Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Broken # 2 Maybe (Neville) Thanks Neville- worthwhile..enjoyed muchly. You know I could’ve..(oh no...
  April 26th, 2021 18:33
• Only The Lonely. (Goldfinch60) Faced with that kind of ongoing anguish, words from me seem inadequate,...
  April 26th, 2021 08:33
• Not a poem but life in motion (Poetic Dan) In a way an amusing but puzzling write, Dan. Given your \'comment from...
  April 25th, 2021 19:49
• Mad Tea-Party (Makoto Maruyama) Great imaginative write, but the Darjeeling surely should be given more...
  April 25th, 2021 06:47
• Hypnotic (Fay Slimm.) To have actual contact with a snake is quite amazing, the feel quite...
  April 25th, 2021 06:38
• Ultra Soft (Gary Edward Geraci) First half of the box is like that for me, Gary.
  April 25th, 2021 02:10
• Less of the Fist (Neville) Hi Neville - sent a copy of this entry off to Bletchley Park to let the...
  April 25th, 2021 01:51
• The Afterlife – A Case Study (Doggerel Dave) You have done me the world of good, Andy; the Flying Pickets and Dave...
  April 24th, 2021 02:14
• Visions Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Your shortie (my own technical terminology - of which I have a whole...
  April 24th, 2021 01:12
• Impaled (Last Shadow) You aren\'t perchance lucifer very very very 1st - incognito are you? If...
  April 23rd, 2021 21:39
• Just Another Vegas Night (Andy Hunter) Never understood the appeal of gambling (odds and all that). However...
  April 23rd, 2021 06:23
• Making Islands (Neville) Neat one, Neville. Reminds me of Work, now thankfully twenty years (how...
  April 23rd, 2021 06:15
• Virtual Event. (Goldfinch60) The virtue of such an arrangement will be that virtually nothing will be...
  April 23rd, 2021 02:04
• Fall Out (Neville) Oh leave her be, will ya - she sounds like a feisty woman who knew her own...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:10
• Jail-bird (Fay Slimm.) I\'ll pay that one, Fay - not only for the quality of the lines (goes...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:01
• Aced (Last Shadow) Time for you to cash in your chips, I guess....?
  April 21st, 2021 19:38
• Wrinkled Petals (Ifeanyichukwu) A cannot understand all the circumstances you refer to here - how could I?...
  April 21st, 2021 19:25
• Incoming (Fay Slimm.) A boat comes in - waiting... This one evokes memories,,, Thanks for that...
  April 21st, 2021 07:11
• Good Lives For Each Of Us. (Goldfinch60) The kind of lockdown you have suffered over there must have taken a toll -...
  April 21st, 2021 07:00
• A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville) Sometimes an edufication is to be found on MPS. Despite my misgivings, I...
  April 21st, 2021 01:56
• Hometown, in 17 syllables. (Siranswerer) \'Bit hard to comment on that one, never having been there. My knowledge...
  April 21st, 2021 01:11
• Readied (Fay Slimm.) Ah Rose...Thanks for that, Fay - a little eroticsm can go a long...
  April 20th, 2021 08:09
• New Light Ahead. (Goldfinch60) Wot - You still have hair???
  April 20th, 2021 04:08
• Without You (its a moving on thing kindof) (A) Of course you will be alright (I\'ve had a little nose around in your back...
  April 19th, 2021 20:12
• Custer. (Goldfinch60) Gold star comedy...... shaggy (yes?) dog story,....rhyme. What more could...
  April 19th, 2021 05:26
• Cohabitation (Michael Anthony) As a quick sketch of a relationship over time, I think you have cracked...
  April 19th, 2021 05:17
• You are not a Slave (Makoto Maruyama) To me this is two separate poems - the first I can relate to: the second,...
  April 18th, 2021 19:48
• By Chance (Gary Edward Geraci) I feel we have been over, at least in part, this ground in your...
  April 18th, 2021 08:35
• #59 Cliff Jumping (Liam Power) Got that experientially - the challenge to yourself, the fear, your...
  April 17th, 2021 22:56
• Romantic Interlude (Eugene S.) A neat little write, Eugene. (My oblique way of giving a tick). However,...
  April 17th, 2021 20:49
• Out of my mind to find my heart (Poetic Dan) You will get through, Dan: You have insight and reason - you know what is...
  April 17th, 2021 08:44
• The Hopeville Hilton Hospital - ity (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Andy - that\'s a relief, and I\'m very grateful... Can be a...
  April 17th, 2021 04:34
• Soap Box (M.E.M.) Is there something about Florida you are a teensy bit unsure about? After...
  April 15th, 2021 19:41
• Ignorance Reigns. (Goldfinch60) \"Put another nickel in In the nickelodeon All I want is loving you And...
  April 15th, 2021 08:15
• IN SCOTLAND - IN LONDON (Michael Edwards) Picture up to usual standard, Michael (cheeky!). Politics a bit lost on...
  April 14th, 2021 08:20
• Life Book. (Goldfinch60) With that kind of optimism you could go on forever.....You will be into...
  April 14th, 2021 08:04
• She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry (Poetic Dan) No you are NOT already there, Dan -the evidence to be found in your...
  April 14th, 2021 07:45
• Golden Beach (DesertWords) Surprised me (recalcitrantly anti love poetry) - I really felt this one....
  April 13th, 2021 19:24
• Doggerel Dave Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Except to owe you a mere one dime Is I feel, Andy something of a...
  April 13th, 2021 07:25
• Notes to Gogo  (Ifeanyichukwu) Thanks for providing a window into a very different, textured world to...
  April 12th, 2021 21:41
• What\'s Best For Her, But I Still Want More (JWKP98) Lust unrequited is something everyone experiences sometime or other - hard...
  April 12th, 2021 05:17
• Truthful Lives. (Goldfinch60) I don\'t think I lie - and I do know it has got me into much trouble over...
  April 12th, 2021 02:46
• Verum est Fatum (Quemis) I\'ll vote with orch.... While you are there, if you are going to be, you...
  April 12th, 2021 02:20
• she submissive (Poesiaemonologo) For BDSM read Bloody Dismal Sexual Manipulation.
  April 11th, 2021 06:27
• Brave (Amanda Shelton) Yes, I too would vote for the last stanza, Amanda.
  April 11th, 2021 06:23
• Tides of Love (Asrealastheycome) Don\'t normally go for love poetry much - too sugary mostly? This one...
  April 10th, 2021 19:12
• Island Heaven. (Goldfinch60) You know what I\'m going to put here , even before... Yep - thanks for...
  April 10th, 2021 01:43
• MOURNING THE MORNING (Joe Marcello) Worms? They have their place and I have mine, where late and owls are...
  April 9th, 2021 19:18
• Energy (Brimelow) Its structure and terminology - I really got into this. Alas - \'The...
  April 9th, 2021 19:09
• Humble (Pacifique Niyitanga) I get that, very neatly put, NP. To be unassuming can be a sign of...
  April 9th, 2021 18:58
• INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards) Go for it Michael. I\'ll wear the \'a\' I think, so long as it isn\'t...
  April 9th, 2021 08:21
• Daffodils (Kevin Michael Bloor) Daffodils have a special pace in my memory (and I don\'t mean \'I wandered...
  April 9th, 2021 07:18
• Movement (Fay Slimm.) Sometimes (quite often) your poetry is pretty dense, Fay. And this is one...
  April 9th, 2021 06:25
• Patch (Rebmasters) Go on - the jeans I observe (not wear) have been holed and worn through...
  April 9th, 2021 06:11
• Autumn (Neville) \'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one...
  April 8th, 2021 19:00
• Boredom and Depression Are Not the Same. (Trenz Pruca) A good open ended look at.......life, really. Very clearly stated from my...
  April 8th, 2021 00:42
• Depression (Bhoover56) Walk (or run) away.
  April 7th, 2021 18:35
• RAISE THE PINKY (Michael Edwards) Ooo! Yer know where yer can stuff yer sanny \'an I don\'t mean down yer...
  April 7th, 2021 04:37
• British Springtime. (Goldfinch60) It is an addiction beyond all reason or comprehension - are you sure you...
  April 7th, 2021 04:21
• Musical Opening. (Goldfinch60) And your introductions to music I\'ve never encountered continue to give...
  April 6th, 2021 05:19
• Smart Sister (Jerry Reynolds) Wisdom > action > penalty > result. Good \'un Jerry - poetic form more...
  April 5th, 2021 19:14
• Mr Roberts (Doggerel Dave) Hey Dan, many thanks for favouring this piece - I\'m more gratified than I...
  April 5th, 2021 18:54
• Give anything but hate (Poetic Dan) A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems...
  April 5th, 2021 02:12
• In my house (Thelala) I\'m not religious, but I once heard of this bloke, Noah by name.... Good...
  April 5th, 2021 00:04
• Perpetuating (SureshG) Momentarily passing through.... I woz here - for a moment.
  April 4th, 2021 22:43
• Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60) Your own spin on the John Lennon, Andy? - and none the worse for that!
  April 4th, 2021 22:37
• TAKING THE RISE (Michael Edwards) Quite right too Michael – a good old semantic argument can be very...
  April 4th, 2021 02:47
• SHOOTING DEBRIS (Joe Marcello) I never write lousy poems..... :-) Cleanest double entendre I\'ve ever...
  April 2nd, 2021 22:50
• Have you ever (Thelala) Suggest professional intervention - you don\'t sound very happy.
  April 1st, 2021 20:10
• Obligations of Being (Brimelow) Surprise! One of the funniest things I\'ve read here for a while - Should...
  April 1st, 2021 19:54
• Best of Both Worlds. (Goldfinch60) Cracked that one , Andy - can I borrow your window when you are out...
  April 1st, 2021 19:42
• Poetic nugget discovered today March 29th, 2021... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Bad time then....? Feels exhausting. I do hope times now are better.
  March 30th, 2021 19:59
• Dad Kid (Pacifique Niyitanga) Neat little story, NP. I would think it is an experience some men and...
  March 30th, 2021 19:52
• The Great Indoors. (Goldfinch60) So - time for a mini interrogation - \'Video unavailable--------in your...
  March 30th, 2021 07:00
• miniature house (Germanamericanchurch) Spot on Blue. You know that , depending on your audience, you will meet...
  March 30th, 2021 00:30
• In the know (Olivia.) So after \'Sick to Death\' it does appear that everything turned out well...
  March 29th, 2021 21:37
• Arm Chair (AuburnScribbler) An ode to a significant arm chair does me! Starting from nothing, as I...
  March 29th, 2021 18:10
• So Little Time (Goldfinch60) Good One Andy - a succinct (as you note - so little time) endorsement of...
  March 29th, 2021 05:11
• Little Songbird (Kevin Michael Bloor) You have nothing to reproach yourself for Kevin - either with respect to...
  March 28th, 2021 05:19
• This Wonderful Game. (Goldfinch60) I understand - I do understand, Andy. But to the fairly uninitiated, the...
  March 28th, 2021 05:02
• “Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…” (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Merissa.I don\'t know how I missed your post here - although I\'ve...
  March 28th, 2021 01:26
• Memories (Jerry Reynolds) I\'d vote for age, I think Jerry. Certainly childhood memories but others...
  March 27th, 2021 19:33
• Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave) No Charlie I am not suggesting you need to ‘do some work on...
  March 27th, 2021 06:48
• FOOTBALL PUNDITS (Michael Edwards) Wot is this football of which you speak? Not soccer perchance? I enjoy...
  March 27th, 2021 06:31
• A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello) Yes Joe - Jarcher has the larger point re the environmental costs of car...
  March 27th, 2021 01:18
• A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello) To use white cars (in actuality a very logical solution to the problem of...
  March 26th, 2021 18:32
• on the precipice..... (SureshG) Sorry mate, there is noone out there - humans must sort it for themselves,...
  March 26th, 2021 05:23
• Things Nearest (Fay Slimm.) Thank you for the mention of the dandelion, Fay. Such memories of my...
  March 25th, 2021 05:55
• Conversion (Fay Slimm.) Great the way out was found, Fay. And should perchance it happen again,...
  March 24th, 2021 07:02
• Before We Die (Neville) Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for...
  March 24th, 2021 06:33
• Fragments No. 4 “I Simply Refuse” (Gary Edward Geraci) I \'d call that alienation, Gary. You accept things as they are, and place...
  March 23rd, 2021 17:39
• Pit Vipers (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Nice one, Kurt. I do get a subtle hint that there may be the occasional...
  March 23rd, 2021 17:29
• To Dorothy (Jerry Reynolds) That\'s just the way it goes, Jerry.
  March 23rd, 2021 17:23
• Soul serenity (Poetic Dan) There is something in the line \"No tests on paper created this art!\"...
  March 23rd, 2021 07:15
• The Census (Classicmister) Is nothing sacred ? Wot about my privacy? Actually never had any problem...
  March 22nd, 2021 18:19
• I will never be ready (FredPeyer) Don’t know if I’m ahead or behind you in the queue Fred, but I’ll...
  March 22nd, 2021 17:57
• Even In The Darkness. (Goldfinch60) Your optimism shines through in every write Andy. You don\'t even need the...
  March 22nd, 2021 17:36
• Repose (Fay Slimm.) So pastoral and romantic Fay - warms the cockles of my heart, even though...
  March 22nd, 2021 03:55
• Just Maybe (A.H. Browning) Good rhymer – impressive bunch of couplets there. I don’t think you...
  March 21st, 2021 20:30
• Miracle (FredPeyer) Hey Fred – you come down on the side of Albert’s second supposition in...
  March 20th, 2021 23:41