Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
- Ether (Rebmasters)
Woah this poem seems to depict a very cold callous person whom you...
May 7th, 2021 09:23 - I Heard Mama Sing Again (Rrodriguez)
Aw such a great rare loving son you are snd this is such a touching lovely...
May 7th, 2021 03:07 - Three Flowers for Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
A lovely poem on Mary . You described in a very superb way....
May 7th, 2021 02:59 - Chasing my Breath (Sylviasearcher)
Wow stellar and wry musing, sharp and strong! Expressed in awesome rhyming...
May 7th, 2021 02:56 - Couplets (Trenz Pruca)
A sublime intrigue in brevity wow. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my...
May 7th, 2021 02:52 - Lady Sif (Bragee)
Wow what a sensational romantic appreciation and adoration of a woman your...
May 7th, 2021 02:51 - Without You (its a moving on thing kindof) (A)
A fab superb poem and i like how it is paradoxical in expressing that you...
May 7th, 2021 02:46 - Guarana Mo! (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Woah an extraordinary poem with words and terms that sound rare or...
May 7th, 2021 02:43 - Life...Seems Like It Is Limited – 3 (Nafis Light)
Fab poetic questions, work and sleep . Slerp might not be enough for many...
May 7th, 2021 02:40 - Shadow (Jabberwocky)
I like the prickly nature imagery that you use to convey and express your...
May 7th, 2021 02:30 - Life (Ragz)
Aw wow a lyrical rapping songlike poem in which you express in a super way...
May 7th, 2021 02:21 - The Darkness (Goddess of the Mist)
Woww awesome rhyme scheme, i was admiring how words and sentences melded...
May 6th, 2021 14:52 - Ramblings of who I am (Poetic Dan)
A fine poem and i was esp admiring the wagging stanza, well said.! And yes...
May 6th, 2021 14:48 - I Set Everyone Free (Mizgeen Berzinari)
A soulful wry poem well expressed in a fine superb way. Kerp up the hope...
May 6th, 2021 14:43 - Just for laughs (Rosiedm)
Woah oh gah so thats how old peoples homes are?? Do they have...
May 6th, 2021 14:41 - The Joys of Apartment Living. (Doggerel Dave)
Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s...
May 6th, 2021 14:35 - All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
Ahan you too write light anx playful songs that can be enjoyed both as...
February 17th, 2021 06:09 - The Puppet Master (Wi11ow)
The devil lures many astray this way, making them tap dance to his evil...
February 16th, 2021 09:07 - To The Readers - 2 (Nafis Light)
Yeah i want to survive for poetry and other life\'s blessings. This is a...
February 16th, 2021 09:02 - There is nothing to declare (Thewayiwrite)
Wow you chronicled life from childhood to aged, its all very poetically...
February 16th, 2021 08:58 - I Regret Nothing (Mizgeen Berzinari)
Wow a beautiful appealing poem appreciating the love. Expressed in...
February 16th, 2021 08:54 - Spring Memory (Jerry Reynolds)
Oooh saucy and sensational, i thought only indian men found women soaked...
February 16th, 2021 07:22 - That Handbag. (Goldfinch60)
Aw this is such a touching sentimental poem that you ought to enframe, its...
February 15th, 2021 14:46 - Able to be thankful (RDS)
A fantastic poem so apt and awesome for these times, you expressed the...
February 15th, 2021 14:34 - Solitude (FredPeyer)
Woww awesome idea!! Solitude sounds far more poetic, independent and great...
February 15th, 2021 14:31 - Free Will (Samer Amin)
Wow awesome philosophical as well as intellectual muse and...
February 15th, 2021 14:23 - Magic Fish (John Prophet)
Magic fish in the stream of consciousness, wow word play and fascinating...
February 15th, 2021 14:19 - So I stayed silent (trigger warning: mentions of rape) (MelissaJA)
I have read many such true news stories international news stories and you...
February 15th, 2021 12:47 - Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
I was born there so i find it more concerning and interesting. You wrote a...
February 15th, 2021 12:41 - Have a way to congratulate... (Aleem Nasir)
A great lovely poem, you have talent so do write more. Kudos.
Plz do...
February 15th, 2021 12:37 - Silent Prayer (MrNobody40)
Awesome wording and rhythm in this muse in brevity, so poetic to get lost...
February 15th, 2021 12:35 - Avalanche of Emotions (Dove)
Wow what an engagingly sensational poem, of a beautiful woman not loved as...
February 15th, 2021 12:30 - valentine (Ron parrish aka wordman)
And that could be you, since you are the king of romance. A super lovely...
February 15th, 2021 12:24 - Groundhog day (Heatherbee)
Wow yeah this is a superb poem on the routine and replay of life, its...
February 15th, 2021 12:21 - of the parting (Dusk arising)
Oooh your poetry is far more enjoyable and awesome than your comments to...
February 15th, 2021 12:16 - Poem, Who are You Really? (AwHec8)
You are so right, tough times or even happy times can reveal ans unveil...
February 15th, 2021 12:13 - Purpose Of Giving - Giving Series (3) (Orchidee)
A great superb poem which to me advises to give charity and to not be...
February 15th, 2021 11:56 - Questions (Trenz Pruca)
Great fair lament questions that some in society need to be asked, well...
February 15th, 2021 11:16 - Suchness (Fay Slimm.)
Such lovely beautiful words and muse presented so poetically. Forgiveness...
February 15th, 2021 11:07 - TWELVE PRESENTS FOR COVID CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN A DODECAHEDRON ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This year the gift of clear easy breaths feels the best gift, it makes me...
February 15th, 2021 11:04 - Hold Fast This Beauty (Robert Southwick Richmond)
Wow superb poem with fine vernacular terms and poetic vocab. I\'ve read...
December 22nd, 2020 09:03 - return to me, my love, again and again (Queer-with-a-pen)
Woah sublime and abstract! Fine seafaring terms in this interesting poem....
November 11th, 2020 11:24 - POEM FOR A WINTER\'S NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Exotic and awesome! Kudos!
November 11th, 2020 11:19 - Bloodstone (Goddess of the Mist)
Woah deep and sublime, it looks like real life issues dramatised awesomely...
November 11th, 2020 06:36 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
A fantastic exotic Halloween poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment...
November 11th, 2020 06:34 - ABC (TWENTY3)
Wow awesome alliteration in poem, fine lament and poetic complaint.
Plz...
November 11th, 2020 06:32 - Yellow Leaves (Dasim)
Woww an awesome poem, I was admiring the Autumn imagery, great in...
November 11th, 2020 01:40 - Joker44’s Side – Fighting Myself (Nafis Light)
Fine muse here and I like how you describe your feelings and thoughts in...
November 10th, 2020 11:29 - The King (FineB)
Sublime on chess and perhaps meant in subtle strong metaphor....
November 10th, 2020 05:05 - Slug Trap (Syd)
Woah sounds cruel if they do that to cats and slugs unless the slugs are...
November 10th, 2020 05:03 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
Wow this was a fantastic super interlude with the glories of solitude and...
November 9th, 2020 12:26 - Walk the line (Poetic Dan)
Great awesome muse, on love and life and how you muse on different things...
November 9th, 2020 12:21 - Breeze (John Prophet)
Woah very techy and mod apt for this digital age where everything is going...
November 9th, 2020 11:47 - Fantastical (Aa Harvey)
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed...
November 9th, 2020 11:35 - Back There (Fay Slimm.)
Wow you imagined on their behalf, how they the soldiers would miss home...
November 9th, 2020 11:21 - The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Wow awesome muse as you picture the imagery superbly and wonder about...
November 9th, 2020 11:12 - Gospel Glories - Isaiah Series (19) (Orchidee)
A very nice devotional religious write and I like how it inspires...
November 9th, 2020 10:11 - My Catacomb (PoeticBiscuit)
Wow you express in such creative metaphors and similes all so poetic and...
November 9th, 2020 10:06 - Song, It’s a 12 o’clock World (AwHec8)
Wow a fabulous lyrical poem and I was admiring the creative refrain words,...
November 9th, 2020 10:03 - SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Wow yeahh a lot of people need this these days, an uplifting positive...
November 9th, 2020 09:59 - Covered Moon (MrNobody40)
A sublime hazy muse very poetic yayy. Imaginative wow!
Pls do read my...
September 12th, 2020 14:03 - \\\\\\\" I will bother you trailing \\\\\\\" (Aleem Nasir)
A nice poem, monorhyme type , good! You express in a fine way. Thumbs...
September 12th, 2020 14:01 - autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A beautiful autumnal poem, fabulous poetic rhyming imagery and it has a...
September 11th, 2020 07:35 - As I Tell My Nieces And Nephews (ForeverJesus7)
I think you mean God , we should learn to remember God since childhood yes...
September 11th, 2020 07:32 - all work,no play (Crowns4Christ)
Play is vital. Society makes us work everyday almost while humans need...
September 11th, 2020 07:27 - Toddler (MelissaJA)
Wow a fantastic poem, guess they are all similar then because I have a...
September 11th, 2020 07:25 - Unearthing the Daisy (Sylviasearcher)
Wow you say it in awesome flow and rhyming and I admire the intertwining...
September 11th, 2020 07:23 - he’s safe. (Leaaa)
A cool lovely song like lyrical rap poem, rocking good. Super job...
September 11th, 2020 07:16 - Inevitability (Neville)
Hmm though I\'m not sure what you are talking about but it makes me think...
September 11th, 2020 02:41 - A “Villanelle” Touch the Light (Dove)
Woww what a stellar bright imaginative poem riding on stars so poetically...
September 11th, 2020 00:56 - Wanderer (Trenz Pruca)
Even the part you still have is superb muse, like a seafaring poem, you...
September 11th, 2020 00:54 - The glitch inside the mind (RiverJordan)
Wow a fab sublime muse and I like the poetic word choice you have employed...
September 11th, 2020 00:51 - FOR SUCH A TIME AS THIS ! ~ BRIAN ~ A KYRIELLE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow a sweet lovely charming poem showing and acknowledging love poem how...
September 11th, 2020 00:49 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
Wow said in awesome creatively crafted metaphor. Great in brevity. You...
September 11th, 2020 00:41 - One love (Bragee)
A great awesome poem showing the paradoxical nature of fellow humans, the...
September 11th, 2020 00:38 - Poem, VP Pence Hypocrite much? (AwHec8)
Wow a strong hardhitting slam type lament against the sociopolitical...
September 11th, 2020 00:34 - Full.. (Poetic Dan)
The freedom to explore, wow you penned down a wonderful muse here.! Poetry...
September 11th, 2020 00:27 - VINCENT PRICE - Grandmaster of Horror A Tribute (FineB)
Woah a fine fabulous tribute and elegy for a horror master, a horro film...
September 11th, 2020 00:22 - Between Worlds. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow your phrasing is creatively awesome and top notch!! I was admiring \'...
September 10th, 2020 14:55 - Still binge reading Bertrand Russell.. September 8th, 2020 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
My dad used to read Russell and you wrote him and his work a fine eloquent...
September 10th, 2020 14:36 - Awakened Side – Page 20 (Nafis Light)
A nice poem to love oneself and you give other muses. We shouldn\'t...
September 10th, 2020 14:25 - Who Do You Say? (Orchidee)
Although I have different beliefs about Jesus I liked the biblical history...
September 10th, 2020 14:23 - Imagine (Peto)
Wow wow wow what a charming imaginative romantic poem and I was admiring...
July 7th, 2020 09:58 - Just Thinking (PoeticBiscuit)
A superb poem on this fleeting life and time, I liked the clever...
July 7th, 2020 09:54 - Ennio Morricone. (Goldfinch60)
Wow a nice touching elegy and eulogy for your fav musician who passed away...
July 7th, 2020 06:09 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Woah wow yay clever!! We use onions everyday in cooking and a lot of...
July 7th, 2020 06:03 - Poem, Bittersweet (AwHec8)
Wow a nice lovely lyrical devotional song . It flows well and nicely with...
July 7th, 2020 05:59 - Fishing for Men (Gary Edward Geraci)
Wow fantastic how you craft and employ the fishing analogy and metaphor...
July 7th, 2020 05:55 - can (Jon Nakapalau)
Woah wow clever and witty!! How a lil thing can offset and upset big plans...
July 7th, 2020 05:49 - PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow a villanelle, yayy!! And I totally agree that man was more angelic...
July 7th, 2020 05:45 - At the Divide... (Gino)
Wow awesome analogy and similes crafted for fine poetic comparison. Great...
July 7th, 2020 04:20 - Tainted Utopia (Xeina)
A fantastic muse , ambitious and nicely adventurous thoughts. Altogether a...
July 7th, 2020 04:05 - Endless sea (Saxon Crow)
An awesome poem to God, I like to think of it meaning the immortal eternal...
July 7th, 2020 03:57 - FAVE BREED O CAT O DOG ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ ANY STYLE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow great cool poems. Is the fusion over or we can add still?
Ah but my...
July 2nd, 2020 07:22 - SCIENCE FACT OR SCIENCE FICTION ? ~ END OF HUMAN CIVILISATION ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi thanks for the invite. Great poems by the host! Science fiction adds a...
July 2nd, 2020 07:19 - Home Working (FineB)
A nice apt neat work from home poem, life has changed drastically by just...
May 8th, 2020 12:52 - Shelf (Jabberwocky)
Woah awesome bravo! A woman finished by all those alphas, none of them as...
May 8th, 2020 12:30 - Lunar Being (Sylviasearcher)
Wow awesome how you liken the dream state to a lunar phase ! A lovely...
May 8th, 2020 12:29 - Shelf (Jabberwocky)
Woah awesome bravo! A woman finished by all those alphas, none of them as...
May 8th, 2020 12:27 - Today (Myself and me)
Great poem with fine twist and wordplay ,true to life the here and now,...
May 8th, 2020 12:22
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