Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards

• I Wonder. (Goldfinch60) Rules = structure and stability in a civilised society - and theres the...
  March 25th, 2017 04:04
• FIVE FRUITY HAIKU A DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Like you I follow a healthy diet - never eaten a McDonalds - like to...
  March 25th, 2017 03:59
• My Husband (Dakotah Lavender) I have not known depression but your heart-tugging poem brings it home to...
  March 25th, 2017 00:51
• My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem (Rrodriguez) And I behold it - a joy to read.
  March 25th, 2017 00:46
• Conceding. (Fay Slimm.) Yet another piece of great imagery Fay.
  March 25th, 2017 00:45
• WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards) Just flicker them eyelids dear Fay - it counts every time.
  March 24th, 2017 11:48
• Harry The Hawk (A Nort the Newt Tale ) (Tony36) Quite enjoying these escapades - looking forward to another chapter.
  March 24th, 2017 10:45
• Electromagnetic Static (WriteBeLight) Yes we all know the feeling although electricity doesn\'t bother me too...
  March 24th, 2017 09:34
• A Man of Infinite Leisure - alternate version. (Goldfinch60) I was waiting to read this and I\'m not disappointed. This is one side of...
  March 24th, 2017 03:39
• TERRORISM TODAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I fail how to understand how we can overcome such awful acts. Sadly the...
  March 24th, 2017 03:34
• notes from her nightmare (Willyweed) Thanks so much for your kind words Willy - my wife and I walked round that...
  March 23rd, 2017 11:04
• Survival. (Fay Slimm.) You paint such a great scene with such well chosen language.
  March 23rd, 2017 09:00
• Supermarket Meany (WriteBeLight) I know this only too well. The worst offenders are those who while waiting...
  March 23rd, 2017 08:57
• A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60) Well I retired some 8 years ago and am continually on the go looking...
  March 23rd, 2017 05:21
• MY POETIC SIDE OK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Hear hear - lets give it up for MPS -now why do they say \'lets give it...
  March 23rd, 2017 05:12
• Forgotten Dreams (Garry) Only just come across this - encouraged to look at your work after your...
  March 23rd, 2017 00:27
• Starlit nights (Willyweed) Stars? The diamonds in the nights tiara - great scribe Willy.
  March 22nd, 2017 15:48
• Sally The Salamander(A Nort the Newt Tale ) (Tony36) A frog called Vivian split up these amphibians. Nort and Sally didn\'t...
  March 22nd, 2017 14:35
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.
  March 22nd, 2017 10:59
• Homework Notes (WriteBeLight) GO go, go baby go ! Just enjoy it ...!!!
  March 22nd, 2017 10:57
• The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60) I agree with Zarhgon - a great scribe.
  March 22nd, 2017 03:02
• KENTUCKY ~ 15 STATE SYMBOLS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) It must be a sonnet day today. Good fun piece of work as well as being...
  March 22nd, 2017 02:24
• The search (Willyweed) Love is indeed the answer - with the greatest wife, two loving boys, a...
  March 22nd, 2017 01:30
• Nort The Newt (Tony36) He\'s one cool dude - great stuff Tony
  March 21st, 2017 15:55
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) Super stuff Fay
  March 21st, 2017 14:58
• Going Places (Christina8) Gives warm shivers - happy anniversary.
  March 21st, 2017 08:36
• Smiling Jack (WriteBeLight) Great one WBL.
  March 21st, 2017 08:32
• Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60) What if? Yes but? Whatever, I always look forward to the next step and...
  March 21st, 2017 08:30
• Scapegoat (Quemis) Great lines and good read.
  March 21st, 2017 02:10
• London (Pupkit) My home town - and you only mention the tip of the iceberg. I am in London...
  March 20th, 2017 16:34
• WITH MY WORDS (Tony36) Words - the prime driver of mankind. Beautifully expressed.
  March 20th, 2017 16:28
• Hearts Wept. (Fay Slimm.) Yes a great tribute in your wonderful linguistic style .
  March 20th, 2017 08:54
• Wonderful Wings (WriteBeLight) Yup - as Goldfinch we also. especially the tit family and tree creepers et...
  March 20th, 2017 08:52
• Artist (Mickey84) Great piece. I am an artist but sadly not all can relate to my abstract...
  March 20th, 2017 03:58
• MELANIA TRUMP ~ A MODEL FIRST LADY ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good one Brian - only time will tell if she\'s more than Trumps bit of...
  March 20th, 2017 03:43
• Full of Joy Now (Rrodriguez) A poem of hope - enjoyed the read.
  March 20th, 2017 01:34
• Sex life of writers (MendedFences27) I both smiled at and admired this piece - so imaginative phil.
  March 20th, 2017 01:32
• I Wonder. (Fay Slimm.) So meaningful and well expressed as ever.
  March 19th, 2017 14:14
• Ski Trip (WriteBeLight) Great write as always. My son owns a Ski travel company here in the UK but...
  March 19th, 2017 09:47
• Dads Can Do Anything (Rrodriguez) Uplifting poem and it reminds me of when my children were young. We have...
  March 19th, 2017 01:47
• An Omen. (Fay Slimm.) Such an engaging write Fay - keep \'em coming.
  March 18th, 2017 17:12
• Conjunctivitis (MendedFences27) Keep rambling - I love this eclectic collection of linguistic curios 0-...
  March 18th, 2017 17:10
• Noga Pants (WriteBeLight) Oh if only - the high streets are full of slobbily dressed individuals...
  March 18th, 2017 07:12
• I\'m Screwed (Naeners) Well I\'ve looked at this trying to find some constructive points to make...
  March 18th, 2017 02:24
• Ugly War! (Rrodriguez) I hung on every word of this sensitive and beautiful poem - it\'s going...
  March 17th, 2017 16:19
• Whispers From Heaven (Christina8) I lost both my parents a few years back but I still miss them as much as I...
  March 17th, 2017 16:17
• Lost Innocence (Lost-but-not-broken17) And you oughter be kinda proud - great write.
  March 17th, 2017 11:41
• At The Beach (Seeker) This evokes so many pictures in my mind and so well drafted - a great...
  March 17th, 2017 11:40
• Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.) Awful awful times in many ways and you have captured it so well in this...
  March 17th, 2017 08:38
• So Rewarding (WriteBeLight) Must admit I do get a kick when I get a rewarding smile having done a...
  March 17th, 2017 07:41
• Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful tribute to one of the greats - super work.
  March 17th, 2017 04:05
• AN ABCDARIAN POEM ~ 26 WORDS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Looks like a bit of fun - might give it a go.
  March 17th, 2017 04:03
• THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards) Thanks Goldfinch.
  March 17th, 2017 03:05
• Power (BatSam) I have just been looking through your work and love everything that...
  March 17th, 2017 02:03
• Spirit of South Crofty (Maria Lees) A beautiful nostalgic piece.
  March 16th, 2017 14:14
• Truth\'s Trust........ (Fay Slimm.) Trust is a necessary part of a good relationship - my marriage is a...
  March 16th, 2017 11:53
• The Choice Is Yours (WriteBeLight) Choices are not easy BUT are only for the future and once made we have to...
  March 16th, 2017 11:49
• THE DRESS (Michael Edwards) You are so kind - will now go to the fusion.
  March 16th, 2017 10:10
• THE DRESS (Michael Edwards) Sorry Goldfinch - I used the word in a sort of metaphorical sense - it\'s...
  March 16th, 2017 03:49
• The Rain Smelling Snow (Mountainman999) I\'ve recently published a poem here which contains the line \'the rain...
  March 16th, 2017 01:45
• Do you ever...? (Poems_) Sounds like your half empty cup is now half full and ever may it be thus...
  March 16th, 2017 01:42
• At Ryoanji (Will Hiltz) Beautiful little piece - I do enjoy this form which can be quite as...
  March 16th, 2017 00:31
• Late night thoughts !!!! (P.H.Rose) Love is the only currency - great write PH
  March 16th, 2017 00:29
• PLASTIC BOTTLES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) For our friends across the pond - take the Michael or to take the Mick is...
  March 15th, 2017 13:46
• Up, Up And Away? (WriteBeLight) Well I\'m a regular flier mainly throughout Europe but little experience...
  March 15th, 2017 13:27
• As You Like It. (Goldfinch60) Sorry couldn\'t resist that! This reflects the hopes we all bear and a...
  March 15th, 2017 03:07
• Learning To Drive (Christina8) It\'s a mums place to worry (and a dads - believe me) but its part of...
  March 14th, 2017 14:48
• Darkness (Tony36) Well you certainly help keep the lights on here on MPS - nice one Tony.
  March 14th, 2017 13:39
• After Waiting For (Pintu Mahakul) Warmest congratulations to you and a great piece of writing - we are...
  March 14th, 2017 12:52
• on a winters day (Willyweed) Ahhh - makes me think of my lovely wife - even though it\'s a warm spring...
  March 14th, 2017 12:49
• Achilles\' Heal (WriteBeLight) Being sensitive is something many of us learn to live with and I applaud...
  March 14th, 2017 12:47
• Tribute To Vincent. (Fay Slimm.) Super tribute and if I could only wield a brush the way he did. But at...
  March 14th, 2017 12:44
• COLOR ME A RAINBOW (BRIAN & ANGELA) Colourful and a good one at that - my favourite colour - as an artist...
  March 14th, 2017 12:41
• She. (Goldfinch60) I really do like this. You did so well to pick up on the inspiration....
  March 14th, 2017 02:55
• The Pub and Its People (Jenny1959) Could easily be the local in my village - great write.
  March 13th, 2017 13:58
• Three in a Beer Garden (AuburnScribbler) Brill - and now time for another round?
  March 13th, 2017 13:56
• Blue song in Morning (MendedFences27) Great stuff Phil - Part 2 tomorrow? Evil plan?
  March 13th, 2017 13:54
• her name Elenore (Willyweed) I bounced along reading this - it made me want to boo and hiss - poor...
  March 13th, 2017 13:50
• Child 2 (Tony36) You\'ve framed it so well Tony.
  March 13th, 2017 12:06
• JUST DESSERTS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Steamed apple pud is top of the list for me too - but do enjoy my food....
  March 13th, 2017 12:04
• Sun\'s Out (WriteBeLight) Great stuff - just spent most of the day in Leicester University Botanical...
  March 13th, 2017 11:58
• Protecting Moon. (Goldfinch60) I do admire you for being able to come up with such a great theme and...
  March 13th, 2017 03:32
• Our Hatchling (Dakotah Lavender) Cherish them but even when they leave the nest you still worry for them...
  March 12th, 2017 21:55
• I looked inside (Willyweed) Great structure Willy and a great write.
  March 12th, 2017 12:12
• Singing On. (Fay Slimm.) You keep doing it Fay - another masterful write.
  March 12th, 2017 12:09
• Tears (WriteBeLight) Such a great bit of writing - trouble with growing old is that I still...
  March 12th, 2017 12:08
• Words on This Page. (Goldfinch60) Oh words - and so well expressed - I love stretching and manipulating...
  March 12th, 2017 04:12
• DALI (Michael Edwards) I have visited most of the art galleries in the major cities throughout...
  March 12th, 2017 01:30
• His Due (Augustus) I\'m too much into realism to follow closely the philosophy discussed...
  March 12th, 2017 01:14
• Under The Canopy of a Tree (Rrodriguez) Superb construction in an absorbing poem.
  March 12th, 2017 01:03
• Rejection (Poems_) It\'s a great haiku - why not simply call it Rejection.
  March 9th, 2017 12:20
• United (Aa Harvey) If only, if only - yes I do like it - great message and read.
  March 9th, 2017 12:11
• LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards) Thanks Robert - it means a lot to know my humour isn\'t lost - haven\'t...
  March 9th, 2017 09:29
• My beautiful lady.... (P.H.Rose) Beautiful - I could have written this myself (except for the word \'sat\'...
  March 9th, 2017 08:48
• rise & shine (Willyweed) Ahhh and the sun is shining here - like Brian\'s - another uplifting poem.
  March 9th, 2017 06:53
• WINTER INTO SPRING ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Uplifting especially as I look out of the window on a sunlit garden full...
  March 9th, 2017 06:51
• Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.) Once again you\'ve words into something special - good on yer Fay.
  March 9th, 2017 06:50
• Mr. Jack Ass (WriteBeLight) Great - I used to work with a lawyer called Rupert Bear and he was real...
  March 9th, 2017 06:49
• Custer. (Goldfinch60) Oh just brilliant - in fact one of my favourites - great metre and such...
  March 9th, 2017 03:06
• LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards) Thanks James for taking a look.
  March 9th, 2017 01:42