Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Churaanthabadi Natte Ei (Ramesh Heigrujam) The saddest thing about that is that youve posted it on a site which uses...
  January 3rd, 2022 14:07
• Barely Semi Touched (Neville) Semi touched but.... in cold places? Thoughts and memories linger in the...
  January 3rd, 2022 12:24
• Watch out for and look out for (Spilleronsheet) A lesson maybe in conversion therapy..... from every negative thought a...
  January 3rd, 2022 10:19
• Things That Spark Imagination(Like Doing Dishes) (FallenAngel1🕊) The inner romancing of a natural poet on display here. I empathise...
  January 3rd, 2022 10:16
• Mermaid- Acrostic (Dove) M esmerised E nriched R elated M eaningfully A ttached I nstantly D...
  January 3rd, 2022 10:09
• To my sarcastic devils (Kitty the naughty poet) Yeah mums are never worth listening to, all they do is feed you, clothe...
  January 3rd, 2022 10:04
• Point A Finger. (Goldfinch60) Reaching or achieving ones dreams/goals can involve hard work and...
  January 3rd, 2022 07:27
• Motivation, what it is to sleepy eyes? (Spilleronsheet) Hmm once life was like that until i became my own boss.... life then...
  January 2nd, 2022 16:58
• Gypsy Of The Wild Wind (JEG325) Nice writing. Them one night stands make you scratch yer head before u...
  January 2nd, 2022 13:59
• Yore (Draven) I\'m having a good chuckle at your accompanying comment. Yep I agree,...
  January 2nd, 2022 13:14
• The Boulevard Of Broken Dreams (FallenAngel1🕊) LOL why do you think so many animated/cartoon films are made instead... ...
  January 2nd, 2022 12:46
• Winter Fog (Jerry Reynolds) I lost wisdom many old moons ago LOL Really like this piece. Shorty and...
  January 2nd, 2022 10:35
• THE POWER OF ADDICTION (Turbo1904) For me the cute rhyming was making light of the serious subject. There\'s...
  January 2nd, 2022 09:42
• Stuck in unwanted overthinking (Kitty the naughty poet) Your words are much akin to the dilemma which incarcerates my mind when i...
  January 2nd, 2022 09:37
• Different now (Beatrice4abandon) Excellent insightful writing. Took me where i have not been, to the other...
  January 2nd, 2022 09:31
• Re-Shaping (Fay Slimm.) Well with the blank sheet of 2022 ahead theres just so much to be...
  January 2nd, 2022 07:07
• CLAUS THE BUILDERS - COMPLAINT (Michael Edwards) we paid our bill with warmed mince pies so next time he calls we can...
  January 2nd, 2022 07:03
• May I strut 2022 in my tune (Poetic Dan) You\'ll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim...
  January 2nd, 2022 06:58
• No Washing Up! (Goldfinch60) Amazing where a drop of good fortune can come from
  January 2nd, 2022 06:53
• 2022 (Jerry Reynolds) Remember how life was before 2020, lets hope we can get back similar to...
  January 1st, 2022 13:21
• OLD INTO NEW (Fay Slimm.) Thank you Fay, and I wish you a safe, healthy and rewarding new year ahead...
  January 1st, 2022 06:00
• The New, New Day. (Goldfinch60) Wishing you many more such mornings and a safe, healthy, rewarding new...
  January 1st, 2022 05:58
• Okay (Butidid) Your words certainly chime with me as 2021 brought some painful issues to...
  January 1st, 2022 05:54
• Untitled - LV (SureshG) Reminds me of a girl i knew.... she stripped away the fiction.... a...
  December 31st, 2021 10:33
• Sated (Neville) Gone are those hankerchief days of youth eh? You could always...
  December 31st, 2021 05:52
• New Depths (Fay Slimm.) D\'you know... I was just cutting my toenails this morning ready for new...
  December 31st, 2021 05:15
• Respect. (Goldfinch60) If only.... but it begins in the home. We all begin as brats and are...
  December 31st, 2021 02:58
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (24 & 25) (Michael Edwards) Do pigs find skinny animals disgusting? The value comment does so...
  December 31st, 2021 02:50
• Tomorrow\'s day is hers (Poetic Dan) Love is life. Life is love. Someone who levels our life with their...
  December 30th, 2021 17:19
• Not to be Missed (Fay Slimm.) LOL been there, done that... got a return ticket too.... meanwhile.... ...
  December 30th, 2021 06:21
• Decree (Saxon Crow) Yep, blame man for tsunamis, earthquakes, avalanches etc... which of...
  December 30th, 2021 05:44
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (22 & 23) (Michael Edwards) The burden of truth was the straw which broke the media star\'s...
  December 30th, 2021 05:39
• Raining In My Heart. (Goldfinch60) It\'s with great courage you soldier on bolstered by your beliefs and...
  December 30th, 2021 05:37
• Some truth better be untold (Spilleronsheet) A reminder for friends suffering low self esteem that, as Max Ehrmann put...
  December 30th, 2021 05:33
• Deep In Thought (FallenAngel1🕊) Ha!... such times are when you muse comes a calling I hope.
  December 30th, 2021 05:30
• Chasing Light (Neville) (swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
  December 29th, 2021 16:09
• Alone in the darkness (Kitty the naughty poet) This piece brought back memories of being unfairly punished by my parents...
  December 29th, 2021 05:43
• White Icing (Fay Slimm.) Somehow you took me back to childhood christmas and winter scenes of white...
  December 29th, 2021 05:38
• A journey with deceptions (Spilleronsheet) Take a rest indeed and raise the questions.... is the road you are upon...
  December 29th, 2021 04:58
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (19-21) (Michael Edwards) When crossing the road tread carefully lest you anger it. Excellent as...
  December 29th, 2021 04:47
• Singing In The Bar. (Goldfinch60) Like medals on our chest, our memories as we age are the reward for a life...
  December 29th, 2021 04:42
• Precious Memories (FallenAngel1🕊) This really got to me this morning. Your writing here is exceptional. A...
  December 29th, 2021 04:38
• A disease called overthinking (Spilleronsheet) Yep, I\'d gleefully go along with all that (I think LOL).
  December 28th, 2021 11:40
• Missing Moonlight (Dove) But there are all of these things and more, for the moon has placed...
  December 28th, 2021 10:45
• On Being But a Poet (Neville) Whether it be us poets or the men who could plough the straightest furrow,...
  December 28th, 2021 08:38
• Winding Down (Fay Slimm.) Overall I felt the warm cosyness of this poem Fay. You bring out the...
  December 28th, 2021 07:55
• Such A Lucky Man. (Goldfinch60) You are a lucky man because you see the positive and the beauty all around...
  December 28th, 2021 07:42
• Wandering and searching, yet resting (Spilleronsheet) Your piece opens up like an adventure and closes with questions.... ........
  December 27th, 2021 10:03
• You Are (Fay Slimm.) What a lovely message, simple yet profound. And put together with style.
  December 27th, 2021 06:41
• I’VE GOT A DOG (Michael Edwards) We too have a dog my the name of Bart he\'s often accused of that...
  December 27th, 2021 03:57
• Trials Of Life. (Goldfinch60) Had a real hammer blow long time ago which made me e-evaluate everything....
  December 27th, 2021 02:52
• A Life Lived Sadly (Neville) Ithought I\'dseen it before but quickly realised its syllables this time...
  December 26th, 2021 06:56
• A Life Lived Sadly (Neville)
  December 26th, 2021 06:55
• Greetings (Fay Slimm.) Cor! hugs..... merry christmas Fay
  December 25th, 2021 06:07
• Dance The Day. (Goldfinch60) merry christmas Andy
  December 25th, 2021 06:06
• angel dream (Jim56) Thats quite a beautiful poem of faith in the great afterlife.
  December 24th, 2021 10:59
• Solstice (Draven) Celebration of the birth of Sol the sun god and the Mithras...
  December 24th, 2021 06:05
• For You (Fay Slimm.) Aha... your poem just dawned on me ooppss. Merry christmas back atcha!
  December 24th, 2021 06:00
• Waking the inner Mistress (Kitty the naughty poet) Who shall take the lead roll? Will the submissive revolt? Scratching and...
  December 24th, 2021 05:07
• Time a slave or master (Spilleronsheet) Where does the time go? A poem of this enigmatic ever driving force...
  December 24th, 2021 05:04
• Future Of Light (Goldfinch60) Thank you for this timely reminder of the bounty which future holds. My...
  December 24th, 2021 05:03
• Christmas time (Crowns4Christ) Yes, a time of giving and goodwill. But you\'d think at least santa would...
  December 24th, 2021 05:03
• Christmas time (Crowns4Christ) Yes, a time of giving and goodwill. But you\'d think at least santa would...
  December 24th, 2021 04:50
• Future Of Light (Goldfinch60) Thank you for this timely reminder of the bounty which future holds. My...
  December 24th, 2021 04:08
• Time a slave or master (Spilleronsheet) Where does the time go? A poem of this enigmatic ever driving force...
  December 24th, 2021 04:01
• The Almost Heard (Fay Slimm.) Spaces where the listener or reader may place an imprint of their own to...
  December 23rd, 2021 08:14
• A Life Sadly Lived (Neville) A seventeen line epitaph or testimonial may well be more rhan most of us...
  December 23rd, 2021 08:06
• Home to hell (Kitty the naughty poet) What came to my mind is the pious ignorance of a churchgoing flock...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:37
• A MERRY CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards) Merry christmas to you and yours and wishing a healthy and hearty new...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:30
• Happy Birthday Again Chet. (Goldfinch60) Link didnt work, plugged in headphones and went direct to youtube for...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:28
• My muse\'s sence of humour (FallenAngel1🕊) Your muse must have been chasing mine up that tree.
  December 23rd, 2021 03:18
• Christmas Card (Catherine Leach) Theres something adoreable about this poem too for the way it highlights a...
  December 22nd, 2021 10:48
• The Taking of Innocence (Neville) I share your anger on this subject. Not least for the reputation it casts...
  December 22nd, 2021 06:19
• In Motion (Fay Slimm.) You bring to life the energy of a country stream here. A life so beautiful...
  December 22nd, 2021 06:15
• What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60) You lucky man, but w.ho could say you don\'t deserve such days? Long...
  December 22nd, 2021 06:06
• What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60) You lucky man, but w.ho could say you don\'t deserve such days? Long...
  December 22nd, 2021 06:05
• Insecure (Rr_r) The perfect few are just a few. I know about feeling ugly and imperfect. I...
  December 21st, 2021 15:27
• Best Friend vs. Girlfriend (Anna Colette) LOL your post reads like a letter to an agony aunt. Tell your boyfriend...
  December 21st, 2021 12:09
• Protagonist (Screaming goat. (New and Improved)) What fine poetry young lady. You are blessed with a fine talent.
  December 21st, 2021 11:54
• My Friend (Fay Slimm.) Gorgeous looking lil dawg you have there (what breed is she?). From...
  December 21st, 2021 11:49
• christmas feeling (Jim56) Well thats the way we\'d like it to be (or so we are told) but it never is...
  December 21st, 2021 06:58
• Bedroom Games. (Woundedheart) Look I\'m already knackered from Katie earlier.... she WILL insist on...
  December 21st, 2021 06:48
• Quarry (Neville) I did a practice run for my roast potatoes today.... mmmm lufferly they...
  December 21st, 2021 06:46
• I\'m sitting in my car (Anna_noday) This is called stalking LOL We\'ve all done it to some degree or another....
  December 21st, 2021 04:48
• Our Paradise. (Goldfinch60) It most definitely is but along comes the bad weather of arthritis and...
  December 21st, 2021 02:52
• Chair games (Kitty the naughty poet) Erm.... been there, done that.... its good fun and needs trust between...
  December 21st, 2021 02:07
• The Mountain Laurel (James Alexander) Beautiful words to seal a loss of ones lover. I felt this one.
  December 21st, 2021 00:32
• Signing Out (Neville) I had a visit from my muse last evening which was so refreshing. She\'s...
  December 20th, 2021 15:16
• Broken dreams (Jade Wolf) Great \'gritty side of life\' poetry.
  December 20th, 2021 11:54
• my best friend (Jim56) I think you capture the closeness and companionship of a dog here. I love...
  December 20th, 2021 11:51
• Hungry for games (Kitty the naughty poet) Speaks to me of life\'s frustrations quelled by the love intimacy of...
  December 20th, 2021 10:31
• WHAT DID YOU SAY? (Rozina) Say that again LOL Is it me or is the sound on TV really bad these...
  December 20th, 2021 10:20
• Daily Gifts. (Goldfinch60) You\'re right. My mobility is giving probs at the moment, so easily taken...
  December 20th, 2021 10:16
• hopeless dreams, so sweet and promising. (Jinlikesgin) Well this is a very good start here on mps for your great desire to be...
  December 19th, 2021 12:58
• Not long ago I walked alone (Anna_noday) I read in your words the pains of a love\'s ending made more especially...
  December 19th, 2021 11:27
• christmas story (Jim56) Here are some truths about christmas. Mary\'s child jesus christ was...
  December 19th, 2021 07:35
• Angelic Announcement (Orchidee) Where was your god reigning over Israel during the holocaust?
  December 19th, 2021 03:26
• Broken (Kitty the naughty poet) I sincerely hope this is fiction. You really display your poetic art...
  December 19th, 2021 03:14
• The Cricket (James Alexander) Nice story poem very well told. A credit to your skill and art.
  December 19th, 2021 02:28
• Noisy Neighbour. (Goldfinch60) This is it isn\'t it, your revenge for me making you laugh yesterday. Well...
  December 19th, 2021 02:24