Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Patch (Rebmasters)
Go on - the jeans I observe (not wear) have been holed and worn through...
April 9th, 2021 06:11 - Autumn (Neville)
\'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one...
April 8th, 2021 19:00 - Boredom and Depression Are Not the Same. (Trenz Pruca)
A good open ended look at.......life, really.
Very clearly stated from my...
April 8th, 2021 00:42 - Depression (Bhoover56)
Walk (or run) away.
April 7th, 2021 18:35 - RAISE THE PINKY (Michael Edwards)
Ooo! Yer know where yer can stuff yer sanny \'an I don\'t mean down yer...
April 7th, 2021 04:37 - British Springtime. (Goldfinch60)
It is an addiction beyond all reason or comprehension - are you sure you...
April 7th, 2021 04:21 - Musical Opening. (Goldfinch60)
And your introductions to music I\'ve never encountered continue to give...
April 6th, 2021 05:19 - Smart Sister (Jerry Reynolds)
Wisdom > action > penalty > result.
Good \'un Jerry - poetic form more...
April 5th, 2021 19:14 - Mr Roberts (Doggerel Dave)
Hey Dan, many thanks for favouring this piece - I\'m more gratified than I...
April 5th, 2021 18:54 - Give anything but hate (Poetic Dan)
A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems...
April 5th, 2021 02:12 - In my house (Thelala)
I\'m not religious, but I once heard of this bloke, Noah by name....
Good...
April 5th, 2021 00:04 - Perpetuating (SureshG)
Momentarily passing through.... I woz here - for a moment.
April 4th, 2021 22:43 - Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60)
Your own spin on the John Lennon, Andy? - and none the worse for that!
April 4th, 2021 22:37 - TAKING THE RISE (Michael Edwards)
Quite right too Michael – a good old semantic argument can be very...
April 4th, 2021 02:47 - SHOOTING DEBRIS (Joe Marcello)
I never write lousy poems..... :-)
Cleanest double entendre I\'ve ever...
April 2nd, 2021 22:50 - Have you ever (Thelala)
Suggest professional intervention - you don\'t sound very happy.
April 1st, 2021 20:10 - Obligations of Being (Brimelow)
Surprise!
One of the funniest things I\'ve read here for a while - Should...
April 1st, 2021 19:54 - Best of Both Worlds. (Goldfinch60)
Cracked that one , Andy - can I borrow your window when you are out...
April 1st, 2021 19:42 - Poetic nugget discovered today March 29th, 2021... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Bad time then....?
Feels exhausting. I do hope times now are better.
March 30th, 2021 19:59 - Dad Kid (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Neat little story, NP. I would think it is an experience some men and...
March 30th, 2021 19:52 - The Great Indoors. (Goldfinch60)
So - time for a mini interrogation
- \'Video unavailable--------in your...
March 30th, 2021 07:00 - miniature house (Germanamericanchurch)
Spot on Blue. You know that , depending on your audience, you will meet...
March 30th, 2021 00:30 - In the know (Olivia.)
So after \'Sick to Death\' it does appear that everything turned out well...
March 29th, 2021 21:37 - Arm Chair (AuburnScribbler)
An ode to a significant arm chair does me!
Starting from nothing, as I...
March 29th, 2021 18:10 - So Little Time (Goldfinch60)
Good One Andy - a succinct (as you note - so little time) endorsement of...
March 29th, 2021 05:11 - Little Songbird (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You have nothing to reproach yourself for Kevin - either with respect to...
March 28th, 2021 05:19 - This Wonderful Game. (Goldfinch60)
I understand - I do understand, Andy.
But to the fairly uninitiated, the...
March 28th, 2021 05:02 - “Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…” (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks Merissa.I don\'t know how I missed your post here - although I\'ve...
March 28th, 2021 01:26 - Memories (Jerry Reynolds)
I\'d vote for age, I think Jerry. Certainly childhood memories but others...
March 27th, 2021 19:33 - Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave)
No Charlie I am not suggesting you need to ‘do some work on...
March 27th, 2021 06:48 - FOOTBALL PUNDITS (Michael Edwards)
Wot is this football of which you speak? Not soccer perchance?
I enjoy...
March 27th, 2021 06:31 - A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello)
Yes Joe - Jarcher has the larger point re the environmental costs of car...
March 27th, 2021 01:18 - A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello)
To use white cars (in actuality a very logical solution to the problem of...
March 26th, 2021 18:32 - on the precipice..... (SureshG)
Sorry mate, there is noone out there - humans must sort it for themselves,...
March 26th, 2021 05:23 - Things Nearest (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you for the mention of the dandelion, Fay. Such memories of my...
March 25th, 2021 05:55 - Conversion (Fay Slimm.)
Great the way out was found, Fay. And should perchance it happen again,...
March 24th, 2021 07:02 - Before We Die (Neville)
Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for...
March 24th, 2021 06:33 - Fragments No. 4 “I Simply Refuse” (Gary Edward Geraci)
I \'d call that alienation, Gary. You accept things as they are, and place...
March 23rd, 2021 17:39 - Pit Vipers (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice one, Kurt. I do get a subtle hint that there may be the occasional...
March 23rd, 2021 17:29 - To Dorothy (Jerry Reynolds)
That\'s just the way it goes, Jerry.
March 23rd, 2021 17:23 - Soul serenity (Poetic Dan)
There is something in the line \"No tests on paper created this art!\"...
March 23rd, 2021 07:15 - The Census (Classicmister)
Is nothing sacred ? Wot about my privacy?
Actually never had any problem...
March 22nd, 2021 18:19 - I will never be ready (FredPeyer)
Don’t know if I’m ahead or behind you in the queue Fred, but I’ll...
March 22nd, 2021 17:57 - Even In The Darkness. (Goldfinch60)
Your optimism shines through in every write Andy. You don\'t even need the...
March 22nd, 2021 17:36 - Repose (Fay Slimm.)
So pastoral and romantic Fay - warms the cockles of my heart, even though...
March 22nd, 2021 03:55 - Just Maybe (A.H. Browning)
Good rhymer – impressive bunch of couplets there.
I don’t think you...
March 21st, 2021 20:30 - Miracle (FredPeyer)
Hey Fred – you come down on the side of Albert’s second supposition in...
March 20th, 2021 23:41 - Doctor Donkirsity (Gary Edward Geraci)
Satire, Gary? Last stanza seems at odds though - surely something had to...
March 20th, 2021 16:08 - We Battle at Dawn (M.E.M.)
Straightforward and well constructed, an easy read. Enjoyed. Must be a...
March 20th, 2021 16:03 - Underneath the Shadow of my Wings (Dove)
I feel safe as I read your work, Romantic B. Definitely no ambivalence...
March 20th, 2021 15:36 - Wild Beauty (Fay Slimm.)
I live in Australia which can be quite fanatical about the quality of its...
March 20th, 2021 06:09 - Time Just Disappears When Having Fun (Doggerel Dave)
And Jack the Lad (q.v.) has teamed up with a pair of criminal pranksters...
March 19th, 2021 23:22 - THE HAVES (Joe Marcello)
The rational approach to life wins the day, Joe?
I\'d vote for that....
March 19th, 2021 20:24 - Sorry....I think? (Purdy61)
I think it quite possibly does. And I state this as someone who expresses...
March 19th, 2021 20:18 - Drawer of Socks (Brimelow)
Yes I’ll pay that one – it is gently witty with an ironical view of a...
March 18th, 2021 19:49 - In Praise of the Fountain Pen! (Classicmister)
A harmless little hobby you have there Cmister, all neatly advocated for...
March 18th, 2021 18:06 - Poem, No Not a sex addiction! (AwHec8)
Short and to the point. You certainly know how to use words as weapons
March 18th, 2021 06:11 - Peepers (AuburnScribbler)
Don\'t hesitate Auburn S - the relief (albeit temporary) from irritation...
March 17th, 2021 18:00 - Catching the Drift (Fay Slimm.)
A well engineered set of chimes does lend something almost magical in the...
March 17th, 2021 07:02 - Roadwork Gods. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s obvious to me Andy, that your whole problem is embodied in the line...
March 16th, 2021 06:40 - Daily Door. (Goldfinch60)
Just keep on opening them, Andy.
I\'m sure that the doors you open will...
March 15th, 2021 05:56 - Magick of the Night (Goddess of the Mist)
Very picture laden, rhythmic , easy to read - enjoyed very much.
Forgive...
March 14th, 2021 23:51 - Poem, Men need to Change. (AwHec8)
Topical - good issue based nugget; I could read it, understood it, liked...
March 14th, 2021 19:27 - Free Birds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
The problems of urban living exemplified, Kevin - haven\'t
we all got one...
March 14th, 2021 19:19 - Useless (SunSearcher)
Well that didn\'t last long did it?
\'Sorry, I seem to have missed out on...
March 14th, 2021 19:07 - Tomodachi ya Koibito (Neville)
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck...
March 14th, 2021 05:56 - Peepers (AuburnScribbler)
Drops every couple of hours...heavier grade oil at night..wish I could...
March 13th, 2021 19:46 - Tudor Love-Note. (Fay Slimm.)
Verily Ye shall have my response forthwith, Madam..
Cor it ain\'t half...
March 13th, 2021 07:29 - Just for You (Neville)
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that...
March 13th, 2021 03:14 - A Lonely Cottage On The Moor (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A window like that can mean more to you than a great work of art. Nor can...
March 12th, 2021 17:33 - Short Story, And Now a Word From Our Sponsor! (AwHec8)
Hi Don.I believe we may have had this conversation before - still one more...
March 12th, 2021 17:11 - Meghan and Harry (Classicmister)
Dead correct - tabloids fill in their space with this flim flam in order...
March 12th, 2021 07:21 - Neutral In No Man\'s Land (JWKP98)
I\'d say you had some serious anger management issues. Seems you are...
March 12th, 2021 07:02 - A Tale of Loneliness (MendedFences27)
Never ever heard/seen what in essence is a shaggy dog story done with such...
March 11th, 2021 20:43 - Our stories matter (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve really put it altogether there, mate.
It almost feels like a...
March 11th, 2021 20:30 - Building A Truss (Everlong)
Pieces of truth scattered throughout that. And because I like rhymes, an...
March 11th, 2021 19:43 - 40 (Mrbleasdale)
At double that age, still figuring it all out.....
\"Grow old...
March 11th, 2021 19:26 - Never Forget. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Andy - felt you were speaking to me personally.
And.....spot on.
March 11th, 2021 03:10 - Isityouorme (Isituorme)
I normally pass straight over unrequited love/misery poetry, but for...
March 10th, 2021 17:38 - Decision (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Oh that\'s great, NP - not only clever, but also this poem\'s last section...
March 9th, 2021 18:06 - Knowledge (FredPeyer)
Can I pick and choose, Fred?
Well I will anyway: \'the opposite of...
March 9th, 2021 17:56 - Abyss (Last Shadow)
Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - it\'s half an hour you will never get...
March 9th, 2021 17:47 - March - Spring (Last Shadow)
Fading fast....going... going...gone.
Or is my eyesight deteriorating?
March 9th, 2021 17:43 - Out of Mind (Neville)
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be....
March 9th, 2021 17:31 - Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Descriptive poetry that actually took me on a flight - Thanks Andy.
PS:...
March 9th, 2021 17:22 - Sorrow\'s Season (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Good \'un. I was able to power through that and get your history...
March 9th, 2021 06:27 - I Forgive You, My Lord (Daydreaming)
To utilise the god fable as a hook upon which to hang a savage piece of...
March 8th, 2021 20:33 - Still Frames (FredPeyer)
On a very mundane level, I, the Dave tonight am constantly writing notes...
March 8th, 2021 06:58 - I Came Back Slowly (Goddess of the Mist)
Perception - never seen it discussed lyrically before, and that will be...
March 8th, 2021 06:42 - Question (Pacifique Niyitanga)
An especially good question, very well put here.
Now, what is to be done?...
March 7th, 2021 17:10 - We are all a hero to someone (Poetic Dan)
That\'s a fun one, Dan.
Killer second line - definitely tickled my sense...
March 7th, 2021 03:15 - Zoom Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)...
March 7th, 2021 03:04 - Without You (MendedFences27)
Oh so nicely done. Kept me in suspenders and then slipped me the answer....
March 7th, 2021 00:45 - dust (Brycycle)
Fantasy will become reality one day - there is nothing on this earth more...
March 7th, 2021 00:40 - Turbulence (SureshG)
We\'re here because we\'re here. ...
March 6th, 2021 17:38 - Some Sounds Easily Missed (Neville)
Neville, If I haven\'t got anything to put here, you do know it doesn\'t...
March 6th, 2021 17:21 - Embers & I hear her Smile (FredPeyer)
Don\'t normally comment on love poems Fred... Yours came to my notice...
March 6th, 2021 00:24 - The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave)
Don\'t think so Fred - how would you like to be in that bloke\'s companty...
March 6th, 2021 00:05 - Good Morning (Jerry Reynolds)
Wot - not enough elbow room?
March 5th, 2021 17:12 - NO CALM MEANT (Joe Marcello)
Oh this can be so right. Sometimes only solution is to walk away; if...
March 5th, 2021 17:06
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