Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Less than a Year (M.E.M.)
A prompt from real life?
August 21st, 2025 17:01 - Gray Clouds on a Sunday (Lorna)
Didn\'t know you lived next door - been raining continuously for a week...
August 21st, 2025 16:56 - Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds)
Aaah yes........
August 21st, 2025 08:20 - Once Upon a Happy Ever After (Kevin Hulme)
My kind of poetry only more so - to throw one or two of these every so...
August 21st, 2025 08:18 - The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell)
A trade overworked by which mortal conflict? Applicable to one of...
August 21st, 2025 05:20 - Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60)
Hear Hear - gone from the rat race to a dignified elegant canter.
August 20th, 2025 18:05 - Biscuit Jar (Chris Duffy)
That\'s a reversal. Reality perhaps decrees that if you want to leave your...
August 20th, 2025 17:54 - Where love turns to sighs. (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
If your only outlet is poetry (and well expressed too) then that is better...
August 20th, 2025 17:25 - Don\'t Stand so Close (Thomas W Case)
I gather you would like to move on, if that is acceptable to Roxanne.......
August 20th, 2025 17:17 - Towards The Beauty. (Goldfinch60)
Tra la Tra la .... you\'d sort out Putin\'s problems in no time at all,...
August 19th, 2025 06:21 - Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville)
Got it in me fingers... and yes. perhaps foreshortened responses here...
August 19th, 2025 06:09 - Service Suspended. (Poetic Licence)
Made me think......wish I had a destination.
Thank ye for yey services...
August 19th, 2025 05:56 - It is What it is! (Friendship)
Gotta admit...AI, it seems, has some capacity to evolve itself... a wee...
August 18th, 2025 17:30 - Facing Empire (Tony Grannell)
A wee bit parochial if one limits this to some old Irish conflict, when...
August 18th, 2025 17:18 - Dolly (Paul Bell)
Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault...
August 18th, 2025 16:56 - Are You A Good Worker? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Who sez \'good\'?
Keep it going...
August 18th, 2025 05:36 - Vlad (My Friend)!!. (Poetic Licence)
Subtle irony, Tobani.
August 18th, 2025 05:32 - Father, God, nation (Sorenbarrett)
I\'ll pay that one, Soren.... you know which one, but why the need for...
August 17th, 2025 17:59 - Not now, KP! (Orchidee)
\'Not tonight, KP\'..... nah \'Josephene\' has more flow....
August 17th, 2025 17:48 - Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville)
Well talk to them proper then... say \'hello me old fruit ....\'
Made...
August 16th, 2025 15:54 - I want a home (Meera Mere)
A human right very directly expressed. Cannot be demanded often enough.
August 15th, 2025 16:17 - the cupboard light (Arqios)
Atmosphere, built domestic detail. Brilliant narrative.
August 15th, 2025 16:11 - Detour on My Way to Heaven (Gray0328)
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the...
August 15th, 2025 15:56 - Cabbages Rule OK? (Orchidee)
As a dedicated Pastafarian can I join ?- on medical advice I\'m told I...
August 15th, 2025 00:46 - to speak too soon (Gray0328)
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27 - Rubbish? (Orchidee)
Orchi - you are an example, a model for us all! Your recycling skills are...
August 13th, 2025 17:21 - The Sweet Track (Neville)
And bang went a morning as I dived down a virtual boggy hole to gather...
August 12th, 2025 16:36 - Fido Ruling The Roost? (Orchidee)
The days of your lives...... lol
August 12th, 2025 16:08 - Thursday Me (Bella Shepard)
No mystery involved in music and memory recall anymore - it just works. So...
August 10th, 2025 18:32 - Driving To The Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Felt the harmony, your day heightened to a new level by the moon\'s...
August 10th, 2025 05:52 - The Fall of the Raj (Tony Grannell)
Such witness accounts enrich our understanding of History\'s inevitable...
August 8th, 2025 23:40 - The Heart\'s Promise. (Goldfinch60)
A devotional on complete devotion.
Well writ Andy.
August 8th, 2025 18:28 - Making Life More Difficult (Orchidee)
Maybe pessimism is the only option when you are in the state you are
August 8th, 2025 18:16 - Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme)
It\'s poor old Madam Clair I worry about. Quiet day really. When she has...
August 8th, 2025 17:45 - Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme)
It\'s poor old Madam Clair I worry about. Quiet day really. When she has...
August 8th, 2025 17:43 - Elder Respect. (Goldfinch60)
What is it I\'m supposed to respect? Respect the human being, no matter...
August 7th, 2025 06:07 - Language of Gods. (Poetic Licence)
Really like your tone(s), Tobani. You have a way of presenting ideas in a...
August 7th, 2025 05:55 - An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind (Sorenbarrett)
I do believe bees have a class system: Queen - workers - drones; it works...
August 6th, 2025 19:26 - I have to be in El Paso Yesterday (Victor Bolshov)
It does (work).
Don\'t ever get there... the urgency of the trip and its...
August 6th, 2025 19:00 - Tariffs and Tantrums (Narayan Gadagkar)
Thanks for the clarity (and present truth) of your analysis in great...
August 6th, 2025 18:39 - The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1) (Gray0328)
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out...
August 6th, 2025 18:33 - This Morning (Lorna)
Where are you? you could be next door... the picture you paint feels...
August 4th, 2025 08:19 - Thought (Bella Shepard)
This 575 provides a simple truth with an admirable lack of complexity.
A...
August 3rd, 2025 17:30 - Innocent victims (NafisaSB)
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then...
August 1st, 2025 21:17 - All the Lonely People (Kevin Hulme)
A guilt with no remedy; a rich picture though.
July 31st, 2025 23:50 - The Cloak of Decency (Gray0328)
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only...
July 31st, 2025 23:39 - Clink (Tony36)
too
Edit and then delete this.
July 30th, 2025 20:27 - Well Inclined (Neville)
Purely observational without judgement - well done, Sir.
July 29th, 2025 21:24 - A Message in a Bottle (SureshG)
Good for you, Suresh. A tiresome idea. I weary of its mention everywhere.
July 29th, 2025 21:18 - The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60)
Memories... You\'ve filled in some gaps, Andy - many thanks...
July 29th, 2025 08:17 - The Illusion Of Cool (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
A totally correct analysis, I think... though to some degree most of us...
July 29th, 2025 08:08 - Weather Report (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah - chimes... I hanker for them, but live far too close to others, and am...
July 29th, 2025 07:57 - If I were a Man (Ladywithaquill)
Interesting list of behavioural constraints imposed upon some women via...
July 28th, 2025 17:44 - Vanity (Sorenbarrett)
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good...
July 28th, 2025 09:02 - Irony (Lorna)
I\'m lucky - lack of legacy won\'t worry me... only what I have...
July 28th, 2025 08:52 - At the Very End of It All (Neville)
Neville, in my carefully curated and quite short list of possibilities,...
July 28th, 2025 08:45 - Who ate all the pies? (Orchidee)
I think you are about to pass the Kardashians ....Your life and times so...
July 27th, 2025 19:31 - Wild Child (Tristan Robert Lange)
Empathy comes via my experience of reggae - the first time I could move at...
July 26th, 2025 17:07 - Sorting out Santa (Orchidee)
High time you got central heating, Son. I know you\'ve been around a long...
July 26th, 2025 07:18 - 5 Months (Orchidee)
Is Carol the pet name for the AI which writes your Xmas hymns, Orchi?
July 25th, 2025 19:17 - I Wrote. She Generated (Samuel)
A lot of it about - MPS is a good case study. How to cope with AI is one...
July 25th, 2025 19:11 - Invisible (Andy Hunter)
Well written rhymer which conveys an easily understood situation indeed.
...
July 23rd, 2025 18:53 - Soldier`s Remorse (Poetic Licence)
Well documented, or perhaps apocryphal, or somewhere between the two are...
July 23rd, 2025 18:42 - WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ? (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A well written and constructed work.
However, questions remain:
What...
July 23rd, 2025 18:31 - Fido wants to know (Orchidee)
If Fido don\'t know who or what he is, and you, orchi suffer from periodic...
July 22nd, 2025 18:09 - I am left bear and open (Newt)
Bare.
Edit and then delete this.
July 22nd, 2025 17:55 - The Weasel (Tony Grannell)
Wot a luverly lad! Ain\'t he got class....
Got this small but nasty thing...
July 21st, 2025 17:46 - Is it funny? (Orchidee)
Deeply philosophical, orchi if yer read between the lines....
July 20th, 2025 17:43 - Use that brain cell or three (Orchidee)
Cryptic meanings = metaphors, in my book, Fido. Please include that in...
July 19th, 2025 20:33 - Password Day. (Goldfinch60)
Before I eliminated the buggers, I had a very small but effective number...
July 19th, 2025 20:10 - Giant Lobster. (Poetic Licence)
AI or not? There\'s a smidgin of ambiguity in your comments, Tobani....
July 19th, 2025 19:58 - Fishers of Men (Tony Grannell)
Mystery in the land of deep poetic rhythms.
Ne\'er to be solved, just...
July 18th, 2025 19:50 - Spiraling out of Control (Thomas W Case)
Great piece. Somebody knows, but where\'s the percentage in letting you...
July 16th, 2025 16:39 - Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy)
When I visit a friend here, I do wonder if it might be you in a completely...
July 16th, 2025 07:25 - Cereal To Eat. (Poetic Licence)
Desperately difficult (not a good word - must be a better one out there)...
July 16th, 2025 07:04 - A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
If you feel strong where your are now, man - stay with it.
July 16th, 2025 06:54 - I Coulda Been a Poet (Tony Grannell)
😆Ah now that\'s a poem on poetry I can relate to and even fave. A real...
July 16th, 2025 01:59 - Ode To An Olive. (Goldfinch60)
So you\'ve never busted a tooth on one of their stones? All that salt and...
July 16th, 2025 01:38 - Color Blind? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Subtle crafting meant I, wrapped in the pleasant way in which the science...
July 15th, 2025 20:16 - What do You Think of when you Think about Death? (M.E.M.)
Yes Yalom is an interesting writer if you are at all interested in...
July 15th, 2025 19:02 - The War That Defies Justification (ElizabethMoroz)
I believe I\'ve said what I had to say about your poetry previously, and I...
July 15th, 2025 06:50 - CHOKE ! (Chris Duffy)
Not typical of your stuff Chris - what happened?
I look forward to your...
July 15th, 2025 06:31 - Standing Alone. (Poetic Licence)
Definitely not \'sadly\'.
July 15th, 2025 06:01 - an orchard’s lament (Arqios)
Surely I have no need to know the complexities of Chekov\'s play to...
July 15th, 2025 05:54 - Our Terrorist Departed (Tony Grannell)
Was he a naughty boy, then?
Your rhyme rhythm and flow just make for an...
July 14th, 2025 08:44 - Pure Poison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
As a long term vegetarian, what can I tell ya?
Keep going. I enjoy your...
July 14th, 2025 08:31 - The Age of Lies (ElizabethMoroz)
As usual, lost in the rhyme and rhythm of your piece and the ideas that...
July 14th, 2025 07:54 - FIGHTING AN INVISIBLE BATTLE- INTERSTITAL CYSTITIS (PassionatePoetess)
do that mean you got stingy piddle?
July 14th, 2025 06:59 - NOT YOUR CINDERELLA (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
Jolly good darling......
July 14th, 2025 06:32 - Favourites? (Orchidee)
Nah that\'s too obvious - name appears.....\'Likes\' is more sneaky,...
July 14th, 2025 02:36 - Haha, The Old Disappearing Trick (Cheeky Missy)
Definitely fed me well enough to see me through.
Pinned with a certain...
July 13th, 2025 20:30 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
This theme can continue - on to my next, \'Oracle\'.
July 13th, 2025 08:44 - from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios)
Nothing quite like a cat (well the one I have a sometime acquaintance with...
July 13th, 2025 08:19 - The storm (NafisaSB)
A rich descriptive piece, timely inasmuch as I believe events such as that...
July 13th, 2025 02:14 - Don\'t Say That Word! (Goldfinch60)
Evokes heat sweat and pain - and that\'s just from the seat you were...
July 13th, 2025 01:55 - Roasted Turkey. (Poetic Licence)
Roast, baby, roast. I see pictures of nutters in the UK and other...
July 12th, 2025 07:44 - I never knew.... (Orchidee)
Orchi - what you need is an AI assistant. There\'s one on my PC hanging...
July 12th, 2025 07:39 - Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Lies produced when they don\'t know they\'re lying:
Go for it man, go on...
July 12th, 2025 07:24 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
Please also note \"I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!\" by...
July 11th, 2025 20:35 - NO RETURN (SureshG)
I think I couldn\'t agree more. If I read you right, then more people need...
July 11th, 2025 20:14
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