Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Cheers Phil - now to post something a bit different.
March 30th, 2017 23:38 - WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION (Michael Edwards)
Thanks Phil - they\'re sharing breakfast as we speak. So glad I got drawn...
March 30th, 2017 23:37 - DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Cheers Brian - yes it\'s my lane although I live behind the cottages to...
March 30th, 2017 09:58 - BBQ (Tony36)
Cooked rare and with fresh vegetables - yes please - oh and a bottle of...
March 30th, 2017 08:57 - lay at peace under Gibraltar Road... (P.H.Rose)
Great read - my suggestion on the same theme would be \'mutual dance\'
March 30th, 2017 08:55 - Don\'t Deflect (WriteBeLight)
good read. sometimes it goes beyond not admitting you are wrong - it is...
March 30th, 2017 06:13 - Burgeoning. (Fay Slimm.)
Full of optimism with some great lines - especially like the last line.
March 30th, 2017 06:12 - MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well I\'ve been called a silly ass - does that count?
March 30th, 2017 06:10 - I Looked Away (Garry)
Great message - original and absorbing read - nice one Garry
March 30th, 2017 06:08 - Aching With Pleasure. (Goldfinch60)
DS is right - written with passion and read with enjoyment
March 30th, 2017 06:07 - DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite...
March 30th, 2017 03:19 - Surprised by Joy (Rrodriguez)
Oh I could see the scene as I read it through - great work.
March 29th, 2017 16:15 - Wings (Christina8)
You and me both Christina - great little poem .
March 29th, 2017 16:14 - Children (Tony36)
I just love children but in a sad reflection of out times I cant even...
March 29th, 2017 16:13 - Life\'s other side (MendedFences27)
The trouble is the art of communication is almost lost - language...
March 29th, 2017 16:09 - THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards)
I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter...
March 29th, 2017 13:07 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write .
March 29th, 2017 11:32 - you are but a shadow (Willyweed)
Now this is just perfect - a poetic ballet - into my favourites.
March 29th, 2017 11:31 - SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.
March 29th, 2017 11:29 - Gas Bag (WriteBeLight)
Great one - just be grateful it was the northerlies - its even more...
March 29th, 2017 11:27 - Now. (Goldfinch60)
A great philosophy and one I adhere to all the time - I never look back...
March 29th, 2017 02:16 - Love (Tony36)
Top marks for a great write Tony.
March 28th, 2017 11:10 - Taken (a UFO encounter) (Willyweed)
Great read Willy - keep watching them skies.
March 28th, 2017 10:26 - The Bloom (Augustus)
What a superb little posting - enjoyed this one very much.
March 28th, 2017 10:25 - After A Sip. (Fay Slimm.)
Dipping toes into the moment - great words in a great poem.
March 28th, 2017 07:27 - Old Mother Hen (WriteBeLight)
When I was young we had chickens all over the place - the old ones went...
March 28th, 2017 07:25 - SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 1 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yet another good \'un Brian
March 28th, 2017 07:08 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
Now this made my day with a broad grin .
March 28th, 2017 07:06 - Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem) (Rrodriguez)
Enjoyed the format and Phils description is spot on - good read.
March 28th, 2017 00:11 - Bubble Magic. (Fay Slimm.)
Catches the magic of bubbles with you usual superb descriptive verse
March 27th, 2017 12:54 - The talk (A Nort the Newt tale) (Tony36)
Ah bless - if they have children will they be nalamanders or sewts?
March 27th, 2017 08:30 - GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is something I\'ve never got into but I do live in the middle of hunt...
March 27th, 2017 08:27 - So Alone. (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad poem but also quite warming - love the way this has been put...
March 27th, 2017 02:03 - Moved Out (WriteBeLight)
I think we are of like mind - my children and grandchildren are the...
March 27th, 2017 01:58 - An Ode To Mornings (Lost Dreamer)
Great to see a bit of humour - even though I don\'t recognise it - you see...
March 26th, 2017 23:38 - Got Game (WriteBeLight)
Spot on.
March 26th, 2017 13:49 - SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautifully expressed.
March 26th, 2017 03:10 - Difference. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah yes Fay - loved this and just off to the studio to get out my...
March 26th, 2017 03:09 - Shutter (Whisperingquill)
I was really drawn in by this - great piece of writing.
March 26th, 2017 01:31 - The Good Old Days (Iamwoman)
It certainly made me smile but also a tad sad - oh if only...!
March 26th, 2017 01:28 - The Picnic (A Nort the Newt Tale) (Tony36)
Oh the thought of an eft holding hands - so romantic.
March 25th, 2017 15:51 - A List For That (WriteBeLight)
oh I am with you all the way. we write out lists for everything including...
March 25th, 2017 15:49 - I Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Rules = structure and stability in a civilised society - and theres the...
March 25th, 2017 04:04 - FIVE FRUITY HAIKU A DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Like you I follow a healthy diet - never eaten a McDonalds - like to...
March 25th, 2017 03:59 - My Husband (Dakotah Lavender)
I have not known depression but your heart-tugging poem brings it home to...
March 25th, 2017 00:51 - My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem (Rrodriguez)
And I behold it - a joy to read.
March 25th, 2017 00:46 - Conceding. (Fay Slimm.)
Yet another piece of great imagery Fay.
March 25th, 2017 00:45 - WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards)
Just flicker them eyelids dear Fay - it counts every time.
March 24th, 2017 11:48 - Harry The Hawk (A Nort the Newt Tale ) (Tony36)
Quite enjoying these escapades - looking forward to another chapter.
March 24th, 2017 10:45 - Electromagnetic Static (WriteBeLight)
Yes we all know the feeling although electricity doesn\'t bother me too...
March 24th, 2017 09:34 - A Man of Infinite Leisure - alternate version. (Goldfinch60)
I was waiting to read this and I\'m not disappointed. This is one side of...
March 24th, 2017 03:39 - TERRORISM TODAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I fail how to understand how we can overcome such awful acts. Sadly the...
March 24th, 2017 03:34 - notes from her nightmare (Willyweed)
Thanks so much for your kind words Willy - my wife and I walked round that...
March 23rd, 2017 11:04 - Survival. (Fay Slimm.)
You paint such a great scene with such well chosen language.
March 23rd, 2017 09:00 - Supermarket Meany (WriteBeLight)
I know this only too well. The worst offenders are those who while waiting...
March 23rd, 2017 08:57 - A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
Well I retired some 8 years ago and am continually on the go looking...
March 23rd, 2017 05:21 - MY POETIC SIDE OK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Hear hear - lets give it up for MPS -now why do they say \'lets give it...
March 23rd, 2017 05:12 - Forgotten Dreams (Garry)
Only just come across this - encouraged to look at your work after your...
March 23rd, 2017 00:27 - Starlit nights (Willyweed)
Stars? The diamonds in the nights tiara - great scribe Willy.
March 22nd, 2017 15:48 - Sally The Salamander(A Nort the Newt Tale ) (Tony36)
A frog called Vivian split up these amphibians. Nort and Sally didn\'t...
March 22nd, 2017 14:35 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.
March 22nd, 2017 10:59 - Homework Notes (WriteBeLight)
GO go, go baby go ! Just enjoy it ...!!!
March 22nd, 2017 10:57 - The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60)
I agree with Zarhgon - a great scribe.
March 22nd, 2017 03:02 - KENTUCKY ~ 15 STATE SYMBOLS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It must be a sonnet day today. Good fun piece of work as well as being...
March 22nd, 2017 02:24 - The search (Willyweed)
Love is indeed the answer - with the greatest wife, two loving boys, a...
March 22nd, 2017 01:30 - Nort The Newt (Tony36)
He\'s one cool dude - great stuff Tony
March 21st, 2017 15:55 - Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.)
Super stuff Fay
March 21st, 2017 14:58 - Going Places (Christina8)
Gives warm shivers - happy anniversary.
March 21st, 2017 08:36 - Smiling Jack (WriteBeLight)
Great one WBL.
March 21st, 2017 08:32 - Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60)
What if? Yes but? Whatever, I always look forward to the next step and...
March 21st, 2017 08:30 - Scapegoat (Quemis)
Great lines and good read.
March 21st, 2017 02:10 - London (Pupkit)
My home town - and you only mention the tip of the iceberg. I am in London...
March 20th, 2017 16:34 - WITH MY WORDS (Tony36)
Words - the prime driver of mankind. Beautifully expressed.
March 20th, 2017 16:28 - Hearts Wept. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes a great tribute in your wonderful linguistic style .
March 20th, 2017 08:54 - Wonderful Wings (WriteBeLight)
Yup - as Goldfinch we also. especially the tit family and tree creepers et...
March 20th, 2017 08:52 - Artist (Mickey84)
Great piece. I am an artist but sadly not all can relate to my abstract...
March 20th, 2017 03:58 - MELANIA TRUMP ~ A MODEL FIRST LADY ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good one Brian - only time will tell if she\'s more than Trumps bit of...
March 20th, 2017 03:43 - Full of Joy Now (Rrodriguez)
A poem of hope - enjoyed the read.
March 20th, 2017 01:34 - Sex life of writers (MendedFences27)
I both smiled at and admired this piece - so imaginative phil.
March 20th, 2017 01:32 - I Wonder. (Fay Slimm.)
So meaningful and well expressed as ever.
March 19th, 2017 14:14 - Ski Trip (WriteBeLight)
Great write as always. My son owns a Ski travel company here in the UK but...
March 19th, 2017 09:47 - Dads Can Do Anything (Rrodriguez)
Uplifting poem and it reminds me of when my children were young. We have...
March 19th, 2017 01:47 - An Omen. (Fay Slimm.)
Such an engaging write Fay - keep \'em coming.
March 18th, 2017 17:12 - Conjunctivitis (MendedFences27)
Keep rambling - I love this eclectic collection of linguistic curios 0-...
March 18th, 2017 17:10 - Noga Pants (WriteBeLight)
Oh if only - the high streets are full of slobbily dressed individuals...
March 18th, 2017 07:12 - I\'m Screwed (Naeners)
Well I\'ve looked at this trying to find some constructive points to make...
March 18th, 2017 02:24 - Ugly War! (Rrodriguez)
I hung on every word of this sensitive and beautiful poem - it\'s going...
March 17th, 2017 16:19 - Whispers From Heaven (Christina8)
I lost both my parents a few years back but I still miss them as much as I...
March 17th, 2017 16:17 - Lost Innocence (Lost-but-not-broken17)
And you oughter be kinda proud - great write.
March 17th, 2017 11:41 - At The Beach (Seeker)
This evokes so many pictures in my mind and so well drafted - a great...
March 17th, 2017 11:40 - Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.)
Awful awful times in many ways and you have captured it so well in this...
March 17th, 2017 08:38 - So Rewarding (WriteBeLight)
Must admit I do get a kick when I get a rewarding smile having done a...
March 17th, 2017 07:41 - Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful tribute to one of the greats - super work.
March 17th, 2017 04:05 - AN ABCDARIAN POEM ~ 26 WORDS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Looks like a bit of fun - might give it a go.
March 17th, 2017 04:03 - THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Thanks Goldfinch.
March 17th, 2017 03:05 - Power (BatSam)
I have just been looking through your work and love everything that...
March 17th, 2017 02:03 - Spirit of South Crofty (Maria Lees)
A beautiful nostalgic piece.
March 16th, 2017 14:14 - Truth\'s Trust........ (Fay Slimm.)
Trust is a necessary part of a good relationship - my marriage is a...
March 16th, 2017 11:53 - The Choice Is Yours (WriteBeLight)
Choices are not easy BUT are only for the future and once made we have to...
March 16th, 2017 11:49 - THE DRESS (Michael Edwards)
You are so kind - will now go to the fusion.
March 16th, 2017 10:10
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