Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Totally Trusting (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
August 4th, 2019 01:53 - Ocean (Canticle)
Wonderful loving write.
August 4th, 2019 00:44 - Build A Life As They Will (Teek)
That life they will build with the love of family before them.
August 4th, 2019 00:43 - Cause Of Life (Baddaytobealive)
Very emotive write and very well written.
It is obviously hard for you...
August 4th, 2019 00:42 - Summertime (Harsbars12281953)
Yes summer is here and there is nothing quite as relaxing as sitting...
August 4th, 2019 00:36 - Rock Chick (FineB)
Boone FineB, May her life be ful of rock n roll.
August 3rd, 2019 14:23 - Retrospect (Jabberwocky)
Some decisions are made in error but only experience can tell us where...
August 3rd, 2019 14:21 - takes me there (Dusk arising)
One of the strongest senses for remembering the past is smell. May those...
August 3rd, 2019 14:20 - Elders are the question, youth are the answer (Poetic Dan)
That life will be renewed as the youngster will show you the way to a...
August 3rd, 2019 14:18 - ONLY THE LONELY ....... ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ INTERNAL RHYME LAMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That time ‘til May arrives will go quickly and the wedding bells will...
August 3rd, 2019 14:16 - Any Colour at All (Neville)
Super write Neville, colours are so important in our lives, may the...
August 3rd, 2019 14:13 - Help And Hope (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, I like the last line of verse two.
August 3rd, 2019 14:11 - Sculpting (PoeticBiscuit)
Very strong write PB. In our lives we do have the bad times but the idea...
August 3rd, 2019 00:59 - Tended. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful Fay, that sight came into my mind.
August 3rd, 2019 00:31 - A Gift of Seasons (Neville)
Wonderful piece Neville I am sure there will be many more summers in your...
August 3rd, 2019 00:25 - Who covers the young ears, explicit language (Poetic Dan)
Racism and bad language just will not go away.
A few years ago I was...
August 3rd, 2019 00:24 - THE SENSE O\' TOUCH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 3 5 1 5 Acoustic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Touch is so important in our lives.
August 2nd, 2019 15:34 - Blessings Benefits (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
It is a good tune but if you tell anybody that I said...
August 2nd, 2019 02:09 - HUMAN DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
Good one Michael, the other thing we would need is a computer inside us...
August 2nd, 2019 01:24 - Facade (Christina8)
Most of us wear masks in differing situations, may your facade soon become...
August 2nd, 2019 01:20 - Fool I am.... (Suresh)
Fool your not as age has seen you into your long life.
August 2nd, 2019 01:19 - Jam (Jabberwocky)
Good emotive write, I will always have some jam to share J.
August 2nd, 2019 01:17 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
Happy Birthday to Rainbow Ninja. Your love for her shines through your...
August 2nd, 2019 01:15 - Unwrapped. (Fay Slimm.)
Happiness
was opening the poem
and seeing words,
Composed with love and...
August 2nd, 2019 01:10 - Light Of Life (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
August 2nd, 2019 01:00 - UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
It is amazing how much wisdom can be passed through silence.
August 2nd, 2019 00:59 - AN AFTERNOON TEA ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 9 3 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
WE drink tea mane with tealeaves, it is Rwanda/Burundi which is a stronger...
August 2nd, 2019 00:57 - the love of birdsong (Dusk arising)
Those birds soings are all part of Nature\'s Symphony where there are...
August 2nd, 2019 00:51 - Fonts and Guises (Neville)
That range of fonts and guises is immeasurable in our world of words, as...
August 2nd, 2019 00:49 - her weakness (Dusk arising)
You’ll find me by the cheese counter!
July 31st, 2019 04:59 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good fun write but as I haven’t been out of the country, unless you...
July 31st, 2019 04:58 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
Those shards can be formed together which is what you are doing and the...
July 31st, 2019 04:55 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
WOW!
I was totally mesmerised by this,
May that song go on forever.
July 31st, 2019 04:52 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
Strong write Neville, those images seen from afar are so important to us...
July 31st, 2019 04:49 - Creative Considerings (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 31st, 2019 04:45 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
So true Suresh.
July 31st, 2019 01:14 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
I can see the sense in that but each moment that you are in should be...
July 31st, 2019 01:14 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
We drink both tea and coffee. The tea we have is proper tea, none of this...
July 31st, 2019 01:13 - Thirst. (Fay Slimm.)
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our...
July 31st, 2019 00:41 - On finding Truth (Neville)
Those truths must always be seen by those in the future.
July 31st, 2019 00:38 - A speck (Poetic Dan)
In this time those who have the power to enable the peoples of the world...
July 30th, 2019 02:38 - Peace With God (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. But you know my current feelings about Christianity are...
July 30th, 2019 02:33 - Missing you (Jessicaendingxo)
Emotive write.
Welcome to MPS.
July 30th, 2019 00:52 - My Daily Joker Workout (Nafis Light)
I once thought about going to the gym but I went and lay down in a...
July 30th, 2019 00:49 - I Met Aphrodite (PoeticBiscuit)
Don\'t upset Hephaestus, Medusa may only turn you to stone, he will cut...
July 30th, 2019 00:47 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
They are probably as fit as I am Michael.
July 30th, 2019 00:41 - Shards of Knowledge (Suresh)
Those shards of knowledge will eventually come together into a meaningful...
July 30th, 2019 00:38 - Crab Apples (Gerry_gardendick)
Salty as it would have to be in the sea.
Welcome to MPS.
July 30th, 2019 00:24 - LADY IN RED ~ BRIAN ~ 4 QUATRAINS plus line one repeat ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That lady in red will be your colourful lover for ever Brian.
July 29th, 2019 15:16 - Mom (British tea)
In this day and age the acceptance of gender changing it must be accepted...
July 29th, 2019 15:15 - Learnt Curves. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful love lorn write Fay.
July 29th, 2019 15:13 - Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain (Poetic Dan)
Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.
July 29th, 2019 15:12 - Guiding Grace (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
July 29th, 2019 02:09 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Wonderful write Neville. Those times past with the lady of your life are...
July 29th, 2019 02:08 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
May those interpretations always bring the joy that is shown in your...
July 29th, 2019 02:06 - The Fall (Christina8)
Your new experimentations with words all seem to working Christina.
July 29th, 2019 02:05 - The Scales Don\'t Lie (DesertWords)
My first laugh of the day - thank you.
Where is that chocolate pie?
July 29th, 2019 02:02 - sorrow (Jon Nakapalau)
That sorrow can be deflected by the light.
July 29th, 2019 02:00 - Essence of Love (Renu)
May that love be forever with us.
July 29th, 2019 02:00 - Beyond Me (Keonna)
The stillness we can create within ourselves can help us comprehend our...
July 29th, 2019 01:59 - Escape (Khadija Ajaoud)
May that beauty be alwasy with you as it is in your words.
Welcome to
July 29th, 2019 01:57 - Society (British tea)
Very good write, many people are too self centred to help others, it is a...
July 28th, 2019 15:25 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
That love shines through your words and it will go on for eternity.
July 28th, 2019 15:22 - And They Called Her Iris (Neville)
That beauty matches the words in your poem Neville.
July 28th, 2019 15:19 - Slip (Vanessa wallace)
Certainly a dark write Rose, but you have survived so that we can see more...
July 28th, 2019 15:16 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi but as you know I am at odds with the Christian Faith at...
July 28th, 2019 01:51 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
In our lives there are breakages within us but they can be insignificant...
July 28th, 2019 01:11 - one day the granularity of life whispers to you (Jon Nakapalau)
We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and...
July 28th, 2019 01:10 - Sometimes (Renu)
Sometimes life is wonderful as it is reading your words.
Welcome to MPS.
July 28th, 2019 01:04 - Heat (FineB)
Good write and so true. I just don\'t like the heat as I never fell cold,...
July 28th, 2019 01:01 - Talk With The Reaper (PoeticBiscuit)
I hope he does not come back too soon otherwise we would be deprived of...
July 28th, 2019 00:55 - Themes to explore, lives to live (Voicesecho88)
We each have a story in our lives, mine has become a library with age.
July 28th, 2019 00:53 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
Powerful write d a, I am sure all will be well, perhaps you should pick up...
July 27th, 2019 14:54 - It doesn\'t matter any more (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home...
July 27th, 2019 14:52 - The Right People Will Come to Us (Nafis Light)
So true Joker, we must always do things we love as we will always have the...
July 27th, 2019 02:52 - What Happened? (Vanessa wallace)
Good emotive write, I do hope that gap between you closes and you are...
July 27th, 2019 02:51 - Family Focus (Orchidee)
\"Tis vain for you to rise
Early, and your eyes
Restrain from sleep, and...
July 27th, 2019 02:49 - Bring it On (Neville)
Every moment is special, enjoy them all as they will not come...
July 27th, 2019 00:44 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
Our special places in nature are so wonderful.
July 27th, 2019 00:36 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
In true love, as this is, every part of your lover is so wonderful, as are...
July 27th, 2019 00:34 - the summer moon is a cruel marionettist (Jon Nakapalau)
That bait pulls so many of us in.
July 27th, 2019 00:33 - Always & Forever (Neville)
So few words used but the complexity comes through showing how the...
July 27th, 2019 00:30 - Fear of love & criticism (Poetic Dan)
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will...
July 26th, 2019 14:15 - Penitent Prayer (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 26th, 2019 14:12 - Waking Gently (Christina8)
Wonderful write Christina, I do hope it is not your last free verse.
July 26th, 2019 01:06 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
I was there, a wonderful time was had.
July 26th, 2019 01:04 - today (Jon Nakapalau)
Sounds like a great idea.
July 26th, 2019 01:03 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I so thoroughly agree with you, there is a sign that I have seen in some...
July 26th, 2019 01:02 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliant write Fay, the anguish flows through your words.
July 26th, 2019 00:57 - for one another (Dusk arising)
So very true d a.
July 26th, 2019 00:53 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 26th, 2019 00:52 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Good emotive write Neville, to go forward in love or to refrain is a...
July 26th, 2019 00:52 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Orchi.
July 25th, 2019 01:49 - That\'s What Made The Food So Good (Nafis Light)
All food should be made with love.
July 25th, 2019 01:07 - Untarnished (Christina8)
This works very well Christina, you took me to that beautiful place.
July 25th, 2019 01:06 - money (Jon Nakapalau)
So true.
July 25th, 2019 01:05 - What a WOMAN can do (Justagirl)
I agree with dusk arising, in my long life I have always treated women...
July 25th, 2019 00:44 - The firefly and the glow-worm (Fearlessstars)
May those lights of love be forever bright.
July 24th, 2019 05:07 - DEFENCES. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, I would like to think that the traits of the wise men...
July 24th, 2019 05:05 - The \"who\" I shall retain (Poetic Dan)
May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful...
July 24th, 2019 05:03
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