Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Mango (Preeti) There you go - that kind of intelligence (Brixton Beach by Roma Tearne)...
  January 25th, 2021 18:45
• Days like these (Sylviasearcher) Ennui? It\'s what gets me going in the end. the irritation with myself...
  January 25th, 2021 06:27
• walking (Dusk arising) Sounds like you, awake during the wee early hours has persisted, now you...
  January 25th, 2021 00:31
• New Year\'s Resolutions (FredPeyer) If at first you don\'t succeed, at least give someone (me) an empathic...
  January 24th, 2021 22:45
• Spooky Action at a Distance (Philip) Yeh - that makes two (three) of us. OK - Leave it there, and let \'em get...
  January 24th, 2021 18:53
• Toblerone (Preeti) Your poems are pretty enigmatic - to my eyes at least. Would you care to...
  January 24th, 2021 18:27
• Magic Moments. (Goldfinch60) Nostalgia rules - and why not. Thanks Andy.
  January 24th, 2021 05:45
• A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards) I cannot quite put my finger on just what those who watch get out of such...
  January 24th, 2021 05:39
• opposites attract (Dusk arising) Their magnet like attraction kept them both out of trouble, I believe,...
  January 24th, 2021 05:13
• I don\'t know how (Poetic Dan) Refer you back to dusk and Fred. I\'m not going to find anything else...
  January 23rd, 2021 19:17
• fishing rod (Dusk arising) Definitely kept me reading to the reveal. Creeped me out for a while....
  January 23rd, 2021 17:52
• Creative Writing 101 (DesertWords) By all means \"Lay aside the rules and the style\" if you so wish - your...
  January 23rd, 2021 17:42
• Until We Meet Again (DarkSoul98) I get that - You have very well encapsulated the feelings of loss and...
  January 23rd, 2021 17:33
• THE SECRET POLTERGEIST (Nancy Rdz LL) Wot - no garlic?
  January 23rd, 2021 04:03
• RED DAWN (Joe Marcello) The Suburban Bandit rides again. Dave
  January 22nd, 2021 17:56
• Indivisible Fractions (Neville) Is this to be my Destiny, my one true way, Master? Have you bestowed upon...
  January 22nd, 2021 17:15
• Rousing (Fay Slimm.) You have a fine crew of birds there Fay. Great little tribute. Wouldn\'t...
  January 22nd, 2021 06:43
• The owl and the faerie craic (Dusk arising) Olde worlde fairey fun. Got me in. Owls, supposedly wise, can be a pain...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:00
• meaningfulness (Dusk arising) A model every disengaged/separated couple should attempt to follow....
  January 21st, 2021 18:16
• Abhorrent vehement strife hijacking Homo sapiens (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) You\'ve done it again - great stuff! But how? Regards
  January 20th, 2021 18:12
• When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves) Your poem, plus the colouring you’ve added in your comments, paint a...
  January 20th, 2021 17:21
• Weaponry (Fay Slimm.) This photo is terrifying. I cannot look at it without the feeling that in...
  January 20th, 2021 16:59
• A Collection of Slumbers (Neville) I\'m an inveterate collector of bits of old rubbish which I somehow came...
  January 20th, 2021 05:49
• Oh Look! (Goldfinch60) In England now , it\'s no longer \'Jolly hockey sticks!\', it\'s now...
  January 20th, 2021 05:40
• careful silence (Dusk arising) Is this (dare I ask?) from experience? Only having been part of night...
  January 19th, 2021 19:12
• Reasons for Leaving (Neville) You aren\'t doing a Marie Kondo here are you ?? Dave
  January 19th, 2021 06:15
• Today (Jerry Reynolds) Not enough people are trying hard enough. In America, every black person...
  January 18th, 2021 16:46
• Memory Trace (Arobot) For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in. I don\'t...
  January 18th, 2021 16:30
• I Dream a World (Robert Southwick Richmond) Good straightforward job your poem, which I liked for its...
  January 18th, 2021 16:14
• Snooker Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Lucky to be able to get snooker still. Haven\'t been able to see it since...
  January 18th, 2021 07:14
• Could, Would n Should (Suresh) Procrastinate and loose.
  January 17th, 2021 19:48
• Birdspeak (Neville) \'Cos they are straining with all their might....? ...
  January 17th, 2021 06:05
• who are we (FredPeyer) With you all the way, Fred - and further to infinite time and space,...
  January 16th, 2021 17:28
• Life is a risk, get over it! (Poetic Dan) Thanks for that, Dan. Good old Russell B - court jester, truth teller. I...
  January 16th, 2021 06:15
• A Simple Life (Davefmus) Takes me through to the end with little effort. Easy pleasant read -...
  January 16th, 2021 05:03
• RAIN (Michael Edwards) A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very...
  January 16th, 2021 04:37
• In My Mind (Davefmus) Robert - read his first one, Fate? Glad you did obtain The Ode
  January 15th, 2021 22:58
• Lethal Injection (Robert Southwick Richmond) Took a couple of reads, but I think I\'m getting there. Capital...
  January 15th, 2021 22:49
• WRITERS BLOCK HEAD (Joe Marcello) So where do you take it from there, Joe? Dave
  January 15th, 2021 18:36
• Wanton Need (Suresh) \'wanton\'? - not \'driven\'? Just asking...\' Regards. Dave
  January 15th, 2021 18:22
• driftwood (Dusk arising) Yes - memories. When you\'ve had some life history, memories tend to well...
  January 15th, 2021 04:22
• Fate (Davefmus) Accomplished. Who are you davefmus? Welcome to MPS ( I wuz first! :-)...
  January 15th, 2021 00:14
• belong (Dusk arising) Yes - good write, Dusk. MPS is your village (is for me) especially, I...
  January 14th, 2021 17:56
• Empathy Taken (Jerry Reynolds) On the other hand........ Let\'s try to take a more global view of...
  January 14th, 2021 07:04
• A tango (Siranswerer) Watching a tango myself, it\'s precisely as you write.... A really good...
  January 14th, 2021 06:50
• PUT THE FIRE OUT (Michael Edwards) Didn\'t do the picture in a morning through, did you Michael? Come on -...
  January 14th, 2021 05:03
• Whiskey and Blood Run Together (Robert Southwick Richmond) I hate to have to ask you, but can I have the whiskey? Apart from that,...
  January 13th, 2021 15:53
• Scream & shout to find what lifes about (Poetic Dan) (Provided you don\'t scare other people, scream all you like, mate.) Dan,...
  January 13th, 2021 15:35
• Remembered (Neville) Ah - that\'s better! You\'ve got a rich and cherished memory at...
  January 13th, 2021 05:38
• Wild and Precious (M.E.M.) I think you have what it takes - the ability to see some of what exists...
  January 13th, 2021 05:33
• Lockdown Life. (Goldfinch60) What a perfect day Andy, perfectly timed, perfectly balanced, well...
  January 13th, 2021 03:39
• insomnia (AJ) So get it sorted please - nothing like good communication. Dave
  January 13th, 2021 03:26
• For a Nuclear Cargo Cult (Robert Southwick Richmond) Nice picture of a post apocalyptic world there. Yor mean noone, no sliver...
  January 12th, 2021 22:50
• The Poet\'s Ploy (Kevin Michael Bloor) A \'little\' sonnet with an incisive analysis of an aspiring poet\'s ways...
  January 12th, 2021 22:33
• Diary Note (Neville) I cannot get it - don\'t any of you have rich and cherished memories?
  January 12th, 2021 00:21
• MY NATION NO FAITH, NO LOVE (Blackhawkwings) I\'ll give this one a big miss, I think, Jim. I cannot even get my head...
  January 11th, 2021 19:01
• behind the shield (Dusk arising) Who cannot relate to those words? Certainly a couple of contacts I still...
  January 11th, 2021 18:46
• Imprinted (Fay Slimm.) I enjoyed that, Fay. And engineered with your usual meticulousness. Just...
  January 11th, 2021 18:30
• Where Would I Be Without It? (Goldfinch60) Now you’ve done it Andy. Down the rabbit hole that is utube, morning...
  January 11th, 2021 18:18
• Peace of Mind (Poem by ink) I\'d vote for you L.B. (I think) Far too much fatalistic introspection,...
  January 11th, 2021 06:10
• LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants ) (Michael Edwards) And there once was a tramp from near Barking Who whipped out his (18+)...
  January 11th, 2021 05:34
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (1) Almost Midnight (Doggerel Dave) Got it. Quite an extensive Wikipedia article on \'gandy dancer\'. The hand...
  January 11th, 2021 05:02
• A Piece of Cake (FredPeyer) Good for you, Fred - you tell it like it is. Half of your correspondents...
  January 10th, 2021 05:12
• Gender Equality and F*ck the Patriarchy (Maria_) Hey Maria - apologies for the long gap - the Festive Season...
  January 10th, 2021 04:31
• Shatter (Xlayla55x) Affairs of the heart are not what I normally do, but as this is the last...
  December 21st, 2020 06:17
• I LOVE ME (Shearonder1987) Hi Shironder: Apologies, but I have to agree with them above: for me It\'s...
  December 21st, 2020 01:11
• Gender Equality and F*ck the Patriarchy (Maria_) Hang in there, Maria. The patriarchy exists here, there, everywhere. How...
  December 21st, 2020 00:38
• Strange Lady. (Goldfinch60) I love \'Ole Man River, but have up until now never heard it without Paul...
  December 20th, 2020 19:08
• A PAIR OF ANTIQUES (Michael Edwards) Where did you wear them? :-) Dave PS: testing ..One.. ...
  December 20th, 2020 06:38
• That Point in my Life (FredPeyer) Fred: I\'ve got to admit the truth you emit. Dave
  December 19th, 2020 22:52
• Forbidden Planet (Robert Southwick Richmond) \' Told you I would be trailing way behind - and so it comes to...
  December 19th, 2020 19:31
• MARK OF THE DEVIUL (Joe Marcello) Yes - the question mark has died for fear of the pile on which may well...
  December 19th, 2020 05:38
• Value of respect (Shearonder1987) Good for you, Shearonder. Just wish it was that easy... Regards Dave
  December 18th, 2020 21:01
• Chelidonium majus 30C (Robert Southwick Richmond) The fact that the pills inspired an enjoyable poem is great. You...
  December 18th, 2020 20:56
• Poet of the Peaks (Kevin Michael Bloor) I know you will keep it going (I hope so, anyway) Regards Dave
  December 17th, 2020 19:30
• Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī (جلال‌الدین محمد رومی) (Robert Southwick Richmond) Well certainly not the Rubáiyát as such, but Edward FitzGerald of course...
  December 17th, 2020 18:42
• The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise) Or, just rich man\'s erotica - give them a break, there was no internet...
  December 17th, 2020 16:35
• Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī (جلال‌الدین محمد رومی) (Robert Southwick Richmond) Please keep posting - I\'ll follow, or rather trail, far behind but still...
  December 17th, 2020 16:28
• Farewell to Stromness. (Goldfinch60) You are a musical education, Andy - and for that I can\'t thank you...
  December 17th, 2020 04:50
• Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Anyone there in a happy spot? :-) Dave
  December 17th, 2020 01:02
• Snow Storm (Jerry Reynolds) Heat and humidity calls it\'s own tune- Puffing and coughing until way...
  December 17th, 2020 00:35
• Sing to me Thalia (Jerry Reynolds) Don\'t know what WhatsApp is, but certainly see the illustration above as...
  December 15th, 2020 01:46
• Everyone needs someone to look down upon. (Trenz Pruca) Emphasis on political system, which is rubbish and getting worse -...
  December 15th, 2020 01:38
• Poem, Where is the Love? (AwHec8) Come on Mate - thought you were going to reform. Seems little point in...
  December 15th, 2020 01:19
• Walking (Peto) New material next time? I\'ll have the old material if it\'s like...
  December 15th, 2020 00:39
• Bedtime for tiny tots (Dusk arising) Great one, Dusk. Took me back (way back) to that time of innocence (yes -...
  December 14th, 2020 18:49
• The Endearment Of The Deer Trilogy (Alan .S. Jeeves) That wasn\'t slapped together in ten minutes, was it Alan? Both the...
  December 13th, 2020 23:41
• THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards) Thanks for the intro to Chic Murray, Michael. As above re the...
  December 13th, 2020 06:43
• No Time (FredPeyer) Good advice you\'ve modeled there - I think I\'ll keep it for future...
  December 13th, 2020 00:37
• NIGELLA (Michael Edwards) Oo.. arr.. phew...
  December 13th, 2020 00:19
• The Moon\'s Call. (Goldfinch60) Thanks, as usual for Chet and the Proms, Andy. Dave Ps: and the poem, I...
  December 12th, 2020 04:55
• The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) After all that feedback, Andy, your true path as a poet is set for you...
  December 12th, 2020 01:34
• QUICK PICK (Joe Marcello) Got something there ; I\'ll have to give it some thought...but not too...
  December 11th, 2020 21:52
• The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) Hah hah hah - couldn\'t stop laughing, great stuff. Thanks a lot Andy -...
  December 11th, 2020 03:06
• When you\'re miles away (MendedFences27) The craft, construction, rhythm; I can take that poetry all day (and...
  December 11th, 2020 02:59
• Do unto me (Rebecca Anne) Messy\'s right - must be terribly wearying. Regards Dave
  December 10th, 2020 19:16
• I am a woman, I am the darkness. (CaitEva) Like to tell about the divine feminine? I love women (not all, of course,...
  December 10th, 2020 19:10
• PLEASE RECYCLE GLASS ! FIVE QUATRAINS & A DOUBLET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Hear hear - Bottles, I love \'em - they are on every available window sill...
  December 10th, 2020 05:55
• More back In Return. (Goldfinch60) Ahh Albatross - always sets me off and away and I struggle to get back to...
  December 10th, 2020 03:41
• The Ballerina (SirenBrenda) I\'m not sure I\'m the most appropriate person to be first off with the...
  December 9th, 2020 20:17