Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- Pain (Zojinjo)
Hmmm. I dunno. Fascinating. Thanks for this interesting thought and...
February 19th, 2011 21:50 - Footsprints (Lifewellspoken)
I love the image, and it is so perfect too.....wow, but you can write...
February 17th, 2011 11:02 - My future knowing (Lifewellspoken)
Um...please, forgive me for laughing...but the entire piece is intriguing,...
February 17th, 2011 10:58 - I Have Decided (Marius)
Whoa! It got rather erotic in the second stanza. Sweet....I love the...
February 17th, 2011 00:42 - when we broke up (Happy feet)
Hmmm. Excellent depiction of heartbreak, especially in the case of deceit...
February 17th, 2011 00:39 - Hitting the Rapids (StormyDay)
Excellent! You've sweetly depicted the determination of growing true...
February 17th, 2011 00:37 - stay (Erin wynette)
Aw, this is very sad, especially after your sweet poems of blooming...
February 17th, 2011 00:34 - Winter Beauty (JayFace21)
Excellent! I could readily visualize it, thanks to your...
February 17th, 2011 00:31 - Share it wide (Dolphine29)
And the image is so tender, sweet, and, thanks to your "author's comment"...
February 17th, 2011 00:21 - I AM AN INCOMPARABLE QUEEN (Jvl narasimha rao)
Very interesting and rather erotic....she is very pretty and quite...
February 16th, 2011 19:55 - MY LOVE!!! (Sadia Ismail)
Aw, I like this! It is such a lovely tribute to your mother...
February 16th, 2011 19:53 - In Search of A pen (Sudarshan)
Very cute, curious story! Silly hen! But what is the significance in the...
February 16th, 2011 19:46 - WIN dow (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, but the image is almost breathtaking and so delightful, and what...
February 15th, 2011 14:11 - Happy Home (Dboy)
Aw, paired with your video, it is so poignant and heartrending. She is...
February 15th, 2011 00:02 - Memories (Gopinath)
Bittersweet....sorrowful with a tinge of light. Good depiction of...
February 14th, 2011 23:49 - MY GUARDIAN ANGEL (Euphorianmuse)
Aw....what a tender tribute to your beloved sweetheart! You painted the...
February 14th, 2011 23:48 - rain (Maryam Altaf)
Beautiful tribute/ode to rain and it's refreshing enjoyment and influence....
February 14th, 2011 23:43 - NATURE'S GREATNESS (Sudarshan)
I love the image you paired with this little discussion on "nature"...it...
February 14th, 2011 23:41 - PLANTS (Sudarshan)
Thank you very much for this instructive lesson on plants and their...
February 14th, 2011 23:36 - The Golden Spell (SauravRHS)
It seems to wee ignorant me, a very nice tribute to your suffering beloved...
February 14th, 2011 23:32 - Happy St. Valentine (Alexandre Landsley)
Aw. I love it! It's a delightfully sweet valentine! Makes me smile. ...
February 14th, 2011 23:23 - I AM A PURE VIRGIN (Jvl narasimha rao)
Frankly, you remind me of your denunciation of Valentines' Day as an...
February 14th, 2011 23:18 - Valentine\'s Day (Becca)
Wow. What a bittersweet tribute to this sweetheart holiday of Valentine's...
February 14th, 2011 23:12 - Sibling Rivalry (StormyDay)
Haiku...the way to succinctly state so much. Fascinating perspective on...
February 14th, 2011 23:04 - The Final Attack (Samantha)
Fascinating, and intriguing...welcome! Who is the "they"? Your "author's...
February 14th, 2011 22:55 - Devils' Group Home (Nair36)
Wow. Sounds "hellish." What is the point of such places if that is the...
February 14th, 2011 22:34 - Funny. (Lifewellspoken)
What's her name? Sounds very definitely composed to some specific special...
February 14th, 2011 22:26 - Drowning (Marius)
Oooh. I like it. You are losing yourself, drowning in love, as it were,...
February 13th, 2011 20:05 - Love’s Prisoner (Marius)
Beautiful and fascinating....love's prisoner...impressive. I like all you...
February 13th, 2011 20:01 - The Dead beneath (Zojinjo)
Hmmm. Eerie scene and contemplation. Do the dead come back by devilish...
February 13th, 2011 19:35 - What a poet is (Jvl narasimha rao)
A beautiful, lofty, idealistic depiction of the poet, which if 'twere...
February 13th, 2011 11:51 - the one (Erin wynette)
Sweet....I quite enjoyed your "author comment" offering further insight on...
February 12th, 2011 23:48 - hold tight (Erin wynette)
Made me smile....how sweet! I quite enjoyed his poem for you, his...
February 12th, 2011 23:43 - GETTTING UP LATE (Sudarshan)
Great! I loved it! Made me think a moment and then laugh! Excellent! ...
February 12th, 2011 22:44 - ODE TO MY MOTHER (Sudarshan)
Excellent!!!! What a beautiful, tender, rather comprehensive and...
February 12th, 2011 22:40 - ODE TO MY FATHER (Sudarshan)
Excellent! This ode is a delightful, beautiful tribute to your dear...
February 12th, 2011 22:36 - POLITICS IN DEMOCRACY (Jvl narasimha rao)
Delightful! This is a rather amusing tribute to an only too familiar...
February 12th, 2011 16:21 - THE QUEEN OF ALL SPEAKERS (Jvl narasimha rao)
Lovely! Beautiful tribute to my mother tongue, which interestingly...
February 12th, 2011 16:15 - Always You (Emi)
Sweet....I LOVE the conclusion! This is beautifully, sweetly romantic,...
February 12th, 2011 16:00 - Little Black Shoe (Emi)
Delightful ode to that precious little black pair of shoes! Your author's...
February 12th, 2011 15:57 - Last Pieces (Emi)
Fascinating, with a beautifully sweet conclusion. How, though, if brought...
February 12th, 2011 15:51 - The Perfect Irony (SWD1992)
This is beautiful. I love how you drew the scene of falling in love with...
February 12th, 2011 15:42 - LOVE YOU (Euphorianmuse)
While rather long, the story was well told. You appear to have perhaps a...
February 12th, 2011 15:37 - my sweetest dream (Rajat mahaych)
Ah, I love your sweetest dream! And you expressed it so beautifully with...
February 12th, 2011 15:26 - Spirit Fierce! (BattleChrist)
Rather nasty, yet almost fittingly devilish? If we will stand by...
February 12th, 2011 15:22 - Inquisition (BattleChrist)
Hmmm. If reminiscent of other experiences in life, which provoke such...
February 12th, 2011 15:04 - ~~Irksome Exams!!~~ (Rajat)
Ugh....very well expressed...you remind me again of it. And the image is...
February 12th, 2011 14:50 - ~~Never leave me. . .~~ (Rajat)
Wow. It is a beautiful description of love and the desire for true...
February 12th, 2011 14:45 - I Can See (Lonelykaren)
Didn't your teacher tell you what you were doing wrong and what you needed...
February 12th, 2011 14:27 - Fall Out (StormyDay)
Oh, lalala. It is very sad, and so perfectly descriptive of falling out...
February 12th, 2011 14:20 - Falling For You (Alexandre Landsley)
Aw, fascinating and very sweet. The images, by similes and metaphors were...
February 12th, 2011 14:16 - Swan Song (Emi)
Wow. Impressive....this is excellent. I love how you presented it as a...
February 12th, 2011 14:04 - Siren (Of lust and invited consequence) (Bourbonjon)
Excellently depicted, and beautifully done....the enticement and allure of...
February 12th, 2011 13:59 - THE COMPETITION (Sudarshan)
Excellently and beautifully depicted! Your conclusion was perfect! I...
February 12th, 2011 13:00 - HAPPINESS (Sudarshan)
It's an interesting discussion of happiness, especially concluding as you...
February 12th, 2011 12:32 - How to cook pizza??? (Maryam Altaf)
So....did the pizza taste good after it came out of the oven? Delightful...
February 12th, 2011 12:28 - My new video on Youtube (Lifewellspoken)
The dawgie is adorable...and the poem fascinating....rather cleverly done,...
February 10th, 2011 13:36 - Relationships (Patriots)
Fascinating....realistic look at nonbinding relationships....your...
February 8th, 2011 22:51 - A Smile (Cora Virginia Warner)
Aw...too sweet! I love your smiling picture depicting only too perfectly...
February 8th, 2011 22:45 - addicted (Erin wynette)
Wonderful! I am very happy for you two! This is a delightful and...
February 8th, 2011 22:42 - at night (Breexbaby)
Your usage of end-rhyming is pleasant. The scenario you presented is a...
February 8th, 2011 22:39 - Why do we dream? (Dolphine29)
Your image is very nicely fitting. As I am something of an incurable...
February 8th, 2011 22:30 - Shy (StormyDay)
Aw, so perfectly expressed! The image is cute and fitting, and the...
February 8th, 2011 22:17 - Snow (StormyDay)
Beautifully done, and delightful itself! I love the image you paired with...
February 8th, 2011 22:14 - Despair (Ashley)
Very well-written, depicting rather poignantly the very real despair and...
February 8th, 2011 21:24 - Shhhhhh it's a secret. (Lifewellspoken)
La, Jase, but you do write such romantic pieces...She reads and applauds...
February 8th, 2011 18:49 - Surfacing Past (BattleChrist)
I would love to hear it set to music....for even without lyrics, music is...
February 8th, 2011 18:44 - Our Garden (Emi)
Very beautiful! What a lovely depiction of your romantic love, and of...
February 8th, 2011 18:19 - ~~Saving the planet~~ (Rajat)
Beautifully done! Your end-rhyming is very good, and the rythm fairly...
February 8th, 2011 15:43 - my last wish (Rajat mahaych)
Beautiful, fascinating, sweet. Your author's comment was complementary,...
February 8th, 2011 15:23 - THE HIDDEN FEELINGS (Tamm13)
Aw, very sweet, rather bittersweet, and delightfully expressed. You've...
February 8th, 2011 15:13 - THE WORLD OF TELEVISION THROUGH MY EYES (Sudarshan)
Fun....interesting, enjoyable expression of the television's significance....
February 8th, 2011 15:05 - Who you are (Marius)
Wow. Marvelous the enticing description you've given to express your...
February 8th, 2011 15:00 - If Colour Matters Not (Leonard Dabydeen)
Very intriguing and fascinating....I stupidly am struggling to understand...
February 8th, 2011 14:47 - Thoughts on a Girls Self Portrait (Dbremner)
The portrait is an image momentarily(?) indelibly etched in your mind's...
February 7th, 2011 18:02 - Sunday Gathering (Dbremner)
Excellently written....are you genuinely expressing your beliefs? While...
February 6th, 2011 22:00 - awake...... (Tshi-tshi)
Horrendous. You've depicted it rather too graphically....it is awful. I...
February 6th, 2011 21:24 - Hope! (Sadia Ismail)
The image is so perfect...is it for real? Ya, we need hope to keep going...
February 6th, 2011 21:15 - The Eternal Time (Rajat)
The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem...
February 6th, 2011 21:05 - Please come (Hidan)
Aw, simple and rather sweet. Your end-rhyming was nice, and your...
February 6th, 2011 20:35 - Make Up Your Mind (Emi)
Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How...
February 6th, 2011 20:32 - The Girl who Boasted (Sudarshan)
Jolly good funny! I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating, the first half/three...
February 6th, 2011 20:09 - Congruence (Marius)
Ah, so delightfully romantic! I hope she likes it. Such an alluring,...
February 6th, 2011 18:40 - Take My Heart (Alexandre Landsley)
Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't...
February 6th, 2011 18:33 - A Black Place (DOGG)
If I dare guess, will you tell me the answer? Is it the...
February 6th, 2011 18:28 - my life (Erin wynette)
"....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do...
February 6th, 2011 18:25 - Drained (Erin wynette)
Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in...
February 6th, 2011 18:19 - money (Leroyblackwoodjnr)
Ah, excellent reminder! And too, God's Word says truly "the love of money...
February 5th, 2011 23:00 - A PLEA TO GOD (Jvl narasimha rao)
Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you...
February 5th, 2011 22:46 - Cherry and Valentine (Hidan)
Well-written, bittersweet and simplistic yet with such feeling....I am...
February 5th, 2011 22:40 - The Republic Day Comes (Sudarshan)
It's a beautiful tribute to your Republic Day....I especially loved the...
February 5th, 2011 22:36 - mommy (Bluesyzygy)
Too sweet....a delightful tribute to our precious, inestimable darling...
February 5th, 2011 16:26 - My Own Reflection (Dbremner)
Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the...
February 5th, 2011 16:14 - Forbidden Love (Marius)
Intriguing, fascinating, enticing, provocative,....rather fearful in that...
February 5th, 2011 12:20 - My guardian angel (Rajat)
Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is...
February 5th, 2011 12:14 - total passion. (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, I get the luxury of the first look-see at this passionate avowal of...
February 4th, 2011 18:00 - The Offer (Marius)
Aw. This is soo good...and still 10/9 days 'til the lover's holiday of...
February 4th, 2011 17:45 - Saint-Malo - A Tribute (Dbremner)
Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this...
February 4th, 2011 17:40 - Space (Monsters)
Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with...
February 4th, 2011 14:35 - The Story of a depressed kid (DOGG)
Aw. Short and bittersweet. Excellent!
February 4th, 2011 14:30
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