Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Eyes Wide Open (Anthony M.J Butler) Note two of your interests are Spirituality and Occultism. So if...
  February 19th, 2021 06:29
• Predict or live? (Poetry_Lover) Because if, just if we are able to do something about the immediate future...
  February 19th, 2021 06:15
• Is It Art? (Goldfinch60) You two have an obsession with that bed. You have mentioned it before....
  February 19th, 2021 05:59
• Cheap Soup (FredPeyer) Thanks Fred. I wouldn\'t be on MPS if I didn\'t tell of my past...
  February 19th, 2021 05:43
• Cruising on the Red Line (Daydreaming) Within My memory are lodged several such missed opportunities. Each time I...
  February 18th, 2021 22:55
• Unwanted Feelings (Merissa) Depends what we are talking about here. There’s nothing wrong with...
  February 18th, 2021 17:59
• Jailed in an uncompleted building (Ifeanyichukwu) Phew! I don\'t feel at all qualified to respond with comment to this. It...
  February 18th, 2021 17:28
• Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World? (AwHec8) Change the channel seems like a good move, Don. Have to get your news...
  February 18th, 2021 17:14
• ON THE RUSH (Fay Slimm.) And thanks for this one too Fay. As a born and bred East End Londoner, who...
  February 18th, 2021 06:50
• Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Fay - had to dispose of the irritation somehow, and although it...
  February 18th, 2021 06:17
• 21 Again? That Old Chestnut (Orchidee) Should you not consider upping the medication just a teensy weensy...
  February 18th, 2021 06:05
• Hope In Chains (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Prefer \'Waste & Folly\' - a sound political judgement if ever I\'ve read...
  February 17th, 2021 23:16
• Autumn (Thewayiwrite) Found him out,did you? Good. I hope you successfully walked away ...
  February 17th, 2021 20:52
• Truth.. (AlitaOpal) I\'d vote for that anytime. In particularly persuasive verse...
  February 17th, 2021 20:32
• A republic, if you can keep it (SureshG) These issues are so complex. ‘Republic’ and ‘Democracy’ each have...
  February 17th, 2021 20:17
• They Won\'t Bite (Jerry Reynolds) Nothing like the odd bum joke to keep things merry, Jerry. Good laugh....
  February 17th, 2021 19:37
• Unconfined (Fay Slimm.) I understand completely the way raptors can enthrall, Fay. Australia has...
  February 17th, 2021 05:44
• Seduction (Jerry Reynolds) Should be framed and given pride of place in the MPS hall of fame....or...
  February 16th, 2021 18:35
• Mysterious. (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve enriched my appreciation of rainbows no end, Fay. They\'ve always...
  February 16th, 2021 07:33
• Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian (FredPeyer) That one got me in, Fred. A well textured yarn which evoked memories of...
  February 16th, 2021 07:00
• There is nothing to declare (Thewayiwrite) That\'s not a \'random stream\' - your claim after your last poem; that\'s...
  February 16th, 2021 06:46
• Satori (Neville) Couldn\'t leave her essence alone? A clear picture in very few words,...
  February 16th, 2021 06:29
• of the parting (Dusk arising) The delusion that everything is OK, the hope that it might all work out,...
  February 15th, 2021 04:34
• Groundhog day (Heatherbee) like it very much - you have certainly tuned into the zeitgeist today. Or...
  February 15th, 2021 03:42
• Moon (TS) Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - very soon man (humans) will be on the...
  February 15th, 2021 03:35
• Tiredness (Thewayiwrite) I read it, would like to give feedback but am too depressed now.
  February 15th, 2021 00:27
• Valentine\'s Day 2021 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) :-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
  February 14th, 2021 19:04
• A new chapter. (Olivia.) A nice flow, beautifully stated With attitudes I agree with and hope to...
  February 14th, 2021 18:23
• My valentine (Heatherbee) A perfectly polished valentine - you can post that one to me anytime you...
  February 14th, 2021 03:48
• Impeachment (Jerry Reynolds) Yes Jerry - I think so, hope so. Anything else to add?
  February 14th, 2021 03:45
• a tired heart (Dusk arising) You go very metaphorical (probably a better word, but I can\'t think of it...
  February 14th, 2021 01:06
• Winter-Dazed (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve almost (but not quite) made me feel nostalgia for that kind of...
  February 13th, 2021 16:55
• SPRING (Michael Edwards) Got to confess (haven’t been paying attention?) that I retreated to...
  February 13th, 2021 05:46
• The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for all your musical selections, Andy. I\'ve formed the habit of...
  February 13th, 2021 05:24
• There Are Two (Pacifique Niyitanga) Interesting - Is \'make your choice\' the message?
  February 12th, 2021 19:41
• Maid of the Mist (Kevin Michael Bloor) Too much there to comment upon when I try to imagine the journey - I...
  February 12th, 2021 19:10
• Peter’s Complaint (Doggerel Dave) Rubbedy - Rhyming slang: Rub a dub dub = pub. I deny I suggested ginseng....
  February 11th, 2021 18:54
• Solitude (FredPeyer) Got it. I\'m there too - somewhere like that. Neatly done - thanks.
  February 11th, 2021 18:41
• One At A Time. (Goldfinch60) No blame (your comment) accrues with you here Andy – only the...
  February 11th, 2021 03:38
• Behind The Gate (Kurt Philip Behm) Thanks for that Kurt - I really enjoy solitude for for vast amounts of...
  February 10th, 2021 17:51
• The world is a slave to money (Md Hossain Jaker) You have something there, Md. I need just enough money to live...
  February 10th, 2021 17:44
• Death of a tree (Willow tree) World wide problem, deforestation. All efforts to highlight this deserve...
  February 10th, 2021 05:56
• The Maiden and the rat (AlitaOpal) Great little fable - fun read. Fan of Banksy or just his rat?
  February 10th, 2021 04:03
• The Mourning After The Morning After (Alan .S. Jeeves) Well..yeh.....Well..yeh - no I just said that didn\'t I? Oh where\'s the...
  February 9th, 2021 17:41
• The Green Disappears – Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision....
  February 9th, 2021 04:45
• Sometimes (AlitaOpal) Can I see you for you? Well, not completely, but you are well on the way...
  February 8th, 2021 23:41
• From First to Last (FredPeyer) No boundaries - You\'ve said it all, Fred.
  February 8th, 2021 19:14
• What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out (M.E.M.) Doing the best we can - some of us. You remark that your poems are...
  February 8th, 2021 19:11
• whiskers (Dusk arising) I fervently hope he does get a good kip, because I wish Freddie (whiskers)...
  February 8th, 2021 17:28
• Mind Chased Peace (Pacifique Niyitanga) You write of terrifying situations which have occurred all over the world...
  February 8th, 2021 03:46
• It does not flow (B-LAH-que) Hi bLq: You pose a problem for me; I claim to attempt to ‘embrace the...
  February 8th, 2021 03:33
• A Technicolor Day (DesertWords) Words don\'t desert you do they? (sorry if you\'ve heard it before). I...
  February 7th, 2021 18:52
• Alive (Julie B) Feels very trippy. Enjoy that journey, Julie.
  February 7th, 2021 18:45
• Poem, Who are You Really? (AwHec8) Some well posed questions there, Don. I think you are right - stay close...
  February 7th, 2021 18:24
• Just (Searchin4Soul) Enjoyed your creative use of terminology here, such as \'holucination\'...
  February 7th, 2021 18:05
• A Nod to Society (Poetry_Lover) Go on - give it a go, have a shout. But no just here - out there, where it...
  February 7th, 2021 04:31
• Thankful to nature everyday (Poetic Dan) Enjoyed your poem, Dan - also your comments (I was very taken with them)...
  February 7th, 2021 04:09
• Stream of consciousness….. (JonathanB) Your last \'comments\' sentence - not sure if you were sincere or just...
  February 6th, 2021 21:01
• Masks (DesertWords) Great piece of satire which hums along with pace rhythm and...
  February 6th, 2021 20:38
• MIND AND YOURS (Joe Marcello) Yes Joe - I\'ll vote for them - your lines, NOT the proud members.
  February 5th, 2021 18:06
• Welcome to 2020 (Chick) I can understand why it might be difficult to find for many today, but is...
  February 5th, 2021 17:32
• Dignity\'s Wealth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Dignity\'s Wealth has definite resonances for me as I visit a unisex (or...
  February 5th, 2021 17:19
• Poem, Ode to the Pain (AwHec8) Liked your comments - very pertinent.
  February 5th, 2021 17:00
• Brain To Heart (Pacifique Niyitanga) And peace, tranquility prevailed? I understood your work, enjoyed it very...
  February 5th, 2021 06:53
• Flimsy Stunners (Fay Slimm.) You have just reminded me of the wonder I felt when examining the first...
  February 5th, 2021 06:43
• Questions (Trenz Pruca) As many thumbs up as I can find, Trenz. Cleanly and simply put together....
  February 5th, 2021 00:01
• Daisy (Mminarik00) Whither whence though?
  February 4th, 2021 19:34
• Sharpen My Love (M.E.M.) Great fun - full of whimsy. Agree with bLq above, but don\'t abandon that...
  February 4th, 2021 19:11
• Ground Hog Day (Jerry Reynolds) \'a mere fart\' any good? :-) Just send a little of that cold over by...
  February 4th, 2021 19:04
• No Holidays. (Goldfinch60) \"Just a thought\"??? Go on Andy - you keep thinking if that keeps you...
  February 4th, 2021 03:18
• No grandmasters (Poetic Dan) You\'ve cracked it, I think, Dan
  February 4th, 2021 01:00
• the richest soil (Dusk arising) Well put, Dusk. Great to see you fearing for the world rather than just...
  February 4th, 2021 00:53
• Snowdrops (Kevin Michael Bloor) Nothing too feeble about that, Blue. I don\'t normally \'get\' nature...
  February 3rd, 2021 20:37
• LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS (Michael Edwards) Oh, come now Michael - \'Less is more\' don\'t you know? Me, I still...
  February 3rd, 2021 19:32
• Gone (Jerry Reynolds) Nice one , Jerry - imaginative images are always open to adjustment and...
  February 2nd, 2021 17:21
• AN ARTISAN (Michael Edwards) Been thinking for sometime that if, owing to covid restrictions you ran...
  February 2nd, 2021 04:38
• The View From The Window. (Goldfinch60) Revealed yourself as a writer of great short stories with a twist. New...
  February 2nd, 2021 04:31
• Solitary (Lily_) I\'m not sure anyone is convinced by advice (being told) by others - it...
  February 2nd, 2021 04:22
• Trigger warning Eating Disorder (Chick) That’s a lucid description of a disorder which to many (including to...
  February 1st, 2021 21:10
• Brave In The Grave (Pacifique Niyitanga) Some of the fine detail re the circumstances a little difficult to...
  January 31st, 2021 19:36
• Sun Kissed (Dove) Completely justified your nom de plume, RB - double points....
  January 31st, 2021 19:16
• OVERDOSING (Prince Rin Okumura) Back grounded colours here make parts of this impossible to read for...
  January 31st, 2021 18:55
• Spring Love (Jerry Reynolds) A rich piece of poetic embroidery ensures that memory in this instance...
  January 31st, 2021 18:48
• Miss Take (Neville) The ephemeral nature of culturally imposed standards of ‘beauty’...
  January 31st, 2021 18:39
• a prayer for..... (Dusk arising) You are a wordsmith, dusk. One can only hope...
  January 31st, 2021 05:01
• That Photograph. (Goldfinch60) I can understand why that photo is important to you, Andy. It is sometimes...
  January 30th, 2021 04:05
• Through the looking glass (Heatherbee) Sometimes one must. When the hairs sprouting out my nose start poking me...
  January 29th, 2021 18:25
• A message or a reminder (Trin) Powerfully put together. Looks you’ve got toxic interpersonal...
  January 29th, 2021 18:19
• Attitude. (Fay Slimm.) Phew Fay! Not going to comment on your style’s architecture this...
  January 29th, 2021 17:57
• A restless night (Heatherbee) Real, measured and described, your poem. I have more than a nodding...
  January 28th, 2021 16:59
• TIME TO HIT (Michael Edwards) Situation well framed in the picture, Michael. Did you settle for baked...
  January 28th, 2021 01:09
• The Freeway in my Head (FredPeyer) Don\'t know quite how to tackle this Fred - It is a very rich description...
  January 28th, 2021 01:03
• The First Bloom (Heatherbee) Now I\'ve started (second time today - you are not alone!!) I may be doing...
  January 27th, 2021 19:24
• Rooms (Oldmat) Contribution from a pedant: \'On too the future\' - try \'On to the...
  January 27th, 2021 18:34
• Her Again (Lizzie Lara) So you invite suggestions and concerns both here and in your last...
  January 27th, 2021 05:37
• LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards) Where? When? Words, combined with your picture do have a certain appeal -...
  January 26th, 2021 02:57
• Grumpy Old Men (John Prophet) Will you cut out your vapid generalizations? Old people come on all...
  January 26th, 2021 00:45
• Stunningly Clear Vistas (FredPeyer) Hallucinatory Fred? Dave
  January 25th, 2021 22:22
• Why is it so hard when it… (Jerry Reynolds) So was it hard or was it effortless? Looks effortless....
  January 25th, 2021 19:34
• Farewell To Arms (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Great question - those first two lines. Homelessness, PTSD, high suicide...
  January 25th, 2021 19:28