Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• A Long Pretence (Neville) Happens to us all sometime, I think Nev. Remember the fleeting, oh so very...
  February 20th, 2022 20:25
• Looking Back (Charmaine Bartlett) Yeh - I\'d vote for that; much to empathise with there, Charmaine.
  February 20th, 2022 20:13
• Mirror Mirror On The Wall (Rozina) You must work on a positive relationship with your mirror. Luckily this...
  February 11th, 2022 19:32
• Armed Rules (Fay Slimm.) Thank you Fay for your polished poetry.. But I\'ve got nothing to add on...
  February 11th, 2022 19:15
• one of those nights (Dusk arising) Creeping me out, your Gothic magic mushroom job - thanks for
  February 11th, 2022 19:04
• My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed (Dove) I do hope your neat villanelle was FOR the broken hearted, and not you...
  February 9th, 2022 00:15
• Forever And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) Spiritually polyamorous? Go for it, enjoy. Life is too short to miss out...
  February 8th, 2022 03:35
• LIMERICK 79 (Michael Edwards) I\'m voting with orchi - again! Dunno what\'s happening here... Orchi -...
  February 8th, 2022 03:21
• Tonight (Fay Slimm.) Picture is surplus to requirements, Fay. All revealed in your disciplined...
  February 7th, 2022 16:38
• Mystical Melancholy (Gary Edward Geraci) Think I\'m with orchi here Gary, because If I read him right, my advice...
  February 5th, 2022 15:50
• A PAIR OF PEARS (A HAIRY PAIR) (Michael Edwards) My entry to this competition is: a pair of coconuts (outer husk...
  February 5th, 2022 03:36
• The Street Sweeper (Rozina) The exact scenario you describe in your first two stanzas exists...
  February 4th, 2022 06:04
• Gedling memories (Dusk arising) Thumbs up to this one dusk, given my interest in railways. A piece loaded...
  February 3rd, 2022 16:42
• Beauty (Fay Slimm.) So full of texture, Fay. If beauty is in the eye of the beholder (not sure...
  February 2nd, 2022 19:58
• SHE STANDS ALONE (Michael Edwards) I think that might be poetry....even I, not a great lover of depictions of...
  February 2nd, 2022 19:44
• CRACK\'S ARE HOW LIGHT GETS IN (Timothy Michael Douget) If you must provide references relating to your piece, may I suggest you...
  February 2nd, 2022 03:57
• Some People. (Goldfinch60) Oh come on, Andy - where is your love of humanity, your love of and hopes...
  February 2nd, 2022 03:50
• Fat Cat (Rozina) Consider yourself lucky Warhol doesn\'t reside with you. Don\'t you...
  February 2nd, 2022 01:44
• Oh Summer – Tra La La (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Fay - all contributions gratefully received by this puddle of ...
  February 1st, 2022 18:44
• Yankee Jack (Neville) Seems One never stops learning - unavoidable when such information is made...
  February 1st, 2022 18:37
• Snogging And Kissing. (Goldfinch60) Disgusting! 😊👍 😊👍 😊 👍
  February 1st, 2022 04:31
• What Do I Know Of Love (MendedFences27) “Pure fiction”? Well don’t do it then! While I’m no fan of love...
  February 1st, 2022 04:25
• Missed (Fay Slimm.) An old English oak; your lovely piece bought out the nostalgia in me, Fay....
  January 28th, 2022 21:02
• Hot Air. (Goldfinch60) Surreal critique, Andy. Thanks.
  January 28th, 2022 20:44
• Someone Else’s Religion Maybe (Neville) Got \'em all going there, Nev...... (including Yrs Truly)...... Me? - Who?...
  January 26th, 2022 00:13
• Unbeatable (Fay Slimm.) There are experiences/activities I have never and now never will...
  January 25th, 2022 22:54
• the hazey dreams of Janice (Dusk arising) Romantically tragic, dusk. Much entertaining informative value in your...
  January 24th, 2022 20:34
• Genes And Traits (Rozina) That second stanza is something else - I don\'t want to unpick it... It...
  January 15th, 2022 00:46
• Yin and Yang (Rozina) There\'s a lot of depth in what appears to be very light verse. Glad I...
  January 15th, 2022 00:30
• Trilby Lady. (Goldfinch60) Flash mob? You\'ve probably seen it,...
  December 14th, 2021 06:23
• Ageing (Rozina) That\'s me to a \'T\' Your piece neatly covers it - thank you.
  December 13th, 2021 23:01
• Noisy Bird (Rozina) I identify with this mutchly - here in \'stralia we suffer from a bird, a...
  December 13th, 2021 22:52
• Lamps (Screaming goat. (New and Improved)) I don\'t want to decide, I want a clear unambiguous message which informs...
  December 13th, 2021 18:38
• Santa\'s Sacked! (Saxon Crow) Gotta feel for the poor old fella - definitely from another era - unable...
  December 13th, 2021 18:17
• The Right Direction. (Goldfinch60) YES!
  December 13th, 2021 18:07
• Purple (Lorna) Nicely understated romance; purple magic, Lorna? I\'m on holiday end of...
  December 13th, 2021 07:32
• Blue (Lorna) Blue skies where I am......not. We have a summer of rain ahead of us this...
  December 13th, 2021 07:21
• Love from Lust & Fear from Trust (Summerraine) There you go - experiential learning.
  December 12th, 2021 23:55
• A Lady in a Room Full of Men (M.E.M.) Rules of decorum for young Ladies perhaps.... Come on - get feisty,
  December 12th, 2021 23:51
• Yellow (Lorna) The right intensity yellow can do it for me. Thanks for the reminder in...
  December 11th, 2021 22:26
• \"My God\" (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) That\'s religion for you..........not going to elaborate after your second...
  December 11th, 2021 22:09
• Hardly So (Gary Edward Geraci) Have a good Christmas, Gary.
  December 11th, 2021 22:04
• I Shan\'t (Raphael Shonibare) I\'m not keen on love poetry, but enjoyed the conceit.
  December 11th, 2021 20:51
• Skewed (SureshG) Heavy questions so very well constructed. \'Wish I knew the answer,...
  December 11th, 2021 20:33
• Gordon the Gnome (Woundedheart) Yes - I\'ll buy this one. Great little rhymer. I also have a special spot...
  December 11th, 2021 20:19
• Camel Drive or Putt? (Goldfinch60) Andy, as I\'m not a Facebook devotee (what would be the correct...
  December 10th, 2021 06:22
• Green (Lorna) Your \'Colours\' period, Lorna? I\'ll enjoy all of them - but will pester...
  December 10th, 2021 06:06
• 12 Days of Marriage (ish) (Saxon Crow) ....Has to be a moral there somewhere.... ....yep...got it... thanks Sax
  December 10th, 2021 01:40
• Choices (Saxon Crow) Just because I\'m an unbeliever/agnostic doesn\'t prevent me from...
  December 9th, 2021 17:36
• In Your Grace (Saxon Crow) I can see this as a tribute in stone, Sax. a highly polished piece.
  December 9th, 2021 17:19
• Red (Lorna) And I\'m trying to cool down in preparation for sleep..... Lot of power...
  December 9th, 2021 07:32
• WRITE OR WRONG (Joe Marcello) Have to guess a little here, Joe - this because social media is attacked...
  December 8th, 2021 16:37
• the only love she held on to (Dusk arising) Enjoyed the memories that evoked of some fine sunsets and the...
  December 7th, 2021 21:19
• Wild Land (Fay Slimm.) Nature in the raw - survival of the fittest, I know but...you capture the...
  December 7th, 2021 07:06
• Something of a Quandary (Neville) Zen agen, Nev....?
  December 7th, 2021 06:54
• Smothered (Lorna) Love the irony, Lorna. So much said in so few lines....I feel that there...
  December 7th, 2021 06:48
• My Christmas Present. (Goldfinch60) OK Speedy Gonzales: nothing wrong with a little ambition - fun write Andy.
  December 7th, 2021 04:34
• The Road to Perdition (Coyote) Yes that was great, C. And brilliant (Sax above) says it all. A yarn to be...
  December 7th, 2021 04:16
• Stage Back (AuburnScribbler) Great piece of self talk there man. And from your side comments, it...
  December 5th, 2021 23:16
• Wintery Sky (Fay Slimm.) Wot\'s wrong with hot sweaty sub tropical summery dawn sky (apart from the...
  December 5th, 2021 23:04
• तनहाई (Pranav Kumar) I like the look of that script....very attractive...haven\'t got a bloody...
  December 5th, 2021 05:37
• Leaden Heart (Lorna) Great picture of the way I get around for most of the time... But come on...
  December 4th, 2021 20:27
• Liberated (Gary Edward Geraci) A neat verse which says something to me, Gary - though you would know me...
  December 4th, 2021 20:10
• My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville) So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own...
  December 3rd, 2021 19:09
• global warning (Dusk arising) Prophetic, dusk.
  December 3rd, 2021 18:47
• Looking For The Word (Jerry Reynolds) Believe it or not I completely missed the religious connotations, which I...
  December 3rd, 2021 18:31
• meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment (SureshG) A vivid painterly piece, Suresh. I would vote for the last stanza anytime...
  December 3rd, 2021 18:18
• Striped Tie. (Goldfinch60) Good \'un Andy...But don\'t you feel free, shuffling around in a loincloth...
  December 3rd, 2021 03:25
• A Winter Song (Jerry Reynolds) Reassuring safe moment, Jerry.
  December 2nd, 2021 19:42
• my body part (Dusk arising) All that fur.... You do keep it well trimmed for easy access, I hope....
  December 2nd, 2021 19:35
• The Life of a Black man (Poetaddict365) Let\'s find out who you are first, before I take this seriously. Since...
  December 2nd, 2021 19:22
• No Kiss On The Mouth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) That first piece - it was the rhyme and construction....the rhyme and...
  December 2nd, 2021 19:11
• Dead Fox (Saxon Crow) Usual great piece of writing, Sax. The key is obviously embodied in the...
  December 2nd, 2021 07:17
• Ranting? (Orchidee) Don\'t know what to say, orchi. You do seem just a trifle conflicted....
  December 2nd, 2021 07:05
• No Home (Lorna) It ain\'t easy out there, Lorna - should be on everyone\'s mind, not just...
  December 2nd, 2021 06:55
• Where are you Mary (Neville) That was neat and easy to relate to, Nev. My problem is I am talentless...
  November 30th, 2021 19:33
• TOO HOT TO HOLD (MDStone) OK, OK, OK I got there in the end..... Good quality entertainment well...
  November 30th, 2021 19:18
• Ho Ho Oh No (Lorna) Xmas ambivalence poeticised. Extreme thanks, Lorna
  November 30th, 2021 18:22
• Pulchritudinous (PattieVBoi) \'Bit of orrright, is she?
  November 30th, 2021 17:09
• Dandelions (Dove) Dandelions certainly found their reproductive niche, didn\'t they? Oh well...
  November 30th, 2021 00:07
• Arrow (Nicholas Browning) Kudos for the time and energy taken to construct that - I know I would...
  November 29th, 2021 06:27
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (7 - 9) (Michael Edwards) Philosophy 101 -Some questions are destined to remain...
  November 29th, 2021 06:14
• What Ghost! (Goldfinch60) Good \'un Andy - but you know, sometimes folks aren\'t brave enough to...
  November 29th, 2021 06:05
• On Being Called to War  (Neville) Given that particular time and situation I\'m pretty sure one of two...
  November 29th, 2021 05:57
• In The Making (Fay Slimm.) You have captured perfectly the apparent chaos but actual order of a true...
  November 29th, 2021 05:44
• Was It You? (Lorna) I\'ll try as often as I can, Lorna - but, you know, it\'s a fair old...
  November 29th, 2021 05:33
• Sunday Shores (Fay Slimm.) Memories: Sunday certainly differed from every other day of the week...
  November 28th, 2021 18:19
• johannes sabastian WOOF (Dusk arising) Great write dusk. But when was this contractual arrangement actually...
  November 27th, 2021 19:52
• Cosmic Wrinkle (SriVi) And unknowable? Thanks for that. I\'m not going to add to that with my...
  November 27th, 2021 05:57
• Heaven and Hell (Paul Bell) Do your keep a flow chart on these relationship pieces you put out? I get...
  November 27th, 2021 05:47
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (4 - 6) (Michael Edwards) Thanks Michael for your latest contributions to the merriment which...
  November 27th, 2021 05:34
• Down With Everything (Neville) Dating that nun again Nev? Well good for her if she still inspires...
  November 27th, 2021 05:11
• Theories about marriage (Anna_noday) Your thoughts (From a 23 year old\'s pen –) leave me unsure as to your...
  November 27th, 2021 04:59
• Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville) My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this...
  November 26th, 2021 16:47
• Is love real? (MKL) Just one one more example of the many uses and abuses of the term...
  November 26th, 2021 07:35
• Voiceless (Fay Slimm.) Love as an undefinable feeling? Yes, Fay - I\'d pay that one. For me, and...
  November 26th, 2021 04:29
• An Unmistakable She (Neville) Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really. But did Granny know you cared,...
  November 25th, 2021 21:49
• Thank you (Saxon Crow) Great stuff, Sax. The adjustments and compromises parents have to make as...
  November 25th, 2021 21:35
• Absence (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler) I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post...
  November 24th, 2021 20:26
• gangsta rap influenced me (Austinherlein) A little background on your Profile page might be good. I\'d like to...
  November 24th, 2021 20:16