Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
- The King (FineB)
Sublime on chess and perhaps meant in subtle strong metaphor....
November 10th, 2020 05:05 - Slug Trap (Syd)
Woah sounds cruel if they do that to cats and slugs unless the slugs are...
November 10th, 2020 05:03 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
Wow this was a fantastic super interlude with the glories of solitude and...
November 9th, 2020 12:26 - Walk the line (Poetic Dan)
Great awesome muse, on love and life and how you muse on different things...
November 9th, 2020 12:21 - Breeze (E.J. Waling)
Woah very techy and mod apt for this digital age where everything is going...
November 9th, 2020 11:47 - Fantastical (Aa Harvey)
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed...
November 9th, 2020 11:35 - Back There (Fay Slimm.)
Wow you imagined on their behalf, how they the soldiers would miss home...
November 9th, 2020 11:21 - The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Wow awesome muse as you picture the imagery superbly and wonder about...
November 9th, 2020 11:12 - Gospel Glories - Isaiah Series (19) (Orchidee)
A very nice devotional religious write and I like how it inspires...
November 9th, 2020 10:11 - My Catacomb (PoeticBiscuit)
Wow you express in such creative metaphors and similes all so poetic and...
November 9th, 2020 10:06 - Song, It’s a 12 o’clock World (AwHec8)
Wow a fabulous lyrical poem and I was admiring the creative refrain words,...
November 9th, 2020 10:03 - SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Wow yeahh a lot of people need this these days, an uplifting positive...
November 9th, 2020 09:59 - Covered Moon (MrNobody40)
A sublime hazy muse very poetic yayy. Imaginative wow!
Pls do read my...
September 12th, 2020 14:03 - \\\\\\\" I will bother you trailing \\\\\\\" (Aleem Nasir)
A nice poem, monorhyme type , good! You express in a fine way. Thumbs...
September 12th, 2020 14:01 - autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A beautiful autumnal poem, fabulous poetic rhyming imagery and it has a...
September 11th, 2020 07:35 - As I Tell My Nieces And Nephews (ForeverJesus7)
I think you mean God , we should learn to remember God since childhood yes...
September 11th, 2020 07:32 - all work,no play (Crowns4Christ)
Play is vital. Society makes us work everyday almost while humans need...
September 11th, 2020 07:27 - Toddler (MelissaJA)
Wow a fantastic poem, guess they are all similar then because I have a...
September 11th, 2020 07:25 - Unearthing the Daisy (Sylviasearcher)
Wow you say it in awesome flow and rhyming and I admire the intertwining...
September 11th, 2020 07:23 - he’s safe. (Dustandlace)
A cool lovely song like lyrical rap poem, rocking good. Super job...
September 11th, 2020 07:16 - Inevitability (Neville)
Hmm though I\'m not sure what you are talking about but it makes me think...
September 11th, 2020 02:41 - A “Villanelle” Touch the Light (Dove)
Woww what a stellar bright imaginative poem riding on stars so poetically...
September 11th, 2020 00:56 - Wanderer (Trenz Pruca)
Even the part you still have is superb muse, like a seafaring poem, you...
September 11th, 2020 00:54 - The glitch inside the mind (RiverJordan)
Wow a fab sublime muse and I like the poetic word choice you have employed...
September 11th, 2020 00:51 - FOR SUCH A TIME AS THIS ! ~ BRIAN ~ A KYRIELLE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow a sweet lovely charming poem showing and acknowledging love poem how...
September 11th, 2020 00:49 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
Wow said in awesome creatively crafted metaphor. Great in brevity. You...
September 11th, 2020 00:41 - One love (Bragee)
A great awesome poem showing the paradoxical nature of fellow humans, the...
September 11th, 2020 00:38 - Poem, VP Pence Hypocrite much? (AwHec8)
Wow a strong hardhitting slam type lament against the sociopolitical...
September 11th, 2020 00:34 - Full.. (Poetic Dan)
The freedom to explore, wow you penned down a wonderful muse here.! Poetry...
September 11th, 2020 00:27 - VINCENT PRICE - Grandmaster of Horror A Tribute (FineB)
Woah a fine fabulous tribute and elegy for a horror master, a horro film...
September 11th, 2020 00:22 - Between Worlds. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow your phrasing is creatively awesome and top notch!! I was admiring \'...
September 10th, 2020 14:55 - Still binge reading Bertrand Russell.. September 8th, 2020 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
My dad used to read Russell and you wrote him and his work a fine eloquent...
September 10th, 2020 14:36 - Awakened Side – Page 20 (Nafis Light)
A nice poem to love oneself and you give other muses. We shouldn\'t...
September 10th, 2020 14:25 - Who Do You Say? (Orchidee)
Although I have different beliefs about Jesus I liked the biblical history...
September 10th, 2020 14:23 - Imagine (Peto)
Wow wow wow what a charming imaginative romantic poem and I was admiring...
July 7th, 2020 09:58 - Just Thinking (PoeticBiscuit)
A superb poem on this fleeting life and time, I liked the clever...
July 7th, 2020 09:54 - Ennio Morricone. (Goldfinch60)
Wow a nice touching elegy and eulogy for your fav musician who passed away...
July 7th, 2020 06:09 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Woah wow yay clever!! We use onions everyday in cooking and a lot of...
July 7th, 2020 06:03 - Poem, Bittersweet (AwHec8)
Wow a nice lovely lyrical devotional song . It flows well and nicely with...
July 7th, 2020 05:59 - Fishing for Men (Gary Edward Geraci)
Wow fantastic how you craft and employ the fishing analogy and metaphor...
July 7th, 2020 05:55 - can (Jon Nakapalau)
Woah wow clever and witty!! How a lil thing can offset and upset big plans...
July 7th, 2020 05:49 - PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow a villanelle, yayy!! And I totally agree that man was more angelic...
July 7th, 2020 05:45 - At the Divide... (Gino)
Wow awesome analogy and similes crafted for fine poetic comparison. Great...
July 7th, 2020 04:20 - Tainted Utopia (Xeina)
A fantastic muse , ambitious and nicely adventurous thoughts. Altogether a...
July 7th, 2020 04:05 - Endless sea (Saxon Crow)
An awesome poem to God, I like to think of it meaning the immortal eternal...
July 7th, 2020 03:57 - FAVE BREED O CAT O DOG ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ ANY STYLE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow great cool poems. Is the fusion over or we can add still?
Ah but my...
July 2nd, 2020 07:22 - SCIENCE FACT OR SCIENCE FICTION ? ~ END OF HUMAN CIVILISATION ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi thanks for the invite. Great poems by the host! Science fiction adds a...
July 2nd, 2020 07:19 - Home Working (FineB)
A nice apt neat work from home poem, life has changed drastically by just...
May 8th, 2020 12:52 - Shelf (Jabberwocky)
Woah awesome bravo! A woman finished by all those alphas, none of them as...
May 8th, 2020 12:30 - Lunar Being (Sylviasearcher)
Wow awesome how you liken the dream state to a lunar phase ! A lovely...
May 8th, 2020 12:29 - Shelf (Jabberwocky)
Woah awesome bravo! A woman finished by all those alphas, none of them as...
May 8th, 2020 12:27 - Today (Myself and me)
Great poem with fine twist and wordplay ,true to life the here and now,...
May 8th, 2020 12:22 - I LOVE ANGELA BECAUSE 🧡 BRIAN 🤍 LOVE SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow wow wow what a marvellous sentimental poem, creatively woven with word...
May 8th, 2020 10:12 - Label (FredPeyer)
Woah cool clever poem , it\'s nice to give off warning labels, I think we...
May 8th, 2020 09:55 - This Is Me (Bragee)
Wow wow wow what a creative impressive fabulous muse on your style and...
May 8th, 2020 09:52 - Realism. Short n simple (A)
A fine muse poem, it is superb as a poem as you think things....
May 8th, 2020 09:45 - Podcast lesson (re)learned today... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A super poem epic and I enjoyed it , related to it a bit because I love...
May 8th, 2020 09:43 - slowly, into a shadow (Dusk arising)
A lovely fabulous muse poem, beautifully written, recollecting and...
May 8th, 2020 09:38 - I said it (Poetic Dan)
A great sociopolitical poem. ! I like the powerful words in the line, \'...
May 8th, 2020 05:56 - Faith Through Forebodings (Orchidee)
A lovely uplifting supplication poem inspiring trust in God. Written...
May 8th, 2020 05:53 - Released From Despair. (Goldfinch60)
A great motivating poem for a friend , inspiring and awesome for all. I...
May 8th, 2020 05:50 - Living Side - Sanity (Nafis Light)
A lot of people of different races like the joker and have the joker mask...
May 8th, 2020 05:47 - Comical Couplets (6) (Michael Edwards)
Fantastic! I love real life writes and this tells the human tale in joust...
May 8th, 2020 05:43 - Comical Couplets (7) (Michael Edwards)
Hmm thought provoking ! Can be cruel come to think of it. Nice to see you...
May 8th, 2020 05:39 - Kilimanjaro (Rrodriguez)
Wow an awesome beautiful tribute eloquently phrased ! Great how you...
April 15th, 2020 12:12 - Do not go fearful into the sinister night (Villanelle) (Rrodriguez)
Wow an awesome motivating inspiring poem that we all need in these hard...
April 14th, 2020 00:50 - Attention Deficit (Chagrined)
Wow a brilliant poem, stellar eloquence! I like to incorporate science in...
March 1st, 2020 00:13 - Go With The Flow (Goddess of the Mist)
An appealing superb muse rendered in great rhyme scheme. A fab poem...
March 1st, 2020 00:11 - If I Had Not Closed The Book (ForeverJesus7)
Woah interesting. My religion actually asks us to research and not follow...
February 27th, 2020 23:18 - The Other Side (Gino)
I like to think this touches on the hereafter and afterlife. Whatever it...
February 27th, 2020 23:12 - that love which you leave behind (Jon Nakapalau)
Wowww such an awesomely creative poem on the effect of the ex and jilted...
February 27th, 2020 23:10 - A Consolation (Adam Shirley (geef))
A love wilted and dried and perhaps unable to spark because it\'s ignited...
February 26th, 2020 23:31 - New Life (Gary Edward Geraci)
This poem is deep and abstract! In a way death brings new life yeah....
February 26th, 2020 23:27 - At any given moment countless thought processes (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Wow what an extraordinary muse and you have used many of the words I like...
February 26th, 2020 23:16 - the polemical poet (Dusk arising)
Gosh you had to go such lengths gahhh!! I didn\'t argue with three people,...
February 26th, 2020 14:26 - Complex Simplicity (Netashi)
Awesome muse here written in fab rhyming wow, . I liked the line speck of...
February 26th, 2020 08:54 - Please join me as Poet has passed (Poetic Dan)
Condolences aw sad to hear of his passing. He was a friend and sent bright...
February 26th, 2020 08:50 - Your death is their religion (Xeina)
A dark strong hardhitting poem indeed!! Seems to be about murderers and...
February 26th, 2020 07:01 - The patient one (Mo_issa99)
Aw a touching beautiful poem in tribute and elegy to the passed on loved...
February 26th, 2020 06:44 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
A great inspiring poem that promotes love and peace in a superb way that...
February 26th, 2020 06:41 - Embrace (FoolishHeart)
A superb romantic poem cherishing the amorous moments. Kudos for a lovely...
February 26th, 2020 06:31 - Jerry the fox terrier (Dusk arising)
Woah a fantastic poem with fine pun on behalf of a doggy yay wow! I like...
February 26th, 2020 06:28 - Anonymous (Seek)
Wow an awesome floral wonder poem as you talk of the flora in an awesome...
February 26th, 2020 06:16 - The Greenman (Saxon Crow)
Is this awesome poem in all its imagery and lament about greenery and...
February 26th, 2020 06:12 - Hurt (Sylviasearcher)
Woah a fantastic extraordinary poem, and I was laughing nervously at...
February 26th, 2020 06:09 - Unfinished (Aa Harvey)
A wry muse sublime and eloquently expressed. Kudos for this poem, how you...
February 26th, 2020 06:06 - THE EQUILIBRIUM 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh yes I would blame man\'s rapacious selfishly destructive ways upon the...
February 26th, 2020 06:02 - Loneliness (Myself and me)
Woahh deep abstract muse in brevity. Kudos for the inking.
Pls Pleez do...
February 26th, 2020 01:59 - Alright (Nemo)
It\'s such an awesome lyrical appealing poem and you expressed in superb...
February 26th, 2020 01:58 - As All Things Must (Nicholas Browning)
Wow great sublime muse and the descriptions make it a fine abstract poem...
February 26th, 2020 01:52 - Pet names (Reivax Camlost)
Ah a pet names for a person yayy those sound cute and cool the ones you...
February 26th, 2020 01:50 - Voice in a void (RiverJordan)
Wow you craft your muse in superb word choice and phrasing! Milele I would...
February 26th, 2020 01:18 - London Winter Walk 2020 (FineB)
Wow a wintry walking marathon?? Yayy sounds great and the way you...
February 26th, 2020 01:16 - The End Of Your World (Tia Davis/テイア)
Wow such creatively expressed muse, imaginative and brill! Life is a...
February 26th, 2020 01:14 - Locked Out (Neville)
Aw really? Life must be super tough for orphans and you gave a poetic...
February 26th, 2020 01:11 - Supper (FredPeyer)
I just realised there\'s a typo, I meant to say don\'t rest your pen too...
December 7th, 2019 02:11 - What’s It All About (Thoughts In Time)
Awesome way you express your muse poetically. Your word choice is eloquent...
December 4th, 2019 23:32 - a short i love you (Dustandlace)
Wow an appealing love poem of young love. You express in a lovely...
December 4th, 2019 23:30 - Fucking Mondays (A)
A sublime poem and you express your muse in a swell way. Kudos.
Pls...
December 4th, 2019 23:23 - Missing You (Laura🌻)
Aw a toucing sentimental poem of loss of beloved one. But u will meet in...
December 4th, 2019 16:30
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