Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Perpetual Insanity (Coyote) Thanks, C for applying your poetic talent to war, something which has...
  August 24th, 2021 20:51
• Two Herds, Two Fates (Flyingfish) I’ve tried hard not to comment on your piece here. This represents...
  August 24th, 2021 19:59
• A Pair of Men (Jay-Lee Jane) Great structure to the poem and clear descriptions of the two characters I...
  August 24th, 2021 19:19
• A Cat Called Rabbit (Langton) Yes, this is a ‘well done’ piece of poetry. Brings out the reminiscent...
  August 24th, 2021 08:50
• Perception (Fay Slimm.) Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now...
  August 24th, 2021 08:32
• Superfluity (Jo) And neither should you be obliged to. Mum wants to fulfill her desired...
  August 24th, 2021 05:54
• Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60) Happens to me often enough , Andy. Even with the task list, half the items...
  August 24th, 2021 01:33
• When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville) Value the human with a conscience, Nev - sometimes I believe they are...
  August 24th, 2021 01:27
• Aqua Regia (HannahElisabeth) Another one down done and dusted. As a bloke (guy) should I start to feel...
  August 24th, 2021 01:18
• Superman (Anthony Esposito) I am unsure if this is high satire or some expression of an unmet...
  August 23rd, 2021 19:33
• The Fullest of Moons (Neville) I can see two seriously intriguing pictures here , Nev - the first, your...
  August 23rd, 2021 08:01
• Worry (Lorna) I never knew you cared, Lorna..... A polished write that speaks of...
  August 23rd, 2021 04:02
• The Within (Flyingfish) Plenty of intelligence and thought been thrown at this question - to me it...
  August 23rd, 2021 02:27
• Fools and Horses (Jim Jimminy) I\'ve had a few jobs in my time, one or two interesting some just this...
  August 23rd, 2021 01:02
• Fools and Horses (Jim Jimminy) Meat = meet. Change and I\'ll scrub this.
  August 23rd, 2021 00:50
• Mime (Coyote) I know that feeling. Why? (and this is not directed at you C, but to any...
  August 23rd, 2021 00:41
• A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville) Much hard graft went into that, Nev – and more worthy grounds would be...
  August 22nd, 2021 20:33
• A Dream (Dove) Lust, (sorry) - Last stanza got me to perfection. The rest? Yeh well, if...
  August 22nd, 2021 19:45
• Until Day (Fay Slimm.) All my hopes, as time for bed approaches, are to be found, much more...
  August 22nd, 2021 19:28
• Corporal Punishment (Chris Duffy) Of the men who return from totally unnecessary wars, far too many find...
  August 22nd, 2021 07:05
• Old Clock (Lorna) Ignore it, Lorna, ignore it. Agree with the sentiment embodied in your...
  August 22nd, 2021 04:30
• The Issue About Tissues (Cygnus X-1) Congratulations on a neat little rhymer on the toilet tissue riots! Was...
  August 21st, 2021 23:38
• Lands Sake! (Lorna) Oh lordy - love the vernacular, Lorna. Are You hunkered down OK? Roof...
  August 21st, 2021 22:34
• The Vellichor of Canterbury Library (Dove) New word education…You are at it again, Dove. I doubt I will remember...
  August 21st, 2021 22:16
• AGE. (The elder poet) A neat write, ep. Sad I know in some ways, but you can only offer. And...
  August 21st, 2021 21:47
• Hashtag (Jim Jimminy) I don\'t do cyber friendships, all I have is my PC, became acquainted with...
  August 21st, 2021 08:14
• Read all about it (Jim Jimminy) You might have classified this as Humour, .....but I\'ll not be laughing...
  August 21st, 2021 08:02
• Caught (Fay Slimm.) The slave trade, which is not equal opportunity, exploits many thousands,...
  August 21st, 2021 05:48
• Limerence (Neville) Been there, both sides at different times…..did not enjoy either:...
  August 21st, 2021 05:08
• Prolonged offal bout courtesy constipation... redux a worse hellish fate than perdition (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ic3g8Xnf7LI&ab_channel=cojwat
  August 20th, 2021 23:43
• OPEN FLY (Joe Marcello) That woz a surprise after the title.... \'Tis an intriguing question.....
  August 20th, 2021 22:19
• You (HannahElisabeth) Gotcha - hung and framed, but especially hung; perfect material just...
  August 20th, 2021 21:59
• Options (Jerry Reynolds) Thanks Jerry. That news will drive you to ........Nah - start again -...
  August 20th, 2021 21:47
• Never No More (Lorna) Yes Lorna precisely right - takes time to learn that uninformed opinion...
  August 20th, 2021 21:36
• Road Works God. (Goldfinch60) That Road Works God is, I find, particularly active in months May and June...
  August 20th, 2021 20:08
• One Of My Teeth Fell Out Yesterday. (Trenz Pruca) Sorry, Trenz - I encounter this problem from time to time and complain on...
  August 20th, 2021 19:46
• Untitled #2 (Neville) Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks...
  August 20th, 2021 04:16
• The Angle of Her Lay (Neville) A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might...
  August 20th, 2021 01:54
• Leave it there ! (Chris Duffy) Love takes hard work (precisely what you are doing, I think, Chris) It...
  August 20th, 2021 01:03
• Switch Off (Coyote) All of the above C, and then some.... You aren\'t leaving us to write...
  August 20th, 2021 00:47
• Fury (Lorna) Thanks Lorna – that ‘s a very vivid account of a thunder storm…in...
  August 19th, 2021 07:31
• The Honeybee (Classicmister) The role of bees in the environment, their function in keeping us fed,...
  August 19th, 2021 04:31
• [ Execution ] (Heart of Babel) Don\'t get it. And no; it is not compulsory to love a freak.
  August 18th, 2021 23:52
• Untitled 2 (Coyote) If memory serves me correctly. I\'ve stated this before: Man made God...
  August 18th, 2021 18:13
• Left to Bleed (Valerie Alexandra) I can only vote as ep above: The pain will fade, heal, get...
  August 18th, 2021 18:04
• Human Voice (Speechmax21) Stay absent thanks. Product promotion , not poetry.
  August 18th, 2021 17:48
• Chance (Fay Slimm.) \'Romantic notion\'? Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but...
  August 18th, 2021 03:59
• It\'s Just Physics (HannahElisabeth) Not good in this area at all now Hannah: Would you term that a...
  August 18th, 2021 01:21
• Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote) Didn’t have much choice, really did you, C? You can’t count sheep...
  August 17th, 2021 18:23
• Ennui (Lorna) But Lorna , I\'m still not sure if Uncle Vanya flogged off the...
  August 17th, 2021 06:26
• Us (Fay Slimm.) I feel a little sorry for you folks in the northern hemisphere; although...
  August 17th, 2021 04:59
• Elusive Blues (Neville) I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own...
  August 17th, 2021 04:34
• Destiny (Classicmister) Could be...I\'m not sure...but fate or not, your portrait is fair comment...
  August 16th, 2021 08:24
• Alt. End #6 (aka The Truth of it all) (Andrew Charles Forrest) Humpty is no orphan - don\'t we all get trampled on by \'the governments...
  August 16th, 2021 08:19
• Sunday Shivers (Lorna) Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just...
  August 16th, 2021 07:46
• Yellows (Fay Slimm.) Yellow – one of my favourite c……s. Seriously – a high performance...
  August 16th, 2021 04:30
• Thanks to Covid (Neville) Just a teeny bit enigmatic, Nev. ‘Like to elucidate? ‘t’s not...
  August 16th, 2021 04:14
• HOW MANY! (Goldfinch60) Work ethic and productivity without peer, Andy. And then there\'s the...
  August 16th, 2021 02:21
• Old Farm Hat (Flyingfish) It does indeed fit that very special art/philosophy. The antithesis of our...
  August 16th, 2021 02:13
• The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity (Lorna) I\'m with Neil here, Lorna I respectfully suggest you leave their...
  August 16th, 2021 01:37
• NOT WANTING TIME. (The elder poet) Yes ep - enjoyed very much. A clear picture painted with truth and...
  August 15th, 2021 20:58
• 64 (Kevin Michael Bloor) This is a complete loop - see Lorna. I agree - Neil got me going...
  August 15th, 2021 20:42
• The Priest Without Pants (Coyote) A fishy tale - let\'s hope no one with a religious bent....of should that...
  August 15th, 2021 20:20
• Magic Show (Jerry Reynolds) Lightning is a topic all its own, Jerry. Rainbows get a fair hearing...
  August 15th, 2021 08:19
• Black Candles (Neville) \'Scuse me Doc - Tansy, samphire and dried peppermint: you sure your...
  August 15th, 2021 06:27
• Imagination #1 (Saxon Crow) Woah .......Slow down Sax.....I can\'t keep up.....
  August 15th, 2021 01:25
• Ephemeral (Dove) It will lessen eventually, Dove - like water smooths a stone ....future...
  August 15th, 2021 01:19
• Sleepwalking (HannahElisabeth) The feeling of unreality I\'ll never forget, but it was relatively brief...
  August 15th, 2021 01:03
• Seige of Beats (Chaylie Rayne) You hang in there and be open about it - let no one think you dim because...
  August 14th, 2021 23:51
• / talk of the town / (GON) As a portrait of a very strong person, that has depth, and is something ...
  August 14th, 2021 23:41
• THE PAST. (The elder poet) Me too - not a bad old place to be, although I am a bit choosy about where...
  August 14th, 2021 22:38
• Noah (the real story?) (Coyote) Brother, I\'m really enjoying this. It is a lot clearer than the bits I...
  August 14th, 2021 22:16
• Dysmorphia (Catgotthecream) Still don\'t understand anorexia properly; as an insulin dependent...
  August 14th, 2021 21:50
• The Eighth Lap (Jo) Perhaps you are better off out there - providing you can avoid the wolves....
  August 14th, 2021 21:38
• Waste Not. (Fay Slimm.) I fear I have a very mundane view of writing here compared with yours,...
  August 14th, 2021 06:23
• Covertly Covid (Neville) \"If you did I did....but our too close company during lock down -......\"
  August 14th, 2021 04:08
• I ask. (Corn on the macabre) Make it one - if physically able go for a long walk , preferably in...
  August 14th, 2021 03:59
• Storm (Doggerel Dave) That is very sad Sax. If you went straight to Utube and put Storm and Tim...
  August 14th, 2021 01:20
• In the Beginning... (Coyote) After your \'try before you buy\' I\'m going straight to Amazon, get me...
  August 13th, 2021 17:58
• Alt. End #3 (aka It doesn\'t happen to me) (Andrew Charles Forrest) Shows to go - life never ceases to be a learning experience.... Neat...
  August 13th, 2021 17:30
• August 13th, 2021 – twenty two years since... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Bum days like that I term misfortune cascades or should\'a stayed in bed...
  August 13th, 2021 17:25
• [ The Neighbor’s House ] (Heart of Babel) A measured poetic write as is your norm – thanks HoB. We are in self...
  August 13th, 2021 17:09
• The Lady In White. (Goldfinch60) A vision splendid - thanks Andy
  August 13th, 2021 03:46
• Jigsaw (Saxon Crow) Well said, Sax - that\'s the way I went too - I feel that I and many...
  August 13th, 2021 02:01
• Pitter Patter (Flyingfish) Bought back a memory or two. Would watch that for hours as a kid; loved...
  August 13th, 2021 01:50
• A Line Storm Melody (HannahElisabeth) Like this. Imbues a feeling of peaceful hope, free of...
  August 12th, 2021 22:05
• DOORS . (The elder poet) Words unsaid to Dad; I know that feeling very well....It\'s not as if we...
  August 12th, 2021 21:52
• INVISIBLE (Brandie Osborn) Keep \'em popping....
  August 12th, 2021 21:45
• Black Thoughts (Thebridge) Great yes, agreed powerful. I found it almost overwhelming. There\'s...
  August 12th, 2021 21:35
• what is depth? (Asrealastheycome) A great shout of pain I understand completely. And as a result I find that...
  August 12th, 2021 21:22
• Purrfectly Batman (Dove) Wow, ah corrrr - I shall certainly be viewing Dove(s) in a different light...
  August 12th, 2021 20:54
• INVISIBLE (Brandie Osborn) Your first post. Where are you coming from with this?Looks like a good...
  August 12th, 2021 20:43
• To Like Or Not To Like (Orchidee) I\'m trying to unlike it......how do I unlike it.... there must be a...
  August 12th, 2021 02:05
• Laughter All Around. (Goldfinch60) What - you\'ve won anther trophy? You won\'t be able to move at your place...
  August 12th, 2021 01:51
• so (Jon Nakapalau) By its innards? Interesting thought given the admonition this bounces off...
  August 11th, 2021 20:33
• Eventus (Coyote) Beautifully structured (I would not have expected less from you C), Left...
  August 11th, 2021 20:23
• Time (Jerry Reynolds) How else can I meditate from now on without reference to your words,
  August 11th, 2021 19:35
• Dark (Zalans Studio) of course.
  August 11th, 2021 05:51
• Kettle (Jo) Well you have certainly stimulated some whimsy, if the entries directly...
  August 11th, 2021 05:42
• Perfectly Hued (Neville) Well...yeh.. um..of course ..why not.. Good write Neville.
  August 11th, 2021 05:27