Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Lost To Reality. (Goldfinch60)
This such a wrenching read - I have known dementia in my direct family so...
April 7th, 2017 02:27 - Loss.. (P.H.Rose)
You\'ve truly captured the silence of loss - great read.
April 7th, 2017 01:00 - Teardrop streams (LukeMorrison)
A great write and somewhat enigmatic - I\'ve never used the language you...
April 7th, 2017 00:52 - words 3 (Tony36)
Great - love this form.
April 6th, 2017 08:42 - \"not just a women\" (Willyweed)
Few words - lotsa punch.
April 6th, 2017 08:41 - The no poem (Jooles)
Great stuff Jooles
April 6th, 2017 08:40 - Wonderment. (Fay Slimm.)
Yup - just read it again and it was worth returning to - great write.
April 6th, 2017 08:39 - Wonderment. (Fay Slimm.)
Just read this quickly but my wife is waiting to go shopping so will read...
April 6th, 2017 02:48 - HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great stuff Brian I really like this - something else for me to have a go...
April 6th, 2017 02:45 - Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
I am so touched by this - it just has to go into my favourites - what a...
April 6th, 2017 02:43 - The Wonders of God\'s Creation (Rrodriguez)
As I read it I was there - a beautiful read.
April 5th, 2017 22:17 - An Arachnid Alarm.... (P.H.Rose)
Love the storey - gave me a big grin.
April 5th, 2017 15:39 - Winnow The Wind. (Fay Slimm.)
A great read fay with some really great lines.
April 5th, 2017 15:37 - ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love this little poem - as a youngster I read David Lacks \'Life Of The...
April 5th, 2017 03:57 - \"Where\'s My Stick?\" (Goldfinch60)
I love this simply written but so effective poem with its gentle humour -...
April 5th, 2017 02:24 - DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood...
April 4th, 2017 15:44 - A Book of my life..... (P.H.Rose)
Now this is a book I would love to read you have it to me already in...
April 4th, 2017 15:16 - Spring Has Come! (Christina8)
Spring has come
the grass has riss
I wonder where the birdie is
Not...
April 4th, 2017 13:54 - still you remain (Willyweed)
Another cracker Willy (do you use the word cracker to denote a good un in...
April 4th, 2017 13:48 - write 2 (Tony36)
Couldn\'t be better put - the pen (and the brush) is a great soother
April 4th, 2017 13:47 - CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD (BRIAN & ANGELA)
After Fays daffs now this beauty - a colourful day - great acrostic.
April 4th, 2017 13:46 - Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah what a lovely poem for a great flower. I currently have large trumpets,...
April 4th, 2017 13:44 - The Better Angels of Our Nature (Rrodriguez)
A great inspiring write and though I\'m English I know the Ashokan...
April 4th, 2017 02:01 - My Reflection (WriteBeLight)
Great descriptive piece which I\'m sure does you justice - as Goldfinch...
April 4th, 2017 01:56 - Saved By A Robin. (Goldfinch60)
Also one of the most promiscuous of birds so they\'ve got a lot to sing...
April 4th, 2017 01:54 - remember (Willyweed)
Very damn extra special Sir W
April 3rd, 2017 10:55 - Born (Tony36)
Bob on or Spot on - either way well said.
April 3rd, 2017 10:54 - Youth\'s blood. (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks for posting this - great read and it reminds me I need a haircut.
April 3rd, 2017 06:44 - BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well written and a good fun read. I used to love cycling when the roads...
April 3rd, 2017 06:43 - Banquet Places. (Goldfinch60)
A prophetic day today - yes I go along with this super little piece.
April 3rd, 2017 01:51 - Eat Crow And Apologize (WriteBeLight)
Well said - has a real stinging quality to it and great wisdom. Not sure...
April 3rd, 2017 01:49 - Reaching out. (a haiku?) (Garry)
Absolutely - it\'s spot on - keep em coming.
April 2nd, 2017 22:31 - through the looking glass (Willyweed)
A damn good scribe - can\'t say more than that. keep em coming Sir...
April 2nd, 2017 12:34 - Butterflies (WriteBeLight)
Great write and at just the right time of year - in my own garden over...
April 2nd, 2017 11:35 - If Only. (Fay Slimm.)
Apart from the sparrow who I love simply for his cheeky understated...
April 2nd, 2017 11:31 - Nothing is ever really forgotten.... (P.H.Rose)
Just remember you CAN take it with you but it\'ll be no darn good.
April 2nd, 2017 11:26 - A SUNDAY SMILE (Michael Edwards)
Cheers PH - this is the top of the High Road in Market Harborough. Just...
April 2nd, 2017 11:21 - A SUNDAY SMILE (Michael Edwards)
Committed? I think I omitted is the word - apologies we all get it wrong...
April 2nd, 2017 05:10 - How Did That Happen? (Goldfinch60)
was it the Stuttgart ? Oh it can easily happen - happens to me when I...
April 2nd, 2017 02:24 - A SUNDAY SMILE (Michael Edwards)
Okay so haikus are supposed to be funny but why not. There are only...
April 2nd, 2017 00:33 - Edith\'s Hefty Handbag (Jenny1959)
Sounds as if it was more like a container - good fun read.
April 1st, 2017 13:44 - Easter Morning (Tony36)
good write Tony
April 1st, 2017 13:40 - A visit from my nan (grandmother) (P.H.Rose)
Nans and mums - I just well up when I think of mine - long departed but...
April 1st, 2017 07:36 - Take Out The Trash (WriteBeLight)
Nice one - do you have the same type of collections as here in the UK -...
April 1st, 2017 06:08 - To Sleep? (Garry)
Pills and alcohol - you\'ll sleep well. Nice write.
April 1st, 2017 03:43 - MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A descriptive rainbow and love the pyjallmas even though I don\'t wear...
April 1st, 2017 02:03 - To Infinity and Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
Well its great thinking and along similar lines to my own posting today -...
April 1st, 2017 01:33 - Until Day. (Fay Slimm.)
Great write fay but you were up before me to post this one !
April 1st, 2017 00:58 - I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages (Garry)
Great fun read - taken out of their skins (why are their skins so tough?)...
March 31st, 2017 15:16 - Persistence of political vision (MendedFences27)
Another beautifully written piece - great use of the language.
March 31st, 2017 10:56 - Donkey (Tony36)
Good on yer for taking him in - theres hope in the world.
March 31st, 2017 10:52 - Santuary Bar (WriteBeLight)
Oh if only I could watch TV or go to a film without getting bored and...
March 31st, 2017 10:49 - THE BARMY BARD (Michael Edwards)
Cheers Brian - as for friends etc :
The corn stands erect in...
March 31st, 2017 10:44 - Love Sings. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m really struggling for inspiration when it comes to serious poetry - I...
March 31st, 2017 04:56 - To a Road Sign. (Garry)
Love this.
Let me assure you, something I\'d hate,
is to bear the...
March 31st, 2017 04:46 - The night (Robert \" grave robber\" redford.)
A stunning first posting - hope to see more.
March 31st, 2017 03:46 - THE DAILY GRIND ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Same for me - retired some 7 years ago and enjoying every minute of it....
March 31st, 2017 03:44 - Lost in a Book. (Goldfinch60)
Superb little shorty - I also love a book - better than any TV programme....
March 31st, 2017 02:01 - DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Cheers Phil - now to post something a bit different.
March 30th, 2017 23:38 - WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION (Michael Edwards)
Thanks Phil - they\'re sharing breakfast as we speak. So glad I got drawn...
March 30th, 2017 23:37 - DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Cheers Brian - yes it\'s my lane although I live behind the cottages to...
March 30th, 2017 09:58 - BBQ (Tony36)
Cooked rare and with fresh vegetables - yes please - oh and a bottle of...
March 30th, 2017 08:57 - lay at peace under Gibraltar Road... (P.H.Rose)
Great read - my suggestion on the same theme would be \'mutual dance\'
March 30th, 2017 08:55 - Don\'t Deflect (WriteBeLight)
good read. sometimes it goes beyond not admitting you are wrong - it is...
March 30th, 2017 06:13 - Burgeoning. (Fay Slimm.)
Full of optimism with some great lines - especially like the last line.
March 30th, 2017 06:12 - MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well I\'ve been called a silly ass - does that count?
March 30th, 2017 06:10 - I Looked Away (Garry)
Great message - original and absorbing read - nice one Garry
March 30th, 2017 06:08 - Aching With Pleasure. (Goldfinch60)
DS is right - written with passion and read with enjoyment
March 30th, 2017 06:07 - DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite...
March 30th, 2017 03:19 - Surprised by Joy (Rrodriguez)
Oh I could see the scene as I read it through - great work.
March 29th, 2017 16:15 - Wings (Christina8)
You and me both Christina - great little poem .
March 29th, 2017 16:14 - Children (Tony36)
I just love children but in a sad reflection of out times I cant even...
March 29th, 2017 16:13 - Life\'s other side (MendedFences27)
The trouble is the art of communication is almost lost - language...
March 29th, 2017 16:09 - THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards)
I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter...
March 29th, 2017 13:07 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write .
March 29th, 2017 11:32 - you are but a shadow (Willyweed)
Now this is just perfect - a poetic ballet - into my favourites.
March 29th, 2017 11:31 - SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.
March 29th, 2017 11:29 - Gas Bag (WriteBeLight)
Great one - just be grateful it was the northerlies - its even more...
March 29th, 2017 11:27 - Now. (Goldfinch60)
A great philosophy and one I adhere to all the time - I never look back...
March 29th, 2017 02:16 - Love (Tony36)
Top marks for a great write Tony.
March 28th, 2017 11:10 - Taken (a UFO encounter) (Willyweed)
Great read Willy - keep watching them skies.
March 28th, 2017 10:26 - The Bloom (Augustus)
What a superb little posting - enjoyed this one very much.
March 28th, 2017 10:25 - After A Sip. (Fay Slimm.)
Dipping toes into the moment - great words in a great poem.
March 28th, 2017 07:27 - Old Mother Hen (WriteBeLight)
When I was young we had chickens all over the place - the old ones went...
March 28th, 2017 07:25 - SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 1 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yet another good \'un Brian
March 28th, 2017 07:08 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
Now this made my day with a broad grin .
March 28th, 2017 07:06 - Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem) (Rrodriguez)
Enjoyed the format and Phils description is spot on - good read.
March 28th, 2017 00:11 - Bubble Magic. (Fay Slimm.)
Catches the magic of bubbles with you usual superb descriptive verse
March 27th, 2017 12:54 - The talk (A Nort the Newt tale) (Tony36)
Ah bless - if they have children will they be nalamanders or sewts?
March 27th, 2017 08:30 - GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is something I\'ve never got into but I do live in the middle of hunt...
March 27th, 2017 08:27 - So Alone. (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad poem but also quite warming - love the way this has been put...
March 27th, 2017 02:03 - Moved Out (WriteBeLight)
I think we are of like mind - my children and grandchildren are the...
March 27th, 2017 01:58 - An Ode To Mornings (Lost Dreamer)
Great to see a bit of humour - even though I don\'t recognise it - you see...
March 26th, 2017 23:38 - Got Game (WriteBeLight)
Spot on.
March 26th, 2017 13:49 - SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautifully expressed.
March 26th, 2017 03:10 - Difference. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah yes Fay - loved this and just off to the studio to get out my...
March 26th, 2017 03:09 - Shutter (Whisperingquill)
I was really drawn in by this - great piece of writing.
March 26th, 2017 01:31 - The Good Old Days (Iamwoman)
It certainly made me smile but also a tad sad - oh if only...!
March 26th, 2017 01:28 - The Picnic (A Nort the Newt Tale) (Tony36)
Oh the thought of an eft holding hands - so romantic.
March 25th, 2017 15:51 - A List For That (WriteBeLight)
oh I am with you all the way. we write out lists for everything including...
March 25th, 2017 15:49
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