Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Homo texting (Samer Amin) Very witty , Samer. They don\'t collide with me because I sidestep to...
  March 4th, 2021 06:15
• SADLY (Trenz Pruca) Suggest you stake your claim, Trenz then go to it; I\'m sure I would be...
  March 4th, 2021 00:05
• \"Speak\" (Birddie Jane) Know that feeling (captured nicely) A long time ago now though..... Give...
  March 2nd, 2021 06:49
• Disguiser (Pacifique Niyitanga) Make yourself vulnerable (when it\'s safe to do so)? If I\'ve got that...
  March 1st, 2021 16:26
• Love Is Forever. (Goldfinch60) I was trying to express what I knew of that feeling, Andy then I realised...
  March 1st, 2021 07:01
• OLD FAITHFUL (Joe Marcello) Not sure about this one at all, Joe. Don\'t agree with the first two...
  February 28th, 2021 17:43
• The Miracle of Life (FredPeyer) Fred, what a beauty! After the first stanza I thought \'I must make...
  February 28th, 2021 17:36
• Irish Renga on the second day of Purim (Jerry Reynolds) What a jolly jape of a collection. Poets included in your selection Will...
  February 27th, 2021 18:59
• New year (Tom Campbell) Well, covid provided the motive for a rattling good piece of verse. Many...
  February 27th, 2021 05:46
• Let’s Talk Scars (Neville) You’ve certainly put me on the road to a heavy dose of...
  February 27th, 2021 05:34
• Goldie Limerick. (Goldfinch60) ‘Oh mirror, mirror on the wall Can’t you reassure me at...
  February 26th, 2021 20:02
• The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands (Samer Amin) Hi Samer. I find the format of your entries here difficult to cope with,...
  February 26th, 2021 19:46
• When I Lose (Jerry Reynolds) Can\'t do anything other than give you a double thumbs up for this one,...
  February 26th, 2021 19:17
• Mad Dark Humour (Orchidee) I find this one of the most tasteless entries I\'ve ever encountered, here...
  February 26th, 2021 07:28
• Poem, Do You live by the Truth? (AwHec8) No going back to the political project then?
  February 25th, 2021 19:30
• What\'s The Point? (Merissa) I\'ts hard not to give advice when you confront with a poem like...
  February 25th, 2021 16:47
• one day while walking on the beach (Trenz Pruca) Very humorous; a few other comedians have done this at MPS - typically...
  February 25th, 2021 16:35
• Disparate Love (Jerry Reynolds) Uncertainty and ambivalence, eh Jerry? Brought to the surface an old...
  February 25th, 2021 16:30
• Mind. (Goldfinch60) Good advice, Andy.Sometimes that takes much effort. You are no doubt aware...
  February 25th, 2021 06:25
• Home Sweet Home (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Andy. He was a symbol and souvenir of my time at that place which,...
  February 25th, 2021 06:04
• Reality in the USA! (AwHec8) I\'d vote with Jerry here, Don. a series of half a dozen small poetic...
  February 24th, 2021 17:28
• Scream Graffiti. (Goldfinch60) Nice one, Andy. This kind of insider information is something I really...
  February 24th, 2021 05:38
• Working Mom (Merissa) Hi Marissa, Please, if you wish, read this. Yes, it is one of mine, and I...
  February 24th, 2021 01:17
• Too much water under the bridge (Olivia.) Keep at it. In this and your previous similarly well written poems,...
  February 23rd, 2021 19:07
• Go Get Lost (Pacifique Niyitanga) Language there singes the eyebrows a bit. And I can be quite potty mouthed...
  February 23rd, 2021 18:52
• Bridged (Fay Slimm.) Fay I don\'t know what to warble to you as I sup my beer in order to gain...
  February 23rd, 2021 18:37
• Lockdown Grey (Neville) It feels almost impertinent to comment on your situation over there, so...
  February 23rd, 2021 18:18
• A Good Day. (Goldfinch60) Yes - they do happen. those days are what make life special. A polished...
  February 23rd, 2021 04:18
• Dreams (Merissa) A lot left unsaid there - you certainly made that plain without...
  February 23rd, 2021 04:11
• You must write (Thewayiwrite) You speak for yourself - manifestly there are other motivations (though I...
  February 23rd, 2021 04:02
• I am worth more (Olivia.) Interesting read. Seems you\'ve got personal relationships, romance and...
  February 22nd, 2021 16:18
• Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave) Finally,I\'d just like to add that the inclusion of \'“The Road Not...
  February 21st, 2021 23:49
• I pray (Thewayiwrite) Oh go on – beat yourself up, why don’t you? Not sure of the last...
  February 21st, 2021 21:33
• Enjoying my own company (Olivia.) I\'ll vote for this. Great picture painted here. So long as it doesn\'t...
  February 21st, 2021 18:01
• Things We Do (Jerry Reynolds) Got those bases covered, Jerry. Any date time and place re the picture?
  February 21st, 2021 17:55
• Ode to Piss-Poor Poet (Kevin Michael Bloor) I\'ll vote for that, mate
  February 21st, 2021 17:44
• The Fountain. (Goldfinch60) Like this, you mean...
  February 21st, 2021 04:13
• Just sitting around (FredPeyer) Cheers, Fred
  February 20th, 2021 22:35
• Piss-Poor Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor) No worries - go for it....
  February 20th, 2021 18:23
• Schooldays (Heatherbee) They are - or rather, for me. were (a very long time ago). True though.
  February 20th, 2021 00:17
• Do Not Tell (Pacifique Niyitanga) It\'s a balance, isn\'t it? Between conciliation and forgiveness, and the...
  February 19th, 2021 20:52
• Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave) Cheers Munro. I\'d never have guessed irony was one of your talents.
  February 19th, 2021 06:32
• Eyes Wide Open (Anthony M.J Butler) Note two of your interests are Spirituality and Occultism. So if...
  February 19th, 2021 06:29
• Predict or live? (Poetry_Lover) Because if, just if we are able to do something about the immediate future...
  February 19th, 2021 06:15
• Is It Art? (Goldfinch60) You two have an obsession with that bed. You have mentioned it before....
  February 19th, 2021 05:59
• Cheap Soup (FredPeyer) Thanks Fred. I wouldn\'t be on MPS if I didn\'t tell of my past...
  February 19th, 2021 05:43
• Cruising on the Red Line (Daydreaming) Within My memory are lodged several such missed opportunities. Each time I...
  February 18th, 2021 22:55
• Unwanted Feelings (Merissa) Depends what we are talking about here. There’s nothing wrong with...
  February 18th, 2021 17:59
• Jailed in an uncompleted building (Ifeanyichukwu) Phew! I don\'t feel at all qualified to respond with comment to this. It...
  February 18th, 2021 17:28
• Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World? (AwHec8) Change the channel seems like a good move, Don. Have to get your news...
  February 18th, 2021 17:14
• ON THE RUSH (Fay Slimm.) And thanks for this one too Fay. As a born and bred East End Londoner, who...
  February 18th, 2021 06:50
• Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Fay - had to dispose of the irritation somehow, and although it...
  February 18th, 2021 06:17
• 21 Again? That Old Chestnut (Orchidee) Should you not consider upping the medication just a teensy weensy...
  February 18th, 2021 06:05
• Hope In Chains (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Prefer \'Waste & Folly\' - a sound political judgement if ever I\'ve read...
  February 17th, 2021 23:16
• Autumn (Thewayiwrite) Found him out,did you? Good. I hope you successfully walked away ...
  February 17th, 2021 20:52
• Truth.. (AlitaOpal) I\'d vote for that anytime. In particularly persuasive verse...
  February 17th, 2021 20:32
• A republic, if you can keep it (SureshG) These issues are so complex. ‘Republic’ and ‘Democracy’ each have...
  February 17th, 2021 20:17
• They Won\'t Bite (Jerry Reynolds) Nothing like the odd bum joke to keep things merry, Jerry. Good laugh....
  February 17th, 2021 19:37
• Unconfined (Fay Slimm.) I understand completely the way raptors can enthrall, Fay. Australia has...
  February 17th, 2021 05:44
• Seduction (Jerry Reynolds) Should be framed and given pride of place in the MPS hall of fame....or...
  February 16th, 2021 18:35
• Mysterious. (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve enriched my appreciation of rainbows no end, Fay. They\'ve always...
  February 16th, 2021 07:33
• Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian (FredPeyer) That one got me in, Fred. A well textured yarn which evoked memories of...
  February 16th, 2021 07:00
• There is nothing to declare (Thewayiwrite) That\'s not a \'random stream\' - your claim after your last poem; that\'s...
  February 16th, 2021 06:46
• Satori (Neville) Couldn\'t leave her essence alone? A clear picture in very few words,...
  February 16th, 2021 06:29
• of the parting (Dusk arising) The delusion that everything is OK, the hope that it might all work out,...
  February 15th, 2021 04:34
• Groundhog day (Heatherbee) like it very much - you have certainly tuned into the zeitgeist today. Or...
  February 15th, 2021 03:42
• Moon (TS) Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - very soon man (humans) will be on the...
  February 15th, 2021 03:35
• Tiredness (Thewayiwrite) I read it, would like to give feedback but am too depressed now.
  February 15th, 2021 00:27
• Valentine\'s Day 2021 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) :-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
  February 14th, 2021 19:04
• A new chapter. (Olivia.) A nice flow, beautifully stated With attitudes I agree with and hope to...
  February 14th, 2021 18:23
• My valentine (Heatherbee) A perfectly polished valentine - you can post that one to me anytime you...
  February 14th, 2021 03:48
• Impeachment (Jerry Reynolds) Yes Jerry - I think so, hope so. Anything else to add?
  February 14th, 2021 03:45
• a tired heart (Dusk arising) You go very metaphorical (probably a better word, but I can\'t think of it...
  February 14th, 2021 01:06
• Winter-Dazed (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve almost (but not quite) made me feel nostalgia for that kind of...
  February 13th, 2021 16:55
• SPRING (Michael Edwards) Got to confess (haven’t been paying attention?) that I retreated to...
  February 13th, 2021 05:46
• The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for all your musical selections, Andy. I\'ve formed the habit of...
  February 13th, 2021 05:24
• There Are Two (Pacifique Niyitanga) Interesting - Is \'make your choice\' the message?
  February 12th, 2021 19:41
• Maid of the Mist (Kevin Michael Bloor) Too much there to comment upon when I try to imagine the journey - I...
  February 12th, 2021 19:10
• Peter’s Complaint (Doggerel Dave) Rubbedy - Rhyming slang: Rub a dub dub = pub. I deny I suggested ginseng....
  February 11th, 2021 18:54
• Solitude (FredPeyer) Got it. I\'m there too - somewhere like that. Neatly done - thanks.
  February 11th, 2021 18:41
• One At A Time. (Goldfinch60) No blame (your comment) accrues with you here Andy – only the...
  February 11th, 2021 03:38
• Behind The Gate (Kurt Philip Behm) Thanks for that Kurt - I really enjoy solitude for for vast amounts of...
  February 10th, 2021 17:51
• The world is a slave to money (Md Hossain Jaker) You have something there, Md. I need just enough money to live...
  February 10th, 2021 17:44
• Death of a tree (Willow tree) World wide problem, deforestation. All efforts to highlight this deserve...
  February 10th, 2021 05:56
• The Maiden and the rat (AlitaOpal) Great little fable - fun read. Fan of Banksy or just his rat?
  February 10th, 2021 04:03
• The Mourning After The Morning After (Alan .S. Jeeves) Well..yeh.....Well..yeh - no I just said that didn\'t I? Oh where\'s the...
  February 9th, 2021 17:41
• The Green Disappears – Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision....
  February 9th, 2021 04:45
• Sometimes (AlitaOpal) Can I see you for you? Well, not completely, but you are well on the way...
  February 8th, 2021 23:41
• From First to Last (FredPeyer) No boundaries - You\'ve said it all, Fred.
  February 8th, 2021 19:14
• What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out (M.E.M.) Doing the best we can - some of us. You remark that your poems are...
  February 8th, 2021 19:11
• whiskers (Dusk arising) I fervently hope he does get a good kip, because I wish Freddie (whiskers)...
  February 8th, 2021 17:28
• Mind Chased Peace (Pacifique Niyitanga) You write of terrifying situations which have occurred all over the world...
  February 8th, 2021 03:46
• It does not flow (B-LAH-que) Hi bLq: You pose a problem for me; I claim to attempt to ‘embrace the...
  February 8th, 2021 03:33
• A Technicolor Day (DesertWords) Words don\'t desert you do they? (sorry if you\'ve heard it before). I...
  February 7th, 2021 18:52
• Alive (Julie B) Feels very trippy. Enjoy that journey, Julie.
  February 7th, 2021 18:45
• Poem, Who are You Really? (AwHec8) Some well posed questions there, Don. I think you are right - stay close...
  February 7th, 2021 18:24
• Just (Searchin4Soul) Enjoyed your creative use of terminology here, such as \'holucination\'...
  February 7th, 2021 18:05
• A Nod to Society (Poetry_Lover) Go on - give it a go, have a shout. But no just here - out there, where it...
  February 7th, 2021 04:31
• Thankful to nature everyday (Poetic Dan) Enjoyed your poem, Dan - also your comments (I was very taken with them)...
  February 7th, 2021 04:09
• Stream of consciousness….. (JonathanB) Your last \'comments\' sentence - not sure if you were sincere or just...
  February 6th, 2021 21:01