Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• .~` Just One Glance `~. Sonnet (Thad Wilk) Not much into love poetry, as you may have gathered by my absence and/or...
  August 23rd, 2024 17:47
• Meltdown (Tristan Robert Lange) Slightly more than a dissociative spell then? I must say your write plus...
  August 23rd, 2024 17:07
• The Ashes of Enlightenment (Prasun Goswami) As a metaphor for willful ignorance burned books (yes it has happened,...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:45
• Roots (Sorenbarrett) Well put Soren. But let’s hope that at least some see the perhaps...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:36
• Good Shopping. (Goldfinch60) Dunno why you don\'t do it all online - you only have to get rid of the...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:22
• Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina) A measured poem, rich in detail. Yes your focus is on the many...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:14
• Temporal Lobe  (Teddy.15) I\'m going - doncha know it is wrong to make fun of the afflicted, Teddy?...
  August 23rd, 2024 03:02
• For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken (Neville) Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville. These two went...
  August 23rd, 2024 02:57
• Hide Yourself (Dev Parth) Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must...
  August 22nd, 2024 17:50
• ~. pigeons ( haiku ) (Thad Wilk) pigeon pie dinner site cleared for the good of all crap on roses...
  August 22nd, 2024 17:42
• Gone The Summer (Cassie58) A mild case of SAD: Seasonal Affective Disorder? ‘Tis a pity you must...
  August 22nd, 2024 17:22
• In the Name of Peace (Prasun Goswami) Great write, but with respect to content, not something I care to comment...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:44
• Lurking in the Shadows (M.E.M.) Boo!
  August 22nd, 2024 08:38
• what if i die ????? (Senjuro) It\'s funny - when I was quite young , I used to worry about death a lot....
  August 22nd, 2024 08:34
• Why? (Rrodriguez) Don\'t delude yourself into expecting answers - just keep...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:21
• A Walk On The Moors. (Goldfinch60) Many thanks Andy - this is the only way I\'m ever going to experience...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:10
• Profitable Pleadings (Orchidee) From your title, I feel this is a plea when the plate comes round...but is...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:04
• Senior\'s day (NafisaSB) You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules ,...
  August 22nd, 2024 07:55
• About to Be Forgot (Neville) Probably for the best............................
  August 22nd, 2024 07:47
• Right or wrong (Sorenbarrett) The eye of the beholder well versed there, Sorern.
  August 22nd, 2024 07:40
• `~ Grandpa Tell Me Why (Thad Wilk) G\'day Thad, I reckon he has now had a hairdo, a tint and is right now...
  August 21st, 2024 06:57
• Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60) Wot - a new rhymer has entered the ranks. Stiff competition by the...
  August 21st, 2024 02:30
• What Needs to be Said (Accidental Poet) Many thanks AP. there can be no doubt where your heart lies. (Vid also...
  August 21st, 2024 00:16
• Water (NafisaSB) The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and...
  August 20th, 2024 23:49
• Corporate (Bella Shepard) That was effort well expended (my small suggestion, I mean! 🙂) Bella...
  August 20th, 2024 19:07
• Tin Cups And Shacks (Garth Rakumakoe) Poverty porn tourism?
  August 20th, 2024 18:43
• Foreigner (Garth Rakumakoe) Such a window into the experience of so many removed from their own...
  August 20th, 2024 18:34
• A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15) Mustn\'t do this too often Teddy - it\'s too disturbing - especially when...
  August 20th, 2024 08:05
• Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett) Depravation then hallucination in a few short lines. Richly detailed hard...
  August 20th, 2024 07:54
• Torpedoes (Maplespal) You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more...
  August 20th, 2024 07:48
• Apology (Thoughtless) Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen...
  August 20th, 2024 07:41
• Long Distance (Cassie58) Oh Cassie your word pictures are so rich and here I\'m very keen to know...
  August 20th, 2024 07:34
• Fairs (Tony36) Yes - though I doubt sideshow alley is anything like it was.... Bought...
  August 20th, 2024 07:30
• New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent (Neville) Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s...
  August 20th, 2024 02:43
• All Was Well Once More. (Goldfinch60) You know why it was a good day in the end? Because you\'re Andy, and...
  August 20th, 2024 02:24
• A gentle presence (Mackenz) A horse rider? A skill you have for life. Andyour poem, simple and clear,...
  August 20th, 2024 02:15
• Memories (Senjuro) They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the...
  August 20th, 2024 02:07
• Learn (Bella Shepard) I try, Bella - Thanks once more.
  August 19th, 2024 19:56
• ~. The Old Timer .~ (Thad Wilk) \"You can\'t ever beat Father Time I find, just enjoy your life and pay...
  August 19th, 2024 17:01
• This is Rhetorical (M.E.M.) I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an...
  August 19th, 2024 16:53
• If Looks Could Kill (Neville) Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot...
  August 19th, 2024 16:48
• Learn (Bella Shepard) I have and I do, but confess to be a little slack at times, so a gentle...
  August 19th, 2024 16:35
• The Unfinished House of Stone (Maplespal) Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard. Neat simple...
  August 19th, 2024 06:36
• The universal (Lorenz) In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more...
  August 18th, 2024 16:58
• An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a...
  August 18th, 2024 08:17
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) Great to see the pastoral theme back again Michael, but I do like the...
  August 18th, 2024 08:02
• Goner (Zhangyuyouyu) You say on your Public Profile that you are new to poetry and need some...
  August 18th, 2024 07:35
• Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60) Well put, Andy. But there were also screamers right through the sixties,...
  August 18th, 2024 07:21
• You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) Zummerzet where the Zider apples grow.... Saint Malo - Got the title...
  August 18th, 2024 07:06
• knight (Senjuro) Charge!😊....... please!
  August 18th, 2024 06:55
• A mother\'s grief (Juliette72) There are many anti war poems. Yours gets to the core in a very authentic...
  August 18th, 2024 06:52
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  August 17th, 2024 17:30
• () Pirates with rhythm.
  August 17th, 2024 17:29
• Yesterday (Sorenbarrett) The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity. I...
  August 17th, 2024 05:52
• Making Green & Reflex (Neville) Nah that\'s not right - them greens in chapter one weren\'t properly...
  August 17th, 2024 02:40
• Blessing of Peace (Orchidee) That is wonderfully short and direct, orchi with wishes even a heathen...
  August 17th, 2024 02:30
• Light (MendedFences27) Should be the world\'s Mission Statement. Well put, Phil.
  August 16th, 2024 22:34
• ~> On This Moonlit Beach, (Thad Wilk) You incurable romantic, you.
  August 16th, 2024 16:55
• IBERIBE ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I’m heteronormative myself but feel that was just the luck of the...
  August 16th, 2024 07:15
• Why Women Weren’t Safe (Dev Parth) A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your...
  August 16th, 2024 06:52
• Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams) Grim, mate.
  August 16th, 2024 02:25
• The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60) Sweet times past, I\'m afraid. Great evocation, Andy. PS: Get any...
  August 16th, 2024 02:21
• No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville) how lucky I am how loud our morning arrives bloody cockatoo.. Appears...
  August 16th, 2024 02:12
• The Student? (Dan Williams) \"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to...
  August 16th, 2024 01:17
• An Ode to Heartache (Tristan Robert Lange) Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she...
  August 15th, 2024 18:26
• Misunderstood (Cassie58) A wonderfully polished piece with a great message, Cassie. After the...
  August 15th, 2024 17:56
• Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60) Just go for a stroll by your river Andy and all will be well....😇
  August 15th, 2024 07:36
• free (Senjuro) Yeh - You once gave me a like (along with many others if I read the user...
  August 15th, 2024 07:11
• Olympics (2781) Beyond me.......
  August 15th, 2024 05:22
• A taste of honey (Sorenbarrett) In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
  August 15th, 2024 05:15
• More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville) Well now, this took a bit of working through Neville. My local post...
  August 15th, 2024 02:36
• Politics over nature (EvenwheniLie) \'all the actual important stuff is off the table\' - not only masked but...
  August 14th, 2024 18:24
• Birth of another tortured artist (Kenny O\'Donnell) And they do - in great numbers...... Robust writing I enjoyed very much.
  August 14th, 2024 18:09
• I went under Bliss (Kenny O\'Donnell) Agreed. If that\'s death (and it\'s quite high on my list of possibles)...
  August 14th, 2024 18:00
• ~. Why Is My Bowl Empty Bro? (Thad Wilk) G\'day Thad. Frequently told pit bulls are lovely dogs…. It’s just...
  August 14th, 2024 17:38
• Temporary love (Natalie Heisey) What is this \'love\' of which you write?
  August 14th, 2024 17:11
• The Planet (Tristan Robert Lange) Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
  August 14th, 2024 16:49
• What More Could You Want? (Thomas W Case) A richly textured life which doesn\'t need laundering, and is all the more...
  August 14th, 2024 16:41
• The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60) \'Joy\' is a little over the top, but in a more general sense, I\'m pretty...
  August 14th, 2024 06:48
• AT THE BEAUTIFUL GATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) This is nothing I can relate to on a personal level, but I do hope to try...
  August 14th, 2024 06:40
• The markets (2781) Got that, Mate.
  August 14th, 2024 06:36
• Sex and the over Seventies (Saxon Crow) Yes, Teddy - definitely over to you - he won\'t even acknowledge me....
  August 14th, 2024 06:27
• Bitter Sweet Springs (Neville) Corporate greed over environmental stress - don\'t get me going, but...
  August 14th, 2024 06:19
• The 1990s were my 1960s. (Tom Dylan) A contribution towards grater ( yes - it grates, but not too much) ...
  August 14th, 2024 06:14
• A bad rap(tor)? (Sorenbarrett) As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s...
  August 14th, 2024 06:07
• GREEN MEANS GROW (Kelvin Kofi Apenteng Bamfo) I know nothing , I repeat nothing about International Youth day: but what...
  August 14th, 2024 05:59
• Familiarity of the nonexistent (Sorenbarrett) Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented...
  August 13th, 2024 17:50
• ~> Halloween Demon BAT! (Thad Wilk) I just feel it to be a little early to make any hasty decisions, Thad. You...
  August 13th, 2024 17:29
• Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15) That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will...
  August 13th, 2024 07:37
• Final Word Count (Tom Dylan) Your ’Notice of absence’ plus your uncharacteristic pin is making me...
  August 13th, 2024 06:40
• A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case) Excellent
  August 13th, 2024 01:57
• Clocked (Neville) I\'m unsure if you find that pleasing....or not, Neville.
  August 13th, 2024 01:53
• flowers without light are flowers that dont grow (MR.apocalypse) Hard to know what to write, how to empathise. Please, I hope you find a...
  August 13th, 2024 01:49
• Home Another Way. (Goldfinch60) Serendipitous satnav.
  August 13th, 2024 01:13
• A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards) It\'s like old times - happy days, Michael. Like your minimalist style,...
  August 13th, 2024 01:09
• ~> Stupid Cupid! - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk) Don\'t you be kidding me, Thad. You did make it up in order to get five...
  August 12th, 2024 18:13
• Lo and Behold! (MendedFences27) A thousand ways indeed....🥀I did feel for him, of course... Can\'t say...
  August 12th, 2024 17:57
• Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard) The richness of this as an experience, the final disclosure - it leaves me...
  August 12th, 2024 17:47
• Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60) Let me know when Kevin McCloud has you in focus -promise I\'ll watch.....
  August 12th, 2024 08:49
• The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone (Neville) Cracked it, haven\'t you...What one is left to wonder is how a man and...
  August 12th, 2024 08:29