Comments on community poems by NinjaGirl
- Devil deeds angel thoughts (Sorenbarrett)
You\'re not at fault thinking a bad thought! But choosing to continue to...
May 5th, 2025 16:33 - Defiant by Design (Tristan Robert Lange)
New song rec: \"Outcast\" by NF !
May 5th, 2025 16:31 - Cross-Examination (Tristan Robert Lange)
It would top off the picture well to have a scale on the desk! It only...
May 5th, 2025 16:28 - When Falling isn\'t Final (Salvia.S)
A beautiful message...and has me thinking of the water cycle. Plants need...
May 5th, 2025 16:25 - murder (Tristan Robert Lange)
I love settings like this...something about a rainy autumn day is so...
May 5th, 2025 16:25 - A Little Mad (Tristan Robert Lange)
\"Compassion has an expiration date.\" What a line! It\'s all too...
May 5th, 2025 16:22 - ANGELS WEEP (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
There\'s a quote \"for those who fought for it, freedom has a flavor the...
April 14th, 2025 11:07 - The Sparrow\'s Blessing (Gray0328)
A sign or messenger from Heaven perhaps. Such a beautiful poem, and your...
April 14th, 2025 11:06 - Differences (Sorenbarrett)
\"We don\'t make love, we feel it\" what a beautiful stanza that follows....
April 14th, 2025 11:05 - Should Sleep Spare (Tristan Robert Lange)
Sleep is that cheeky thing that will grasp your wrist tight during the day...
April 14th, 2025 11:04 - Abuse (Tony36)
I would favorite it because it\'s a true message, but it feels wrong to...
April 14th, 2025 11:03 - Passing on (Sorenbarrett)
Reminds me of Russian Roulette at the end there. I see a gambler, trying...
April 13th, 2025 15:20 - Gallows (Tony36)
Unnerving, and oddly reassuring.
April 13th, 2025 15:15 - Words (Tristan Robert Lange)
Words cannot be weighed in kilograms, pounds, or stones, but they can be...
April 13th, 2025 15:14 - Howling Wolf (RSM0812)
Beautiful connection to nature, easy favorite!
April 13th, 2025 15:11 - Leave Little Room (Tristan Robert Lange)
It\'s easier to tell people to hope than to find some ourselves... you...
April 9th, 2025 14:27 - Why Is Nine Upside Down? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Oh, my friend, you aren\'t ready for this... the letters b, p, d, and q,...
April 9th, 2025 14:26 - I\'m Sorry (Tony36)
Maybe a hand wouldn\'t be laid on the kids, but little eyes can easily be...
April 9th, 2025 14:22 - Viscosity (Tristan Robert Lange)
Even blood needs a little water to write better
April 9th, 2025 14:20 - Serpentine Seduction (Tristan Robert Lange)
I love a good alliteration poem!
April 9th, 2025 14:18 - The Pecking (Tristan Robert Lange)
Rustic feel to it...as it should be, lovely poem
April 9th, 2025 14:16 - little me (Xqw)
little me didn\'t worry so much...I miss those days!
April 9th, 2025 14:14 - Blind (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ah, but you must wonder, friend, did you see the knife and ignore it...
April 9th, 2025 14:12 - Unknot the not (Sorenbarrett)
I don\'t know that I entirely understand the title\'s relation to the...
April 9th, 2025 14:11 - You will argue (Sorenbarrett)
It\'s difficult because what\'s right and what\'s wrong? What justifies...
April 9th, 2025 14:10 - What the Hell? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Profound and so frequent! People only take what they want to hear...
April 2nd, 2025 09:28 - His guitar (Tony36)
What a lovely scene!
April 2nd, 2025 09:19 - Bitter Medicine (Garth Rakumakoe)
It\'s bitter, but is it really a remedy?
April 2nd, 2025 09:13 - Painted (Maplespal)
I like this poem, let our thoughts express themselves!
April 2nd, 2025 09:06 - Thoughts (Sorenbarrett)
We\'ve all had the feeling! Very relatable write!
April 2nd, 2025 09:06 - Opioid (Tristan Robert Lange)
The funny thing is the opioid doesn\'t solve the problem...it just puts it...
April 1st, 2025 21:38 - Broken toys (Sorenbarrett)
Something we all yearn for ever so deeply...
April 1st, 2025 21:27 - An Abrupt Visitor (Tristan Robert Lange)
I knew it was Death from the beginning, but what beautiful description. ...
March 31st, 2025 12:27 - 500,000 (Tony36)
\"For those who fought for it, freedom has a flavor the protected will...
March 31st, 2025 12:22 - Fallen sand (Sorenbarrett)
So beautiful; a story of love and life...it really does give a sense of...
March 31st, 2025 12:20 - Nightshade (Tristan Robert Lange)
The rhyme makes my soul happy...a stark contrast to the voice my head read...
March 31st, 2025 12:18 - Lines on the floor (Sorenbarrett)
\"but not before it leaves marks on the floor\" what a beautiful closing...
March 29th, 2025 14:34 - Enemy (Tristan Robert Lange)
Sometimes, often even, death is more welcoming than those who claim to...
March 28th, 2025 20:48 - Post-Scientific Method (Tristan Robert Lange)
Question Everything...
March 28th, 2025 20:47 - Help (Hey!)
Oh my, don\'t worry you\'re going to be alright I\'ve got you
March 9th, 2025 22:00 - Lent failed! (Orchidee)
I thought maybe I\'d participate in lent (I\'ve never done it before) and...
March 7th, 2025 12:21 - Blinded by the light (Sorenbarrett)
\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!
March 6th, 2025 13:21 - From the start to the end (Kez)
So beautiful and super sweet
March 6th, 2025 13:21 - that girl (Sheta)
Hahaha! I love it
March 6th, 2025 13:18 - A Dream of Despair (Whats write for me)
If they aren\'t willing to turn to Him, God would rather take his servants...
March 5th, 2025 12:44 - I may say I\'m ok (Tony36)
That\'s when you can express your \"not ok\"s in poetry...then it doesn\'t...
March 5th, 2025 12:44 - Nuts (Sorenbarrett)
You\'ve got to have some sort of adventure in life, right? I love this,...
March 5th, 2025 12:43 - ill fight (Sheta)
Don\'t ever stop fighting
March 4th, 2025 13:02 - Webs of words (Sorenbarrett)
Absolutely beautiful! A true work of art
March 4th, 2025 13:01 - Beauty of the Book (Whats write for me)
I wonder if it is really Eve who ate the apple, why is it called \"Adam\'s...
March 4th, 2025 12:59 - Poetry is my way to express myself (Tony36)
Yes
March 4th, 2025 12:57 - My love, My Pulse (RSM0812)
Beautifully written!
March 4th, 2025 12:57 - Bed Dread (Tristan Robert Lange)
I love the rhyme aspect, and also your personal story that really shines...
March 4th, 2025 12:57 - Silently (BlessedbyGod)
I love the picture, it\'s like bitter cup symbolism. And the line \"fate...
March 3rd, 2025 13:23 - Maybe if... (Kez)
Ooh, this is good! I love the shape, the rhyme, easy favorite!
March 3rd, 2025 13:22 - Do you know? (Sorenbarrett)
Absolutely incredible, I love everything about this poem! Very thought...
March 3rd, 2025 13:21 - Your Voice (Tony36)
Will do! Love this!
March 3rd, 2025 13:20 - Swinger\'s Springtime Surprise (Tristan Robert Lange)
Always stunning imagery, what a beautiful write and concept.
March 3rd, 2025 13:19 - Arguing And Animosity (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
If they keep us divided, we won\'t fight against the real problem, we\'ll...
February 27th, 2025 12:20 - It doesn\'t matter anymore (Sorenbarrett)
And time continues to pass...until we do. But one day it will be...
February 27th, 2025 10:34 - You (Tony36)
It would be wrong to say we were the strong ones when so many others...
February 27th, 2025 10:33 - sitting at the café (Tristan Robert Lange)
I love a good cozy cafe, sometimes being alone is refreshing. I like...
February 27th, 2025 10:33 - Sadness (Sheta)
Life\'s difficult, but you are more difficult...be the bigger problem than...
February 27th, 2025 10:32 - In the future to come???????? (Kez)
The idea of a future, something different, an adventure even, is so...
February 27th, 2025 10:31 - Separation guilt (Shellsea)
This reminds me of my own poem I wrote yesterday; goodbyes can be both...
February 26th, 2025 19:02 - Save The Children (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You know, (get ready for my conspiracy theory rant), I\'m convinced the...
February 26th, 2025 19:01 - Happiness & Joy (𓆩Mase𓆪)
Very true, nicely said! And cool animation with your profile!
February 26th, 2025 18:57 - Pages not written (Sorenbarrett)
There\'s so much unsaid, that should have been said
February 26th, 2025 12:51 - Unbelievable (Tristan Robert Lange)
Your rabbit hole sure is different than in the story
February 26th, 2025 12:50 - Where to go (Shellsea)
You\'ll never know until you leap into it! And welcome to mps!
February 25th, 2025 21:14 - The Lies (Poetic Licence)
This is a good one!!
February 25th, 2025 20:35 - VooDoo\'s Grasp (Lil_Bit0912)
This is cool! The idea of Voodoo dolls is pretty insane, I like this...
February 25th, 2025 20:30 - Acceptance (Lorenz)
I love this idea: that acceptance sets us free. It\'s been a concept...
February 25th, 2025 20:18 - when you\'re nobody (Sheta)
When you\'re a nobody, you search for yourself within somebody, to only...
February 25th, 2025 20:13 - The birth of hope. (Debbie)
This is beautiful, hope isn\'t something we can cling onto, it\'s...
February 25th, 2025 20:07 - No matter (Hey!)
Everyone is always going to be against you, against us. It\'s up to us;...
February 25th, 2025 20:06 - True story (to be or not to be) (Sorenbarrett)
Op!
February 25th, 2025 13:03 - Dark Age Descended (Tristan Robert Lange)
The shape is beautiful, I can tell a lot of time was put into this and it...
February 25th, 2025 13:02 - Pontiac (Tristan Robert Lange)
interesting history, I love the format as well
February 24th, 2025 19:26 - Flammable (Mutley Ravishes)
Yes, it is, beautiful write
February 24th, 2025 19:16 - The Echos of the past (Hey!)
Truly a beautiful write, trauma can stain even our positive memories.
February 23rd, 2025 20:28 - Share with me (Tony36)
Then this way, we don\'t need to imagine walking in someone else\'s shoes.
February 23rd, 2025 15:29 - Night of dream dust (Sorenbarrett)
I love this one!
February 23rd, 2025 15:28 - Dunk Tank (Tristan Robert Lange)
I don\'t know if you\'ve seen this, but if not it\'s worth the watch!...
February 23rd, 2025 15:27 - there is still (Sheta)
Love is strange that way, isn\'t it!
February 22nd, 2025 19:41 - Reeling one in (Sorenbarrett)
I think you have a good enough fish trap for us!
February 22nd, 2025 19:40 - Peace (Tony36)
It\'s difficult for the prideful...
February 22nd, 2025 19:39 - Deep Freeze Daze (Tristan Robert Lange)
I like this format!
February 22nd, 2025 19:38 - Flies (Sorenbarrett)
I hate flies! Some people know what\'s not theirs but chose to continue...
February 21st, 2025 12:21 - My Sister\'s Shadow (Whats write for me)
This is so beautiful! I hope you share it with her!
February 21st, 2025 12:18 - The Cult (Tristan Robert Lange)
Sounds very familiar...oddly familiar...
February 21st, 2025 12:17 - Divine waste (Sorenbarrett)
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23 - Not to be confused (Sorenbarrett)
This is lovely, passion only exists for a temporary time, I find. But...
February 17th, 2025 19:39 - Sixes (Tristan Robert Lange)
Thought-filled social commentary, I find this all too true, beautifully...
February 17th, 2025 19:29 - My Revenge (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
It has taken me quite a while to realize that revenge isn\'t the solution,...
February 17th, 2025 19:28 - All loss (Sorenbarrett)
Wow, that first line...
February 14th, 2025 10:46 - ANXIETY (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very relatable, well said!
February 14th, 2025 10:44 - Grieving You (Teardrop)
Oh love, this is beautiful and I can tell you miss him so much.
February 13th, 2025 09:47 - Yes I\'m So Depressed (Anthony Hanible)
So felt...I often feel like I\'m trapped in my body, sucked into the way...
February 13th, 2025 09:35 - The Dark Kept One (My Boy Ryngkhlem)
The way you write is so lovely! I feel a lot of longing in this poem, and...
February 13th, 2025 09:33
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