Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• My little slice of heaven (Poetic Dan) Your kid\'s a little character, Dan. Easy to see how well you go...
  May 8th, 2021 05:21
• Coffin Dodger. (Goldfinch60) I reckon that manager needs to take a few lessons on respect. Wasn\'t very...
  May 8th, 2021 04:56
• Best Mans\' Speech (Andy Hunter) Do they still have those things, Andy - weddings with bride in white,...
  May 7th, 2021 23:49
• ALL IN COMPASS (Joe Marcello) You speaking to Me?
  May 7th, 2021 21:23
• The Earth Worm-a sonnet  (Dove) A righteous cause, Dove. Publicised as a sonnet to boot, a form which...
  May 7th, 2021 18:57
• Painting To Music. (Goldfinch60) Feels almost like a synesthete\'s manifesto... You may gather followers...
  May 7th, 2021 07:17
• Meditation (Fay Slimm.) How did you do that Fay? First stanza - at back of mind (easiest way to...
  May 7th, 2021 06:57
• Thatch (Neville) Just left it, haven\'t you? Your farewell, Neville? BTW: this one I had...
  May 7th, 2021 04:29
• A recap and recount of pandemic lockdowns worldwide (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I will prioritise the first and penultimate stanzas and vote for the rest....
  May 6th, 2021 07:18
• Early Morning Love Noise? (Goldfinch60) Right then - LMAO it has to be, because I don\'t know what to write, as...
  May 6th, 2021 04:59
• A RESTAURANT CRITIQUE (Michael Edwards) No satisfying you is there? :-) I have a digestive system too; I can\'t...
  May 6th, 2021 00:14
• COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond) (Andy Hunter) You just can not do that Andy - what is my favourite vegetable going to...
  May 5th, 2021 22:12
• Instinctive (Fay Slimm.) I\'ll settle for the last - so we have almost got it covered. \'Pity...
  May 5th, 2021 07:17
• Hands (Rebmasters) I liked that one very much, reb. Not just scars on hands.....
  May 5th, 2021 07:09
• Ice Queen (Neville) Image, promise, and....disillusionment?... did you know already, Neville?
  May 5th, 2021 07:04
• Rough Neighborhood (H.R.Powell) I thought Honolulu was all palm trees, beaches and houla......I\'m truly...
  May 4th, 2021 22:30
• My Bank Holiday (Andy Hunter) Why cannot folks understand that roads on public holidays are not...
  May 4th, 2021 22:02
• Invincible (Fay Slimm.) I am somewhat occasionally relieved Fay, that after all these years Big D...
  May 4th, 2021 21:46
• Paying For My Haircut! (Goldfinch60) You\'ve been winning too many games - someone tried to even the score, I...
  May 4th, 2021 07:48
• Alone with You (M.E.M.) Your usual \'comments welcome\' missing here - why? Are comments drying...
  May 3rd, 2021 23:05
• Blighty (Neville) That one certainly does (butting into a conversation between you and Fay...
  May 3rd, 2021 22:47
• RELAX (Andy Hunter) Neatly done Andy. It matters little whether it is called meditation or...
  May 3rd, 2021 22:17
• Unrivaled (Fay Slimm.) A great evocation of a distant time, a romantic time from here, although I...
  May 3rd, 2021 07:35
• Not Again (JWKP98) Well done. Perhaps this is the start of a whole new life. However, and...
  May 3rd, 2021 01:49
• That Journey. (Goldfinch60) Much more important than the destination is the journey - once I\'ve...
  May 2nd, 2021 06:13
• The Painter (Michael Anthony) Great work - tells the story with both texture and rhythm. Sorry I\'m not...
  May 2nd, 2021 05:44
• Cova (Neville) Yes I knew Cova, only her name was.........Wish sometimes I\'d followed;...
  May 2nd, 2021 00:24
• No Eulogy (FredPeyer) Yeh - but not yet mate - where the hell are you?
  May 1st, 2021 22:12
• My Life in the Stars (M.E.M.) This work really drew me into your place in an environment full of texture...
  May 1st, 2021 21:59
• The Commuter (Andy Hunter) There\'s truth in the line \"They hide behind a dead pan face\". Thanks...
  May 1st, 2021 19:20
• FOOLS GOLD (The Death Of Wonga) (Andy Hunter) Can\'t do better than Bill here, Andy. The kind of stuff I like and enjoy.
  May 1st, 2021 08:12
• Worried Days. (Goldfinch60) How do you pump them out every day, Andy? Great thought - worthy of...
  April 30th, 2021 05:45
• can\'t get what you want always (JordanandThomas29) Well thanks for that - I will bear it in mind. Memo to self: See name...
  April 30th, 2021 05:40
• Sleep slower than machine gun (Makoto Maruyama) Totally beyond my comprehension/understanding, Makoto - I think the...
  April 29th, 2021 04:47
• Life FIB. (Goldfinch60) This put me in my place......... Thanks Andy......
  April 29th, 2021 02:07
• A Decision re: grad school (Liam Power) You will be following the great tradition of the Grand Tour, where you...
  April 29th, 2021 01:13
• Phantom (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder) Last four lines I really appreciated, Ashraf.
  April 29th, 2021 00:51
• Hunger (Jerry Reynolds) The trouble for me, Jerry with these is that while part of my brain...
  April 28th, 2021 22:59
• last signs of life (Kaunisdiana) While I have a certain acceptance of death I do still have difficulty with...
  April 28th, 2021 21:19
• Imagination (Jordan) I identify very much with those five short sharp lines. Thank you very...
  April 28th, 2021 21:05
• Mane (AuburnScribbler) At a time of my life when the choice was between do something about the...
  April 28th, 2021 20:45
• Light Ghost. (Goldfinch60) :-) :-) Andy......!
  April 28th, 2021 02:04
• True Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Yep - ace as usual; true poetry about poets (true, that is......)
  April 28th, 2021 01:57
• Covid Jabs. (Goldfinch60) Good experience by the sound of it, Andy. Humour in such situations makes...
  April 27th, 2021 05:55
• Monster Born By Night (Sugiura Asuna) If sadness has that reaction I hate to think what any stronger emotion...
  April 26th, 2021 19:17
• Depression (Andy Hunter) Pretty bad - yes? But if you can write about it in such a coherent form,...
  April 26th, 2021 18:59
• since you went away (Kevin Michael Bloor) My kind of poetry, with totally comprehensible feelings which have been...
  April 26th, 2021 18:49
• Broken # 2 Maybe (Neville) Thanks Neville- worthwhile..enjoyed muchly. You know I could’ve..(oh no...
  April 26th, 2021 18:33
• Only The Lonely. (Goldfinch60) Faced with that kind of ongoing anguish, words from me seem inadequate,...
  April 26th, 2021 08:33
• Not a poem but life in motion (Poetic Dan) In a way an amusing but puzzling write, Dan. Given your \'comment from...
  April 25th, 2021 19:49
• Mad Tea-Party (Makoto Maruyama) Great imaginative write, but the Darjeeling surely should be given more...
  April 25th, 2021 06:47
• Hypnotic (Fay Slimm.) To have actual contact with a snake is quite amazing, the feel quite...
  April 25th, 2021 06:38
• Ultra Soft (Gary Edward Geraci) First half of the box is like that for me, Gary.
  April 25th, 2021 02:10
• Less of the Fist (Neville) Hi Neville - sent a copy of this entry off to Bletchley Park to let the...
  April 25th, 2021 01:51
• The Afterlife – A Case Study (Doggerel Dave) You have done me the world of good, Andy; the Flying Pickets and Dave...
  April 24th, 2021 02:14
• Visions Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Your shortie (my own technical terminology - of which I have a whole...
  April 24th, 2021 01:12
• Impaled (Last Shadow) You aren\'t perchance lucifer very very very 1st - incognito are you? If...
  April 23rd, 2021 21:39
• Just Another Vegas Night (Andy Hunter) Never understood the appeal of gambling (odds and all that). However...
  April 23rd, 2021 06:23
• Making Islands (Neville) Neat one, Neville. Reminds me of Work, now thankfully twenty years (how...
  April 23rd, 2021 06:15
• Virtual Event. (Goldfinch60) The virtue of such an arrangement will be that virtually nothing will be...
  April 23rd, 2021 02:04
• Fall Out (Neville) Oh leave her be, will ya - she sounds like a feisty woman who knew her own...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:10
• Jail-bird (Fay Slimm.) I\'ll pay that one, Fay - not only for the quality of the lines (goes...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:01
• Aced (Last Shadow) Time for you to cash in your chips, I guess....?
  April 21st, 2021 19:38
• Wrinkled Petals (Ifeanyichukwu) A cannot understand all the circumstances you refer to here - how could I?...
  April 21st, 2021 19:25
• Incoming (Fay Slimm.) A boat comes in - waiting... This one evokes memories,,, Thanks for that...
  April 21st, 2021 07:11
• Good Lives For Each Of Us. (Goldfinch60) The kind of lockdown you have suffered over there must have taken a toll -...
  April 21st, 2021 07:00
• A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville) Sometimes an edufication is to be found on MPS. Despite my misgivings, I...
  April 21st, 2021 01:56
• Hometown, in 17 syllables. (Siranswerer) \'Bit hard to comment on that one, never having been there. My knowledge...
  April 21st, 2021 01:11
• Readied (Fay Slimm.) Ah Rose...Thanks for that, Fay - a little eroticsm can go a long...
  April 20th, 2021 08:09
• New Light Ahead. (Goldfinch60) Wot - You still have hair???
  April 20th, 2021 04:08
• Without You (its a moving on thing kindof) (A) Of course you will be alright (I\'ve had a little nose around in your back...
  April 19th, 2021 20:12
• Custer. (Goldfinch60) Gold star comedy...... shaggy (yes?) dog story,....rhyme. What more could...
  April 19th, 2021 05:26
• Cohabitation (Michael Anthony) As a quick sketch of a relationship over time, I think you have cracked...
  April 19th, 2021 05:17
• You are not a Slave (Makoto Maruyama) To me this is two separate poems - the first I can relate to: the second,...
  April 18th, 2021 19:48
• By Chance (Gary Edward Geraci) I feel we have been over, at least in part, this ground in your...
  April 18th, 2021 08:35
• #59 Cliff Jumping (Liam Power) Got that experientially - the challenge to yourself, the fear, your...
  April 17th, 2021 22:56
• Romantic Interlude (Eugene S.) A neat little write, Eugene. (My oblique way of giving a tick). However,...
  April 17th, 2021 20:49
• Out of my mind to find my heart (Poetic Dan) You will get through, Dan: You have insight and reason - you know what is...
  April 17th, 2021 08:44
• The Hopeville Hilton Hospital - ity (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Andy - that\'s a relief, and I\'m very grateful... Can be a...
  April 17th, 2021 04:34
• Soap Box (M.E.M.) Is there something about Florida you are a teensy bit unsure about? After...
  April 15th, 2021 19:41
• Ignorance Reigns. (Goldfinch60) \"Put another nickel in In the nickelodeon All I want is loving you And...
  April 15th, 2021 08:15
• IN SCOTLAND - IN LONDON (Michael Edwards) Picture up to usual standard, Michael (cheeky!). Politics a bit lost on...
  April 14th, 2021 08:20
• Life Book. (Goldfinch60) With that kind of optimism you could go on forever.....You will be into...
  April 14th, 2021 08:04
• She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry (Poetic Dan) No you are NOT already there, Dan -the evidence to be found in your...
  April 14th, 2021 07:45
• Golden Beach (DesertWords) Surprised me (recalcitrantly anti love poetry) - I really felt this one....
  April 13th, 2021 19:24
• Doggerel Dave Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Except to owe you a mere one dime Is I feel, Andy something of a...
  April 13th, 2021 07:25
• Notes to Gogo  (Ifeanyichukwu) Thanks for providing a window into a very different, textured world to...
  April 12th, 2021 21:41
• What\'s Best For Her, But I Still Want More (JWKP98) Lust unrequited is something everyone experiences sometime or other - hard...
  April 12th, 2021 05:17
• Truthful Lives. (Goldfinch60) I don\'t think I lie - and I do know it has got me into much trouble over...
  April 12th, 2021 02:46
• Verum est Fatum (Quemis) I\'ll vote with orch.... While you are there, if you are going to be, you...
  April 12th, 2021 02:20
• she submissive (Poesiaemonologo) For BDSM read Bloody Dismal Sexual Manipulation.
  April 11th, 2021 06:27
• Brave (Amanda Shelton) Yes, I too would vote for the last stanza, Amanda.
  April 11th, 2021 06:23
• Tides of Love (Asrealastheycome) Don\'t normally go for love poetry much - too sugary mostly? This one...
  April 10th, 2021 19:12
• Island Heaven. (Goldfinch60) You know what I\'m going to put here , even before... Yep - thanks for...
  April 10th, 2021 01:43
• MOURNING THE MORNING (Joe Marcello) Worms? They have their place and I have mine, where late and owls are...
  April 9th, 2021 19:18
• Energy (Brimelow) Its structure and terminology - I really got into this. Alas - \'The...
  April 9th, 2021 19:09
• Humble (Pacifique Niyitanga) I get that, very neatly put, NP. To be unassuming can be a sign of...
  April 9th, 2021 18:58
• INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards) Go for it Michael. I\'ll wear the \'a\' I think, so long as it isn\'t...
  April 9th, 2021 08:21
• Daffodils (Kevin Michael Bloor) Daffodils have a special pace in my memory (and I don\'t mean \'I wandered...
  April 9th, 2021 07:18
• Movement (Fay Slimm.) Sometimes (quite often) your poetry is pretty dense, Fay. And this is one...
  April 9th, 2021 06:25