Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The Inquiry (Paul Bell)
LOL Ireally enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!
January 11th, 2022 07:58 - Guest List (AuburnScribbler)
The very fact that this party took place is a disgrace when all over our...
January 11th, 2022 06:46 - Calamities of life (Spilleronsheet)
Like Teddy, I was struck by those lines she brought forward. We were...
January 11th, 2022 05:54 - For The Tinkling Of Glasses. (Goldfinch60)
I dont listen to so much music these days, oh but when i do.... i am...
January 11th, 2022 05:46 - January (revised) (ScorpionSun)
And no mention of covid\'s effects on January life,
January 10th, 2022 15:27 - S P L I T (Rozina)
Never really did all that kind of stuff in my divorce about 35 years ago....
January 10th, 2022 11:40 - Love & hurt (Poetic Dan)
I think that right now Dan you are making some of the best memories which...
January 10th, 2022 11:32 - What If......? (Goldfinch60)
We\'ve all played the what iff\'s game a lot. I think as we get older...
January 10th, 2022 11:27 - Movie Poetry Madness(Little Gems) (FallenAngel1🕊)
I savour such gems as you\'ve shown us here. I have a file full of phrases...
January 10th, 2022 11:22 - When journey is savoured more than goal (Spilleronsheet)
Your positive thinking converted set backs into opportunities. Along the...
January 10th, 2022 11:20 - What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken (Poetic Dan)
Well that gal is gonna go far if thats only a 2nd open mike gig Dan. Now...
January 6th, 2022 14:56 - First Impressions (Jerry Reynolds)
LOL what\'s the opposite to \'good in bed\'.... \'bad in bed\' does that...
January 6th, 2022 09:39 - Live Long And Prosper Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
Well chosen words on you acrostic theme.
January 6th, 2022 08:56 - Great is the Lord (Itsjas)
He causrs the winds to blow killer tornados and the flood waters to flow...
January 4th, 2022 20:43 - Waiting For The Snow (Jerry Reynolds)
What did the snowman say to the next snowman? \"Can you smell...
January 4th, 2022 16:36 - The Sting Of Love\'s Defeat (JEG325)
And he didn\'t see it coming. I wonder why not.
January 4th, 2022 15:23 - New Horizons (FallenAngel1🕊)
Boldly go as a man should go but do not cast off from the past. Let each...
January 4th, 2022 15:17 - Fast lane thoughts (Poetic Dan)
Who can we pass the buck to? Who should we pass it to? Would anyone accept...
January 4th, 2022 15:14 - The cycle of life (Spilleronsheet)
Life, comparable to riding upon a leaf atop a gentle stream current. How...
January 4th, 2022 15:09 - My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle (Dove)
The magic is that the beauty of those stars is something which will never...
January 4th, 2022 15:03 - Evocative (Fay Slimm.)
The romance of young lady rose\'s perfumed blossoming readyness.......
January 4th, 2022 14:20 - The Michelin Baby (Rozina)
We give our unconditional love to our children. As they grow, so we learn....
January 4th, 2022 06:42 - Am I Now A Romantic? (Goldfinch60)
Our Goldfinch a romantic? Of course you are, you can;t see the wood for...
January 4th, 2022 06:10 - Hark (Draven)
You can only hide from what your mind wants until the dawning dazzles and...
January 3rd, 2022 20:06 - Churaanthabadi Natte Ei (Ramesh Heigrujam)
The saddest thing about that is that youve posted it on a site which uses...
January 3rd, 2022 14:07 - Barely Semi Touched (Neville)
Semi touched but.... in cold places? Thoughts and memories linger in the...
January 3rd, 2022 12:24 - Watch out for and look out for (Spilleronsheet)
A lesson maybe in conversion therapy..... from every negative thought a...
January 3rd, 2022 10:19 - Things That Spark Imagination(Like Doing Dishes) (FallenAngel1🕊)
The inner romancing of a natural poet on display here. I empathise...
January 3rd, 2022 10:16 - Mermaid- Acrostic (Dove)
M esmerised
E nriched
R elated
M eaningfully
A ttached
I nstantly
D...
January 3rd, 2022 10:09 - To my sarcastic devils (Kitty the naughty poet)
Yeah mums are never worth listening to, all they do is feed you, clothe...
January 3rd, 2022 10:04 - Point A Finger. (Goldfinch60)
Reaching or achieving ones dreams/goals can involve hard work and...
January 3rd, 2022 07:27 - Motivation, what it is to sleepy eyes? (Spilleronsheet)
Hmm once life was like that until i became my own boss.... life then...
January 2nd, 2022 16:58 - Gypsy Of The Wild Wind (JEG325)
Nice writing. Them one night stands make you scratch yer head before u...
January 2nd, 2022 13:59 - Yore (Draven)
I\'m having a good chuckle at your accompanying comment.
Yep I agree,...
January 2nd, 2022 13:14 - The Boulevard Of Broken Dreams (FallenAngel1🕊)
LOL why do you think so many animated/cartoon films are made instead... ...
January 2nd, 2022 12:46 - Winter Fog (Jerry Reynolds)
I lost wisdom many old moons ago LOL
Really like this piece. Shorty and...
January 2nd, 2022 10:35 - THE POWER OF ADDICTION (Turbo1904)
For me the cute rhyming was making light of the serious subject. There\'s...
January 2nd, 2022 09:42 - Stuck in unwanted overthinking (Kitty the naughty poet)
Your words are much akin to the dilemma which incarcerates my mind when i...
January 2nd, 2022 09:37 - Different now (Beatrice4abandon)
Excellent insightful writing. Took me where i have not been, to the other...
January 2nd, 2022 09:31 - Re-Shaping (Fay Slimm.)
Well with the blank sheet of 2022 ahead theres just so much to be...
January 2nd, 2022 07:07 - CLAUS THE BUILDERS - COMPLAINT (Michael Edwards)
we paid our bill
with warmed mince pies
so next time he calls
we can...
January 2nd, 2022 07:03 - May I strut 2022 in my tune (Poetic Dan)
You\'ll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim...
January 2nd, 2022 06:58 - No Washing Up! (Goldfinch60)
Amazing where a drop of good fortune can come from
January 2nd, 2022 06:53 - 2022 (Jerry Reynolds)
Remember how life was before 2020, lets hope we can get back similar to...
January 1st, 2022 13:21 - OLD INTO NEW (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you Fay, and I wish you a safe, healthy and rewarding new year ahead...
January 1st, 2022 06:00 - The New, New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Wishing you many more such mornings and a safe, healthy, rewarding new...
January 1st, 2022 05:58 - Okay (Butidid)
Your words certainly chime with me as 2021 brought some painful issues to...
January 1st, 2022 05:54 - Untitled - LV (SureshG)
Reminds me of a girl i knew.... she stripped away the fiction.... a...
December 31st, 2021 10:33 - Sated (Neville)
Gone are those hankerchief days of youth eh?
You could always...
December 31st, 2021 05:52 - New Depths (Fay Slimm.)
D\'you know... I was just cutting my toenails this morning ready for new...
December 31st, 2021 05:15 - Respect. (Goldfinch60)
If only.... but it begins in the home. We all begin as brats and are...
December 31st, 2021 02:58 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (24 & 25) (Michael Edwards)
Do pigs find skinny animals disgusting?
The value comment does so...
December 31st, 2021 02:50 - Tomorrow\'s day is hers (Poetic Dan)
Love is life. Life is love.
Someone who levels our life with their...
December 30th, 2021 17:19 - Not to be Missed (Fay Slimm.)
LOL been there, done that... got a return ticket too.... meanwhile.... ...
December 30th, 2021 06:21 - Decree (Saxon Crow)
Yep, blame man for tsunamis, earthquakes, avalanches etc... which of...
December 30th, 2021 05:44 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (22 & 23) (Michael Edwards)
The burden of truth was the straw
which broke the media star\'s...
December 30th, 2021 05:39 - Raining In My Heart. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s with great courage you soldier on bolstered by your beliefs and...
December 30th, 2021 05:37 - Some truth better be untold (Spilleronsheet)
A reminder for friends suffering low self esteem that, as Max Ehrmann put...
December 30th, 2021 05:33 - Deep In Thought (FallenAngel1🕊)
Ha!... such times are when you muse comes a calling I hope.
December 30th, 2021 05:30 - Chasing Light (Neville)
(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
December 29th, 2021 16:09 - Alone in the darkness (Kitty the naughty poet)
This piece brought back memories of being unfairly punished by my parents...
December 29th, 2021 05:43 - White Icing (Fay Slimm.)
Somehow you took me back to childhood christmas and winter scenes of white...
December 29th, 2021 05:38 - A journey with deceptions (Spilleronsheet)
Take a rest indeed and raise the questions.... is the road you are upon...
December 29th, 2021 04:58 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (19-21) (Michael Edwards)
When crossing the road tread carefully
lest you anger it.
Excellent as...
December 29th, 2021 04:47 - Singing In The Bar. (Goldfinch60)
Like medals on our chest, our memories as we age are the reward for a life...
December 29th, 2021 04:42 - Precious Memories (FallenAngel1🕊)
This really got to me this morning. Your writing here is exceptional.
A...
December 29th, 2021 04:38 - A disease called overthinking (Spilleronsheet)
Yep, I\'d gleefully go along with all that (I think LOL).
December 28th, 2021 11:40 - Missing Moonlight (Dove)
But there are all of these things and more, for the moon has placed...
December 28th, 2021 10:45 - On Being But a Poet (Neville)
Whether it be us poets or the men who could plough the straightest furrow,...
December 28th, 2021 08:38 - The Straight Lesbian (Paul Bell)
Visions of Alice in Lesbo-land. A very entertaining write and had me...
December 28th, 2021 08:01 - Winding Down (Fay Slimm.)
Overall I felt the warm cosyness of this poem Fay. You bring out the...
December 28th, 2021 07:55 - Such A Lucky Man. (Goldfinch60)
You are a lucky man because you see the positive and the beauty all around...
December 28th, 2021 07:42 - Wandering and searching, yet resting (Spilleronsheet)
Your piece opens up like an adventure and closes with questions....
........
December 27th, 2021 10:03 - You Are (Fay Slimm.)
What a lovely message, simple yet profound. And put together with style.
December 27th, 2021 06:41 - I’VE GOT A DOG (Michael Edwards)
We too have a dog
my the name of Bart
he\'s often accused
of that...
December 27th, 2021 03:57 - Trials Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Had a real hammer blow long time ago which made me e-evaluate everything....
December 27th, 2021 02:52 - A Life Lived Sadly (Neville)
Ithought I\'dseen it before but quickly realised its syllables this time...
December 26th, 2021 06:56 - A Life Lived Sadly (Neville)
December 26th, 2021 06:55 - Greetings (Fay Slimm.)
Cor! hugs..... merry christmas Fay
December 25th, 2021 06:07 - Dance The Day. (Goldfinch60)
merry christmas Andy
December 25th, 2021 06:06 - angel dream (Jim56)
Thats quite a beautiful poem of faith in the great afterlife.
December 24th, 2021 10:59 - Solstice (Draven)
Celebration of the birth of Sol the sun god and the Mithras...
December 24th, 2021 06:05 - For You (Fay Slimm.)
Aha... your poem just dawned on me ooppss.
Merry christmas back atcha!
December 24th, 2021 06:00 - Waking the inner Mistress (Kitty the naughty poet)
Who shall take the lead roll? Will the submissive revolt? Scratching and...
December 24th, 2021 05:07 - Time a slave or master (Spilleronsheet)
Where does the time go?
A poem of this enigmatic ever driving force...
December 24th, 2021 05:04 - Future Of Light (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for this timely reminder of the bounty which future holds. My...
December 24th, 2021 05:03 - Christmas time (Crowns4Christ)
Yes, a time of giving and goodwill. But you\'d think at least santa would...
December 24th, 2021 05:03 - Christmas time (Crowns4Christ)
Yes, a time of giving and goodwill. But you\'d think at least santa would...
December 24th, 2021 04:50 - Future Of Light (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for this timely reminder of the bounty which future holds. My...
December 24th, 2021 04:08 - Time a slave or master (Spilleronsheet)
Where does the time go?
A poem of this enigmatic ever driving force...
December 24th, 2021 04:01 - The Almost Heard (Fay Slimm.)
Spaces where the listener or reader may place an imprint of their own to...
December 23rd, 2021 08:14 - A Life Sadly Lived (Neville)
A seventeen line epitaph or testimonial may well be more rhan most of us...
December 23rd, 2021 08:06 - Home to hell (Kitty the naughty poet)
What came to my mind is the pious ignorance of a churchgoing flock...
December 23rd, 2021 03:37 - A MERRY CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards)
Merry christmas to you and yours and wishing a healthy and hearty new...
December 23rd, 2021 03:30 - Happy Birthday Again Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Link didnt work, plugged in headphones and went direct to youtube for...
December 23rd, 2021 03:28 - My muse\'s sence of humour (FallenAngel1🕊)
Your muse must have been chasing mine up that tree.
December 23rd, 2021 03:18 - Christmas Card (Catherine Leach)
Theres something adoreable about this poem too for the way it highlights a...
December 22nd, 2021 10:48 - The Taking of Innocence (Neville)
I share your anger on this subject. Not least for the reputation it casts...
December 22nd, 2021 06:19 - In Motion (Fay Slimm.)
You bring to life the energy of a country stream here. A life so beautiful...
December 22nd, 2021 06:15 - What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60)
You lucky man, but w.ho could say you don\'t deserve such days?
Long...
December 22nd, 2021 06:06
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