Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

• metanoia (Aals) wow this is a rather unique positive poem, creatively done and quitters...
  December 2nd, 2016 13:17
• The Twilight Reclaimed (Kurt Philip Behm) hi. is this about triplets im wondering//? it is an amazing poem in...
  December 2nd, 2016 13:12
• THE PREACHER (Tony36) yeah poet God is the only best solace as this great and lovely motivating...
  December 2nd, 2016 13:06
• the cuts (Kitkat231997) oh nhoh noh pls dont say goodbye to us. this poem is dark n emotive, dark...
  December 2nd, 2016 12:58
• Angels and Bagpipes (Francesco) Wow his has an awesome rhyme scheme and I loved the exotic autumnal part,...
  December 2nd, 2016 12:23
• Its gonna be a good night, alright (country song) (SilentLaugh) Wow rocking rap with cool lovely refrains. U write in a fine song like way...
  December 2nd, 2016 12:18
• Age ain\'t nothing but a number (Quietstorm_Dru) Woah sensational and appealing. Shows loyalty ., love and sincere light...
  December 2nd, 2016 12:15
• lay me down,by your side (Ron parrish aka wordman) A lovely lyrical poem indeed. So appealing and sweet. Must really warm up...
  December 2nd, 2016 12:11
• The Battlefield (Vanabba3) Of war n battle a great commentary poem. Sad and haunting to read.Awesome...
  December 2nd, 2016 08:06
• Acceptance (Daniel) Yes reality show, could relate to that line in this awesome poem well...
  December 2nd, 2016 08:01
• Mine To Farewell (SabreLi) A soulful lyrical poem on a one night stand or a relationship built on...
  December 2nd, 2016 07:59
• I\'m Trapped (WriteBeLight) Oopsy revenge of the bugs eh? What a tongue in cheek poem n though....
  December 2nd, 2016 07:43
• The Old Barber\'s Shop (Michael Champion) Described in awesome rhyming in mod ballad style wow and very interesting....
  November 23rd, 2016 09:48
• Haiku: Desert (Elegant_Style) What a crackling cracking imagery haiku. I find even deserts poetic. And u...
  November 23rd, 2016 09:41
• Tail Impale (IRonnie) Wow what a super poem humoured and witty. Awesome rhyming too. I enjoyed...
  November 23rd, 2016 04:48
• Our children (Christina8) Why wouldn\'t I like such a lovely heartwarming poem in fabulous flow and...
  November 23rd, 2016 00:35
• I love you, i despise you (Nicolerobinson) Woah I could relate to this poem as to mixed emotions about love. Clever...
  November 23rd, 2016 00:24
• A.M.E.R.I.C.A.N L.E.A.D.E.R.S (BSmooth) Woahba ranting political poem expressing the dejection with the leaders in...
  November 23rd, 2016 00:21
• War (Wolf2778) All about war poetically well presented. The last line sums it up so...
  November 23rd, 2016 00:09
• Fight (TheWritingInstrument) Emotive muse expressed in poetic lyrical wordings and tones. Effective and...
  November 23rd, 2016 00:06
• what to feel what to do (Kitkat231997) A cool rap like songish lyrical poem in bouncy rhyming. Thumbs up. Keep...
  November 22nd, 2016 04:39
• Why? (Gothic_Girl) An appealing poem on a very common life love problem and u wrote it in a...
  November 22nd, 2016 04:37
• The Cloak Of Forgiveness (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow great analogy here in metaphor. The comparison is impressively done....
  November 21st, 2016 23:20
• untitled (Littlegoat23) Yes pls we need more of yor awesome rhyming poetry here, pls don\'t leave...
  November 21st, 2016 23:17
• Pressure Gauge (Augustus) Wow such a creatively awesome poem esp from the 2nd stanza onwards where...
  November 21st, 2016 23:14
• Don\'t Do Drugs (Tony36) A very motivating poem and I love didactic topics. This is so true about...
  November 21st, 2016 10:42
• Shadow by figure\'s in the darkness of the room (MThackerson) Reminds me of a djinn that I was seeing in nightmares. U wrote it in a...
  November 17th, 2016 02:00
• The Melted Clock (Kasap89) Enjoyed the play on words and the blending of nightmares and daydreams. U...
  November 17th, 2016 01:55
• Honest Reflection (Emilyeaton101) A beautiful positive poem inspiring swell. Rhymed well as well. U r right...
  November 17th, 2016 01:51
• White Cross (Yorke) Wow a nice patriotic tribute to the soldier and I like the mention of...
  November 16th, 2016 15:08
• So High (SilentLaugh) Woah sarcastic and seems to about being happy about the end of a...
  November 16th, 2016 11:39
• Conquering Phobias (Survivor48) This is a great motivating poem uniquely telling how to beat phobias. I...
  November 16th, 2016 01:12
• Breaking (Taliac.) A creative imaginative poem on a common situation in many parts of the...
  November 16th, 2016 01:02
• Friends. (Kevin browne) Wow a sublime great poem on the need of friendship . Super freeverse...
  November 16th, 2016 00:55
• tangled in you (Inink) Woah sensational and sensual. I like honey in poems. This was enjoyable...
  November 15th, 2016 14:56
• Trust takes years to build (Quietstorm_Dru) Wow super poem witty and appealing with fine twists. Yes trust could take...
  November 15th, 2016 14:53
• A day of whites. (P.H.Rose) Wow beautifully sentimental, I like marrieds poem since they portray more...
  November 15th, 2016 08:22
• Trapped (EmmaR1) This great poem reminds that this world is only transient and transitory...
  November 15th, 2016 08:13
• VOID IN A TIN BORROWED FROM THE 1890S (Giantgentlebear) Wow the imagery and muse is awesome here. I like the wording and...
  November 15th, 2016 08:08
• Speak (JustABird) Expresses how relationships can become robotic. Creatively crafted muse...
  November 15th, 2016 01:40
• Severed Eyes (DezyraSatyre) Dark poem in great sublime wording. The stark phrasing and word choice is...
  November 14th, 2016 08:26
• Beautiful Eyes (Abu Aeesh) A lovely poem with a nice message. U write nicely. I like the mention of...
  November 14th, 2016 08:23
• My Beloved Son (AlitaOpal) A lovely motivating poem written for a little son in wonderful rhyming....
  November 14th, 2016 08:22
• W O M A N ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ha ha this enhances my feminine pride which is always bursting at the...
  November 14th, 2016 08:14
• Ambition (Magno1988) You ought to love your muse and the poetry that comes from it. I like the...
  November 14th, 2016 02:10
• Life (Denise ducey kloeppel) A relatable poem and u wrote in a superb witty query way in fine rhyming....
  November 14th, 2016 02:03
• Romeo and Juliet /the final curtain (Ron parrish aka wordman) Is this about lost love? Enjoyed the comparison to the famous Romeo...
  November 13th, 2016 23:39
• BE YOURSELF (Illia) Cool advising Poem. Super to read. Inspiring in great wording expressed...
  November 13th, 2016 13:38
• Help (Kieran Garnett) Moving and poignant . The wording so poetic it ought to cheer. May the...
  November 13th, 2016 13:30
• Unwelcomed Change (Survivor48) Yes we must find the way to bliss, rightly said. Wow this is a fine poem,...
  November 13th, 2016 13:24
• Historys Biggest Lie (Liam Lawless) Govt\'s do influence our lives yes. This poem is hard hitting and nicely...
  November 13th, 2016 04:12
• The Friend In You (Keeara45) Yeah true not everybody can be trusted with our pain. This poem is unique...
  November 13th, 2016 04:06
• What is Loneliness? (Sonicpoet) Poignant and soulful expressing the solitary feel very well and lyrical....
  November 13th, 2016 04:04
• Color Master (Augustus) Wow eloquent diction and in poetic colors. I esp like to use alabaster and...
  November 13th, 2016 03:43
• Social media (Nicolerobinson) Warm thanx but I not know how to participate. Take care.
  November 13th, 2016 03:02
• Alone, In Search Of You (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow soulful and in longing hues in great poetic tones and wording. How the...
  November 5th, 2016 09:53
• Winter\'s Serenade (Melody) I say what a marvellous poem in awesome rhyme scheme. I find winter very...
  November 5th, 2016 06:36
• Friends (Reivax Camlost) Of gold , roses and friends wow a lovely funtastic rhyming poem. Super...
  November 4th, 2016 13:42
• Clouds (WriteBeLight) I have an poem on clouds on other sites so I enjoyed your take on them in...
  November 4th, 2016 10:08
• Silver Tongue (Sincerelyallee) Wow intense in metaphor and great similes. Poetic and has a solitary...
  November 4th, 2016 10:01
• 9 months ago gone (Jade Sarah Lousie) A lovely heartfelt sentimental poem to yor grandad. My paternal gdad died...
  November 4th, 2016 04:16
• Warning Too The Fire (The 2 A.M Writer) Wow appealing, engaging and interesting way to muse and poetic ode like....
  November 4th, 2016 04:11
• The Walls (Johnathan.clark..1078) Poignant and expresses the trapped hopeless feel very poetically. The...
  November 4th, 2016 04:08
• Late night smoke (WildMoonChild) Wow great rhyming here and muse blending soulful thoughts with positivity....
  November 4th, 2016 02:59
• bullet holes (SilentLaugh) Wow I like the way u uniquely crafted this poem. Phrased creatively and...
  November 4th, 2016 02:50
• Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Thanx soo much for comment. I tink we would be granted wings in heaven.
  November 4th, 2016 02:44
• N U R S E S ~ AWESOME (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes it\'s a great and heartwarming informative tribute to nurses like...
  November 3rd, 2016 09:46
• Spring (Christina8) Wow awesome!!! The metaphor and rhyme word choice fabulous and makes this...
  November 3rd, 2016 07:44
• Spring (Christina8) Wow awesome!!! The metaphor and rhyme word choice fabulous and makes this...
  November 3rd, 2016 07:44
• You know (Nicolerobinson) Woah sublime and seems to be emotive. The mention of diamonds and rubies...
  November 3rd, 2016 04:21
• My Brother From Another Mother (Mina94) Aww so sorry for your step brother, how did he die? But your poem is...
  November 3rd, 2016 03:11
• SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Thanx soo much for the review.
  November 3rd, 2016 02:57
• Like A Skunk (Tony36) Woah but u r lucky to see a skunk live, I\'m an animal lover u see but...
  November 3rd, 2016 02:56
• Word Of God Speak (Tony36) An inspiring invocation poem . Beautifully said. Great to read from u...
  November 3rd, 2016 02:53
• My Glue (Nic) Lyrical and poetically quirky. So many want their stereotype spouse the...
  November 3rd, 2016 02:51
• Trucks (LIGHT WARRIOR) Woah a great expressive poem muse here showing independence and some lines...
  November 2nd, 2016 03:37
• Sudden (Sonicpoet) Is this about a hubby..? Saddening dirge like touching poem. Great rhyming...
  November 2nd, 2016 03:31
• Moments Created. (Kevin browne) Great muse with a moral and I like the mention of God. The metaphor...
  November 2nd, 2016 01:34
• Hope (Littlegoat23) Wow mixed feelings in great muse, as we all attempt to combine positivity...
  November 2nd, 2016 01:28
• Compressed, Compacted (Paddy68) I say this is a splendid impressive rhyme scheme and the wording...
  November 1st, 2016 02:05
• The Battle of Mind and Love (Scorchedwings) Great rhyming here and lots of muse to appreciate. I like many lines in...
  November 1st, 2016 02:00
• Nature is Always at Peace (BSmooth) Wow a great poetic lesson from animals in awesome rhyme! I say we are mega...
  November 1st, 2016 01:50
• Sacrifice (Ternic73) A patriotic poem appreciating soldiers who fight for the country. Super...
  October 31st, 2016 02:37
• Evenings on Earth (Elchupacabra) Wow a splendid poem and I like your poetic word choice and terms which...
  October 31st, 2016 02:33
• The Flaws Of Education (Liam Lawless) Many times have I resented schooling pressures and this poem highlights...
  October 31st, 2016 02:30
• It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back (Doll in Wonderland) Wow this is unique n mysterious which enhances its appeal.yor phrasing is...
  October 30th, 2016 23:55
• My other side (My Dark Nature) Gory and dark and emotive. Kudos for the effective style n struggle...
  October 30th, 2016 15:44
• Fourteen Years (Augustus) Wow a lovely sentimental poem to the wife, I love reading marrieds poem as...
  October 30th, 2016 11:59
• Suicide is NOT the Solution (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Thanx soo much. Those who hope in God are good folks usually. Cheers.
  October 30th, 2016 11:34
• Suicide is NOT the Solution (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Thanx soo much poet.
  October 30th, 2016 08:44
• Not Your Lover (LynnBlackwell) Emotive and raw. U write in an attractive sexy way. Nice to read from u...
  October 30th, 2016 08:18
• Fear of myself (Magno1988) \'Take a walk in a barren wilderness\', wow very poetically said in a fine...
  October 30th, 2016 08:14
• Until tonight my love (Willyweed) Woahhh great thrilling haloweenish love poem. Yor rhyming and flow are...
  October 30th, 2016 01:22
• I Don\'t Regret Us (Taylerdk21) A positive poem with mixed feelings portrayed swell. Yes not to regret the...
  October 30th, 2016 01:19
• A Writer (Christina K) I can relate to this coz my teacher was a very biased lady so I just...
  October 30th, 2016 01:15
• Light Switch (Shewalksinstarlight) Wow I like the light turning on refrain in this extraordinary deep emotive...
  October 30th, 2016 01:04
• Her Essence Lies in Lies (Writemeasmile) Yes she is in God\'s creation. Read your poems, written so poetically....
  October 30th, 2016 00:59
• Little Boy (Denise ducey kloeppel) I too have a youngest baby boy so I could relate to this doting...
  October 26th, 2016 15:12
• Calla Lily (Christina8) Wow, humble honeybee , loved the mention in this gorgeous poem in enviable...
  October 26th, 2016 03:41
• FOOD OF THE MONTH (BRIAN & ANGELA) Red hot curry wow that\'s my cup of tea, noh, curry I guess, though I love...
  October 26th, 2016 03:36