Comments on community poems by orchidee

• Bloody Foreigners… (Doggerel Dave) I could probably give ya a NS example. Summat non-sequitur, that is....
  September 23rd, 2025 02:38
• Fresh Breeze (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Dang chilly breeze sometimes! lol. Some bees and wasps still around. Oohh!
  September 23rd, 2025 02:36
• LIMERICKS 148, 149 &150 (Michael Edwards) Good writes M. lol. Not a Berle out of place.
  September 22nd, 2025 03:17
• Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Yes, it may start off nice, those \'Beatitudes\', then we may wish they...
  September 22nd, 2025 03:09
• Just Before the Light Turns Green (Arquious) Good write A.
  September 22nd, 2025 03:07
• Autumn Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
  September 22nd, 2025 03:06
• Autumn Tanka. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  September 22nd, 2025 03:06
• Paywalled Proclamation (Tristan Robert Lange) They\'ll be charging entrance fees to church services. Sshh! Let\'s not...
  September 22nd, 2025 03:03
• I will be Okay (Meera Mere) But we do it, we say it. Do some folks really want to know how we are? And...
  September 21st, 2025 11:32
• the saga in the hall (Arqios) A fine write A.
  September 21st, 2025 11:29
• Greater love hath no man (Sorenbarrett) A fine write SB. Being daft - in second place of greatness - me, laying...
  September 21st, 2025 11:28
• Paywalled Proclamation (Tristan Robert Lange) C\'mon now, folks, pay up towards my private, rented pew-box, complete...
  September 21st, 2025 11:24
• Paywalled Proclamation (Tristan Robert Lange) Ahh, a hymn-poem! Doh! An extra syllable crept in at Verse 2, line 2. You...
  September 21st, 2025 11:22
• Short Stories Rated 18 + (Keyara S Trotman) Dunno! Can\'t comment cos I have swooned reading this. lol.
  September 21st, 2025 02:01
• Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  September 21st, 2025 01:59
• Catinga was his name (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB. I thought it was gonna be about a cat. \'Here, puss, dinner...
  September 20th, 2025 08:46
• The Devil\'s Daughter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shall we meet her?! lol.
  September 20th, 2025 08:45
• of silences (Arqios) Good write A. My \'Silent Poem\' begins................... Ain\'t no words...
  September 20th, 2025 08:44
• LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards) Oh lol, good writes M.
  September 20th, 2025 08:43
• And They Call It Patriotism (Tristan Robert Lange) Erm, I\'ve had a gin or three. I never got passed the first line -...
  September 20th, 2025 08:41
• Dark Alchemy (Tristan Robert Lange) Bit dark in \'ere. Turn that light on! lol. Or if Popeye\'s in the room -...
  September 20th, 2025 02:23
• Rugby For Ladies. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. KP wants to join a team. lol.
  September 20th, 2025 02:21
• The Seed (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  September 19th, 2025 10:43
• richer than old king Croesus (Arqios) Good write A.
  September 19th, 2025 10:42
• A Hammer a Day Keeps the Assholes Away (Matthew R. Callies) Ahh, bit different to an apple a day keeps the........ lol.
  September 19th, 2025 10:41
• The Listeners Joy Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A find write Gold.
  September 19th, 2025 01:54
• in the quiet tide (Arqios) And now from me \'An Unspoken Poem\'. What\'s in it, they ask. Dunno,...
  September 18th, 2025 11:38
• Forgiveness (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  September 18th, 2025 11:37
• To Soak in Reality (Tristan Robert Lange) I not got any poems from 1996. I will post a blank page! lol. I never even...
  September 18th, 2025 11:36
• Seeking Truth In A Worldwide Web Full Of Lies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Not now Crowley, not today, thank you! lol.
  September 18th, 2025 11:35
• Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem,...
  September 18th, 2025 11:32
• Who I am (2781) Erm, who are ya? You can tell I didn\'t read the poem properly. lol.
  September 18th, 2025 02:07
• Robert Redford Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold, and not a wooden actor.
  September 18th, 2025 02:06
• homestead knights (Arqios) Good write A.
  September 16th, 2025 06:02
• Suicide an twa (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB. A dark joke - Suicide? Ooh no, it\'ll be bad for me...
  September 16th, 2025 05:59
• Jesus Christ is Lord (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Good write GS. Erm, KP\'s changed my life too - for the worse! heehee.
  September 16th, 2025 05:57
• Flutterby Mind. (Goldfinch60) That\'s a whole lot to do. How did you find time to go to work?!
  September 16th, 2025 02:10
• Making My Own Lemonade (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
  September 16th, 2025 02:09
• Making My Own Lemonade (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Good write SM.
  September 16th, 2025 02:09
• Fallen honor (Sorenbarrett) As long as the pidgins don\'t s**t on us! Erm, it\'s a theme in some poets...
  September 15th, 2025 07:32
• Maxim (James Michael) Good write JM. Doh! My maxim, or experience, was somewhat different - When...
  September 15th, 2025 02:24
• Home Again. (Goldfinch60) It seems you only just got there - time flies?! lol.
  September 15th, 2025 02:23
• Hard And Bitter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You in that pub - bitter - and drinking hard?! Oops! lol.
  September 15th, 2025 02:22
• I Believe In God (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A fine write GS. Who (or in this case, what) else do I believe in? I...
  September 14th, 2025 02:07
• Gone too soon (BlessedbyGod) A poignant write B.
  September 14th, 2025 02:05
• The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave) Oohh yes, lack of rational thought applies to me too. Well, I only got 3...
  September 14th, 2025 02:04
• Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange) All that\'s needed is if a certain person changed that dodgy - wig, or rug...
  September 14th, 2025 02:02
• The Language Of Emotion Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  September 14th, 2025 02:00
• Read (Sorenbarrett) Doh! Me poetic brook ran dry. I dived into it and bumped me head. All...
  September 13th, 2025 10:41
• MISSING PHOTOS (Michael Edwards) That you there? Or is it me? Or Mr Berles? lol.
  September 13th, 2025 10:39
• Break-Fast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I wish celebrities would use their brains. Not much chance of it though!...
  September 13th, 2025 10:38
• of resonances (Arqios) Good write A.
  September 13th, 2025 10:37
• Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange) Ohh, Popeye will cheer us up. He\'ll show us.... I can\'t finish that!
  September 13th, 2025 10:36
• Too Much Pie (ForeverJesus7) Pork Pies for me. \'Pork Pies Rule, OK!\' lol.
  September 13th, 2025 01:55
• Moulding Life. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. \'If it ain\'t broke, don\'t fix it!\' I say to KP. It...
  September 13th, 2025 01:54
• Comershells (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You had a gin or three? Comershell / commercial. And who\'s got time for...
  September 12th, 2025 05:57
• foment in the firmament (Arqios) I can\'t shay that title after a ginsh or threesh. Hic! lol. Notice the...
  September 12th, 2025 05:55
• Truth (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Good write GS. Meanwhile - of course, I always speak the truth to KP. I...
  September 12th, 2025 05:52
• Waves against a lighthouse (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  September 12th, 2025 05:47
• Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60) You won\'t see that escaped prisoner rowing to shore, as he got early...
  September 12th, 2025 02:31
• Prayers👑 (Keyara S Trotman) Good write K.
  September 11th, 2025 11:06
• Mud on the floor (Sorenbarrett) Godo write SB. My own version of line 3 is \'A woman in dust held together...
  September 11th, 2025 11:05
• Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave) Good write D. Meanwhile, in my NS moments - I thought you was telling me...
  September 11th, 2025 11:03
• New Age Rage (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hocus pocus! One said that The New Age is now The Old Age, cos it\'s been...
  September 11th, 2025 11:00
• between shelves (Arqios) In between my shelves....are layers of dust! lol.
  September 11th, 2025 10:59
• In This Land (Tristan Robert Lange) In this land... lives Obi & Co. Well, Popeye had enough mentions. What do...
  September 11th, 2025 10:58
• Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  September 11th, 2025 02:44
• Repaired Day. (Goldfinch60) Ohh, today is the day you worried about... Oh, I never remember it. lol.
  September 10th, 2025 02:23
• To spill one\'s guts (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB. Bowels? I\'m just having me dinner. lol
  September 9th, 2025 10:57
• the old home (Arqios) Good write A.
  September 9th, 2025 10:55
• Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan)
  September 9th, 2025 10:54
• Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan) Ooh, I\'ll get ya pair of boots or shoes! heehee.
  September 9th, 2025 10:54
• Under the Corn Moon Spell (Tristan Robert Lange) I thought this was gonna be about my corn - corny - jokes! lol.
  September 9th, 2025 10:53
• Valiant Thor (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) When we see E.T. again we can ask him about Chris. lol.
  September 9th, 2025 10:52
• Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange) Oops! Sent empty message by mistake. So I didn\'t answer that! lol.
  September 9th, 2025 10:47
• No worries (Sorenbarrett) Dunno why I complain then - verse 1 - I married KP! lol.
  September 8th, 2025 07:38
• The Usurper\'s Call (Tristan Robert Lange) Popeye\'s not usurped anything. He\'s had it from the start. Had what?...
  September 8th, 2025 07:37
• Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange)
  September 8th, 2025 02:33
• Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange) I\'ve not looked into this poem too deeply. You can tell I haven\'t, with...
  September 8th, 2025 02:33
• God Was There (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Good write GS. He was gonna be there for KP too, but He didn\'t recognise...
  September 8th, 2025 02:30
• Dawns Moon. (Goldfinch60) Doh! I missed the eclipse of the moon last night - well 7.30pm, not quite...
  September 8th, 2025 02:27
• Breathe (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Good write FE. Now my problem is that I need to breathe, as I held my...
  September 8th, 2025 02:24
• And…. (Doggerel Dave) Is this a metaphorical poem, or a literal one? (If \'literal\' and...
  September 7th, 2025 02:11
• Fear of Word Blindness (Neville) Good write N. KP never craves obscurity. lol.
  September 7th, 2025 02:09
• Painting Music (Goldfinch60) An artistic write Gold.
  September 7th, 2025 02:08
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) It gone rusty?! lol.
  September 6th, 2025 14:42
• Scarred but Not Broken (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Good write GS. KP\'s been \'scarred\' for years, looking trout-like!...
  September 6th, 2025 14:41
• Why? (Sorenbarrett) Oh no! Sounds like that guy I knew once. Only wanted to know him once - he...
  September 6th, 2025 14:39
• The Sparsity of Sand (Tristan Robert Lange) Ain\'t any sparsity with Popeye. No sparsity of what? Don\'t answer that!...
  September 6th, 2025 14:38
• Styles (Sorenbarrett) I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed...
  September 5th, 2025 07:47
• Whiting a poem without the lette r (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I are liking this, but I are being gramatically incorrect. Quite a lot of...
  September 5th, 2025 07:45
• If Money Didn\'t Exist (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) i saw a slow-worm thingy, not exactly a snake. lol.
  September 5th, 2025 07:41
• Cleaver of Devil’s Kitchen (Arqios) Funny place to chop up meat, or whatever he\'s chopping up - on a cliff...
  September 5th, 2025 07:40
• Metaphor Master (Doggerel Dave) I\'m struggling with understanding some metaphors, and also iambic...
  September 5th, 2025 02:40
• My Old Ghost. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. KP can\'t see herself in the mirror - she\'s a vampire....
  September 5th, 2025 02:39
• September (Jerry Reynolds) Good write J.
  September 3rd, 2025 12:00
• we met again, mid-sentence (Arqios) Yep - human - we must all be human on here, or else we\'d never get past...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:51
• Read till your eyes bleed (Sorenbarrett) But I don\'t want my eyes to bleed - heehee. Good write SB. But KP goes...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:49
• Bird\'s Eye View (Tristan Robert Lange) Good write T. Popeye\'s sneaked in again, but - not now, Popeye, we don\'t...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:47
• Sovereign Citizen (Doggerel Dave) How\'s that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is...
  September 3rd, 2025 02:25