Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The Street Sweeper (Rozina)
The trafficking of slave labour is still rife. Especially for young...
February 4th, 2022 08:38 - Absence (Spilleronsheet)
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a...
February 4th, 2022 03:06 - My River And Us. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s so reassuring when good things happen to good people.
Your river...
February 4th, 2022 03:01 - Stop Falling in Love So Easily! (AuburnScribbler)
This is not a new syndrome. It is the stuff of novels and films galore....
February 3rd, 2022 15:32 - Whole (Valerie)
There is something special here.
\"This persona I give to others
I never...
February 3rd, 2022 08:49 - Thoughts temple (Florin Dragoș Minculescu)
There you go, we are all spiritual beings and have a god within us. Your...
February 3rd, 2022 08:21 - Thoughts temple (Florin Dragoș Minculescu)
There you go, we are all spiritual beings and have a god within us. Your...
February 3rd, 2022 08:20 - Heaven Sent (Paul Bell)
More tea vicar?
Yep, you certainly cracked it, that\'s the final parts...
February 3rd, 2022 06:21 - Is It Love? (Goldfinch60)
Andy, don\'t question too deeply or you could spoil something wonderful....
February 3rd, 2022 04:03 - The end (Spilleronsheet)
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or...
February 3rd, 2022 03:48 - A blot on sheet (Spilleronsheet)
The pen is mightier than the sword... so goes the wise old saying but alas...
February 2nd, 2022 12:17 - Passing Notes (AuburnScribbler)
LOL remember that if boris goes it will be another blue tory to replace...
February 2nd, 2022 11:48 - BEAUTY …What does it Mean ??? (Vamsi Sudha)
Beauty is within perception. Some will never see, some see it everywhere.
February 2nd, 2022 07:14 - Taking the next step (Spilleronsheet)
The first verse made me think you had been in my home.... rather bleak...
February 2nd, 2022 07:09 - War Drums (DestinysPerspectives)
I\'m really taken with this piece of poetry both in it\'s composition and...
February 2nd, 2022 06:48 - Ode to Dead Bird (Sylviasearcher)
To find one of natures beauties like this would indeed inspire me to...
February 2nd, 2022 06:45 - Beauty (Fay Slimm.)
After running the race of young ignorance, overlooking nature\'s charms,...
February 2nd, 2022 04:28 - SHE STANDS ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Oh for more poetic journeys such as this. Worth waiting for.
\"in...
February 2nd, 2022 04:11 - Some People. (Goldfinch60)
I can think of politicians like that.
February 2nd, 2022 04:08 - The Essence Of A Woman (FallenAngel1🕊)
If only this were true of them all. Of course it is true of the ones I...
January 27th, 2022 15:15 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25 - SHORT MEASURES (5) (Michael Edwards)
After a night of wenchin
he finally let go the tension
it stank like no...
January 27th, 2022 08:12 - The Sign (Paul Bell)
Good fun. I\'m sure i met her, albeit briefly, on a perculiar blind date....
January 27th, 2022 07:46 - The Jazz Quartet. (Goldfinch60)
Envious, I\'m just not well enough or I\'d be attempting to join you...
January 27th, 2022 02:39 - Love. (Hapadalecki)
Hun it aint what you look like that matters cos sooner or later we all...
January 26th, 2022 10:27 - War Dance (Jerry Reynolds)
Cor Jerry, you\'re right on the ball today sir! It\'s not looking good...
January 26th, 2022 10:19 - Miracle..! (IAli)
Profound. Excellent.
Into my favourites.
January 26th, 2022 05:59 - The Day She Smiled (Jayasree)
Lovely poetry, and I know the feeling of pleasure you describe for all...
January 26th, 2022 05:57 - Surrender (Fay Slimm.)
There\'s something special in the air as the day dawns. Photographers want...
January 26th, 2022 05:26 - Made Into One. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely romantic epic of a poem sir!
I wish it was me in my younger...
January 26th, 2022 04:27 - Conveniently Forgot (Neville)
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after...
January 26th, 2022 04:11 - What Is Your Name? (Goldfinch60)
Well, I\'m not recommending it but, for memory altering/loss try a few...
January 26th, 2022 03:06 - The Birth Of Josie(Conclusion) (FallenAngel1🕊)
Well what can one say?.... each to their own. Live and let live.
I...
January 26th, 2022 03:03 - Untitled (ModernBard)
When you\'ve got the nation indoors
And you need to hear some...
January 24th, 2022 12:23 - Question (Jerry Reynolds)
It\'s better to write, just write.... you\'ll find you write about both...
January 24th, 2022 11:47 - Of Patients And Patience (Rozina)
When i was a younger man i hated going to the doctors but now i spend a...
January 24th, 2022 11:45 - Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found (L. B. Mek)
Yep, but i feel like I\'m a boy scout now dib dib dib. I\'ve always been...
January 24th, 2022 11:32 - SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3) (Michael Edwards)
LOL, where do you go to think of this stuff.
January 24th, 2022 02:31 - That First Sign. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful isn\'t it. The continuance of life. Even though our seasons seem...
January 24th, 2022 02:29 - My Secret Garden (Jayasree)
Beautiful thought created this lovely piece.
In my mind my muse leads me...
January 23rd, 2022 23:31 - If only for a second (Poetic Dan)
Your line \"With fate in my hand drifting with no plan\" describes my life...
January 23rd, 2022 09:31 - A HART STOPPED (Keith)
A well written piece about a sickening situation. I know how you feel, I...
January 23rd, 2022 06:32 - All That Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
According to Thelonius Monk a bum note was an adventure because it took...
January 23rd, 2022 02:27 - If I Were To,.. (FallenAngel1🕊)
Maybe she too harbours deep desires which she is afraid to reveal lest she...
January 22nd, 2022 17:49 - Carver (Paul Bell)
I enjoyed reading this. I haven\'t a clue what it\'s about or if there\'s...
January 22nd, 2022 17:39 - Unbeatable (Fay Slimm.)
I wanna be there..... order me a helicopter cos i\'m too lazy to climb...
January 22nd, 2022 17:32 - SHORT MEASURES (1) (Michael Edwards)
That should be wriiten into the marriage contract.
She thought she\'d...
January 22nd, 2022 17:16 - My Island of Peace (Goldfinch60)
What a super idea...I\'d be there tomorrow.
On the other hand these...
January 22nd, 2022 17:12 - The Ocean (GiftedT17)
Nice one! The ocean does something special to us I agree. I envy you if...
January 22nd, 2022 00:48 - Just Stay (Gracie lynne)
I\'m an old man now but i remember the feelings you express so well in...
January 22nd, 2022 00:33 - True Love (Abhi321)
WOW! you must be a famous person if god speaks to you asking questions...
January 21st, 2022 16:55 - Crap Shooter (Audite Degenerem)
LOL nice piece about a poor soul who cant control his hands when he is...
January 21st, 2022 12:45 - If MPS Poets Met..... (Rozina)
Thats a fun read.... I think a meet-up would be great but there would be...
January 21st, 2022 04:15 - Someone Else’s Religion Maybe (Neville)
I like what Goldfinch wrote and fully support it.
Each of the organised...
January 21st, 2022 04:09 - Arrepentirse (Victoria Grace)
Little point in living in regret when life is for living. By all means...
January 21st, 2022 03:41 - I know you don\'t want to but we all will (Poetic Dan)
I love seeing vids of your beautiful daughter growing up.
That...
January 21st, 2022 03:38 - Evading The Truth. (Goldfinch60)
Reminded me of a line from an old western film when a native americansaid...
January 21st, 2022 02:19 - Phantom (MattDyer)
Great fun write, PMSL at tears being a warning sign in line five.
January 21st, 2022 02:07 - I Am Has Been Will Be (RickthePoetWarrior)
Good luck with the book sales.
January 20th, 2022 23:37 - ODE TO HOPE (MDStone)
A fine and touching tribute to your late, much loved, four legged family...
January 20th, 2022 23:35 - Battle Inside Me (Anna Colette)
Take your time.... you never know, it might all just wander away from you...
January 20th, 2022 23:31 - Behold (Draven)
A reakisation of who you are and that the world is your oyster.
January 20th, 2022 08:18 - The Letters (Paul Bell)
A story of life which reveals that there is more to walking away than...
January 20th, 2022 06:29 - Mislaid (Fay Slimm.)
With age has come patience, understanding and a less demanding...
January 20th, 2022 05:29 - Is Anybody There? (Goldfinch60)
There are spirits of our angels and loved ones somewhere Andy in a place...
January 20th, 2022 03:01 - Shuffle (SheWasTheSun)
I like this a lot. The last line made me laugh.
Freeing yourself from...
January 20th, 2022 01:48 - Blithe (Draven)
mmmm basic instincts win the day yet again..... life goes on.... to...
January 19th, 2022 11:54 - A moment in time (Sorenbarrett)
I think this is among the finest pieces i have read here on mps over the...
January 19th, 2022 11:47 - Invitation (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, when so much has been right there can be a place to put away the...
January 19th, 2022 11:37 - Divorced (Paul Bell)
Light hearted but a very relateable story. I too walked away from divorce...
January 19th, 2022 11:33 - Like a Lark on the Rise (Neville)
Your words today are a lesson in dignity for us all. No finer and more...
January 19th, 2022 11:21 - Let Your Spirit Fly (FallenAngel1🕊)
I\'m there mate, regularly. Flights of fancy are my wonderland.
January 19th, 2022 11:14 - After A Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t you just love it when that happens.
January 19th, 2022 11:12 - Let It Go (Timothy Michael Douget)
Reads like one more text of confusion from biblical times.... or do you...
January 18th, 2022 13:26 - मेरा जीवन (Manasi Sharma)
यदि आप समझना चाहते हैं तो...
January 18th, 2022 13:23 - CV (Paul Bell)
Enjoyed reading this fun piece.
Sorry to read you\'ve got this covid...
January 18th, 2022 08:33 - Take heed (Shearonder1987)
Have to, have to, have to, have to..... really?
January 18th, 2022 06:55 - \'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses (Rozina)
I\'ve heard about that too but never met anyone who was actually like...
January 18th, 2022 04:32 - Allure (Fay Slimm.)
I know that stretch of Cornwall where you would not believe you are in the...
January 18th, 2022 03:32 - O’ Naturale (RickthePoetWarrior)
A farts final journey is up the nostril m8.
January 18th, 2022 02:29 - Empty Can. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s another respect issue or maybe i\'d go further, it\'s a sign of...
January 18th, 2022 02:25 - A POETIC LITANY OF POEMS CELEBRATING MLK DAY (Mlowe5)
I thought of this great man on his birthday 15th January. SAme day as one...
January 17th, 2022 17:08 - Bob It (Paul Bell)
Lol @ Bobbit. Well you certainly closed the door on that...
January 17th, 2022 16:58 - Internment (Fay Slimm.)
Enraged by the ignorance keeping beauty encaged.
January 17th, 2022 09:14 - Who’s for Tennis? (Doggerel Dave)
Lets throw a party and have a game of tennis for honest people.
January 17th, 2022 08:50 - Now Pinned to the Sky (Neville)
And were planted beneath stones in row upon row if there was enough left...
January 17th, 2022 08:46 - Respect For All. (Goldfinch60)
I too was taught about respect and took it onboard as a youngster. It is a...
January 17th, 2022 08:42 - Split into two (Poetic Dan)
You capture something magic within us all here Dan. This is a different...
January 14th, 2022 05:28 - Jacob Rees-Smogg. (sic). (Goldfinch60)
Was it ever not so? Why do the party of the nobs keep getting elected?
January 14th, 2022 05:22 - The Activist? (Saxon Crow)
The cycle of politics, destined for failure and re-birth.
January 14th, 2022 05:19 - Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom (Spilleronsheet)
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close...
January 14th, 2022 05:16 - Comments I see (FallenAngel1🕊)
Us poets do what comes naturally. We express ourselves using a thing...
January 14th, 2022 05:12 - LIMERICK 75 (Michael Edwards)
LOL love that limerick
One wife ran away headed north
you guessed...
January 14th, 2022 04:49 - 🔞🔞🔞The Girl Of My Dreams🔞🔞🔞 (FallenAngel1🕊)
Subtle.
January 13th, 2022 10:50 - Leading To That Place. (Goldfinch60)
So if i have made loads of mistakes (stepping up stones) does that put me...
January 13th, 2022 08:24 - Take Care, Stay Safe. (Doggerel Dave)
I think a lot of inspiration has been zapped by the alteration to our...
January 12th, 2022 20:20 - Running time (Spilleronsheet)
There are more questions to play with here. One day a UFO time machine...
January 12th, 2022 20:16 - Hop On Hop Off (Rozina)
LOL I loved reading this.
January 12th, 2022 05:53 - LIMERICK 78 (Michael Edwards)
on wobbly two wheels he frolicks
cycling home this keen alcoholic
but...
January 12th, 2022 03:03 - Paul. (Goldfinch60)
A wandering wonderer, a muse living in a mews with a cat which mews, A...
January 12th, 2022 02:56
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