Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Sheep (Sorenbarrett) Often people become fixed in a way of believing because those around them...
  March 29th, 2022 17:57
• Love And Light (Sophenia) I can assure you that this place MPS is a place where you can express...
  March 29th, 2022 05:04
• The path to enlightenment (Sophenia) To quote the words of a famous rock song \"Shine on you crazy...
  March 29th, 2022 04:52
• VIEWS FROM THE OTHER SIDE OF FENCE (Michael Edwards) This chap Hugh has a lot going for him. A touchy subject this...
  March 29th, 2022 03:19
• World Piano Day. (Goldfinch60) So when is world kazoo day then? Or world comb and tissue paper day?...
  March 29th, 2022 03:14
• projected violence (Jon Nakapalau) A clever fun write sir. Match point.
  March 28th, 2022 17:48
• Not A Saint (Christina8) To miss out on the passion in your words? Who the heck wants to be a...
  March 28th, 2022 17:45
• Perspective (Sorenbarrett) This is a great play with words and fearing a headache i gave up trying to...
  March 28th, 2022 13:25
• Crafty Spring (Fay Slimm.) Now that tickled me. \"Young Spring hangs around to tickle ground\'s...
  March 28th, 2022 05:39
• Zen Tree (Neville) The most relaxing of sounds are those of trees swaying gently in a breeze....
  March 28th, 2022 05:32
• To The Top Of The Hill. (Goldfinch60) I agree with Neville\'s comments above. Your positivity is such...
  March 28th, 2022 05:18
• ONCE (Michael Edwards) As a young man i wore three piece suits to work and was often complimented...
  March 28th, 2022 03:26
• glorious mystery (Dahlia) I love the positivity in this piece.
  March 27th, 2022 15:14
• Anxiety (Christina8) I think i know a little bit about anxiety though i don\'t have it as a...
  March 27th, 2022 12:04
• Mothering (Fay Slimm.) Letting go for mums must be fraught with terror and pride at the same...
  March 27th, 2022 11:56
• On the Cusp of a Sneeze .. (Neville) Cold winter winds outside can stir nostalgic thoughts. Alone times spur...
  March 27th, 2022 11:44
• Sailing With Love. (Goldfinch60) And long may a fair wind fill your sail.
  March 27th, 2022 11:39
• Worth (DestinysPerspectives) Self knowledge and self worth are the finest gifts one can have. To have...
  March 26th, 2022 15:27
• Tiny Feet (Annemarie) I love this, I think one of the most appealing things about kiddies is...
  March 26th, 2022 12:34
• It doesn\'t matter (Crowns4Christ) LOL Thanks for the implication that I\'m chained to satan. Why do...
  March 26th, 2022 11:36
• What Happened Alice... (Simplyalice) LOL, I\'m 70.. I know what happened only too well. But what about the...
  March 26th, 2022 06:18
• Sometimes...without a Reason (Simplyalice) The descending mood of depression grasps like a fist and borders on panic....
  March 26th, 2022 06:15
• Oh Woman !!! (Simplyalice) That\'s just as it should be, equal rights and opportunity for all.
  March 26th, 2022 06:09
• We always Knew… (Simplyalice) Wow. I love this for it\'s very personal decoration with intimate moments,...
  March 26th, 2022 06:07
• Poetry Sense (Simplyalice) Each of these could be considered to be the basis of a much larger piece....
  March 26th, 2022 06:03
• Never Going Nowhere Maybe (Neville) Those highs in life are with us always and remind us of how lucky we have...
  March 26th, 2022 05:13
• The Eruption Of Spring. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful celebration of nature\'s joy - springtime - rebirth of colour -...
  March 26th, 2022 05:03
• War Veterans (Doggerel Dave) Pathetic isn\'t it \"I\'ll have my men sent in to kill your men and...
  March 26th, 2022 04:57
• Lost Innocence (Sorenbarrett) My grandchildren have just had their fourth and eighth birthdays. I found...
  March 25th, 2022 07:27
• The Death Train (Paul Bell) Sadly there are no platform tickets to watch the train depart. We take our...
  March 25th, 2022 07:22
• Nameless (Fay Slimm.) All too relevant words for todays conflict where conscripts are fed...
  March 25th, 2022 07:16
• Accept Truth. (Goldfinch60) Everything changes but change can be hard to accept. Widom wins the day...
  March 25th, 2022 06:48
• Death (1995) (HoosainBanoo) Oh for some proff od any of this LOL
  March 24th, 2022 13:12
• SPECSAVERS CHALLENGE (Michael Edwards) Roses are red your eyes are green they once were china blue before you...
  March 24th, 2022 04:44
• Taking it Slow (Neville) \"It\'s only a small one\" she said \"pop it in here and keep it warm\"....
  March 24th, 2022 04:41
• Back Together. (Goldfinch60) We should start a competition - \"what\'s the nicest was to catch...
  March 24th, 2022 04:38
• Daily test! (Poetic Dan) That last line says so much but all too often it\'s truth is only realised...
  March 22nd, 2022 08:01
• Unfolding (Fay Slimm.) By \'eck Fay, tha knows me too well, you\'ve described me to a T here \"A...
  March 22nd, 2022 07:56
• Not Just An Old Fella Passing (Neville) Are we the last generation to respect our elders? All the adults around me...
  March 22nd, 2022 05:31
• Am I A Romantic. (Goldfinch60) Well I dunno, seems you\'ve come over all strange.Maybe it\'s a side...
  March 22nd, 2022 05:12
• The Toaster (Paul Bell) Love it. Underneath it all lies the idiocy of our mixed feelings in a...
  March 21st, 2022 19:10
• Where all things meet (Sorenbarrett) Ah yes, isn\'t the human mind incredible to create romatic associations...
  March 21st, 2022 19:06
• Life Reset. (Goldfinch60) I think maybe a certain lady has found your \'reset button\' Andy.
  March 21st, 2022 04:32
• A VISIT CANCELLED (Michael Edwards) a missile, a bomb or a murderous shooting which poisonous death awaits ...
  March 21st, 2022 04:29
• Pain In The Proverbial. (Goldfinch60) What goes around comes around. Hope you don\'t suffer too much and are...
  March 20th, 2022 11:00
• це не просто синій і золотий прапор, чи не так (Neville) Russia was coming good and they loved the west after perestoika but putin...
  March 19th, 2022 12:54
• Being Kind. (Goldfinch60) A smile can be a gift. A smile can lighten a strangers darkness. A smile...
  March 19th, 2022 02:02
• Peace Like My River. (Goldfinch60) Why indeed, that would be a world changer. But aside from that, I wish...
  March 18th, 2022 06:05
• Even When it’s All Over It’s Not Necessarily Over (Neville) For as long as a memory lasts or better still, once written down (as...
  March 17th, 2022 13:26
• Portals in the mind (Poetic Dan) Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken...
  March 17th, 2022 12:25
• Fighting Spirit (Christina8) I read here, through your message, that poetry writing can set us free to...
  March 17th, 2022 09:29
• Where the heart is (Sorenbarrett) Nice one because to appreciate your poem you have to see more than it\'s...
  March 17th, 2022 09:16
• The Journey of Life (AL17) I thought i was going to be critical of this piece, it\'s title from a 12...
  March 17th, 2022 07:40
• Mind (Joslouis) LOL are you letting your childhood brainwash of christian values interfere...
  March 17th, 2022 07:35
• Moon Love. (Goldfinch60) Long may the gifts of life be present in your eyes and surround you with...
  March 17th, 2022 04:05
• What Might Once Have Been (Neville) Reality is but an illusion.....
  March 16th, 2022 14:02
• Darkness To Light. (Goldfinch60) \"You may say I\'m a dreamer, but I\'m not the only one. I hope someday...
  March 16th, 2022 02:35
• LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99 (Michael Edwards) The passion he felt in his heart one could see well expressed in his...
  March 16th, 2022 02:15
• Taunting Muse. (Goldfinch60) And I sometimes try to capture my thoughts on a notepad app on my phone....
  March 15th, 2022 03:40
• LIMERICK 91 (Michael Edwards) He wished upon a wishbone wanting not to be alone his wish came...
  March 15th, 2022 03:34
• Who Needs Perfection. (Goldfinch60) Well I\'ve reached the grand old age of being just a tad younger than you...
  March 11th, 2022 03:17
• Ephemeral Embrace (Sorenbarrett) Such are the regrets on waking from euphoric dreams. Delaying arising to...
  March 10th, 2022 12:19
• The Simple (Fay Slimm.) I wonder if western civilisation will find more value in the \'stuff\' we...
  March 10th, 2022 12:14
• Oedipus (Neville) Oh that awful day when I bent to kiss granny goodbye and she stuck her...
  March 10th, 2022 12:09
• Schubert Starts The Day (Goldfinch60) A tuneful fart greeted the throwing back of the quilt - Mahler i do...
  March 10th, 2022 12:07
• My Mum (Rozina) How fortunate you are to be the daughter of such a marvellous woman. Your...
  March 10th, 2022 12:02
• Be To Me (Fay Slimm.) Be my rock, the one who is my always. Be the end of doubt and the pleasure...
  March 9th, 2022 09:26
• That Book. (Goldfinch60) Plugged the headphones in and glad I did. Really enjoyed Rick Braun\'s...
  March 9th, 2022 02:37
• Fore and Aft (Neville) All those ups and downs.... like a country road in fine weather.... a time...
  March 9th, 2022 02:29
• I Would (Fay Slimm.) And if thee were my nurse dear poet i\'m sure thine holding of my pulsing...
  March 8th, 2022 13:17
• Same Old Blue Jeans (Neville) Time was back in the sixties when we all wore denim jeans and denim...
  March 8th, 2022 13:06
• INSECURITIES (Ivy Madara) That is a well written piece. Gripping too. Welcome to MPS.
  March 8th, 2022 08:14
• Homes for heroes. (Chris Duffy) Yep. Society plays some sick games with us if we aren\'t a part of their...
  March 8th, 2022 08:12
• Homes for heroes. (Chris Duffy) Yep. Society plays some sick games with us if we aren\'t a part of their...
  March 8th, 2022 08:11
• Why, I celebrate March 8th (L. B. Mek) Your positivity shines through this one LBM.
  March 8th, 2022 04:10
• More Wonderful. (Goldfinch60) I thought about your question. Why. And I reckon it\'s is because you...
  March 8th, 2022 03:24
• The glimmer (Spilleronsheet) I think it would be wise to say that patience is slowly gained after the...
  March 7th, 2022 08:06
• Yellowness (Fay Slimm.) I have not been out among the fields of Daffodils for two years now.... ...
  March 7th, 2022 07:57
• Total Success. (Goldfinch60) Leave it out Andy. You don\'t have bad days anymore - you\'re not allowed...
  March 7th, 2022 07:45
• How Well Will You Remember Me (Neville) Yes I wonder these things too, but it must be so if true love was...
  March 7th, 2022 07:40
• Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (Rozina) I have known people who transform into quite different people after...
  March 7th, 2022 07:35
• Chewing Gum Doggerel (Doggerel Dave) I remember this song from wee childhood days along with hang down yer head...
  March 7th, 2022 07:22
• Untitled - LVII (SureshG) An assasination wouldn\'t be out of order. I bet he ain\'t popular among...
  March 6th, 2022 13:51
• Encroachment (Fay Slimm.) Yes, no matterwhat mankind does to the landscape, the environment, the...
  March 6th, 2022 05:41
• New Life Together. (Goldfinch60) (My best Tommy Trinder impersonation ===>) You Lucky People. So...
  March 6th, 2022 02:34
• No Ordinary Woman (Neville) Deffo no such thing as an ordinary woman exists.... i can show you the...
  March 6th, 2022 02:10
• When You Were Mine: Villanelle (Dove) Aha another villanelle... i\'m thinking you\'re enjoying composing these -...
  March 4th, 2022 09:10
• Youth\'s Blood (Fay Slimm.) \"Am I hurtin you soldier\" \"No sir\" \"Well I bloody well ought to be,...
  March 4th, 2022 05:47
• The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue (Neville) the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather...
  March 4th, 2022 03:34
• LIMERICKS 94 95 & 96 (Michael Edwards) There once was a lady called Lou who went on a trip to the zoo she got...
  March 4th, 2022 03:26
• In The Game. (Goldfinch60) Some are even ON the game. This deck of cards analogy really does fall...
  March 4th, 2022 02:26
• where am I (Siranswerer) Escapism... yes please... gimmie more.
  March 3rd, 2022 13:31
• An Answer Without a Question (Sorenbarrett) I deny in full agreement where bright colours lead me through...
  March 3rd, 2022 11:33
• Railway Station: Villanelle (Dove) I guess you got railroaded. I\'d bever heard of a villanelle so googled....
  March 3rd, 2022 10:55
• The hypocritic (Spilleronsheet) Well I think you weighed me up rather well in this piece. Though i have...
  March 3rd, 2022 10:46
• Hold Me Like Clair De Lune (Rocky Lagou) I discovered Debussy in the 1970\'s and Clair de Lune has been my...
  March 3rd, 2022 10:11
• We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.) Great message but i\'ll wait till i\'m older to take your advice. I\'ve so...
  March 3rd, 2022 06:58
• The Tale of Brulee (Neville) Is it a dog?.... is it a plane?...... is it a bird?...... It\'s...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:53
• BLOOD (Rozina) Love that picture, as soon as i saw it it made me laugh. I\'m in total...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:47
• Into Abyss (FallenAngel1🕊) Now that\'s a really romantic title mate LOL. But the poetry is...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:43