Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- Died Young (Patriots)
Aw. This is a very sweet tribute to losing somebody...in their youth or...
January 30th, 2011 23:55 - RURAL FAIRIES' PLANTATION (Jvl narasimha rao)
The picture is nicely fitting and so pleasant a scene to look at while...
January 30th, 2011 23:51 - A Kiss says it all (Gerrylegister)
Oh, this is a delightfully sweet study of love and it's allure and sweet...
January 30th, 2011 14:52 - Esto Perpetue (Mistoffelees)
It is a very touching piece of heartbreak...rather moving in the way you...
January 30th, 2011 01:01 - My World (Alexandre Landsley)
Wow. This is excellent! Very sweetly put and so perfectly too in the...
January 30th, 2011 00:50 - Seconds (Marius)
Wow. You do write lovely romantic poems! Your girl could fall for you,...
January 30th, 2011 00:20 - Cinderella (Emi)
Hahaha! I quite enjoyed your alternate version to the old fairy tale! ...
January 30th, 2011 00:15 - The Gift of Love (Marius)
Delightfully romantic call to your lady-love! I quite enjoyed it. You...
January 29th, 2011 23:49 - Because of.... (Bluesyzygy)
It is very sweet and loving....yet the affection seems to hinge on the...
January 29th, 2011 23:40 - Vampiric Act (Zojinjo)
Whoa....creepy! The image made me wonder and the poem explained it...how...
January 29th, 2011 23:31 - Looking in the mirror (Kimmerz)
Fascinating! Excellent observation! You stated it all so very well. As...
January 29th, 2011 23:24 - Dreams (Hidan)
Sweet....a delightful dream!....the world all to yourselves in love...
January 29th, 2011 23:15 - CERTAIN TIMES (Sadia Ismail)
Very interesting, fascinating, contemplative philosophical call to grab...
January 29th, 2011 23:08 - My Dog's Road to Fame (Sudarshan)
Amusing...made me chuckle. Delightful ,silly, imaginary (it's not true,...
January 29th, 2011 22:51 - Young Soldiers (Patriots)
Very interesting. Like going out to war....the "pep talk"/prep talk as...
January 29th, 2011 18:36 - OH! MY DEAR CHILD (Jvl narasimha rao)
Aw, the happy little nursing daughter is too adorably sweet! Perfect...
January 29th, 2011 00:46 - never ending nightmare (Boricuamami222)
Yikes...sounds like "he" died. Is that what this poem is communicating? ...
January 29th, 2011 00:35 - To See Truth open your eyes. To be happy shut them. (John)
Oh, sweet! I love the title...makes me smile, so aptly stated. Your...
January 29th, 2011 00:27 - Still the one (Gerrylegister)
Wow. I love this romantic, tender love poem! You expressed true love so...
January 29th, 2011 00:16 - Dawn Chorus (Dbremner)
Beautiful. You succinctly captured the delight of the new day's trilling. ...
January 28th, 2011 23:46 - The loving measures of obscurities=) (Exquiste1)
Fascinating, intriguing, very interesting contemplation....the title gave...
January 28th, 2011 23:35 - how could you?? (Happy feet)
Very good. You've expressed it very well....ah, the horrid realization of...
January 28th, 2011 23:18 - Sorry (StormyDay)
I LOVE the image...the puppy is so perfectly fitting and so adorable! ...
January 28th, 2011 22:49 - Their Lifes together. (Zojinjo)
Ya, and it follows too. I love your "author's comment...."! I agree it...
January 28th, 2011 22:27 - A DAWN OF DELIGHT (Naveen kandlapalli)
Fascinating, rather intriguing.....very interesting....is it like the...
January 28th, 2011 21:59 - THE TREE IN MY GARDEN (Sudarshan)
Very nice! Beautiful! You stated it all rather simplistically but...
January 28th, 2011 21:53 - Nightwalk (Marius)
You drew the scene so very well that I was there, from the first stanza,...
January 28th, 2011 21:49 - Roof Top Memories (Jlmoreno9929)
Interesting. Fascinating perspective on our lives from the vantage point...
January 28th, 2011 21:22 - Dreams (John)
Oh, sweet! I love this one....short and sweet, and on one of my favourite...
January 28th, 2011 18:51 - Simply Me (Lonelykaren)
It is a sad cry, which while almost begging to be loved, does not even...
January 27th, 2011 14:53 - The Crow (Zojinjo)
Oh, dear, wish I could edit my comment...I do NOT wish to be identified...
January 27th, 2011 14:45 - for you (Jalso)
But, the devil isn't wanting to be set free....since when? It's his prey...
January 27th, 2011 14:40 - THE SEASONAL HARVEST (Jvl narasimha rao)
I love the picture with it, which reading it, seems so perfectly fitting,...
January 27th, 2011 14:35 - Kryptonite (Alexandre Landsley)
Aw, sweet! The image so delightfully sets it off, next the title, and...
January 27th, 2011 12:30 - December Night (Hidan)
Wow. I like how you presented it....you so aptly characterized the entire...
January 27th, 2011 12:26 - False Conceptions (StormyDay)
Aw, sweet! I quite enjoyed this! You drew it all so delightfully,...
January 27th, 2011 12:19 - IT’S FUNNY (Nexuscjt)
Oooh...hope that wasn't a dare for bold wee me...funny how it goes that...
January 27th, 2011 12:15 - Impossible (Marius)
Wow. You very well depicted the situation of many so delightfully...
January 27th, 2011 12:06 - Find (Belinda AMeharry)
Beautifully and excellently depicted! You aptly captured the sentiment. ...
January 27th, 2011 12:00 - blown (Boricuamami222)
Fascinating...and unappetizingly, yet aptly, vulgar. I like how you so...
January 27th, 2011 11:55 - puddle of blood (Boricuamami222)
You've expressed the depressed mentality very well in this imaginary...
January 27th, 2011 11:50 - Where I'm From (Patriots)
Fascinating, beautiful, excellent! Reminiscent to me of Rodney Atkins'...
January 27th, 2011 11:35 - Extraordinary Love (Alexandre Landsley)
The image is so romantically sweet and fitting.......and it's such a very...
January 27th, 2011 00:52 - Broken (John)
Wow. It is very sad. You conveyed the heartbroken state very well. 'Tis...
January 27th, 2011 00:47 - The Scarecrow (Zojinjo)
Wow. Excellent rhyming and fairly good rythm. Intriguing, fascinating,...
January 27th, 2011 00:36 - Stallion (StormyDay)
Delightful! Fascinating delineation of a mighty stallion. I enjoyed this!...
January 27th, 2011 00:33 - such a loyal servent (Jalso)
Hnnn. So, the title being so, is the speaker a loyal servant to sin? ...
January 27th, 2011 00:28 - MOTHER EARTH (Jvl narasimha rao)
Now, for all the times I've heard the odious term "mother earth"...you...
January 27th, 2011 00:24 - Stopping my heart. (Lifewellspoken)
Do you mean the heavenly object or the candy bar? I prefer snickers,...
January 27th, 2011 00:01 - A BOON AND A BANE !!! (Nikhilps)
Your image is very interesting and fitting. Fascinating, rather...
January 26th, 2011 23:43 - Star (Belinda AMeharry)
Very sweet and very nicely written. It is as gentle and sweetly simple as...
January 26th, 2011 22:47 - Sweet Torture (Marius)
Alas...it is so bittersweet. You've excellently expressed the heart...
January 26th, 2011 22:43 - Hallucinate (Hidan)
Fascinating! Beautiful. The title captured it all so perfectly. Wow. ...
January 26th, 2011 22:37 - Life At Last.. (Kelseyroy)
Beautiful. I love how you expressed it. You built up to it with your...
January 26th, 2011 22:33 - A Final Dream (John)
Aw. It is so sweet...bittersweet. And it seems a familiar scene....I...
January 26th, 2011 22:23 - Inside me is inside you. (Lifewellspoken)
The image is fascinating. The poem itself is sweet, and so touchingly...
January 26th, 2011 20:59 - Metamorphosis (Marius)
Wow. Makes me smile. Sarah is lucky. This is a very sweet story. I...
January 26th, 2011 20:45 - If i could only (Happy feet)
Wow. This is VERY sweet! The love you express in it is so...
January 26th, 2011 20:39 - Desire (StormyDay)
Oooh. I think it's like the songs I don' t listen to....I 'spect you...
January 26th, 2011 19:53 - No Answer (Lonelykaren)
It is excellently expressed...except that you seem to bounce from one...
January 26th, 2011 19:47 - The Passing Fire in the Sky (Jlmoreno9929)
Fascinating...curious. What is the passing fire in the sky representing? ...
January 26th, 2011 00:40 - Crushing On You (Alexandre Landsley)
Sweet. The image is so perfect! This is rather...
January 26th, 2011 00:22 - Death (JoshuaConklin)
Wow. You've excellently depicted the feelings, sentiments, condition. ...
January 26th, 2011 00:17 - confused (Tamm13)
Interesting. You've portrayed the confusion very well. Who is the "you"? ...
January 26th, 2011 00:11 - pain (Boricuamami222)
Again, you've excellently depicted the misery and hopelessness at all the...
January 26th, 2011 00:07 - Birth (Gerrylegister)
Fascinating....you've touched on and depicted this existence, including...
January 26th, 2011 00:04 - coldness (Boricuamami222)
It is VERY sad.....horribly so. You excellently depicted the miserable...
January 25th, 2011 23:58 - Catching up (child’s play) (Jazmine zillmer)
Fascinating.....and a perceptive perspective on growing up, seems to...
January 25th, 2011 23:50 - FOR ANYTHING (Satishverma)
Weird, Intriguing poetic description of......life?.....??
January 25th, 2011 23:38 - The day you left (Happy feet)
Yikes! She was only 18! It is a very beautiful, tender and sweet tribute...
January 25th, 2011 23:33 - lies (Skyerain)
Wow. Creepy! It begins as if tenderly promising but ends almost...
January 25th, 2011 20:32 - True Love (JoshuaConklin)
That is very sweet she is with you and can be a comfort and help to you...
January 25th, 2011 09:11 - Do not bury me (Hidan)
Even though you finish gracefully as you say, on the battlefield, shall...
January 25th, 2011 09:07 - Can You? (StormyDay)
Hmm. La, and now I shall sound stupid...what is being experienced? For I...
January 24th, 2011 16:37 - Superhero (Alexandre Landsley)
Sweet! You so aptly described the effect of your love for her! ...
January 24th, 2011 13:53 - True friendship. (Lifewellspoken)
Very interesting assessment and contemplation. Fascinating. The puppies...
January 24th, 2011 13:41 - You Are (Marius)
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic love poem! And yet she is...
January 24th, 2011 12:57 - no hope (Boricuamami222)
If it is merely a poem....excellent! The title is so fitting for the...
January 24th, 2011 00:48 - Demons and Angels of Us (Jazmine zillmer)
Well, actually, seeing your title included the demons, I think the...
January 23rd, 2011 18:44 - I am sorry (Hidan)
It is very nicely written, too. If I may dare make a suggestion, it seems...
January 23rd, 2011 18:19 - Forgive Me (Marius)
Wow. You write well! I love this! It's excellent and so beautiful! I...
January 23rd, 2011 18:11 - my regret (Melodik46)
Excellent!!!!! The end-ryming is pleasant and it flows fairly well...
January 23rd, 2011 17:46 - Goodbye (Alexandre Landsley)
Wow. Delightfully sweet and romantic! And the image is so cute! I love...
January 23rd, 2011 13:42 - Colors of love (Exquiste1)
Very fascinating perspective of friendship in light of and with thus an...
January 22nd, 2011 23:00 - If You Did Not Exist (Alexandre Landsley)
Delightful. It's romantically sweet. I love how you expressed the...
January 22nd, 2011 22:49 - A Sad Conclusion (SWD1992)
Your end-rhyming is excellent and your rhythm fairly good as well. By...
January 22nd, 2011 12:25 - Heaven is a butter star (Gerrylegister)
Fascinating, very....especially considered in light of your...
January 22nd, 2011 11:34 - JUST WORDS (Nexuscjt)
I love the title....sufficiently reminiscent of the Boyzone song "Words"...
January 22nd, 2011 11:21 - This is life :( (Lulu)
It is so cute how you express it, almost amusing, and yet your miserably...
January 21st, 2011 22:12 - love u (Lulu)
For your FIRST poem I think it is very good! Short and sweet and so...
January 21st, 2011 22:03 - school days (Lulu)
I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful...
January 21st, 2011 21:57 - lonely i feel (Aladrond)
Very fascinating and intriguing story. Concluding with "Together we...
January 21st, 2011 21:23 - My Breakup (Happy feet)
Fascinating, intriguing, sad.....in the miserable age-old theme of...
January 21st, 2011 16:15 - ONCE WHEN I SAW YOU.... (Nikhilps)
Hey! 14 lines....great! Now you need to make it iambic...
January 21st, 2011 16:00 - Not Again!! (Lonelykaren)
You and the majority of us? So very much the same...when we thought we...
January 21st, 2011 15:18 - Stay (StormyDay)
Ya, it reminded me of some of Dido's music as well as a Sugerland(?) song....
January 21st, 2011 15:04 - The Eternity Urge (Qudrat)
A fascinating ecstasy over whom? Vaguely almost reminiscent of RN...
January 21st, 2011 14:51 - I miss you Paul (Vanessa.ramsey)
And tasting the loss so intensely you have poignantly presented it,...
January 21st, 2011 09:56 - BACK IN THE CORNER (SOLO)
Wow. Poignant. Excellent! I loved it, but it made me almost want to...
January 20th, 2011 23:14 - DANCING ON LEASH (Satishverma)
As usual, a fascinating and intriguing foray into metaphors...
January 20th, 2011 22:15
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