Comments on community poems by Neville
- Tasting The Wine. (Fay Slimm.)
in the absence of a new post today ..
I just had to see where you are...
May 13th, 2023 08:51 - CLICHEβ NO LONGER (Bobby O)
there\'s nowt quite like it is there, that feeling of unconditional...
May 13th, 2023 08:46 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
sadly, its a beautiful jungle out there deliciously depicted in here...
May 12th, 2023 12:56 - giant\'s demise (Arqios)
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive...
May 12th, 2023 12:53 - Uplifting Utterance (Orchidee)
lost for words so no utterances from me, I shall just think things...
May 12th, 2023 12:37 - Narrative (2781)
tis lovely sir and while one can beat a drum and an egg etc etc, one...
May 12th, 2023 05:29 - bygones gone by (Arqios)
who needs a frontal lobe when one can always refer back to this ..
May 11th, 2023 07:30 - A welcome return (Orchidee)
a fine and fitting deviation from the norm Mr. O π
May 11th, 2023 01:53 - The Sins of Us (Parisab)
I first wanted to see where you are coming from .. I\'m delighted and...
May 11th, 2023 00:37 - wilderness calling, again (Arqios)
I have been working full on so seem to have missed out on a whole lotta...
May 10th, 2023 12:35 - Camber Powered (Fay Slimm.)
aww bless you dear lady Fay .. that upside down multi hued smile in...
May 10th, 2023 12:27 - Practical Pursuits (Orchidee)
9 out of 10 rats reckon practice makes perfect .. ππππ§
May 10th, 2023 02:19 - plumbing depths (Arqios)
very interesting but must confess I got lost somewhere along the...
May 9th, 2023 07:29 - Buildings of Blessings (Orchidee)
if you are not yet a mason, I bet you are at least part way through a...
May 9th, 2023 01:45 - Senryus 5 (MendedFences27)
How I managed to miss these x5 little gems until now is one helluva...
May 9th, 2023 00:01 - Conspiracy Theory (MendedFences27)
indeed a most cleverly crafted and otherwise strategically contrived...
May 8th, 2023 23:49 - Hannah the Hellion (MendedFences27)
Just one brief question before awarding scores ..
Would it be even...
May 8th, 2023 23:36 - coronated (Arqios)
how extraordinarily cerebral .. I very muchly enjoyed the ride sir ..
May 8th, 2023 02:12 - Coronation Kiss (Orchidee)
Well recounted Mr. O ..π§ππ
May 8th, 2023 02:09 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
the synapse that existed between us has since been connected ..
May 7th, 2023 01:48 - we\'re living in a meridian world (Arqios)
Bet that cat lands on its feet again tho\'
Hey, you should maybe listen...
May 6th, 2023 23:14 - Treading The Path Of Life (Bella Shepard)
I enjoyed todays offering two days late .. but nevertheless, I enjoyed...
May 6th, 2023 09:35 - young love\'s shimmer (Arqios)
I like nothing more than to slow down and drag out fleeting...
May 6th, 2023 05:46 - Equal Devotion to the Creator (Mottakeenur Rehman)
the poem works well on its own .. but your authors note makes it easier...
May 6th, 2023 05:41 - Trusting In The Truth (Orchidee)
Amen, reads like a prayer poem π
May 6th, 2023 05:37 - PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O)
The man did good .. very good it seems .. not an easy thing to do .....
May 6th, 2023 05:33 - Johnnie Walker (Arqios)
after but a few tentative sips and a largish slug .. I feel like my...
May 5th, 2023 05:14 - TRAVELS (Bobby O)
Get outa here, how could you not .. I have myself neva dared to take on...
May 5th, 2023 05:10 - Undertow (Fay Slimm.)
I hear thee loud, as do I also hear thee clearly ..
and tho\' again...
May 5th, 2023 04:52 - Night-Time Nigh-Time (Orchidee)
red in a flash .. but turned blue when the naughty cold night air...
May 5th, 2023 02:33 - Howard (2781)
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old...
May 5th, 2023 00:46 - Fact or fiction (2781)
sounds like he was bowled a googly
May 5th, 2023 00:44 - Unreedeming Utilisations (Orchidee)
I have a thing about eights Mr. O and what could be better than those...
May 4th, 2023 02:08 - Clandestine Biscuits (Fay Slimm.)
Ahhh, such is life .. but sometimes ..
how perfect her ink flowed on...
May 4th, 2023 01:14 - Sapere Aude (Dare to Know) (Bella Shepard)
surely there must be some valid reason why I have not arrived here...
May 4th, 2023 01:08 - Resurrection Rejoicings (Orchidee)
very spiritual .. almost to the point of being spooky ..
May 3rd, 2023 02:44 - Dear Sister By Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234)
I can appreciate the motivation behind this poem of yours .. I note that...
May 2nd, 2023 23:21 - manstrocity (Arqios)
my first impression, was that this little peach of a poem is very good...
May 2nd, 2023 23:10 - WHAT IS (Fay Slimm.)
this is quite simply magnificent dear lady Fay ..pinned pitch perfect to...
May 2nd, 2023 23:04 - Temple Talk (Orchidee)
is that why synagogues are invariably round, so that no one can hide in...
May 2nd, 2023 02:45 - Biggest Mistake. (Goldfinch60)
No time like the present or what\'s left of it .. looking back\'s good...
May 2nd, 2023 01:39 - The Hill Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I thoroughly enjoyed journeying with you today sir and the looking back...
May 2nd, 2023 01:12 - Prayer For Protection (Orchidee)
I think I get the point, but a crash helmet and a shield wouldn\'t go...
May 1st, 2023 13:50 - Earth\'s Music. (Goldfinch60)
that is such a delightful way of looking at it and of course hearing it
April 30th, 2023 04:16 - Here Be Hope (Orchidee)
and the moral of the story is to never lose hope or else all hope is...
April 30th, 2023 04:14 - TEN Oβ CLOCK LEAD IN (Bobby O)
I agree with every single word ..
April 29th, 2023 14:36 - A Wedding. (Doggerel Dave)
Politicians kill more people per year than than drugs, alcohol,...
April 29th, 2023 14:31 - Desire Achieved. (Goldfinch60)
Well said squire Goldie π£π₯π
April 29th, 2023 14:26 - Eighteen (Kinsey Peterson)
Many belated birthday blessings .. (see, I\'ve just done it again .....
April 29th, 2023 14:25 - A Taste of Tears (Bella Shepard)
these words just ran a feather up and down my spine .. and then left me...
April 29th, 2023 14:12 - air quotes (Arqios)
and they used to say \'its the tobacco that counts\' ...............
April 29th, 2023 14:07 - Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O)
I love all kinds of music,
I like most kinds of sound,
but its the...
April 28th, 2023 07:06 - Trilogy (Bobby O)
The triangles you refer to in \'Collection\' appear to sum up the whole of...
April 28th, 2023 06:22 - SKIP THE. SELFISH. ROAD (Bobby O)
like genuine demonstrations of kindness, that of being humble before our...
April 28th, 2023 05:59 - MISSING AUNT CAROL (Bobby O)
Now sir this is what I call a reminisce .. it is unusual upon the eye...
April 28th, 2023 02:42 - Friendship (Mottakeenur Rehman)
You just nailed the true meaning of friendship Mott .. another inspiring...
April 27th, 2023 05:45 - Profitable Persuals (Orchidee)
if GF60 say\'s its a good one Orchi, then maybe just maybe its a good...
April 27th, 2023 05:42 - Godly Graces (Orchidee)
wasn\'t it denarius or shekels .. or sumpfink .. I\'m pretty sure...
April 27th, 2023 01:28 - Frog And Henry. (Goldfinch60)
you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a bit of jazz now can ya...
April 27th, 2023 01:20 - Call it How You Likeβ¦.. (Doggerel Dave)
I not only see where you are coming from .. I can feel it too sir Dog :)
April 27th, 2023 01:18 - Shinrin-yoku (forest bathing) (Bella Shepard)
How wonderful my friend .. you have taken the literal translation and...
April 26th, 2023 10:43 - Hindustan (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Looking beyond .. Beautifully poemed my friend and truly
April 26th, 2023 10:38 - Fingers (MendedFences27)
two things immediately struck me about these fine words .. firstly how...
April 26th, 2023 10:35 - Just Judgements (Orchidee)
I\'m a bit lag jetted at the moment so wont pass judgement write now
April 26th, 2023 10:22 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60)
and why not indeed .......... π§
April 26th, 2023 10:19 - come and get it (Arqios)
.. a gem of a little :)
April 18th, 2023 01:21 - Bohag (Mottakeenur Rehman)
amazing .. I close my eyes and am back in India again ..
April 17th, 2023 05:08 - Merciful Musings (Orchidee)
that\'s an awful lot of hymn poems
April 17th, 2023 04:02 - Sculpture Of Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
Hey Midas, you just put the opt in optimist π§
April 17th, 2023 01:36 - Love (Dove)
such a splendid universal truth spelled out in a single statement .....
April 17th, 2023 00:11 - Blue Stone (MendedFences27)
You could not have given your poem a better title Phil .. it stands out...
April 17th, 2023 00:03 - Luminous Light (Orchidee)
if someone could point out a non luminous light, then that would likely...
April 16th, 2023 03:04 - Knowledge And Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
while the marriage between the two may often appear seamless, there is a...
April 16th, 2023 02:37 - Mozart In The Morning (Bella Shepard)
it is not hard, to both see and to hear why you dear Bella were so...
April 15th, 2023 14:37 - Kernou (Arqios)
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good...
April 15th, 2023 14:27 - Prosperous Progressions (Orchidee)
is this about the systematic process of acquiring sufficient fiscal...
April 15th, 2023 14:14 - Dodgy Dogs. (Goldfinch60)
This clearly demonstrates the fact that despite everything that is wrong...
April 15th, 2023 04:05 - Q & A Upon Leaving (MendedFences27)
there is something very pleasing about two line stanza\'s sir .. I am...
April 15th, 2023 03:58 - life from home (Arqios)
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a...
April 15th, 2023 03:43 - What We Had. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes absolutely brilliant .. sadly the perfect lament that so many of...
April 14th, 2023 07:21 - Tale Of Thomas (Orchidee)
it would appear the Fat Controller failed to put in a show ..
April 14th, 2023 07:15 - All is Well (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a beautiful dreamy poem and a...
April 14th, 2023 07:12 - Music Into My Heart. (Goldfinch60)
absolutely splendid .. I remember the very first time my fingers stroked...
April 14th, 2023 02:08 - Sheila. (Goldfinch60)
Ooh err matron .. naughty but also kinda very nice my friend .. write on...
April 14th, 2023 01:09 - You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
a most beautifully crafted love poem most fitting for a woman so...
April 14th, 2023 01:04 - seasonal diabetes (Arqios)
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06 - Festival of Food (Orchidee)
talk to me not of fishes nor seafood, I have been off sick for the past...
April 13th, 2023 09:15 - Gifted (Fay Slimm.)
I have known many such gifted individuals .. some have clearly fallen on...
April 13th, 2023 04:27 - The Magic of the Eyes (Mottakeenur Rehman)
yes, absolutely what a wonderful tribute my friend, Fariha is a very...
April 12th, 2023 07:06 - Morning Moon (Lorna)
ah\' the moon personified, perfectly captured and subsequently...
April 12th, 2023 05:16 - Resurrection Reign (Orchidee)
when will it all be over .. am asking for a friend ..
April 12th, 2023 03:07 - My Candy Shop (Eclisse)
you have a compelling pen ma\'am .. your mouth as above is both fitting...
April 12th, 2023 02:55 - Nature\'s Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
it is in the very nature of nature to be at its most beautiful in...
April 12th, 2023 02:49 - Listening. (Fay Slimm.)
Sshh .. listen, but don\'t say a word .. aint it just beautiful say\'s...
April 11th, 2023 12:13 - Commission Commitment (Orchidee)
Eggzactly .. very fittingly Easterfized
April 11th, 2023 03:50 - Memories (Fay Slimm.)
absolutely magnificent and I dont often use the M word Fay .. would I be...
April 11th, 2023 03:38 - If I be remembered let it be: Kindness that names me (L. B. Mek)
yes, truly amazing, I see what you mean and think similarly ..
and...
April 10th, 2023 05:00 - Value (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I\'m with the fella with the crimson hood and the big pointy nose
April 10th, 2023 04:51 - April\'s Insistence (Fay Slimm.)
in a word beautiful .. in a poem, even more so .. and I doubt you could...
April 10th, 2023 04:47 - Knowing (Lorna)
this is sweeter than a bucketful of demerara topped with a pint of...
April 10th, 2023 04:44
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