Comments on community poems by Netashi
- WILD. (Fay Slimm.)
Very wild very explicit and very well written. keep up the good work.
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April 30th, 2019 12:26 - name (Elmina)
Welcome to MPS i hope you enjoy your stay. A great first piece keep up the...
February 19th, 2019 11:25 - A stands for aesthetic (Netashi)
Does anyone know which book i referenced
February 12th, 2019 13:52 - The Question (Phillthy)
Welcome to MPS Phil a very nicely written piece. Keep up the great...
February 12th, 2019 13:50 - Those Nights (Amherrera1190)
Very nicely written, having memories of someone is nice some people feel...
February 12th, 2019 13:49 - INVITING. (Fay Slimm.)
A pleasant write Fay keep up great work.
- T
February 12th, 2019 13:09 - L stands for Lazy (Netashi)
I surprisingly like mondays
February 11th, 2019 16:06 - Fuck You Nicole (Chocolate)
Yeah fuck you nicole. Also great poem. Keep up the good work
February 11th, 2019 11:24 - Lost in a cage (Caleb.A)
Very well written keep up the good work. FREEDOM ISN\'T FREE.
- T
February 8th, 2019 12:51 - Antidote (Netashi)
Writers block......
February 7th, 2019 13:25 - Evergreen pastures (Caleb.A)
A fine write.
February 7th, 2019 11:39 - A Day Changes (W c)
Greatly written piece. TODAY IS A NEW DAY. Keep up the great work.
- T
February 6th, 2019 14:50 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
Acceptance is the bittersweet stage of grief. Very well written keep up...
February 5th, 2019 13:50 - Forecast (Netashi)
Ironically published on a rainy day.
February 4th, 2019 13:48 - A seat beneath the apple tree (Caleb.A)
A nicely written piece, Sir Isac Newton would be proud. Kepp up the great...
February 1st, 2019 11:46 - UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.)
Very well put words Fay. Keep up the great work.
- T
\"Forgive your...
January 31st, 2019 13:23 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
Beautifully crafted word are the ones were you can close your eyes and...
January 31st, 2019 13:21 - Loving him (Magic_in_the_pages)
Indeed the recipe for a relationship.
January 30th, 2019 16:18 - RELEASED. (Fay Slimm.)
It seems nature is on your mind from beak to talons every birds deserves...
January 30th, 2019 16:13 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
intriguing indeed great and passionate write. Keep up the great work.
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January 30th, 2019 11:17 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
Mother earth is dying while we sit in our ivory towers. Greatly written...
January 29th, 2019 11:49 - Little Miss Harmony (Cutelilcardinal)
No one is perfect don\'t strain yourself. Great write about anxiety and...
January 29th, 2019 11:48 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a way with words Fay detailed yet calming like reading down a list....
January 28th, 2019 11:30 - Dollhouse . (Bri.under)
Welcome to MPS I hope you like your stay as much as i liked your poem....
January 25th, 2019 13:44 - Hollering hounds (Netashi)
Who needs purpose if you have friends. HUZAH! (i don\'t know if that\'s...
January 25th, 2019 13:41 - HOPING. (Fay Slimm.)
Hoping is hopefully working, as always your words are amazing. Keep up the...
January 23rd, 2019 13:51 - You (Mia_Rose)
Very simple and satisfying write about love and the blooming beginning....
January 23rd, 2019 13:32 - Aesthetic of purpose (Netashi)
My titles are written when i wake up. I write the first thing that comes...
January 22nd, 2019 15:08 - SHE WILL NEVER WALK AGAIN (Ruthdeming)
Very intriguing first write, explicit yet simple and real. Keep up the...
January 16th, 2019 13:54 - TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words indeed written again by you Fay. Keep up the amazing work....
January 16th, 2019 13:06 - Catch me (Mia_Rose)
A great write depicting self discovery and improve that include self doubt...
January 16th, 2019 13:04 - The weezer (Netashi)
In the world there are dreamers and doers and who can forget the...
January 16th, 2019 13:03 - Living to Die (DesiAnn7)
A fantastic first write about the fleeting of time. Welcome to MPS, keep...
January 16th, 2019 12:13 - Long Live the War (AbstractReality)
neat
January 13th, 2019 22:19 - Icarus (Aislinn Wilson)
Interestingly written and formatted. But a fine write none the less. There...
January 11th, 2019 13:19 - Mirrors and candles (Netashi)
There is always hope, all we need is someone to remember how to turn the...
January 11th, 2019 11:05 - Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life (Poetic Dan)
Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words....
January 10th, 2019 14:35 - Toward something... (Crystal Hope)
Very nice write hope. Always forward never backwards but at times you can...
January 10th, 2019 14:28 - Everything now has color (Netashi)
Thank you Adam my dear dear friend.
January 10th, 2019 11:21 - Taste The Sickness (Cooper)
Indeed, the haiku and feeling is relate able. I feel the same way with the...
January 8th, 2019 13:27 - Whispering words of wisdom (Netashi)
\"Whispering words of wisdom, let it be...…….\"
December 21st, 2018 13:47 - Bitter goodbye (Angela1711)
Any goodbye hurts and it varies. The loss of a hero, loved one, and a...
December 13th, 2018 13:46 - FOOTSTEPS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
How wholesome an beautiful poem. I chuckled at \"no bambinos before...
December 13th, 2018 13:41 - The Day After the Night Before. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes life does through us into a loop and shows us beautiful things....
December 13th, 2018 13:09 - Daily Devotion (Orchidee)
Very well written keep up the nice work.
-Theta
PS: don\'t feel bad...
December 13th, 2018 13:06 - SEEING THROUGH. (Fay Slimm.)
Never seize to amaze me with your beautifully written poems. Keep up the...
December 13th, 2018 13:04 - Winter\'s touch (Netashi)
Why does it feel like April in December. (Fuck you Adam for making me...
December 13th, 2018 11:16 - Love Hate. (Goldfinch60)
When people start loving power and start using the power of love then...
December 12th, 2018 16:46 - TGIF (A__pott)
ITS WEDNESDAY, jokes aside great write keep up the good work
December 12th, 2018 16:38 - I want to die (Bloody Pen)
Very nicely written poem, at times people do feel life would be severely...
December 12th, 2018 16:37 - Unholy (Brittany Jo)
Very nicely written poem i fine write about religion and retiring from it...
December 11th, 2018 13:45 - A state of Ash (Netashi)
I know I\'m sorta late on writing this and I\'m not under minding the...
December 11th, 2018 13:35 - SHORTIE TWO (Michael Edwards)
Neat, a fine write to read in the morning, keep up the great work.
December 11th, 2018 11:45 - DEPTHS. (Fay Slimm.)
Good morning this poem is very beautiful and in \"Depth\". Very beautiful...
December 11th, 2018 11:43 - Sugar packets (Netashi)
I might be grown up but i still don\'t like or drink coffee am I weird
December 10th, 2018 11:45 - The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
What a wonderful and true aspect in life. Keep up the splendid work I look...
December 6th, 2018 11:24 - February 14 (Phoenix Nobles)
Welcome to MPS I hope you enjoy your stay here. Very good and relate able...
December 5th, 2018 13:47 - Flawed only in mirror (Netashi)
My final piece for my English assignment. A villanelle a quiet interesting...
December 5th, 2018 12:23 - The writing is on the wall (Netashi)
An acrostic is a poem where the first letter of every sentence spells...
December 4th, 2018 13:54 - DUET. (Fay Slimm.)
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my...
November 15th, 2018 14:54 - BETWEEN WORLDS. (Fay Slimm.)
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as...
November 8th, 2018 14:32 - Thirty Seven Years. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m happy for you finch. Happy anniversary finch and many more . Have a...
November 7th, 2018 13:03 - SECRETS. (Fay Slimm.)
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it...
November 6th, 2018 13:52 - Morning Porridge (Noveyre)
Very nice poem, very detailed and felt calming. I think the morning is the...
November 6th, 2018 13:45 - My heart (Netashi)
She has an angelic sink laugh and her favorite color is lavender
November 6th, 2018 11:46 - Bad Desire (Sylviasearcher)
Interesting......
November 5th, 2018 15:34 - The girl that doesn\'t sleep (Netashi)
I think i\'m more than fond of sink and angel like laughs
November 2nd, 2018 12:12 - Halloween Horror! (Orchidee)
Wish I was patient enough to have uploaded my Halloween themed poem on...
October 31st, 2018 17:03 - April in October (Netashi)
Oh also i hope everyone has a good Halloween
October 24th, 2018 11:31 - UNANSWERED. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful and well thought out write as per usual Fay, keep up the...
October 3rd, 2018 13:32 - empty (Chaaz)
Very emotional, welcome to Mps, very nice first poem
October 3rd, 2018 10:37 - Crimson (Jessicagchaudhri)
Welcome to mps enjoy your stay here.
Very nice write
October 2nd, 2018 10:29 - Take Me Back (Cutelilcardinal)
Great poem yearning of the good old days with a lover. Great write, keep...
October 1st, 2018 14:46 - Scale (Quemis)
Intriguing way of writing a poem, keep up the fascinating work
September 28th, 2018 12:52 - The Truth On Trial (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very nice write Kurt, keep up the splendid work
September 28th, 2018 12:29 - \"Alphabet\" (Merissa)
I wanted to to this with the alphabet or with somebodies name but was...
September 28th, 2018 12:25 - Real Spooky Hours (Netashi)
Holy crap, did i just make a creeppasta/poem....I think i did.....good job...
September 28th, 2018 12:12 - Kiss The Rainbow (The Gifted One)
As beautiful as a rainbow, such an amazing write, keep up the amazing...
September 28th, 2018 11:48 - Nature’s Grief (Songbird)
Detailed and yet still beautiful, and also a great poem. Keep up the great...
September 27th, 2018 12:48 - The Moon Thing (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
Very nice poem keep it up
September 27th, 2018 11:36 - Ghouls and Ghosts (Shi no hakobi te)
nice poem spooky and tells the truth about growing up, good work and keep...
September 26th, 2018 11:47 - The Darkest Halloween (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
I will counter his hands with a high five, great poem Tamara. Delightfully...
September 25th, 2018 14:31 - Birthday Boy (Kai)
Welcome to MPS i hope you like your stay here, very nice poem, i rather...
September 21st, 2018 12:36 - My dreams vanish (Javiilicitano)
Welcome to MLP i hope you like your stay here, our poem is gloomy & sad...
September 21st, 2018 12:15 - Flavor (Netashi)
Any suggestions on the next topic???
August 29th, 2018 12:02 - Bushy Tail (W c)
Fun fact squirrels often forget where they buried said nuts. Also very...
August 28th, 2018 12:06 - My social anxiety (Sup)
Good first poem, the rhythm of it was good. Welcome to MPS and I hope you...
August 27th, 2018 10:06 - Running Late. (Goldfinch60)
Nice poem reminds me of the rabbit in Alice in wonderland. Keep it...
August 24th, 2018 12:40 - God Resides In (Ridingonawave)
Beautiful poem sir, welcome to the sight and i hope you enjoy your stay...
August 24th, 2018 12:35 - I\'M A LONER (Michael Edwards)
Very nice poem social interaction is like a meeting of people who know...
August 24th, 2018 12:31 - DUET. (Fay Slimm.)
Very beautiful write Fay as always describing the scene so pin point i can...
August 24th, 2018 12:28 - My mother (Misskay)
Very beautiful & true poem on mothers, they are loving and wise. Good job...
August 24th, 2018 12:26 - Host (H.R.Powell)
Is it the thoughts are the host or the fear, maybe either or but either...
August 23rd, 2018 14:28 - Please Come Home (Cutelilcardinal)
Very glum and somber its a good poem in showing how the human heart is...
August 23rd, 2018 14:25 - I wonder (Onepauly)
Life is serious and yet still one big game, and what life without a pinch...
August 23rd, 2018 12:54 - DREAMT DREAMS.. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem Fay
-Theta
August 23rd, 2018 12:50 - Poems for all Seasons (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Very beautiful poem Bolla keep it up
-Theta
August 23rd, 2018 12:48 - HIGH FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Handshakes and waves all around, high fives are for young and wild, where...
August 17th, 2018 14:41 - LIFE (Blueboy531)
Very true blue, nice poem keep it up
-Theta
August 17th, 2018 14:34 - Life (Crystal Hope)
Brief but sweet and straight to the point, very beautiful poem Hope keep...
August 17th, 2018 14:33
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