Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Alone in the express train (Rrodriguez) Great descriptive piece. But what were you really up to?
  June 6th, 2021 02:03
• THE BREAK UP (Andy Hunter) That would be a gut wrencher, Andy. The few break ups I\'ve experienced...
  June 6th, 2021 01:55
• Out of the blue (Jerry Reynolds) Yes - you just bought a couple of bits of my past to the fore.... to do...
  June 5th, 2021 08:46
• Unspooled (Fay Slimm.) Not offensive. Not going to try to formulate a coherent response other...
  June 5th, 2021 08:29
• As Yet Unforgiven (Neville) Have to forgive yourself one day Neville - no point in not doing so....
  June 5th, 2021 08:15
• RANDOM THOUGHTS ON COMPLEX ISSUES (Michael Edwards) Why be a Devil\'s Advocate? - From where I sit those questions look spot...
  June 5th, 2021 08:04
• Kintsugi (Saxon Crow) Now that’s a deep look at the compromises and ambiguities of a long term...
  June 5th, 2021 07:46
• Same old same (Saxon Crow) OK if I get a rubber stamp made up with those words on it? Usage? Varies ...
  June 5th, 2021 07:14
• New History (Saxon Crow) On review SC, I note date of posting as May 2020. Now it seems to me that...
  June 5th, 2021 07:02
• Aged Dreams (MendedFences27) Memory with all its gaps and inconsistencies. You have captured that, and...
  June 4th, 2021 20:54
• A Precious Drought (Neville) Did she receive this message Neville, or similar with same...
  June 4th, 2021 07:58
• sometimes it hurts more than others (Queer-with-a-pen) Angry and powerful piece. Please try to get it out of your system and...
  June 4th, 2021 04:42
• Challenges (Fay Slimm.) Not all trees do as many folks here with inappropriately placed trees now...
  June 4th, 2021 04:33
• The Cat In The Window (Jayasree) Please do not even attempt to plumb the depths of Cat\'s consciousness....
  June 4th, 2021 04:09
• ON THE RUN (Andy Hunter) Sorry Andy – I’m not too keen on buying “a young man I once knew”....
  June 3rd, 2021 18:18
• My Choice of Poison (StephanieAnn) It has been sometime since I have heard a more true account of a troubled...
  June 3rd, 2021 05:41
• Upon Reflection (Neville) But I see myself from my own mirror, Reflection tells me all I need to...
  June 3rd, 2021 05:09
• Enticing (Fay Slimm.) Thanks for your take on an early morning wakening, Fay. I shall view my...
  June 3rd, 2021 04:17
• Orchard Street (StephanieAnn) That is one easy to read poem which flows nicely, Steph. Sounds like it...
  June 3rd, 2021 01:23
• And yet there was nothing I could do. (Emile Dubois) Precisely. Captures in very real terms the wait, the turmoil and...
  June 2nd, 2021 19:45
• My Guru, Guide and Greatness! (Spiritual wanderer) (Gone off blue completely - sorry Neville) I find this too hard to read....
  June 2nd, 2021 18:58
• The Misunderstanding (Randyjohnson71) A bit of marriage counselling no good then?
  June 2nd, 2021 07:44
• If Truth was a Colour (Neville) I Confess blue to be my favorite colour - at least during the first half...
  June 2nd, 2021 07:05
• Water is life, so is my poetic side (Poetic Dan) Your life seems pretty full and interesting, Dan. Your lines very positive...
  June 2nd, 2021 06:50
• Global Warning (Subregi) Couldn\'t agree more, subregi. Makes me sick at the complacency apparent...
  June 2nd, 2021 04:53
• Poem, I woke up this morning to get myself in Gear. (AwHec8) I can fully empathise with your sleep problems, Don. I hope you get a few...
  June 1st, 2021 21:37
• Once Upon a Freckled Cheek (Neville) To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right...
  June 1st, 2021 19:55
• Frenzy (Fay Slimm.) If I had any sense, I would creep right round your poem, Fay. Trouble is,...
  June 1st, 2021 19:45
• Three Palms Revisited (Doggerel Dave) No message beyond what is there, Teddy. \'All is change\' would probably...
  June 1st, 2021 06:58
• Too Many Options (H.R.Powell) Maybe you might be all of them in the course of a long colourful life,...
  June 1st, 2021 05:10
• Daily Drops. (Goldfinch60) \'Same trouble with the eye drops, until my eyes begin to burn from...
  June 1st, 2021 04:29
• Chasing the rainbow (Jayasree) Chasing an elusive fantasy? “The journey not the arrival matters.”...
  June 1st, 2021 04:24
• You and I (Trenz Pruca) I don\'t know if you and I sing the same songs Trenz, but I’ll tell you...
  May 31st, 2021 22:09
• Ten Summers Bygone (Alan .S. Jeeves) Fine lines of poetry constructed with your usual care, Alan. Very...
  May 31st, 2021 22:01
• Unidentified Flying Object? (Subregi) 👀
  May 31st, 2021 21:48
• Together (Fay Slimm.) The light bulb moment when all with power (not you or I) realize the...
  May 31st, 2021 08:00
• Foodie (Jayasree) Saves time with washing up, then - that\'s true. Admire your honesty.......
  May 31st, 2021 01:42
• Exist For Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Your belief in that place: \'hope you are right, Andy.
  May 31st, 2021 01:35
• Violent deadly crime spree shoots upward (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Hear hear: What can you say about the second amendment other than - today...
  May 31st, 2021 01:30
• Tulsa (Jerry Reynolds) Come on Jerry - fezz up. Unclassified as a category and no further...
  May 30th, 2021 19:40
• Virus (Neville) Pre covid. Prophetic or what? Poignant write on its own, without the...
  May 30th, 2021 07:36
• Mirrors Cracked (Neville) Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life...
  May 30th, 2021 07:07
• Evening Owl (Goddess of the Mist) There be plenty of wisdom and some goddessing going on with owls, so you...
  May 30th, 2021 06:09
• Riding a Curve (Neville) You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you,...
  May 30th, 2021 05:50
• Happiness. (Goldfinch60) Thumbs up, Andy - extract the good bits, discard the bad. Hopefully...
  May 30th, 2021 05:42
• The Will You Write (Subregi) Thanks!
  May 30th, 2021 01:58
• Untitled - XXXVIII (SureshG) Sometimes a delusion.....
  May 29th, 2021 17:59
• Sea-Dog (Kevin Michael Bloor) Metaphor only for recovery from lost love? I hope so from a selfish point...
  May 29th, 2021 07:48
• Spent (Fay Slimm.) I think you have had an interesting life, Fay Slimm - when and where can...
  May 29th, 2021 07:32
• Riddle (Eugene S.) I\'m no good at riddles or anything remotely obscure - so just indulge me,...
  May 29th, 2021 07:25
• 2 Put it Frankly   (Neville) Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
  May 29th, 2021 04:09
• Monsoon (Jayasree) Good one, Jay. \'Monsoon\' obviously does not imply cyclone or tornado or...
  May 29th, 2021 03:56
• Ode to my dear aunt (Subregi) Thanks!
  May 29th, 2021 00:40
• People In Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes Andy, the feeling memory lingers on....And for the record, I ain\'t...
  May 29th, 2021 00:32
• When We Did things Like This, (Trenz Pruca) A great evocation of that time and place, Trenz. As for advice to the...
  May 29th, 2021 00:21
• Post-truth in wonderland (Subregi) By the tenor of your piece I thought you were from the US , UK or...
  May 28th, 2021 20:53
• A Box Full of Maybe’s (Neville) I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably...
  May 28th, 2021 08:40
• British Summertime. (Goldfinch60) My oh my, Andy, the pollies, the advisors, or whoever it was who imposed...
  May 28th, 2021 05:49
• Poem, The ways of the World! (AwHec8) Go for it Don, you are on a roll. You have analyzed the ills of our times...
  May 28th, 2021 05:21
• Rokhsana (Neville) Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only...
  May 27th, 2021 20:22
• Do Shut Up Orchi.... (Orchidee) No orchi, you just continue to fight your good fight in the way you know...
  May 27th, 2021 20:02
• What Is Tomorrow? (Goldfinch60) Yea - it\'s the one coming up, Andy..... But you must always question even...
  May 27th, 2021 08:37
• Leaders of our times (Subregi) I couldn\'t better analyze ...
  May 27th, 2021 05:42
• I Choose The Light (DesertWords) I\'m very literal in my use and understanding of language, DW. Hence I...
  May 27th, 2021 05:08
• Yellow Birds (Jerry Reynolds) Free \'em all - I\'m glad you bought this horrendous situation to our...
  May 27th, 2021 04:50
• Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…) (Doggerel Dave) \"Did you mean poohy or phooey, there, Bill? 😊
  May 27th, 2021 03:53
• Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…) (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Teddy - you aren\'t singing my praises by any chance, are...
  May 26th, 2021 06:59
• So Much (Fay Slimm.) I do admire Fay, no absorb at least, some of the meditative awareness you...
  May 26th, 2021 04:39
• Scarce Blues (Neville) Great last scene before curtain close, Neville
  May 26th, 2021 01:43
• FIRST DATE (Andy Hunter) Public transport today? Plugged in one and all - definitely not in the...
  May 25th, 2021 18:51
• Thunder in the East (Jerry Reynolds) You certainly seem to have gangs of delinquents among the avian...
  May 25th, 2021 18:28
• The Baby Boomers Of Paradise (Alan .S. Jeeves) I’m a bit hesitant about contributing my two penn\'orth after all of the...
  May 25th, 2021 05:35
• Is The Livin\' Easy In Summertime? (Goldfinch60) Maximum stress in summertime, Andy…you’ve got to try to enjoy –...
  May 25th, 2021 04:52
• Creating Happiness. (Goldfinch60) Feel like I’m on a different planet sometimes, Andy. People are unhappy...
  May 24th, 2021 04:52
• ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54) It matters, of course, little whether a poem or just musings. It is rich...
  May 23rd, 2021 07:38
• Sentimentality. (Goldfinch60) With you all the way, Andy. Where appropriate make yourself vulnerable -...
  May 23rd, 2021 07:15
• Thinking Caps (Gary Edward Geraci) (How much time do you think I\'ve got, Gary - had to look up...
  May 22nd, 2021 20:22
• Journal Entry - July, 2018 (Michael Anthony) Thank you, Michael. You provide a touching portrait of grief and loss...
  May 22nd, 2021 20:06
• Diogenes. (Goldfinch60) You do make it hard sometimes, Andy - now I know I\'ve been around a fair...
  May 22nd, 2021 08:07
• Left Behind (JWKP98) Re comment Well good luck - will be interesting to see how you go....
  May 21st, 2021 20:16
• And The Wind Blows. (Goldfinch60) The clouds, the trees, the sea, the waves of corn..all provoked rich...
  May 21st, 2021 19:50
• American Blood (Wackyheartache4) Great to witness anger so articulately expressed. I don’t think the...
  May 21st, 2021 05:30
• A Simple SOLUTION for WORLD PEACE! (AiR - Atman in Ravi) I\'ve tried very hard not to comment on this poetic effort.,....and...
  May 21st, 2021 04:51
• Paper Cups (Neville) No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined...
  May 20th, 2021 20:44
• Fletched (Neville) \'Bit late to ask now methinks \'specially as everyone else seems to have...
  May 19th, 2021 23:23
• Laughter On The Lawn. (Goldfinch60) Anyone bothered by \'twat\' should bugger off and consult Wikipedia on the...
  May 19th, 2021 19:44
• A Man Who Does Not Care (DesertWords) Alienation rules.....
  May 19th, 2021 19:25
• BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ? (Andy Hunter) Oh come on Andy - never heard of the trickle down effect? It will happen...
  May 19th, 2021 19:14
• Work Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60) Give me retirement (in comfortable circumstances) any day - and preferably...
  May 12th, 2021 05:12
• HOW ANNOYING IS THAT? (Michael Edwards) Double thumbs up from me, Michael. You do that...let it out... it\'s all...
  May 12th, 2021 05:03
• Take One (Fay Slimm.) Neville cracked something there when he suggested grief for different...
  May 11th, 2021 21:57
• Journey of Tears  (Neville) Just a gendered means of self expression - think no more of it than that....
  May 11th, 2021 21:49
• The Blind Date Outcome (Andy Hunter) Not corny at all Andy - At least I\'m now reassured that the man she was...
  May 11th, 2021 20:58
• The Blind Date (Andy Hunter) Good one Andy, well put together as usual. Just a little worried about...
  May 11th, 2021 05:27
• Life’s a river of memory  and yearning.  (Trenz Pruca) Good stuff , Trenz - something which is greeted with deep recognition by...
  May 11th, 2021 05:15
• Haemorrhoid Cream (AuburnScribbler) AS: Little do I understand (or for that matter care) about the electoral...
  May 11th, 2021 05:04
• Negative in Blue (Neville) Definitely makes it imperative to continue to monitor blood pressure,...
  May 10th, 2021 08:16
• The March of the Chocolate Soldier (Alan .S. Jeeves) Now if I can stop sobbing Alan, I would be asking myself if this won’t...
  May 10th, 2021 04:57
• Make the world Greta again. (Aa Harvey) Well that\'s laid it out for everybody. Can\'t thank you enough, Aa. So...
  May 9th, 2021 19:28
• and if he’s lacking something then he’s not God but something less than God (Gary Edward Geraci) Hey Gary - is this about the Flying Spaghetti Monster (which it would seem...
  May 9th, 2021 01:14