Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Before 40 I\'m building a starship (Poetic Dan)
Each new challenge is part of experience and your challenges have each...
May 20th, 2019 00:25 - MANTRAS FOR HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So very true A and B, peace and respect from within each of us can create...
May 20th, 2019 00:20 - A Call In Calamity (Orchidee)
I do wish my prayers would be answered.
May 19th, 2019 01:45 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
So true, mirrors always mislead us.
May 19th, 2019 01:44 - Ink Splattered Skies (StephD)
Such a good write Steph. Walking with nature is wonderful and nature\'s...
May 19th, 2019 01:02 - Untitled - XII (Suresh)
So very true.
May 19th, 2019 00:57 - the love poet (Dusk arising)
Superb write d a, showing what words can do when written in this way, ...
May 19th, 2019 00:54 - THIRTY ONE # TIME GONE ? ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I would like to know what that patient has done for you to elbow him in...
May 19th, 2019 00:50 - Are you thinking about suicide? (Sylviasearcher)
The one thing that I have always had in my life is that I listen to people...
May 19th, 2019 00:42 - Dark and light, never two shall meet (Poetic Dan)
Very good very deep write Dan. That balance is there for us all and we...
May 19th, 2019 00:37 - Beautifully Broken (Neville)
Such a good poem, it can be imperfections in our loved ones that draw us...
May 19th, 2019 00:30 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 19th, 2019 00:29 - BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful words Michael, I beleive many of us have been on that walk.
May 19th, 2019 00:29 - There is alway someone better off (Jon Nakapalau)
That place is within you.
May 18th, 2019 00:31 - The painter of the war (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Such a powerful write Andrew, so many lives lost for reasons they did not...
May 18th, 2019 00:29 - The Initiation (Neville)
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to...
May 18th, 2019 00:26 - The Initiation (Neville)
Such an awful thing to happen to the innocence of those who are forced to...
May 18th, 2019 00:26 - Borrowed Love (Caleb.A)
Love has so many ways of showing itself, I can understand fully your...
May 18th, 2019 00:22 - STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, those days of mining were so hard. Great to...
May 18th, 2019 00:19 - My Mind is blank (FineB)
Those words can be hard to write sometimes but it is surprising what...
May 18th, 2019 00:10 - A rhyme is a rhyme (Poetic Dan)
Poets write from the heart and the soul, as do you Dan.
May 18th, 2019 00:07 - Sincere Seeking (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 17th, 2019 02:31 - TEA? (Michael Edwards)
Rwanda Burundi fine tea leaves into a china teapot, freshly boiled water...
May 17th, 2019 00:48 - across the valley (Jon Nakapalau)
That stillness in life is so very important.
May 17th, 2019 00:43 - My Flame (SerenWise)
Beautiful loving write.
May 17th, 2019 00:42 - Safe Haven (IAmAlwaysConfusion)
Those trees will always give you peace and even when you come back to...
May 17th, 2019 00:32 - Someone to Watch Over You (Lorna)
May your gate lead to the wonderful life that you deserve Lorna.
Glad...
May 17th, 2019 00:24 - Leaving Home (2): for glory (Frank Prem)
Brave men sent to help all.
\"Advance Australia Fair\"
May 17th, 2019 00:22 - LA ABUELA MIA : MY GRANDMAMA ! A TRIBUTE : ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great tribute to your Grandmother Angela is is obviously a much loved
May 17th, 2019 00:18 - The Kingdom To Come (Orchidee)
Good positive write Orchi.
May 17th, 2019 00:15 - Selfhood (Poetic Dan)
Over the time that I have been reading your poems you have come such a...
May 17th, 2019 00:14 - UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful write Fay, the spell of love is so obscure but so very...
May 17th, 2019 00:08 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (6) (Michael Edwards)
I hope those peas will be split to go with the faggots.
May 16th, 2019 01:51 - Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
Very good write Lorna, I do hope that you will be able to dress in colours...
May 16th, 2019 00:25 - 3rd Ypres (1) a swamp (of all the world) (Frank Prem)
The blood of lives sacrificed at the whims of those in power.
May 16th, 2019 00:22 - YESTERDAY. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay, the rain can wash away the ills that are out there so...
May 16th, 2019 00:20 - Watering Can (Poetic Dan)
Good fun write with a deeper meaning, many can be watering cans who bring...
May 16th, 2019 00:18 - Restored And Renewed (Orchidee)
If his restoring grace is there why does he not restore Joyce!!
May 16th, 2019 00:16 - Limerick-diculous (Dusk arising)
I know that guy from Evesham, he goes to our church!
May 15th, 2019 00:21 - An Old Saying (SerenWise)
May your wounds be healed and never happen again.
May 15th, 2019 00:17 - Broken radio (Crystal Hope)
Your words are transmitting with clarity Crystal.
May 15th, 2019 00:15 - Sliding Scale of Mercy (Suresh)
Thought provoking write Suresh but anarchy would surely not work.
The...
May 15th, 2019 00:10 - Red Cushions (Lorna)
Bliss is always with you Lorna as your words on the page show us.
May 15th, 2019 00:05 - SELFHOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
Your life is your own and unique, others try to influence it but for...
May 15th, 2019 00:03 - Multitude Myriads (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
May 15th, 2019 00:00 - Back to fun, my ships are done (Poetic Dan)
Your ship is sailing into the new harbour of you life where the light...
May 14th, 2019 23:59 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
In life there are mysteries that intrigue us and elspenore sits there...
May 14th, 2019 23:57 - Sally Am Jam (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Good tribute to a wonderful organisation Andrew.
May 14th, 2019 01:39 - DORIS DAY AN ACROSTIC TRIBUTE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
She was a great star, I have enjoyed all the movies that I have seen with...
May 14th, 2019 01:38 - Love Letter (SerenWise)
Home is where love is.
May 14th, 2019 00:23 - Rainbows (Lorna)
Those rainbows are so important in our lives Lorna.
May 14th, 2019 00:20 - HUMAN HANDS ~ ALMOST INDISPENSABLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I hold out my hands to you both as a sign of friendship and love.
May 14th, 2019 00:19 - FOLLY. (Fay Slimm.)
Good emotive write Fay, it is amazing what words can be stirred in our...
May 14th, 2019 00:17 - Second letter to my younger self (Poetic Dan)
Very good write. That light is there for us all and recently it has been...
May 14th, 2019 00:14 - Faithful Following (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 14th, 2019 00:12 - Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So very true, saying and doing are worlds apart.
May 13th, 2019 01:34 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards)
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with...
May 13th, 2019 01:33 - Thinker (Suresh)
The way the humans are treating the earth is abominable but once homo...
May 13th, 2019 01:31 - when out of my thoughts (Dusk arising)
Such a strong write d a.
She is blessed to have a dad like you. May...
May 13th, 2019 01:12 - One More Chance (Daydreaming)
In life there are many obstacles put in our way, once these have been...
May 13th, 2019 00:55 - Worth (Poetic Dan)
So very true Dan, I too am s step dad and have been for nearly forty...
May 13th, 2019 00:27 - We should meet more people not like us (Andrew Charles Forrest)
They do get along because surely opposites attract.
May 13th, 2019 00:24 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : A BLANK VERSE SONNET : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Both are so wonderful, I always see them both.
May 13th, 2019 00:22 - Untitled - XI (Suresh)
Trust is a things that can be so undermining.
May 13th, 2019 00:21 - Panoramic Praise (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 13th, 2019 00:20 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (3) (Michael Edwards)
I hope those crumpets are Warburtons!
May 12th, 2019 00:22 - ARETHA (FineB)
Good tribute to a wonderful singer.
May 12th, 2019 00:20 - 11 years of absorbing, thank you to all (Poetic Dan)
WE go through our lives and find all kinds of obstacles in the way but...
May 12th, 2019 00:18 - No-one cares (Lulu Boatwright)
Very emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
May 12th, 2019 00:06 - Afford To Love You (Yorelzinala)
That love is priceless.
May 12th, 2019 00:05 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? ANGELA for BRIAN ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Telling each other we love each other are the last words we say to each...
May 12th, 2019 00:04 - Spirit Symbols (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
May 12th, 2019 00:02 - Ordered Serenity. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Orchi.
May 11th, 2019 01:55 - Riddle of the Dark Kind (Suresh)
A riddle that is hard to answer.
May 11th, 2019 00:36 - Untitled - X (Suresh)
That exploitation is within all of us.
May 11th, 2019 00:34 - RESEARCH IN THE RAINFOREST ~ A PANTOUM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Homo sapiens is destroying our world and those in power who can do...
May 11th, 2019 00:31 - We\'re all needed (Poetic Dan)
That inner you is healing day by day Dan and before very long that process...
May 11th, 2019 00:29 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
That light is always there we just have different ways of seeing it. Good...
May 11th, 2019 00:27 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09 - it just wouldnt rhyme (Dusk arising)
This softy sometimes gives his poems to those he writes about, normally...
May 10th, 2019 01:08 - Dawn (SerenWise)
That life will be filled with love and wonder.
May 10th, 2019 01:02 - Thank You For Smiling (Nafis Light)
A smile can be so important in life, I feel that if I can make somebody...
May 10th, 2019 00:58 - Coos Bay Drive in Late Summer (Jon Nakapalau)
The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.
May 10th, 2019 00:56 - Motherhood (Jennie Devallon)
I am sure your child will be brought up in love and joy into a wonderful...
May 10th, 2019 00:46 - From A Distance (Variable (Moordykspot2)
Very good write Moordy, nature in all its guises is wonderful. Have a...
May 9th, 2019 15:25 - Habits (Gerrylegister)
Those things that we do do have consequences but mostly the consequences...
May 9th, 2019 15:21 - It\'s not a crime to rhyme (Poetic Dan)
It is amazing how words written down can take the hurt and sorrow from...
May 9th, 2019 03:20 - LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words about a beautiful flower Fay.
May 9th, 2019 03:17 - TEA ~ WORLDS FAVOURITE DRINK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We drink leaf tea, we used to drink Kenya Tea until many years ago the guy...
May 9th, 2019 03:16 - Refuge Reassurance (Orchidee)
I have serious doubts about the last line of the first stanza!
Good write...
May 9th, 2019 03:12 - God and Religion Again. (Goldfinch60)
A very true way to be Michael. In the passed when I was at teenager I went...
May 9th, 2019 02:20 - dear J (Dusk arising)
Strong emotive write d a.
May 9th, 2019 00:58 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57 - Quiet Lion (WL Schuett)
May that peace be forever with you WL.
May 9th, 2019 00:53 - My quote of the day #17 (Jon Nakapalau)
A very true thought.
May 9th, 2019 00:51 - WHERE\'S MY DADDY? (Shayl)
Very sad write.
May 9th, 2019 00:43 - Helplessly hoping (H. Ray Davis)
The longing of love wonderfully portrayed in your words HRD.
May 9th, 2019 00:40 - of elspenore (Dusk arising)
Those creatures from hell are all around us and in various disguises, at...
May 9th, 2019 00:32 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
There are so many paths in our lives, those in power try to send you down...
May 9th, 2019 00:28
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