Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60) You lucky man, but w.ho could say you don\'t deserve such days? Long...
  December 22nd, 2021 06:05
• Insecure (Rr_r) The perfect few are just a few. I know about feeling ugly and imperfect. I...
  December 21st, 2021 15:27
• Best Friend vs. Girlfriend (Anna Colette) LOL your post reads like a letter to an agony aunt. Tell your boyfriend...
  December 21st, 2021 12:09
• Protagonist (Screaming goat. (New and Improved)) What fine poetry young lady. You are blessed with a fine talent.
  December 21st, 2021 11:54
• My Friend (Fay Slimm.) Gorgeous looking lil dawg you have there (what breed is she?). From...
  December 21st, 2021 11:49
• christmas feeling (Jim56) Well thats the way we\'d like it to be (or so we are told) but it never is...
  December 21st, 2021 06:58
• Bedroom Games. (Woundedheart) Look I\'m already knackered from Katie earlier.... she WILL insist on...
  December 21st, 2021 06:48
• Quarry (Neville) I did a practice run for my roast potatoes today.... mmmm lufferly they...
  December 21st, 2021 06:46
• I\'m sitting in my car (Anna_noday) This is called stalking LOL We\'ve all done it to some degree or another....
  December 21st, 2021 04:48
• Our Paradise. (Goldfinch60) It most definitely is but along comes the bad weather of arthritis and...
  December 21st, 2021 02:52
• Chair games (Kitty the naughty poet) Erm.... been there, done that.... its good fun and needs trust between...
  December 21st, 2021 02:07
• The Mountain Laurel (James Alexander) Beautiful words to seal a loss of ones lover. I felt this one.
  December 21st, 2021 00:32
• Signing Out (Neville) I had a visit from my muse last evening which was so refreshing. She\'s...
  December 20th, 2021 15:16
• Broken dreams (Jade Wolf) Great \'gritty side of life\' poetry.
  December 20th, 2021 11:54
• my best friend (Jim56) I think you capture the closeness and companionship of a dog here. I love...
  December 20th, 2021 11:51
• Hungry for games (Kitty the naughty poet) Speaks to me of life\'s frustrations quelled by the love intimacy of...
  December 20th, 2021 10:31
• WHAT DID YOU SAY? (Rozina) Say that again LOL Is it me or is the sound on TV really bad these...
  December 20th, 2021 10:20
• Daily Gifts. (Goldfinch60) You\'re right. My mobility is giving probs at the moment, so easily taken...
  December 20th, 2021 10:16
• hopeless dreams, so sweet and promising. (Jinlikesgin) Well this is a very good start here on mps for your great desire to be...
  December 19th, 2021 12:58
• Not long ago I walked alone (Anna_noday) I read in your words the pains of a love\'s ending made more especially...
  December 19th, 2021 11:27
• christmas story (Jim56) Here are some truths about christmas. Mary\'s child jesus christ was...
  December 19th, 2021 07:35
• Angelic Announcement (Orchidee) Where was your god reigning over Israel during the holocaust?
  December 19th, 2021 03:26
• Broken (Kitty the naughty poet) I sincerely hope this is fiction. You really display your poetic art...
  December 19th, 2021 03:14
• The Cricket (James Alexander) Nice story poem very well told. A credit to your skill and art.
  December 19th, 2021 02:28
• Noisy Neighbour. (Goldfinch60) This is it isn\'t it, your revenge for me making you laugh yesterday. Well...
  December 19th, 2021 02:24
• To Be Made Of Stone (FallenAngel1🕊) In the heart of every poet is the magic of dance where pained expression...
  December 19th, 2021 02:20
• The year has gone (Anna_noday) I picked up a life wearyness of \"I knew it was going to happen all...
  December 18th, 2021 04:14
• Heavenly Hope (Orchidee) There you go again Orchi, making up words from the mouth of god....
  December 18th, 2021 03:12
• Rise And Shine (Charles Edward York) When the night is freezing isn\'t it snow which falls from the sky instead...
  December 18th, 2021 02:36
• Rise And Shine (Charles Edward York) When the night is freezing isn\'t it snow which falls from the sky instead...
  December 18th, 2021 02:35
• Butterfly Mind. (Goldfinch60) Did you speak to soon under this rising moon suddenly awake with a...
  December 18th, 2021 02:26
• Karma (Kitty the naughty poet) Cor, a grandma who sees the devil in her grandchildren.... Karma
  December 18th, 2021 02:19
• The Blue Planet (SureshG) This reads like you were viewing from outer space..... oh you bad...
  December 16th, 2021 12:56
• Amber light (Spilleronsheet) A Nice spooky tale well told.
  December 16th, 2021 12:37
• His Call (Fay Slimm.) Cor blimey missus its them saucy dreams of yours again making me spill my...
  December 16th, 2021 05:36
• My Valentine (Ameljor) Ah, the unreal fantasy world of one who holds secretly the desire for...
  December 16th, 2021 05:28
• Tidings (Draven) I dunno where I get my positive outlook from. My mum was a great worrier...
  December 16th, 2021 05:20
• The Realisation of Probability (Neville) Call me a rabbit if you will but i have never had time for \"Ferret...
  December 16th, 2021 05:16
• Praise Professings (Orchidee) What gifts will you provide to god for failing to save all the lives he...
  December 16th, 2021 04:02
• Do Birds Divorce? (Rozina) I guess female humans find it easier than the male to find a partner LOL....
  December 16th, 2021 03:59
• Low-Blow... (Jaimeleigh) I enjoyed reading this, it has great flow and is easily relateable... I\'m...
  December 16th, 2021 03:56
• A Cushion For The Heart (Jo) The safe place we all need at those times we are broken. Beautifully...
  December 16th, 2021 03:04
• No Exit (Coyote) Oh sweet memories of \'lock-ins\' into the morning hours (lock-ins are...
  December 16th, 2021 03:02
• Signs #1 (Saxon Crow) Whilst we strive, our endeavors will reap the rich rewards which will...
  December 16th, 2021 02:44
• Shining Life Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Thats the positivity i love to read, the same positivity flows through me...
  December 16th, 2021 02:41
• English rose (Kitty the naughty poet) A rose is a rose and even the gnarled much trimmed old rosebush has an...
  December 16th, 2021 01:52
• Flaying happiness (Kitty the naughty poet) Something real from you. Well written expression of the tumult inside a...
  December 16th, 2021 01:50
• Self induced Insomnia (Woundedheart) So much romance here carefully crafted into so few lines.
  December 16th, 2021 01:41
• CEREBRATE (Michael Edwards) Beautifully woven words to please my cerebral yuletide conscious. On...
  December 16th, 2021 00:25
• Christmas (James Alexander) And of course that kind hearted christian god always provides and never...
  December 16th, 2021 00:22
• 💔 (FallenAngel1🕊) Yep, love can make us bitter but when we experience love we are living...
  December 16th, 2021 00:06
• No Longer in The Making (Neville) Patchouli for me every time. Often found permeating the air in my...
  December 15th, 2021 10:07
• Poets Know (Fay Slimm.) Yes, the search for and joy of the authentic and original, combined with...
  December 15th, 2021 10:01
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15) (Michael Edwards) More pearls of wisdom.
  December 15th, 2021 09:54
• Bigger Than We Can Imagine. (Goldfinch60) A poem for our times indeed. I take it a day at a time but the future...
  December 15th, 2021 09:44
• Blasphemy (Sternie) There\'s a god or something we could call god but its got sweet FA to do...
  December 14th, 2021 10:11
• So Close (Saxon Crow) Reminds me of a classic line from a 1950\'s cowboy and indian film \"white...
  December 14th, 2021 10:06
• Keep Hold (Fay Slimm.) I\'m reading that those in deep troubled states can only really feel the...
  December 14th, 2021 09:59
• Brown (Lorna) The colour of a full bodied ale to slake a working mans thirst. What a...
  December 14th, 2021 09:54
• Trilby Lady. (Goldfinch60) People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house. A...
  December 14th, 2021 09:52
• Trilby Lady. (Goldfinch60) People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house. A...
  December 14th, 2021 08:46
• اشارہ (Sabir Abbas) How clever of you to post something in urdu. How many ppl here do you...
  December 13th, 2021 19:02
• The Cold (Maymorning) Nice thought but there are so many fake down and outs these days - how do...
  December 13th, 2021 11:29
• Tears of joy (Spilleronsheet) Nice poem but deffo goes against human nature. We instinctively cry after...
  December 13th, 2021 11:24
• The Mirror (Paul Bell) I like your mirror, mine\'s got my dad hiding in it.
  December 13th, 2021 06:22
• Noisy Bird (Rozina) Blimey, that drawing is the ex mother-in-law to a tee. I know how you...
  December 13th, 2021 04:51
• Our demons against the universe (Kitty the naughty poet) Peanut butter and jelly/jam a rare treat these days. THose internal...
  December 13th, 2021 03:28
• Santa\'s Sacked! (Saxon Crow) Thank you for a good laugh with your punchline. You are quite the...
  December 13th, 2021 03:22
• The Right Direction. (Goldfinch60) Yet another pearl of wisdom. It takes a good few years for most to see...
  December 13th, 2021 03:17
• Fried Mouse. (Doggerel Dave) You\'d be surprised what an emergency set of tools i keep in my...
  December 13th, 2021 01:28
• Taken Into Peace. (Goldfinch60) All the hard work paid off, the congratulations come and the friendly...
  December 12th, 2021 10:12
• Fun in DC (Kitty the naughty poet) Blimey, you\'ve got my Green Lantern glowing with envy now.
  December 11th, 2021 06:58
• Yellow (Lorna) Bright, vibrant happiness of dazzling joy refreshing the eyes of the...
  December 11th, 2021 06:56
• Never left just locked away (Poetic Dan) One day whilst heartbroken my heartbreaker said to me \"life\'s a bitch,...
  December 11th, 2021 06:50
• The Final Rehearsal. (Goldfinch60) Will allthe choir be wearing face masks? Muffled voices were heard in the...
  December 11th, 2021 03:07
• Sweet Child, Slow down. (PoeticBiscuit) The intimacy between mother and tiny baby... something a man can never...
  December 11th, 2021 00:06
• LOVE (Amon) Love is lifes rainbow and only arrives when all is right.
  December 10th, 2021 19:35
• LIVE AGAIN (Nisha Shekhawat) This speaks to me of preparing one\'s self for the bountys of the life...
  December 10th, 2021 16:48
• individualism (Jon Nakapalau) I was/is for me.
  December 10th, 2021 16:34
• Demons (Kitty the naughty poet) You lucky thing.... having met your soulmate. A demon put a curse on...
  December 10th, 2021 13:51
• Still searching (Poetic Dan) So sorry to read youve been feeling down my buddy. Blame it on the misery...
  December 10th, 2021 13:39
• Camel Drive or Putt? (Goldfinch60) Cor blimey I would love to see a film of that.... my minds eye sees the...
  December 10th, 2021 13:31
• Green (Lorna) The land of my love. Stuff holidays abroad.... give me leisure time and...
  December 10th, 2021 13:27
• 12 Days of Marriage (ish) (Saxon Crow) Blimey, anyone who fears the question \"does my bum look big in this\"...
  December 10th, 2021 13:25
• Dreams We Remember (M.E.M.) Odd, I wrote about a dream today too, similar perhaps.
  December 9th, 2021 17:49
• Where Is God? (Ameljor) Yep I agree, nothing to do with that crazy man made christian idea of god.
  December 9th, 2021 09:27
• Sipping cider from a wine glass (Kitty the naughty poet) So easy to see mum as mum and not a real person, just a role. But kids...
  December 9th, 2021 05:10
• Red (Lorna) Woaaah there gal..... such passion! Wonderful and succinct expressions of...
  December 9th, 2021 04:52
• Choices (Saxon Crow) Yep! In the words of that well known song \"Free your mind and the rest...
  December 9th, 2021 04:50
• Croquet With Nature (Goldfinch60) You lucky fellah, it\'s rare to see the beauties these days.
  December 9th, 2021 02:42
• If can’t wade off, be the brook (Spilleronsheet) Be in harmony with your surroundings is the answer i think.
  December 9th, 2021 02:09
• In Your Grace (Saxon Crow) Great words of devotion whether they be to a loved one, a faith or your...
  December 8th, 2021 14:28
• Hatred (Peepo) Walking away is controlling the situation. Once you know you have cast it...
  December 8th, 2021 10:50
• rusty crawler (Jim56) Great subject for your poem which flows nicely and of course is really...
  December 8th, 2021 10:48
• 10/22 (Hurtbutterfly) You are one of the lucky ones who have the wherewithall to control those...
  December 8th, 2021 10:45
• When I sneeze I please (Anna_noday) Now THAT is nursing... sat by your bed comforting you by holding your...
  December 8th, 2021 10:42
• Dump Protocol (Paul Bell) I definitely came out of this confused and i read it three times! But hey,...
  December 8th, 2021 07:08
• Unflowered (Fay Slimm.) I used to enjoy planting seeds in my old green house and marvelling at...
  December 8th, 2021 07:05
• FEARS (Rozina) Safest here upon my sofa. Goodness me, I\'ve become a Gopher! I like...
  December 8th, 2021 07:01
• Four Horsemen (Kitty the naughty poet) Cor! defeatist ending.... revel in the first horny half with that knight...
  December 8th, 2021 05:11