Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Peace of Mind (Poem by ink)
I\'d vote for you L.B. (I think) Far too much fatalistic introspection,...
January 11th, 2021 06:10 - LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants ) (Michael Edwards)
And there once was a tramp from near Barking
Who whipped out his (18+)...
January 11th, 2021 05:34 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (1) Almost Midnight (Doggerel Dave)
Got it. Quite an extensive Wikipedia article on \'gandy dancer\'. The hand...
January 11th, 2021 05:02 - A Piece of Cake (FredPeyer)
Good for you, Fred - you tell it like it is. Half of your correspondents...
January 10th, 2021 05:12 - Gender Equality and F*ck the Patriarchy (Maria_)
Hey Maria - apologies for the long gap - the Festive Season...
January 10th, 2021 04:31 - Shatter (Xlayla55x)
Affairs of the heart are not what I normally do, but as this is the last...
December 21st, 2020 06:17 - I LOVE ME (Shearonder1987)
Hi Shironder: Apologies, but I have to agree with them above: for me It\'s...
December 21st, 2020 01:11 - Gender Equality and F*ck the Patriarchy (Maria_)
Hang in there, Maria. The patriarchy exists here, there, everywhere. How...
December 21st, 2020 00:38 - Strange Lady. (Goldfinch60)
I love \'Ole Man River, but have up until now never heard it without Paul...
December 20th, 2020 19:08 - A PAIR OF ANTIQUES (Michael Edwards)
Where did you wear them? :-)
Dave
PS: testing ..One.. ...
December 20th, 2020 06:38 - That Point in my Life (FredPeyer)
Fred:
I\'ve got to admit
the truth you emit.
Dave
December 19th, 2020 22:52 - Forbidden Planet (Robert Southwick Richmond)
\' Told you I would be trailing way behind - and so it comes to...
December 19th, 2020 19:31 - MARK OF THE DEVIUL (Joe Marcello)
Yes - the question mark has died for fear of the pile on which may well...
December 19th, 2020 05:38 - Value of respect (Shearonder1987)
Good for you, Shearonder.
Just wish it was that easy...
Regards Dave
December 18th, 2020 21:01 - Chelidonium majus 30C (Robert Southwick Richmond)
The fact that the pills inspired an enjoyable poem is great.
You...
December 18th, 2020 20:56 - Poet of the Peaks (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I know you will keep it going (I hope so, anyway)
Regards Dave
December 17th, 2020 19:30 - Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī (جلالالدین محمد رومی) (Robert Southwick Richmond)
Well certainly not the Rubáiyát as such, but Edward FitzGerald of course...
December 17th, 2020 18:42 - The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise)
Or, just rich man\'s erotica - give them a break, there was no internet...
December 17th, 2020 16:35 - Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī (جلالالدین محمد رومی) (Robert Southwick Richmond)
Please keep posting - I\'ll follow, or rather trail, far behind but still...
December 17th, 2020 16:28 - Farewell to Stromness. (Goldfinch60)
You are a musical education, Andy - and for that I can\'t thank you...
December 17th, 2020 04:50 - Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Anyone there in a happy spot? :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 01:02 - Snow Storm (Jerry Reynolds)
Heat and humidity calls it\'s own tune-
Puffing and coughing until way...
December 17th, 2020 00:35 - Sing to me Thalia (Jerry Reynolds)
Don\'t know what WhatsApp is, but certainly see the illustration above as...
December 15th, 2020 01:46 - Everyone needs someone to look down upon. (Trenz Pruca)
Emphasis on political system, which is rubbish and getting worse -...
December 15th, 2020 01:38 - Poem, Where is the Love? (AwHec8)
Come on Mate - thought you were going to reform.
Seems little point in...
December 15th, 2020 01:19 - Walking (Peto)
New material next time? I\'ll have the old material if it\'s like...
December 15th, 2020 00:39 - Bedtime for tiny tots (Dusk arising)
Great one, Dusk. Took me back (way back) to that time of innocence (yes -...
December 14th, 2020 18:49 - The Endearment Of The Deer Trilogy (Alan .S. Jeeves)
That wasn\'t slapped together in ten minutes, was it Alan? Both the...
December 13th, 2020 23:41 - THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for the intro to Chic Murray, Michael.
As above re the...
December 13th, 2020 06:43 - No Time (FredPeyer)
Good advice you\'ve modeled there - I think I\'ll keep it for future...
December 13th, 2020 00:37 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
Oo.. arr.. phew...
December 13th, 2020 00:19 - The Moon\'s Call. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks, as usual for Chet and the Proms, Andy.
Dave
Ps: and the poem, I...
December 12th, 2020 04:55 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
After all that feedback, Andy, your true path as a poet is set for you...
December 12th, 2020 01:34 - QUICK PICK (Joe Marcello)
Got something there ; I\'ll have to give it some thought...but not too...
December 11th, 2020 21:52 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Hah hah hah - couldn\'t stop laughing, great stuff. Thanks a lot Andy -...
December 11th, 2020 03:06 - When you\'re miles away (MendedFences27)
The craft, construction, rhythm; I can take that poetry all day (and...
December 11th, 2020 02:59 - Do unto me (Rebecca Anne)
Messy\'s right - must be terribly wearying.
Regards Dave
December 10th, 2020 19:16 - I am a woman, I am the darkness. (CaitEva)
Like to tell about the divine feminine? I love women (not all, of course,...
December 10th, 2020 19:10 - PLEASE RECYCLE GLASS ! FIVE QUATRAINS & A DOUBLET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hear hear - Bottles, I love \'em - they are on every available window sill...
December 10th, 2020 05:55 - More back In Return. (Goldfinch60)
Ahh Albatross - always sets me off and away and I struggle to get back to...
December 10th, 2020 03:41 - The Ballerina (SirenBrenda)
I\'m not sure I\'m the most appropriate person to be first off with the...
December 9th, 2020 20:17 - Tree\'s Lament (Dlherrmann)
Come on mate – this place thrives on interaction: Let’s hear from you...
December 9th, 2020 06:03 - Applause (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s varied texture which gives this colourful world so much interest and...
December 9th, 2020 03:30 - destiny (Dusk arising)
Glad your muse has gone bush (sorry - on holiday), dusk, otherwise, I can...
December 9th, 2020 03:16 - I can sense your impatience... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Still following.... Did you have to use my legs as a model in there? Bit...
December 9th, 2020 00:02 - Remember Me (M.E.M.)
Easy read - congratulations.
December 8th, 2020 16:11 - Vermeil (Neville)
Neville, (this is where I get thrown out of MPS for heresy) I find the...
December 8th, 2020 03:32 - Spiders (Jerry Reynolds)
\'Ingenious\' little buggers. I Don\'t wish to anthropomorphize but if you...
December 7th, 2020 20:36 - Spiders (Jerry Reynolds)
Cover blown. How spiders get enough tucker has always been a bit of a...
December 7th, 2020 16:58 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
Great epitaph to a worthy artist, Andy.
Regards Dave
December 7th, 2020 04:36 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (4) (Michael Edwards)
Well that\'s hopeless - I\'m Veggo so mine don\'t smell -except in extreme...
December 7th, 2020 04:28 - Tree\'s Lament (Dlherrmann)
I\'m not absolutely certain, but are you talking strange fruit here?
If...
December 6th, 2020 18:47 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards)
Hear hear!
Dave
December 6th, 2020 05:11 - Groundhog Day (Neville)
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours...
December 5th, 2020 22:34 - PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards)
Hi Michael - what do you do with your illustrations? Have you got a book...
December 5th, 2020 19:26 - Relentless Breakdown (M.E.M.)
Hello Andy! Have you assumed a new role; are you Chief Bot or just Bot...
December 5th, 2020 06:06 - PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards)
Hi Michael,: Comment re your Comment: I think absolutely you are right in...
December 5th, 2020 05:37 - Relentless Breakdown (M.E.M.)
...
December 5th, 2020 00:32 - Relentless Breakdown (M.E.M.)
You? another bot?
Deprogramme yourself and let your parts go for...
December 4th, 2020 23:26 - Unadulterated anger (Mocuisle)
Didn\'t get along there? \'Bit of a difference of opinion?
Never...
December 4th, 2020 19:14 - The Gift of Love (Dove)
I don\'t usually respond to love poetry, but this one, yes..
Get it when...
December 4th, 2020 19:01 - Relentless Breakdown (M.E.M.)
Please explain in (would you believe?) English?
Massive leg pull?
Dave
December 4th, 2020 18:48 - Strictly, Here I Come! (Goldfinch60)
You keep going, Andy - should do wonders for the circulation. Enjoyed the...
December 3rd, 2020 06:52 - A firing squat (De Suin)
I have a lifelong detestation of capital punishment.
And a more vivid...
December 2nd, 2020 20:06 - My Poetic Side (RDS)
Nah RD: It’s all the same with you arty types; you need focus here, ...
December 1st, 2020 17:00 - the man power of the 20th century (Lucifer very very very 1st)
WARNING: Bot installed here.
Hey orch.. Got you in has it? What we have...
December 1st, 2020 03:35 - My Poetic Side (RDS)
Hope you got an appropriate fee for this ad.
I did recognise the place so...
December 1st, 2020 00:57 - The First Snow (Arobot)
Real - enjoyed this very much. Great construction. Clean, straightforward...
November 30th, 2020 17:59 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
Points well taken from the other contributors to this thread. The...
November 30th, 2020 17:33 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
Well she knew satisfaction - no ambiguity there... Thanks Fay
Stay...
November 30th, 2020 05:05 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
On one level you are spot on, Andy. If life’s a misery, apparently not...
November 30th, 2020 03:38 - Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Manifest your pleasures that day in the Manifold Valley.
Felt and enjoyed...
November 29th, 2020 19:45 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
Another poem - am I the inspiration or wot....?.....not?
Look after...
November 29th, 2020 04:52 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
Is it not possible, Michael, that conceivably you may perhaps have gone...
November 29th, 2020 04:35 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
I\'ve made this one a favourite (only very recently found out how to do...
November 28th, 2020 17:39 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
Definitely \"Those Lazy-Hazy-Crazy Days of Summer\"
Ah -...
November 28th, 2020 00:46 - Cannabis Cool (A Nonsense Poem) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Geez that\'s strong shit you got there, man..........
November 27th, 2020 22:57 - Inferos (explicit) (Salem_B911)
Every bone in my body is telling me I should creep quietly around...
November 27th, 2020 22:46 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
Going to keep this short as I couldn\'t possibly articulate anything to...
November 27th, 2020 22:33 - The Girl Who Loaned Me A Pencil (Dylan Lawler)
Makes terrible, but perfect sense. Situation clearly defined.
Saw and...
November 26th, 2020 19:09 - underworld (Tylerintheclouds)
I\'ll be honest - I don\'t usually get along at all well with the poetry...
November 26th, 2020 18:48 - Sorrow\'s Season (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Hell of a tale: colour, change, and activity. Plus the underlying sorrow...
November 26th, 2020 06:22 - Always There For Me. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for the musical peace offering Andy. More than settles the...
November 26th, 2020 03:39 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
A loverly piece of matured Whimsy; piquant with subtle flavors of...
November 26th, 2020 03:34 - WORD OF THE YEAR 2020 ~ OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi A & B:
Good fun message, informative, easy to travel with.
Wot no...
November 25th, 2020 00:50 - Impossible mission to identify mine heretically rooted hair issue (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Doggerel Dave
November 18th, 2020 03:46
I continue to enjoy what you do...
November 25th, 2020 00:30 - Overthinker (Brittany Jo)
I remember (believe it or not...) that feeling which pervaded the years...
November 24th, 2020 15:57 - Helping hands (RDS)
Couldn\'t throw some light on \'Estuarine\' could you? How it has...
November 24th, 2020 05:57 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
Felt that and it hurts.
Left me a bit raw.
Dave
November 24th, 2020 05:01 - Poetry in motion (Poetic Dan)
Rescue greyhound?
If so deserves all the care and compassion you give -...
November 24th, 2020 04:50 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
You succeeded.
Nothing much more to add, Andy - they\'ve mostly said it...
November 24th, 2020 04:40 - UK CHRISTMAS 2020 STAMPS ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A & B, Greetings!
That was great - thanks. As promised.
Next year are...
November 23rd, 2020 01:07 - Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave)
Grass (no not the stuff you roll up and light) - the horizontal green...
November 23rd, 2020 01:00 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
Metaphor or plain hard boiled reality? Keeps flipping for me... Can...
November 22nd, 2020 18:41 - The Widecombe Fair Chestnut Mare (Alan .S. Jeeves)
You had to travel for that one - didn\'t you? Needed horse had to go?
I...
November 22nd, 2020 18:19 - IM JUST A OWL IN A CHRISTMAS TREE ~ A SEASONABLE BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So – If the festive season and it’s symbols, basically pagan, can be...
November 21st, 2020 03:33 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
Fire engines and purpose in perfect unity plus one of them conundrums...
November 21st, 2020 03:18 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Advice that can\'t be bettered there Andy.
I hope there is, but maybe...
November 21st, 2020 03:06 - I Spend a Lot of Time with People that Don\'t Exist (Quemis)
Post Script:
Ring a \'Help\' line if you feel you have noone you can...
November 20th, 2020 23:17 - OFF THE CLOCK (Joe Marcello)
Great - short sharp and witty. And true.
A long period of unemployment...
November 20th, 2020 19:03
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