Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- When It\'s Time To Fly (W c)
Yes this is how I feel. I have said to my children that when the Church...
October 4th, 2018 00:21 - A Man That Lost His Fight. (Kevin browne)
Wonderful tribute to your Brother-in Law.
\"A disintegration of flowering...
October 4th, 2018 00:19 - The Shadows Shadow (WL Schuett)
Beautiful heartfelt tribute.
Good to see you here again WL.
October 4th, 2018 00:16 - The Art of \"Getting Better\" (Orialis M. Pena)
Life has its ups and downs. If we didn\'t have the downs we might not...
October 4th, 2018 00:14 - The beautiful things (Shi no hakobi te)
All the bad things in our lives are cancelled out by the good things.
October 4th, 2018 00:08 - Loving you feels like... (Edthepoet)
Very good emotive write, may that promised land be always there for you.
October 4th, 2018 00:05 - It\'s always been you. (Laura934)
Good write. Love has its ups and downs but that love will always come...
October 4th, 2018 00:04 - FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The right words are so meaningful in all writing.
October 3rd, 2018 15:10 - Refreshments Renewals (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
October 3rd, 2018 15:09 - Trouble Reading (The Retired Bloke)
That is such a shame. I can get totally lost in books.
October 3rd, 2018 07:43 - HE SPURNS APPROACH (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful emotive write Michael.
October 3rd, 2018 01:02 - Old Rock Stars Never Die (W c)
So very true, those rock stars of my past are still with me.
October 3rd, 2018 00:59 - Error (A__pott)
Wonderful emotive write.
October 3rd, 2018 00:57 - Do Not Waste Your Life Away (Brooklyn6timesplus)
The opportunities are always there for you to take.
October 3rd, 2018 00:56 - Adolescence (This_girl)
May that innocence never waver.
October 3rd, 2018 00:53 - Autumn (Jooles)
Good write about my favourite season of the year.
October 3rd, 2018 00:52 - Not Keen on Decorating (The Retired Bloke)
It is always the getting started that is the problem, once that initial...
October 3rd, 2018 00:45 - SHINE ON SISTER MOON ! A SONNET - BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
That moon trip was so special, I stayed up to watch it.
But then I...
October 2nd, 2018 07:55 - Harvest Judgement (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
(First stanza third line should be his not hi,...
October 2nd, 2018 02:26 - Happiness In Life (W c)
Love is always the key. Giving your time to others is also so important.
October 2nd, 2018 01:05 - THE SAME MISTAKE (Michael Edwards)
We must be certain that all is right as we move on in life. At our age...
October 2nd, 2018 01:04 - She Sadly Drowns In Tears (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Good emotive write.
October 2nd, 2018 00:59 - A Brand New Summers Breeze. (Kevin browne)
Wonderful write showing the glory of the countryside around us.
October 2nd, 2018 00:57 - GOD IN SIN CITY (Kaychee)
So very true, God is always with you.
October 2nd, 2018 00:51 - the serpent (Rydaddy_98)
Very good emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
October 2nd, 2018 00:50 - The Hunter\'s Moon (October) (Lorna)
Beautiful write Lorna.
October 1st, 2018 15:40 - SENSUALITY. (Fay Slimm.)
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39 - SIX SIMPLE SENRYU SYMBIOTICALLY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good 5-7-5 but these are not senryu, senryu are about emotion. 2, 3,4 and...
October 1st, 2018 15:37 - Provisions Potentials (Orchidee)
In this world of so much starvation surely that belief is being...
October 1st, 2018 02:02 - What Stops Us (The Retired Bloke)
This is so very true, I was talking about this with my daughter yesterday....
October 1st, 2018 02:00 - Carefree? (Goldfinch60)
The Pearlfisher duet by Jussi Bjorling and Robert Merrill is my wifes...
October 1st, 2018 01:18 - I Need Four Wheels (W c)
I haven\'t ridden a motorbike for many. many years but there was always...
October 1st, 2018 00:56 - Always Remain Determined (Brooklyn6timesplus)
May those victories always be there for you.
October 1st, 2018 00:54 - Last Reflection (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful write, those memories can be so beguiling.
October 1st, 2018 00:53 - What Lies Beneath the Cresting Blue (Noveyre)
You have taken me to this magical place with your words.
October 1st, 2018 00:51 - Learning (Cass Fate)
Those facts that are passed to you do seem to come at an extremely fast...
October 1st, 2018 00:47 - Pendulum (DesertWords)
A very true write. In this day and age integrity seems to be a thing of...
October 1st, 2018 00:32 - Shoes (The Retired Bloke)
Strong write Retired, it must have been very moving to see.
Have a look...
October 1st, 2018 00:24 - Love Like it\'s Our Last (JWKP98)
Each day is special savour them with God.
October 1st, 2018 00:16 - Momento (Jabberwocky)
Strong write. May those demons be expunged forever.
October 1st, 2018 00:14 - Creaturely Care-takers (Orchidee)
I am going to the Harvest Fetival at Church today, it sounds as though it...
September 30th, 2018 02:11 - JESUS : MY SAVIOUR & MY LORD ~ By ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good Faith filled write Angela.
The hymn played for me, perhaps...
September 30th, 2018 02:09 - Little Cabin (W c)
A wonderful experience, especially having coffee with your dad and nature.
September 30th, 2018 01:12 - Limitless (Poetboy123)
Very good positive write. Always go forward - there are no...
September 30th, 2018 01:07 - Two Hundred (Christina8)
Thank you Christina, enjoy your break, you will be missed. Please come...
September 30th, 2018 01:04 - THREE TREMENDOUS TRUMP TWEETS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good fun write. it fits the tune very well.
September 30th, 2018 01:02 - Waiting (The Retired Bloke)
That hanging around can be awful so infuriating.
September 30th, 2018 00:59 - Bethesda Blessings (Orchidee)
Super write Orchi.
I wonder if in the Baptist Church where they...
September 29th, 2018 23:29 - Anxiety Lifted (Christina8)
That is brilliant Christina. The future will be so bright for you.
September 29th, 2018 00:32 - WHY NOT ?. (Fay Slimm.)
That first light is a wonderful sight and looks forward to the day ahead.
September 29th, 2018 00:31 - Ups and Downs (The Retired Bloke)
Very true write, we must put the downs away and enjoy the ups in our lives...
September 29th, 2018 00:30 - Watered Way (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi providing none of that water goes into my whisky.
September 29th, 2018 00:27 - Broken Sparrow (W c)
It is always sad to see dead birds, or any animals but we do know that...
September 28th, 2018 00:58 - LIMERICK No 56 (Michael Edwards)
At least on then floor you could walk around it, on the ceiling it could...
September 28th, 2018 00:50 - CINQUAINS 2 4 6 8 2 FROM AUCKLAND ~ ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good cinquains about New Zealand.
Like the video as well thay all...
September 28th, 2018 00:31 - Eagle Morning (W c)
Beautiful creatures to see in flight.
September 28th, 2018 00:27 - Unaccustomed (The Retired Bloke)
Yes, been there.
September 27th, 2018 00:42 - Birth Beginnings (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 27th, 2018 00:41 - EIGHT ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS ~ DOUBLETS By BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks fort the biochemistry lesson, I think that I eat all of those.
September 27th, 2018 00:40 - A CINQUAIN COLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
a fine collection Michael.
September 27th, 2018 00:38 - Autumn Nightfall (Crystal Hope)
Beautiful autumnal write Crystal.
September 27th, 2018 00:35 - Weekends (W c)
Being retired all my days are Saturdays.
September 26th, 2018 00:40 - A first love story (Gogeta)
Thank you for my first laugh of the day. Such a beautiful poem about...
September 26th, 2018 00:32 - BOARD-BALLET. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay, those surfer are amazing to watch.
September 26th, 2018 00:27 - Beauty Surrounds (Christina8)
Love of family must come first but my favourite time of the year is...
September 25th, 2018 07:48 - SIX VITAL VITAMINS : Couplets by ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes I eat all of them. I am one of those people who have yet to find...
September 25th, 2018 07:45 - Struggling (Poetic Dan)
Your life will soon be together and will flow in glory.
September 25th, 2018 07:41 - Lose That Frown (The Retired Bloke)
Very good advice, I am always positive as I was given a second chance at...
September 25th, 2018 07:40 - Religion (Richard--Castle Donington)
Very strong write Richard. Some people, including Ministers, do try to...
September 25th, 2018 01:48 - Sometimes A Song (W c)
Those favourite songs are so special.
September 25th, 2018 01:43 - Teardrops (Christina8)
Very good emotive write, I m so glad that it is fiction.
September 25th, 2018 01:41 - A FAMILY OF OUR OWN ! BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So true, families are so important, I am sure that when you have a family...
September 25th, 2018 00:46 - Be Thankful (The Retired Bloke)
Very good write. The last two lines are so very true.
September 25th, 2018 00:44 - YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful. wonderful write Fay, all those words are so very meaningful -...
September 25th, 2018 00:37 - From shame to change (Poetic Dan)
Good positive write. It is amazing what we can learn from our children,...
September 25th, 2018 00:36 - Baptism Blessings (Orchidee)
The Spirit is always with us.
September 24th, 2018 02:08 - A Cabin In Alaska (W c)
I too would enjoy a cabin like that, good write w c.
September 24th, 2018 00:58 - Come Undone (Christina8)
We may well struggle some days but they can be overcome with the love and...
September 24th, 2018 00:56 - Again & Again (Poetic Dan)
Your journey is forever changing, it will change for the better as you...
September 24th, 2018 00:48 - Turning the clock (Misskay)
\"You\" would be lost if you went back in time.
September 24th, 2018 00:46 - These Days (H. Ray Davis)
May those pages never stop being written.
September 24th, 2018 00:43 - Time Is Like A River (Poetboy123)
Wonderful write, I too float on My River of time.
\"Yesterday is another...
September 24th, 2018 00:42 - Despair (Richard--Castle Donington)
Very good write Richard. Writing your feelings is a wonderful release and...
September 24th, 2018 00:22 - Fear of self assembly (The Retired Bloke)
Self assembly items can be a bit of a pain, Laura\'s idea sounds like a...
September 24th, 2018 00:20 - A Gem Of Grace (Orchidee)
Those times of quiet are so special Orchi. Good write.
September 23rd, 2018 01:49 - CRADLE ~ CROSS ~ CROWN ~ THE LIFE OF J E S U S ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen indeed Brian.
September 23rd, 2018 01:38 - JESUS IS MY SHEPHERD ~ ANGELA A 5 5 4 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
He will always be there for you A and B, your Faith is secure.
September 23rd, 2018 00:26 - i wonder, when did we fall out of love (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a sad poem, I do hope there will be a spark which lights the way once...
September 23rd, 2018 00:23 - 38TH & LUDLOW (Fuche_bu)
Those memories will always be with you.
Some of those places that were...
September 23rd, 2018 00:22 - Christmas (FineB)
That C word again, should not be allowed before December.
Good write...
September 23rd, 2018 00:19 - Funeral for Broken Dreams (Christina K)
Beautiful emotive write.
September 23rd, 2018 00:16 - Just Lying (The Retired Bloke)
That is life but death is not with us yet and it will not be soon.
September 22nd, 2018 10:43 - Stepping Stones (Orchidee)
Amen.
September 22nd, 2018 10:43 - No Time For Tears (Christina8)
Very good emotive write. We are always here for you Christina.
September 22nd, 2018 10:42 - Adulting (MaddieJ)
Very good meaningful write. Those days of youth are always treasured.
September 22nd, 2018 10:41 - Death (Syd)
Very true write, you start dying the moment you are born. Enjoy every...
September 22nd, 2018 10:39 - FIVE A DAY : FRUITY SENRYU : ANGELA & BRIAN COLLABORATION (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Swap the apples for plums and I eat all five of those fruit each day.
September 22nd, 2018 10:38 - Sometimes (Poetic Dan)
That light is always there though Dan and it will always overcome the...
September 22nd, 2018 10:36 - The battle of the bulge (The Retired Bloke)
It takes a great deal of mental strength to forego some of the wonderful...
September 22nd, 2018 10:35 - C H R I S T M A S ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You used the \"C\" word in September, sorry Brian I don\'t do \"C\" until...
September 20th, 2018 02:22
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