Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- Never (Emi)
The conclusion is brilliant for many cannot disagree, never realizing how...
July 17th, 2011 20:45 - Memories (Emi)
For mere random contemplations in miserable moments, this is...
July 16th, 2011 09:53 - Change (Nexuscjt)
Indeed, an excellent example of thinking "aloud!" Fascinating and...
July 14th, 2011 21:52 - INSIDE & OUT ASSESSMENT (Nexuscjt)
I love your author's note in particular because it lends perspective on...
May 12th, 2011 14:57 - Its you (Holly Miller)
Very good! This excellently depicts that age-old wonder of falling in...
May 12th, 2011 13:51 - Could this be love? (Hoween94)
Alas, and how very well and perfectly you've depicted it here! Wonderful!...
May 12th, 2011 13:46 - Lights on a broken window (Zojinjo)
Ah, how poignantly and perfectly depicted! You scare me! Tell me this is...
May 9th, 2011 22:43 - Coming of the Antichrist (Zojinjo)
Ugh! How awful! La, but you exercise quite the imagination of devilish...
May 6th, 2011 20:16 - Hell... attack! (Zojinjo)
And thus the devils stoke the fire and encourage themselves against their...
May 6th, 2011 19:44 - The human infection (Zojinjo)
On the one hand, I tend to agree, if you examine what sinful mankind does....
May 6th, 2011 19:35 - NBF (NATURAL BORN FIGHTER) (Nexuscjt)
It's so delightfully characteristically you! The pep talk for when you're...
May 6th, 2011 19:29 - The North Star (Shawnj2609)
Wow. And very beautifully written it is too! It has a sweet painful...
April 23rd, 2011 17:57 - I Am Stupid (Alexandre Landsley)
Hahaha, indeed. And "s" being my middle initial, "'S' stands for...
April 23rd, 2011 10:05 - Always walking beside you. (Lifewellspoken)
Well, Monseigneur Humble, the committee confesses that this was so very...
April 12th, 2011 23:20 - Eric, the Evil Emu (Sudarshan)
Wow. Thank you! Quite a fascinating tale! I much enjoyed reading it,...
April 7th, 2011 23:40 - MAINTAIN FOR THE GAME (Nexuscjt)
La dee dah! Well, and that is the attitude of the proud? Seems so. Very...
April 7th, 2011 23:31 - Who Broke the Looking Glass? A Question for Alice. (Dead Crow)
La dee dah. But you do write well! What an awful but perfect depiction! ...
March 31st, 2011 15:30 - Take what you will. (Brennan)
You seem to have excellently expressed it dividing the lines as you have, ...
March 22nd, 2011 22:57 - My Reason (StormyDay)
Oooh, lala! Luck Daryn! Looks like the spoiled Valentine's Day didn't...
March 22nd, 2011 22:13 - Being first and last. (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, Monseigneur Jason Humble, what fascinatingly incomprehensible morsel...
March 22nd, 2011 22:07 - EARTHQUAKE! (Emilou G.)
Excellent haiku in tribute to the horrendous calamity.
March 21st, 2011 23:47 - Masquerade (Emi)
Beautifully expressed and very, very sad. Your symbolism and metaphors of...
March 20th, 2011 22:02 - tears on smiling face (Rajat mahaych)
The repetition of tears on a smiling face effectively communicates the...
March 20th, 2011 21:42 - DELAYED ANGER (Nexuscjt)
Delightfully fascinating as usual, a self-discussion evaluating the...
March 20th, 2011 21:32 - Without A Beating Heart (Emi)
Very good for "just throwing something together"! This depicts the...
March 20th, 2011 21:15 - A Dandelion Love (Phylock)
Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. ...
March 19th, 2011 22:04 - Everytime (Lonelykaren)
It is very sorrowful and bitter. A very grievous situation, aptly...
March 19th, 2011 22:01 - Another time. (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, but Monsieur Jason, you have accidentally scribed yet another budding...
March 19th, 2011 21:48 - rain walk (Marius)
Fascinating metaphorical representation. Excellent! A tad intriguing, but...
March 19th, 2011 21:35 - H1 ’N Then Some (Dead Crow)
Marvelous! But you are excellently good with your loaded metaphors! ...
March 19th, 2011 21:32 - Farewell (Shyam)
This is excellent, I think! How very well and poignantly you've depicted...
March 19th, 2011 21:28 - The Voiceless (Any)
Fascinating and excellently expressed. I think unless the speaker is...
March 17th, 2011 22:22 - Messenger of truth (Licia)
Beautiful, fascinating, excellent! Reminiscent of when the Lord gave His...
March 17th, 2011 22:10 - My lil Darlin ... a country song! (original) (Huzaidi Hashim)
Wow. Excellent! Fascinating and beautiful. So perfect and delightful. I...
March 17th, 2011 22:05 - How I Really Feel, AKA Politically F’ing Correct (Dead Crow)
Vulgar, but excellently expressed. Marvelously good point. Delightfully...
March 17th, 2011 22:03 - Because Butterscotch Bullets Taste Better (Dead Crow)
Nasty, vile piece of poetry, but these days it has a place. Taking the...
March 17th, 2011 21:50 - Times (Belinda AMeharry)
Fascinating, beautiful, interesting. There is indeed a time and season...
March 17th, 2011 21:44 - Luna Lunera (A Peruvian Lullaby) (Huzaidi Hashim)
Beautiful, bittersweet, fascinating. Thank you for sharing it.
March 17th, 2011 21:41 - Eventually, I hope. (Brennan)
Very fascinating and intriguing. Definitely determined. What is the...
March 17th, 2011 21:38 - Just anything (SauravRHS)
Hahaha! But this one WAS humorous! Fun and funny! I enjoyed it!
March 16th, 2011 13:20 - THE PET CAT (Sudarshan)
Hmm. Fascinating, humorous little anecdote about...an imaginary pussy,...
March 15th, 2011 23:50 - Tradgey, Indiffernce. (Brennan)
Impressive! So excellently depicted with metaphors, and outright, the...
March 15th, 2011 23:47 - Secret Key (Huzaidi Hashim)
Wow. I love it! So beautifully depicting that exact thing....excellently...
March 15th, 2011 23:43 - Who took my heart? (SauravRHS)
Indeed! I like it VERY well,....excepting for taking the Lord's name in...
March 15th, 2011 23:36 - THE HEART OF MY HEART (Sarah)
Wow. You write very well! Excellent, heart-wrenching dilemma! La, I...
March 12th, 2011 23:18 - silent whispers (Erica)
Wow, an acute sense of hearing....sounds miserable! You depicted it...
March 12th, 2011 23:02 - Larger then life (Lifewellspoken)
Ze vonterfull image, Monsieur Jason, sets ze tone fer de entire experience...
March 12th, 2011 22:57 - Waiting (Any)
Aw, too sweet! Excellent! The tension built until the reader could no...
March 12th, 2011 22:39 - Up (Emi)
Marvelous! What an eerie, chilling, horrifying depiction of dying! Wow. ...
March 12th, 2011 22:36 - A BEAUTIFUL DAY (Meigh)
Wow. What a sweet poem from a loving father to his precious twins. Glad...
March 12th, 2011 22:32 - Poetry (Huzaidi Hashim)
Cool! I like it, not only for the content, but also for the sweet fact of...
March 12th, 2011 12:34 - ITS HEAT AND THE LUST (Sarah)
Lust has such vile connotations that I would far prefer to call it "love,"...
March 12th, 2011 00:46 - ~~In hard times...~~ (Rajat)
Beautiful and fascinating depiction of "hard times" and this "life." ...
March 12th, 2011 00:39 - My Secret (Meigh)
Wow. This is VERY sad. Very poignantly expressed as well. Left me...
March 12th, 2011 00:12 - Torn Between Two (Any)
You've depicted the struggle very well as aptly titled "torn between...
March 10th, 2011 21:59 - The Shallowest Place (Dolphine29)
Fascinating and intriguing, beginning hopefully and ending hopelessly. A...
March 10th, 2011 21:40 - My Erotic Love For You! (Briana)
Indeed, it is erotic. Very well done in that category. Bravo.
March 10th, 2011 21:33 - Sometimes (Emi)
Hmm. Delightful use of "sometimes" with all the depictions of freedom and...
March 10th, 2011 21:30 - faith (Rajat mahaych)
Hmm. Fascinating, intriguing, and bittersweet owing to the broken trust. ...
March 10th, 2011 21:26 - My Girl (Alex v)
Aw, sweet. Your end-rhyming is pleasant. You expressed the love and...
March 10th, 2011 21:23 - THE IMMEASURABLE YOU (Jvl narasimha rao)
Who is the "You"?
March 10th, 2011 21:20 - ADVENTURES IN A DREAM (Sudarshan)
Fun. You might want to make your rhyme scheme more consistent...it isn't...
March 10th, 2011 21:17 - Alone............. (Shyam)
Well, for learning that most dreadful language English, you do very well. ...
March 10th, 2011 21:14 - Not Forgotten (Meigh)
Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You...
March 10th, 2011 21:09 - GIVE ME... (Sarah)
Fascinating, slightly intriguing, bittersweet. Rather poignant, it sounds...
March 10th, 2011 21:04 - Cracked and Crumpled (Emi)
Excellent and so poignantly expressed! Beautifully done! You depicted it...
March 10th, 2011 00:13 - The Beat of a Heart (Kristii7)
Beautiful and so lovely love poem, gently touching on/hinting of the...
March 10th, 2011 00:02 - Crucifiction (Zojinjo)
Wow. Fascinating! You seem to specialize lately in these pieces exposing...
March 9th, 2011 23:50 - A Heart's Plea (Dolphine29)
Beautiful and excellently depicted; perfectly expressed. I love how very...
March 9th, 2011 22:41 - never together i know (Sarah)
Wow. Very expressive, excellent depiction of a used woman and...
March 9th, 2011 22:36 - Funeral (Shyam)
Wow. What a thought-provoking consideration. Fascinating! I like how...
March 9th, 2011 22:27 - WIND (Sarah)
Excellent! This is impressive. Beautiful in its tender sentiments and...
March 9th, 2011 22:23 - Free me (Paullyna)
Fascinating and curious. Sweet and disturbing. Truth is not relative and...
March 9th, 2011 22:17 - soulmate (Meigh)
Wow. Eleven years is a while, yet with such deep love,....seems you might...
March 9th, 2011 22:13 - My oxygen (Lifewellspoken)
Congratulations!!! We are happy to inform you, Mr. Professional...
March 9th, 2011 22:04 - MEANING OR FIENING (Nexuscjt)
Very fascinating! Interesting contemplation.....the very real struggle...
March 9th, 2011 00:57 - Coming of the Black Marsh (Zojinjo)
My word! What a vile contemplation! And 23:49 was not the best time for...
March 9th, 2011 00:52 - PASSING BY (Dolphine29)
Fascinating, somewhat intriguing contemplation. So you are saying if we...
March 9th, 2011 00:43 - Help me (Paullyna)
Sweet. A cry for the deliverance of love....finding all in love. I like...
March 9th, 2011 00:33 - Cancer (Meigh)
Wow. Very sober, sorrowful, sweet, hopeful, poignant. The image is...
March 8th, 2011 00:47 - Try to move on (Any)
Ah, very sad. You've expressed the heartbreaking loss very well.
March 8th, 2011 00:37 - FAKE... (Nikhilps)
La, PS, but this is a sorrowful reflection. How very sad. I heartily...
March 8th, 2011 00:13 - Destroying (Paullyna)
This is eerie and chilling....how awful! What is it referring to?
March 8th, 2011 00:07 - THE DRAWN BATTLE (Sudarshan)
Sweet!!!! I love it!! Excellent! I'm very glad you won, sort...
March 8th, 2011 00:04 - This is my new "Life through my lens" video. (Lifewellspoken)
Alas, you stinker! So why then did I get no notice in my email???? For...
March 6th, 2011 15:35 - When You Happened (Camilla)
La, dee dah. But such an answer is too much for the little ones to...
March 6th, 2011 00:33 - flash back (Rajat mahaych)
Wow. It is so very sad! You poignantly expressed it, and excellently! ...
March 6th, 2011 00:30 - ~~The downpour~~ (Rajat)
Beautiful tribute to those delightful downpours! I began imagining some...
March 6th, 2011 00:18 - Something up there (Paullyna)
Hmm. Interesting and intriguing reflection. What is the title referring...
March 5th, 2011 21:51 - FORBIDDEN!! (Sarah)
You've depicted the fellow who uses and abuses girls and the girl who is...
March 5th, 2011 21:47 - THE LOST TREES (Sudarshan)
Ah, indeed! You've excellently pictured the modern disaster...the...
March 5th, 2011 21:42 - WHY (Satishverma)
Eerie, and excellently titled.
March 5th, 2011 21:31 - Candy (HollyBorz234815)
Ah, what a tender, poignant tribute to your dear lost friend! Beautiful...
March 5th, 2011 21:29 - Distraught (Any)
If only you would arrange it differently, for it verily appears you are...
March 5th, 2011 21:23 - Sharina Rae Wilson (JayFace21)
Aw, sweet. What a lovely romantic poem! I quite like it. Yet, why will...
March 5th, 2011 21:16 - COVID 19 MYTH OR MANTRA? 🧡ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hmm. You are everywhere these days, excepting PF. Interesting. ...
March 5th, 2011 21:13 - You and me (Paullyna)
Your last line seems to hang, breathlessly awaiting its conclusion, since...
March 5th, 2011 21:05 - BROWN (Sarah)
Oh, thank you very much for saying so. Yes, this is a delightful and...
March 5th, 2011 21:00 - TODAY IS MY BIRTH DAY (Jvl narasimha rao)
A very nice reflective poem in tribute to your half-century mark. We love...
March 4th, 2011 16:29 - From here and there (Lifewellspoken)
Fascinating! The place in the image is....where? (ya, stupid wee me!) And...
March 3rd, 2011 15:53
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