with a...
  August 16th, 2017 03:12
• CARIBBEAN MAMMY ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Gotta hand it to you bro, you da kine!
  August 16th, 2017 03:08
• Guys (Jennylynn0324) Well written Jennylynn! I don\'t think you missed anybody out there,...
  August 16th, 2017 02:17
• stone (Ummbree) Very well written, ummbree! Yes, sometimes people are not what they seem.
  August 16th, 2017 02:10
• Quiet City. (Goldfinch60) This is beautiful, Goldfinch. Am just glad you didn\'t hear rap music!
  August 16th, 2017 02:04
• Glass Bottle (CSS20013) CSS, another great poem! And I agree completely with \'myself and me\'...
  August 16th, 2017 01:40
• Little Sister (CSS20013) After reading your excellent poem and your comments about your situation,...
  August 16th, 2017 01:37
• Venom (Baylee) Good writing, Baylee! You might be disgusted, but you don\'t have to be....
  August 16th, 2017 01:08
• Plundered (MissileOfUncertainty) MoU, had to make this a favorite, it is that good! (At least as far as I...
  August 16th, 2017 01:04
• THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards) Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about...
  August 16th, 2017 00:59
• ONE LIFE (Freddy) Agree with Jane, a beautiful and meaningful poem.
  August 15th, 2017 17:25
• Who are You ? (Roudan) As for your question: Nothing! Great poem, great reading, great writing,...
  August 15th, 2017 17:23
• Depressed - the definition (Sue.evans) Indeed, what\'s the point? Even though I am not and never have been...
  August 15th, 2017 17:09
• Roads (Its Raskolnikov) Ras, your excellent poem is making me look the street in front of my house...
  August 15th, 2017 17:00
• One more (Malubotelho) Four little lines, Malu, that can say so much. When the order is filled,...
  August 15th, 2017 16:57
• The essence of perfection (JamesJohnson) What a beautiful, well written declaration of love!
  August 15th, 2017 16:54
• your kaleidoscope essence (Avigail) Avigail, I don\'t know anymore how I could get through my days without...
  August 15th, 2017 16:50
• pretty (Heather T) Heather, this is just beautifully written, and so alluring. While the...
  August 15th, 2017 13:40
• Will not give up (Poetic Dan) Very well said PD! Never give up!
  August 15th, 2017 13:21
• Low (Private poet) PP, your beautifully written poem shows the struggle and pain inherent...
  August 15th, 2017 12:19
• Belong to me (Dent Moses) Perfect!
  August 15th, 2017 12:06
• () The question should not be \'who shall prevail?\', but how do we get them...
  August 15th, 2017 12:03
• THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs) Sweet Dreams, indeed! More like a nightmare, but a really well written...
  August 15th, 2017 11:57
• Love-Tongue. (Fay Slimm.) After all these other comments, all I can do now is to agree with...
  August 15th, 2017 11:49
• \"Nowhere Locomotive\" (Nicholas Browning) Don\'t know how to translate, maybe you can enlighten me.
  August 15th, 2017 11:45
• Money And Blood (Kurt Philip Behm) Santita is right, maybe that is why so many fantasies stay only that,...
  August 15th, 2017 11:41
• Itinerary (WriteBeLight) WBL, I love your \"travel documentary\", so well written! Know the area,...
  August 15th, 2017 11:34
• Sing a song of the Taj Mahal (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) An imposing building and an imposing poem. You captured the beauty and...
  August 15th, 2017 11:05
• hold (me) tight (Queer-with-a-pen) Boaz, a very well written poem with an important message. Would be nice to...
  August 15th, 2017 02:14
• First Love (FredPeyer) Thank you Kat, I tried in my mind to transport myself back to these...
  August 15th, 2017 02:06
• Do You Take Sugar? (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, my heart is bleeding. My mom was in and out of dementia before...
  August 15th, 2017 02:04
• ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards) Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an...
  August 15th, 2017 01:59
• Homeless (Myself and me) mam, this is so well written, one can practically see that person....
  August 14th, 2017 20:48
• To Her (Caden) As Neil Sedaka so aptly said: Breaking up is hard to do. Welcome to MPS,...
  August 14th, 2017 16:48
• Breathe (Kristy41) Great poem Kristy! But just for fun, what if we turn it around to: If you...
  August 14th, 2017 16:42
• Last Bet (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, never thought of death as a gamble, more of rigged game with a...
  August 14th, 2017 15:33
• prey (Heather T) Heather, you just can\'t stop to astound me. From the family homestead to...
  August 14th, 2017 15:31
• Snowy Day (Bibbeck) Bibbeck, I used to live in Montreal. Love to look at snow, but believe me,...
  August 14th, 2017 15:10
• I am Judy (Judy Booler) Judy, just read all your poems, don\'t know how I missed them...
  August 14th, 2017 12:33
• Mind how you fill the gap (Avigail) Very thought provoking writing here, Avigail. How do we fill the gaps?...
  August 14th, 2017 12:13
• THE CYCLE REPLAYED (Louis Gibbs) Thank you Louis for this very well written poem! With Guam being mentioned...
  August 14th, 2017 11:52
• Intake. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, there is nothing like watching the sun rise from the ocean (except...
  August 14th, 2017 11:46
• I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, I wanna be a pirate too. Got my rubber ducky ready! Thanks for a...
  August 14th, 2017 02:52
• Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60) I guess sometimes faith doesn\'t work!
  August 14th, 2017 02:50
• SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards) \'She lazed there long by balustrades\' to be gazed upon in utter...
  August 14th, 2017 02:48
• The Girl (CSS20013) Welcome to the wonderful world of MPS, CSS. This poem is well written,...
  August 13th, 2017 22:15
• Old Ruin (Tirzah Juarez) Welcome to MPS, Tirzah! Beautiful poem, \'While I waltz alone in the...
  August 13th, 2017 22:05
• Paris (Myself and me) Absolutely beautiful! I visited Paris several times and love the...
  August 13th, 2017 21:54
• Miss you (Myself and me) Good poem, mam. As far as I am concerned there are three things to say to...
  August 13th, 2017 21:49
• Waiting Is End (Myself and me) mam, I do like your poem. As for the ending, I like the one in the poem...
  August 13th, 2017 21:25
• For my daughter aged 7 (Pollythepoet) Just beautiful, wish I could have read something like that to my daughter...
  August 13th, 2017 18:21
• Last Gasp (Gina~) Even though it was written fast and is short, doesn\'t mean it cannot be a...
  August 13th, 2017 18:19
• it\'s nothing personal. (Ruth Fadairo) It\'s nothing personal for anybody else, right? Ruth, I do like your poem...
  August 13th, 2017 18:16
• Her (Dulcinea91) Raquel, I do hope this poem is from your imagination and does not involve...
  August 13th, 2017 18:14
• Neutral Paradigms (Whisperingquill) \'holistic debauchery\', \'within the sodomized nucleus\', \'augmented...
  August 13th, 2017 18:09
• Camila (Septolet Poem) (Rrodriguez) What a beautiful baby! And what a beautiful poem too! I hope they have the...
  August 13th, 2017 16:27
• They Never Die (Dent Moses) I like your poem Dent, well written! At my age I cannot agree with your...
  August 13th, 2017 16:25
• Unthinkable (Lakiea) So true Lakiea, and a picture can be worth a thousand words! But sometimes...
  August 13th, 2017 16:19
• Leave the past behind (Tanvir H) Tanvir, you said it all with only a few well chosen words. Great poem!
  August 13th, 2017 16:17
• red clay baptism (Heather T) Definitely a favorite! The video took my breath away, made me realize once...
  August 13th, 2017 16:16
• Ditty Lines (Bibbeck) There are gems in your ditty lines, Bibbeck!
  August 13th, 2017 16:07
• Somewhere in the process (Avigail) Avigail, your excellent writing confirms the \"power corrupts\"...
  August 13th, 2017 16:06
• Redefining. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, beautiful picture, beautiful poem, so well written (as always). It is...
  August 13th, 2017 16:01
• New Generations. (Goldfinch60) Great writing and interesting subject, Goldfinch. Both my sons are taller...
  August 13th, 2017 15:53
• Broken Shutters (WL Schuett) You do have a way with words, WL. I find your poem incredible, well...
  August 13th, 2017 00:57
• counting by even numbers (Queer-with-a-pen) Very good and very emotional writing. You do put it all out there. I am...
  August 13th, 2017 00:54
• I\'m your girl (Malubotelho) Us poor guys don\'t have a chance at all! We are manipulated right and...
  August 13th, 2017 00:50
• () If I would have to choose yours or Michaels septolet, sorry Michael, I...
  August 13th, 2017 00:46
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget,...
  August 13th, 2017 00:44
• Momma Im sorry (Jay\'s Mind) Good, true, and full of emotion. I like it.
  August 12th, 2017 19:31
• I watched (Mel Marz) Welcome on MPS, Mely. This is a well written poem, full of emotion, but...
  August 12th, 2017 19:27
• I\'ll be Here (Brie) Brie, thank you for a beautiful poem on how we should live! How often do...
  August 12th, 2017 17:20
• Cellblock D (Stephanie91) Aloha Stephanie, welcome to MPS! Very well written, with good rhyme, one...
  August 12th, 2017 17:07
• Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight) WBL, there really are a lot of people who should heed your advise,...
  August 12th, 2017 17:03
• Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck) Quite imaginative bringing the two tragedies together, but then that is...
  August 12th, 2017 16:50
• 12:00 (Nikki) Welcome to MPS, Nikki. Nice rhyme. What keeps you from \'sinking\' is...
  August 12th, 2017 16:47
• Parched Lips (Gary Edward Geraci) Gary, it is not easy to write a poem following strict rules, but you...
  August 12th, 2017 16:44
• molten silver (Draculazy) Welcome to MPS, Becca! \'I am painting the sheets with a coat of...
  August 12th, 2017 13:24
• When Mother Natures Karma. (Kevin browne) So well written and rhymed again! So true and awfully scary! Kevin, you...
  August 12th, 2017 13:20
• CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Sounds like a girl from Molokai! Love your poem Brian, and also would like...
  August 12th, 2017 12:53
• Life should be ... (Sue.evans) Life CAN be all of the above!!! Absolutely love your poem, Sue. In a way...
  August 12th, 2017 12:35
• Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee) Orchidee, it doesn\'t matter whether or not one is a believer, your poems...
  August 12th, 2017 12:30
• A Mirror (Kurt Philip Behm) Another great poem, Kurt. Reading it I can feel the pain, even though in...
  August 12th, 2017 12:27
• Drained (Gina~) Beautifully written, Gina! I love the first stanza, the way you described...
  August 12th, 2017 12:24
• always been (Queer-with-a-pen) Beautifully written, with much emotion and understanding. Now I get at...
  August 12th, 2017 12:14
• Enticing. (Fay Slimm.) After reading your poem, Fay, I now look at each dawn in a different way....
  August 12th, 2017 11:44
• Shrugs/ Ha Ha/ What You See (Whisperingquill) WQ you are my all-time favorite for poems I don\'t read....but study!
  August 12th, 2017 11:42
• Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations Goldfinch, you not only nailed the FIB coming and going,...
  August 12th, 2017 11:39