Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• What We Were (Fay Slimm.) Just as it should remain. The touching sensitivity of this piece reaches...
  August 11th, 2022 09:40
• Fools Gold (Saxon Crow) The hidden reward of a broken heart is that it mends. Bringing wisdom to a...
  August 5th, 2022 12:03
• Moonlight face-timing (Jue Ju) (L. B. Mek) \'maz ing - jen re - new to me clev er - word play - po et ry new rules...
  August 5th, 2022 05:33
• The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60) LOL Such a familiar thought. I\'d often end up writing something...
  August 5th, 2022 01:36
• Songbird (Sorenbarrett) A solemn message for us all. \"Who are we to interfere with the beauty of...
  August 5th, 2022 01:07
• The Journey (RL Randall) Nice play with words though i think building a shelter of wisdom may take...
  July 29th, 2022 07:42
• One Patch (Fay Slimm.) OK so theres a tear in the seat of my trousers with me blue undies showing...
  July 29th, 2022 05:26
• The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville) Such emlightened times we live in. Or did we always until some man made...
  July 29th, 2022 05:21
• Laughter And Sleep. (Goldfinch60) Absolutely agree with you here. Above all, be gentle with yourself.
  July 29th, 2022 02:47
• Unrequited (Tallisman) For me, a poet\'s personal sensitivites showing through in the poetry they...
  July 29th, 2022 02:44
• The boxer (Sorenbarrett) Those are the sort of things which keep me out of any butchers shop on the...
  July 29th, 2022 02:33
• LOST LOVE (Raven333) Love is like that, just like that. And now, older and wiser you have time...
  July 28th, 2022 13:11
• Concert (Jerry Reynolds) Summer atmosphere comes through.
  July 28th, 2022 13:08
• Somewhere (Fay Slimm.) One of the rewards of gaining a good few years is just how much sense the...
  July 28th, 2022 03:38
• Behind That Navajo Smile (Neville) Ah, the great dispossessed of the country that would have us believe it...
  July 28th, 2022 03:30
• There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60) Something very \'Fishy\' about the weather that night Andy. There was a...
  July 28th, 2022 03:14
• SLENDERMAN the TALLMAN the BOOGEYMAN (Raven333) Delightfully spooky tales of Ravenesque. This one definitely not for my...
  July 28th, 2022 00:10
• It\'s a gas (Sorenbarrett) A pleasure to be led astray by you in this way.
  July 28th, 2022 00:06
• Fishing (Jerry Reynolds) Mouth watering verse.
  July 27th, 2022 10:54
• Season of Dreams (Thinkerbell) Lovgingly constructed piece but OUCH!! who throws stones at...
  July 27th, 2022 08:42
• So Much (Fay Slimm.) The garden before you, or the one in your mind\'s eye must be a sight to...
  July 27th, 2022 07:02
• Seasons Change (Saxon Crow) Blame those pesky starlings in their mumurations. Ever wonder what...
  July 27th, 2022 03:48
• Of Time, That Is .. (Neville) Ah yes. It is in the \'doing\' not the \'saying\' as you clearly point out...
  July 27th, 2022 03:42
• Strange Dream. (Goldfinch60) Ah well, now you have uncovered my secret talent... I am able to read from...
  July 27th, 2022 03:38
• Searching for a question…(Acrostic) (Tallisman) Our hearts do not die emotionally i believe, but having soaked up a lot of...
  July 26th, 2022 17:22
• Summer Clouds (Jerry Reynolds) I can picture this scene beautifully and with envy.
  July 26th, 2022 10:38
• Amaizing! (Saxon Crow) Beautiful tribute to the arable crops of our foodbasket growing heavenward...
  July 26th, 2022 08:30
• Happenings (Fay Slimm.) For me you brought to mind the magic of mother nature who has a use for...
  July 26th, 2022 04:34
• Incidentally I Assure You (Neville) An air of being discarded by someone with whom one\'s heart wishes there...
  July 26th, 2022 02:49
• The Concert Ends Tanka. (Goldfinch60) I wonder how many are aware of the hard work, commitment and organising...
  July 26th, 2022 01:19
• Peaceless (Sorenbarrett) Fine description of how something can completely unbalance us so that we...
  July 25th, 2022 23:51
• LESSONS IN LIFE (Raven333) I dunno Raven. I know ppl who are on one level and never break and i know...
  July 25th, 2022 12:35
• Summer Birds (Jerry Reynolds) Much as does the female of our species before the convenience of a...
  July 25th, 2022 12:32
• The Redundant Fist (Neville) Ah yes, here you amplify the benefits of having social issues brought into...
  July 25th, 2022 12:30
• Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.) And the wild predatory majesty is just what we see when fortunate enough...
  July 25th, 2022 12:14
• Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60) Wonder, wonder, wonderful. We made it through the years of toil. It kind...
  July 25th, 2022 12:10
• This Day. (Fay Slimm.) beautiful
  July 18th, 2022 08:57
• The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Lets hope that boat is a vessel of fine lines with a true wind in her...
  June 27th, 2022 01:38
• MIRANDA (Raven333) Well I don\'t think i have ever seen a better expression of love for a...
  June 27th, 2022 01:10
• The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann (Saxon Crow) Well now there\'s a tale of mirth will there be a follow on, celebrating...
  June 27th, 2022 00:30
• Balancing (Spilleronsheet) To bite one\'s tongue or not? A waiting game maybe the wisest play. A...
  June 26th, 2022 23:30
• Foundation of a Question for the President I (Eugene S.) Well i suppose you need to blame someone. But why choose the poor fkkr who...
  June 26th, 2022 17:05
• Acid Rain (AL17) Such a tender vehicle you have created to carry our message. Beautiful...
  June 26th, 2022 12:13
• The Door (Peppino) An enthralling and pleasing story to read. I guess once our perception...
  June 26th, 2022 12:04
• Grandma (Tantrum28) Ode to a person of love who gave love, was surrounded by love and received...
  June 26th, 2022 12:00
• Manifestation #1 (Saxon Crow) Playing... the preparation for life. Then we become life\'s plaything.
  June 26th, 2022 09:26
• What Rain? Tanka (Goldfinch60) Bloody weather people. Why dont THEY go on strike. We could take it in...
  June 26th, 2022 09:24
• Counting my assets (Morwenna) This reliable asset which affirms your faith and love in life itself and...
  June 25th, 2022 16:56
• Passion (Tallisman) Reading between the lines I guess he knows where the passion went and how...
  June 25th, 2022 15:05
• Ijajat Kyun le apse????????? (Sushree) não é uma merda quando você tem que traduzir de outro idioma porque...
  June 25th, 2022 08:39
• What right have they? (Butterfly_nerd) Confused. Youre blaming people for blaming people. WHO is blaming...
  June 25th, 2022 08:33
• Self-Introduction: Tom (Coldstorm) Read more poetry on here. Develop your style, be self critical. Look for...
  June 25th, 2022 08:25
• Seeing Clearly (Raven333) I was really drawn in to is piece. Nobodies circumstance will be the...
  June 25th, 2022 05:35
• Pigs Flying. (Goldfinch60) I really dont know what i would do with all that money some of these top...
  June 25th, 2022 05:28
• I Forgive You (Saxon Crow) The burden of unforgiving is too heavy to carry. It is a cloud around the...
  June 25th, 2022 05:24
• Wisdom of Children (Saxon Crow) It aint often I\'m moved to tears by MPS but your words today hit the spot...
  June 24th, 2022 10:49
• And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) Life becomes a new adventure when love pairs. Enjot those wonderful years...
  June 24th, 2022 10:41
• Personal Journey (Raven333) The phrase \"what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger\" although true...
  June 23rd, 2022 03:37
• I let some breath (Poetic Dan) Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing....
  June 23rd, 2022 03:33
• Climbing A Mountain. (Goldfinch60) \"Look - no crampons!\"
  June 23rd, 2022 03:27
• Grumblings of a young old man! (Saxon Crow) None of us had an easy ride after 47 sax. Someone said to me rather...
  June 23rd, 2022 03:26
• The starting (Spilleronsheet) Survival is indeed a prime motivator. Heroes are remembered by most once...
  June 23rd, 2022 03:21
• The Road Ahead. (Goldfinch60) \"it\'s a long long road with many a winding path that leads us to who...
  June 22nd, 2022 02:58
• Never Looking Up (Vaughn Walker) You\'re so right. Looking at their feet or dashing around, missing so...
  June 20th, 2022 10:58
• An ode to the magic within (Sophenia) \"With every ending there is also a new beginning\" could so easily be the...
  June 20th, 2022 10:54
• 1952 - C.J. Reflects (Jerry Reynolds) One thing about being born in 52 was that in 63, at the impressionable age...
  June 20th, 2022 10:39
• Chimes (Fay Slimm.) Oh that wind or breeze playing on a sympathetic instrument can cast it\'s...
  June 20th, 2022 06:06
• Bumps And Creaks. (Goldfinch60) LOL bumps and creaks sounds like my body getting out of bed in the...
  June 20th, 2022 03:38
• 1952 - Becoming A Man (Jerry Reynolds) I really enjoy the way you write sir. It is a pleasure to read and I would...
  June 19th, 2022 06:31
• Seven Wonders. (Goldfinch60) Well I guess I\'m the awkward one because the biggest \'wonder\' of them...
  June 19th, 2022 06:29
• Fathers Day. (Goldfinch60) Crafty like that aint they. but where did she learn?
  June 18th, 2022 06:44
• 1952 (Jerry Reynolds) I like it, cos you write it so well. and 1952 is my year.
  June 17th, 2022 07:55
• What Would You Do. (Paul Bell) Yep consequences indeed. I resolve not to poke my nose where it aint...
  June 17th, 2022 07:54
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) I recall seeing my first buzzard when they were still rare in early...
  June 17th, 2022 01:44
• The Encounter (Jerry Reynolds) Shame the dawg knows a stick can be a weapon.
  June 16th, 2022 09:24
• Co-Existence (Fay Slimm.) Shame that we have to wait until our autumn years to love the beauty all...
  June 16th, 2022 09:16
• Non Existent Troubles. (Goldfinch60) I took on board the words of Max Ehrmann... \"for always there will be...
  June 16th, 2022 08:47
• WHAT IS IT? (Michael Edwards) ROFL now that is a fun write. Unlike other birds, this one has...
  June 16th, 2022 08:38
• Our weather goddess (Morwenna) Reads like a joyous frame of mind to find oneself in.
  June 16th, 2022 08:15
• tears (Jon Nakapalau) Could easily be said \"Rise up\" for the same reasons. Our hearts rule...
  June 14th, 2022 14:56
• Why Fly The Stars and Bars (RL Randall) LOL all that is white and with armed teenagers talking about their rights...
  June 14th, 2022 14:53
• A rainy day in Scotland (Blueledge) So they took your umbrella.... now dance in the rain and dance well for...
  June 14th, 2022 13:43
• What is \'forever\' to a heart? (Arqios) Forever to my old battered heart was a path of learning. Coming to terms...
  June 14th, 2022 13:38
• Cape (Spilleronsheet) Looks? What a decietful disguise is this - our given birthright. I look...
  June 14th, 2022 13:33
• Val (Paul Bell) There\'s a great message in your words today. Something which really...
  June 14th, 2022 12:24
• Regeneration (Fay Slimm.) Excellent choice of picture to accompany your words. Yes, slowly read a...
  June 14th, 2022 05:41
• Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again! (Saxon Crow) Excellent Saxon. I\'d never have though of writing about how barren i feel...
  June 14th, 2022 05:33
• Every Storm. (Goldfinch60) I\'m sure that you have seen out some thoroughly good hidings from storms...
  June 14th, 2022 05:27
• Order (Draven) LOL made me laugh. Good one.
  June 11th, 2022 15:24
• Scaled (Fay Slimm.) \"Too true\" he shouted over a wall thick and high, long overgrown with...
  June 11th, 2022 06:20
• Why Do I write Poetry? (Goldfinch60) I think you have an admirable clarity of thought to be able to write each...
  June 11th, 2022 03:56
• My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville) Now theres a disturbing thought.
  June 11th, 2022 03:50
• Awayness (Fay Slimm.) As a youngster I was crazy about trains and spent a lot of time on railway...
  June 9th, 2022 09:26
• Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville) Well we live in hope.
  June 9th, 2022 05:37
• Four Together. (Goldfinch60) Yesterday your words spoke of love, honesty, truth and respect. Without...
  June 9th, 2022 05:36
• This tangled life (Morwenna) I love this. Especially for the important inclusion of weeds. Weeds teach...
  June 8th, 2022 07:05
• Over and Out (Neville) Your words speak to me of a man who knows and values himself sufficiently...
  June 8th, 2022 05:26
• Gone (Fay Slimm.) The rattling bones cry of pebbles neath retiring waves mock the death of...
  June 8th, 2022 05:17
• Importance In Life. (Goldfinch60) Though you may become prime minister without them. But looking at the...
  June 8th, 2022 05:12
• HER LAST RESTING PLACE (Michael Edwards) Upon a churchyard green My surname was seen upon a weathered old...
  June 8th, 2022 05:05