Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Second Gift. (Goldfinch60)
I can remember that feeling you lucky man. I bet you feel young and i hope...
March 3rd, 2022 04:41 - Inside the mind of Josie (FallenAngel1🕊)
Speaks to me of the escapism we all need. A place of comfort and...
March 2nd, 2022 13:31 - This Lady Gowns Justice (Rocky Lagou)
I agree with Neville that you have captured the essence of this...
March 2nd, 2022 10:54 - Another soul returns home (sad) (Poetic Dan)
Dan t.his is a truly wonderful piece, A touching tribute to a soul who...
March 2nd, 2022 06:27 - and it\'s 4 o\'clock somewhere behind my eyes (Tj Struska)
This reminded me of how i felt wondering how many days were left and what...
March 2nd, 2022 05:54 - A Scatter of Moments (Neville)
Ah yes, those opioid induced hospital bed dreams....... LOL .... It\'s...
March 2nd, 2022 05:31 - The Great War (Zhangyuyouyu)
That first verse made me go ouch! The largest conflict we know of World...
March 2nd, 2022 02:40 - Space And Time. (Goldfinch60)
Or maybe just purely through love, we can decorate space with seeing and...
March 2nd, 2022 02:32 - In their (Spilleronsheet)
That lady of liberty gifted by the nation of France to a victorious North...
March 2nd, 2022 02:18 - LIMERICK 89 (Michael Edwards)
One of the bestlimericks i have ever seen M.E. nice one and intomy fav\'s
March 1st, 2022 13:31 - Searching. (Goldfinch60)
My dad? staring back at me from the mirror.....LOL
Seriously i know...
March 1st, 2022 13:29 - Symbols Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
When i was in a group playing in clubs and functions with mixed age...
February 28th, 2022 03:23 - Sleep? (Rozina)
My CPAP machine has largely cured my insomnia. Prior to that i would read...
February 28th, 2022 03:17 - There Are No Snowmen in Mexico (Neville)
I have it on good authority from Pedro who is \'brake\' in the Yucatan 2nd...
February 28th, 2022 03:14 - Missing (Spilleronsheet)
My thoughts went to the picture we have seen in the terrible news from...
February 27th, 2022 14:38 - The Passing of Hermione (Neville)
I have known addicts in my years. The one\'s I knew were not terrible...
February 27th, 2022 09:35 - Hooked. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s so good to read of life\'s riches which have come to you. Really...
February 27th, 2022 09:27 - SHE WALKS ALONE (Michael Edwards)
An austere atmosphere in your haunting words today.... or am I being...
February 27th, 2022 09:17 - Inch by inch the moment you landed (Poetic Dan)
The love you get is equal to the love you give. You\'ve lots to give - tis...
February 26th, 2022 18:50 - Seasons of a life (Sorenbarrett)
This is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long, long time. I knew...
February 26th, 2022 11:01 - The Children Of Time (Paul Bell)
What comes to mind having read your piece is that we all play some sort of...
February 26th, 2022 10:49 - Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet (Dove)
The kiss between two who are in love is the true kiss of life. A thought...
February 26th, 2022 10:30 - Reef (Neville)
Those magical places of yesterday which our dreams romance to re-visit far...
February 26th, 2022 10:23 - LIMERICK 90 (Michael Edwards)
In the flat up above dont you know
Theyre aware of the peeing below
to...
February 26th, 2022 10:16 - One Of Two. (Goldfinch60)
To say i\'m envious is...... true dammit LOL.
Now then, be honest, does...
February 26th, 2022 09:54 - Her Very Own Senryu (Neville)
For the passage of years to bear witness to a proud statement of love and...
February 25th, 2022 10:56 - A Senryu Attempt (Rozina)
A great lesson contained in just those three lines \"from little acorns...
February 25th, 2022 10:41 - Starts Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Or (and thinking about a certain current warring \'leader\') somebody...
February 25th, 2022 10:39 - FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE) (Michael Edwards)
Great words ME. Brought to mind how wasted is all our poetry in a world...
February 25th, 2022 10:28 - A Heavy Load (Doggerel Dave)
Somehow I\'m reminded of the attention i got from some right cows in my...
February 24th, 2022 05:01 - Another South West Coastal Path Miracle (Neville)
And he knew then that he should push it over the edge of the cliff like...
February 24th, 2022 04:54 - Singing In Love. (Goldfinch60)
Love happens when it considers you both ripe to pluck and placed in a dish...
February 24th, 2022 04:49 - LIMERICK 88 (Michael Edwards)
They said i should worry about the dangers of gluten
or the poison...
February 24th, 2022 04:14 - Past, a moment to look upon (Spilleronsheet)
True that one\'s past will meld with one\'s character and produce the...
February 23rd, 2022 13:32 - Being Alive (Fay Slimm.)
Oh Fay yes yes yes..... So very true in my life. I feel every word of...
February 23rd, 2022 09:54 - Passed on the left (Poetic Dan)
Great stuff Dan..... here you express our moods and how they change....
February 23rd, 2022 09:49 - Haiku #1 Maybe (Neville)
Well thats me fu*^ed then.
February 23rd, 2022 09:47 - Who\'s God. (Goldfinch60)
I totally agree with your sentiments expressed so well today. I too was a...
February 23rd, 2022 09:46 - For The \'Other\' Sinners (ForeverJesus7)
Exodus 21 of the old testament of the Bible gives clear instructions on...
February 20th, 2022 12:23 - Limerick Attempts (Rozina)
Those are very good limericks because not only are they clever but really...
February 17th, 2022 05:42 - LIMERICK 85 (Michael Edwards)
Time and again
they say \'insane\'
they just cant see
that life for...
February 17th, 2022 05:27 - Filthy Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Best to
Observe a
Little
Light
Oneupmanship
Craftily avoiding
Krass...
February 17th, 2022 05:13 - Hide and seek (Spilleronsheet)
The inner city hide n seek of today for youngsters is a very dangerous...
February 16th, 2022 15:37 - On the Brink of Memories (Rocky Lagou)
Like a dream having it\'s way with us we are led thru the teachings to...
February 16th, 2022 11:13 - Living Souls (Paul Bell)
This reminded me of the 60\'s TV series \"The twilight Zone\" (or twiglet...
February 16th, 2022 08:33 - Each Day Is Special. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely sentiment indeed but.... you lucky people.... who among us can...
February 16th, 2022 08:26 - Test Of Faith. (Goldfinch60)
Is there a hidden message here Andy..... those carefully placed stepping...
February 15th, 2022 05:42 - Lost and unfound (Spilleronsheet)
That mischievous muse... all mine wants to do is write limericks at the...
February 14th, 2022 13:14 - Valentine Day (Jerry Reynolds)
Oh Jerry, is that valentine for me?.... I shall treasure it for ever.... ...
February 14th, 2022 08:48 - Love: Connate (L. B. Mek)
She counted the number of times
she\'d had it off on valentines
\"dear...
February 14th, 2022 04:50 - Love\'s Dues (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed love can become a duel, fought at dawn and lasting all week till...
February 14th, 2022 04:34 - A Garden Of Joy (Rozina)
Lovely poetry. I wish i shared your greenfingered prowess.
February 14th, 2022 04:31 - Love To Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s what they use to call \"a groovy kind of love\"... OK that was...
February 14th, 2022 02:33 - LIMERICK 84 (Michael Edwards)
she knew him to be intellectual
and sexually quite ineffectual
but...
February 14th, 2022 01:50 - Farmers Market (Jerry Reynolds)
Wise choice, you can always discard old fruit when it goes mouldy on you.
February 13th, 2022 09:53 - 3 AM (Paul Bell)
This is why I always try to have the personna of \"this one\'s not a...
February 13th, 2022 09:52 - LIMERICK 83 (Michael Edwards)
The antidote to fellatio... fluff on his needle.
Such a boon to round...
February 13th, 2022 09:25 - The People Who Matter. (Goldfinch60)
Being someone who has often been \'put in their place\' by people that...
February 13th, 2022 09:11 - The hundredth (Spilleronsheet)
I have learned so much from my fellow poets over my few years here on MPS....
February 12th, 2022 09:13 - What A Wonderful Day 1. (Goldfinch60)
You lucky people (Tommy Trinder). You\'re going to have a wonderful year...
February 12th, 2022 08:51 - Untold (Spilleronsheet)
A sad and moving tale which, having just read Fay\'s post today, takes me...
February 11th, 2022 06:44 - Armed Rules (Fay Slimm.)
The disgusting confused savage pointless slaughter that is war looms over...
February 11th, 2022 06:35 - Mirror Mirror On The Wall (Rozina)
Dont mention mirrors near me.... the damn things are either lieing to me...
February 11th, 2022 06:11 - Thinking Old. (Goldfinch60)
Yep that\'s me.... now bring on the short pants again and lets go climb...
February 11th, 2022 05:58 - ❤️EVERYTHING FOR LOVE❤️ (FallenAngel1🕊)
Ahhhh the devil rides within your loins already i fear for your libido...
February 11th, 2022 05:47 - LIMERICK 81 (Michael Edwards)
His energetic son, name of Murray
Did his farming tasks in a hurry
for...
February 11th, 2022 05:41 - A God at the Wash Bowl (AuburnScribbler)
If only indeed. Your poetry today is so revealing of your caring character...
February 10th, 2022 13:10 - Ashes to Ashes (Leanna)
Reads like you will be better off elsewhere if this is in your life right...
February 10th, 2022 09:10 - A Gift (Sorenbarrett)
Yes one\'s smile makes light of many a burden and reflects inside us as we...
February 10th, 2022 09:08 - ✨HER NAME IS ABANTIKA💫🎓 (FallenAngel1🕊)
There\'s love in them there words sir. Long may we see such inspired...
February 10th, 2022 09:03 - Full Bloom (Paul Bell)
Did his gravestone read:- RIP Died of a stabbing pain in his...
February 10th, 2022 06:48 - Timed (Fay Slimm.)
Delightful poetry. A similar subject for my humble offering today...
February 10th, 2022 06:44 - Multicultural Meal. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s a multicultural world here in the west. I wish the middle east could...
February 10th, 2022 06:39 - Pause (Spilleronsheet)
Cor! You dont half run into a lofty subject here spiller. Time the...
February 10th, 2022 06:27 - Again (Bun)
These \'sad little scribbles\' as you call them are important. Writing...
February 9th, 2022 09:18 - LIMERICK 80 (Michael Edwards)
This ain\'t that rain from Spain
It don\'t take a powerful brian
cos it...
February 9th, 2022 04:16 - Dedicated to My Poetic Side (Ok Waleed)
Much poetry comes from the need to release deep frustrations in our lives...
February 9th, 2022 02:36 - This Is Me. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely agree with you!. Wasted too much time in the past thinking...
February 9th, 2022 02:30 - THE HEARTBREAK OF A DREAM💔 (FallenAngel1🕊)
Waking from a dream where you shared love and then feel it fade from your...
February 9th, 2022 02:28 - Resignation (Lorna)
Well i think we are all resigned to the fact that life is going to get...
February 9th, 2022 02:24 - Ruins (Lexandria)
Strong emotive poetry written from the heart. Something all young men...
February 8th, 2022 10:45 - Tea/coffee, cookies and a book (Spilleronsheet)
Relax, have a nibble on that cookie - all else will wait, there\'s no...
February 8th, 2022 09:15 - To Those Who Loved and Were Loved (Katie123)
This really touched me. Beautiful writing. Life goes on for the living who...
February 8th, 2022 07:22 - Unpolished (Agiel)
I felt you encapsulated one of the wonders of the way things are in our...
February 8th, 2022 07:12 - Home (Lorna)
Beautiful poetry Lorna. Aye, love conquers all and shall be what we all...
February 8th, 2022 05:56 - Forever And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
A truly lovely read Andy.
No two loves are the same. Love is the...
February 8th, 2022 05:51 - LIMERICK 79 (Michael Edwards)
He aspired to become an MP
which he achieved with the greatest of...
February 8th, 2022 05:47 - Opposite sides (FallenAngel1🕊)
Been there, done that, lets not talk about the T shirt but...... distance...
February 7th, 2022 16:14 - Re-engineering (Spilleronsheet)
Well spiller, this poet lives behind locked doors and drinks water from a...
February 7th, 2022 14:10 - War (Dougster67)
War, is both a lesson in love and a lesson in hate. Ask anyone in the...
February 7th, 2022 12:29 - Empty Spaces (Frank Moses Phiri)
Reading this i couldn\'t help but think.... i disagree, empty spaces are...
February 7th, 2022 12:26 - Hangover (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler)
Gosh what a horrendous face. I found this quite funny because it reminded...
February 7th, 2022 12:22 - The Vanishing Man (Daughter of The Vanishing Man)
Very powerful stuff and well composed. How well you led us to the...
February 7th, 2022 12:16 - Tonight (Fay Slimm.)
Some lovely pictures there Fay as day takes it\'s curtain call and...
February 7th, 2022 11:18 - Arcoiris (Sorenbarrett)
One of the great and beutiful natural wonders of our world and yet, my...
February 7th, 2022 07:27 - Know Your Place – and Stay There! (Doggerel Dave)
Ah the fate of society within a capitalist state of mind. Vote?...so many...
February 7th, 2022 04:52 - De mi, para mi. (Catalinasandoval)
¿Por qué estás publicando en español en un sitio web en inglés?
February 7th, 2022 04:17 - How Do They Do It? (Rozina)
A great choice of subject because I\'m pretty sure many of us on MPS would...
February 7th, 2022 03:51 - Sealed With Laughter. (Goldfinch60)
Laughter itself is a great gift and of course a great pleasure. To have...
February 7th, 2022 03:27 - Take Me Way (FallenAngel1🕊)
So it\'s that time of celebration - your half century.... make sure you...
February 4th, 2022 09:00
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