Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Signs of old age (Hzugman)
And everything that is supposed to work if you take it three times a day...
August 30th, 2022 18:13 - A Few Moments After (Neville)
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn\'t the makings of a question mark unfinished,...
August 30th, 2022 06:05 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
Let’s make it clear: this is one of the strongest and straightforward...
August 30th, 2022 05:57 - Indispensable People. (Goldfinch60)
Of course, it’s Ozymandias springs to mind….
Or Narcissistic...
August 30th, 2022 05:42 - Being Human (Bella Shepard)
Sometimes less is more.... in this case definitely, Bella
August 30th, 2022 04:26 - What you going to do about that? (Tallisman)
Should be classified as \'humour\' .
So what you gonna do about...
August 29th, 2022 23:02 - While Watching Swifts (Neville)
For me it is impossible to express the wonder.
Glad you took up the...
August 29th, 2022 19:51 - Affluence. (Chris Duffy)
The influence of affluence is pernicious in western (and quite possibility...
August 29th, 2022 19:44 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
Not much more to add after dusk got in first.
When I\'m here I\'m here,...
August 29th, 2022 06:55 - My life in lipstick (Morwenna)
Still don\'t understand.....
I can appreciate the fun, Morwenna, if not...
August 29th, 2022 02:05 - Happy Hour (LittleTalks)
I once lived in the tropics - your piece evoked memories of torment and...
August 28th, 2022 19:04 - Blame Russia or the Ukraine? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Yeh - go for it.
Could be though that politicians are pushed by even...
August 28th, 2022 06:41 - Just a Few Recollections (Neville)
A memory without remorse, Neville - the very best kind when it involves...
August 28th, 2022 06:36 - Peace In Music. (Goldfinch60)
And there you pose the question;
Five easy lines is all it took.
Now...
August 28th, 2022 02:14 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
Vitaï Lampada and you are the go:
Play up and play the game - and you...
August 27th, 2022 08:12 - Take Two Poles Josie (Neville)
Not quite sure of this one, Nev (not an uncommon experience here..)....
August 27th, 2022 07:21 - Restored (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m awake either too early or too late for all this (disturbed sleep...
August 27th, 2022 07:12 - Three Things. (Goldfinch60)
Wot – you talking to me?
Just shut up and let it be -
Let the world be...
August 26th, 2022 08:17 - Conceding (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Fay for the rich expression of the abandonment of self I can feel...
August 26th, 2022 07:43 - The Making of Them Both Maybe (Neville)
A moment in a very real interaction.
Got it and enjoyed it Neville.
August 25th, 2022 17:33 - Crusin\' to reality (MendedFences27)
As a metaphor, i think I can take it, Phil. As a description of an actual...
August 24th, 2022 07:35 - Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60)
Echoes from our past -
Hope all can relish.
For some all fun...
August 24th, 2022 07:23 - Sweet Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
I can almost slurp your piece, Fay - pity me, all mine come bubble wrapped...
August 24th, 2022 06:59 - Laughter\'s Healing. (Goldfinch60)
There’s nothing like a good old laugh -
Endorphins released give that...
August 23rd, 2022 19:11 - With Only Five Leaves Left (Neville)
Not wrong there Neville. Took the obvious course (that\'s me...). Owing to...
August 23rd, 2022 18:40 - There Is an Old Weed in my Garden (Quemis)
I was out of action when you posted this. now gratefully found by...
August 23rd, 2022 17:59 - My Diane (Hzugman)
\"may be changed... maybe not\" - commit, man, commit.
I\'m sure Diane...
August 22nd, 2022 19:29 - The Uneven and Unfiltered Concrete Floor (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I once lived on that street, I think (or one very close by). Not sure the...
August 22nd, 2022 19:21 - Uncaged Birds. (Goldfinch60)
There are no birds which need to be caged,
Or would be caged if they had...
August 22nd, 2022 05:02 - Anticipating Angels (Neville)
I find my literal mind unable to be sure of the directional movement here,...
August 21st, 2022 19:38 - Thai Dining. (Goldfinch60)
If you find a good café then stick to it:
When a bad experience does...
August 21st, 2022 08:21 - Changes In Time. (Goldfinch60)
The picture is clear –
When life’s end draws near
There’s nothing...
August 19th, 2022 07:29 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Fills me with nostalgia Fay. The seasons (and Autumn especially) aren\'t...
August 19th, 2022 07:06 - Why Not Just Throw Away The Key (Neville)
The key definitely was chucked away.
So on what grounds do you...
August 19th, 2022 06:46 - Fresh Bread. (Goldfinch60)
Glass half empty? Glass half full? Not Andy:
A self-filling glass kept...
August 18th, 2022 20:56 - Come Let us Dance Some More (Neville)
You gotta do wot ya gotta do given the circumstances, I suppose, Nev....
August 17th, 2022 22:09 - Spellbound (Neville)
Didn\'t realise there was a place for horse manure in the Wicca ...
August 11th, 2022 06:56 - Life\'s Library. (Goldfinch60)
That’s it - get it out there before I go;
So I argue - someone else...
August 11th, 2022 06:40 - A reminder of seasons (Saxon Crow)
You aren\'t going to claim that the English are the only ones who complain...
August 11th, 2022 06:23 - Spellbound (Neville)
Woooo - Spells and incantations rule during the full moon - Had you not...
August 11th, 2022 06:16 - Solitude (MendedFences27)
Nothing twisted about doing a Greta Garbo - I have a solid double locked...
August 11th, 2022 00:51 - Behind (AuburnScribbler)
I like this a lot AS, because it is disciplined verse which covers the...
August 10th, 2022 20:15 - Calculated risk (Hzugman)
However, moderation in all things.....
August 10th, 2022 19:25 - In Life (Bella Shepard)
Where I am now is a combination of the (occasionally) competent...
August 9th, 2022 19:48 - Why Poirot Never Married (Saxon Crow)
Definitely not to be taken too seriously, I\'d say Sax. I\'m sure you know...
August 9th, 2022 19:26 - And I Was Free. (Goldfinch60)
‘We’re here because we’re here’ Is all we can truly know.
The...
August 9th, 2022 08:29 - Naturally (Neville)
Context is all, Nev: where and when? I\'m starting to feel decidedly...
August 9th, 2022 08:07 - Goldie And Orchi At Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
And there are unplumbed depths to be found here -
Orchi , Goldfinch...
August 8th, 2022 07:49 - Woof - cats! (Orchidee)
Why ain\'t it put to a hymn toon?
August 8th, 2022 07:29 - I wrote a poem that no one reads (Tallisman)
The agony of it all....all that talent offered to unheeding...
August 8th, 2022 07:23 - Life\'s Arrow. (Goldfinch60)
I shot an arrow in the air
And just for once I did know where;
As you...
August 7th, 2022 19:37 - The learning rule (Hzugman)
Absolutely spot on.
August 7th, 2022 19:19 - Toreador (Tallisman)
Thankfully I was able to ignore the bullfighting associations and...
August 7th, 2022 19:15 - Frankly (MendedFences27)
Ambivalence rules, Phil... Nothing frank about it.
An engaging read I...
August 7th, 2022 19:09 - Hell\'s Autograph (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The need to sleep becomes overwhelming....
Thank you Kurt.
August 7th, 2022 19:01 - pier jumping (Ryan Robson-Bluer)
My education continues…. I had absolutely no knowledge of ‘pier...
August 7th, 2022 18:55 - Wordsworth Reversed. (Goldfinch60)
Dark green nettle, lonely as a cloud;
Under foot but until now unbowed...
August 6th, 2022 21:13 - Natures Reflection (Saxon Crow)
An enigma of a poem, Sax.
I rather feel it is your nature portrayed here,...
August 6th, 2022 20:49 - #CostOfGreedCrisis (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Certainly it is getting worse... things were easier for more people (never...
August 6th, 2022 20:41 - Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard)
There are some stories I have absolutely no desire to connect with; you...
August 6th, 2022 20:25 - My first love. (Chris Duffy)
Amber - she does it for me...a wee bit of discipline, just to keep her in...
August 6th, 2022 20:14 - Hiroshima – seventy seven years since August 6th, 1945 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Thanks for the reminder.
Feels as if it\'s moving in that direction...
August 6th, 2022 20:01 - Breathe (Chris Duffy)
For me it has always been \'one day at a time\'; however I can, at this...
August 5th, 2022 20:20 - Daybreak (Aradhya)
You won\'t find out just laying there ....😊
A refined, neatly...
August 5th, 2022 19:50 - Thoughts 9 (MendedFences27)
The agony of it all, Phil.....
I like to keep myself to myself....so now...
August 4th, 2022 00:25 - Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet (Neville)
Reality encapsulated in one short (long) sentence ....I felt sure I was on...
August 3rd, 2022 07:51 - Felt Care (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks muchly, Fay for this shorty.
Not to detract from your piece in any...
August 3rd, 2022 07:27 - Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet (Neville)
So long as there were no guilt or regrets.....Neville.
August 3rd, 2022 06:58 - Harry Shalgosky. (Goldfinch60)
This is a deviation from your usual writes, and I have to add that I like...
August 3rd, 2022 02:28 - Through The Mist. (Goldfinch60)
No need of church when you have your river, Andy.
The picture you...
August 2nd, 2022 08:20 - Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor (Neville)
Found by design. and yes, still here...neat, Neville - thanks.
August 2nd, 2022 08:08 - Those Days (Fay Slimm.)
What an interesting place, Fay. Would be my kind of holiday. A visit to a...
August 2nd, 2022 07:56 - I AM DIFFERENT (Thebeezybee)
Aren\'t we all...(different, that is) Yet you seem pretty content with...
August 2nd, 2022 07:33 - Office Slavery Drones (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Not just the office, but any job can have a culture which could be...
August 1st, 2022 17:57 - Poetry Meisters (KRWonder)
Wot about one word poetry.....? 😊
August 1st, 2022 17:40 - Satisfaction (Fay Slimm.)
Just enjoy, Fay. - But not selfishly......
August 1st, 2022 04:52 - Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please (Neville)
Aah! Cunnilingus at the right time in the right place can have it\'s own...
August 1st, 2022 03:50 - Heart of a wolf, Soul of a dragon. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Way to go, Kitty - I\'ll be seriously watching out for more (have I missed...
July 30th, 2022 22:40 - Politics (Com783)
Forget vampires - focus on Sociopolitical - your truths will out...
I...
July 30th, 2022 22:32 - Eighteen Cats (KRWonder)
Good fun write - although it was a relief to read your Comment from...
July 29th, 2022 19:04 - Edge of sorrow and love (Jerry Reynolds)
From this I have a real feeling of never fully knowing or understanding...
July 29th, 2022 19:00 - Just a Dream (MendedFences27)
Dream on, Phil – someone has to…..and indeed there remains a...
July 29th, 2022 18:36 - poetry (NafisaSB)
You are very welcome, N.
A great little quatrain.
July 29th, 2022 18:12 - poetry (NafisaSB)
Feels rude to me...sure this doesn\'t need a 18+? 😊
July 29th, 2022 07:38 - Laughter And Sleep. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, You need to put your sage advises together and write a self help...
July 29th, 2022 07:17 - The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville)
Would it be possible to cite context for this one Neville?
July 29th, 2022 06:53 - Behind That Navajo Smile (Neville)
Never mind the Navajo....I mean do mind the Navajo but also mind the...
July 29th, 2022 06:48 - Strange Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Glad to know you don\'t remember most dreams, Andy - I\'d get quite...
July 27th, 2022 08:23 - Of Time, That Is .. (Neville)
I\'ll vote for that.
July 27th, 2022 08:17 - Two Whales ! (Justa_Geezer)
Good job you labelled it humour, otherwise I\'d have asked for me money...
July 27th, 2022 08:11 - Amaizing! (Saxon Crow)
I too have walked through (no round the edge of) such fields during my old...
July 26th, 2022 19:28 - We May Differ (SHUEB ABDULLAHI)
I would like to see just one of the issues you list there explored in...
July 26th, 2022 19:14 - Summer Clouds (Jerry Reynolds)
Good mood picture there, Jerry.
July 26th, 2022 19:09 - The Concert Ends Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Commitment, camaraderie and ovation. You know your place in the world,...
July 26th, 2022 07:53 - Incidentally I Assure You (Neville)
Nipples, nipples everywhere and never one to nibble..... Thanks for...
July 26th, 2022 07:43 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
There you go again, Fay - a highly textured picture of nature\'s processes...
July 26th, 2022 04:35 - Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60)
This one is a cracker, Andy.
You call a universal truth \'Just a bit o\'...
July 25th, 2022 02:01 - Irony (Bella Shepard)
United States – no irony.
This everybody knows - so there!
So who are...
July 24th, 2022 19:28 - Copywrite Pending (Neville)
Syllable numbers and form the same for Senryu, Mokhu, Faikhu and...
July 24th, 2022 06:14 - Breathless (Dove)
While not interested in love poetry (feel I am always apologising) , the...
July 24th, 2022 06:02
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