Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- a tired heart (Dusk arising)
You go very metaphorical (probably a better word, but I can\'t think of it...
February 14th, 2021 01:06 - Winter-Dazed (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve almost (but not quite) made me feel nostalgia for that kind of...
February 13th, 2021 16:55 - SPRING (Michael Edwards)
Got to confess (haven’t been paying attention?) that I retreated to...
February 13th, 2021 05:46 - The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for all your musical selections, Andy.
I\'ve formed the habit of...
February 13th, 2021 05:24 - There Are Two (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Interesting - Is \'make your choice\' the message?
February 12th, 2021 19:41 - Maid of the Mist (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Too much there to comment upon when I try to imagine the journey - I...
February 12th, 2021 19:10 - Peter’s Complaint (Doggerel Dave)
Rubbedy - Rhyming slang: Rub a dub dub = pub.
I deny I suggested ginseng....
February 11th, 2021 18:54 - If you are reading this... (Chick)
You can send me messages like that any time you like...
February 11th, 2021 18:43 - Solitude (FredPeyer)
Got it. I\'m there too - somewhere like that. Neatly done - thanks.
February 11th, 2021 18:41 - One At A Time. (Goldfinch60)
No blame (your comment) accrues with you here Andy – only the...
February 11th, 2021 03:38 - Behind The Gate (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thanks for that Kurt - I really enjoy solitude for for vast amounts of...
February 10th, 2021 17:51 - The world is a slave to money (Md Hossain Jaker)
You have something there, Md. I need just enough money to live...
February 10th, 2021 17:44 - Death of a tree (Willow tree)
World wide problem, deforestation.
All efforts to highlight this deserve...
February 10th, 2021 05:56 - The Maiden and the rat (AlitaOpal)
Great little fable - fun read.
Fan of Banksy or just his rat?
February 10th, 2021 04:03 - The Mourning After The Morning After (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Well..yeh.....Well..yeh - no I just said that didn\'t I? Oh where\'s the...
February 9th, 2021 17:41 - The Green Disappears – Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision....
February 9th, 2021 04:45 - Sometimes (AlitaOpal)
Can I see you for you? Well, not completely, but you are well on the way...
February 8th, 2021 23:41 - From First to Last (FredPeyer)
No boundaries - You\'ve said it all, Fred.
February 8th, 2021 19:14 - What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out (M.E.M.)
Doing the best we can - some of us.
You remark that your poems are...
February 8th, 2021 19:11 - whiskers (Dusk arising)
I fervently hope he does get a good kip, because I wish Freddie (whiskers)...
February 8th, 2021 17:28 - Mind Chased Peace (Pacifique Niyitanga)
You write of terrifying situations which have occurred all over the world...
February 8th, 2021 03:46 - It does not flow (B-LAH-que)
Hi bLq: You pose a problem for me; I claim to attempt to ‘embrace the...
February 8th, 2021 03:33 - A Technicolor Day (DesertWords)
Words don\'t desert you do they? (sorry if you\'ve heard it before).
I...
February 7th, 2021 18:52 - Alive (Julie B)
Feels very trippy. Enjoy that journey, Julie.
February 7th, 2021 18:45 - Poem, Who are You Really? (AwHec8)
Some well posed questions there, Don. I think you are right - stay close...
February 7th, 2021 18:24 - Just (Searchin4Soul)
Enjoyed your creative use of terminology here, such as \'holucination\'...
February 7th, 2021 18:05 - A Nod to Society (Poetry_Lover)
Go on - give it a go, have a shout. But no just here - out there, where it...
February 7th, 2021 04:31 - Thankful to nature everyday (Poetic Dan)
Enjoyed your poem, Dan - also your comments (I was very taken with them)...
February 7th, 2021 04:09 - Stream of consciousness….. (JonathanB)
Your last \'comments\' sentence - not sure if you were sincere or just...
February 6th, 2021 21:01 - Masks (DesertWords)
Great piece of satire which hums along with pace rhythm and...
February 6th, 2021 20:38 - MIND AND YOURS (Joe Marcello)
Yes Joe - I\'ll vote for them - your lines, NOT the proud members.
February 5th, 2021 18:06 - Welcome to 2020 (Chick)
I can understand why it might be difficult to find for many today, but is...
February 5th, 2021 17:32 - Dignity\'s Wealth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Dignity\'s Wealth has definite resonances for me as I visit a unisex (or...
February 5th, 2021 17:19 - Poem, Ode to the Pain (AwHec8)
Liked your comments - very pertinent.
February 5th, 2021 17:00 - Brain To Heart (Pacifique Niyitanga)
And peace, tranquility prevailed?
I understood your work, enjoyed it very...
February 5th, 2021 06:53 - Flimsy Stunners (Fay Slimm.)
You have just reminded me of the wonder I felt when examining the first...
February 5th, 2021 06:43 - Questions (Trenz Pruca)
As many thumbs up as I can find, Trenz. Cleanly and simply put together....
February 5th, 2021 00:01 - Daisy (Mminarik00)
Whither whence though?
February 4th, 2021 19:34 - Sharpen My Love (M.E.M.)
Great fun - full of whimsy. Agree with bLq above, but don\'t abandon that...
February 4th, 2021 19:11 - Ground Hog Day (Jerry Reynolds)
\'a mere fart\' any good? :-)
Just send a little of that cold over by...
February 4th, 2021 19:04 - No Holidays. (Goldfinch60)
\"Just a thought\"??? Go on Andy - you keep thinking if that keeps you...
February 4th, 2021 03:18 - No grandmasters (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve cracked it, I think, Dan
February 4th, 2021 01:00 - the richest soil (Dusk arising)
Well put, Dusk. Great to see you fearing for the world rather than just...
February 4th, 2021 00:53 - Snowdrops (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Nothing too feeble about that, Blue. I don\'t normally \'get\' nature...
February 3rd, 2021 20:37 - LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS (Michael Edwards)
Oh, come now Michael - \'Less is more\' don\'t you know?
Me, I still...
February 3rd, 2021 19:32 - Gone (Jerry Reynolds)
Nice one , Jerry - imaginative images are always open to adjustment and...
February 2nd, 2021 17:21 - AN ARTISAN (Michael Edwards)
Been thinking for sometime that if, owing to covid restrictions you ran...
February 2nd, 2021 04:38 - The View From The Window. (Goldfinch60)
Revealed yourself as a writer of great short stories with a twist.
New...
February 2nd, 2021 04:31 - Solitary (Lily_)
I\'m not sure anyone is convinced by advice (being told) by others - it...
February 2nd, 2021 04:22 - Trigger warning Eating Disorder (Chick)
That’s a lucid description of a disorder which to many (including to...
February 1st, 2021 21:10 - Brave In The Grave (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Some of the fine detail re the circumstances a little difficult to...
January 31st, 2021 19:36 - Sun Kissed (Dove)
Completely justified your nom de plume, RB - double points....
January 31st, 2021 19:16 - OVERDOSING (Prince Rin Okumura)
Back grounded colours here make parts of this impossible to read for...
January 31st, 2021 18:55 - Spring Love (Jerry Reynolds)
A rich piece of poetic embroidery ensures that memory in this instance...
January 31st, 2021 18:48 - Miss Take (Neville)
The ephemeral nature of culturally imposed standards of ‘beauty’...
January 31st, 2021 18:39 - a prayer for..... (Dusk arising)
You are a wordsmith, dusk.
One can only hope...
January 31st, 2021 05:01 - That Photograph. (Goldfinch60)
I can understand why that photo is important to you, Andy. It is sometimes...
January 30th, 2021 04:05 - Through the looking glass (Heatherbee)
Sometimes one must. When the hairs sprouting out my nose start poking me...
January 29th, 2021 18:25 - A message or a reminder (Trin)
Powerfully put together. Looks you’ve got toxic interpersonal...
January 29th, 2021 18:19 - Attitude. (Fay Slimm.)
Phew Fay! Not going to comment on your style’s architecture this...
January 29th, 2021 17:57 - A restless night (Heatherbee)
Real, measured and described, your poem. I have more than a nodding...
January 28th, 2021 16:59 - TIME TO HIT (Michael Edwards)
Situation well framed in the picture, Michael.
Did you settle for baked...
January 28th, 2021 01:09 - The Freeway in my Head (FredPeyer)
Don\'t know quite how to tackle this Fred - It is a very rich description...
January 28th, 2021 01:03 - The First Bloom (Heatherbee)
Now I\'ve started (second time today - you are not alone!!) I may be doing...
January 27th, 2021 19:24 - Rooms (Oldmat)
Contribution from a pedant:
\'On too the future\' - try \'On to the...
January 27th, 2021 18:34 - Her Again (Lizzie Lara)
So you invite suggestions and concerns both here and in your last...
January 27th, 2021 05:37 - LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards)
Where? When? Words, combined with your picture do have a certain appeal -...
January 26th, 2021 02:57 - Grumpy Old Men (John Prophet)
Will you cut out your vapid generalizations?
Old people come on all...
January 26th, 2021 00:45 - Stunningly Clear Vistas (FredPeyer)
Hallucinatory Fred?
Dave
January 25th, 2021 22:22 - Why is it so hard when it… (Jerry Reynolds)
So was it hard or was it effortless?
Looks effortless....
January 25th, 2021 19:34 - Farewell To Arms (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Great question - those first two lines. Homelessness, PTSD, high suicide...
January 25th, 2021 19:28 - Mango (Preeti)
There you go - that kind of intelligence (Brixton Beach by Roma Tearne)...
January 25th, 2021 18:45 - Days like these (Sylviasearcher)
Ennui? It\'s what gets me going in the end. the irritation with myself...
January 25th, 2021 06:27 - walking (Dusk arising)
Sounds like you, awake during the wee early hours has persisted, now you...
January 25th, 2021 00:31 - New Year\'s Resolutions (FredPeyer)
If at first you don\'t succeed, at least give someone (me) an empathic...
January 24th, 2021 22:45 - Spooky Action at a Distance (Philip)
Yeh - that makes two (three) of us.
OK - Leave it there, and let \'em get...
January 24th, 2021 18:53 - Toblerone (Preeti)
Your poems are pretty enigmatic - to my eyes at least. Would you care to...
January 24th, 2021 18:27 - Magic Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Nostalgia rules - and why not.
Thanks Andy.
January 24th, 2021 05:45 - A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards)
I cannot quite put my finger on just what those who watch get out of such...
January 24th, 2021 05:39 - opposites attract (Dusk arising)
Their magnet like attraction kept them both out of trouble, I believe,...
January 24th, 2021 05:13 - I don\'t know how (Poetic Dan)
Refer you back to dusk and Fred. I\'m not going to find anything else...
January 23rd, 2021 19:17 - fishing rod (Dusk arising)
Definitely kept me reading to the reveal. Creeped me out for a while....
January 23rd, 2021 17:52 - Creative Writing 101 (DesertWords)
By all means \"Lay aside the rules and the style\" if you so wish - your...
January 23rd, 2021 17:42 - Until We Meet Again (DarkSoul98)
I get that - You have very well encapsulated the feelings of loss and...
January 23rd, 2021 17:33 - THE SECRET POLTERGEIST (Nancy Rdz LL)
Wot - no garlic?
January 23rd, 2021 04:03 - RED DAWN (Joe Marcello)
The Suburban Bandit rides again.
Dave
January 22nd, 2021 17:56 - Indivisible Fractions (Neville)
Is this to be my Destiny, my one true way, Master?
Have you bestowed upon...
January 22nd, 2021 17:15 - Rousing (Fay Slimm.)
You have a fine crew of birds there Fay. Great little tribute.
Wouldn\'t...
January 22nd, 2021 06:43 - The owl and the faerie craic (Dusk arising)
Olde worlde fairey fun. Got me in.
Owls, supposedly wise, can be a pain...
January 22nd, 2021 01:00 - meaningfulness (Dusk arising)
A model every disengaged/separated couple should attempt to follow....
January 21st, 2021 18:16 - Abhorrent vehement strife hijacking Homo sapiens (Rew4er2nail)
You\'ve done it again - great stuff!
But how?
Regards
January 20th, 2021 18:12 - When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Your poem, plus the colouring you’ve added in your comments, paint a...
January 20th, 2021 17:21 - Weaponry (Fay Slimm.)
This photo is terrifying. I cannot look at it without the feeling that in...
January 20th, 2021 16:59 - A Collection of Slumbers (Neville)
I\'m an inveterate collector of bits of old rubbish which I somehow came...
January 20th, 2021 05:49 - Oh Look! (Goldfinch60)
In England now , it\'s no longer \'Jolly hockey sticks!\', it\'s now...
January 20th, 2021 05:40 - careful silence (Dusk arising)
Is this (dare I ask?) from experience?
Only having been part of night...
January 19th, 2021 19:12 - Reasons for Leaving (Neville)
You aren\'t doing a Marie Kondo here are you ??
Dave
January 19th, 2021 06:15 - Today (Jerry Reynolds)
Not enough people are trying hard enough.
In America, every black person...
January 18th, 2021 16:46 - Memory Trace (Arobot)
For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in.
I don\'t...
January 18th, 2021 16:30 - I Dream a World (Robert Southwick Richmond)
Good straightforward job your poem, which I liked for its...
January 18th, 2021 16:14
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