Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- To Be Made Of Stone (FallenAngel1π)
In the heart of every poet is the magic of dance where pained expression...
December 19th, 2021 02:20 - The year has gone (Anna_noday)
I picked up a life wearyness of \"I knew it was going to happen all...
December 18th, 2021 04:14 - Heavenly Hope (Orchidee)
There you go again Orchi, making up words from the mouth of god....
December 18th, 2021 03:12 - Rise And Shine (Charles Edward York)
When the night is freezing isn\'t it snow which falls from the sky instead...
December 18th, 2021 02:36 - Rise And Shine (Charles Edward York)
When the night is freezing isn\'t it snow which falls from the sky instead...
December 18th, 2021 02:35 - Butterfly Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Did you speak to soon
under this rising moon
suddenly awake
with a...
December 18th, 2021 02:26 - Karma (Kitty the naughty poet)
Cor, a grandma who sees the devil in her grandchildren.... Karma
December 18th, 2021 02:19 - The Blue Planet (SureshG)
This reads like you were viewing from outer space..... oh you bad...
December 16th, 2021 12:56 - Amber light (Spilleronsheet)
A Nice spooky tale well told.
December 16th, 2021 12:37 - His Call (Fay Slimm.)
Cor blimey missus its them saucy dreams of yours again making me spill my...
December 16th, 2021 05:36 - My Valentine (Ameljor)
Ah, the unreal fantasy world of one who holds secretly the desire for...
December 16th, 2021 05:28 - Tidings (Draven)
I dunno where I get my positive outlook from. My mum was a great worrier...
December 16th, 2021 05:20 - The Realisation of Probability (Neville)
Call me a rabbit if you will but i have never had time for \"Ferret...
December 16th, 2021 05:16 - Praise Professings (Orchidee)
What gifts will you provide to god for failing to save all the lives he...
December 16th, 2021 04:02 - Do Birds Divorce? (Rozina)
I guess female humans find it easier than the male to find a partner LOL....
December 16th, 2021 03:59 - Low-Blow... (Jaimeleigh)
I enjoyed reading this, it has great flow and is easily relateable... I\'m...
December 16th, 2021 03:56 - A Cushion For The Heart (Jo)
The safe place we all need at those times we are broken.
Beautifully...
December 16th, 2021 03:04 - No Exit (Coyote)
Oh sweet memories of \'lock-ins\' into the morning hours (lock-ins are...
December 16th, 2021 03:02 - Signs #1 (Saxon Crow)
Whilst we strive, our endeavors will reap the rich rewards which will...
December 16th, 2021 02:44 - Shining Life Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Thats the positivity i love to read, the same positivity flows through me...
December 16th, 2021 02:41 - English rose (Kitty the naughty poet)
A rose is a rose and even the gnarled much trimmed old rosebush has an...
December 16th, 2021 01:52 - Flaying happiness (Kitty the naughty poet)
Something real from you. Well written expression of the tumult inside a...
December 16th, 2021 01:50 - Self induced Insomnia (Woundedheart)
So much romance here carefully crafted into so few lines.
December 16th, 2021 01:41 - CEREBRATE (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully woven words to please my cerebral yuletide conscious.
On...
December 16th, 2021 00:25 - Christmas (James Alexander)
And of course that kind hearted christian god always provides and never...
December 16th, 2021 00:22 - π (FallenAngel1π)
Yep, love can make us bitter but when we experience love we are living...
December 16th, 2021 00:06 - No Longer in The Making (Neville)
Patchouli for me every time. Often found permeating the air in my...
December 15th, 2021 10:07 - Poets Know (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, the search for and joy of the authentic and original, combined with...
December 15th, 2021 10:01 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15) (Michael Edwards)
More pearls of wisdom.
December 15th, 2021 09:54 - Bigger Than We Can Imagine. (Goldfinch60)
A poem for our times indeed.
I take it a day at a time but the future...
December 15th, 2021 09:44 - Blasphemy (Sternie)
There\'s a god or something we could call god but its got sweet FA to do...
December 14th, 2021 10:11 - So Close (Saxon Crow)
Reminds me of a classic line from a 1950\'s cowboy and indian film \"white...
December 14th, 2021 10:06 - Keep Hold (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m reading that those in deep troubled states can only really feel the...
December 14th, 2021 09:59 - Brown (Lorna)
The colour of a full bodied ale to slake a working mans thirst.
What a...
December 14th, 2021 09:54 - Trilby Lady. (Goldfinch60)
People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.
A...
December 14th, 2021 09:52 - Trilby Lady. (Goldfinch60)
People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.
A...
December 14th, 2021 08:46 - Ψ§Ψ΄Ψ§Ψ±Ϋ (Sabir Abbas)
How clever of you to post something in urdu. How many ppl here do you...
December 13th, 2021 19:02 - The Cold (Maymorning)
Nice thought but there are so many fake down and outs these days - how do...
December 13th, 2021 11:29 - Tears of joy (Spilleronsheet)
Nice poem but deffo goes against human nature. We instinctively cry after...
December 13th, 2021 11:24 - Noisy Bird (Rozina)
Blimey, that drawing is the ex mother-in-law to a tee.
I know how you...
December 13th, 2021 04:51 - Our demons against the universe (Kitty the naughty poet)
Peanut butter and jelly/jam a rare treat these days.
THose internal...
December 13th, 2021 03:28 - Santa\'s Sacked! (Saxon Crow)
Thank you for a good laugh with your punchline. You are quite the...
December 13th, 2021 03:22 - The Right Direction. (Goldfinch60)
Yet another pearl of wisdom.
It takes a good few years for most to see...
December 13th, 2021 03:17 - Fried Mouse. (Doggerel Dave)
You\'d be surprised what an emergency set of tools i keep in my...
December 13th, 2021 01:28 - Taken Into Peace. (Goldfinch60)
All the hard work paid off, the congratulations come and the friendly...
December 12th, 2021 10:12 - Fun in DC (Kitty the naughty poet)
Blimey, you\'ve got my Green Lantern glowing with envy now.
December 11th, 2021 06:58 - Yellow (Lorna)
Bright, vibrant happiness of dazzling joy refreshing the eyes of the...
December 11th, 2021 06:56 - Never left just locked away (Poetic Dan)
One day whilst heartbroken my heartbreaker said to me \"life\'s a bitch,...
December 11th, 2021 06:50 - The Final Rehearsal. (Goldfinch60)
Will allthe choir be wearing face masks? Muffled voices were heard in the...
December 11th, 2021 03:07 - Sweet Child, Slow down. (PoeticBiscuit)
The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never...
December 11th, 2021 00:06 - LOVE (Amon)
Love is lifes rainbow and only arrives when all is right.
December 10th, 2021 19:35 - LIVE AGAIN (Nisha Shekhawat)
This speaks to me of preparing one\'s self for the bountys of the life...
December 10th, 2021 16:48 - individualism (Jon Nakapalau)
I was/is for me.
December 10th, 2021 16:34 - Demons (Kitty the naughty poet)
You lucky thing.... having met your soulmate.
A demon put a curse on...
December 10th, 2021 13:51 - Still searching (Poetic Dan)
So sorry to read youve been feeling down my buddy. Blame it on the misery...
December 10th, 2021 13:39 - Camel Drive or Putt? (Goldfinch60)
Cor blimey I would love to see a film of that.... my minds eye sees the...
December 10th, 2021 13:31 - Green (Lorna)
The land of my love. Stuff holidays abroad.... give me leisure time and...
December 10th, 2021 13:27 - 12 Days of Marriage (ish) (Saxon Crow)
Blimey, anyone who fears the question \"does my bum look big in this\"...
December 10th, 2021 13:25 - Dreams We Remember (M.E.M.)
Odd, I wrote about a dream today too, similar perhaps.
December 9th, 2021 17:49 - Where Is God? (Ameljor)
Yep I agree, nothing to do with that crazy man made christian idea of god.
December 9th, 2021 09:27 - Sipping cider from a wine glass (Kitty the naughty poet)
So easy to see mum as mum and not a real person, just a role. But kids...
December 9th, 2021 05:10 - Red (Lorna)
Woaaah there gal..... such passion! Wonderful and succinct expressions of...
December 9th, 2021 04:52 - Choices (Saxon Crow)
Yep! In the words of that well known song \"Free your mind and the rest...
December 9th, 2021 04:50 - Croquet With Nature (Goldfinch60)
You lucky fellah, it\'s rare to see the beauties these days.
December 9th, 2021 02:42 - If canβt wade off, be the brook (Spilleronsheet)
Be in harmony with your surroundings is the answer i think.
December 9th, 2021 02:09 - In Your Grace (Saxon Crow)
Great words of devotion whether they be to a loved one, a faith or your...
December 8th, 2021 14:28 - Hatred (Peepo)
Walking away is controlling the situation. Once you know you have cast it...
December 8th, 2021 10:50 - rusty crawler (Jim56)
Great subject for your poem which flows nicely and of course is really...
December 8th, 2021 10:48 - 10/22 (Hurtbutterfly)
You are one of the lucky ones who have the wherewithall to control those...
December 8th, 2021 10:45 - When I sneeze I please (Anna_noday)
Now THAT is nursing... sat by your bed comforting you by holding your...
December 8th, 2021 10:42 - Unflowered (Fay Slimm.)
I used to enjoy planting seeds in my old green house and marvelling at...
December 8th, 2021 07:05 - FEARS (Rozina)
Safest here upon my sofa.
Goodness me, I\'ve become a Gopher!
I like...
December 8th, 2021 07:01 - Four Horsemen (Kitty the naughty poet)
Cor! defeatist ending.... revel in the first horny half with that knight...
December 8th, 2021 05:11 - The Trade (Lorna)
Our true wealth is not in finance goods, possessions etc but it resides...
December 8th, 2021 05:09 - Mere Carbon (Spilleronsheet)
It\'s what we are, carbon and water. Oh and there\'s that spirit thing...
December 8th, 2021 02:46 - Day Of Your Birth. (Goldfinch60)
A day that couldn\'t pass without a message of undying love.
It\'s...
December 8th, 2021 02:42 - Church Bells (StephanieAnn)
Far from being a believer in what goes on within a church I find many...
December 7th, 2021 16:17 - Handyman (AnAlpaca)
You can do all these things for somebody but.... whether it has the...
December 7th, 2021 16:09 - dont read this (Edgar allan pottatoe)
There are more rewarding investments than money and goods in this life. Do...
December 7th, 2021 16:07 - The Road to Perdition (Coyote)
Never being a believer in the myth of St peter and the pearly gates, this...
December 7th, 2021 15:33 - What if we run away until (Anna_noday)
I\'m game for that leap of faith.
December 7th, 2021 15:03 - Red Resurrected (AL17)
When you have a family to feed you take every opportunity to provide what...
December 7th, 2021 12:36 - Wild Land (Fay Slimm.)
And it all takes place regardless of the activity or presence of humanity...
December 7th, 2021 11:50 - Something of a Quandary (Neville)
Ah, that word again.
For me the sky is blank music manuscript... a...
December 7th, 2021 11:45 - Smothered (Lorna)
We preach planet saving oratory to little point. The planet will endure...
December 7th, 2021 11:40 - Slow Learner (Doggerel Dave)
Can I have a \'one-off\' printed on the bonnet of Goldfinch\'s dream car...
December 7th, 2021 11:38 - My Christmas Present. (Goldfinch60)
Yes i saw that gorgeous beast on top gear too. I don\'t think i could...
December 7th, 2021 11:27 - Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds)
What of the ghosts left behind who did not have a good start being born...
December 4th, 2021 10:48 - Leaden Heart (Lorna)
I know well that feeling of living behind a protective mask where...
December 4th, 2021 10:44 - Mistress PT1 (Kitty the naughty poet)
Will there be whipped cream Mistress Katie?
December 4th, 2021 07:59 - The Lesson Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Tis almost th the same as the way sleeping on a problem often provides a...
December 4th, 2021 07:57 - The Valley (Jack Cohen)
I couldn\'t find a meaning for your word \"Azule\" even on google. What is...
December 3rd, 2021 18:30 - Letter To St. Nick (Michael Anthony)
Great theme for poetry and a very good serving from yourself.
December 3rd, 2021 14:20 - Winter. (The BlackShakespeare)
I like this. Oh for a simpler Christmas in my life LOL
December 3rd, 2021 14:18 - A Man Strong and Disciplined. (Hariom Tripathi)
A very narrow minded viewpoint upon what men are. Men ( and women) are in...
December 3rd, 2021 14:09 - Thoughts Of Dialectician (Per Mare Per Terras)
All the ravens that i see are full of life. Where do you get the idea that...
December 3rd, 2021 14:00 - These Distant Dreams (Saxon Crow)
\"the rusting chains of distraction\"... a line to die for.
May there...
December 3rd, 2021 13:12 - πππππ£ π₯ππ π€π‘πππ π π βππ£ππ€π₯πππ€ (Dove)
mmm \"the soft glow of dusk\" .... what secrets have i been letting...
December 3rd, 2021 13:09 - meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment (SureshG)
A contented persons smile proves harmony.
December 3rd, 2021 13:05 - Looking For The Word (Jerry Reynolds)
I really like this Jerry. But I already see it\'s content has gone over...
December 3rd, 2021 13:03
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