Comments on community poems by Nicholas Browning

• Not the Broken One (MissileOfUncertainty) Rape? It\'s not a good subject for me. I don\'t like it, and anyone that...
  July 13th, 2017 15:23
• letter burning (Heather T) This to me seems like an unpleasant memory. It\'s difficult sharing things...
  July 13th, 2017 15:20
• queen of two worlds (Roudan) Last line\'s a little confusing. I pretty much just read it how I wanted...
  July 13th, 2017 15:09
• Tainted (Brie) A faded love, such a bittersweet thing. Bravo.
  July 13th, 2017 15:07
• White light (Ali.louise) This is nice. A lot of potential. When you get more experience your style...
  July 13th, 2017 15:06
• His Canvas (Baylee) I like it. Saving someone from their constant suffering is a way to prove...
  July 13th, 2017 15:04
• Set to Rise (GeraldineTaylor) Always searching for such a place.
  July 13th, 2017 15:03
• See David Sit (Dent Moses) We take and take with no end. Indeed. Well done.
  July 13th, 2017 15:01
• THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards) True that.
  July 13th, 2017 15:00
• Chapters of Time (Migithehp) Life\'s endeavors indeed.
  July 12th, 2017 19:04
• Real Football Players.... (P.H.Rose) Holy crap. A poem about soccer/football back in the day? When you said you...
  July 12th, 2017 12:24
• Drifter no longer drifting (Poetic Dan) Just curious, is English your primary language? By the way, massive props...
  July 12th, 2017 12:20
• THE LIGHT YOU PROVIDED (Louis Gibbs) Eh, you can\'t really expect someone to follow your example. Life is all...
  July 12th, 2017 12:17
• Starry Night (Rita_ehn) Look up indeed. I love that painting. It\'s one of my favorites. Our...
  July 12th, 2017 12:14
• The Cost (Poetboy123) We always pay the cost. This poem has a massive amount of potential. It\'s...
  July 12th, 2017 12:13
• Worship Worthies (Orchidee) Good stuff once again Orch. I love to see the usage of singular words in...
  July 12th, 2017 09:03
• Disaster (Satishverma) This is very cryptic. I\'ve read the story of Icarus. Nice stuff, well...
  July 11th, 2017 22:57
• My Heart\'s On My Sleeve... (JustCallMeCe) So much love going on today. Is there a holiday I didn\'t hear about? Well...
  July 11th, 2017 21:45
• Always Motivate And Encourage The Kids (Brooklyn6timesplus) Indeed. Teach the next generation to be better than we were. My generation...
  July 11th, 2017 21:43
• Destined to fly (Lost-but-not-broken17) Never forget the lessons that pain and emptiness taught you. You\'re...
  July 11th, 2017 21:41
• Unleashed (Tristan Robert Lange) Finding the key to caging and releasing that demon at will are one of...
  July 11th, 2017 21:37
• Living for others (Youloveme) You\'re not going anywhere. You\'re gonna stay here and perfect your...
  July 11th, 2017 21:23
• LIFE OF A MUSLIM (Muhammad the Bully) It\'s very interesting to see the writing style of two different...
  July 11th, 2017 21:09
• \"Why can\'t we be together?\" (Alana) Human beings are horrible creatures by inherent nature. They feel a...
  July 11th, 2017 20:23
• Dreams (Allan J. Renaldo) Love love love. Hmmmmm. If someone ever does truly love you, I suggest you...
  July 11th, 2017 20:20
• Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose) A nice little tribute to the winding paths of life. Good stuff.
  July 11th, 2017 19:52
• Our Eternal Slumber (Tristan Robert Lange) Hey there, I read this the other day and didn\'t comment. I can\'t...
  July 11th, 2017 19:48
• Just Fall (Jinx) Holy crap bro, this is deep stuff. The temptation of sin, it\'s a pain in...
  July 11th, 2017 19:46
• Help is on the way dear (Joaquin Finn) Friendship can be stupid. I once showed a nerdy guy that the world isn\'t...
  July 11th, 2017 19:35
• daughter (Heather T) This is beautiful. Pain is invisible if you don\'t know where to look. The...
  July 11th, 2017 19:30
• Deluded (Jabberwocky) Haha, nice. I hope it doesn\'t.
  July 11th, 2017 19:28
• 2nd shift (Jamesbackus) The graveyard, one of my favorite places. Haha, I know what it\'s like,...
  July 11th, 2017 19:27
• people never change (Mocuisle) Nice.
  July 11th, 2017 19:21
• Normal (Kaden Hudson) I personally don\'t like today\'s definition of \"Normal\". Normal has...
  July 11th, 2017 19:14
• My Springtime Song (GeraldineTaylor) All seasons do belong. Indeed. Good work.
  July 11th, 2017 17:39
• Unconditionally (Moonflower15) Love, ugh. It\'s beautiful, sure, but man can it seriously wreck a person....
  July 11th, 2017 17:32
• Roses (BeautifulDisaster) Death is the only bridge that no living man can cross. Well written, and...
  July 11th, 2017 17:29
• Incoming. (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve got an affinity for writing about human involvement with nature....
  July 11th, 2017 17:26
• Slut (Just a girl.) I don\'t really know. I call a girl a slut when I know she\'s been in bed...
  July 11th, 2017 17:09
• Paranoia (S.louise) Paranoia in moderation keeps you on your toes. Too much of it, and you...
  July 11th, 2017 17:07
• Sex and Regret (Andreax21) I wasn\'t expecting the transition from regret to love, you sneaky shrew....
  July 11th, 2017 17:03
• Our Love was the Forest (Baylee) \"Forest\" is one of my favorite words. This work is pretty dang good....
  July 11th, 2017 17:02
• The Day Ricky Left (Rpgiii) This is deep stuff. Holy crap, on the edge of my seat but still with a...
  July 11th, 2017 16:56
• Toast (Tony36) Cool stuff. Pretty funny
  July 11th, 2017 16:54
• Ludwig ii (Shakerite) Good stuff. I have no idea who this person is, or was, but I get the...
  July 11th, 2017 16:52
• The decisions I made (Avigail) The path we take is definitely one of many. That\'s true. I have a saying,...
  July 11th, 2017 16:49
• No Answers (M. Mohon) If I had a heart, it would have just broken. This is raw dread, hope...
  July 11th, 2017 16:43
• They call me ego (Malubotelho) Ego is a very interesting concept. You have to feed it the right amount.
  July 11th, 2017 16:37
• LOST IN CREATION OF MY MIND (Jwill52) Creation of mind, huh. Lemme tell ya bro, just be you. Nice? Not stuck up?...
  July 11th, 2017 16:35
• Wolf love (Nyoko_beautiful moon) The merit in this lies in the fact that is portrays love in an old...
  July 11th, 2017 16:28
• Clouds (Sue.evans) This is wonderfully descriptive. I strive to be a poet capable of such...
  July 11th, 2017 16:26
• I wish i never meant you (Angel-baby28) Scars don\'t disappear. They simply fade. Time doesn\'t heal all of the...
  July 11th, 2017 16:23
• Hopeless feelings (Shadiamond Gonzalez) Don\'t look for the blades, you don\'t need them.
  July 11th, 2017 16:19
• Moon Cable (Noveyre) The last line sent shivers down my spine. I can\'t deny that it\'s good....
  July 11th, 2017 16:18
• mutual (Onepauly) I believe this is a message stating that someone goes on a journey in...
  July 11th, 2017 03:56
• Heart door (Aa Harvey) This is pretty nice. I like it.
  July 11th, 2017 03:48
• Vulnerability (Lost Girl) Vulnerability comes with an option. The option to use it to your...
  July 11th, 2017 03:46
• Fuck this Live (FredPeyer) Man, I tell ya, it ain\'t a pretty sight. But how can you distinguish one...
  July 11th, 2017 03:41
• PEACE? - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Hatred is a cycle that has revolved as far back as time\'s first record....
  July 11th, 2017 02:27
• Stains (P.X. Vexxus) A facade is a defense mechanism. Masks protect us from many things, but...
  July 11th, 2017 00:45
• DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Is this pertaining to the french folk song known as \"Au clair de la...
  July 11th, 2017 00:39
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) The positive side to one liners is that they\'re vague; They leave many...
  July 11th, 2017 00:25
• Arisen (AnxiousMane) Well, I have a feeling that someone\'s going to Fólkvangr.
  July 11th, 2017 00:21
• Personal Battle (Ternic73) Till we meet again.
  July 11th, 2017 00:11
• Solemn Flower (BadThiliono) Solemn is a good word. I like the way you describe things, very...
  July 10th, 2017 19:07
• THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs) Peace is something no price can outweigh. Nice job.
  July 10th, 2017 19:06
• Lamb Life (Orchidee) Spirituality is not for everyone. That being said, it would take a fool...
  July 10th, 2017 12:11
• River of tears (Lost-but-not-broken17) A brighter tomorrow sounds pretty good to me. I take it you won? Good job....
  July 10th, 2017 11:03
• All I want Is You (Brandyngraham) Fully agree with Kat.
  July 10th, 2017 11:01
• سالگردِ پدر (Hosein shafiei bidgoli) I can\'t read this, and I can\'t translate it. From what Brian has said,...
  July 10th, 2017 10:58
• Remains (Baylee) Pain is the greatest teacher any one will ever know.
  July 10th, 2017 10:55
• Not my problem... (GODisreal) Interesting.
  July 10th, 2017 10:48
• Long for you (Lost in Murphy) This \"Morning scribble\" has the flow that some people take hours to...
  July 10th, 2017 10:40
• An Artists Prayer (Kurt Philip Behm) Excuse me sir, I don\'t know full well who you are as of yet. You seem to...
  July 10th, 2017 10:37
• Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus) Suicide is a delicate thing to state a view on in a public space. I don\'t...
  July 10th, 2017 10:27
• Hello doctor (S.louise) The position one must find themselves in amidst that situation is dreadful...
  July 10th, 2017 10:23
• The Violin (the personification) (Cyprian Van Dyke) What made this worthwhile to read? Are you insane? Why, the...
  July 10th, 2017 10:19
• callousness (Stephanie Showers) Bravo! I just so happen to have done this a while ago. Someone who...
  July 10th, 2017 10:16
• My name is depression, cant you tell? (R.A.Brown) Depression is the greatest and most well known fabrication of an emotion...
  July 10th, 2017 09:38
• To New Friends Gained..... (P.H.Rose) I can\'t read this because I\'m not allowed to. I haven\'t commented on...
  July 10th, 2017 06:32
• The beauty from within. (Samreen Chowdhury) This sounds to me like a tale of love, a beautiful woman, or a man, or...
  July 10th, 2017 06:14
• Would you believe me (Poetic Dan) Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The...
  July 10th, 2017 06:11
• Road-Shock. (Fay Slimm.) Road kill isn\'t a pleasant sight. One day the tables will turn, and...
  July 10th, 2017 06:08
• Hoping (FredPeyer) Hope is a sword that is drawn at the cost of one\'s own blood. True
  July 10th, 2017 06:03
• It is written on your face (Jinx) When the words arrive is the best time of the day.
  July 10th, 2017 06:02
• Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi) We all have those days. It\'s unfortunate. To say \"Fuck you\" to satan,...
  July 10th, 2017 06:01
• Half Full / Half Empty (Jabberwocky) I didn\'t even know you could eat porcupine.
  July 10th, 2017 05:59
• The Demon That Haunts Me (Moonflower15) Good line to end on. A demon\'s goal is to put you in that cage. They want...
  July 10th, 2017 05:58
• Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60) I agree. A soul can be mended by many of things. Music is one of them.
  July 10th, 2017 05:56
• Lost souls (Renzi) What is a lost soul if not the embodiment of freedom? At least they have...
  July 10th, 2017 05:53
• It\'s been a long day (Mandi) Holding it in is never really a good thing. Unless you\'re like, a cage...
  July 10th, 2017 02:13
• Hot Lead Alliteration (Whisperingquill) I have to give you credit. Your style is rough and all over the place. The...
  July 10th, 2017 02:06
• Your My Inspiration (Ron parrish aka wordman) I\'ve never liked that song, but this poem is a different story. Good...
  July 10th, 2017 01:56
• Imperfection (Adrianna Kjeld) Indeed. Life could be so many things if only we\'d enable it properly....
  July 10th, 2017 01:55
• Ephemeral Flowers (Noveyre) This is short, sweet, tragic and heavy all at the same time. Well done.
  July 10th, 2017 01:53
• Muerta (Wackyheartache4) This was well written. Paranoia is one of my favorite things. Well done.
  July 10th, 2017 01:52
• GoodBye Green eyed Hero (Joaquin Finn) Powerful. Although, I would like to know who this, \"Green eyed hero is.\"...
  July 9th, 2017 18:03
• Whom Could It Be (+2) ... long (Kurt Philip Behm) From beginning to end is splendid mate. It tells a wonderful story, and I...
  July 9th, 2017 17:55
• Words to the younger me (Poetic Dan) The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the...
  July 9th, 2017 17:48
• Behind The Glass (Dylan) I haven\'t been here long, so I\'m not sure if it means much coming from...
  July 9th, 2017 16:57