Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- New Glasses (WriteBeLight)
I always getin a muddle choosing specs - so many to chose from - also only...
May 21st, 2017 23:04 - A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.)
Fine piece with a lovely flow to it.
May 21st, 2017 10:31 - Sunlight - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Great piece = love it just as it is.
May 21st, 2017 05:17 - THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Super piece of composition Brian.
May 21st, 2017 05:14 - Hollow Reed (Swingline)
It is indeed a fine piece of poetry
May 21st, 2017 05:12 - Betrayal And Broken Trust (WriteBeLight)
Sadly there are such men - and women if it comes to that .
May 20th, 2017 07:20 - Troubesome Love (Swingline)
Do like the format of this - it made me read it several times and it got...
May 20th, 2017 05:33 - Poor Kevin (Garry)
I know the feeling well - good un Garry - or is it Kevin?
May 20th, 2017 05:29 - Soothingly Good. (Fay Slimm.)
Super descriptive prose - I can see feel hear it all.
May 20th, 2017 05:28 - Ludwig. (Goldfinch60)
I know you like Mozart but for me Beethoven is way above him - my...
May 20th, 2017 01:44 - FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Without friends life is empty - must get to know Ana Phoric - seems like...
May 20th, 2017 01:41 - Only Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Brighten my day as well - always look forward to reading yours and this is...
May 19th, 2017 13:01 - Content (WriteBeLight)
And try to relish every moment - well said WBL
May 19th, 2017 06:02 - Under Jazz with Coffee (Swingline)
Well I could do with sitting down enjoying both right now - good stuff S
May 19th, 2017 06:00 - We....Walk past....Another day. (P.H.Rose)
Work well together - good read.
May 19th, 2017 04:39 - THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Seize it indeed - nice one B
May 19th, 2017 04:36 - Breaking the Code. (Goldfinch60)
The magic indeed - where would we be without it?
May 19th, 2017 01:48 - Restless (WriteBeLight)
Indeed the journey is the important thing as long as you remember where...
May 18th, 2017 10:55 - PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
My folk tell me I\'m so laid back I\'m almost upside down. Mind you I do...
May 18th, 2017 10:48 - First new day.... (P.H.Rose)
There is still so much to look forward to if you are a cup-half-full...
May 18th, 2017 10:44 - Knowledge. (Goldfinch60)
Spot on G - and it is so important to pass that knowledge on wherever you...
May 18th, 2017 02:11 - Withering Lows (Swingline)
Ah sad - god write S
May 18th, 2017 01:26 - Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee)
Masterful construction as always O.
May 17th, 2017 21:06 - Waves (Swingline)
Great write full of imagery.
May 17th, 2017 21:03 - Bullies Never Grow Up (WriteBeLight)
Still so prevalent - especially bad among girls - sad world.
May 17th, 2017 09:37 - PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love it a bit too much - sometimes wish I was allergic to it for my...
May 17th, 2017 03:55 - The Innocence of Pens. (Goldfinch60)
A great piece G - when drawing I often use a twig dipped in ink - so...
May 17th, 2017 02:59 - Removed my rose tinted glasses (P.H.Rose)
I\'m lucky in that I do have a good friend and a wife who is part of me -...
May 17th, 2017 02:57 - A little longer (Garry)
We\'re both into short ones and this a real good un.
May 17th, 2017 02:55 - Fear of cowardice (P.H.Rose)
Great write to go with a great film.
May 16th, 2017 23:23 - Kingdom Kindlings (Orchidee)
Another great piece of composition O
May 16th, 2017 10:36 - Accord (Tony36)
Clever little composition and good message
May 16th, 2017 10:33 - Jimena and El Cid (Swingline)
Read it through twice - great read S
May 16th, 2017 10:32 - Plastered Poetry (WriteBeLight)
You\'re as daft as me - and I love it.
May 16th, 2017 10:31 - COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
One small thing every day - even just holding a door for someone - can...
May 16th, 2017 10:30 - Incoming. (Fay Slimm.)
My kind of language - great stuff Fay
May 16th, 2017 01:41 - The last Castle.... (P.H.Rose)
Good fun read - enjoyed it PH.
May 15th, 2017 20:09 - Hostage Hacks (WriteBeLight)
Hardly unexpected though - lets just hope the idiots behind it are found...
May 15th, 2017 12:35 - This Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
An absolute beauty Fay
May 15th, 2017 10:21 - BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
And yet another new form to have a go at - good one B.
May 15th, 2017 10:20 - Race for Love. (Goldfinch60)
Great reflections with which I have great affinity - well expressed.
May 15th, 2017 01:38 - Cold (Hale Strider)
Brian has it right when he calls it elegant - good piece and hope you\'ll...
May 15th, 2017 00:55 - Unsuccessful and boredom!!! (P.H.Rose)
I\'ll be away next month and wondering if its worth going - aw heck yes...
May 15th, 2017 00:53 - Body Language (Swingline)
Thought it was great until I got to the last two lines then I...
May 14th, 2017 13:54 - Mom (WriteBeLight)
Great write - oh how I miss mine. Now I\'ve come over all sad.
May 14th, 2017 07:08 - GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good one Brian - another form to add to my list of poems what I must
May 14th, 2017 07:01 - Elusive. (Goldfinch60)
Where time goes
no one knows
day then night
dark then light
or is it...
May 14th, 2017 02:11 - Two modest haikus (Garry)
just like you
I\'m good looking too
and I know its true
cos on...
May 13th, 2017 20:54 - Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 1 (Orchidee)
Great metre and so well constructed O
May 13th, 2017 12:04 - My World (Swingline)
Wish I\'d written this - a great write and a great read.
May 13th, 2017 12:03 - For The Victims (WriteBeLight)
It was Mothers day in the UK some weeks ago but otherwise it\'s the same...
May 13th, 2017 12:01 - Sea-Swell. (Fay Slimm.)
I an smell it I can taste it - great write fay.
May 13th, 2017 11:54 - Let\'s Get Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Great tribute.
May 13th, 2017 02:42 - Mothering. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s an enduring relationship (thankfully) for the vast majority - great...
May 12th, 2017 14:51 - Happy Mother\'s Day Hattie (WriteBeLight)
Super poem about a great bird.
May 12th, 2017 14:47 - Derelict (Jabberwocky)
Really moving - much enjoyed - thanks for posting it.
May 12th, 2017 03:51 - The Wall. (Goldfinch60)
Clever write to commemorate a great band - nice one Goldfinch.
May 12th, 2017 03:49 - 40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I also love Cash and Ireland especially with Irish in my immediate...
May 12th, 2017 03:48 - Mountain family holiday villa and Waves.. (P.H.Rose)
Beautiful area and a couple of great poems to do it justice.
May 11th, 2017 23:30 - Revealing Nothing (Garry)
I love these short ones - they often say more than several stanzas - And...
May 11th, 2017 09:42 - My Rocker. (Fay Slimm.)
I know that rocker - I have a mirror handed down from at least four...
May 11th, 2017 09:41 - Vials Vicissitudes* (Orchidee)
Read this without knowing or listening to the tune - great rhythm to the...
May 11th, 2017 09:38 - Never Kid Myself (WriteBeLight)
Only a fool fools himself (or herself!).
May 11th, 2017 09:36 - THE LANGUAGE OF GIFTS OF FLOWERS (N to Z) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You got there - great work B
May 11th, 2017 05:00 - Only Remembered. (Goldfinch60)
Great write - I don\'t know them but be assured I\'ll google them - just...
May 11th, 2017 02:07 - Break A Leg (Mandi)
Enjoyed this Mandi
May 11th, 2017 00:14 - The Shadow of my Passing (Garry)
It worked - good write Garry.
May 10th, 2017 23:39 - Oh My Captain (Swingline)
Good write swingline
May 10th, 2017 14:00 - Compatibility. (Fay Slimm.)
Great sentiment and love the last line.
May 10th, 2017 10:43 - Stay Young (WriteBeLight)
After a day of hard graft in the garden I feel I\'ve earned a bit of...
May 10th, 2017 10:42 - Mozart Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
I hate to say this but Mozart isn\'t top of my league - mine would be...
May 10th, 2017 10:39 - THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Been in the garden all morning trimming ivy, cutting grass, hoeing,...
May 10th, 2017 08:04 - Done With The Sick And Tired (WriteBeLight)
Whether the weather be wet or whether the weather be fine, I\'ll retire...
May 9th, 2017 13:42 - FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Not so sure about water
Why do folk drink water?
Water’s such a...
May 9th, 2017 13:37 - Orange and Yellow. (Goldfinch60)
As soon as I saw I thought \'Ah Rothko\'. Really do like this poem which...
May 9th, 2017 01:59 - Haiku. Growing darkness (Garry)
Great little piece Garry
May 8th, 2017 23:45 - BBQ (Tony36)
A short piece but something to get your teeth into
May 8th, 2017 10:57 - Have You Seen My Voice? (WriteBeLight)
To think I may not find it
is something that I fear
But what is that?...
May 8th, 2017 10:55 - CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Positivity - still looking forward to future achievements even in my...
May 8th, 2017 03:12 - Sunset of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Clouds really do bring beauty to the skies and certainly give me much...
May 8th, 2017 01:45 - INTO THE SUN (Michael Edwards)
Yes mucky feet its all that mayo
heigh ho, heigh ho, heigh ho, heigh ho.
May 7th, 2017 14:13 - Please Stop The Cough (WriteBeLight)
Allergies - don\'t they make you want to curse. I\'m not bothered by...
May 7th, 2017 11:51 - Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.)
Great writing Fay
May 7th, 2017 11:49 - Blossoms (Swingline)
Great message well expressed.
He’s a rose between thorns or so he...
May 7th, 2017 06:20 - PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
As you will appreciate I can\'t relate but I do appreciate the sentiments...
May 7th, 2017 02:13 - The Lily. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful verse with a lovely picture of Iris Siberica - the trouble is...
May 7th, 2017 02:10 - I knew it wasnt true (Mizzy)
Some great lines in this - good write,
May 6th, 2017 23:24 - Holy Helpings (Orchidee)
M M is only up the road from me - not a lover of pork pies but love...
May 6th, 2017 23:22 - Just Don\'t Film It (Garry)
Yup - my kind of poem also - good \'un
May 6th, 2017 23:19 - Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness (Swingline)
Yup - tis a good write
May 6th, 2017 07:59 - Have the Aliens Landed? (Goldfinch60)
There are such great feats of architure all around us if we only look up,...
May 6th, 2017 02:20 - DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards)
Must agree that good manners and dress sense do not necessarily go hand in...
May 6th, 2017 02:05 - DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards)
My wife and I love dining out in PROPER restaurants but it is so...
May 6th, 2017 00:12 - Ode to an Ant (Lizzy Renee)
A difficult one as I never intentionally or knowingly kill any life form...
May 5th, 2017 23:27 - Think Before You Kink (WriteBeLight)
We\'ve got cordless vacuum cleaners and the hose is on a reel said he...
May 5th, 2017 11:01 - RAINBOW OF ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'ve already seen some in bloom in my neck of the woods - yes you must...
May 5th, 2017 10:58 - Remembering Natures Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Just returned from a cross country walk with my wife - scenes such as this...
May 5th, 2017 10:54 - PLANS FOR TONIGHT (Michael Edwards)
A few words to explain this little ditty for anyone not familiar with old...
May 5th, 2017 00:17 - Ode to Rain (Ed Ward)
Ed - a great attempt and clearly you have the ability to make great...
May 4th, 2017 14:26 - Life\'s fight (Tony36)
Small piece - big message - well put.
May 4th, 2017 12:22
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