Comments on community poems by SabreLi
- Under My Pillow. (Kevin browne)
What an epic piece this is, brilliant flow and use of language! I love the...
November 29th, 2019 15:13 - Humane ship (Poetic Dan)
How peaceful a world it would be if there was only more humanity! Love the...
November 29th, 2019 12:42 - EVERLASTING UNION (Pldabbs)
Being myself one who writes of the darker side of life, it is very...
November 29th, 2019 12:36 - WHAT PET WOULD YOU REALLY LIKE ? ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Be they cats or dogs, bats or frogs,
A pet is a friend that\'s...
November 29th, 2019 12:29 - WHATS YOUR FAVE # FORM OF TRANSPORT ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
As for me, I prefer the journey swift
And therefore I\'d like a...
November 29th, 2019 12:18 - An Unused Side – Discarded Memories (Nafis Light)
I love the story you tell here, you take us on the journey with you and we...
November 29th, 2019 12:08 - COUPLETS (4) (Michael Edwards)
That certainly packed a punch! XD
November 29th, 2019 12:06 - You Are Not Your Thoughts (Asrealastheycome)
I like the vocabulary used here and the way you weave it together to send...
November 29th, 2019 12:03 - Final Breath (Salem_B911)
I\'m always intrigued by other people\'s ideas of what the last breath is...
November 29th, 2019 11:55 - ❤️ (Josh Dupree)
Potentially the beginnings of a good piece here, but I\'d like to see some...
November 29th, 2019 11:49 - BABIES & AMERICANS ON CYGNUS 3 ~ Part 4 ~ Science Faction (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This one never really ends, Brian, as it keeps us wondering about the...
December 22nd, 2016 16:19 - Taken (Aa Harvey)
Wow, vivid scenery here; I always enjoy reading dark and mysterious pieces...
December 22nd, 2016 16:16 - My Utopia !!!!! (P.H.Rose)
Thanks for this one, Norman, I love it! We are building a great community...
December 22nd, 2016 16:14 - How will you remember me (Daniel)
A great reminiscent piece Daniel, in the end we all lead colourful lives...
December 22nd, 2016 16:07 - Starfire (Aa Harvey)
I love the more abstract themes and this one struck a chord with me! Such...
December 22nd, 2016 16:02 - A Quiet Being (Izzi Lynn)
I like how this one takes us on a journey through your very existance; a...
December 22nd, 2016 15:58 - Sister (Tony36)
A brilliant piece here, Tony. I have sisters myself and the world would be...
December 22nd, 2016 15:55 - Second Chance (KittyCatPWY)
I\'m so sorry for your loss. Your pain has birthed a work of beauty, but I...
December 22nd, 2016 15:52 - Psycho Babble (Notapoet)
Brilliant piece, one that I can relate to immensely - I wrote one a few...
December 22nd, 2016 15:48 - Cœur brisé (Aals)
It\'s amazing how much pain jumps out in these words, but how, despite...
December 22nd, 2016 15:44 - Stumbled upon her (Biraj)
Such beauty in these words; could be interpreted in many ways, but...
December 22nd, 2016 15:41 - Stay (WildMoonChild)
Great job here in describing the devastation caused by loss of a long term...
December 22nd, 2016 15:38 - To the Angel Kat and All (WriteBeLight)
It\'s beautiful to see such a heartfelt tribute to a very valued community...
December 22nd, 2016 15:33 - STOW ~ ON ~ THE ~ WOLD ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We often forsake the closest shores for want of more distant \'exotic\'...
December 22nd, 2016 15:30 - Rainbow in a hurricane (Aa Harvey)
I love this one :D Great piece, with the rhythm and flow it read as...
December 22nd, 2016 15:26 - At The End Of My Rope (Notapoet)
Such prominent verses that illustrate how we hold out for something,...
December 22nd, 2016 15:21 - A Story in The Winter... Part 1 (Elegant_Style)
Can\'t wait for part two! Love this imagery, and since I have a particular...
December 19th, 2016 08:59 - Time (SharonMoemise)
I love the more unusual themes, and time is something that has always...
December 19th, 2016 08:51 - My Dearest Love (Petec)
Such a beautiful piece overflowing with love! Great write xx
December 19th, 2016 05:42 - The Unsung Heroes of Christmas (Moontigerntn)
I love the message you\'re sending out here; we should all think of and...
December 19th, 2016 05:41 - Merry Christmas (Augustus)
Merry Christmas, A! I love what you\'ve managed to do here: it is very...
December 18th, 2016 12:56 - The lady in the trees (Daniel)
A great piece depicting the guardian angel (but which can be interpreted...
December 18th, 2016 08:18 - COLONIZATION OF PLANET CYGNUS 3 ~ PART 2 ~ SCIENCE FACTION (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love the theme of this piece Brian, you have outdone yoursef here! Such...
December 18th, 2016 08:13 - The who (Isituorme)
You are quite right to being attention to such a prominent issue, whether...
December 16th, 2016 09:18 - Part of the Heart of a Family (WriteBeLight)
Our pets are our family, too! It\'s great to see poetry dedicated to them;...
December 16th, 2016 06:32 - Pain In Place (Juan C.)
A poem is what you make of it - there are a variety of formats, and some...
December 16th, 2016 06:26 - Lena Horne (Seanachaidh)
I like how you have described certain references and terms in the...
December 16th, 2016 06:22 - Babes in arms (SharonMoemise)
Wonderful work, Sharon. A very real and emotional piece which highlights...
December 16th, 2016 06:18 - The fright (Isituorme)
Such a fabulous description of hell! I love it; the way you describe not...
December 15th, 2016 09:56 - When Penguins Fly (LIGHT WARRIOR)
All of the connotations that Nibiru conjures is a wonderful addition to...
December 15th, 2016 09:24 - The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule (WriteBeLight)
Love the nods to Ralph Waldo Emerson; and a great uplifting piece this is....
December 15th, 2016 09:19 - My Son (Daniel)
What a beautiful piece! Your immense pride as a father explodes through...
December 15th, 2016 09:15 - MY TREE FOR ALL SEASONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I always love a poem which takes me on a journey through the seasons; and...
December 15th, 2016 09:14 - Prescription For The Symptoms (WriteBeLight)
These days both patients and doctors are far too quick to buy or prescribe...
December 15th, 2016 09:11 - The sentimental phantom. (Kira)
By the time life is done with us we are all tortured phantoms; I love it!...
December 15th, 2016 09:09 - Me (K.T Williams)
I love how your vulnerability shines through - such a difficult thing to...
December 15th, 2016 09:06 - Little Comfort in the past (Voicesecho88)
Such an emotional read; brings truth and realism to such a sad topic....
December 15th, 2016 08:53 - Spies in Red Felt: Effen Elves (WriteBeLight)
I totally agree with this! Not a fan of elf on the shelf myself; such a...
December 15th, 2016 08:38 - Essential (Aa Harvey)
Such an amazingly powerful poem, as I myself tend not to write of love it...
December 15th, 2016 08:35 - A Shadow of Doubt (Notapoet)
Our own doubt can be our downfall, but to be aware of it can push us to...
December 15th, 2016 08:33 - I will always be me (SharonMoemise)
Nobody can mess with your identity, Sharon, for it shines brightly through...
December 15th, 2016 08:30 - The Garden (Stephanie Showers)
Contemplation is a good thing, but we must take care not to let it limit...
December 15th, 2016 08:29 - And Up To The Hand Of God. (Kevin browne)
I love this; written as poetry prose but the rhythm explodes through! Love...
December 15th, 2016 08:25 - Friendships (Faith_01)
Such a powerful message in this piece, everybody can relate if they are...
December 15th, 2016 06:32 - Never Play Poker With Yourself (Seeker)
I love this one! I am quite partial to a bit of Texas Hold\'em myself, but...
December 15th, 2016 06:17 - Are you an Optimist, Pessimist or a Realist? (Elegant_Style)
I am definitely a realist given what you describe, I love the idea behind...
December 15th, 2016 06:13 - Erase me (Alive_again)
I like the reference to blueprints, but we should all remember that...
December 15th, 2016 06:11 - As I Lay (SharonMoemise)
Sorry it has taken me so long to get ariund to this one Sharon, but it was...
December 11th, 2016 09:04 - Read me. (Voicesecho88)
What a thoughtful piece, thank you for sharing your true self with us :D
December 11th, 2016 08:55 - Grave Cite (WriteBeLight)
Wow, I love this piece! I am constantly writing about death in some form...
December 11th, 2016 08:27 - Jennifer (Goseejo)
What a precious ode to your daughter - if she read it I\'m sure it would...
December 11th, 2016 08:18 - Pushing Forward (Littlegoat23)
Such a poignant piece - despite what we all have to be grateful for (full...
December 11th, 2016 08:11 - Winter (Daniel)
Your description of the changing seasons is worded very well, and I...
December 11th, 2016 08:06 - Endless Grains (Kyran)
I love how you so aptly describe the hourglass and relate it to time,...
December 11th, 2016 08:04 - Who Just Passed Me By. (Kevin browne)
This could be interpreted in many ways, great duality. Personally my...
December 11th, 2016 07:58 - Getting old (P.H.Rose)
I like the realism in this one; many will relate because age is not the...
December 11th, 2016 07:55 - Burning (LIGHT WARRIOR)
This is a great piece - despite it\'s atypical format (such is poetry :P)...
December 4th, 2016 17:14 - Running away from Fire (Elegant_Style)
Wow, personally I think this is your best yet - certainly the one I love...
December 4th, 2016 16:58 - Acceptance (Daniel)
I love this one Daniel, one of my favourite\'s of yours. Very pertinent in...
December 4th, 2016 14:39 - I Walk Alone (Berdnt_victoria)
What a great poem, even if the subject is sad. We must all learn to walk...
December 4th, 2016 14:36 - An empty soul (Aa Harvey)
I love this amazing piece, one of my favourites for sure! I am a fan of...
December 4th, 2016 14:25 - No (SharonMoemise)
I was so sad to read this, Sharon, but I think that poetry is at its best...
December 4th, 2016 14:18 - Prisoner (SharonMoemise)
I love this one Sharon! As usual your work really inspires. Like you, most...
December 4th, 2016 14:11 - Salute the sweet tooth? (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Nice work! This one reminded me of Brian\'s Life Of Pie in some ways but I...
December 4th, 2016 14:04 - Release (Elegant_Style)
I really like this piece - I think it\'s great how the varying lengths of...
December 1st, 2016 15:12 - The abyss (Daniel)
I love this piece - as I love most things dark - but you really paint a...
November 30th, 2016 18:29 - Untitled-(Villanelle) (Azura Nightsong)
I really enjoyed reading this, and it tells a message which remains still...
November 30th, 2016 18:08 - E N C O U R A G E M E N T ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We definately need more encouragement in the world today, and we all need...
November 30th, 2016 17:48 - THE LIFE OF P I E ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I always love reading the comments your write as much as the poems...
November 30th, 2016 17:40 - Feeling you (SharonMoemise)
You are evidently a versatile and talented writer - an artist, in fact, by...
November 30th, 2016 17:35 - Broken (SharonMoemise)
I always seem to gravitate more towards works created from the pain of...
November 30th, 2016 17:32 - Your words (Stephanie Showers)
Such truth in these words - I completely agree! Whomever said \'sticks and...
November 30th, 2016 17:21 - Condescension (SilverXball)
I am also going through some issues with my brother at the minute so I can...
November 30th, 2016 15:52 - A GRAIN OF SAND (Michael Edwards)
Wow. I interpret this poem to be a story of a boy, radicalised, and...
November 30th, 2016 15:50 - The stars (Daniel)
It\'s short length serves to emphasise the meaning behind the words. Such...
November 30th, 2016 15:41 - Angels and Bagpipes (Francesco)
Such colourful language could have made this a challenging poem if you...
November 30th, 2016 15:31 - Robotic (Aa Harvey)
I love this one; a real unique masterpiece (again) and such an interesting...
November 30th, 2016 15:26 - Alone (Christina K)
This is truly potent; what an amazing way to portray how our own...
November 30th, 2016 15:05 - Easy (SheWasTheSun)
Such true words; people are always taking the so-called \'easy\' route,...
November 30th, 2016 14:58 - Perpetual Motion (Yorke)
I love this one; very well written. Such a pertinent subject as well, and...
November 30th, 2016 14:56 - Walking Through The Woods (Tony36)
A beautiful piece, yet such sadness within. Thank you for posting x
November 29th, 2016 15:37 - Dark Lullabye For Two ft Josh Hosey (Rosethebrokenhearted)
I have really enjoyed reading your work, and just had to comment on this...
November 27th, 2016 18:26 - My Simple Thank You (Rosethebrokenhearted)
I can relate to this piece so much - it is amazing to see your idols in...
November 27th, 2016 18:25 - Jack and Jill : Enter the Matrix (Aa Harvey)
I really love this piece, very well written :) Such realism described...
November 27th, 2016 18:20 - The End (Simple-Man87)
Wow, what a thought provoking piece which proudly dares to venture into...
November 27th, 2016 18:11 - Eye in the sky (SharonMoemise)
This is an amazing piece, excellently written and so full of truth and...
November 27th, 2016 18:01 - Her (Kidwxnder)
Thank you for your writing - I can see that Chris Brown is an inspiration...
November 27th, 2016 17:31 - The Goddess (Rosethebrokenhearted)
We should all embrace our imperfections, since nobody is perfect, but this...
November 25th, 2016 14:35 - A Rose 🌹 (MisKylie)
I think this is a wonderful piece of art! I can get a sense of your...
November 24th, 2016 16:45 - Empty (Ternic73)
Everybody deserves respect and encouragement, and you have both from me! I...
November 24th, 2016 16:41
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