Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Flowing forward while going back (Poetic Dan)
Each of those blocked paths in our lives do get opened and as we go...
September 17th, 2019 00:47 - Technology (Rohan)
By the way, Welcome to MPS.
September 17th, 2019 00:45 - Technology (Rohan)
Well written and so true, technology has taken over many peoples lives, we...
September 17th, 2019 00:42 - Out (Vanessa wallace)
Be true to yourself, your Mother loves you, she will accept it.
September 17th, 2019 00:38 - What women need 101 (Alta H Haffner)
May your needs be fulfilled with love (and good coffee of course).
September 17th, 2019 00:30 - the milk bar (Dusk arising)
Super write, of course he would recognise her.
September 17th, 2019 00:29 - Client (Neville)
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen...
September 17th, 2019 00:27 - Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write of a sad tale Fay.
September 17th, 2019 00:24 - In Whaley Bridge (Kevin Michael Bloor)
It is obviously your wondrous place, your heaven on earth.
September 16th, 2019 15:33 - Protective Power (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 16th, 2019 01:51 - WORDLESS (Michael Edwards)
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September 16th, 2019 01:51 - Ready-Made Muse (SerenWise)
An artwork so personal to you Serenwise.
September 16th, 2019 01:21 - navigating past the horizon (Jon Nakapalau)
Those memories are so fulfilling Jon.
When you get to the horizon never...
September 16th, 2019 01:19 - London to Brighton 100k (FineB)
May the strength in your mind that helped you complete the walk always be...
September 16th, 2019 01:17 - Misty Waters (Ron parrish aka wordman)
That freedom of Your Spirit is always with you - freedom is yours.
September 16th, 2019 01:13 - I\'ve Come Too Far To Quit Now (AndrewsPoetry)
You have come through those bumpy and rocky roads and the road ahead may...
September 16th, 2019 00:55 - Strange September Sunset (Kevin Michael Bloor)
May that wonder fill us with glory.
September 16th, 2019 00:50 - It\'s in the art (Poetic Dan)
Art seen by one may not be that seen by others.
September 16th, 2019 00:35 - Reminders. (Fay Slimm.)
Those times were so hard that we have no real idea except through what we...
September 16th, 2019 00:33 - Inside Her Pants (Neville)
Has romance left your world Neville,
Perhaps you never gave it a...
September 16th, 2019 00:27 - IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO 💙 BRIAN ANGELA🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It\'s a pity your god doesn\'t look my way!!
September 15th, 2019 02:21 - Nature Nurturings (Orchidee)
Good write but that last stanza appears to not mean much to many in our...
September 15th, 2019 02:20 - never (Jon Nakapalau)
So true.
September 15th, 2019 01:45 - Reverie. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful Fay, that liveliness is just the place to be between after a...
September 15th, 2019 01:43 - Guineas And Other Friends (Orchidee)
You and your guinea pigs are great friends almost as friendly as you were...
September 15th, 2019 01:28 - Food for Thought (Neville)
Ah breakfast!
September 15th, 2019 01:17 - She found me in the grass (Poetic Dan)
Our life within us is the one we have and your life has become so good...
September 15th, 2019 01:08 - AS AUTUMN TURNS (Michael Edwards)
I can see your words in my mind, wonderful.
Wonderful painting,...
September 14th, 2019 00:44 - My son, Jaden (Alta H Haffner)
\" I love you
......
September 14th, 2019 00:28 - my (Jon Nakapalau)
May
those
wishes
still
come
true
in
our
wonderful
lives.
September 14th, 2019 00:25 - La Rêverie (SerenWise)
What a wonderful poem SerenWise, your words show the strength that love...
September 14th, 2019 00:23 - Teardrops From My Eyes. (Kevin browne)
Great words Kevin. Love is wonderful.
September 14th, 2019 00:21 - Head to toe (Jeffrey Roy)
Beautiful loving write, may your lives go on forever.
September 14th, 2019 00:20 - Defeated (Poem Goals)
Strong emotive write. Do not be afraid to cry as it shows the love that...
September 14th, 2019 00:19 - Welcome yourself in (Poetic Dan)
Very true Dan, all are welcome at my home.
September 13th, 2019 14:53 - MyLife (Purdy61)
A very emotive write well written.
September 13th, 2019 14:52 - Solo. (Fay Slimm.)
Being on your own, as I virtually am now you need not feel lonely, there...
September 13th, 2019 14:50 - PARADISE 🧡 ANGELA 💙 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 6 4 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It will not take much for you both to live in New Zealand will it.
September 13th, 2019 14:47 - Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 13th, 2019 14:45 - swollen breakers (Dusk arising)
Amazing words d a.
September 13th, 2019 01:17 - Disinterested (Neville)
Yes you can have a moment, but not a moment more.
September 13th, 2019 01:16 - Downtown Girl (Laura🌻)
Such an emotive write. A very sad day and strange. In my office the...
September 13th, 2019 01:15 - Reclaimed (Christina K)
Belief can be a rocky road which you seem to be coping with.
My belief...
September 13th, 2019 01:10 - Hurt (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Those paths in our lives can be so diverse but the path we eventually find...
September 13th, 2019 01:07 - Life is not a race (Crystal Hope)
life certainly is not a race, we all take our own time but be sure to...
September 13th, 2019 01:04 - Heartbreak (Vanessa wallace)
Such a heartfelt write Rose, lost loves can be hard to deal with but be...
September 13th, 2019 01:00 - big old moon (love) (Dusk arising)
Superb loving write d a.
September 13th, 2019 00:58 - Wanted and needed are not the same (Poetic Dan)
Great last stanza Dan, you know where you are going in your life gained...
September 13th, 2019 00:57 - THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards)
Such a sad emotive write Michael.
Still like that artwork (see your...
September 12th, 2019 01:47 - FOOD FOR THOUGHT ~ A 3 4 7 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Similar to Michael I cook all my own food and use everything, if there is...
September 12th, 2019 01:42 - Correction (Neville)
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
\"In my life I am more often...
September 12th, 2019 01:23 - Heretic (SerenWise)
Wonderful write, may those demons soon be dismissed.
September 12th, 2019 01:21 - Un Chien Andalou (Jon Nakapalau)
There is so much out there that people look at but never see.
September 12th, 2019 01:14 - The end of it all (Vanessa wallace)
Your words are so strong, yes our life on earth will end but before that...
September 12th, 2019 01:12 - opposites (Dusk arising)
Yes opposites do attract, I have some friends who are like that, you just...
September 12th, 2019 00:56 - Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.)
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me...
September 12th, 2019 00:52 - IN LABORATORIES ~ A 2 12 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Having worked as an analytical chemist I know the dangers but I survived...
September 11th, 2019 13:55 - I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan)
What a powerful write Dan. I do hope that your daughter is OK. I also hope...
September 11th, 2019 02:25 - Never Not Once (Neville)
Such an emotive write Neville. Sometimes we just cannot see into the real...
September 11th, 2019 02:15 - Luminous Light - 3 (Orchidee)
May that light always show us the right way in our lives.
September 11th, 2019 02:12 - mine (Justanotherdumblonde)
May that love be seen in you and their control releases their love for
September 11th, 2019 00:33 - To the heavens (Alta H Haffner)
That belief is strong in you so you WILL love again.
September 11th, 2019 00:32 - Gotta be strong (A passing lyric)
Stay strong and proud.
September 11th, 2019 00:29 - Never really knew (Jeffrey Roy)
True love never fades away it only gets stronger.
September 11th, 2019 00:28 - Finding Moments (Christina8)
Beautiful loving write.
September 10th, 2019 14:55 - Get out of my head (Vanessa wallace)
Sorry but your words compel me to be there.
September 10th, 2019 14:52 - Best Friends (Neville)
A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and...
September 10th, 2019 14:52 - LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good work A and B, have never Ben outside Europe so have not been to...
September 10th, 2019 14:49 - Constant. (Fay Slimm.)
That courage can always be seen on their faces. Good write Fay.
September 10th, 2019 14:45 - No fear (Poetic Dan)
As you know as I do My Spirit will go on for eternity, see you there Dan.
September 10th, 2019 14:43 - Dandelion wishes (Alta H Haffner)
May your wishes come true Alta.
September 10th, 2019 02:11 - Search Me, See Me (Orchidee)
May that e\'erlasting day last fore\'er.
September 10th, 2019 02:10 - last dance (Dusk arising)
Clever!
https://youtu.be/n-XQ26KePUQ
September 10th, 2019 02:08 - RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards)
Well, are you?
First laugh of the day Michael - thank you.
September 10th, 2019 00:48 - TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes the seasons are so distinctive by the look of the trees, we are just...
September 10th, 2019 00:36 - Empty hallways (Dakota)
That life may be dark but if you look in that mirror there will be a...
September 10th, 2019 00:29 - End of her time (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful loving write. She will always be with you and will be there with...
September 10th, 2019 00:24 - look back (Dusk arising)
Another wonderful write d a.
Linger on.
September 10th, 2019 00:21 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
Your words transported me to the beauty and wonder of that place Fay. ...
September 10th, 2019 00:19 - Lion heart meets its match (Chris Yellow)
Bravery is not always having to fight somebody. Good write.
September 10th, 2019 00:18 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
September 10th, 2019 00:16 - Words Of Worship (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 9th, 2019 01:35 - May I? (Mr Taylar)
Wonderful love lorn words.
September 9th, 2019 01:08 - I’ll stay quiet (A passing lyric)
I am quite happy to walk beside you and listen.
September 9th, 2019 01:07 - embers falling on frost (Jon Nakapalau)
But that embrace will be remembered for eternity.
September 9th, 2019 01:05 - Ageing (Jeremy Leach)
Super write - that is me to a t. Thank you for sharing your words.
September 9th, 2019 01:04 - confidence (Dusk arising)
This is so deep, I too needed to read it several times in different ways,...
September 9th, 2019 00:50 - Birdie Dan (Poetic Dan)
The view from above is so wondrous that is why when I come back I want to...
September 9th, 2019 00:44 - Rainbows Over You. (Kevin browne)
Brilliant Kevin.
September 9th, 2019 00:41 - Elation to Desolation (Clara)
That balance in life can be difficult to achieve in some circumstances but...
September 9th, 2019 00:40 - Hopeful Harvest (Orchidee)
We have just started rehearsing the Harvest Anthem that we, the Church...
September 8th, 2019 02:25 - Infinite beauty (Alta H Haffner)
Good Haiku Alta.
September 8th, 2019 01:16 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Such truth in those words Neville.
September 8th, 2019 01:15 - IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards)
Yes it is what you do Michael and what you have shown this morning is...
September 8th, 2019 00:55 - My Shadow Work ;) (Vvnrose)
To see what is there we must look deeply within ourselves to see the real...
September 8th, 2019 00:50 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Tick.
I had to put that in as it seemed to be missing Andrew.
Andy.
September 8th, 2019 00:42 - Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional) (Poetic Dan)
Such an emotive write and so true of music, it can bring all emotions to...
September 8th, 2019 00:41 - God Paradox (Chris Yellow)
As many on this site know I have recently gone through a transformation in...
September 8th, 2019 00:31 - Victory Vindication (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 8th, 2019 00:26 - smouldered (Dusk arising)
So much said in so few emotive lines d a.
September 8th, 2019 00:26
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