Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Fear of Falling (Neville)
Well if you don\'t want it, send it down here....
(I have a terrible...
September 1st, 2025 10:33 - And then it rained (Tom Dylan)
There you go, been away, and on your return, look (above) at the welcome...
September 1st, 2025 10:29 - A not so Grand dad (Kevin Hulme)
Never mind the relationship - glass bottles with silver top managed to...
August 31st, 2025 20:18 - Choose (NafisaSB)
The crucial, fundamental choice: stay with family or go.
Let\'s hope both...
August 31st, 2025 18:45 - What Actually Holds Sway (Tristan Robert Lange)
..... and they died for that...
Your context clarifies it all, Tristan.
August 31st, 2025 18:35 - Swarms Around Me. (Goldfinch60)
So wot\'s rong with that?
Please elucidate.
August 31st, 2025 07:10 - Be Present (Bella Shepard)
I do try - as much for trip prevention as your rich appreciation, Bella....
August 30th, 2025 21:00 - Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh that old time religion....... I really don\'t know what to pray.... no...
August 30th, 2025 20:50 - the dam is breached (Arqios)
The frustration takes a back seat as realisation takes command...that door...
August 30th, 2025 09:43 - pleasing piece (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Pleasing\'s right. Very neat.
August 30th, 2025 09:36 - Father\'s day (2781)
Confusion mounts...coulda been any one of \'em by the sounds of it....
August 30th, 2025 09:29 - The Beauty Of Music Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s better - you are back on track, Andy.
August 30th, 2025 03:12 - ....and The Monkey Laughed (Rebellion_in_sanity)
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30 - Live For Today Again. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t fault this advice today...
August 29th, 2025 07:03 - Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett)
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00 - Too Long (Lorna)
Oh come on \"regrets I\'ve had a few\" but there\'s no point in wallowing...
August 29th, 2025 06:48 - A Poem of Very little Consequence (Kevin Hulme)
I have no cause to be disillusioned here, in fact I ended up with more...
August 28th, 2025 18:53 - The stories we tell ourselves (Hzugman)
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06 - On the Loss of Foss – (Edward Lear’s Cat) (Susannah)
Welcome to MPS. You will eventually accustom yourself to some of the...
August 28th, 2025 06:59 - Our Life. (Goldfinch60)
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53 - Mummy (Paul Bell)
The family - Society\'s primary unit of socialisation...........
August 27th, 2025 15:52 - Regrets (QueenMax)
Indeed - that\'s the way I became who I am now..... I can however very...
August 27th, 2025 15:48 - Avocado (Sorenbarrett)
Viva the avocado In my local store...
Good homage, Soren.
August 27th, 2025 07:42 - Last Goodbyes (Lorna)
When it\'s over, it\'s over....in the meantime... absolutely no point in...
August 27th, 2025 07:11 - Oldies Fault Again. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t quite work out who is saying what to whom, when, why and to what...
August 27th, 2025 02:28 - Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60)
This is well versified fun, Andy. Very much enjoyed. A fave.
PS Hitched...
August 26th, 2025 21:38 - Puzzle Piece (DLewis88)
I identify with the shrink from conformity - know it well.
August 26th, 2025 21:13 - Cancel, Click, Repeat (DLewis88)
With you nearly all the way there. a well versed argument re the many who...
August 26th, 2025 21:05 - WISH GRANTED (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something...
August 26th, 2025 20:51 - Fake Nudes (Neville)
\'Tell ya what - I\'ll supply the bandages, and if you could send over...
August 26th, 2025 20:38 - a clockwork orangerie (Arqios)
Hey Rik - you have completely superseded Steampunk with a whole new genre,...
August 25th, 2025 18:32 - Disillusioned (NafisaSB)
I saw you more optimistic than that, but cannot deny that realistic does...
August 25th, 2025 18:19 - Atrocity (Ray Moonee)
Apalling. Societal values and norms imposed on the individual. Well...
August 25th, 2025 18:09 - Older. (Chris Duffy)
Recognition. Not an awful lot of fun is it?
I think I\'m ready, but will...
August 25th, 2025 17:58 - My Hungry Body Satisfied. (Goldfinch60)
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is having you
And...
August 25th, 2025 02:36 - Bearded sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Made me think - damn, gotta charge me trimmer.☺️ Sonnet form utilised...
August 24th, 2025 16:55 - George Committed Suicide (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Great yarn. Made me think - something he should have done better.
August 24th, 2025 16:35 - some people never go crazy (Gray0328)
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of...
August 24th, 2025 16:13 - Porlock (Neville)
A locale evidently frequented by arguably the most noted of the romantic...
August 23rd, 2025 08:20 - Soon to be Home. (Friendship)
Well hurry up then....😂🤣
August 22nd, 2025 20:05 - Dreamscape? (Orchidee)
Wot happened to the hymns? Are you now beyond redemption?
August 22nd, 2025 20:02 - The Hijacked Flag (Syd)
Great stuff, Syd - also glad to know you are still around.
Always been...
August 22nd, 2025 19:54 - Priest Of Fishing. (Goldfinch60)
Up there is one of the most interesting autobiographical pieces you\'ve...
August 22nd, 2025 02:08 - Continuous (Purgatory Phoenix)
Why the need to post same material twice? Dearth of ideas?
August 21st, 2025 17:04 - Less than a Year (M.E.M.)
A prompt from real life?
August 21st, 2025 17:01 - Gray Clouds on a Sunday (Lorna)
Didn\'t know you lived next door - been raining continuously for a week...
August 21st, 2025 16:56 - Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds)
Aaah yes........
August 21st, 2025 08:20 - Once Upon a Happy Ever After (Kevin Hulme)
My kind of poetry only more so - to throw one or two of these every so...
August 21st, 2025 08:18 - The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell)
A trade overworked by which mortal conflict? Applicable to one of...
August 21st, 2025 05:20 - Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60)
Hear Hear - gone from the rat race to a dignified elegant canter.
August 20th, 2025 18:05 - Biscuit Jar (Chris Duffy)
That\'s a reversal. Reality perhaps decrees that if you want to leave your...
August 20th, 2025 17:54 - Where love turns to sighs. (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
If your only outlet is poetry (and well expressed too) then that is better...
August 20th, 2025 17:25 - Don\'t Stand so Close (Thomas W Case)
I gather you would like to move on, if that is acceptable to Roxanne.......
August 20th, 2025 17:17 - Towards The Beauty. (Goldfinch60)
Tra la Tra la .... you\'d sort out Putin\'s problems in no time at all,...
August 19th, 2025 06:21 - Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville)
Got it in me fingers... and yes. perhaps foreshortened responses here...
August 19th, 2025 06:09 - Service Suspended. (Poetic Licence)
Made me think......wish I had a destination.
Thank ye for yey services...
August 19th, 2025 05:56 - It is What it is! (Friendship)
Gotta admit...AI, it seems, has some capacity to evolve itself... a wee...
August 18th, 2025 17:30 - Facing Empire (Tony Grannell)
A wee bit parochial if one limits this to some old Irish conflict, when...
August 18th, 2025 17:18 - Dolly (Paul Bell)
Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault...
August 18th, 2025 16:56 - Are You A Good Worker? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Who sez \'good\'?
Keep it going...
August 18th, 2025 05:36 - Vlad (My Friend)!!. (Poetic Licence)
Subtle irony, Tobani.
August 18th, 2025 05:32 - Father, God, nation (Sorenbarrett)
I\'ll pay that one, Soren.... you know which one, but why the need for...
August 17th, 2025 17:59 - Not now, KP! (Orchidee)
\'Not tonight, KP\'..... nah \'Josephene\' has more flow....
August 17th, 2025 17:48 - Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville)
Well talk to them proper then... say \'hello me old fruit ....\'
Made...
August 16th, 2025 15:54 - I want a home (Meera Mere)
A human right very directly expressed. Cannot be demanded often enough.
August 15th, 2025 16:17 - the cupboard light (Arqios)
Atmosphere, built domestic detail. Brilliant narrative.
August 15th, 2025 16:11 - Detour on My Way to Heaven (Gray0328)
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the...
August 15th, 2025 15:56 - Cabbages Rule OK? (Orchidee)
As a dedicated Pastafarian can I join ?- on medical advice I\'m told I...
August 15th, 2025 00:46 - to speak too soon (Gray0328)
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27 - Rubbish? (Orchidee)
Orchi - you are an example, a model for us all! Your recycling skills are...
August 13th, 2025 17:21 - The Sweet Track (Neville)
And bang went a morning as I dived down a virtual boggy hole to gather...
August 12th, 2025 16:36 - Fido Ruling The Roost? (Orchidee)
The days of your lives...... lol
August 12th, 2025 16:08 - Thursday Me (Bella Shepard)
No mystery involved in music and memory recall anymore - it just works. So...
August 10th, 2025 18:32 - Driving To The Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Felt the harmony, your day heightened to a new level by the moon\'s...
August 10th, 2025 05:52 - The Fall of the Raj (Tony Grannell)
Such witness accounts enrich our understanding of History\'s inevitable...
August 8th, 2025 23:40 - The Heart\'s Promise. (Goldfinch60)
A devotional on complete devotion.
Well writ Andy.
August 8th, 2025 18:28 - Making Life More Difficult (Orchidee)
Maybe pessimism is the only option when you are in the state you are
August 8th, 2025 18:16 - Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme)
It\'s poor old Madam Clair I worry about. Quiet day really. When she has...
August 8th, 2025 17:45 - Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme)
It\'s poor old Madam Clair I worry about. Quiet day really. When she has...
August 8th, 2025 17:43 - Elder Respect. (Goldfinch60)
What is it I\'m supposed to respect? Respect the human being, no matter...
August 7th, 2025 06:07 - Language of Gods. (Poetic Licence)
Really like your tone(s), Tobani. You have a way of presenting ideas in a...
August 7th, 2025 05:55 - An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind (Sorenbarrett)
I do believe bees have a class system: Queen - workers - drones; it works...
August 6th, 2025 19:26 - I have to be in El Paso Yesterday (Victor Bolshov)
It does (work).
Don\'t ever get there... the urgency of the trip and its...
August 6th, 2025 19:00 - Tariffs and Tantrums (Narayan Gadagkar)
Thanks for the clarity (and present truth) of your analysis in great...
August 6th, 2025 18:39 - The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1) (Gray0328)
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out...
August 6th, 2025 18:33 - This Morning (Lorna)
Where are you? you could be next door... the picture you paint feels...
August 4th, 2025 08:19 - Thought (Bella Shepard)
This 575 provides a simple truth with an admirable lack of complexity.
A...
August 3rd, 2025 17:30 - Innocent victims (NafisaSB)
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then...
August 1st, 2025 21:17 - All the Lonely People (Kevin Hulme)
A guilt with no remedy; a rich picture though.
July 31st, 2025 23:50 - The Cloak of Decency (Gray0328)
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only...
July 31st, 2025 23:39 - Clink (Tony36)
too
Edit and then delete this.
July 30th, 2025 20:27 - Well Inclined (Neville)
Purely observational without judgement - well done, Sir.
July 29th, 2025 21:24 - A Message in a Bottle (SureshG)
Good for you, Suresh. A tiresome idea. I weary of its mention everywhere.
July 29th, 2025 21:18 - The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60)
Memories... You\'ve filled in some gaps, Andy - many thanks...
July 29th, 2025 08:17 - The Illusion Of Cool (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
A totally correct analysis, I think... though to some degree most of us...
July 29th, 2025 08:08 - Weather Report (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah - chimes... I hanker for them, but live far too close to others, and am...
July 29th, 2025 07:57 - If I were a Man (Ladywithaquill)
Interesting list of behavioural constraints imposed upon some women via...
July 28th, 2025 17:44 - Vanity (Sorenbarrett)
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good...
July 28th, 2025 09:02 - Irony (Lorna)
I\'m lucky - lack of legacy won\'t worry me... only what I have...
July 28th, 2025 08:52 - At the Very End of It All (Neville)
Neville, in my carefully curated and quite short list of possibilities,...
July 28th, 2025 08:45
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