Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Even When it’s All Over It’s Not Necessarily Over (Neville) I\'ll always vote for you when you do a long \'un (which is not often...
  March 17th, 2022 17:47
• You Are (Fay Slimm.) I haven\'t had much experience Fay, but I will give it a try - how could...
  March 16th, 2022 19:17
• Vengeance Verities (Orchidee) No wonder you and KP have had a bit of a tempestuous relationship,...
  March 16th, 2022 06:26
• Darkness To Light. (Goldfinch60) My favourite anthem for years, but if it ain\'t working, why?
  March 16th, 2022 06:10
• LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99 (Michael Edwards) So multi disciplined, Michael: L’s one and three – Relationship[...
  March 16th, 2022 05:52
• Taunting Muse. (Goldfinch60) Need to find a heavy duty kind of bog paper, Andy. Write round the...
  March 15th, 2022 03:43
• LIMERICK 91 (Michael Edwards) Limited number of orifices available, Michael...but corr... the picture...
  March 15th, 2022 03:32
• Condiment (Neville) Expectations..... and did she cut the mustard in the end, Nev? Sorry -...
  March 14th, 2022 07:36
• VPL (Paul Bell) A larf a minute....no hang on.....more frequent than that... Being an...
  March 13th, 2022 20:15
• The Decline of Recollection (Neville) I did not read your piece as necessarily relating to dementia , Neville,...
  March 13th, 2022 19:51
• The Decline of Recollection (Neville) Surely you don\'t want to start a debate on voluntary euthanasia here,...
  March 13th, 2022 04:48
• Saline Songs (Fay Slimm.) The rhythmic crash and flow of the waves and the tang of the salt all...
  March 12th, 2022 07:38
• Something Else Entirely (Neville) If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one...
  March 12th, 2022 07:27
• Russians (Dusk arising) Those words are so right, dusk.You made them very accessible there. So...
  March 12th, 2022 07:17
• how transient (Dusk arising) Who cares? Earth an insignificant piece of matter in an immense universe ...
  March 11th, 2022 03:51
• Seeing the Light (Jenny.g) The change a parent should undergo as their offspring grows and develops...
  March 11th, 2022 00:22
• Why? [*⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️* Certain words in this poem may be upsetting to some] (-MercyMent@l-) Your response feels coherent to me, Mercy. \'Why?\' is a question you...
  March 10th, 2022 18:54
• Oedipus (Neville) Hey Neville - wot about a video? Why not go to yusporn or ask one of...
  March 10th, 2022 03:28
• My Rose Coloured Spectacles (Marrianna) Light and bright - escapist of course, but non the worse for that.
  March 9th, 2022 18:53
• Why? [*⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️* Certain words in this poem may be upsetting to some] (-MercyMent@l-) Don\'t see why anyone should enjoy that. But the question has to be...
  March 9th, 2022 00:29
• Homes for heroes. (Chris Duffy) Do not reflect Chris, on what has been done before. Some (not all)...
  March 9th, 2022 00:22
• I Would (Fay Slimm.) I never knew you cared... Such rich language, Fay - so rich , I don\'t...
  March 8th, 2022 19:02
• Same Old Blue Jeans (Neville) Wot flares? Do try to hang onto them just a little longer.... they will be...
  March 8th, 2022 18:09
• THE INNER LIMITS (Joe Marcello) A good example of one of those \'common sense\' saws which float around...
  March 8th, 2022 17:59
• horrible (Dusk arising) But politicians and war machines of each and every country never learn, do...
  March 8th, 2022 07:01
• Please don\'t stop the rain (Rrodriguez) Entirely possible to have too much of a good thing, you know - as many...
  March 7th, 2022 23:47
• accolade (Dusk arising) Yeh? Well then, Happy Birthday, dusk....................I hate to boast,...
  March 7th, 2022 18:21
• Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (Rozina) Both Robert and Neil have it. I would like to add though that alcohol is...
  March 7th, 2022 06:30
• Total Success. (Goldfinch60) A bigger load of old rubbish I\'ve have never come across. At no time in...
  March 7th, 2022 04:23
• Untitled (ModernBard) Hey ModB - A bit late I know, but better late....... The links you make...
  March 6th, 2022 21:25
• Not Wanting to be Famous (Neville) Nearly missed this one, Neville -sorry. Today no time to be famous when...
  March 6th, 2022 06:35
• SNIPPETS (3& 4) (Michael Edwards) Three is me; I need to put that somewhere - got a fridge magnet? Four,...
  March 6th, 2022 05:58
• Encroachment (Fay Slimm.) Same kind of situation occurs along parts of the east coast of Australia,...
  March 6th, 2022 05:39
• my muse went meowsy (Dusk arising) Can\'t avoid this one. The end of line words .- are they special? some...
  March 6th, 2022 00:50
• The Fridge (Paul Bell) I kept up with the fridge (I think...) Seemed safest. But wot about the...
  March 5th, 2022 21:48
• Connection (Fay Slimm.) Phew! You are getting quite raw lately, Fay - and nothing wrong with that.
  March 5th, 2022 06:04
• When You Were Mine: Villanelle (Dove) Dove, you really are a master of the Villanelle, so very well...
  March 4th, 2022 19:10
• To what end? (Doggerel Dave) I reworked this piece in the hope of greater clarity. No change in...
  March 4th, 2022 18:43
• CONFLICT (Andy Hunter) A great overall view in disciplined verse. Thanks Andy
  March 4th, 2022 18:05
• Spiders (Nikemomma.org) Please don\'t squash. Try to control your arachnophobia and if possible...
  March 4th, 2022 05:10
• Youth\'s Blood (Fay Slimm.) That is pared down and very savage, Fay - absolutely spot on.
  March 4th, 2022 04:59
• LIMERICKS 94 95 & 96 (Michael Edwards) (After number three, before all the zoophilia set in:) 😜 A...
  March 4th, 2022 04:31
• the light we see we dont see (Dusk arising) Rich, gut tearing poetry, dusk.
  March 4th, 2022 04:09
• я з тобою україно  (Dusk arising) Echoes of WW2. Avoidable until it is too late. Thanks dusk.
  March 3rd, 2022 21:51
• The Tale of Brulee (Neville) And as the truck moved off, there would be no more laying around. The joy...
  March 3rd, 2022 06:30
• We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.) Beyond the colouring of my hair, which I will not do, I\'ll follow you...
  March 3rd, 2022 06:18
• The Sweet Sublime (Kevin Michael Bloor) You are just getting old, mate -nothing more.
  March 3rd, 2022 04:33
• O leaders (NafisaSB) Sussed out several of your poems - so I know your heart is very much in...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:28
• Second Gift. (Goldfinch60) What\'s to understand ? Get on with it and enjoy!
  March 3rd, 2022 04:08
• Wild Boar (Thekkinkkattil) Perhaps the crucial question: Are your boars indigenous or an introduced...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:05
• Cocktails For Putin (Jerry Reynolds) And, Jerry? My literal mind hasn\'t encompassed the implications of...
  March 3rd, 2022 03:57
• Wine (Zhangyuyouyu) Your profile states you are 16..... I was much older when I made that...
  March 2nd, 2022 18:22
• When Can We Have Peace? (Zhangyuyouyu) I will post today a sliver of an answer to that question. You look like...
  March 2nd, 2022 18:18
• THE REAL KNUCKLEBALL (Joe Marcello) Avoid penury - make that learning curve vertical ASAP. Truth to be found...
  March 1st, 2022 21:02
• Attack (Fay Slimm.) I can feel the ambivalence Fay, in your perfectly calibrated piece (which...
  March 1st, 2022 05:01
• LIMERICK 89 (Michael Edwards) Ah, the story of many a poor innocent human thrust into a dysfunctional...
  March 1st, 2022 04:43
• Between Squalls (Neville) This is a shock, Nev - obviously more than tonsillitis. Intend to share...
  March 1st, 2022 04:03
• Symbols Of Music. (Goldfinch60) An education is mine, provided I stick around long enough. Thanks for the...
  February 28th, 2022 20:11
• Sleep? (Rozina) Topic worthy of note, Rozina. Threats from my public radio that anything...
  February 28th, 2022 20:05
• Missing (Spilleronsheet) No dreams... none possible in such a situation. A pure statement of fact....
  February 27th, 2022 19:46
• Reef (Neville) Now that\'s autobiography rich in detail, Neville - I\'d like to read more...
  February 26th, 2022 05:23
• LIMERICK 90 (Michael Edwards) Like yer little \'Wot no...\' man (presumably \'man\') in car, Michael...
  February 26th, 2022 05:13
• One Of Two. (Goldfinch60) Wot, one of two knees? Don\'t worry Andy - the other one will be there for...
  February 26th, 2022 05:08
• I give it away (Poetic Dan) I definitely feel you have, as expressed in the poem, resolved something...
  February 24th, 2022 20:43
• Another South West Coastal Path Miracle (Neville) An enigma of a write, Nev, rich in small detail. But had this one ended...
  February 24th, 2022 04:31
• Who\'s God. (Goldfinch60) All I ever want to express about the Holey (note the added \'e\')...
  February 23rd, 2022 06:10
• Just a Series of Thoughts (Neville) Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half...
  February 22nd, 2022 22:06
• LIMERICK 87 (Michael Edwards) Limerick provided too many visuals, Michael - definitely needed the...
  February 22nd, 2022 21:46
• Five Beatles and a Groupie (Neville) Aah - but who got their end away........in the end? 😊😊😊
  February 21st, 2022 21:57
• Learning to Lean (Fay Slimm.) Thanks for the poem, Fay. Very appropriate timing for what, if reports are...
  February 20th, 2022 20:43
• Henpecked ! (Chris Duffy) A relationship richly painted there, Chris. You make me realize a part...
  February 20th, 2022 20:34
• A Long Pretence (Neville) Happens to us all sometime, I think Nev. Remember the fleeting, oh so very...
  February 20th, 2022 20:25
• Looking Back (Charmaine Bartlett) Yeh - I\'d vote for that; much to empathise with there, Charmaine.
  February 20th, 2022 20:13
• Mirror Mirror On The Wall (Rozina) You must work on a positive relationship with your mirror. Luckily this...
  February 11th, 2022 19:32
• Armed Rules (Fay Slimm.) Thank you Fay for your polished poetry.. But I\'ve got nothing to add on...
  February 11th, 2022 19:15
• one of those nights (Dusk arising) Creeping me out, your Gothic magic mushroom job - thanks for
  February 11th, 2022 19:04
• My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed (Dove) I do hope your neat villanelle was FOR the broken hearted, and not you...
  February 9th, 2022 00:15
• Forever And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) Spiritually polyamorous? Go for it, enjoy. Life is too short to miss out...
  February 8th, 2022 03:35
• LIMERICK 79 (Michael Edwards) I\'m voting with orchi - again! Dunno what\'s happening here... Orchi -...
  February 8th, 2022 03:21
• Tonight (Fay Slimm.) Picture is surplus to requirements, Fay. All revealed in your disciplined...
  February 7th, 2022 16:38
• Mystical Melancholy (Gary Edward Geraci) Think I\'m with orchi here Gary, because If I read him right, my advice...
  February 5th, 2022 15:50
• A PAIR OF PEARS (A HAIRY PAIR) (Michael Edwards) My entry to this competition is: a pair of coconuts (outer husk...
  February 5th, 2022 03:36
• The Street Sweeper (Rozina) The exact scenario you describe in your first two stanzas exists...
  February 4th, 2022 06:04
• Gedling memories (Dusk arising) Thumbs up to this one dusk, given my interest in railways. A piece loaded...
  February 3rd, 2022 16:42
• Beauty (Fay Slimm.) So full of texture, Fay. If beauty is in the eye of the beholder (not sure...
  February 2nd, 2022 19:58
• SHE STANDS ALONE (Michael Edwards) I think that might be poetry....even I, not a great lover of depictions of...
  February 2nd, 2022 19:44
• CRACK\'S ARE HOW LIGHT GETS IN (Timothy Michael Douget) If you must provide references relating to your piece, may I suggest you...
  February 2nd, 2022 03:57
• Some People. (Goldfinch60) Oh come on, Andy - where is your love of humanity, your love of and hopes...
  February 2nd, 2022 03:50
• Fat Cat (Rozina) Consider yourself lucky Warhol doesn\'t reside with you. Don\'t you...
  February 2nd, 2022 01:44
• Oh Summer – Tra La La (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Fay - all contributions gratefully received by this puddle of ...
  February 1st, 2022 18:44
• Yankee Jack (Neville) Seems One never stops learning - unavoidable when such information is made...
  February 1st, 2022 18:37
• Snogging And Kissing. (Goldfinch60) Disgusting! 😊👍 😊👍 😊 👍
  February 1st, 2022 04:31
• What Do I Know Of Love (MendedFences27) “Pure fiction”? Well don’t do it then! While I’m no fan of love...
  February 1st, 2022 04:25
• Missed (Fay Slimm.) An old English oak; your lovely piece bought out the nostalgia in me, Fay....
  January 28th, 2022 21:02
• Hot Air. (Goldfinch60) Surreal critique, Andy. Thanks.
  January 28th, 2022 20:44
• Someone Else’s Religion Maybe (Neville) Got \'em all going there, Nev...... (including Yrs Truly)...... Me? - Who?...
  January 26th, 2022 00:13
• Unbeatable (Fay Slimm.) There are experiences/activities I have never and now never will...
  January 25th, 2022 22:54
• the hazey dreams of Janice (Dusk arising) Romantically tragic, dusk. Much entertaining informative value in your...
  January 24th, 2022 20:34
• Genes And Traits (Rozina) That second stanza is something else - I don\'t want to unpick it... It...
  January 15th, 2022 00:46
• Yin and Yang (Rozina) There\'s a lot of depth in what appears to be very light verse. Glad I...
  January 15th, 2022 00:30