Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Upon a Small White Feather (Neville) Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville? Can\'t avoid the...
  July 14th, 2021 04:28
• Live As You. (Goldfinch60) Good advice, Andy - but freeing yourself from other\'s expectations can be...
  July 14th, 2021 04:12
• Demeaning Meaning (Flyingfish) Great read - I really enjoyed the ride. For me, though, I may well get...
  July 14th, 2021 00:53
• FREEDOM (Oscar Gonzalez) Read your ‘About me’ with interest. A couple of thoughts: I don’t do...
  July 13th, 2021 19:54
• You know it (Poetic Dan) I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got...
  July 13th, 2021 19:29
• one in a million (SureshG) Malthus was giving it to the world in the 18th century, but did anyone...
  July 13th, 2021 19:14
• LOVELY SET OF WHEELS (Sold as seen) (Andy Hunter) You\'ve been round a load of lousy lots a lot - ever get lumbered,...
  July 13th, 2021 08:18
• Magnificently Different (Neville) Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened...
  July 13th, 2021 04:22
• The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60) That\'s a little creepy Andy - have you got some kind of access to my...
  July 13th, 2021 02:00
• Buzzing Bees (Nightingale of Poetry) A poetic tribute to bees very neatly penned. On a more prosaic level,...
  July 12th, 2021 19:52
• An Unfinished Life and Poem (Trenz Pruca) I\'d settle for that, Trenz. Much in a very neat little package. Last...
  July 12th, 2021 19:26
• Naughty Girl (Jerry Reynolds) Booty? Wot off to the footy again..... Seriously though - Every (or most)...
  July 12th, 2021 18:58
• Whu do you hate me? (GC) You are a little bit of an enigma. I don’t know to whom you address this...
  July 12th, 2021 18:49
• Oaths (Catgotthecream) Your piece describes the multi faceted nature of domestic abuse – broken...
  July 11th, 2021 18:19
• Field Of Dreams Tanka. (Goldfinch60) My Poetic Side - A poetry writing school. I’m learning a...
  July 11th, 2021 02:11
• Stranger at Door (Flyingfish) Your fun poem does nothing to convince me that the BBC is not going down...
  July 11th, 2021 01:53
• Briefly (Neville) Much of the world\'s phenomena I could feel much better about if that were...
  July 11th, 2021 01:46
• A Challenging See-Saw (Laura🌻) Good one there Laura. Reads as self talk which is definitely the way to go...
  July 10th, 2021 17:24
• Without the Vow (Gary Edward Geraci) Perhaps not just young people, you know, Gary - divorce has been around...
  July 10th, 2021 17:11
• Such is Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.) As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few...
  July 10th, 2021 04:12
• We all have darkness (Poetic Dan) I certainly have stopped by, Dan – I cannot tell a lie. That little...
  July 10th, 2021 04:01
• Banished (Neville) Well so long as the banishment was sincere, Neville. You can feel the...
  July 10th, 2021 03:36
• Hypocrisy - 2016\0 (Rossen V. Vassilev) I think perhaps you might just conceivably have something there......Who...
  July 10th, 2021 01:11
• Illusion (Tulipslove) \'i\'m not used to writing poems\' - could have fooled me...... Welcome...
  July 10th, 2021 00:44
• Smile/Frown (AstralAbaddon) This one is a bit heavy. Felt a little uncomfortable after this read - and...
  July 10th, 2021 00:39
• Paths V (Eugene S.) A great little parable which should have garnered more attention. Many ...
  July 9th, 2021 20:51
• Elsa (Jerry Reynolds) \'Tropical Storm Elsa, which brought heavy rain and high winds to parts of...
  July 9th, 2021 07:57
• Life #1 (Saxon Crow) Thanks for the advice, Sax. Where have you been? Welcome back.
  July 9th, 2021 04:46
• Sleeping on the Job (Neville) Yeh - that\'s proof Stonehenge has been around too long, hasn\'t it, old...
  July 9th, 2021 04:11
• meditative - III (SureshG) Mmmm I’m not sure you worry too much, Suresh – you are going to put it...
  July 9th, 2021 04:02
• Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60) And so we did (me - hippie disguised as a straight), Andy. Your entry...
  July 9th, 2021 03:47
• Behold the Sweet Angel (Thomas Koron) Should rise through the ranks very rapidly round here., where you may find...
  July 9th, 2021 01:46
• cut and paste poem #16: bertrand russell and snagglepuss (Jon Nakapalau) With snagglepuss in the mix I find it funny and, yes, a little...
  July 8th, 2021 19:42
• I like her hair (Reeves :() A lengthy but easy read – no obscurities there; you tell it like it is,...
  July 8th, 2021 19:35
• Untitled - XLVII (SureshG) With you absolutely here, Suresh. That quagmire can be more like glue...
  July 8th, 2021 19:10
• Longboards & You (Poetic Dan) I really like the happiness in your poem/song, Dan. Ashamed to say...
  July 8th, 2021 18:16
• WHO is fooling who? (Gary Booker) I would settle for the first four lines Gary. The fifth, ‘This...
  July 8th, 2021 08:06
• Freshly Squeezed (Neville) \' just waiting on winter\' - nothing more? What did you get up to in the...
  July 8th, 2021 06:14
• Beginnings (Fay Slimm.) Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice...
  July 8th, 2021 05:07
• SINS OF THE PAST (Michael Edwards) True, Michael - but we can try to make amends to the offspring of the...
  July 8th, 2021 04:54
• Babel Bagels (Flyingfish) I\'ll vote for that as I go through the exit to wherever, John. Not...
  July 8th, 2021 00:31
• Lock down Lessons (Thekkinkkattil) A smart write - that\'s my decision.
  July 7th, 2021 08:29
• Way Too Late (Neville) How did you get away with it Neville? \'Bit dangerous, your confession...
  July 7th, 2021 04:31
• On the outta (Flyingfish) Yes there are a few places up and down that stretch of coast a bit like...
  July 7th, 2021 00:18
• meditative - II (SureshG) Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message...
  July 6th, 2021 19:23
• The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove) Thanks Dove. That had something of the flavor of folk clubs I frequented...
  July 6th, 2021 19:01
• No Mean Feet (Neville) A wee bit of tension going on there? They\'ve got one hell of a past,...
  July 6th, 2021 06:38
• Myself (Fay Slimm.) The river\'s growth and passage captured in rich descriptive...
  July 6th, 2021 06:00
• Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60) Yep - it\'s one way to save the environment from all those farting cows...
  July 6th, 2021 05:46
• Just look at the time (Flyingfish) Yeh - it’s necessary to impose some artificial system of measurement in...
  July 6th, 2021 05:38
• Seeing Both Sides (Flyingfish) Memories from childhood,John? (can\'t believe you are still at it). Bought...
  July 5th, 2021 21:47
• Car Talk (Langton) That\'s an easy fun way to make the argument digestible Langton. Should...
  July 5th, 2021 19:13
• Bullseye (Catgotthecream) So ?Alex? – Your name, to be addressed by? Or ‘Cat’? I’m...
  July 5th, 2021 18:57
• Lost and Found (Jerry Reynolds) As above, really, Jerry. Congrats on a great moral tale. Just wish the...
  July 5th, 2021 18:38
• Back Then (Fay Slimm.) Not going there - sorry Fay. Couldn\'t cope with the sweat (sorry -...
  July 5th, 2021 04:27
• Across the Kitchen Floor. (Goldfinch60) Intervene - counselling - dispute resolution, conditional upon the...
  July 5th, 2021 04:04
• Ode to Mother Nature (Goddess of the Mist) Your changing relationship with Nature and the freedom it gives you, is...
  July 4th, 2021 20:29
• Pretty Penny (Catgotthecream) Another unspeakable issue which MUST be spoken about, Cat. A skilled...
  July 4th, 2021 20:20
• Phoenix Reborn (Kurt Philip Behm) Book burning? No acceptance, please, Kurt. However song existed before...
  July 4th, 2021 20:04
• Geraldine (Neville) A swim past to balance your tribute – even I have to admit that...
  July 4th, 2021 06:22
• Good To Me (Pacifique Niyitanga) I really enjoyed the way you explored the complexities of your attraction...
  July 4th, 2021 02:07
• Please me (Florence J) Crap sex. Welcome to MPS Please feel free to respond to commentary -MPS...
  July 4th, 2021 01:00
• The Relaxing Pitter-Patter on the Conservatory Roof (AuburnScribbler) All these bleeders wiv conservatories.... Wait \'til I get their...
  July 3rd, 2021 21:36
• Seeds in the Sand (Cheka) Cheka now? well hello anyway... Your work is again clearly and cleanly...
  July 3rd, 2021 21:20
• Hide and Seek (Catgotthecream) I do hope that your piece is just an imaginative construction rather than...
  July 3rd, 2021 21:00
• Three T’s (Neville) I’m not about to wait Neville - I’ve seen. What I’m about now is...
  July 3rd, 2021 08:25
• You Liking? (Orchidee) You\'ve been around, ain\'t you orchi? Your penultimate stanza - wow the...
  July 3rd, 2021 04:44
• Why Flies should Die! (Saxon Crow) Dear Sir, You are reliably informed that those small beasts do sterling...
  July 3rd, 2021 01:19
• The Old Churchyard Wall (Langton) It’s the same feeling I get when I look at any well crafted old...
  July 2nd, 2021 19:45
• The Time in Between (Cheka) Hello CB…I really relate to your first two stanzas, where I feel that...
  July 2nd, 2021 19:34
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (3) (Michael Edwards) Michael, for me this evoked very visual images, as the first line gave me...
  July 2nd, 2021 18:41
• Solitary (Fay Slimm.) Not, as you point out Neville, typical, your Brian. Where I live, when...
  July 2nd, 2021 07:59
• All the Best Words (Neville) Plagiarism and aggressive misinterpretation rampant, Neville? Time to...
  July 2nd, 2021 04:46
• Song, Heartache, Heartbreak. (AwHec8) I\'m not very musical, and can\'t normally keep a tune, Don - but this...
  July 1st, 2021 17:56
• Breaking News (MyMindInRhyme) Dunno where you\'ve come from, but feel you are an old hand. A great...
  July 1st, 2021 17:45
• Discovery (Fay Slimm.) Simple and pleasing, Fay. \'Such a summer as this had buttons undone as...
  July 1st, 2021 05:11
• Six Million Candles (Neville) Once more, a great piece, Neville. Another topic I cannot deal with...
  July 1st, 2021 04:36
• Another Year (Saxon Crow) That’s a hard one neatly put, Sax. I like to think I’ve matured,...
  July 1st, 2021 01:09
• Haunted (Lily_) You got out but obsessive thoughts and dreams plague you? They more then...
  July 1st, 2021 00:44
• PUZZLED POET (Andy Hunter) Yeeeees....I knoooooow...... whaaaat .......yooooou ......meaaaaan....mind...
  June 30th, 2021 21:05
• Under The Hammer. (Goldfinch60) I\'m sure they will get the odd tickle of interest at that auction, Andy -...
  June 30th, 2021 19:08
• Curbed (Fay Slimm.) Dedicated to birds in cages also? A silly question: (\'all...
  June 30th, 2021 08:56
• Cold Shoulder (Neville) Victimisation and prejudice - a portrait too painful - wonder you could...
  June 30th, 2021 04:40
• Dominus Propitiari (Laura🌻) I\'m just a poor weak man..... Also uncultivated, so if it would not be...
  June 30th, 2021 00:43
• The Crescent Alter (Germanamericanchurch) I somehow feel that an attempt at author commentary would have been...
  June 29th, 2021 18:31
• Colliers Way (_naturally_curious_) Takes me back to my country cycling days in the UK- the best of...
  June 29th, 2021 18:28
• Don\'t say anymore (Sandra) This is partner abuse. Get out.
  June 29th, 2021 18:11
• WHY PUT OUR DREAMS ON HOLD (Andy Hunter) I\'ve never been a parent (thankfully) but from observation I believe many...
  June 29th, 2021 18:03
• Bonsai (Thekkinkkattil) You have something there which only rarely troubles me a little: I very...
  June 29th, 2021 05:13
• Empty Harbours (Neville) Fished out - \'sorry to make this reductionist and personal Neville, but...
  June 29th, 2021 05:01
• The Love Story of Mrs Duckers and Mr Von Sneppick (Saxon Crow) Boffington Town sounds a very interesting place full of ....colorful...
  June 29th, 2021 04:34
• No Joke Jo... (Jaimeleigh) and with your child hood it will remain my dear - eyestrain
  June 28th, 2021 20:12
• Twitarus (Neville) Definitely a twit - so far so good. Should also be nominated for a Darwin...
  June 28th, 2021 08:55
• Middle aged (Sandra) Oh - and I wuz starting to get up.... a perspiration.... Never mind - ...
  June 28th, 2021 04:32
• Infinite Universe. (Goldfinch60) Infinite universes are more than likely, I feel; however, I cannot buy the...
  June 28th, 2021 02:15
• Ipsy Mcskiggins\' Secret (Saxon Crow) Great stuff - another colorful communique from Boffington. What is the...
  June 28th, 2021 02:06
• Along the Mineral Line (Neville) Got to smell the steam the coal dust smoke and midnight once more, Neville...
  June 27th, 2021 07:57
• Ponderings (Fay Slimm.) Ponderings, on the evidence of what you present here have certainly...
  June 27th, 2021 07:51
• I (Kevin Michael Bloor) Yeh - I could tick a goodly number of those as being applicable to me in...
  June 27th, 2021 07:38
• Wonders of Nature (Thekkinkkattil) I\'m not into Nature poetry much myself, but the assurance that there may...
  June 27th, 2021 07:12