Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards

• The Swan\'s Diversity. (Goldfinch60) I was there watching them as I read this - beautifully written G.
  June 3rd, 2017 03:40
• 3:10 A M (Swingline) Another little beauty and love the last stanza.
  June 3rd, 2017 01:02
• Awayness. (Fay Slimm.) Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the...
  June 2nd, 2017 12:24
• My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose) They are superb plants and to get one to bloom in our climate is quite...
  June 2nd, 2017 12:23
• Back of School. (Garry) Not sure my mind was on ice cream at the time - but it is now!
  June 2nd, 2017 10:36
• BARN OWL AWESOME ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such lovely creatures - I can forgive them their diet.
  June 2nd, 2017 08:18
• Tomorrow Will Do (Goldfinch60) Whilst I do agree with this (if something needs to be done I can\'t wait...
  June 2nd, 2017 01:43
• Thirty Years Later (Swingline) Beautiful write - really had me feeling emotionally about your position....
  June 2nd, 2017 01:21
• SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1 (Michael Edwards) Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be...
  June 2nd, 2017 00:09
• Young Love.... (P.H.Rose) This peels away the years - lovely write PH.
  June 1st, 2017 23:48
• PEACE (Louis Gibbs) Ah I\'m the same - in fact I am not a team player - If something has to be...
  June 1st, 2017 09:31
• The Old Home (Swingline) This really set the imagination working - another great write s.
  June 1st, 2017 06:29
• LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards) They do indeed - cheers Brian.
  June 1st, 2017 06:26
• HONEY BEES ~ BEAUTIFUL (BRIAN & ANGELA) I have a mug of hot steaming Twinings lemon and ginger with a spoonful of...
  June 1st, 2017 05:02
• Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.) Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
  June 1st, 2017 05:00
• The Glory of Jazz. (Goldfinch60) You\'ve painted a great picture - wish I\'d been there.
  June 1st, 2017 02:43
• A Single Rose (Tony36) A real good \'un Tony
  May 31st, 2017 15:51
• Available Access (Orchidee) Another gem O
  May 31st, 2017 15:49
• C U B A ~ An Island Paradise ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) An interesting one. The generally held western take on the Cuban missile...
  May 31st, 2017 04:35
• Which Path? (Goldfinch60) Life\'s dichotomy - I would travel off the beaten track looking for...
  May 31st, 2017 01:48
• My grave (ShannonXx) Beautifully written and expressed - a fine poem.
  May 31st, 2017 01:09
• I Pick Dandelions (Swingline) This is a delightful poem s - simple, unpretentious yet so beautiful - \'I...
  May 31st, 2017 00:53
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) This is so simply drafted and yet packs such a punch - but poets will...
  May 30th, 2017 13:43
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) This is so simply drafted and yet packs such a punch - but poets will...
  May 30th, 2017 13:43
• The Foley (Augustus) You show such spirit - may your god always be with you.
  May 30th, 2017 13:40
• Hug It Out (WriteBeLight) Let\'s keep fingers crossed. Where ever you\'re going - don\'t go.
  May 30th, 2017 12:53
• Having Self consciousness and Self doubt (P.H.Rose) This shows me that you are a special guy - such a great write from the...
  May 30th, 2017 11:57
• Colors ! (Swingline) You\'re a colourful character S - and a good write to go with it.
  May 30th, 2017 11:54
• PEACE OF THE DOVE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Will there ever be peace - not in my lifetime - such an eloquent write...
  May 30th, 2017 11:52
• Betweeness. (Fay Slimm.) Another superb offering - thanks so much for posting it Fay.
  May 30th, 2017 11:51
• All Greek To Me. (Goldfinch60) Reminds me of our apartment in Cyprus - so hospitable in the country...
  May 30th, 2017 11:49
• Delightful Dwellings (Orchidee) Construction, metre etc etc all perfect as always O
  May 29th, 2017 10:33
• The Parade (WriteBeLight) Our soldiers who have lost their lives have paid the ultimate price -...
  May 29th, 2017 10:32
• Wild Beauty.. (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve captured it Fay - A super part of the world and you make me want...
  May 29th, 2017 10:26
• Joy of Desolation (Swingline) You can buy many things but not the things that matter - great write.
  May 29th, 2017 08:21
• THE ICE CREAM MAN ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great write - I love the stuff but my waistline doesn\'t - oh the trials...
  May 29th, 2017 08:18
• The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60) I know you don\'t do these things to get thanked but it is so...
  May 29th, 2017 08:16
• Scathing (Baylee) less is more and this simple work packs a powerful punch.
  May 29th, 2017 00:26
• Fear of God (Swingline) A great short write s
  May 28th, 2017 10:27
• lived Life.... (P.H.Rose) Good read PH
  May 28th, 2017 08:57
• THE \\\\\\\"SHE\\\\\\\" (Rajkumar) Well written and an enjoyable read.
  May 28th, 2017 02:22
• Stillness Around Me (Goldfinch60) Ah - I will be there tonight doing just this (if it isn\'t raining and...
  May 28th, 2017 02:07
• Swings (Augustus) Good write Augustus,
  May 27th, 2017 10:43
• On the Nature of Daylight. (Goldfinch60) A new work to me and your words complement it so well.
  May 27th, 2017 10:38
• LIMONCELLO ~ LIQUEUR OF THE GODS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) It\'s a must whenever we are in Italy but you\'ve hit the nail on the head...
  May 27th, 2017 02:41
• Alcohol\'s next day... (P.H.Rose) Not a beer drinker but wine is another matter. Must have it with my...
  May 26th, 2017 20:12
• This is my crowd (Tony36) Sounds a great crowd to be with Tony.
  May 26th, 2017 20:09
• Back And Forth (WriteBeLight) I have a pending file of poems in which I keep work for review. They move...
  May 26th, 2017 20:08
• Nam (Augustus) Here\'s another Brit who\'s moved by it - it could be any battle zone -...
  May 26th, 2017 20:03
• Catching the Drift. (Fay Slimm.) Great write - I can hear the music.
  May 26th, 2017 10:02
• Emotional Precipitation (Swingline) Made me think - good write s.
  May 26th, 2017 09:54
• BRITISH CHEESE ~ DELICIOUS ! An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) We are blessed in the UK with some great cheeses - to hell with the...
  May 26th, 2017 09:53
• But Nothing is There. (Goldfinch60) Spooky indeed - great verse and do like the photo - might do a painting...
  May 26th, 2017 01:51
• Faith Flowings (Orchidee) Great write - I am in total admiration of your ability to continually...
  May 25th, 2017 12:59
• What\'s In A Bin (WriteBeLight) Here in the UK we now have to pay for plastic bags which used to be given...
  May 25th, 2017 12:57
• Love\'s Glow. (Fay Slimm.) Erotic comes more slowly these days but certainly sensuous - great write...
  May 25th, 2017 12:53
• Innocence (Swingline) It paints a picture - good work s
  May 25th, 2017 12:51
• PRAYER ~ A BLESSING (BRIAN & ANGELA) Even though it has no meaning for me, my wife is a catholic and I have...
  May 25th, 2017 02:10
• Nature\'s Bounteous World. (Goldfinch60) The sight of a murmuration of starlings in the evening sky is one of...
  May 25th, 2017 02:05
• Remember, Reflection and Reaction.only the first letter connects them... (P.H.Rose) Three little gems - great stuff PH
  May 24th, 2017 21:17
• Unmatched. (Fay Slimm.) Brian says it all - great piece of work Fay
  May 24th, 2017 21:14
• Leftovers (WriteBeLight) Absolutely and in our house there is no such thing as waste food - my wife...
  May 24th, 2017 06:59
• M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Another fine write for the grieving city - so pleased to see the leaders...
  May 24th, 2017 05:47
• Strengthened by Words. (Goldfinch60) Well written.-
  May 24th, 2017 02:55
• Muse Calling (Augustus) Great piece Augustus.
  May 23rd, 2017 15:12
• Table Manners (WriteBeLight) Spot on - even worse are people who talk with a mouthful. But as I said...
  May 23rd, 2017 15:11
• Judgement (ShannonXx) Spoken from the heart - I can feel every word.
  May 23rd, 2017 11:35
• Who Is God ? (Swingline) May your God always be with you S
  May 23rd, 2017 11:33
• SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet) (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great piece as a tribute to those affected by this terrible act of...
  May 23rd, 2017 11:31
• Bubbles (Tony36) I do like this - surprising what you can pack into a single line.
  May 23rd, 2017 11:28
• Watery Secrets. (Fay Slimm.) And Mr Toad ? great write Fay.
  May 23rd, 2017 11:25
• Words as I fall asleep... (P.H.Rose) good write
  May 23rd, 2017 07:06
• The Bubble. (Goldfinch60) My thoughts are with you - written with passion.
  May 23rd, 2017 07:05
• Freight Train (WriteBeLight) You paint it well - I can feel the frustration.
  May 22nd, 2017 20:46
• Rogation Tuesday (Orchidee) Super writing with such great metre.
  May 22nd, 2017 09:42
• Cook (Tony36) Great construction Tony
  May 22nd, 2017 09:39
• After Today. (Fay Slimm.) It is indeed elegant and what a great title repeated so expertly in the...
  May 22nd, 2017 09:38
• COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) So true with a great big \'but\' - if only.
  May 22nd, 2017 09:36
• Mary (Swingline) Love it - it gave me a great smile.
  May 22nd, 2017 09:34
• Struggle to Nobility. (Goldfinch60) And always aim above yourself - great write and so true.
  May 22nd, 2017 02:27
• Lazy Rags Day (P.H.Rose) I love clothes and only yesterday sorted out a load of old ones for the...
  May 21st, 2017 23:18
• New Glasses (WriteBeLight) I always getin a muddle choosing specs - so many to chose from - also only...
  May 21st, 2017 23:04
• A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.) Fine piece with a lovely flow to it.
  May 21st, 2017 10:31
• Sunlight - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Great piece = love it just as it is.
  May 21st, 2017 05:17
• THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Super piece of composition Brian.
  May 21st, 2017 05:14
• Hollow Reed (Swingline) It is indeed a fine piece of poetry
  May 21st, 2017 05:12
• Betrayal And Broken Trust (WriteBeLight) Sadly there are such men - and women if it comes to that .
  May 20th, 2017 07:20
• Troubesome Love (Swingline) Do like the format of this - it made me read it several times and it got...
  May 20th, 2017 05:33
• Poor Kevin (Garry) I know the feeling well - good un Garry - or is it Kevin?
  May 20th, 2017 05:29
• Soothingly Good. (Fay Slimm.) Super descriptive prose - I can see feel hear it all.
  May 20th, 2017 05:28
• Ludwig. (Goldfinch60) I know you like Mozart but for me Beethoven is way above him - my...
  May 20th, 2017 01:44
• FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Without friends life is empty - must get to know Ana Phoric - seems like...
  May 20th, 2017 01:41
• Only Love. (Fay Slimm.) Brighten my day as well - always look forward to reading yours and this is...
  May 19th, 2017 13:01
• Content (WriteBeLight) And try to relish every moment - well said WBL
  May 19th, 2017 06:02
• Under Jazz with Coffee (Swingline) Well I could do with sitting down enjoying both right now - good stuff S
  May 19th, 2017 06:00
• We....Walk past....Another day. (P.H.Rose) Work well together - good read.
  May 19th, 2017 04:39
• THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Seize it indeed - nice one B
  May 19th, 2017 04:36
• Breaking the Code. (Goldfinch60) The magic indeed - where would we be without it?
  May 19th, 2017 01:48
• Restless (WriteBeLight) Indeed the journey is the important thing as long as you remember where...
  May 18th, 2017 10:55
• PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) My folk tell me I\'m so laid back I\'m almost upside down. Mind you I do...
  May 18th, 2017 10:48