Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards

• Unsuccessful and boredom!!! (P.H.Rose) I\'ll be away next month and wondering if its worth going - aw heck yes...
  May 15th, 2017 00:53
• Body Language (Swingline) Thought it was great until I got to the last two lines then I...
  May 14th, 2017 13:54
• Mom (WriteBeLight) Great write - oh how I miss mine. Now I\'ve come over all sad.
  May 14th, 2017 07:08
• GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good one Brian - another form to add to my list of poems what I must
  May 14th, 2017 07:01
• Elusive. (Goldfinch60) Where time goes no one knows day then night dark then light or is it...
  May 14th, 2017 02:11
• Two modest haikus (Garry) just like you I\'m good looking too and I know its true cos on...
  May 13th, 2017 20:54
• Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 1 (Orchidee) Great metre and so well constructed O
  May 13th, 2017 12:04
• My World (Swingline) Wish I\'d written this - a great write and a great read.
  May 13th, 2017 12:03
• For The Victims (WriteBeLight) It was Mothers day in the UK some weeks ago but otherwise it\'s the same...
  May 13th, 2017 12:01
• Sea-Swell. (Fay Slimm.) I an smell it I can taste it - great write fay.
  May 13th, 2017 11:54
• Let\'s Get Lost. (Goldfinch60) Great tribute.
  May 13th, 2017 02:42
• Mothering. (Fay Slimm.) It\'s an enduring relationship (thankfully) for the vast majority - great...
  May 12th, 2017 14:51
• Happy Mother\'s Day Hattie (WriteBeLight) Super poem about a great bird.
  May 12th, 2017 14:47
• Derelict (Jabberwocky) Really moving - much enjoyed - thanks for posting it.
  May 12th, 2017 03:51
• The Wall. (Goldfinch60) Clever write to commemorate a great band - nice one Goldfinch.
  May 12th, 2017 03:49
• 40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA) I also love Cash and Ireland especially with Irish in my immediate...
  May 12th, 2017 03:48
• Mountain family holiday villa and Waves.. (P.H.Rose) Beautiful area and a couple of great poems to do it justice.
  May 11th, 2017 23:30
• Revealing Nothing (Garry) I love these short ones - they often say more than several stanzas - And...
  May 11th, 2017 09:42
• My Rocker. (Fay Slimm.) I know that rocker - I have a mirror handed down from at least four...
  May 11th, 2017 09:41
• Vials Vicissitudes* (Orchidee) Read this without knowing or listening to the tune - great rhythm to the...
  May 11th, 2017 09:38
• Never Kid Myself (WriteBeLight) Only a fool fools himself (or herself!).
  May 11th, 2017 09:36
• THE LANGUAGE OF GIFTS OF FLOWERS (N to Z) (BRIAN & ANGELA) You got there - great work B
  May 11th, 2017 05:00
• Only Remembered. (Goldfinch60) Great write - I don\'t know them but be assured I\'ll google them - just...
  May 11th, 2017 02:07
• Break A Leg (Mandi) Enjoyed this Mandi
  May 11th, 2017 00:14
• The Shadow of my Passing (Garry) It worked - good write Garry.
  May 10th, 2017 23:39
• Oh My Captain (Swingline) Good write swingline
  May 10th, 2017 14:00
• Compatibility. (Fay Slimm.) Great sentiment and love the last line.
  May 10th, 2017 10:43
• Stay Young (WriteBeLight) After a day of hard graft in the garden I feel I\'ve earned a bit of...
  May 10th, 2017 10:42
• Mozart Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) I hate to say this but Mozart isn\'t top of my league - mine would be...
  May 10th, 2017 10:39
• THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M) (BRIAN & ANGELA) Been in the garden all morning trimming ivy, cutting grass, hoeing,...
  May 10th, 2017 08:04
• Done With The Sick And Tired (WriteBeLight) Whether the weather be wet or whether the weather be fine, I\'ll retire...
  May 9th, 2017 13:42
• FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA) Not so sure about water Why do folk drink water? Water’s such a...
  May 9th, 2017 13:37
• Orange and Yellow. (Goldfinch60) As soon as I saw I thought \'Ah Rothko\'. Really do like this poem which...
  May 9th, 2017 01:59
• Haiku. Growing darkness (Garry) Great little piece Garry
  May 8th, 2017 23:45
• BBQ (Tony36) A short piece but something to get your teeth into
  May 8th, 2017 10:57
• Have You Seen My Voice? (WriteBeLight) To think I may not find it is something that I fear But what is that?...
  May 8th, 2017 10:55
• CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Positivity - still looking forward to future achievements even in my...
  May 8th, 2017 03:12
• Sunset of Life. (Goldfinch60) Clouds really do bring beauty to the skies and certainly give me much...
  May 8th, 2017 01:45
• INTO THE SUN (Michael Edwards) Yes mucky feet its all that mayo heigh ho, heigh ho, heigh ho, heigh ho.
  May 7th, 2017 14:13
• Please Stop The Cough (WriteBeLight) Allergies - don\'t they make you want to curse. I\'m not bothered by...
  May 7th, 2017 11:51
• Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.) Great writing Fay
  May 7th, 2017 11:49
• Blossoms (Swingline) Great message well expressed. He’s a rose between thorns or so he...
  May 7th, 2017 06:20
• PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) As you will appreciate I can\'t relate but I do appreciate the sentiments...
  May 7th, 2017 02:13
• The Lily. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful verse with a lovely picture of Iris Siberica - the trouble is...
  May 7th, 2017 02:10
• I knew it wasnt true (Mizzy) Some great lines in this - good write,
  May 6th, 2017 23:24
• Holy Helpings (Orchidee) M M is only up the road from me - not a lover of pork pies but love...
  May 6th, 2017 23:22
• Just Don\'t Film It (Garry) Yup - my kind of poem also - good \'un
  May 6th, 2017 23:19
• Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness (Swingline) Yup - tis a good write
  May 6th, 2017 07:59
• Have the Aliens Landed? (Goldfinch60) There are such great feats of architure all around us if we only look up,...
  May 6th, 2017 02:20
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) Must agree that good manners and dress sense do not necessarily go hand in...
  May 6th, 2017 02:05
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) My wife and I love dining out in PROPER restaurants but it is so...
  May 6th, 2017 00:12
• Ode to an Ant (Lizzy Renee) A difficult one as I never intentionally or knowingly kill any life form...
  May 5th, 2017 23:27
• Think Before You Kink (WriteBeLight) We\'ve got cordless vacuum cleaners and the hose is on a reel said he...
  May 5th, 2017 11:01
• RAINBOW OF ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I\'ve already seen some in bloom in my neck of the woods - yes you must...
  May 5th, 2017 10:58
• Remembering Natures Wonder. (Goldfinch60) Just returned from a cross country walk with my wife - scenes such as this...
  May 5th, 2017 10:54
• PLANS FOR TONIGHT (Michael Edwards) A few words to explain this little ditty for anyone not familiar with old...
  May 5th, 2017 00:17
• Ode to Rain (Ed Ward) Ed - a great attempt and clearly you have the ability to make great...
  May 4th, 2017 14:26
• Life\'s fight (Tony36) Small piece - big message - well put.
  May 4th, 2017 12:22
• Death Grip (Lizzy Renee) Love the structure - a good read.
  May 4th, 2017 09:43
• Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight) I keep an eye for wasps as they start to build nests (usually in the apex...
  May 4th, 2017 09:38
• For Thine Eyes Only. (Fay Slimm.) Had me sighing and reaching for the paper (yes I still write using a...
  May 4th, 2017 09:35
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) Thanks all - actually the sketch was done in Latvia but I guess it could...
  May 4th, 2017 05:02
• WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Currently I guess its 9 as its the only number that appears on my cars...
  May 4th, 2017 04:25
• C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) you are preaching to converted here but do continue preaching - there are...
  May 3rd, 2017 13:53
• The Stones Know. (Fay Slimm.) Another great piece Fay
  May 3rd, 2017 12:56
• Writer\'s Block NOT! (WriteBeLight) Always manage to writesomething but there is often one hell of a block on...
  May 3rd, 2017 12:54
• Other People\'s Voices (Garry) Proverbial with deep dark overtones - yes I\'m with you Garry
  May 3rd, 2017 04:12
• Island of Acceptance. (Goldfinch60) A dream voyage to a magical destination only found in dreams - now...
  May 3rd, 2017 04:10
• Evening Exhortations (Orchidee) Another great adaption.
  May 2nd, 2017 14:08
• Perhaps. (Fay Slimm.) Some read woven in your usual magical style.
  May 2nd, 2017 14:07
• Catch the fire (Tony36) Super little piece of work Tony.
  May 2nd, 2017 11:46
• Bird Bath (WriteBeLight) Super write
  May 2nd, 2017 11:43
• Covenant Arc. (Goldfinch60) Yet another great write.
  May 2nd, 2017 11:42
• MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) It\'s a fabulous museum - the Hermitage is probably my favourite - would...
  May 2nd, 2017 11:40
• LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Thanks All for your comments.
  May 2nd, 2017 05:52
• FADED (Michael Edwards) Thanks all for your kind words.
  May 1st, 2017 09:48
• Baby calves (Tony36) Mostly sheep in my neck of the woods but still quite a few cattle and such...
  May 1st, 2017 09:47
• What We Had. (Fay Slimm.) So well written - the pain of breaking up - can\'t imagine what is like to...
  May 1st, 2017 07:32
• Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight) And for me - pure coffee with milk or cream - properly made through a...
  May 1st, 2017 07:30
• Walking Into The Wood. (Goldfinch60) No woodland as such near me but surrounded in countryside where we can get...
  May 1st, 2017 02:35
• Like thinking (MendedFences27) My full attention too. Luckily we still say \'I love you\' and will be...
  April 30th, 2017 09:02
• My Sling Shot (WriteBeLight) Its also a useful tool to get rid of cats who cause so much havoc -...
  April 30th, 2017 08:57
• MAKE LOVE NOT WAR ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I much prefer to work with meter over rhyme and it works so well here.
  April 30th, 2017 05:26
• Acceptance. (Goldfinch60) A humbling poem which illustrates the strength you have in each other -...
  April 30th, 2017 01:53
• Bird Talk. (Fay Slimm.) Super poem to go with such a lovely little bird - don\'t see enough of...
  April 29th, 2017 13:24
• Check The Attitude (WriteBeLight) And many of us have come up against them - great ode.
  April 29th, 2017 11:22
• COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Welcome back and a great warning - why does no one in power take this...
  April 29th, 2017 05:45
• Awakening. (Goldfinch60) When I awake dying for a pee I know all\'s well - like the write
  April 29th, 2017 01:44
• Endeavouring Evangelists (Orchidee) Great metre and so well constructed - you\'re a master of these works.
  April 28th, 2017 09:30
• Lead Foot (WriteBeLight) Oh yes we all know them especially the ones with the so-called music...
  April 28th, 2017 06:05
• Jazz was Born. (Goldfinch60) Great stuff - it really does make me want to go along to a jazz concert -...
  April 28th, 2017 01:54
• Metallic marvels (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Great read - conjures up such great images.
  April 27th, 2017 15:36
• The Batter (Tony36) Great sense of movement - super write Tony
  April 27th, 2017 11:36
• Surrender. (Fay Slimm.) Great stuff Fay
  April 27th, 2017 09:26
• Phony Baloney With Swiss On Lies (WriteBeLight) Can\'t stand bovine excretia - cheesy bovine excretia is even worse. Good...
  April 27th, 2017 09:24
• Home, Love and Family. (Goldfinch60) Could have been written for me too - so well expressed.
  April 27th, 2017 04:44
• Brightness.. (Fay Slimm.) Paints a great picture Fay
  April 26th, 2017 23:52
• Svelte (WriteBeLight) Exercise every day but trouble is I enjoy a glass of wine or two with my...
  April 26th, 2017 23:51
• Reaching Perfection. (Goldfinch60) I always aim to improve towards the ultimate goal which I know is...
  April 26th, 2017 23:46
• Prayer Streams (Orchidee) Another superbly crafted piece.
  April 22nd, 2017 12:15