Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Sea-Dog (Kevin Michael Bloor) Metaphor only for recovery from lost love? I hope so from a selfish point...
  May 29th, 2021 07:48
• Spent (Fay Slimm.) I think you have had an interesting life, Fay Slimm - when and where can...
  May 29th, 2021 07:32
• Riddle (Eugene S.) I\'m no good at riddles or anything remotely obscure - so just indulge me,...
  May 29th, 2021 07:25
• 2 Put it Frankly   (Neville) Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
  May 29th, 2021 04:09
• Monsoon (Jayasree) Good one, Jay. \'Monsoon\' obviously does not imply cyclone or tornado or...
  May 29th, 2021 03:56
• Ode to my dear aunt (Subregi) Thanks!
  May 29th, 2021 00:40
• People In Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes Andy, the feeling memory lingers on....And for the record, I ain\'t...
  May 29th, 2021 00:32
• When We Did things Like This, (Trenz Pruca) A great evocation of that time and place, Trenz. As for advice to the...
  May 29th, 2021 00:21
• Post-truth in wonderland (Subregi) By the tenor of your piece I thought you were from the US , UK or...
  May 28th, 2021 20:53
• A Box Full of Maybe’s (Neville) I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably...
  May 28th, 2021 08:40
• British Summertime. (Goldfinch60) My oh my, Andy, the pollies, the advisors, or whoever it was who imposed...
  May 28th, 2021 05:49
• Poem, The ways of the World! (AwHec8) Go for it Don, you are on a roll. You have analyzed the ills of our times...
  May 28th, 2021 05:21
• Rokhsana (Neville) Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only...
  May 27th, 2021 20:22
• Do Shut Up Orchi.... (Orchidee) No orchi, you just continue to fight your good fight in the way you know...
  May 27th, 2021 20:02
• What Is Tomorrow? (Goldfinch60) Yea - it\'s the one coming up, Andy..... But you must always question even...
  May 27th, 2021 08:37
• Leaders of our times (Subregi) I couldn\'t better analyze ...
  May 27th, 2021 05:42
• I Choose The Light (DesertWords) I\'m very literal in my use and understanding of language, DW. Hence I...
  May 27th, 2021 05:08
• Yellow Birds (Jerry Reynolds) Free \'em all - I\'m glad you bought this horrendous situation to our...
  May 27th, 2021 04:50
• Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…) (Doggerel Dave) \"Did you mean poohy or phooey, there, Bill? 😊
  May 27th, 2021 03:53
• Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…) (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Teddy - you aren\'t singing my praises by any chance, are...
  May 26th, 2021 06:59
• So Much (Fay Slimm.) I do admire Fay, no absorb at least, some of the meditative awareness you...
  May 26th, 2021 04:39
• Scarce Blues (Neville) Great last scene before curtain close, Neville
  May 26th, 2021 01:43
• FIRST DATE (Andy Hunter) Public transport today? Plugged in one and all - definitely not in the...
  May 25th, 2021 18:51
• Thunder in the East (Jerry Reynolds) You certainly seem to have gangs of delinquents among the avian...
  May 25th, 2021 18:28
• The Baby Boomers Of Paradise (Alan .S. Jeeves) I’m a bit hesitant about contributing my two penn\'orth after all of the...
  May 25th, 2021 05:35
• Is The Livin\' Easy In Summertime? (Goldfinch60) Maximum stress in summertime, Andy…you’ve got to try to enjoy –...
  May 25th, 2021 04:52
• Creating Happiness. (Goldfinch60) Feel like I’m on a different planet sometimes, Andy. People are unhappy...
  May 24th, 2021 04:52
• ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54) It matters, of course, little whether a poem or just musings. It is rich...
  May 23rd, 2021 07:38
• Sentimentality. (Goldfinch60) With you all the way, Andy. Where appropriate make yourself vulnerable -...
  May 23rd, 2021 07:15
• Thinking Caps (Gary Edward Geraci) (How much time do you think I\'ve got, Gary - had to look up...
  May 22nd, 2021 20:22
• Journal Entry - July, 2018 (Michael Anthony) Thank you, Michael. You provide a touching portrait of grief and loss...
  May 22nd, 2021 20:06
• Diogenes. (Goldfinch60) You do make it hard sometimes, Andy - now I know I\'ve been around a fair...
  May 22nd, 2021 08:07
• Left Behind (JWKP98) Re comment Well good luck - will be interesting to see how you go....
  May 21st, 2021 20:16
• And The Wind Blows. (Goldfinch60) The clouds, the trees, the sea, the waves of corn..all provoked rich...
  May 21st, 2021 19:50
• American Blood (Wackyheartache4) Great to witness anger so articulately expressed. I don’t think the...
  May 21st, 2021 05:30
• A Simple SOLUTION for WORLD PEACE! (AiR - Atman in Ravi) I\'ve tried very hard not to comment on this poetic effort.,....and...
  May 21st, 2021 04:51
• Paper Cups (Neville) No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined...
  May 20th, 2021 20:44
• Fletched (Neville) \'Bit late to ask now methinks \'specially as everyone else seems to have...
  May 19th, 2021 23:23
• Laughter On The Lawn. (Goldfinch60) Anyone bothered by \'twat\' should bugger off and consult Wikipedia on the...
  May 19th, 2021 19:44
• A Man Who Does Not Care (DesertWords) Alienation rules.....
  May 19th, 2021 19:25
• BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ? (Andy Hunter) Oh come on Andy - never heard of the trickle down effect? It will happen...
  May 19th, 2021 19:14
• Work Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60) Give me retirement (in comfortable circumstances) any day - and preferably...
  May 12th, 2021 05:12
• HOW ANNOYING IS THAT? (Michael Edwards) Double thumbs up from me, Michael. You do that...let it out... it\'s all...
  May 12th, 2021 05:03
• Take One (Fay Slimm.) Neville cracked something there when he suggested grief for different...
  May 11th, 2021 21:57
• Journey of Tears  (Neville) Just a gendered means of self expression - think no more of it than that....
  May 11th, 2021 21:49
• The Blind Date Outcome (Andy Hunter) Not corny at all Andy - At least I\'m now reassured that the man she was...
  May 11th, 2021 20:58
• The Blind Date (Andy Hunter) Good one Andy, well put together as usual. Just a little worried about...
  May 11th, 2021 05:27
• Life’s a river of memory  and yearning.  (Trenz Pruca) Good stuff , Trenz - something which is greeted with deep recognition by...
  May 11th, 2021 05:15
• Haemorrhoid Cream (AuburnScribbler) AS: Little do I understand (or for that matter care) about the electoral...
  May 11th, 2021 05:04
• Negative in Blue (Neville) Definitely makes it imperative to continue to monitor blood pressure,...
  May 10th, 2021 08:16
• The March of the Chocolate Soldier (Alan .S. Jeeves) Now if I can stop sobbing Alan, I would be asking myself if this won’t...
  May 10th, 2021 04:57
• Make the world Greta again. (Aa Harvey) Well that\'s laid it out for everybody. Can\'t thank you enough, Aa. So...
  May 9th, 2021 19:28
• and if he’s lacking something then he’s not God but something less than God (Gary Edward Geraci) Hey Gary - is this about the Flying Spaghetti Monster (which it would seem...
  May 9th, 2021 01:14
• My little slice of heaven (Poetic Dan) Your kid\'s a little character, Dan. Easy to see how well you go...
  May 8th, 2021 05:21
• Coffin Dodger. (Goldfinch60) I reckon that manager needs to take a few lessons on respect. Wasn\'t very...
  May 8th, 2021 04:56
• Best Mans\' Speech (Andy Hunter) Do they still have those things, Andy - weddings with bride in white,...
  May 7th, 2021 23:49
• ALL IN COMPASS (Joe Marcello) You speaking to Me?
  May 7th, 2021 21:23
• The Earth Worm-a sonnet  (Dove) A righteous cause, Dove. Publicised as a sonnet to boot, a form which...
  May 7th, 2021 18:57
• Painting To Music. (Goldfinch60) Feels almost like a synesthete\'s manifesto... You may gather followers...
  May 7th, 2021 07:17
• Meditation (Fay Slimm.) How did you do that Fay? First stanza - at back of mind (easiest way to...
  May 7th, 2021 06:57
• Thatch (Neville) Just left it, haven\'t you? Your farewell, Neville? BTW: this one I had...
  May 7th, 2021 04:29
• A recap and recount of pandemic lockdowns worldwide (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I will prioritise the first and penultimate stanzas and vote for the rest....
  May 6th, 2021 07:18
• Early Morning Love Noise? (Goldfinch60) Right then - LMAO it has to be, because I don\'t know what to write, as...
  May 6th, 2021 04:59
• A RESTAURANT CRITIQUE (Michael Edwards) No satisfying you is there? :-) I have a digestive system too; I can\'t...
  May 6th, 2021 00:14
• COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond) (Andy Hunter) You just can not do that Andy - what is my favourite vegetable going to...
  May 5th, 2021 22:12
• Instinctive (Fay Slimm.) I\'ll settle for the last - so we have almost got it covered. \'Pity...
  May 5th, 2021 07:17
• Hands (Rebmasters) I liked that one very much, reb. Not just scars on hands.....
  May 5th, 2021 07:09
• Ice Queen (Neville) Image, promise, and....disillusionment?... did you know already, Neville?
  May 5th, 2021 07:04
• Rough Neighborhood (H.R.Powell) I thought Honolulu was all palm trees, beaches and houla......I\'m truly...
  May 4th, 2021 22:30
• My Bank Holiday (Andy Hunter) Why cannot folks understand that roads on public holidays are not...
  May 4th, 2021 22:02
• Invincible (Fay Slimm.) I am somewhat occasionally relieved Fay, that after all these years Big D...
  May 4th, 2021 21:46
• Paying For My Haircut! (Goldfinch60) You\'ve been winning too many games - someone tried to even the score, I...
  May 4th, 2021 07:48
• Alone with You (M.E.M.) Your usual \'comments welcome\' missing here - why? Are comments drying...
  May 3rd, 2021 23:05
• Blighty (Neville) That one certainly does (butting into a conversation between you and Fay...
  May 3rd, 2021 22:47
• RELAX (Andy Hunter) Neatly done Andy. It matters little whether it is called meditation or...
  May 3rd, 2021 22:17
• Unrivaled (Fay Slimm.) A great evocation of a distant time, a romantic time from here, although I...
  May 3rd, 2021 07:35
• Not Again (JWKP98) Well done. Perhaps this is the start of a whole new life. However, and...
  May 3rd, 2021 01:49
• That Journey. (Goldfinch60) Much more important than the destination is the journey - once I\'ve...
  May 2nd, 2021 06:13
• The Painter (Michael Anthony) Great work - tells the story with both texture and rhythm. Sorry I\'m not...
  May 2nd, 2021 05:44
• Cova (Neville) Yes I knew Cova, only her name was.........Wish sometimes I\'d followed;...
  May 2nd, 2021 00:24
• No Eulogy (FredPeyer) Yeh - but not yet mate - where the hell are you?
  May 1st, 2021 22:12
• My Life in the Stars (M.E.M.) This work really drew me into your place in an environment full of texture...
  May 1st, 2021 21:59
• The Commuter (Andy Hunter) There\'s truth in the line \"They hide behind a dead pan face\". Thanks...
  May 1st, 2021 19:20
• FOOLS GOLD (The Death Of Wonga) (Andy Hunter) Can\'t do better than Bill here, Andy. The kind of stuff I like and enjoy.
  May 1st, 2021 08:12
• Worried Days. (Goldfinch60) How do you pump them out every day, Andy? Great thought - worthy of...
  April 30th, 2021 05:45
• can\'t get what you want always (JordanandThomas29) Well thanks for that - I will bear it in mind. Memo to self: See name...
  April 30th, 2021 05:40
• Sleep slower than machine gun (Makoto Maruyama) Totally beyond my comprehension/understanding, Makoto - I think the...
  April 29th, 2021 04:47
• Life FIB. (Goldfinch60) This put me in my place......... Thanks Andy......
  April 29th, 2021 02:07
• A Decision re: grad school (Liam Power) You will be following the great tradition of the Grand Tour, where you...
  April 29th, 2021 01:13
• Phantom (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder) Last four lines I really appreciated, Ashraf.
  April 29th, 2021 00:51
• Hunger (Jerry Reynolds) The trouble for me, Jerry with these is that while part of my brain...
  April 28th, 2021 22:59
• last signs of life (Kaunisdiana) While I have a certain acceptance of death I do still have difficulty with...
  April 28th, 2021 21:19
• Imagination (Jordan) I identify very much with those five short sharp lines. Thank you very...
  April 28th, 2021 21:05
• Mane (AuburnScribbler) At a time of my life when the choice was between do something about the...
  April 28th, 2021 20:45
• Light Ghost. (Goldfinch60) :-) :-) Andy......!
  April 28th, 2021 02:04
• True Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Yep - ace as usual; true poetry about poets (true, that is......)
  April 28th, 2021 01:57
• Covid Jabs. (Goldfinch60) Good experience by the sound of it, Andy. Humour in such situations makes...
  April 27th, 2021 05:55
• Monster Born By Night (Sugiura Asuna) If sadness has that reaction I hate to think what any stronger emotion...
  April 26th, 2021 19:17
• Depression (Andy Hunter) Pretty bad - yes? But if you can write about it in such a coherent form,...
  April 26th, 2021 18:59
• since you went away (Kevin Michael Bloor) My kind of poetry, with totally comprehensible feelings which have been...
  April 26th, 2021 18:49