Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

• Learning To Unlearn (Garth Rakumakoe) A fine rhyme scheme and fab word choice wow. Kudos for the poem. Plz...
  September 8th, 2022 13:26
• On Being Too Gentle (Neville) A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves...
  September 8th, 2022 13:24
• raison d\'être (Ok Waleed) A fine poem of promising to be better and for your sake and all. The...
  September 8th, 2022 13:21
• harvest (Arqios) Wow fab muse expressed in awesome rhyme scheme . Love the word chice, all...
  June 25th, 2022 05:50
• Dead Roses (Baker) Yayy prolonging the life of wilting roses may be better than plucking...
  June 25th, 2022 05:46
• Do love...! (IAli) A great message in fine poem, well said in brevity. Thumbs up. Plz...
  June 24th, 2022 03:36
• What Makes A Man A Dad ? (Jeannie) Wow yes im happy to say that my dad is all that and more and this is a...
  June 24th, 2022 03:33
• Grumblings of a young old man! (Saxon Crow) Woah fantastic unique poem as most wish for youth, while you seem so tired...
  June 23rd, 2022 11:33
• History it is Not (Part two) (Doggerel Dave) Yeah war, war around but this poem turned out super and great! Kudos for...
  June 23rd, 2022 08:59
• Depressed again (Ok Waleed) A great poem with imagery relating in metaphor to your thoughts, emotions...
  June 23rd, 2022 08:54
• flowers (NafisaSB) Yeah its good and refreshing to have fresh flowers and this poem is lovely...
  June 23rd, 2022 07:37
• Mystic Night (Raven333) A beautiful stellar poem on the mystic nature of night with the heavenly...
  June 22nd, 2022 14:37
• Bullied (Sadkw33n) Kids indeed can be cruel and bullies are the worst of the lot. Your...
  June 22nd, 2022 14:08
• Broken Promise (JudyStella) Wow its a fantastic story poem mod ballad like, sad ending, narrated in...
  June 22nd, 2022 13:58
• God Gives Me Focus, God Gives Me Peace (Annonymouswonder) A lovely poem superbly expressed in faith and appreciation of divine...
  June 22nd, 2022 13:51
• Monkey around (Kitty the naughty poet) Ooh an apt poem for valentines day, saucy sassy romantic monkeying fun....
  February 14th, 2022 06:11
• Poem, A Thought. (AwHec8) A thoughtprovoking poem great to encourage improvement and evolution of...
  February 14th, 2022 06:06
• Need I? (Garth Rakumakoe) An interesting poem well written and i liked the first stanza and your...
  February 14th, 2022 06:00
• Parasol (Rocky Lagou) Wow an artistic creative poem, appealing and i liked the fine structure. ...
  February 14th, 2022 05:55
• My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed (Dove) Wow a soulful superb vilanelle for the broken hearted, such appealing...
  February 14th, 2022 05:53
• Love: Connate (L. B. Mek) A lovely poem of love and love for all, a token of compassion and loving...
  February 14th, 2022 05:49
• A Garden Of Joy (Rozina) A wild garden tamed and growing old together, yes gardens are best life...
  February 14th, 2022 05:39
• The hundredth (Spilleronsheet) Yay a lovely great tribute to all the poets here, you wrote a fine...
  February 14th, 2022 05:31
• Chocolate Day !!! (Vamsi Sudha) Yeahh valentines is chocolates day indeed and this apt topical treat is...
  February 14th, 2022 05:27
• Love To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Wow a lovely timely sentimental offering to your spouse, she\'s with...
  February 14th, 2022 05:23
• Yankee Jack (Neville) Woah a super fab poem on a fine soldiery statue, it made the statue...
  February 14th, 2022 05:20
• Cupid\'s arrow (Crowns4Christ) Wow a lovely beautiful sentimental poem to your hubby, you ought to frame...
  February 14th, 2022 05:16
• Straight from the soul, it\'s all I know (Poetic Dan) You\'ve conveyed the stress and angst feel well and swell in a great poem...
  February 14th, 2022 05:14
• You know Val? (Orchidee) Seems to be puppy love sort of, doggie being naughty cute when you writing...
  February 14th, 2022 05:11
• Wrinkles and Cracks Saved a Beautiful Face (Samer Amin) Wow a brilliant poem on the fissures, cracks and volcanic geo of the...
  February 14th, 2022 05:07
• Farmers Market (Jerry Reynolds) Lovely cool story of a little romance eh apt for valentine\'s season....
  February 14th, 2022 05:04
• Your Name... (Maira) What a lovely poem and our names yes remain in good books or in notoriety....
  October 15th, 2021 04:56
• Departure on my terms 🖤 .... (Aleem Nasir) A nice lovely poem wow. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem...
  October 14th, 2021 02:27
• The House On Haunted Hill (Floreann) A fantastic poem on a ghastly haunted house, i have a similar poem fo...
  October 13th, 2021 22:48
• Misunderstood (James Michael) Its great of you to highlight and feel for the homeless, hopefully it...
  October 13th, 2021 22:36
• Bargaining (Fay Slimm.) Wow an awesome poem on bay and shore scenes pictured eloquently....
  October 13th, 2021 14:58
• Multifunctional human (DrSafaAamir786) Must be about the poor women as middle class women don\'t have to sleep on...
  October 13th, 2021 11:18
• Ya Rab (IAli) Wow urdu is my mother tongue so i can read a zabardast invocation...
  October 13th, 2021 09:36
• Falling Asleep! (Lauretta13) Aw what a teary poem written in angst, relatable to many but its good you...
  October 13th, 2021 01:55
• Primrose (Annonymouswonder) Wow i liked the terms and word choice in this beautiful poem wow....
  October 13th, 2021 00:05
• Love Into Lost (Moonwriting) Wow a great sublime comparison of the earlier beginning hot passionate...
  October 12th, 2021 23:59
• In The Still of The Night (Ron parrish aka wordman) Wowww one of your best romantic sensational charming poems, sentimental...
  October 12th, 2021 23:48
• mix (Myself and me) Wow yeah true and this is a fine allegorical muse hinting to sth elss...
  October 12th, 2021 23:46
• War kills children (Rrodriguez) Well said and depicted in a great poem in brevity wow! War is so sad!...
  October 12th, 2021 23:44
• MIND GAMES (Andy Hunter) You expressed in an awesome relatable way, the chains of difficult love...
  October 12th, 2021 23:43
• Clock Change – Tonight!! (Doggerel Dave) Woww admiring your word play and pun on the seasons, i like to fo that in...
  October 12th, 2021 23:32
• Wasted (Rebmasters) A wry poem, you expressed in an awesomely creative and eloquent way...
  July 22nd, 2021 12:56
• Mine reddened pharynx constriction sorely limits ability to yell (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Wow clever, fantastic how you rhymed in each line. The Abel line yayy....
  July 22nd, 2021 12:53
• The Essence of You (Neville) Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for...
  July 22nd, 2021 12:51
• Tell Me (Saxon Crow) Wow admirable use of weather imagery to ask in appealing words so...
  July 22nd, 2021 12:46
• Purpose to express and reason to share (Poetic Dan) Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be...
  July 22nd, 2021 12:32
• The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove) Aw yayy same with me, i love flowers so much and find them so enchanting...
  July 22nd, 2021 11:39
• Song, Heartache, Heartbreak. (AwHec8) Wow a lovely lyrical poem with fab song like refrains. A stellar soulful...
  July 22nd, 2021 11:37
• Night Club Time. (Goldfinch60) Gahh do even oldies really go to night clubs? Or this is just your...
  July 22nd, 2021 11:30
• Line Dancing (Jerry Reynolds) Woah wow this is sensational and sublime sassy muse. Kudos! Plz do read...
  July 22nd, 2021 11:27
• Get on Your Feet Son of Bitch! (Samer Amin) A strong poem, motivating in a firm push . Indeed the creator loves us....
  July 22nd, 2021 11:25
• A Little Leaven (Orchidee) Wow a parable like, a beautiful spiritual poem all in all. Reminds me of...
  July 22nd, 2021 11:22
• Now (IAli) Super uplifting words that can motivate you and others. Thumbs up!. Plz...
  June 22nd, 2021 00:33
• True Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) A lovely appealing poem in which you express superbly. Hope it pays off...
  June 22nd, 2021 00:31
• Rain (Myself and me) Wow a soulful poetic way to draw conclusions metaphorically. Rain , wind...
  May 9th, 2021 02:50
• Best Mans\' Speech (Andy Hunter) I did already write a comment on this fantastic amusing poem advices to...
  May 8th, 2021 09:33
• Scared Eyes (Dasim) A creatively artistically expressed unique poem on love. Fickle young...
  May 8th, 2021 03:23
• Verum est Fatum (Quemis) Wow a classic style superb poem that i admired today. The automaton stanza...
  May 8th, 2021 03:21
• Dark (E.J. Waling) The pharoic satanic worldly powers this seems to be depicting in a dark...
  May 8th, 2021 03:18
• IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT (Jarcher54) Aw this is a touching poem written in adoring your naughty fun friend who...
  May 8th, 2021 03:15
• Ether (Rebmasters) Woah this poem seems to depict a very cold callous person whom you...
  May 7th, 2021 09:23
• I Heard Mama Sing Again (Rrodriguez) Aw such a great rare loving son you are snd this is such a touching lovely...
  May 7th, 2021 03:07
• Three Flowers for Mary (Gary Edward Geraci) A lovely poem on Mary . You described in a very superb way....
  May 7th, 2021 02:59
• Chasing my Breath (Sylviasearcher) Wow stellar and wry musing, sharp and strong! Expressed in awesome rhyming...
  May 7th, 2021 02:56
• Couplets (Trenz Pruca) A sublime intrigue in brevity wow. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my...
  May 7th, 2021 02:52
• Lady Sif (Bragee) Wow what a sensational romantic appreciation and adoration of a woman your...
  May 7th, 2021 02:51
• Without You (its a moving on thing kindof) (A) A fab superb poem and i like how it is paradoxical in expressing that you...
  May 7th, 2021 02:46
• Guarana Mo! (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Woah an extraordinary poem with words and terms that sound rare or...
  May 7th, 2021 02:43
• Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 3 (Nafis Light) Fab poetic questions, work and sleep . Slerp might not be enough for many...
  May 7th, 2021 02:40
• Shadow (Jabberwocky) I like the prickly nature imagery that you use to convey and express your...
  May 7th, 2021 02:30
• Life (Ragz) Aw wow a lyrical rapping songlike poem in which you express in a super way...
  May 7th, 2021 02:21
• The Darkness (Goddess of the Mist) Woww awesome rhyme scheme, i was admiring how words and sentences melded...
  May 6th, 2021 14:52
• Ramblings of who I am (Poetic Dan) A fine poem and i was esp admiring the wagging stanza, well said.! And yes...
  May 6th, 2021 14:48
• I Set Everyone Free (Mizgeen Berzinari) A soulful wry poem well expressed in a fine superb way. Kerp up the hope...
  May 6th, 2021 14:43
• Just for laughs (Rosiedm) Woah oh gah so thats how old peoples homes are?? Do they have...
  May 6th, 2021 14:41
• The Joys of Apartment Living. (Doggerel Dave) Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s...
  May 6th, 2021 14:35
• All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54) Ahan you too write light anx playful songs that can be enjoyed both as...
  February 17th, 2021 06:09
• The Puppet Master (Wi11ow) The devil lures many astray this way, making them tap dance to his evil...
  February 16th, 2021 09:07
• To The Readers - 2 (Nafis Light) Yeah i want to survive for poetry and other life\'s blessings. This is a...
  February 16th, 2021 09:02
• There is nothing to declare (Thewayiwrite) Wow you chronicled life from childhood to aged, its all very poetically...
  February 16th, 2021 08:58
• I Regret Nothing (Mizgeen Berzinari) Wow a beautiful appealing poem appreciating the love. Expressed in...
  February 16th, 2021 08:54
• Spring Memory (Jerry Reynolds) Oooh saucy and sensational, i thought only indian men found women soaked...
  February 16th, 2021 07:22
• That Handbag. (Goldfinch60) Aw this is such a touching sentimental poem that you ought to enframe, its...
  February 15th, 2021 14:46
• Able to be thankful (RDS) A fantastic poem so apt and awesome for these times, you expressed the...
  February 15th, 2021 14:34
• Solitude (FredPeyer) Woww awesome idea!! Solitude sounds far more poetic, independent and great...
  February 15th, 2021 14:31
• Free Will (Samer Amin) Wow awesome philosophical as well as intellectual muse and...
  February 15th, 2021 14:23
• Magic Fish (E.J. Waling) Magic fish in the stream of consciousness, wow word play and fascinating...
  February 15th, 2021 14:19
• So I stayed silent (trigger warning: mentions of rape) (MelissaJA) I have read many such true news stories international news stories and you...
  February 15th, 2021 12:47
• Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54) I was born there so i find it more concerning and interesting. You wrote a...
  February 15th, 2021 12:41
• Have a way to congratulate... (Aleem Nasir) A great lovely poem, you have talent so do write more. Kudos. Plz do...
  February 15th, 2021 12:37
• Silent Prayer (MrNobody40) Awesome wording and rhythm in this muse in brevity, so poetic to get lost...
  February 15th, 2021 12:35
• Avalanche of Emotions (Dove) Wow what an engagingly sensational poem, of a beautiful woman not loved as...
  February 15th, 2021 12:30
• valentine (Ron parrish aka wordman) And that could be you, since you are the king of romance. A super lovely...
  February 15th, 2021 12:24
• Groundhog day (Heatherbee) Wow yeah this is a superb poem on the routine and replay of life, its...
  February 15th, 2021 12:21
• of the parting (Dusk arising) Oooh your poetry is far more enjoyable and awesome than your comments to...
  February 15th, 2021 12:16