Comments on community poems by NinjaGirl

• Night spells (Sorenbarrett) I would definitely agree with the \"borrower,\" sense. It\'s the idea...
  September 7th, 2025 16:52
• Witness to pain (Nicole Pritchard) The idea of being there with someone, supporting them through thick and...
  September 7th, 2025 16:40
• Lost Paradise (RSM0812) I like this depiction of humanity and Eve from the garden. Nicely said!
  September 7th, 2025 16:39
• God Was There (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I hope to get better at seeing it. Lovely poem!
  September 7th, 2025 16:38
• My Old Ghost. (Goldfinch60) I really like this! It made me smile for one, but on the other hand it\'s...
  September 5th, 2025 14:24
• Forever Old (RSM0812) In time, in time, we will know the secrets of life! Beautiful poem!
  September 5th, 2025 14:23
• Invisible Existence (Zhangyuyouyu) I often enjoy my life in invisibility, though it does sometimes get...
  September 5th, 2025 14:22
• Styles (Sorenbarrett) \"Beauty goes naked\" I was NOT expecting that! I\'d say I\'m comfort...
  September 5th, 2025 14:21
• Falling, Failing (Tristan Robert Lange) This is so lovely. I find it difficult to separate music from...
  September 5th, 2025 14:20
• Quiet (Lorna) It\'s so difficult to sit in silence and to sit still, but it\'s truly...
  September 5th, 2025 14:17
• The Call of The Calling (Rebellion_in_sanity) The call comes but will we ever be ready? Will we be ready for the next? ...
  September 5th, 2025 14:17
• Pretender (Tooway) Guilt and impostor-syndrome are so real, it\'s difficult to remember to...
  September 5th, 2025 14:16
• my younger day (Jim56) Childhood was such a wonderful and magical time. This is a lovely poem...
  September 5th, 2025 14:15
• Frozen Time (RSM0812) It\'s always time that\'s our savior and our captor. This is a beautiful...
  September 4th, 2025 11:09
• Fear myths of the unknown (Sorenbarrett) We crave safety so much that we don\'t realize what we\'re sacrificing to...
  September 4th, 2025 11:08
• Shower Tears (Anthony Hanible) I love this! It\'s so relatable, nobody can see you cry if you have water...
  September 4th, 2025 11:06
• To Death I Am Bound (Tristan Robert Lange) Death is so imminent, and we know its destiny. That often either brings...
  September 4th, 2025 11:04
• Read till your eyes bleed (Sorenbarrett) This is so well-written, and an interesting commentary. I think humans...
  September 3rd, 2025 12:13
• when tears fall (Jim56) My mother always had a theory that if you didn\'t cry enough times, or if...
  September 3rd, 2025 12:11
• Bird\'s Eye View (Tristan Robert Lange) Seems like a good spot for inspiration, love it!
  September 3rd, 2025 12:10
• Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett) It\'s so interesting because it is all made from nature if you consider...
  September 2nd, 2025 14:52
• The Obscuration of Salvation (Tristan Robert Lange) Nature is such great inspiration! Did you mean to write \"dsstardly\"? ...
  September 2nd, 2025 14:50
• Unhiding (Aurora) I really like the structure of this poem: the repetition or \"once\" vs...
  September 2nd, 2025 14:47
• Too long (Sorenbarrett) This is sad and tragic...so beautifully written with a lovely metaphor.
  September 1st, 2025 11:21
• Fear of Falling (Neville) We\'ll either fall or fly, might as well dance during the process!
  September 1st, 2025 11:20
• Unknown (Tristan Robert Lange) \"Untitled\" still means the noun was known, something, some quality about...
  September 1st, 2025 11:19
• What Actually Holds Sway (Tristan Robert Lange) I wonder how much liberty there is in death
  August 31st, 2025 15:16
• what could possibly happen? (Dn) Is it best to run or hide? Are we escaping ourselves or others? I love...
  August 31st, 2025 15:08
• Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange) Hahaha! Sounds like you had quite the experience!
  August 30th, 2025 19:57
• Embers (Sorenbarrett) Such a beautiful reflection, but also haunting touching on what may pass...
  August 30th, 2025 19:56
• Painkiller (Bird In Red) This is so beautiful, heartbreaking and wrenching but unbelievably lovely
  August 30th, 2025 19:51
• The Pain (Anthony Hanible) It makes us do things, say things we never would. Pain is so so...
  August 30th, 2025 19:50
• Time standing Still (RSM0812) It\'s comforting to have a constant in a world full of change. A lot of...
  August 30th, 2025 19:46
• to be content is to be happy (MR.apocalypse) Yes! Lower expectations protect the heart indeed, but joy is then harder...
  August 28th, 2025 23:15
• Americahasmoregunsthanpeople. (Aa Harvey) People only want guns when they feel powerless and helpless, and powerless...
  August 28th, 2025 23:14
• And then it rained (Tom Dylan) I find this poem quite lovely!
  August 28th, 2025 23:12
• Words Cut Like A Knife (Sunshine777) What I find so piercing about words is that there\'s no proof. People...
  August 28th, 2025 23:12
• The Window (Tristan Robert Lange) But nobody heard the break on the edge of death. I like the poem, it\'s...
  August 28th, 2025 23:11
• Traps (Sorenbarrett) It\'s always the ones in the nicest suits with the sweetest smile
  August 24th, 2025 01:43
• Wind (Sorenbarrett) Is the wind satan\'s rage or God\'s righteous anger? I really like this...
  August 24th, 2025 01:42
• Seasons (Sorenbarrett) I love living in a place where I can experience all four seasons! It\'s...
  August 24th, 2025 01:41
• Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) Standing up for little you, always a good thing
  August 24th, 2025 01:41
• Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville) Making decent folk proud... I like that line, and beautiful poem
  August 24th, 2025 01:40
• Core (Tristan Robert Lange) Honest question: what do you mean erocore? I read it as \"oreo\" first,...
  August 24th, 2025 01:39
• Trapped. (Friendship) Reminds me of when people say to \"choose happiness,\" or \"happiness is...
  August 24th, 2025 01:36
• Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) I do find the expression interesting and I like your interpretation
  August 24th, 2025 01:34
• Innocent victims (NafisaSB) Hopeless is often wrapped in distractions...
  August 24th, 2025 01:32
• Impact (NafisaSB) You\'ll never know...maybe the person you walk by every morning likes...
  August 24th, 2025 01:30
• Mirrored pool of Hermes (Sorenbarrett) I don\'t know how to explain that I really like it...so there it is.
  August 24th, 2025 01:29
• The Open Door (Tristan Robert Lange) Certainly a truth, not that I should be surprised, your messages often...
  August 16th, 2025 15:00
• A CRY FOR HELP... (Cerry) There\'s so much comfort in a world we make up. One where we can control...
  August 14th, 2025 20:06
• Grandpa\'s Lesson (Gray0328) I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more...
  August 14th, 2025 20:04
• Sky vine (Sorenbarrett) I always do love nature in a story, I suppose it\'s what makes us human. ...
  August 14th, 2025 20:02
• The Unveiling (Tristan Robert Lange) The truth tastes bitter, but isn\'t it better? Lovely write!
  August 14th, 2025 20:02
• Demons (Kez) Honestly quite beautiful, broken love is more real than fake love.
  August 14th, 2025 20:00
• Broken (Tristan Robert Lange) Screaming from the roots of corruption... well-written, piercing, and true...
  August 11th, 2025 18:58
• Today (NafisaSB) Lovely writing, and thank you for the kind well-wishes
  August 11th, 2025 08:48
• Glimpses (Sorenbarrett) Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a...
  August 11th, 2025 08:45
• The Acceptable Ways to Die (Tristan Robert Lange) One could argue that murder is more socially accepted than suicide
  August 10th, 2025 14:26
• Hard Nope (Tristan Robert Lange) I liked the GIF, and you have quite lovely handwriting for having been...
  August 10th, 2025 14:22
• The Paradox of Living (Tristan Robert Lange) I find the first verse doesn\'t always need to happen. Though without...
  August 10th, 2025 14:21
• Clean (Tristan Robert Lange) Though I\'m not sure the original intention... I only say my own thoughts....
  August 10th, 2025 14:20
• Be Back Soon (Tristan Robert Lange) Lovely way to bid farewell, I wish you find a good bike... ;)
  August 10th, 2025 14:18
• Afraid to Love (Tristan Robert Lange) Music and poetry are so closely intertwined, beautifully done. I find it...
  August 10th, 2025 14:17
• Seven Lines to Burn (Tristan Robert Lange) The last two lines are particularly poignant...as for the backstory,...
  August 10th, 2025 14:14
• Left behind (Sorenbarrett) Right and wrong are perception to man, but God knows the sinner and the...
  August 10th, 2025 14:08
• Nothing anymore (Sorenbarrett) Too much new is being pumped into our systems...we forget the old history...
  August 10th, 2025 14:07
• Broken (Sorenbarrett) Weren\'t we once all so beautiful? So perfect before life\'s weather...
  August 10th, 2025 14:06
• Sand in a bottle (Sorenbarrett) \"We spend a lot of time crying over wasted time\" Hours may have been...
  August 10th, 2025 14:03
• Unknown greatness (Sorenbarrett) There are so many good things that are just never seen. Some of my best...
  May 21st, 2025 22:37
• To Be Continued (Salvia.S) I cannot wait to have such a love with someone!
  May 21st, 2025 22:27
• Fading Like the Rain (Salvia.S) Rain cleanses my soul in a way I didn\'t know possible. It\'s such a ...
  May 20th, 2025 22:49
• society (Corian Baek) So many of these lines: \"because without the wound what the hell were...
  May 19th, 2025 12:18
• Showgirl (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until...
  May 19th, 2025 12:12
• Floral memories (Sorenbarrett) It\'s lovely that scent has so much influence on our memory. And lovelier...
  May 19th, 2025 12:09
• Lies (BlessedbyGod) I like the thought that the devil minimizes our sin, then maximizes it. ...
  May 19th, 2025 12:08
• Old closet (Sorenbarrett) Memories so beautifully stored!
  May 18th, 2025 15:09
• Just a note (Tony36) Best of luck, I\'ll pray you\'re in good hands!
  May 18th, 2025 15:08
• What (Sorenbarrett) Uncertainty lurks...literally. You are safe for now as it retreats..
  May 13th, 2025 10:59
• Let peace ring (Tony36) One day those bells will be heard all over, I just know it
  May 13th, 2025 10:57
• The Carousel of Critics (Tristan Robert Lange) What an interesting poem! Such an interesting idea, using a carousel. I...
  May 13th, 2025 10:56
• Scars Like Fathers (Tristan Robert Lange) Pity for the perpetrator is not something I usually feel. When raised...
  May 12th, 2025 17:08
• Shorty (Sorenbarrett) Well done and well written!
  May 12th, 2025 17:04
• The old coffee shop (Tony36) And it will be the same, when those young are the new old.
  May 12th, 2025 16:48
• The Language of Rain (Rrodriguez) Rain is one of nature\'s most beautiful things I think
  May 12th, 2025 16:48
• I Hope The Moon Knows She\'s Beautiful (Akshadha_Joshi1310) This is lovely!
  May 12th, 2025 16:44
• Does It Matter? (Tristan Robert Lange) Haha!
  May 9th, 2025 10:45
• Because nothing hurts more than a \"Betrayal\" (Spring Sugar Bunny) Broken promises hurt, but betrayal from what they said they\'d never...
  May 9th, 2025 10:45
• Music and Poetry (Tony36) Music is just poetry without words, and poetry is just music without...
  May 6th, 2025 18:49
• The Laughing Matter (Tristan Robert Lange) A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I...
  May 6th, 2025 18:49
• I thought I knew (Sorenbarrett) People destroy what we never thought we\'d once appreciate. Thoughtful...
  May 6th, 2025 18:47
• existential dread (Corian Baek) \"But hunger makes them cruel\" what a raw line. This is amazing work.
  May 6th, 2025 18:46
• Smell (Salem) A change of scenery is all it takes sometimes!
  May 6th, 2025 18:45
• Vanguard (E.J. Waling) A good reflection! Makes me think of what can and will happen in the...
  May 6th, 2025 18:44
• The big guy\'s pissed (Hzugman) I imagine Him as broken-hearted...underneath all the anger is hurt and...
  May 6th, 2025 18:43
• I may be a Christian (Tony36) \"Christian is not the definition of what perfect means\"! Often, people...
  May 5th, 2025 16:40
• Blackness\' light (Sorenbarrett) Ah, the black square, this is the black square of poems!
  May 5th, 2025 16:38
• Muse\'s blood (Sorenbarrett) So satisfying! Perhaps the last poems are written in blood
  May 5th, 2025 16:37
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  May 5th, 2025 16:35
• Sacrifice, take the hit (Sorenbarrett) Sacrifice precedes success! Amazing message!
  May 5th, 2025 16:34