Comments on community poems by Neville
- Peace In Music. (Goldfinch60)
that\'s music for ya .................. N
August 28th, 2022 03:05 - Happy Together (Bella Shepard)
You just brought music to my ears .. I can totally relate to every word...
August 28th, 2022 02:09 - Charlotte. (Paul Bell)
she\'s probably just misunderstood :)
August 28th, 2022 01:53 - hoops (Dusk arising)
if this is autobiographical, you have my utmost respect ..
if it is...
August 28th, 2022 01:45 - Restored (Fay Slimm.)
this is indeed verily goodsome and then some my lady ... x
August 28th, 2022 01:33 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
Owzat .. there are some things one never forgets .. I bet you were...
August 27th, 2022 03:03 - Fragrance of kindness (Aradhya)
this makes perfect scents .. my eyes, heart and nose have insisted I...
August 27th, 2022 01:00 - To the Memories II (Aradhya)
I found this little bit of brevity intriguing .. clearly something to...
August 27th, 2022 00:55 - I\'D SEEN (Osei Zion)
a compelling introduction to your ink .. I am sure I shall visit more of...
August 27th, 2022 00:46 - Conceding (Fay Slimm.)
magnificent in its entirety .. but my word, that fourth stanza is...
August 26th, 2022 06:57 - Sharing Service (Orchidee)
wash a foot .. he asked aloud having misplaced his teef ... twelve...
August 26th, 2022 06:51 - September (Dusk arising)
Outstanding in every poetic sense of the word .. you just nailed my...
August 26th, 2022 06:45 - Flowers bloom from Time to Time (Aradhya)
I am so glad you found me today my friend, otherwise, I may not have...
August 26th, 2022 06:02 - Three Things. (Goldfinch60)
quite simply perfect in the clarity of its profoundness ............
August 26th, 2022 02:33 - Chatterton\'s redress (Arqios)
I could read this all day ..
near perfect in my humble opinion .....
August 26th, 2022 02:28 - Musing Missive (Orchidee)
unless I am mistaken, I imagine this will be a missive hit with your...
August 26th, 2022 02:22 - Appetite (Fay Slimm.)
enjoyed over breakfast, before work & I feel sure it will be enjoyed...
August 26th, 2022 02:14 - One drink down (MendedFences27)
the girls have got you sussed Phil .. ... I agree entirely with the...
August 24th, 2022 11:31 - Sweet Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
This is so good and for so many reasons that I myself hold so very...
August 24th, 2022 05:18 - Flourishing Favourably (Orchidee)
I like the word flourish ............. one could say I favour it...
August 24th, 2022 01:40 - Uncaged Birds. (Goldfinch60)
Keeping a bird in a cage, is an outrage
how times do change though...
August 24th, 2022 01:14 - Crusin\' to reality (MendedFences27)
I know I have said it before .. but you have such a keen eye Phil .....
August 24th, 2022 01:04 - Ohhhh Ch...... (Orchidee)
deviations are always much appreciated sir and this deviant is no...
August 22nd, 2022 05:20 - Winter Loneliness (MendedFences27)
Hey Phil, what\'s a metaphor if you aint gonna use it well .. Used...
August 22nd, 2022 05:17 - -Symphonic sadness- (Dean langmuir)
If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .....
August 22nd, 2022 05:13 - The string that pulls back (Spilleronsheet)
I too consider this to be one of your most powerful and hard hitting...
August 22nd, 2022 05:02 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Poetic tributes to this, the most golden of seasons just dont get any...
August 21st, 2022 04:40 - Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard)
this reads like a seamless marriage between a whimsey & a universal...
August 21st, 2022 03:53 - Being Human (Bella Shepard)
my word, you are so very write & true .. just wish my head popped like...
August 21st, 2022 03:46 - Why Do I Write? (Accidental Poet)
I am quite sure both scribes n scribblers ask themselves the same...
August 19th, 2022 03:09 - Satuit (Accidental Poet)
quite frankly AP, this gave me a warm glow from head to toe .. what...
August 19th, 2022 03:02 - Changes In Time. (Goldfinch60)
that\'s the kind of observation and ensuing thought that would likely...
August 19th, 2022 02:57 - Think On These Things (Orchidee)
please refrain from trying to make any tuneful utterances .. or we shall...
August 18th, 2022 12:57 - Covert (Fay Slimm.)
Hue would have thought it possible to capture so many colours and...
August 18th, 2022 10:49 - Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
Been there done that and worn the Tee shirt out .. glad I\'m not the...
August 18th, 2022 03:05 - Fresh Bread. (Goldfinch60)
you can beat an egg etc etc, but you just can\'t beat fresh home made...
August 18th, 2022 03:00 - Mad Musings With Fido (Orchidee)
what is it they say about mad dogs and Englishmen .. N :)
August 18th, 2022 02:50 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
This is nothing short of splendid ... x
August 17th, 2022 15:57 - My Beloved Ziggy (Dove)
I am so sorry to learn of your sad loss my friend...
August 17th, 2022 08:04 - Ruined By Heat. (Goldfinch60)
I normally love it when the temperature rises .. but one can have too...
August 12th, 2022 04:14 - Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles (Bella Shepard)
I just knew from the delicious title and even before opening the page...
August 12th, 2022 04:10 - What We Were (Fay Slimm.)
this is not only quite brill .. but it is spooky too dont\'cha think...
August 11th, 2022 10:18 - surface tension (Dusk arising)
a little more than somewhat perfectly postulated my friend...
August 11th, 2022 10:04 - Strange Sight. (Goldfinch60)
takes ya back some doesn\'t it GF60
August 10th, 2022 07:20 - In Life (Bella Shepard)
My word, now that really is the million dollar question .. Can I press...
August 10th, 2022 07:10 - Woof - cats! (Orchidee)
I\'m much more a dog kinda guy myself .. But you know I just love it...
August 10th, 2022 07:06 - Waiting Tables (MendedFences27)
It all makes perfect sense to me .. Write on Phil ........................
August 10th, 2022 07:03 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Each to their own I say .. and as long as no one gets hurt along the...
August 10th, 2022 07:00 - Led By The Light (Orchidee)
I kinda like what Fay said :)
August 4th, 2022 08:56 - Felt Care (Fay Slimm.)
I was one o them raised to believe a handshake must be delivered firmly...
August 3rd, 2022 08:47 - Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet (Neville)
even with full unequivocal mutual consent and a shared enthusiasm for...
August 3rd, 2022 07:41 - -me and my pen- (Dean langmuir)
existentialism rules OK .. ink well spent sir & truly...
August 3rd, 2022 02:11 - Harry Shalgosky. (Goldfinch60)
Good old Harry & may his memory long be fondly remembered ..
August 3rd, 2022 02:07 - Those Days (Fay Slimm.)
which reminds me, I need to buy another pillow ..
joking aside,...
August 2nd, 2022 11:29 - Excellent Exhortings (Orchidee)
Lost for words ................... I am :)
August 2nd, 2022 09:05 - Through The Mist. (Goldfinch60)
very atmospheric sir if you dont mind me saying so .. and your metaphors...
August 2nd, 2022 01:28 - GOODNIGHT MY LOVER (Manny Jordan)
Here\'s a tip from an old fella to a young man ..
Never go to sleep...
August 1st, 2022 07:27 - Satisfaction (Fay Slimm.)
there is absolutely nothing here not to absolutely love...
August 1st, 2022 07:23 - Seven (MendedFences27)
This was no simple journey you took this reader on MF27 ..
This was...
August 1st, 2022 03:25 - Sometimes (Bella Shepard)
Whose gonna argue with this little gem .. packed with good old honest...
July 31st, 2022 16:43 - Invited (Fay Slimm.)
you are indeed the mistress of subtle and tasteful erotica my lady .....
July 31st, 2022 08:13 - Fall (Autumn) (MendedFences27)
you can beat an egg, a carpet and a drum ..
but you sure can\'t beat...
July 31st, 2022 01:57 - Sheep Security (Orchidee)
sheep dogs and electric fences both worked in my day :)
July 31st, 2022 01:52 - I don’t see color (KRWonder)
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a neat poem, a fine...
July 30th, 2022 16:26 - Storm Stilled (Orchidee)
I started to feel sea-sick part way through .. so shall reserve my...
July 30th, 2022 08:24 - Tenderness (MendedFences27)
.................. this is even ..................
more beautiful than...
July 30th, 2022 08:16 - Lunacy (Fay Slimm.)
No one in their write mind would either care or dare to argue with you...
July 30th, 2022 08:12 - Just a Dream (MendedFences27)
I\'m with you Phil & truly sir ... Amen
July 29th, 2022 13:28 - Salvation Sure (Orchidee)
I feel certain that this is a hymn poem in 6.6.8.6 format .. unless of...
July 29th, 2022 13:23 - Edge of sorrow and love (Jerry Reynolds)
wot else is a metaphor for eh\' very cleva & very much enjoyed mate...
July 29th, 2022 10:59 - freight train (Dusk arising)
what a bluesy little number this turned out to be .. and my word sir, I...
July 29th, 2022 07:47 - One Patch (Fay Slimm.)
I think I caught a glimpse of it too ..
delightful and truly...
July 29th, 2022 03:42 - Laughter And Sleep. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m gonna try & put your last four lines to the test the next time I\'m...
July 29th, 2022 03:07 - Welcome Worship (Orchidee)
Don\'t ya just love them joyful noises Mr. O :)
July 28th, 2022 13:32 - Somewhere (Fay Slimm.)
poetry personified my dear lady Fay x
July 28th, 2022 06:27 - if i were a flower (Dusk arising)
I being a lover of words and indeed of satire and truth am mightily...
July 28th, 2022 03:39 - home (Arqios)
yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is...
July 28th, 2022 03:19 - Behind That Navajo Smile (Neville)
.................................. true
July 28th, 2022 03:15 - Fishing (Jerry Reynolds)
Now ya talkin my kinda language Jez
and if you can make room for a...
July 27th, 2022 16:06 - silent glow (Arqios)
I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the...
July 27th, 2022 09:36 - So Much (Fay Slimm.)
there be not a single thing here that\'s not to like .. on the contrary,...
July 27th, 2022 09:33 - there were shadows (Dusk arising)
the ability to convey such wistfulness is rarely encountered in so few...
July 27th, 2022 03:50 - Pleasant Prospects (Orchidee)
one has gotta have prospects, otherwise, what\'s the point in...
July 27th, 2022 03:34 - Strange Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey, sounds like someone slipped an acid tab in ya cocoa .. Just you...
July 27th, 2022 01:47 - Someday (Paul Bell)
I\'m bloomin glad I\'m not the only one .. life is full of em isn\'t it...
July 26th, 2022 10:24 - Life In The Light (Orchidee)
no one wants to be kept in the dark surely...
July 26th, 2022 07:00 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
Whilst I so hope we are still in the very depths of mid-summer .. Your...
July 26th, 2022 04:02 - the love years (Dusk arising)
I felt every single bloomin well placed word sir ..
Not only can I...
July 26th, 2022 03:15 - The Concert Ends Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Bravo sir .. I imagine at least a dozen encore\'s...
July 26th, 2022 03:09 - days of morphine sulphate (Dusk arising)
My thoughts are with you DA & no kidding...
July 25th, 2022 13:06 - Hold My Hand (Bella Shepard)
Now this is what we call a love poem round these parts .. it feels to...
July 25th, 2022 09:35 - Summer Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
I like it Jez, I like it a lot sir ......... N :)
July 25th, 2022 09:31 - Growing In Graces (Orchidee)
it looks like you have ticked all of the hymn poem tick boxes Orchidee...
July 25th, 2022 09:29 - Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
If I could be anything other than me, I would probably wish to be a...
July 25th, 2022 07:50 - Without Love (Accidental Poet)
Love is that universal gift
To give and receive
Everyone longs for...
July 25th, 2022 03:18 - Irony (Bella Shepard)
I\'m write behind you all the way Bella .. this is a little gem .....
July 25th, 2022 03:12 - Summer Day (Jerry Reynolds)
you can beat an egg & a root, but you can\'t beat a tomato :)
July 25th, 2022 03:01 - Summer Moon (Arqios)
this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest...
July 25th, 2022 02:57 - Acorns at fall (Spilleronsheet)
Terrific title
Fantastic four stanzas - maybe to match the four...
July 24th, 2022 12:00 - Does sky have space ? (Spilleronsheet)
You ask a series of 64 billion dollar questions dear spills .. whether...
July 24th, 2022 11:54
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