Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Poem, Who are You Really? (AwHec8) Some well posed questions there, Don. I think you are right - stay close...
  February 7th, 2021 18:24
• Just (Searchin4Soul) Enjoyed your creative use of terminology here, such as \'holucination\'...
  February 7th, 2021 18:05
• A Nod to Society (Poetry_Lover) Go on - give it a go, have a shout. But no just here - out there, where it...
  February 7th, 2021 04:31
• Thankful to nature everyday (Poetic Dan) Enjoyed your poem, Dan - also your comments (I was very taken with them)...
  February 7th, 2021 04:09
• Stream of consciousness….. (JonathanB) Your last \'comments\' sentence - not sure if you were sincere or just...
  February 6th, 2021 21:01
• Masks (DesertWords) Great piece of satire which hums along with pace rhythm and...
  February 6th, 2021 20:38
• MIND AND YOURS (Joe Marcello) Yes Joe - I\'ll vote for them - your lines, NOT the proud members.
  February 5th, 2021 18:06
• Welcome to 2020 (Chick) I can understand why it might be difficult to find for many today, but is...
  February 5th, 2021 17:32
• Dignity\'s Wealth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Dignity\'s Wealth has definite resonances for me as I visit a unisex (or...
  February 5th, 2021 17:19
• Poem, Ode to the Pain (AwHec8) Liked your comments - very pertinent.
  February 5th, 2021 17:00
• Brain To Heart (Pacifique Niyitanga) And peace, tranquility prevailed? I understood your work, enjoyed it very...
  February 5th, 2021 06:53
• Flimsy Stunners (Fay Slimm.) You have just reminded me of the wonder I felt when examining the first...
  February 5th, 2021 06:43
• Questions (Trenz Pruca) As many thumbs up as I can find, Trenz. Cleanly and simply put together....
  February 5th, 2021 00:01
• Daisy (Mminarik00) Whither whence though?
  February 4th, 2021 19:34
• Sharpen My Love (M.E.M.) Great fun - full of whimsy. Agree with bLq above, but don\'t abandon that...
  February 4th, 2021 19:11
• Ground Hog Day (Jerry Reynolds) \'a mere fart\' any good? :-) Just send a little of that cold over by...
  February 4th, 2021 19:04
• No Holidays. (Goldfinch60) \"Just a thought\"??? Go on Andy - you keep thinking if that keeps you...
  February 4th, 2021 03:18
• No grandmasters (Poetic Dan) You\'ve cracked it, I think, Dan
  February 4th, 2021 01:00
• the richest soil (Dusk arising) Well put, Dusk. Great to see you fearing for the world rather than just...
  February 4th, 2021 00:53
• Snowdrops (Kevin Michael Bloor) Nothing too feeble about that, Blue. I don\'t normally \'get\' nature...
  February 3rd, 2021 20:37
• LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS (Michael Edwards) Oh, come now Michael - \'Less is more\' don\'t you know? Me, I still...
  February 3rd, 2021 19:32
• Gone (Jerry Reynolds) Nice one , Jerry - imaginative images are always open to adjustment and...
  February 2nd, 2021 17:21
• AN ARTISAN (Michael Edwards) Been thinking for sometime that if, owing to covid restrictions you ran...
  February 2nd, 2021 04:38
• The View From The Window. (Goldfinch60) Revealed yourself as a writer of great short stories with a twist. New...
  February 2nd, 2021 04:31
• Solitary (Lily_) I\'m not sure anyone is convinced by advice (being told) by others - it...
  February 2nd, 2021 04:22
• Trigger warning Eating Disorder (Chick) That’s a lucid description of a disorder which to many (including to...
  February 1st, 2021 21:10
• Brave In The Grave (Pacifique Niyitanga) Some of the fine detail re the circumstances a little difficult to...
  January 31st, 2021 19:36
• Sun Kissed (Dove) Completely justified your nom de plume, RB - double points....
  January 31st, 2021 19:16
• OVERDOSING (Prince Rin Okumura) Back grounded colours here make parts of this impossible to read for...
  January 31st, 2021 18:55
• Spring Love (Jerry Reynolds) A rich piece of poetic embroidery ensures that memory in this instance...
  January 31st, 2021 18:48
• Miss Take (Neville) The ephemeral nature of culturally imposed standards of ‘beauty’...
  January 31st, 2021 18:39
• a prayer for..... (Dusk arising) You are a wordsmith, dusk. One can only hope...
  January 31st, 2021 05:01
• That Photograph. (Goldfinch60) I can understand why that photo is important to you, Andy. It is sometimes...
  January 30th, 2021 04:05
• Through the looking glass (Heatherbee) Sometimes one must. When the hairs sprouting out my nose start poking me...
  January 29th, 2021 18:25
• A message or a reminder (Trin) Powerfully put together. Looks you’ve got toxic interpersonal...
  January 29th, 2021 18:19
• Attitude. (Fay Slimm.) Phew Fay! Not going to comment on your style’s architecture this...
  January 29th, 2021 17:57
• A restless night (Heatherbee) Real, measured and described, your poem. I have more than a nodding...
  January 28th, 2021 16:59
• TIME TO HIT (Michael Edwards) Situation well framed in the picture, Michael. Did you settle for baked...
  January 28th, 2021 01:09
• The Freeway in my Head (FredPeyer) Don\'t know quite how to tackle this Fred - It is a very rich description...
  January 28th, 2021 01:03
• The First Bloom (Heatherbee) Now I\'ve started (second time today - you are not alone!!) I may be doing...
  January 27th, 2021 19:24
• Rooms (Oldmat) Contribution from a pedant: \'On too the future\' - try \'On to the...
  January 27th, 2021 18:34
• Her Again (Lizzie Lara) So you invite suggestions and concerns both here and in your last...
  January 27th, 2021 05:37
• LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards) Where? When? Words, combined with your picture do have a certain appeal -...
  January 26th, 2021 02:57
• Grumpy Old Men (John Prophet) Will you cut out your vapid generalizations? Old people come on all...
  January 26th, 2021 00:45
• Stunningly Clear Vistas (FredPeyer) Hallucinatory Fred? Dave
  January 25th, 2021 22:22
• Why is it so hard when it… (Jerry Reynolds) So was it hard or was it effortless? Looks effortless....
  January 25th, 2021 19:34
• Farewell To Arms (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Great question - those first two lines. Homelessness, PTSD, high suicide...
  January 25th, 2021 19:28
• Mango (Preeti) There you go - that kind of intelligence (Brixton Beach by Roma Tearne)...
  January 25th, 2021 18:45
• Days like these (Sylviasearcher) Ennui? It\'s what gets me going in the end. the irritation with myself...
  January 25th, 2021 06:27
• walking (Dusk arising) Sounds like you, awake during the wee early hours has persisted, now you...
  January 25th, 2021 00:31
• New Year\'s Resolutions (FredPeyer) If at first you don\'t succeed, at least give someone (me) an empathic...
  January 24th, 2021 22:45
• Spooky Action at a Distance (Philip) Yeh - that makes two (three) of us. OK - Leave it there, and let \'em get...
  January 24th, 2021 18:53
• Toblerone (Preeti) Your poems are pretty enigmatic - to my eyes at least. Would you care to...
  January 24th, 2021 18:27
• Magic Moments. (Goldfinch60) Nostalgia rules - and why not. Thanks Andy.
  January 24th, 2021 05:45
• A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards) I cannot quite put my finger on just what those who watch get out of such...
  January 24th, 2021 05:39
• opposites attract (Dusk arising) Their magnet like attraction kept them both out of trouble, I believe,...
  January 24th, 2021 05:13
• I don\'t know how (Poetic Dan) Refer you back to dusk and Fred. I\'m not going to find anything else...
  January 23rd, 2021 19:17
• fishing rod (Dusk arising) Definitely kept me reading to the reveal. Creeped me out for a while....
  January 23rd, 2021 17:52
• Creative Writing 101 (DesertWords) By all means \"Lay aside the rules and the style\" if you so wish - your...
  January 23rd, 2021 17:42
• Until We Meet Again (DarkSoul98) I get that - You have very well encapsulated the feelings of loss and...
  January 23rd, 2021 17:33
• THE SECRET POLTERGEIST (Nancy Rdz LL) Wot - no garlic?
  January 23rd, 2021 04:03
• RED DAWN (Joe Marcello) The Suburban Bandit rides again. Dave
  January 22nd, 2021 17:56
• Indivisible Fractions (Neville) Is this to be my Destiny, my one true way, Master? Have you bestowed upon...
  January 22nd, 2021 17:15
• Rousing (Fay Slimm.) You have a fine crew of birds there Fay. Great little tribute. Wouldn\'t...
  January 22nd, 2021 06:43
• The owl and the faerie craic (Dusk arising) Olde worlde fairey fun. Got me in. Owls, supposedly wise, can be a pain...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:00
• meaningfulness (Dusk arising) A model every disengaged/separated couple should attempt to follow....
  January 21st, 2021 18:16
• Abhorrent vehement strife hijacking Homo sapiens (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) You\'ve done it again - great stuff! But how? Regards
  January 20th, 2021 18:12
• When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves) Your poem, plus the colouring you’ve added in your comments, paint a...
  January 20th, 2021 17:21
• Weaponry (Fay Slimm.) This photo is terrifying. I cannot look at it without the feeling that in...
  January 20th, 2021 16:59
• A Collection of Slumbers (Neville) I\'m an inveterate collector of bits of old rubbish which I somehow came...
  January 20th, 2021 05:49
• Oh Look! (Goldfinch60) In England now , it\'s no longer \'Jolly hockey sticks!\', it\'s now...
  January 20th, 2021 05:40
• careful silence (Dusk arising) Is this (dare I ask?) from experience? Only having been part of night...
  January 19th, 2021 19:12
• Reasons for Leaving (Neville) You aren\'t doing a Marie Kondo here are you ?? Dave
  January 19th, 2021 06:15
• Today (Jerry Reynolds) Not enough people are trying hard enough. In America, every black person...
  January 18th, 2021 16:46
• Memory Trace (Arobot) For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in. I don\'t...
  January 18th, 2021 16:30
• I Dream a World (Robert Southwick Richmond) Good straightforward job your poem, which I liked for its...
  January 18th, 2021 16:14
• Snooker Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Lucky to be able to get snooker still. Haven\'t been able to see it since...
  January 18th, 2021 07:14
• Could, Would n Should (Suresh) Procrastinate and loose.
  January 17th, 2021 19:48
• Birdspeak (Neville) \'Cos they are straining with all their might....? ...
  January 17th, 2021 06:05
• who are we (FredPeyer) With you all the way, Fred - and further to infinite time and space,...
  January 16th, 2021 17:28
• Life is a risk, get over it! (Poetic Dan) Thanks for that, Dan. Good old Russell B - court jester, truth teller. I...
  January 16th, 2021 06:15
• A Simple Life (Davefmus) Takes me through to the end with little effort. Easy pleasant read -...
  January 16th, 2021 05:03
• RAIN (Michael Edwards) A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very...
  January 16th, 2021 04:37
• In My Mind (Davefmus) Robert - read his first one, Fate? Glad you did obtain The Ode
  January 15th, 2021 22:58
• Lethal Injection (Robert Southwick Richmond) Took a couple of reads, but I think I\'m getting there. Capital...
  January 15th, 2021 22:49
• WRITERS BLOCK HEAD (Joe Marcello) So where do you take it from there, Joe? Dave
  January 15th, 2021 18:36
• Wanton Need (Suresh) \'wanton\'? - not \'driven\'? Just asking...\' Regards. Dave
  January 15th, 2021 18:22
• driftwood (Dusk arising) Yes - memories. When you\'ve had some life history, memories tend to well...
  January 15th, 2021 04:22
• Fate (Davefmus) Accomplished. Who are you davefmus? Welcome to MPS ( I wuz first! :-)...
  January 15th, 2021 00:14
• belong (Dusk arising) Yes - good write, Dusk. MPS is your village (is for me) especially, I...
  January 14th, 2021 17:56
• Empathy Taken (Jerry Reynolds) On the other hand........ Let\'s try to take a more global view of...
  January 14th, 2021 07:04
• A tango (Siranswerer) Watching a tango myself, it\'s precisely as you write.... A really good...
  January 14th, 2021 06:50
• PUT THE FIRE OUT (Michael Edwards) Didn\'t do the picture in a morning through, did you Michael? Come on -...
  January 14th, 2021 05:03
• Whiskey and Blood Run Together (Robert Southwick Richmond) I hate to have to ask you, but can I have the whiskey? Apart from that,...
  January 13th, 2021 15:53
• Scream & shout to find what lifes about (Poetic Dan) (Provided you don\'t scare other people, scream all you like, mate.) Dan,...
  January 13th, 2021 15:35
• Remembered (Neville) Ah - that\'s better! You\'ve got a rich and cherished memory at...
  January 13th, 2021 05:38
• Wild and Precious (M.E.M.) I think you have what it takes - the ability to see some of what exists...
  January 13th, 2021 05:33
• Lockdown Life. (Goldfinch60) What a perfect day Andy, perfectly timed, perfectly balanced, well...
  January 13th, 2021 03:39
• insomnia (AJ) So get it sorted please - nothing like good communication. Dave
  January 13th, 2021 03:26
• For a Nuclear Cargo Cult (Robert Southwick Richmond) Nice picture of a post apocalyptic world there. Yor mean noone, no sliver...
  January 12th, 2021 22:50