Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• But did he hit you... (HannahElisabeth) ‘Like I had somewhere to go’ is, for me, one of several key lines,...
  August 11th, 2021 00:57
• Now resetting the daily schedule for more screen time and pot smoking (Gary Edward Geraci) Slow and deep now....hold it....
  August 10th, 2021 20:32
• Poem, The World has grown Cold? (or maybe another rant of mine!). (AwHec8) Yes Don , a rant - but none the worse for that. Your heart, from my point...
  August 10th, 2021 18:42
• Disposable People. (Goldfinch60) Serried ranks of white crosses in France tell much of the WW1 story, Andy....
  August 10th, 2021 05:52
• Upon a Time Once (Neville) And why did it ever end, Nev? It was going so well.......
  August 10th, 2021 05:21
• Black Magick (HannahElisabeth) Being no great fan of love poetry, I’m pleased this is about lust if it...
  August 9th, 2021 20:32
• Marionette (Coyote) Another perfect rhyme and metre from you C. Submission to another’s...
  August 9th, 2021 19:54
• [ Kindle of a Flame ] (Heart of Babel) While I very much empathise with your points and the feelings which...
  August 9th, 2021 19:43
• An Unfinished Summer (Neville) A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the...
  August 9th, 2021 04:25
• Where Were You? (Jo) I like what you are saying and how you are saying it. For me it could do...
  August 9th, 2021 04:14
• Dementia (Coyote) You do have a way with lines, pace an rhythm, C. A neat but...
  August 8th, 2021 23:55
• Shake Down. (Chris Duffy) Good for you,Chris. That\'s what poetry should be about!! At one time I...
  August 8th, 2021 17:05
• Calling Time (Neville) \' Way to go, Nev. Smooth and easy.... Great portrait. Now for a...
  August 8th, 2021 04:15
• Conquistador (Coyote) I don\'t know why all you unhappy folks have such trouble with religion,...
  August 7th, 2021 22:27
• The Petrichor - A sonnet (Dove) ....And need I add? ....Know and am exhilarated by that smell...
  August 7th, 2021 22:08
• Warning (Jerry Reynolds) I\'ll get mine tomorrow - no, not the casket.... Thanks Jerry.
  August 7th, 2021 22:01
• Marionette (HannahElisabeth) Shorty for a change: Dysfunctional families everywhere - It\'s power,...
  August 7th, 2021 21:33
• Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs (Neville) Yes – the rough was tolerable when I was young, but wondered why it had...
  August 7th, 2021 07:06
• Oops! (Goldfinch60) And I know how you feel you ‘old duffer’ I’ve fallen over more...
  August 7th, 2021 06:42
• 5 Senryu COVID Send Off (Flyingfish) Understand your position perfectly as I am subjected to precisely the...
  August 7th, 2021 04:16
• Obedience (HannahElisabeth) Thanks for the reminder Hannah, It\'s been some time..... You will...
  August 6th, 2021 23:09
• Under a High Stamped Tin Ceiling. (Trenz Pruca) \"He assimilates......osmosis.\" is the stanza that does it for me, Trenz....
  August 6th, 2021 19:56
• Imbecilic (SureshG) Any particular policy position this sweet guy has which was finally the...
  August 6th, 2021 19:44
• Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) One of the most foul and inhumane acts in modern history. Well Writ.
  August 6th, 2021 19:32
• Question (M.E.M.) lol. I\'ve now recovered from some kind of brain fever induced by your...
  August 6th, 2021 19:25
• When You Find These Words (Neville) Yep - so shall I do.... PS: Neville - why do you always give us...
  August 6th, 2021 05:13
• Winner Takes All. (Goldfinch60) Do you get your gold lettered name on the Wall of Fame in the club house,...
  August 6th, 2021 03:30
• To Mars or Bust (Flyingfish) An entertaining write, John. My guess is you have or still enjoy science...
  August 6th, 2021 01:39
• Omens (Fay Slimm.) How do you put words together and structure them to produce such richly...
  August 6th, 2021 00:59
• No Curtain Call (Saxon Crow) But was it an actor on a stage.....or.... Either way an engaging piece ,...
  August 6th, 2021 00:53
• Another Day (Jerry Reynolds) A day that bubbles up to my consciousness, light and free. A fair enough...
  August 5th, 2021 19:06
• It\'s not a sin, is gin!!! (BusyB) Try a dry martini. Scotch is my favourite tipple, as an afterthought to...
  August 5th, 2021 04:26
• My Spell Checker (Doggerel Dave) Frenia, you are completely selfless aren\'t you? There is commentary...
  August 5th, 2021 04:05
• Seventeen Lines (Coyote) So did I! Beyond the beautifully crafted lines and structure, you have...
  August 4th, 2021 19:14
• What is a Woman (M.E.M.) Well you cracked that one, M - thanks for fulfilling that promise. Still...
  August 4th, 2021 18:52
• Poem for Dave (Jerry Reynolds) Wot - you calling me simple? For me however spring will inevitably be...
  August 4th, 2021 08:07
• Lady\'s Man (Chris Duffy) That\'s more like it, Chris....\'bit of a laugh... but I don\'t believe a...
  August 4th, 2021 06:24
• My days in Africa (BusyB) Feels like you miss it very much. Regrets?
  August 4th, 2021 06:16
• How To Touch A Heart (Jo) Oh come on - don\'t keep me in suspenders. - what was in there? Ah -...
  August 4th, 2021 05:59
• Collusion (Fay Slimm.) Lovely piece, Fay - just wish it were true......
  August 4th, 2021 05:52
• The auto response is not us! (Poetic Dan) I\'ll ferret it out, don\'t you worry about that, Dan. The main item in...
  August 4th, 2021 05:42
• Arise (Justice) I enjoyed a piece I can very much relate to. Great poetry. There’s...
  August 4th, 2021 05:28
• The Crikka Man (Saxon Crow) Crikka, Crikey I know how he feels – if society don’t give yer a fair...
  August 4th, 2021 05:03
• Missed (Fay Slimm.) A great English oak - one of my my favourite trees. Should be given an...
  August 3rd, 2021 06:55
• Recovering From The Shock. (Goldfinch60) To use one big walloping cliche everyone else had the forbearance and...
  August 3rd, 2021 06:42
• What about me ? An atheist prayer. (Chris Duffy) Can\'t see you an atheist on the basis of the evidence you present here,...
  August 3rd, 2021 00:07
• A man and a Woman married in Germany (Maxpeguin) Definitely exhibits poetic skill, but I have not the slightest notion of...
  August 2nd, 2021 23:56
• Magic Bead (Neville) When magic bead found and appropriately revered, the energy...
  August 2nd, 2021 22:05
• [ Necromancer ] (Heart of Babel) You cheered me up no end.......... 😊
  August 2nd, 2021 21:50
• What is a Man (M.E.M.) Should ultimately a woman be judged by different standards? How and why?
  August 2nd, 2021 21:46
• Rome - replete with history (Sund1951) Beyond no mention of the Pantheon (burnt into my memory as I hit it when...
  August 2nd, 2021 21:35
• Lilt of tilt, askew, awry (Flyingfish) There are certainly some weathered tattered old buildings in this wide...
  August 2nd, 2021 20:57
• Vocation (Iris) 12 Years you say? I bet someone will correct me, but you may qualify as...
  August 2nd, 2021 07:51
• Women (RosaUribe) Not really the person to tell you, but... Have the courage to drive...
  August 2nd, 2021 07:41
• That Line (Doggerel Dave) More?...
  August 1st, 2021 06:26
• The Epistemology of Family According to God’s Ways (Gary Edward Geraci) Gary, sociologically speaking, the family..........
  July 31st, 2021 22:08
• The Tipping Point (Jerry Reynolds) Trailers only at that link from here. Don\'think I need or could watch the...
  July 31st, 2021 22:02
• Teddy\'s arms (Poetic Dan) Can I put a dream like that on order Dan, providing it doesn\'t deprive...
  July 31st, 2021 21:45
• Difference (Fay Slimm.) My head now almost overwhelmed with visual imagery, Fay - Many...
  July 31st, 2021 05:51
• Rushing to and fro (BusyB) \"And if you can keep your head when everybody round you is losing his,...
  July 31st, 2021 05:48
• Experience Learned. (Goldfinch60) Reality Therapy I calls it, Andy.
  July 31st, 2021 05:38
• Mirror Poet (Saxon Crow) Good advice, interesting write there Sax. Only caveat I have is...
  July 31st, 2021 05:28
• [ Baby Steps ] (Heart of Babel) Disciplined powerful poetry. True too: The whole disgusting reverence,...
  July 30th, 2021 20:19
• A better man. (Chris Duffy) \'Note the twenty years immediately above.....Must then mean that most...
  July 30th, 2021 19:43
• Ferment (Fay Slimm.) Great wisdom there, Fay. Most significantly you do include an apology...
  July 30th, 2021 19:20
• Mister Joe Jangles (Flyingfish) Thanks for that John. Had to come back and read again later (I\'m slow...
  July 30th, 2021 18:57
• Algebraic Attack! (Orchidee) Nah - got to go back to basics - One is 1; Two is 2; Three is...
  July 30th, 2021 05:56
• Croquet At Broadwas. (Goldfinch60) Beset by constant propaganda from your good self, I decided to investigate...
  July 30th, 2021 01:40
• the vampire cowboy (Jon Nakapalau) Although not au fait with all your allusions Jon, I have the feeling this...
  July 29th, 2021 20:31
• Climate Change (Thekkinkkattil) Thumbs up for the verse if not the situation we find ourselves in. No...
  July 29th, 2021 02:04
• The Light Of Music. (Goldfinch60) I cannot get over your diverse tastes in Music, Andy - always a big...
  July 29th, 2021 01:47
• We the Navigators (Flyingfish) Rich in detail again. I couldn\'t quite get my head around ...
  July 29th, 2021 01:33
• Sounds of the Sixties (Saxon Crow) Sax - you\'ve done it again - thrown something at us which s totally...
  July 29th, 2021 01:24
• Weight (Fay Slimm.) You have clearly defined in poetic form the desolate void which attends ...
  July 28th, 2021 04:33
• No Sweat (Neville) Perhaps a sarong, Nev?
  July 28th, 2021 04:22
• Seeing more Deeply, Seems Pointless (Flyingfish) This, for me, is good and right. I exist, I’m happy about that. I know...
  July 28th, 2021 00:44
• FRUSTRATION (Dipanwita Dey) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nrIPxlFzDi0&ab_channel=ABKCOVEVO
  July 27th, 2021 05:31
• The Real Me (Dipanwita Dey) Oh get on with life....Depending on what chromosomal arrangement and...
  July 27th, 2021 05:21
• Its Shore Life (Neville) Nothing but far too familiar gulls when I hit the seashore ....envious ...
  July 27th, 2021 02:40
• RIP Boffington Town (Saxon Crow) OOOOOOh Noooooooo..... You can\'t do that, Sax. Shows complete lack of...
  July 27th, 2021 02:34
• Just Conversing. (Goldfinch60) It is only very recently you have been able to do that, Isn\'t it ,...
  July 27th, 2021 02:17
• Truffle Hunt (Flyingfish) One more mysterious (to the uninitiated) activity you\'ve revealed here,...
  July 27th, 2021 01:21
• Love And Happiness (Jayy) (This will attract some commentary underneath - You\'ll see) I\'ve...
  July 27th, 2021 01:11
• Splendor of Seville (Sund1951) Hi...Still here... 😊 Apologies for an....awkward...start. If you...
  July 27th, 2021 00:00
• [ Abortion ] (Heart of Babel) Finding it difficult to cope with the overarching imagery/analogy HoB,...
  July 26th, 2021 18:53
• Let me introduce you to the fellas in the pub. (Chris Duffy) Romped through that, Chris. Enjoyed to the max. Verse with strong...
  July 26th, 2021 18:24
• Awesome (Fay Slimm.) R.I.P. old oak –You went down in a blaze of glory memorialized in...
  July 26th, 2021 18:05
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5) (Michael Edwards) \'Got the solution: Keep my illusions to myself and let gently declining...
  July 26th, 2021 17:39
• Beached Whale Blues (Neville) Much of that rescue activity you relate occurs also in Australia, Nev....
  July 26th, 2021 04:58
• Something For Yourself. (Goldfinch60) \'Do something for yourself\' and stay strong - otherwise you are no good...
  July 26th, 2021 04:43
• Mortar (Saxon Crow) What now - tent? caravan? squat? No option? Renovation or detonation?...
  July 26th, 2021 04:35
• Drowning (1000thoughts) Me speak English......
  July 25th, 2021 23:27
• Tropea – Italy’s beachtown treasure (Sund1951) Occasionally MPS receives advertorials for various products ..... MPS...
  July 25th, 2021 22:17
• Preparation (Fay Slimm.) Satisfactorily olfactory, Fay. I\'m likely to get lost in reminiscence if...
  July 25th, 2021 08:13
• New Bloom Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Greatest thing about a garden with which you are very familiar Andy, as...
  July 25th, 2021 01:25
• Not A Love Poem (Saxon Crow) You are not talking about Love as this nebulous thing everyone is waiting...
  July 25th, 2021 01:19
• Conservation of Reality -- Homage to Sir Terry Pratchett. (Trenz Pruca) I want to come to grips with this, Trenz. Proposition which forms the body...
  July 24th, 2021 22:21
• Morning Bones (Michael Anthony) That, for me is a perfect fit, Michael. Although I\'m a little ahead of...
  July 24th, 2021 20:44
• Polyester Pants (Gary Edward Geraci) That\'s the second Villanelle you\'ve put up here recently, Gary - and the...
  July 24th, 2021 20:27
• Shed Tears (Pacifique Niyitanga) There is a flip side to being the object of someone\'s devotion - it can...
  July 24th, 2021 20:19