Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Death Grip (Lizzy Renee)
Love the structure - a good read.
May 4th, 2017 09:43 - Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight)
I keep an eye for wasps as they start to build nests (usually in the apex...
May 4th, 2017 09:38 - For Thine Eyes Only. (Fay Slimm.)
Had me sighing and reaching for the paper (yes I still write using a...
May 4th, 2017 09:35 - THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards)
Thanks all - actually the sketch was done in Latvia but I guess it could...
May 4th, 2017 05:02 - WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Currently I guess its 9 as its the only number that appears on my cars...
May 4th, 2017 04:25 - C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
you are preaching to converted here but do continue preaching - there are...
May 3rd, 2017 13:53 - The Stones Know. (Fay Slimm.)
Another great piece Fay
May 3rd, 2017 12:56 - Writer\'s Block NOT! (WriteBeLight)
Always manage to writesomething but there is often one hell of a block on...
May 3rd, 2017 12:54 - Other People\'s Voices (Garry)
Proverbial with deep dark overtones - yes I\'m with you Garry
May 3rd, 2017 04:12 - Island of Acceptance. (Goldfinch60)
A dream voyage to a magical destination only found in dreams - now...
May 3rd, 2017 04:10 - Evening Exhortations (Orchidee)
Another great adaption.
May 2nd, 2017 14:08 - Perhaps. (Fay Slimm.)
Some read woven in your usual magical style.
May 2nd, 2017 14:07 - Catch the fire (Tony36)
Super little piece of work Tony.
May 2nd, 2017 11:46 - Bird Bath (WriteBeLight)
Super write
May 2nd, 2017 11:43 - Covenant Arc. (Goldfinch60)
Yet another great write.
May 2nd, 2017 11:42 - MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It\'s a fabulous museum - the Hermitage is probably my favourite - would...
May 2nd, 2017 11:40 - LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards)
Thanks All for your comments.
May 2nd, 2017 05:52 - FADED (Michael Edwards)
Thanks all for your kind words.
May 1st, 2017 09:48 - Baby calves (Tony36)
Mostly sheep in my neck of the woods but still quite a few cattle and such...
May 1st, 2017 09:47 - What We Had. (Fay Slimm.)
So well written - the pain of breaking up - can\'t imagine what is like to...
May 1st, 2017 07:32 - Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight)
And for me - pure coffee with milk or cream - properly made through a...
May 1st, 2017 07:30 - Walking Into The Wood. (Goldfinch60)
No woodland as such near me but surrounded in countryside where we can get...
May 1st, 2017 02:35 - Like thinking (MendedFences27)
My full attention too. Luckily we still say \'I love you\' and will be...
April 30th, 2017 09:02 - My Sling Shot (WriteBeLight)
Its also a useful tool to get rid of cats who cause so much havoc -...
April 30th, 2017 08:57 - MAKE LOVE NOT WAR ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I much prefer to work with meter over rhyme and it works so well here.
April 30th, 2017 05:26 - Acceptance. (Goldfinch60)
A humbling poem which illustrates the strength you have in each other -...
April 30th, 2017 01:53 - Bird Talk. (Fay Slimm.)
Super poem to go with such a lovely little bird - don\'t see enough of...
April 29th, 2017 13:24 - Check The Attitude (WriteBeLight)
And many of us have come up against them - great ode.
April 29th, 2017 11:22 - COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Welcome back and a great warning - why does no one in power take this...
April 29th, 2017 05:45 - Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
When I awake dying for a pee I know all\'s well - like the write
April 29th, 2017 01:44 - Endeavouring Evangelists (Orchidee)
Great metre and so well constructed - you\'re a master of these works.
April 28th, 2017 09:30 - Lead Foot (WriteBeLight)
Oh yes we all know them especially the ones with the so-called music...
April 28th, 2017 06:05 - Jazz was Born. (Goldfinch60)
Great stuff - it really does make me want to go along to a jazz concert -...
April 28th, 2017 01:54 - Metallic marvels (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Great read - conjures up such great images.
April 27th, 2017 15:36 - The Batter (Tony36)
Great sense of movement - super write Tony
April 27th, 2017 11:36 - Surrender. (Fay Slimm.)
Great stuff Fay
April 27th, 2017 09:26 - Phony Baloney With Swiss On Lies (WriteBeLight)
Can\'t stand bovine excretia - cheesy bovine excretia is even worse. Good...
April 27th, 2017 09:24 - Home, Love and Family. (Goldfinch60)
Could have been written for me too - so well expressed.
April 27th, 2017 04:44 - Brightness.. (Fay Slimm.)
Paints a great picture Fay
April 26th, 2017 23:52 - Svelte (WriteBeLight)
Exercise every day but trouble is I enjoy a glass of wine or two with my...
April 26th, 2017 23:51 - Reaching Perfection. (Goldfinch60)
I always aim to improve towards the ultimate goal which I know is...
April 26th, 2017 23:46 - Prayer Streams (Orchidee)
Another superbly crafted piece.
April 22nd, 2017 12:15 - The Beauty of Tea and Scones. A Haiku (Garry)
So do I - Strawberry jam first then clotted cream on top. Oh yes - they...
April 22nd, 2017 12:15 - Counting Sheep. (Fay Slimm.)
What do sheep count when they can\'t get to sleep? And I love lamb...
April 22nd, 2017 12:12 - PYRAMIDS FROM SPACE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'ve not been there either - doubt if I\'ll ever make it now given the...
April 22nd, 2017 12:09 - Fighting for Peace? (Goldfinch60)
I\'m not a lover of using bad language gratuitously but it\'s not used...
April 22nd, 2017 01:25 - ARBOREAL HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great haikus - errrr monkey puzzle?
April 21st, 2017 10:17 - painted pony (Willyweed)
Love it Willy well crafted and so original.
April 21st, 2017 10:16 - Small Beginnings. (Fay Slimm.)
Not so keen on the Raphaelites myself but still recognise the skill in his...
April 21st, 2017 10:15 - Driven Drive (WriteBeLight)
If, at the end of the day, I can say I\'ve achieved something today no...
April 21st, 2017 10:11 - 4am and All\'s Well. (Garry)
Its great you came through and inspiration comes all sorts of experiences.
April 21st, 2017 10:08 - Healing Ourselves. (Goldfinch60)
Great observation in this super little poem - I am blessed in that I have...
April 21st, 2017 01:39 - Roses (Lucy)
A super one - wish it were one of mine.
April 20th, 2017 22:49 - The Boy Next Door (Garry)
I think you\'re taking the p**s - a sort of Clerihew? Whatever it is I...
April 20th, 2017 16:14 - When Love comes (Willyweed)
great stuff and love the tempo of it.
April 20th, 2017 14:30 - Foggy Fever (WriteBeLight)
and not a problem from me either - gone are the days of being at the...
April 20th, 2017 14:28 - Smitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Yup I enjoy
April 20th, 2017 14:22 - MY BUNNY RABBITS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I was raised on rabbit meat but regardless I enjoyed your poem and yes...
April 20th, 2017 02:52 - Stop and Look Back. (Goldfinch60)
So well put - yes appreciate the now and the view from where you are but...
April 20th, 2017 02:10 - In the Bath (Garry)
A smile to take to bed - love the short humorous ones
April 19th, 2017 16:07 - Home before dark (MendedFences27)
As an aside the forget-me-nots are in full bloom in my garden at the...
April 19th, 2017 14:37 - The Walk (A Nort the Newt story) (Tony36)
Sounds a bit like the walk my wife and I had this afternoon along a little...
April 19th, 2017 14:22 - E L E C T I O N S ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well put together Brian.
April 19th, 2017 14:19 - Fate Waits. (Fay Slimm.)
In fact I\'ve just returned to this one - I think I\'ll pop it in my...
April 19th, 2017 05:04 - Fate Waits. (Fay Slimm.)
We remember only what we want to remember in terms that may reinvent the...
April 19th, 2017 05:03 - False Politicians. (Goldfinch60)
Gave me a smile but I must say am pleased she has called it - I might be...
April 19th, 2017 01:27 - The Float Trip (A Nort the Newt Story) (Tony36)
Ah - how sweet.
April 18th, 2017 11:45 - DIAMONDS ~ Are a Girl\'s Best Friend (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Diamonds are good but rubies from my wife\'s country, Burma, are even...
April 18th, 2017 08:49 - Inside Breath. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely lovely words Fay - where do you find them? Great as always!!!!!
April 18th, 2017 08:45 - The Engineer and the Salesman (WriteBeLight)
Only profession ever wins all the time - the lawyer - I chose right but I...
April 18th, 2017 08:40 - Wasted On the Young (Garry)
So do I - can we do it together?
April 18th, 2017 03:33 - Feathers. (Goldfinch60)
Yes I enjoyed this - well written.
April 18th, 2017 02:37 - A Haiku a Day (Garry)
I eat an apple a day - and I went to the doctors a couple of weeks ago -...
April 17th, 2017 22:41 - Judging Others (A Nort the Newt Story) (Tony36)
Looking forward to the next chapter already - keep em coming.
April 17th, 2017 15:29 - Risen Recognition (Orchidee)
Superb construction as always.
April 17th, 2017 15:28 - don\'t hesitate (Willyweed)
Oh don\'t we all need it - well I do and I\'m so lucky to have it - great...
April 17th, 2017 15:27 - Night Rider (Maria Lees)
A powerful message to be read at great pace .
April 17th, 2017 08:25 - I am here, I am the storm (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Good one - enjoyed reading this.
April 17th, 2017 08:23 - No Limits. (Fay Slimm.)
Great Fay - yes as poets we can actually get away with so much by using...
April 17th, 2017 08:11 - Lyric-less (WriteBeLight)
When I get writers cramp I think maybe Mendelssohn had it right with his...
April 17th, 2017 08:07 - I AM A STREAM ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
T think its \'trinkle\' anyway I\'m all at sea at my age - yes a...
April 17th, 2017 08:01 - ... as a Friend (Jabberwocky)
A sort of sad smile
April 17th, 2017 05:13 - Thoughts While waiting for Chinese takeaway. (P.H.Rose)
Ah - \'take away\' and not that awful phrase \'to go\'. Funny how words...
April 17th, 2017 03:13 - Gnossienne. (Goldfinch60)
He certainly wrote some really superb piano pieces sadly much of his work...
April 17th, 2017 02:51 - My Easter Day (WriteBeLight)
Well its my birthday and we\'ve had a houseful including 5 kids since...
April 16th, 2017 14:10 - Daft Enough to Die (Garry)
For me I\'d wait until Friday - I\'m doing a watercolour demonstration for...
April 16th, 2017 14:03 - Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?) (Garry)
Good un Garry - golden or ear wax yellow?
April 15th, 2017 03:32 - The Roar of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Just great - a real tribute to this unheard piece.
The silent wind and...
April 15th, 2017 03:30 - The real reason for Brexit! (Tantumveritatum)
You forgot to mention that we need to learn speak at the top of our voices...
April 14th, 2017 14:42 - Suffering Saviour (Orchidee)
I can do no more than echo Ephraim\'s comments - super construction.
April 14th, 2017 14:34 - Lily of Easter (WriteBeLight)
I grow them in pots and was staking against the wind only yesterday -...
April 14th, 2017 06:40 - Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.)
I read it in silence - and what a good read it is.
April 14th, 2017 06:38 - GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great write Brian
April 14th, 2017 02:57 - The Last Station of The Cross. (Goldfinch60)
A stunning piece of writing - worthy of the occasion.
April 14th, 2017 02:56 - Little Old Church (WriteBeLight)
They say don\'t judge a book by its cover and this goes to buildings as...
April 13th, 2017 07:57 - A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Looks to be quite a challenge keeping it co-syllabic but this is great...
April 13th, 2017 05:48 - Wake-Up Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Afraid I have no love for cats but do love dogs so - yes - I can...
April 13th, 2017 05:40 - From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Great piece - you have encouraged me - I\'ve made a note of the form and...
April 13th, 2017 02:09 - Feeling Ill. (A haiku) (Garry)
Good one Garry - you might find it hard to believe but I\'ve only ever...
April 12th, 2017 14:10 - There was a young lady (Limerick) (Jabberwocky)
Only warts? Oh well - yup great limerick.
April 12th, 2017 11:20
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