Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- My Way (The Fife Wanderer)
Orright, I promise not to be rude....go for it...!
December 21st, 2024 21:51 - I Hate to see you cry (Kevin Hulme)
Will you be able to extract her (assuming she wants to be extracted by...
December 21st, 2024 21:47 - Signs of The Times x5 (Neville)
Thems the times alright and sorry I\'ve got to hurry I\'ve got to...
December 21st, 2024 19:51 - Longest Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - the Solstice and all the celebrations around it always made more...
December 21st, 2024 19:34 - Wanna fall in love? (Rhmn_7)
\"You don\'t want love,
but a shiny glittery copy.\"
Shouldn\'t really...
December 21st, 2024 19:26 - The book (2781)
Fiction is a strange animal. It can provide a greater truth, inaccessible...
December 21st, 2024 19:14 - God\'s Christmas (Sorenbarrett)
Let folks make what they will of the Festive Season. You have made it with...
December 21st, 2024 18:59 - Why? (Tristan Robert Lange)
I don’t think the question can be answered other than to remind that...
December 21st, 2024 18:23 - Never Buy A Cyclops A Kitten! - Sonnet- (Thad Wilk)
Thanks for the tip – I’ll buy me a dog
Be useful – I have no depth...
December 21st, 2024 17:14 - AND THE PAST TENSE IS: AWAKE (Michael Edwards)
\'course you were wide awake - you were too tense.....
Never saw you as...
December 21st, 2024 02:30 - God`s Gift To Us (Poetic Licence)
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway?...
December 21st, 2024 01:58 - Come On It`s Christmas (Poetic Licence)
Monumental effort.
And of course it is bloody poetry...For the record,...
December 21st, 2024 01:47 - When nature calls.. (NafisaSB)
A lovely pastoral. Unfortunately not everyone can live in such an...
December 20th, 2024 22:00 - They Are Not DRONES In The Sky! (Thad Wilk)
You know what’s going on, Thad:
It’s a big cover story you can tell...
December 20th, 2024 18:16 - Dang Tree! (Orchidee)
You never know - depending on how she woz perched , she could be having...
December 20th, 2024 17:56 - Tomorrow Ask Me Why I Remain Confused (Cheeky Missy)
Think I’ll settle for a ‘Happy Festive Season’ if you don’t...
December 20th, 2024 17:50 - Finding the Right Words (Rebellion_in_sanity)
There is no option but to keep struggling though. And I\'d be the first to...
December 20th, 2024 16:30 - A Soldier’s Story (Kevin Hulme)
An anti-war poem packed with compelling complex images, you make your...
December 19th, 2024 18:03 - Gone a Fishin\'! -Redneck- (Thad Wilk)
As a sales representative for the nation’s best beers,
Expect you got...
December 19th, 2024 17:55 - Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy (Sorenbarrett)
False modesty, Soren. Clear picture there (and also truthful).
Pop out as...
December 19th, 2024 17:31 - What Is LOVE? Part.1 (Melancholic~Onion)
You will find full on support for these propositions from me spread across...
December 19th, 2024 16:44 - The fly (Sorenbarrett)
Sorry to be a fly in the ointment (ho ho ho) but I do think they should...
December 18th, 2024 17:01 - Love Is All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Well since you put it like that.... The kind of love I understand. Good...
December 18th, 2024 16:33 - To the Girl with the Titian Hair (Kevin Hulme)
Would go well as a song.
December 17th, 2024 23:51 - In which the Blackbird Ponders on the What and the Why (Kevin Hulme)
That is a very neat job and a worthwhile read. I don\'t know how I missed...
December 17th, 2024 23:48 - Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett)
I\'ll circle around for a bit longer if you don\'t mind - if I take this...
December 17th, 2024 23:16 - autumn chofu (Arqios)
Cherry blossoms are in Spring, aren\'t they? A shame..... next time?
December 17th, 2024 17:35 - SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive (Melancholic~Onion)
‘the words of an angsty teenager’ made sense to me at the other end of...
December 17th, 2024 17:21 - Alien Nation (DreamTiger)
Which alien nation? I\'d like to know who I am listening to.
December 17th, 2024 17:04 - Killer Zombie Clown! [ extended Sonnet ] (Thad Wilk)
You introduce us to some outrageous characters, Thad.
How come a man...
December 17th, 2024 16:59 - The Snake that Eats its Own Tail (Vicecream)
In Australia we have the hoop snake - imported, it would seem from the USA...
December 17th, 2024 16:43 - season\'s jailbreak (Arqios)
Go turkeys - who do you think clipped the wire mesh?
December 16th, 2024 17:05 - Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange)
After the great conversations above I find myself with very little to add...
December 16th, 2024 16:30 - [ Our Sea Of Love ] (Thad Wilk)
While I\'m not much into love poetry, I\'m prepared to grudgingly concede...
December 16th, 2024 15:55 - Little Things (Cassie58)
A rich complete picture with both colour and movement easily viewed in my...
December 16th, 2024 15:39 - Poseidon\'s bones (Sorenbarrett)
You are giving Dr Google a run for his money up there, Soren.
December 16th, 2024 06:28 - Into The New Year. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve certainly have a way with words Andy, and I will take that...
December 16th, 2024 06:17 - Ticking Clock of Doom (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Wanted to creep me out? You succeeded. Not one I intend to fave.... I want...
December 15th, 2024 23:03 - `~ Love Is In The Air -Limericks Chain- (Thad Wilk)
A limerick’s great I can tell you;
But not if it’s about doggie...
December 15th, 2024 16:59 - Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville)
Know this bloke (got his magnet card thingy on me fridge) will fix...
December 15th, 2024 08:50 - Peace on earth, good will (Sorenbarrett)
Tree as a symbol, a personification perhaps, of all that many see as a...
December 14th, 2024 22:42 - The Odds of Breaking Even (GeekSusie)
Have yourselves a great Festive Season.
December 14th, 2024 20:26 - Vlad and Donald (Poetic Licence)
Open solid piece with some keen insight into the current situation:...
December 14th, 2024 17:46 - ~> If I Was A Dawg! _ Monorhyme_ (Thad Wilk)
Good fur you, Thad:
Well now wot in this instance can I say?
We’ve...
December 14th, 2024 17:17 - Celestial Trading (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Keep the wormhole open wide. Let them all through with promises of...
December 14th, 2024 16:47 - The Consequences of Failing to Prep (Neville)
Neva had God ferbids for which I am supremely grateful..........
........
December 14th, 2024 05:13 - New Years Resolution (Poetic Licence)
You writ it... I\'ve read it... I\'ve commented... you can now say \'thank...
December 13th, 2024 20:34 - Afterwards #2 (Neville)
Feels exhausting... hope he has the energy to see it through...... to...
December 13th, 2024 20:28 - Grey Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Through all the mist and misery appeared......... not just optimism, but...
December 13th, 2024 20:22 - Blind (2781)
I think you have something there, but I can\'t see a way to comment on it...
December 13th, 2024 19:57 - Once Upon A Time! (Thad Wilk)
But a boner a day woulda kept Bowser happy:
His master, she don’t have...
December 13th, 2024 19:44 - One Out of Five (Tristan Robert Lange)
This is rich and complex, Tristan. Seems your piece has thrown up many...
December 13th, 2024 19:10 - Secrets (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Depends on the secret, I suppose….
My feeling is that the excessive...
December 13th, 2024 18:15 - Steps (NafisaSB)
I missed your survivour dance - I\'ll catch up when I get the steps...
December 12th, 2024 19:58 - Glimmer of Frost (Arqios)
Beauty on a postcard; \'chills to the core\' - the reality . Noted that...
December 12th, 2024 19:38 - Dementia’s Cruel Kiss (Neville)
No \'me\' no \'I\' no........ \'soul\' ....nothing.
December 12th, 2024 18:26 - This Is My City (Tom Dylan)
I seem to have mentioned this before, Tom, but the impression it left in...
December 12th, 2024 18:19 - 354 Presents - Doing the Maths! (Orchidee)
Is that a progression or just progress, do you think? Despite all the...
December 12th, 2024 18:09 - Complicit (Rebellion_in_sanity)
As I try to write this one line, there\'s a clown on the radio who has...
December 12th, 2024 17:53 - Who Said I Had Anything to Add? (Cheeky Missy)
Your top sonnet is in just the right place, near Santas head - a realistic...
December 12th, 2024 17:43 - The Key (Tristan Robert Lange)
I don\'t think I\'m going to emulate, but I can surely appreciate the art,...
December 12th, 2024 17:32 - ~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk)
Excellent work once more (and I mean yours..) Thad -
Should the nose...
December 12th, 2024 17:25 - It Took Years (Thomas W Case)
You thought you knew it all and that it would never end.... the \'wisdom\'...
December 11th, 2024 22:30 - American Sport & English Poetry (Tom Dylan)
The odor of nationalism given a good spray of common sense and...
December 11th, 2024 17:56 - My Dog Got Loose This Morning (Teardrop)
It’s days like these…
I felt like the neighbour – I wasn’t...
December 11th, 2024 15:19 - `~ Read My Lips! ~` (Thad Wilk)
Give the dawg a chance, Thad:
I ain’t gonna be around here for long...
December 11th, 2024 14:56 - ~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse! (Thad Wilk)
Blood and gore all over the floor;
No culprit within a bull’s...
December 10th, 2024 15:16 - The Seeds were Sown (Dove)
I hesitate to write this, because......
Your smooth poem, so well...
December 10th, 2024 14:54 - Strategically Lost (Neville)
Right then Sir - if you persist. Cranberry is a really rich colour which...
December 10th, 2024 06:06 - Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan)
The main issue is having a secure roof, solid walls and foundations which...
December 10th, 2024 05:14 - Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence)
This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a...
December 10th, 2024 05:02 - We are not in Control (Ad Man) (Poetic Licence)
The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas.
I understand the...
December 9th, 2024 17:28 - ~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme ) (Thad Wilk)
Hi Thad, read all about it - the full story here:
Ralphie is marking...
December 9th, 2024 17:15 - Driving Ambition (Cassie58)
That took me to a few places this morning:
Smooth poem which climbed...
December 9th, 2024 16:49 - Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A flow that\'s very meditative, Andy.
December 9th, 2024 09:24 - Paternity Test (Tom Dylan)
That single malt whisky - should go down as smooth as silk - with just two...
December 9th, 2024 09:17 - Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville)
I’m leaving the first; there’s too much of it about. Very little...
December 8th, 2024 18:05 - If I Knew THAT, I Wouldn\'t Be Here (Cheeky Missy)
What with having your foot (foot?) in your mouth whilst helping Robert out...
December 8th, 2024 17:37 - In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60)
Where I once lived, friends four doors down fed the birds (\'keats, cockys...
December 8th, 2024 16:22 - The perfect poem (Sorenbarrett)
Me? Imperfect.
December 8th, 2024 16:06 - Cure For Hiccups (Jerry Reynolds)
Stop
Breathing
Cure.
December 8th, 2024 16:02 - ~> Me And My Shadow (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad (not really, Is it?)
“The Devil take the...
December 8th, 2024 15:55 - Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words) (Tom Dylan)
The most ingenious excuse for departure I\'ve come across, Tom. Moved on...
December 8th, 2024 00:57 - Tempus Fugit Once More (Kevin Hulme)
There right now - You speak a simple truth. You have it covered.
December 8th, 2024 00:23 - Can\'t Stand Those Bloody Kardashians (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You could just have something there.........................🤪
December 7th, 2024 17:28 - Reaching (Cassie58)
\'her voice rings out clear\' \"Who\'s nicked my bleedin shoe?\"...
December 7th, 2024 16:41 - a makar’s legacy (Arqios)
Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through...
December 7th, 2024 16:23 - ~> Our Garden Of Love (Thad Wilk)
It\'s my day off -
But not to scoff.
Peace and take care, Thad.👍
December 7th, 2024 16:05 - UNLESS CONFIDENTIAL (Michael Edwards)
Backspace or delete anything funny;
Can\'t buy a pencil for love nor...
December 7th, 2024 07:58 - Possessed by a poet (EvenwheniLie)
That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
December 7th, 2024 07:49 - Bad Tempered Alf (Kevin Hulme)
A good larf...😂
December 6th, 2024 21:05 - Silly (2781)
Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with....
Occasionally necessary (...
December 6th, 2024 16:06 - What’s Shaken? (Jerry Reynolds)
Bit of local colour there, Jerry.
December 6th, 2024 15:56 - The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios)
A life form which has perfectly found its niche.
A poem which perfectly...
December 6th, 2024 15:54 - A Tale of Two Journeys (Tristan Robert Lange)
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable...
December 6th, 2024 15:43 - ~> My Mem\'ries Of A Tibetan Monastery (Thad Wilk)
Revlon resolved your emaciation;
Although wot about the...
December 6th, 2024 15:22 - Sunset and Wind Farms (Cassie58)
From the very first sighting I loved the look of those graceful structures...
December 6th, 2024 15:05 - Mother Nature is not innocent (EvenwheniLie)
Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans...
December 6th, 2024 07:12 - Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence)
I\'m not aware enough of the game or personal circumstances to know why...
December 6th, 2024 06:58 - Hidden in Sight (Neville)
“Seek, and ye shall find” -there you go, I’m not a bible person, but...
December 6th, 2024 06:41
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