Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
There writes a man rich with the wealth many overlook.
May 5th, 2022 02:46 - ODDITIES (6) (Michael Edwards)
Did you know that Adam actually had a wife before Eve? It\'s true her name...
May 4th, 2022 02:38 - Expensive Liquid. (Goldfinch60)
These expensive tears have such a cost - we end up being broke.
May 4th, 2022 02:29 - Fish Supper (Neville)
Though I be of Cornish line all this be foreign to me, but it do make a...
May 2nd, 2022 05:11 - Whale Play (Fay Slimm.)
Amazing creatures. How terrible has been our plundering relationship with...
May 2nd, 2022 05:08 - Thumper (Jayasree)
Aww porr little thing only lived a few days. Where was Thumper rescued...
May 2nd, 2022 05:01 - Searching... (EmotionsOnwhitepaper)
Wherever you are destined to be, you WILL get there. Life is not a race -...
May 2nd, 2022 02:01 - Spring To Life. (Goldfinch60)
Hmm that grass cutting problem. This year I\'m going to leave most of my...
May 2nd, 2022 01:29 - Farmer\'s Lament (Saxon Crow)
Nice to read following our comments yesterday.
May 2nd, 2022 01:19 - Taking a stand (RubyRae)
Yes, be the true individual that you are.
May 2nd, 2022 01:12 - Waiting (Spilleronsheet)
Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller...
May 1st, 2022 07:00 - May\'s Rising (Fay Slimm.)
Oh your last stanza is a pearl of a life lived\'s wisdom.
My mind\'s eye...
May 1st, 2022 06:56 - Death In The Rain (Paul Bell)
Wow. I\'m unsure of what\'s going on here but this is compelling reading...
May 1st, 2022 06:48 - Skylark (Saxon Crow)
The sad reality of farming though unfair for us to consider farmers to be...
May 1st, 2022 06:43 - Upon Reflections Shattered (Neville)
By \'eck what a cracker Neville. Always been a fan of the sucinct and this...
May 1st, 2022 06:29 - NOR MOURNING TO MAKE (Michael Edwards)
Yes life goes on in it\'s familiarity with the path we have etched out for...
May 1st, 2022 06:26 - Helping Others Is Special. (Goldfinch60)
I enjoy the company of older people and the gentle warmth of their group...
May 1st, 2022 06:18 - Love and fear (Sorenbarrett)
So true. We are and we become the love that we share.
April 29th, 2022 13:43 - Hunger\'s Den :) (Vamsi Sudha)
But the kitchen at parties is where it all happens.... know what i mean?...
April 29th, 2022 12:30 - Wellness Way (Rocky Lagou)
A great celebration of strength of our innate spiritual awareness that we,...
April 29th, 2022 11:14 - These Falls (Fay Slimm.)
Your words brought back the memory and atmosphere of a dramatic falls just...
April 29th, 2022 09:38 - Flights Of Fancy (Rozina)
Your poem today is great fun and i enjoyed reading it, i burst out...
April 29th, 2022 03:21 - New Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So I take it youre blaming the coffee are you. A tad unfair i thought.
April 29th, 2022 02:08 - Sleep?! (Saxon Crow)
I know whay you mean, those aliens always leave me knackered after theyve...
April 29th, 2022 02:05 - ODDITIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
LOL I reiterate your sentiment ...iterate... iterate.
When you reverse...
April 29th, 2022 02:00 - 1st Words To My Psychiatrist(Following the greetings) (FallenAngel1🕊)
But.... But... But.... we\'ve already read about them in your poetry.
April 28th, 2022 21:32 - Strawberrying (Rocky Lagou)
I can\'t get into the mindset of those criminals who do such terrible...
April 28th, 2022 10:19 - Almost a sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
The kind of love we all desire and should feel.
I am a loner. Alone in...
April 28th, 2022 10:13 - Encounter (Fay Slimm.)
There is something primeval in the magnificence of a flight of geese and...
April 28th, 2022 10:05 - Dreams (Spilleronsheet)
Indeed, just what are dreams for I have had some very strange ones over...
April 28th, 2022 09:56 - Taking in the Seeds come Harvest (Neville)
HEY said the landlord, what about rejoicing down the pub?
Brought back...
April 28th, 2022 09:45 - But The Wine Was Better. (Goldfinch60)
Great to hear the vibraphone again - had to put head[hones on specially....
April 28th, 2022 09:30 - In-between Moments of Dusk and Night (Saxon Crow)
My favourite time of day Saxon and I love your take on it, absolutely love...
April 28th, 2022 09:20 - Just A Little Poetic Thought (Rocky Lagou)
Oh that very last line. Never forget that, among all the greats, what...
April 27th, 2022 12:49 - Dust Devil (Jerry Reynolds)
I like this, it has mischief.
April 27th, 2022 12:45 - Drowning (Draven)
I like the way you build the drama through this piece.
April 27th, 2022 12:43 - Adherence (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s all foreign to me, living alone and looking back to childhood hmm...
April 27th, 2022 06:13 - Children\'s Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Your people watching poetry is always chirpy and revealing. Obviously that...
April 27th, 2022 06:04 - ODDITIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
JUst have sympathy for the snake who accidentally ate a viagra pill -...
April 27th, 2022 06:00 - The Caterpillar Slaughter (Saxon Crow)
Now i\'m wondering if caterpillers are a delicacy in the bird world or is...
April 27th, 2022 05:56 - OBVLIVIOUS (FallenAngel1🕊)
Maybe if you took some water with it LOL
April 27th, 2022 05:25 - Daddy (Christina8)
Yes, sad indeed but on the other hand you are better off by not having a...
April 26th, 2022 15:19 - Psychological cancer (Sorenbarrett)
WE shall all share the peace of interment or cremation one day though I...
April 26th, 2022 08:38 - Some things are Just Not Right (Neville)
No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
I feel we must srtive...
April 26th, 2022 08:28 - Yonder (Fay Slimm.)
As one who has dwelt in yonder for several years I confirm it outshines...
April 26th, 2022 03:32 - FIRES UNLIT (Michael Edwards)
I\'d like to say... but i won\'t... because there isn\'t a, well there...
April 26th, 2022 02:27 - What Memory? (Goldfinch60)
I laughed out loud at your last two lines. I\'m tempted to say \'but i...
April 26th, 2022 01:14 - To Snail (Saxon Crow)
I think snails are marvelous creatures and your words are a fine tribute...
April 26th, 2022 01:08 - The death of Osiris (Sorenbarrett)
There are many \'sunlights\' we may bathe in and whilst relaxed take them...
April 25th, 2022 13:42 - as they all went forward – I looked back (Rocky Lagou)
I remember similar feelings as a young man. As i grew older the choices i...
April 25th, 2022 13:38 - Responsibility flew away (Poetic Dan)
On the beach alone with the springtime - a healing time Dan for the inner...
April 25th, 2022 13:26 - Mom (Christina8)
Hi mom, I read some words about you today from a daughter who loves you...
April 25th, 2022 13:13 - Remain (Draven)
And lighter, brighter days will come again.
Once we have lived in the...
April 25th, 2022 13:07 - Gossiping (Rozina)
I think we all gossip though not in a malicious way, that\'s the reserve...
April 25th, 2022 13:03 - First Flush (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - there you are Fay, I wondered where you\'d gone.
Is that the vase...
April 25th, 2022 12:57 - Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville)
Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and...
April 25th, 2022 12:49 - Prayer to a Friend (Saxon Crow)
I like it. Who or whatever we perceive our god to be, or even for those...
April 25th, 2022 12:34 - Pedantry Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
If it\'s wrong then it\'s wrong at first glimpse
Doesn\'t matter, you...
April 25th, 2022 12:28 - Putin (Classicmister)
He just another dictator
and call me one of his haters
but even his...
April 24th, 2022 07:49 - Good Life Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Karl Denver... sun arise.....
Great positive writing Andy, so have a...
April 24th, 2022 06:46 - Inside Her Pants #2 (Neville)
There\'s something about these small furry animals - ya just can\'t leave...
April 24th, 2022 06:44 - Twilight (Sorenbarrett)
My favourite time of day... just add the evening song of a blackbird and...
April 24th, 2022 06:42 - Food for Thought (Saxon Crow)
2nd helpings for me please.
April 24th, 2022 04:22 - On thanking God (NafisaSB)
Dont forget to thank your god for earthquakes and tsunamis, famines and...
April 23rd, 2022 17:13 - We were not created in God\'s image we created God in ours (Sorenbarrett)
Very well said but ... ssshhh the brainwashed may be watching and you\'ll...
April 23rd, 2022 08:15 - What the Drunken Farmer Said (Neville)
For me birdsong is the music of the great outdoors subliminally...
April 23rd, 2022 04:50 - EARTH DAY (Laura🌻)
It\'s good that we have a movement to look after and repair our planet...
April 23rd, 2022 04:46 - Deep Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
You realise we\'re all going to want invites dont you?
April 23rd, 2022 04:40 - WE’RE GOING SHOPPING (Michael Edwards)
LOL good job you didn\'t ask her to put a shed on it.
Oh my i havent...
April 23rd, 2022 04:39 - The Collaborator (Saxon Crow)
Aha, bovine and canine hate crime exposed. (Were you tempted to write...
April 23rd, 2022 04:20 - CO2-ified Lungs (Haiku/Senryū #5) (Rocky Lagou)
If there\'s as much financial profit to be made in mending the earth as...
April 22nd, 2022 09:37 - Just a mollusk (Sorenbarrett)
Wonderful words about these incredible beasties. ive heard it said that of...
April 22nd, 2022 05:36 - Coffee (Rozina)
I\'ve long been a coffee lover but i cant get my favourite beans anymore....
April 22nd, 2022 05:20 - Let the change in (Sophenia)
Wonderful watershed poetry. A time for grasping those reins and moving on....
April 22nd, 2022 05:12 - Love #1 (Saxon Crow)
All true but most importantly - love teaches us.
Great poem to get us...
April 22nd, 2022 05:09 - My Sunset Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Those clouds enhance the view of a good sunset Andy.
April 22nd, 2022 05:06 - LIMERICKS Â 111, 112 and 113 (Michael Edwards)
There was a young lady from Horton
who had a long tit and a short...
April 22nd, 2022 05:00 - Senryu #4 (Laura🌻)
When the mind will not rest and sleepless hours torment... what better way...
April 22nd, 2022 04:30 - Turquoisa (Neville)
For me, the colours of the ocean over sand as i bathe in memories of its...
April 21st, 2022 03:11 - Another Lands Flag in a Poor Country (Saxon Crow)
You got me thinking with these words today. Still a great nation but we...
April 21st, 2022 02:56 - My YOUNGER Brother. (Goldfinch60)
Pah! grey hairs, you\'re both lucky that you have any hair. Mines shaven...
April 21st, 2022 02:44 - Too Close For The Comfort Of My Heart (FallenAngel1🕊)
Nicely expressed human nature. I guess us poets are an emotional bunch and...
April 21st, 2022 02:36 - In and outside (Sorenbarrett)
I have decided to go it alone but so as not to appear unusual i have now...
April 20th, 2022 04:44 - LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111 (Michael Edwards)
110 had me in fits on the second line. I love them all.
Finally he\'d...
April 20th, 2022 03:02 - Touching Ways. (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t worry - be happy.
Oh i so agree, being pleasant and friendly...
April 20th, 2022 02:47 - Be unique and they will admire (Sophenia)
I was brought up to conform in a terribly middle class sillyness which has...
April 20th, 2022 02:45 - Don’t Talk to Me of … (Neville)
Wise words from you. Though late in the day, how lucky to recognise a...
April 20th, 2022 02:33 - Senryu #2 (Laura🌻)
How true, life is for living - right now.
April 20th, 2022 02:26 - Turn off the oven, Sylvia Plath (Rocky Lagou)
The way you have written here really drew me into the person... well some...
April 19th, 2022 13:40 - Ups and downs (Sorenbarrett)
Enjoyed your clever and fun words today - smiling.
April 19th, 2022 11:56 - Fast And Furious (Rozina)
Made me smile and is so very reminiscent of the few masterchef and master...
April 19th, 2022 06:33 - Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake (Neville)
Memories lay like a mist upon the landscapes of our mind yet blow in the...
April 19th, 2022 06:30 - New Life With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
With all the pains and sufferings in our world today it is quite lovely...
April 19th, 2022 06:21 - Let\'s (Saxon Crow)
Your poetry today is the footsteps to life\'s dance. Uplifting and...
April 19th, 2022 06:13 - Psychotic world (Sorenbarrett)
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in...
April 18th, 2022 16:44 - A Bit of Tradition/A Bit of Nostalgia (Laura🌻)
Your words brought back wonderful memories of family picnics with my very...
April 18th, 2022 16:37 - River and the See (Jerry Reynolds)
Impressive play on words Jerry.
April 18th, 2022 16:33 - Ye Wings of Wisdom (Rocky Lagou)
And you fly ! Yes you do, we see it.
What a super way to convey your...
April 18th, 2022 16:32 - beautiful pastime (Dusk arising)
Well if you could find me a few ladies upon whom to experiment, I\'d like...
April 18th, 2022 09:20 - The family tree (Sophenia)
An interrsting read for me because my family experience is the complete...
April 18th, 2022 05:40
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