Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- A thirsty dream (Sorenbarrett)
Certainly made me thirsty,...
September 9th, 2024 08:13 - A complaint (NafisaSB)
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35 - ~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the...
September 8th, 2024 21:22 - Feather Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
\'Or it\'s telling you to charge forth and do something really adventurous...
September 8th, 2024 07:00 - Psalm Praise (Orchidee)
Think this style suits you orchi.......
September 8th, 2024 06:55 - Bricks of hope (Sorenbarrett)
Precisely - \'the same end\'
Faved for its truth and concision.
That\'s...
September 8th, 2024 06:50 - Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I never categorise my rubbish, but in your case here, I do believe you...
September 8th, 2024 06:24 - Council elections (2781)
Cannot avoid a response to this. What a pain in the arse the whole...
September 7th, 2024 07:25 - Jazzers List. (Goldfinch60)
Must work through that list myself, Andy – there’s one or two...
September 7th, 2024 02:27 - Fusions? (Orchidee)
I\'ve never understood fusioned poems - it takes much too much sweat and...
September 7th, 2024 01:07 - A Very Poetic Finish (Teddy.15)
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me...
September 6th, 2024 23:12 - And So It Is (Cassie58)
Cassie, loved the poem sans the last two stanzas.
September 6th, 2024 22:51 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
Didn\'t see the target as the religions - other secular orthodoxies,...
September 6th, 2024 20:22 - ~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free...
September 6th, 2024 20:07 - Mystery Girl (Tony36)
Good write.
September 6th, 2024 19:49 - Rainbows and Waterfalls (MendedFences27)
OK – so you couldn’t be bothered putting it on canvas, you mislaid...
September 6th, 2024 19:35 - Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett)
Yes Soren - if anyone is going to pierce my skin it has to be a fully...
September 6th, 2024 11:55 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
They\'re teetering on the edge of adversity....
September 6th, 2024 01:57 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
Wot\'s wrong with hymns? They seem to keep you occupied, and (mostly) out...
September 6th, 2024 01:45 - The Tempest\'s Strike (Tristan Robert Lange)
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful...
September 5th, 2024 21:20 - guess what this poem is? (MR.apocalypse)
Teenage angst?
September 5th, 2024 20:00 - A Whale of a Time (senryu) (Teddy.15)
And guess what, Teddy - I had initial trouble with this, but having taken...
September 5th, 2024 17:35 - The Christmas Card (MendedFences27)
You kept me in suspenders the whole way Phil, despite that I had this...
September 5th, 2024 17:23 - ~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
May I contribute my mini limerick?
Poor old Clyde the...
September 5th, 2024 16:52 - Point of View (Tony36)
Great write.
September 5th, 2024 07:07 - Against The Flow/ (Goldfinch60)
A very satisfying summation of retirement and freedom, Andy - I can relate...
September 5th, 2024 06:42 - Hula Hooping Thru Insignificance (Rocky Lagou)
Daydream for a while (but not too long). You\'ll make it,...
September 4th, 2024 23:46 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
In the late sixties and early seventies tin badges were all the go –...
September 4th, 2024 17:13 - Cats Comforts (Orchidee)
So those humpsters you have.....
Good plea - you can extrapolate your...
September 4th, 2024 16:53 - From A Distance. (Goldfinch60)
Have to abandon TV, radio, all media to keep it at a distance, Andy. You...
September 4th, 2024 16:45 - And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15)
Couldn\'t agree with your love of Autumn more, Teddy
An added note: I...
September 3rd, 2024 23:17 - The day that broke our hearts (Pappy155)
My sympathy. Innocent people die in war.
September 3rd, 2024 17:42 - An Incredibly Short Poem (Finley Oaktree)
You will have to work very much harder to convince me it is worth the...
September 3rd, 2024 17:38 - Clay (Skye-777)
Final departure, separation, the mixed emotions just under the surface,...
September 3rd, 2024 17:35 - - Blue Dragon And Viking Boy - (Thad Wilk)
Fight the good fight with all your might; let them villains know what\'s...
September 3rd, 2024 17:20 - Ten Small Poems 5 (MendedFences27)
You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...😂
At...
September 3rd, 2024 17:14 - We are builders (Emptypot)
Neva mind the grandkids...I got it!😂
September 3rd, 2024 17:03 - To Be Voted Out (Emptypot)
Let you know? Let who Know? We haven\'t been properly introduced. You can...
September 3rd, 2024 16:53 - Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan)
A line which I discovered quite early came from a play/film (1957/1960...
September 3rd, 2024 07:58 - Gifts In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - occasionally someone doesn\'t assume and talks - how about you,
September 3rd, 2024 07:43 - Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe....
September 3rd, 2024 07:41 - The Magpies (Thepoetman1234)
\'Whitechapel, London, 1888\' - talking Jack here? Got that, but it\'s the...
September 3rd, 2024 07:19 - Inferno (Sorenbarrett)
Climate change really getting to you is it , Soren?
September 3rd, 2024 06:58 - ~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk)
Ah, morning tea.. Lace tablecloth.. scones.. clotted cream.. and.....
September 2nd, 2024 17:14 - Windy (2781)
Stop press: can confirm was a little draughty today....
September 2nd, 2024 09:42 - The Sell-Out Gig (Tom Dylan)
Please note 2781above, Tom. Ticket agencies can be manipulative rip offs,...
September 2nd, 2024 09:34 - The Arcade (DLewis88)
Nostalgia plus. Thank you.
September 1st, 2024 18:17 - I know nothing (2781)
I enjoyed that - however I feel sure that you have all the filters in...
September 1st, 2024 18:11 - ~> I Am A Troll! (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
Modesty forbids, but I do consider myself a troll wrangler...
September 1st, 2024 17:34 - Polished news (Sorenbarrett)
Still available to those with motivation persistence and...
August 31st, 2024 16:42 - How Does God Feel? (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Despite my lack of belief or interest in \'God\', I can relate to this....
August 31st, 2024 16:31 - To Sing Or Not.. (Orchidee)
Not..
August 31st, 2024 02:45 - Urbanization (Thepoetman1234)
Don\'t go away. I gave you a hard time on the British Empire. I\'ll not...
August 31st, 2024 01:19 - Ten Small Poems 2 (MendedFences27)
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that...
August 30th, 2024 19:37 - ~> Stan The Man? [ Limericks ] (Thad Wilk)
Despite the OTT (Over The Top) attire, Stan could be OK when you get to...
August 30th, 2024 19:25 - Can you tell? (Neilton)
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn\'t say than what it does....
August 30th, 2024 18:48 - What\'s In A Name (Tom Dylan)
😅😂🤣 Wot is poetry if it is not playing with words? Kept me amused...
August 30th, 2024 05:47 - The British Empire (Thepoetman1234)
Nah - you go on. You have two totally undemanding supporters above who...
August 30th, 2024 05:35 - Sonnet For Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
And you have done Autumn justice, Andy.
August 30th, 2024 01:40 - The British Empire (Thepoetman1234)
Exploitation, slavery, a class system..........
August 29th, 2024 22:00 - `~> Cheech AND Chong [ Limericks] (Thad Wilk)
This stuff they call weed,
I ain’t never seed;
I deny it all -
You go...
August 29th, 2024 17:33 - Mankind\'s Evolution (MendedFences27)
Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil....
August 29th, 2024 16:47 - Sandbags (Chris Duffy)
You\'ve been away too long Chris - going to stay round for a while?
The...
August 29th, 2024 07:29 - Fool (2781)
A rich experience you led me through, mate. More than glad you had such a...
August 29th, 2024 07:19 - Two Now... (Orchidee)
Whatever gets you through the night.
August 29th, 2024 07:16 - A scroll of paper (Fanita530)
you prompted me to look - You have a firm grasp of what is going on in the...
August 29th, 2024 07:04 - Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
So Soren you have listed the titles of twelve poems - when are we to see...
August 28th, 2024 21:35 - The Write Crowd (Tom Dylan)
Think you won that debate, Tom. But how does the proprietor allow you to...
August 28th, 2024 21:08 - Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude ) (MendedFences27)
I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination...
August 28th, 2024 20:17 - The balance of Faith (Fanita530)
I enjoyed the structure, rhythm and rhyme very much, including the...
August 28th, 2024 20:03 - Shadows in the Night: A Nation\'s Lament (GeekSusie)
So you are back with your trademark cutting crits, which I really...
August 28th, 2024 19:55 - ~> Chick Norris! [ Limericks ] (Thad Wilk)
There once was woz a chick name of Norris
Who grew up to be quite...
August 28th, 2024 19:11 - OOPS (Michael Edwards)
I want me money back - i seed that picture before.
Advice to Ruth, Pete...
August 28th, 2024 02:28 - All About Hats (Teddy.15)
A battle of the limericks is there
Because Teddy is up for the dare;
But...
August 28th, 2024 02:17 - ~> Jake And Lill, The Hanging Tree (Thad Wilk)
Good triumphs over evil, or Capitalism wins once more?
I can’t take...
August 27th, 2024 23:32 - War (Rrodriguez)
You might have a pleasant night now you got that out of your system - but...
August 27th, 2024 23:21 - World without war (Ethereal)
If you are really asking, then you must turn to History.
August 27th, 2024 23:04 - Ten Very Small Poems (MendedFences27)
Truth, The night Sky and buttonholes would have satisfied me, Phil - the...
August 27th, 2024 22:58 - Bello Casentino (Teddy.15)
Richness of sensation provided in so very few words, Teddy. Often I pass...
August 27th, 2024 07:06 - Definitely, maybe not (Tom Dylan)
Wise decision, I think Tom. Times past are best left in the rich nostalgic...
August 27th, 2024 06:54 - Ed Poe in Yellowknife (Paul W Conway)
Your poem rattled along in a way I really enjoyed. There are a couple of...
August 27th, 2024 02:03 - The Ferris Wheel. (Goldfinch60)
A rich memory, Andy. I\'ve always enjoyed the funfair, sideshow alley and...
August 27th, 2024 01:20 - ~> A True Turkey Tale! (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad.
So This Give Thanks day… is that the only day of the...
August 26th, 2024 17:25 - Lost Journey (Zhangyuyouyu)
I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is...
August 26th, 2024 17:05 - up and down (Senjuro)
I can feel that, just as you have expressed it. But you do know that it is...
August 26th, 2024 16:48 - I will fall (BlessedbyGod)
I found this stoic and unyielding in the face of adversity. You have...
August 26th, 2024 16:40 - Senryu to Love (Teddy.15)
Words (perish the thought!) can be false, whereas actions speak for...
August 26th, 2024 07:13 - Here\'s Looking At You. (Goldfinch60)
You are obviously well aware of the rewards gained by looking back –...
August 26th, 2024 01:48 - A Nervous System (Elias H.F.)
Economy of word play in no way diminishes the meanings of this little...
August 26th, 2024 01:14 - Premonition (NafisaSB)
I know a competent tradesman who fixes roofs. Says he would be prepared to...
August 26th, 2024 00:54 - ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk)
This is just a wee bit weird, Thad, if you don’t mind me mentioning.
I...
August 25th, 2024 20:27 - A mystery (Orchidee)
I avoid funerals. For me they mean nothing no matter how close I am/was to...
August 25th, 2024 03:47 - Conning the Bafflements: a Triple Triolet (Paul W Conway)
Not an easy form to stick strictly to and remain coherent - you\'ve...
August 25th, 2024 00:45 - ~` The Atmosphere Is Getting Heavy Here! - French Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
“Regrets, I’ve had a few…..’
Al P slightly the worse for wear...
August 24th, 2024 17:57 - Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett)
Assuming you mean close relationships, Soren they are always dynamic in my...
August 24th, 2024 16:26 - Have you ever seen a green flower? (Elias H.F.)
Neat and very much worth the read.
Welcome to MPS I hope you enjoy...
August 24th, 2024 16:16 - Woof, Woof! (Orchidee)
A digression from your obsession with your rodents which sends me into a...
August 24th, 2024 06:10 - Another Friday Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Andy – it feels (allowing for different game, different time) like Vitai...
August 24th, 2024 05:54 - My fitbit (NafisaSB)
Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it...
August 24th, 2024 01:07 - Homework (Tony36)
My school days a very longtime ago, but.....seems not much has changed.
A...
August 23rd, 2024 17:54
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