Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The Jesus Girl (Paul Bell)
Lovely story.
April 18th, 2022 05:34 - Infinite desires, less opportunities (Spilleronsheet)
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are...
April 18th, 2022 05:20 - Stopped By Music. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds to me that you really are enjoying the finer things in life. I hope...
April 18th, 2022 05:14 - \"Main tumhe yaad aaunga...\" (Sameer)
डबल डच टू मोस्ट
April 17th, 2022 16:50 - Living a Human Life is not Easy... (Simplyalice)
You\'re right, living that human life was not easy so I have begun living...
April 17th, 2022 09:28 - All or nothing (Sorenbarrett)
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26 - Echo’s Just Don’t Lie (Neville)
The house of love is a haunted place with ghosts sudden shrieks causing us...
April 17th, 2022 09:23 - Mere Mortal (Paul Bell)
Too true. So thoughtfully composed.
April 17th, 2022 03:12 - Life moves on (Shikha)
Realistic and true not the unblemished life stuff we usually see in...
April 17th, 2022 01:59 - Live Life. FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Twas upon that Isle of Wight
one extraordinary April night
sat by the...
April 17th, 2022 01:52 - IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL (Michael Edwards)
I is already finished boss, that\'s why i\'m doing nothing at all.
April 17th, 2022 00:42 - Aged Tree. (Goldfinch60)
That aged tree was once a sprightly young thing not yet a hundred years...
April 16th, 2022 01:02 - For Them (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Such is the terrible cost of war. And it seems perpetual. Will mankind...
April 15th, 2022 12:28 - Today (Cassia DeSousa)
It is indeed a beautiful day. How sad though that gods children are...
April 15th, 2022 11:19 - Falling in love (Sophenia)
Most definitely it is. Even if it all goes wrong you\'ll know what love is...
April 15th, 2022 10:38 - The Device (Paul Bell)
Necessity is the mother of invention if he ain\'t cutting it.
April 15th, 2022 10:36 - They (Eugene S.)
The courage and tenacity of the oppressed shines through your spirited...
April 15th, 2022 10:31 - Cajoled (Fay Slimm.)
Oh crikey, story of my life or what? Straight away i know this is going in...
April 15th, 2022 10:26 - Just for us Lemons (Neville)
Oh the wisdom in these words. WE used to say \"taste and try, before you...
April 15th, 2022 10:18 - Kitty. (Goldfinch60)
Love the play on words in suggestive mannner. What has crossing the solent...
April 15th, 2022 09:58 - BURDEN OF LIFE (Ericjwolf28)
A great message for life because we all have to pick ourselves up, dust...
April 15th, 2022 09:52 - Spare a Moment for These Words (Neville)
..... and find within, what meaning you will for everything meaningful...
April 14th, 2022 04:06 - What once was ours (Saxon Crow)
Great words of rebirth in this our wicked world.
April 14th, 2022 04:02 - Stronger Love. (Goldfinch60)
It happened one February night
their bond was now everso tight
they sat...
April 14th, 2022 04:00 - LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108 (Michael Edwards)
He\'d dream them up whilst aslumber
and each limerick he dreamed had a...
April 14th, 2022 03:47 - Maybe. (Fay Slimm.)
A long time ago there was a hit called \'sailor\' - \"as i call across the...
April 13th, 2022 18:09 - Intelligence (Sorenbarrett)
Of course mankind is superior, mankind can kill more species than any...
April 12th, 2022 07:58 - Gooder than Good Even (Neville)
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever...
April 12th, 2022 05:01 - So Ready (Fay Slimm.)
Really sensitive depiction of that inner self \"us\" we all relax with as...
April 12th, 2022 02:10 - Endless (Saxon Crow)
Lovely writing Saxon. I share your vision of a continuum since first...
April 12th, 2022 01:56 - Strange Friend. (Goldfinch60)
Yes indeed and these strangers share our humanity. Each with their own...
April 12th, 2022 01:43 - I am but a broken human (Not Entirely here)
Yes sad but so well composed. Don\'t let that broken feeling last. You...
April 11th, 2022 10:48 - Proof (Fay Slimm.)
There is so much woven in here. The reality of love and romance being a...
April 11th, 2022 10:44 - To be or not it\'s the last line of snot. (Poetic Dan)
Great Video, yours always are.
Wassup Dan? You say you wanted the day...
April 11th, 2022 08:13 - Pieces (Sorenbarrett)
Its been a strange sort of a day really, what is a tortoise shell doing on...
April 11th, 2022 06:33 - Even Sadder than That Even (Neville)
The ruin of the roots of beauty itself cries in your words today. For what...
April 11th, 2022 05:34 - What if imperfections could heal? (Sophenia)
Do you know, I think we already do that here on mps.
Reading other...
April 11th, 2022 01:23 - Shining Love. (Goldfinch60)
Not just words, you really enrich your pals lives here sharing your joy...
April 11th, 2022 01:20 - Can\'t Sit Still! (Christina8)
Lucky girl, deserving girl.... take yer poetry pen with you.
A great...
April 10th, 2022 11:30 - Longing (Sorenbarrett)
Ah yes those entertaining days of time gone by and the lessons we like to...
April 10th, 2022 11:28 - Crossed (Fay Slimm.)
So good to see you here again. Welcome back, I certainly missed your fine...
April 10th, 2022 11:25 - LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105 (Michael Edwards)
Love those, especially number one which made me laugh out loud - thank...
April 10th, 2022 11:15 - Why my poetry exists (Poetic Dan)
Maybe you write to show the world that there is something in you the world...
April 10th, 2022 11:07 - William Who? (Goldfinch60)
As a victim (joking) of secondary education i was not priveledged to...
April 10th, 2022 10:58 - The song (Spilleronsheet)
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they...
April 9th, 2022 13:44 - What Legacies will Be Left Behind #2 (FallenAngel1🕊)
If they can bring back epic moments like michael caine\'s \"You\'re only...
April 9th, 2022 10:44 - The Little Black Book (Paul Bell)
Decree nisi granted on the grounds that Mrs X\'s coffee grinder was...
April 9th, 2022 10:40 - Fire, water, air and earth (Sorenbarrett)
The love of nature and existence itself flows through your words. Much...
April 9th, 2022 10:35 - Hey - Hey Rise Up, (Goldfinch60)
Shine on you crazy diamonds.
April 9th, 2022 10:21 - What Legacies Will Be Left Behind (FallenAngel1🕊)
Oh I do know where you\'re coming from but I\'m sure my parents thought...
April 8th, 2022 12:03 - A million times (Spilleronsheet)
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your...
April 8th, 2022 11:55 - Letting nature describe (Poetic Dan)
Cor! I hope you are keeping all these videos cos in twenty or more years...
April 8th, 2022 11:50 - Winning a hundred million power ball lotteries in a row (Sorenbarrett)
Wow! and again Wow! Excellent writing.
April 8th, 2022 11:43 - Wrong Body (Paul Bell)
This truly brings to the fore what beauty is all about.. our beauty is...
April 8th, 2022 11:41 - Layers (Saxon Crow)
Astral meditation hmmm yes please. I only managed to really meditate once...
April 8th, 2022 11:20 - Acceptance In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Amen to that sir! I\'m pleased to be able to say i totally agree. I wish...
April 8th, 2022 11:14 - 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
Whilst soothing his energy chakras
he accidently damaged his...
April 8th, 2022 11:11 - Sayings (Sorenbarrett)
Goodness gracious great balls of fire!
Well chosen words assembled to...
April 7th, 2022 12:44 - Our Undying Love. (Goldfinch60)
You\'re right I loved that and to see Alba Esteban cooly waiting with the...
April 7th, 2022 12:27 - your spell (Asrealastheycome)
Those last two lines are masterful.
April 6th, 2022 15:36 - Him (Ceeohna)
If it was that good why forget? Don\'t let it rule you but dont disrespect...
April 6th, 2022 15:23 - Hey ? & The Mysterians (Jon Nakapalau)
Too many teardrops for one heart to stop crying.
A big favourite of...
April 6th, 2022 15:19 - walking regular routes (Jark)
Man against the machines we are forced to live among. You are a long way...
April 6th, 2022 14:28 - ANDHERA (DARK) (VERSIFIER-MOHIT)
ĉu ne estas strange kiam vi vidas aferojn en lingvo, kiun la plimulto ne...
April 6th, 2022 14:23 - Pilgrim (Sorenbarrett)
All so very true. The \"road less travelled\" is a road which takes...
April 6th, 2022 08:34 - Being One (Saxon Crow)
It\'s easy for each one of us to overcomplicate our existence in todays...
April 6th, 2022 08:27 - Differing Words. (Goldfinch60)
The evil and destruction going on today in Ukraine has zapped my...
April 6th, 2022 08:23 - Living Lady Lilac (Rocky Lagou)
Love it ! Super important questions for which one has to find any...
April 5th, 2022 10:35 - Amphigory (Sorenbarrett)
The preposterous rhinoceros with something stuck in her oesophagus,...
April 5th, 2022 06:23 - ROSES ARE RED (Michael Edwards)
roses are red
your eyes show atlantis
come closer my dear
says the...
April 5th, 2022 03:20 - Escape to the Dark. (Goldfinch60)
But do you see shadows in daylight beneath an overcast sky. Shadows fear...
April 5th, 2022 03:09 - May You Await Me on the Moon? (Rocky Lagou)
I\'m a bit lost i must admit. The first half gave me thoughts of being...
April 4th, 2022 11:56 - Flesh For Fantasy/The Beauty Of Skin (FallenAngel1🕊)
Hmmm skin, the durable sheath which encapsulates all we ever were and all...
April 4th, 2022 10:12 - Vacation (Christina8)
My word, dont hold back that ravenous appetite. Try to get outdoors now...
April 4th, 2022 10:07 - Ageless Love. (Goldfinch60)
Aha... now we have it \"born again fogeyism\". I applaud it, we should all...
April 4th, 2022 10:03 - Morning Dew Special (FallenAngel1🕊)
Yes yes yes please - even moreso yes now that it\'s so flippin cold here...
April 3rd, 2022 14:15 - A Mouse\'s Tale (Bella Shepard)
I really enjoyed this moving tale with so many sentiments between the...
April 3rd, 2022 12:54 - Daybreak (Lyric)
Does will write poetry too?
April 3rd, 2022 12:44 - Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media (Sorenbarrett)
I have \'met\' these \'people\' online in various guises. Keyboard...
April 3rd, 2022 10:41 - The Mending of a Very Broken Man (Neville)
I\'ve reversed the roles a couple of times but never met (yet) one so...
April 3rd, 2022 08:14 - Four Seasons In A Day. (Goldfinch60)
Your just spoilt you are! Now you get as much weather as anyone could ask...
April 3rd, 2022 08:09 - HEAR THE SOUND (Michael Edwards)
That\'s clever stuff. I will have a go at similar one day but today i\'m...
April 3rd, 2022 08:07 - Springtime femininity🌹 (FallenAngel1🕊)
Get out there and have some fun, sounds like you\'ve found the sun....
April 2nd, 2022 11:17 - Another Wonderful Day, (Goldfinch60)
So long as the tomorrows keep on coming i wholeheartedly agree with the...
April 2nd, 2022 02:15 - Giving Up Poetry (Rocky Lagou)
LOL I gave up poetry ages ago when some one wrote to me \"if youve got...
April 1st, 2022 09:21 - Romantic (Christina8)
You\'re lost, lost in a love supreme. Enjoy.
April 1st, 2022 08:56 - Where I Need To Be. (Goldfinch60)
to quote a famous song:-
\"the road is long with many a winding turn that...
April 1st, 2022 03:53 - LIMERICKS 100 101 & 102 (Michael Edwards)
A flatulent poet called Bart
had a very theatrical part
when the curtain...
April 1st, 2022 03:45 - Normal (Sorenbarrett)
In the view of the patients - No. Theyre insane LOL.
I enjoyed this...
March 31st, 2022 11:19 - Lost and alone (Kayewaye)
LIfe won\'t change much unless you give it something of yourself.
Join...
March 31st, 2022 11:02 - Pure Heart Sick Dirty Dark Mind Don\\\\\\\'t Go Along (Emmanoel Obalim)
What you are is something you have every right to be. Cos you are a child...
March 31st, 2022 10:52 - Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet) (Rocky Lagou)
I wouldn\'t know what a sonnet was if it walked up and bit me but i know...
March 31st, 2022 09:51 - It\'s Not Difficult (Christina8)
I want some of this, am i too late?
March 31st, 2022 09:45 - If life was a poem... (Sophenia)
If you are recruiting for life as a poem can i have a ticket please - one...
March 31st, 2022 09:44 - Let us Not Forget Syria (Neville)
Wherever Putin has placed his evil wand of misery is deserving of our...
March 31st, 2022 07:45 - Gutter Gardening. (Goldfinch60)
Just be thankful blackbirds havent invented tractors.
March 31st, 2022 07:32 - Paralyzed (Sorenbarrett)
Its gotta be said
this pleased my head
once it was read
i was well...
March 30th, 2022 17:40 - Dirty Water (Neville)
Straight away i thought of the besieged people in ukrain cities having to...
March 30th, 2022 09:58 - Mary Had A Little Lamb 16. (Goldfinch60)
She also had a great big cat
she put it in a bucket
and when she put a...
March 30th, 2022 09:20 - Through My Eyes (Silent_Shay)
Oh dear, ignore the religious nutter above.
Your dilemma comes through...
March 29th, 2022 18:51
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