Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Letter to the Priviledged (SerenWise)
\"Age does not bring wisdom
If you grow old with your ears and...
September 27th, 2019 01:00 - Praise (Thewayiwrite)
Good write but most angels are good and kind.
Welcome to MPS.
September 27th, 2019 00:58 - Graveyard of Dreams (FredPeyer)
Those last two lines say it all, joy is within us, show it to all.
September 27th, 2019 00:55 - Uncontained (Poetic Dan)
That love is so pure, keep on dancing Dan, keep on dancing.
September 27th, 2019 00:54 - Country music is dead (Theparkangel)
We can still listen to real Country of course but the modern country...
September 27th, 2019 00:52 - Breathe (Alta H Haffner)
Breathe in the glory of each moment, moments are so important in our...
September 27th, 2019 00:45 - Serenity (Clara)
That peace and light in sleep is so calming. Good write.
September 27th, 2019 00:44 - worth it? (Dusk arising)
They surely are.
September 27th, 2019 00:42 - My Poetic Side (MPS) (Nafis Light)
It surely does bring out that special side within us.
September 26th, 2019 04:36 - Poppies (Neville)
โWE WILL REMEMBER THEM.โ
September 26th, 2019 04:35 - HARVEST IN 19th CENTURY AMERICA ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write, harvest is such a wonderful time
...
September 26th, 2019 04:34 - Fight or Flight (Suicidekitten)
Very emotive write but if you keep writing those feelings will son turn...
September 26th, 2019 04:30 - Stones Know. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, I was there.
That is a great picture as...
September 26th, 2019 04:27 - Pensive Prosperings (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. Those Taize chants can be quite compelling, I have sung...
September 26th, 2019 04:24 - THE END YEARS (Michael Edwards)
That love will never end Michael.
I like the painting.
September 26th, 2019 01:19 - remember (Jon Nakapalau)
Like the butterfly flapping its wings.
September 26th, 2019 00:31 - Write on your own wall, I will not fall (Poetic Dan)
Your life has changed, a life now full of joy, hope, love and a future....
September 26th, 2019 00:29 - Our Rocky (Rrodriguez)
May her dancing continue for a very long time.
September 26th, 2019 00:26 - Phobias and Fears (Luke Cresswell)
Phobias are within many people but many learn to deal with them and move...
September 26th, 2019 00:25 - The Crossing (Clara)
That eternal peace will be forever with you.
September 26th, 2019 00:23 - Deciduous (Neville)
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and...
September 26th, 2019 00:20 - Coveted. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write Fay, we owe them so much.
September 26th, 2019 00:17 - OUT OF THE MOUTHS OF BABES ! ๐งก ANGELA ๐ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
WE are ruining her future but those in power don\'t care, all they want is...
September 26th, 2019 00:15 - Snare Snapped (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 26th, 2019 00:12 - guilty (Dusk arising)
Those in power do not want to do anything as they might lose power and...
September 25th, 2019 02:50 - Gilded (SerenWise)
Wonderful and very true words.
September 25th, 2019 02:48 - Sound of silence (Vanessa wallace)
Even without a voice you can always make yourself heard by people who
September 25th, 2019 02:48 - Colors of the Rainbow (FredPeyer)
Those paths are there for us to explore and there is beauty and wonder...
September 25th, 2019 02:45 - JC POLYTICIAN ~ TOO SOCIALIST ? ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ FOUR SEXTETS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
How do you know when a politician is lying?
Their lips move!
September 25th, 2019 02:44 - These Words (Neville)
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43 - Prayer Perseverings (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi
September 25th, 2019 01:07 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Haffner)
Dinner for one can be so sad.
September 24th, 2019 01:24 - Morpho (SerenWise)
Must be love.
September 24th, 2019 00:51 - The Greatest Love (Vvnrose)
Beautiful loving write, your child (children?) will be forever blessed...
September 24th, 2019 00:50 - Clueless (FredPeyer)
Your destiny is calling and that happiness is there.
September 24th, 2019 00:48 - Demented (Vanessa wallace)
For one so young these words show how the horror in this world is reaching...
September 24th, 2019 00:43 - Stashed (Neville)
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38 - Healing (Meg)
You are so right to have the balance now, that balance will give you...
September 24th, 2019 00:24 - Placed in your hand (Poetic Dan)
Your words show the wonder that is in your life and that wonder will be...
September 24th, 2019 00:22 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
Your colourful words take me to that place. I like Stilton as well. LOL.
September 23rd, 2019 02:08 - M I C H I G A N ~ I N ~ F A L L ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ An ~ 8 2 4 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Autumn is my favourite time of the year and I am sure it is marvellous in...
September 23rd, 2019 02:07 - Meditative Missive (Orchidee)
May that teaching lead you well on your path of righteousness.
September 23rd, 2019 02:04 - Waiting (Alta H Haffner)
Superb Haiku.
September 23rd, 2019 02:03 - Christina (Jinn)
Such a sad time for you but she will forever be within you.
Welcome to...
September 23rd, 2019 02:02 - i read you (Dusk arising)
Beautiful emotive write d a, if it wasn\'t for poetry where would we be,...
September 23rd, 2019 01:56 - Lo que siento (Vanessa wallace)
That love will continue forever as will your wonderful words.
September 23rd, 2019 00:08 - the wall around your heart (Jon Nakapalau)
Those shattered dreams WERE there, but they will dull and finding the...
September 23rd, 2019 00:07 - Rock House of light you can call home (Poetic Dan)
You have come a long way Dan, keep going forward in the joy you have found...
September 22nd, 2019 13:46 - While Days Dawn (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi
September 22nd, 2019 13:45 - I made a vow (Alta H Haffner)
I hope that closeness never fails.
September 22nd, 2019 13:42 - Beginnings. (Goldfinch60)
Your new beginnings will be there soon, great month October, the month I...
September 22nd, 2019 13:40 - Inner child be free (Poetic Dan)
Having kids is so wonderful and so inspiring.
September 22nd, 2019 13:38 - Splitting Hairs (Neville)
May that moon by ours forever.
September 22nd, 2019 13:37 - escape (Dusk arising)
That alternative world is wonderful.
September 22nd, 2019 13:36 - Celestial City - New Jerusalem (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi, we will all be there at the end.
September 22nd, 2019 13:35 - LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2 (Michael Edwards)
So true Michael, never pass a loo!
September 22nd, 2019 13:33 - Boundless Admiration. (Goldfinch60)
Yes the do a wonderful job and I have no worries about Joyce being there.
September 22nd, 2019 13:28 - A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville)
That space will be filled with your Spirit for the rest of us to honour...
September 21st, 2019 01:13 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write in these days of increasing fires in nature.
September 21st, 2019 00:28 - May I Kindly (Hidden)
Good write that sounds like a proposal, do you have the ring.
September 21st, 2019 00:26 - River of love, that\'s now joined all of us! (Poetic Dan)
What a wonderful feeling, new life in your world is beautiful. Your life...
September 21st, 2019 00:13 - BORROWING & LENDING ๐งก A SONNET ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It is often the that you never see things again. There are trustworthy...
September 21st, 2019 00:07 - Presenting Praises (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 20th, 2019 23:59 - PEGGITY PEG (Michael Edwards)
Good fun write Peggity - oops Michael.
September 20th, 2019 01:40 - Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising)
Your Faith is your own as mine now is go the way that it leads you and all...
September 20th, 2019 01:37 - Interlude (FredPeyer)
Wonderful loving write Fred, may it go on forever.
September 20th, 2019 01:36 - Scars of Hope (WL Schuett)
Those scars may be there but they show the healing of your body and Your...
September 20th, 2019 01:35 - Kintsugi (้็ถใ) (SerenWise)
That jigsaw is now complete.
September 20th, 2019 01:33 - Help (Vanessa wallace)
You will never be alone as the people on this site care for you as they...
September 20th, 2019 01:27 - Pillar in my world (Poetic Dan)
Such a wonderful poem full of love and happiness. Your home is wonderful...
September 20th, 2019 01:25 - There Are Those (Neville)
... that write in rhyme
and verse
There are those where...
September 20th, 2019 01:23 - JOY OF WOODLAND SOUNDS ๐งก A 6 8 SONNET ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Natures vision and sounds are just wonderful.
September 20th, 2019 01:13 - Naked Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay, like Unsub and others I think that first line is...
September 20th, 2019 00:59 - Revival Request (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi and a wonderful tune, good to see you chose the Cat Stevens...
September 19th, 2019 02:44 - CYPRUS (Michael Edwards)
One of my friends has just came back from Cyprus, had a wonderful time. ...
September 19th, 2019 00:44 - ridiculous organism (Dusk arising)
There is a fineness in us all but many are too self indulgent to see it...
September 19th, 2019 00:42 - Perky pyramids (Alta H Haffner)
Yes love is beautiful, more so if you can avoid the beautiful pyramids and...
September 19th, 2019 00:40 - Need (SerenWise)
That love is so strong and will go on to eternity.
September 19th, 2019 00:35 - Waiting Game (FredPeyer)
Yes that could be me, that last stanza is so true.
September 19th, 2019 00:32 - Beauty (Vanessa wallace)
You will never be alone when you can write words like this.
You are...
September 19th, 2019 00:30 - je t\'aime (Alta H Haffner)
Merci Mademoiselle.
September 18th, 2019 04:48 - CONTENTMENT & HAPPINESS ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My blessings are always there when I awake every day. Each moment is...
September 18th, 2019 04:46 - Outs. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful words about a fabulous time of the day, you may not have been...
September 18th, 2019 04:44 - Good Time Girl (Neville)
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to...
September 18th, 2019 04:43 - Light After The Darkness (Meg)
That lightness will always there for you Meg.
September 18th, 2019 04:37 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
I am still waiting. Good write though Orchi.
September 18th, 2019 04:35 - there was a boy (Dusk arising)
Very telling write d a, it may be that I was fortunate in my childhood as...
September 18th, 2019 04:34 - I respect but don\'t trust (Poetic Dan)
Trust is so wonderful when it is there but once it is broken it is so hard...
September 18th, 2019 00:41 - What is boring? (Canticle)
With your thoughts written in words like these there is no way that you...
September 18th, 2019 00:36 - Twice tomorrow (Jeffrey Roy)
That love flows from your words and will go on for eternity,
September 18th, 2019 00:34 - Happiness (Vanessa wallace)
Happiness is within you Rose, you said it yourself when you said you think...
September 18th, 2019 00:18 - Fondly and Truly (Neville)
Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always...
September 17th, 2019 13:19 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
I see beauty and wonder in your words Fay.
September 17th, 2019 13:17 - BAREFOOT IN ANDALUCIA ๐งก ANGELA ๐งก BLANK VERSE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOvely write and memories Angela.
September 17th, 2019 13:17 - evening descends (Dusk arising)
Sonata is fine the nocturne is sung by the robin. It is so wonderful to...
September 17th, 2019 13:15 - REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards)
I have just burst out laughing - I wonder if the neighbours heard...
September 17th, 2019 01:43 - Walk your path well (Poetic Dan)
Super write, we should each walk our path with respect to others.
September 17th, 2019 01:41 - The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Haffner)
Superb Haiku Alta.
September 17th, 2019 00:52 - The Vow (SerenWise)
Beautiful.
September 17th, 2019 00:51 - Slowly (TheLonelyPoet90)
From those ashes new life will come and the wonder of that life is yours...
September 17th, 2019 00:49
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