Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- THE DRESS (Michael Edwards)
Sorry Goldfinch - I used the word in a sort of metaphorical sense - it\'s...
March 16th, 2017 03:49 - The Rain Smelling Snow (Mountainman999)
I\'ve recently published a poem here which contains the line \'the rain...
March 16th, 2017 01:45 - Do you ever...? (Poems_)
Sounds like your half empty cup is now half full and ever may it be thus...
March 16th, 2017 01:42 - At Ryoanji (Will Hiltz)
Beautiful little piece - I do enjoy this form which can be quite as...
March 16th, 2017 00:31 - Late night thoughts !!!! (P.H.Rose)
Love is the only currency - great write PH
March 16th, 2017 00:29 - PLASTIC BOTTLES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
For our friends across the pond - take the Michael or to take the Mick is...
March 15th, 2017 13:46 - Up, Up And Away? (WriteBeLight)
Well I\'m a regular flier mainly throughout Europe but little experience...
March 15th, 2017 13:27 - As You Like It. (Goldfinch60)
Sorry couldn\'t resist that! This reflects the hopes we all bear and a...
March 15th, 2017 03:07 - Learning To Drive (Christina8)
It\'s a mums place to worry (and a dads - believe me) but its part of...
March 14th, 2017 14:48 - Darkness (Tony36)
Well you certainly help keep the lights on here on MPS - nice one Tony.
March 14th, 2017 13:39 - After Waiting For (Pintu Mahakul)
Warmest congratulations to you and a great piece of writing - we are...
March 14th, 2017 12:52 - on a winters day (Willyweed)
Ahhh - makes me think of my lovely wife - even though it\'s a warm spring...
March 14th, 2017 12:49 - Achilles\' Heal (WriteBeLight)
Being sensitive is something many of us learn to live with and I applaud...
March 14th, 2017 12:47 - Tribute To Vincent. (Fay Slimm.)
Super tribute and if I could only wield a brush the way he did. But at...
March 14th, 2017 12:44 - COLOR ME A RAINBOW (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Colourful and a good one at that - my favourite colour - as an artist...
March 14th, 2017 12:41 - She. (Goldfinch60)
I really do like this. You did so well to pick up on the inspiration....
March 14th, 2017 02:55 - The Pub and Its People (Jenny1959)
Could easily be the local in my village - great write.
March 13th, 2017 13:58 - Three in a Beer Garden (AuburnScribbler)
Brill - and now time for another round?
March 13th, 2017 13:56 - Blue song in Morning (MendedFences27)
Great stuff Phil - Part 2 tomorrow? Evil plan?
March 13th, 2017 13:54 - her name Elenore (Willyweed)
I bounced along reading this - it made me want to boo and hiss - poor...
March 13th, 2017 13:50 - Child 2 (Tony36)
You\'ve framed it so well Tony.
March 13th, 2017 12:06 - JUST DESSERTS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Steamed apple pud is top of the list for me too - but do enjoy my food....
March 13th, 2017 12:04 - Sun\'s Out (WriteBeLight)
Great stuff - just spent most of the day in Leicester University Botanical...
March 13th, 2017 11:58 - Protecting Moon. (Goldfinch60)
I do admire you for being able to come up with such a great theme and...
March 13th, 2017 03:32 - Our Hatchling (Dakotah Lavender)
Cherish them but even when they leave the nest you still worry for them...
March 12th, 2017 21:55 - I looked inside (Willyweed)
Great structure Willy and a great write.
March 12th, 2017 12:12 - Singing On. (Fay Slimm.)
You keep doing it Fay - another masterful write.
March 12th, 2017 12:09 - Tears (WriteBeLight)
Such a great bit of writing - trouble with growing old is that I still...
March 12th, 2017 12:08 - Words on This Page. (Goldfinch60)
Oh words - and so well expressed - I love stretching and manipulating...
March 12th, 2017 04:12 - DALI (Michael Edwards)
I have visited most of the art galleries in the major cities throughout...
March 12th, 2017 01:30 - His Due (Augustus)
I\'m too much into realism to follow closely the philosophy discussed...
March 12th, 2017 01:14 - Under The Canopy of a Tree (Rrodriguez)
Superb construction in an absorbing poem.
March 12th, 2017 01:03 - Rejection (Poems_)
It\'s a great haiku - why not simply call it Rejection.
March 9th, 2017 12:20 - United (Aa Harvey)
If only, if only - yes I do like it - great message and read.
March 9th, 2017 12:11 - LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards)
Thanks Robert - it means a lot to know my humour isn\'t lost - haven\'t...
March 9th, 2017 09:29 - My beautiful lady.... (P.H.Rose)
Beautiful - I could have written this myself (except for the word \'sat\'...
March 9th, 2017 08:48 - rise & shine (Willyweed)
Ahhh and the sun is shining here - like Brian\'s - another uplifting poem.
March 9th, 2017 06:53 - WINTER INTO SPRING ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Uplifting especially as I look out of the window on a sunlit garden full...
March 9th, 2017 06:51 - Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.)
Once again you\'ve words into something special - good on yer Fay.
March 9th, 2017 06:50 - Mr. Jack Ass (WriteBeLight)
Great - I used to work with a lawyer called Rupert Bear and he was real...
March 9th, 2017 06:49 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
Oh just brilliant - in fact one of my favourites - great metre and such...
March 9th, 2017 03:06 - LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards)
Thanks James for taking a look.
March 9th, 2017 01:42 - God (Tony36)
A difficult one for me as you may appreciate but written with such great...
March 8th, 2017 15:23 - TIME (Irishred)
Now there\'s a coincidence - both of us have published a piece called Time...
March 8th, 2017 13:53 - Sedgwick Manor (Willyweed)
Hells whatsits Willy - started to read this and I\'ve run out of time -...
March 8th, 2017 09:54 - March (Christina8)
Hang on in - concentrate on tomorrow - and keep writing whatever else you...
March 8th, 2017 09:52 - Dream Ride (WriteBeLight)
Yeh - great write and I hope you do. I\'m into larger cars not because of...
March 8th, 2017 05:07 - PIZZA PER FAVORE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great poem Brian. I\'ve eaten pizzas in Italy many times as part of an...
March 8th, 2017 03:27 - Vacancies. (Goldfinch60)
Yes it ended up dark after starting out light - quite a read - and love...
March 8th, 2017 03:19 - women\'s rights? what is that? (Jooles)
This seems to be the lot of so many of our lovely women - enjoyed the read...
March 8th, 2017 00:14 - Sticks and Stones ( Blood and Bones) (Tony36)
Yeh - quite an experience - quite a write - enjoyed this Tony.
March 8th, 2017 00:10 - Openess (Augustus)
Short but oh so effective - good \'un Augustus.
March 7th, 2017 11:45 - Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.)
Super work Fay.
March 7th, 2017 11:44 - About Pen brook Manor (Willyweed)
Dead good read Willy - can you let me have the address so I can avoid the...
March 7th, 2017 11:41 - In My Opinion (WriteBeLight)
Well In my opinion this is a darn good write.
March 7th, 2017 11:38 - LADIES\' DAY 2017 ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great one Brian - I just wish they wouldn\'t wear those oh so silly...
March 7th, 2017 03:12 - Morpheus Sings. (Goldfinch60)
Great stuff and I loved Cleo
March 7th, 2017 03:07 - A COCKNEYS LOT (Chapter One) (Michael Edwards)
A word of explanation for those of you not in the know.A cockney is (or...
March 7th, 2017 01:13 - Dream Gently (Augustus)
Sublime piece - full of good feeling to cheer us all up. Thanks for...
March 6th, 2017 13:39 - Father (Gencruz)
Powerfully written and so emotional. I am not usually a lover of emotional...
March 6th, 2017 11:20 - I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the construction Brian but a bit daunting to have a go.
March 6th, 2017 08:57 - Being Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
Great joy - in your usual great use of the written word.
March 6th, 2017 08:52 - I Am A Soldier (Tony36)
Good one - keep fighting Tony.
March 6th, 2017 08:50 - a gray November day (Willyweed)
Oh plenteous gloomloads - well written WW
March 6th, 2017 08:48 - Melancholy Blue (WriteBeLight)
I have known those who suffer from deepest blue - this really sums it up....
March 6th, 2017 08:46 - Dementia - Senryu (Goldfinch60)
So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with...
March 6th, 2017 03:04 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely work - spring appears to be with us - certainly here in middle...
March 5th, 2017 12:47 - bruised purple (Willyweed)
Good \'un Willy. Do you know the poem by Jenny Joseph -.When I am an old...
March 5th, 2017 11:36 - I\'m Sorry (WriteBeLight)
Never tried crow but do like pigeon - your poem certainly makes the point...
March 5th, 2017 09:11 - Face. (Goldfinch60)
So right the face tells so much. My wife always makes a point of smiling....
March 5th, 2017 03:49 - Solmonet (Rrodriguez)
I\'m right there in an impressionist world you\'ve painted with words.
March 4th, 2017 12:59 - Sales (Augustus)
No harm at all - an intriguing read.
March 4th, 2017 12:56 - Just a dog (Georgiarous101)
So sad but what a great tribute.
March 4th, 2017 11:49 - night fires (Willyweed)
You enjoyed writing this and it shows my good mucker - keep \'em coming.
March 4th, 2017 11:44 - Writing 3 (Tony36)
Snap - I feel the same - I get excited when words flow and then question...
March 4th, 2017 11:42 - Be Reason Able (WriteBeLight)
Makes you think - yes plenty of reasons - great write WBL
March 4th, 2017 11:39 - Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.)
Another racking piece Fay.
March 4th, 2017 11:37 - Yoga Practice (Philip)
Great write with two superb closing lines.
March 4th, 2017 06:21 - C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great one Brian but some caterpillars do bite and some have hairy...
March 4th, 2017 06:17 - Searching for Answers. (Goldfinch60)
Sage advice indeed and well constructed.
March 4th, 2017 02:49 - Another Day. (Edthepoet)
This just flows and has such great lines - a super piece Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 22:33 - An Evening Stroll With Grandpa (Rrodriguez)
A touching piece put together with such feeling - it makes me want to go...
March 3rd, 2017 22:32 - Mother; I remain (Willyweed)
Good and sad - do like the way you have formatted it.
March 3rd, 2017 13:55 - Yearning to Sail (Augustus)
I\'m there with the salt wind in my face - super stuff.
March 3rd, 2017 11:53 - Two Peas in a Pod (Notapoet)
Love peas, love mange tout, love sugar snaps, love this bit of fun .
March 3rd, 2017 09:17 - Blue Sky (Tris Eaton)
This is so good and so much reminds me of a visit to Hitlers Eagles nest...
March 3rd, 2017 09:16 - Creation (Tony36)
Although I\'m not a Christian I fully appreciate the meaning of this poem...
March 3rd, 2017 09:10 - Validation (WriteBeLight)
Yup - and I can validate this poem - love it.
March 3rd, 2017 06:43 - Today I Went To Iceland (Jenny1959)
Oh I know this only too well. I have so many issues like those who pack...
March 3rd, 2017 06:41 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
It flows just like the ocean.
March 3rd, 2017 06:33 - Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
Great construction and great poem as well. you\'ve inspired me to have a...
March 3rd, 2017 02:47 - B.O. Bomb (WriteBeLight)
They should have exercised more vigorous cleaning routines - love it WBL.
March 2nd, 2017 06:34 - death was a lady (Willyweed)
Just great Willy.
March 2nd, 2017 06:32 - FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brilliant Brian - love the banana one
March 2nd, 2017 06:31 - Watson and Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Goldfinch - great sense of humour - gave me quite a smile on a...
March 2nd, 2017 02:54 - Looks aren\'t everything (Firebird)
Yes I do like it very much but would like to change the last two lines if...
March 2nd, 2017 00:19 - I am the Poet (Tony36)
Yup - you are a poet and a pretty darn good one as this shows.
March 1st, 2017 16:44 - DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Although not a veg
I really like tomatoes
all juicy and red.
I like...
March 1st, 2017 13:41 - Lost (Augustus)
Quite scary but loved the poem
March 1st, 2017 13:20 - My Depression (Christina8)
Just hope the emerging cycle of nature with all its promises helps - geed...
March 1st, 2017 11:54
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