Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Building A Truss (Everlong)
Pieces of truth scattered throughout that. And because I like rhymes, an...
March 11th, 2021 19:43 - 40 (Mrbleasdale)
At double that age, still figuring it all out.....
\"Grow old...
March 11th, 2021 19:26 - Never Forget. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Andy - felt you were speaking to me personally.
And.....spot on.
March 11th, 2021 03:10 - Isityouorme (Isituorme)
I normally pass straight over unrequited love/misery poetry, but for...
March 10th, 2021 17:38 - Decision (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Oh that\'s great, NP - not only clever, but also this poem\'s last section...
March 9th, 2021 18:06 - Knowledge (FredPeyer)
Can I pick and choose, Fred?
Well I will anyway: \'the opposite of...
March 9th, 2021 17:56 - Abyss (Last Shadow)
Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - it\'s half an hour you will never get...
March 9th, 2021 17:47 - March - Spring (Last Shadow)
Fading fast....going... going...gone.
Or is my eyesight deteriorating?
March 9th, 2021 17:43 - Out of Mind (Neville)
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be....
March 9th, 2021 17:31 - Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Descriptive poetry that actually took me on a flight - Thanks Andy.
PS:...
March 9th, 2021 17:22 - Sorrow\'s Season (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Good \'un. I was able to power through that and get your history...
March 9th, 2021 06:27 - I Forgive You, My Lord (Daydreaming)
To utilise the god fable as a hook upon which to hang a savage piece of...
March 8th, 2021 20:33 - Still Frames (FredPeyer)
On a very mundane level, I, the Dave tonight am constantly writing notes...
March 8th, 2021 06:58 - I Came Back Slowly (Goddess of the Mist)
Perception - never seen it discussed lyrically before, and that will be...
March 8th, 2021 06:42 - Question (Pacifique Niyitanga)
An especially good question, very well put here.
Now, what is to be done?...
March 7th, 2021 17:10 - We are all a hero to someone (Poetic Dan)
That\'s a fun one, Dan.
Killer second line - definitely tickled my sense...
March 7th, 2021 03:15 - Zoom Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)...
March 7th, 2021 03:04 - Without You (MendedFences27)
Oh so nicely done. Kept me in suspenders and then slipped me the answer....
March 7th, 2021 00:45 - dust (Brycycle)
Fantasy will become reality one day - there is nothing on this earth more...
March 7th, 2021 00:40 - Turbulence (SureshG)
We\'re here because we\'re here. ...
March 6th, 2021 17:38 - Some Sounds Easily Missed (Neville)
Neville, If I haven\'t got anything to put here, you do know it doesn\'t...
March 6th, 2021 17:21 - Embers & I hear her Smile (FredPeyer)
Don\'t normally comment on love poems Fred... Yours came to my notice...
March 6th, 2021 00:24 - The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave)
Don\'t think so Fred - how would you like to be in that bloke\'s companty...
March 6th, 2021 00:05 - Good Morning (Jerry Reynolds)
Wot - not enough elbow room?
March 5th, 2021 17:12 - NO CALM MEANT (Joe Marcello)
Oh this can be so right. Sometimes only solution is to walk away; if...
March 5th, 2021 17:06 - Follow the Science (Gary Edward Geraci)
So what? That\'s science and the way progress occurs.
March 5th, 2021 04:04 - I’m Special (JonathanB)
Yeah - there are deviants around, no doubt about that. First impulse would...
March 4th, 2021 17:12 - What We Willingly Accept (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Went to town this time, Kurt.
Apart from the implied approval of...
March 4th, 2021 17:03 - Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road? (M.E.M.)
Don\'t keep me in suspenders - did she or didn\'t she? Good beginning,...
March 4th, 2021 16:50 - Reflection (Jerry Reynolds)
And a better way to keep it beating is hard to envisage, Jerry. I\'d make...
March 4th, 2021 16:43 - Homo texting (Samer Amin)
Very witty , Samer. They don\'t collide with me because I sidestep to...
March 4th, 2021 06:15 - SADLY (Trenz Pruca)
Suggest you stake your claim, Trenz then go to it; I\'m sure I would be...
March 4th, 2021 00:05 - \"Speak\" (Birddie Jane)
Know that feeling (captured nicely) A long time ago now though.....
Give...
March 2nd, 2021 06:49 - Disguiser (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Make yourself vulnerable (when it\'s safe to do so)?
If I\'ve got that...
March 1st, 2021 16:26 - Love Is Forever. (Goldfinch60)
I was trying to express what I knew of that feeling, Andy then I realised...
March 1st, 2021 07:01 - OLD FAITHFUL (Joe Marcello)
Not sure about this one at all, Joe.
Don\'t agree with the first two...
February 28th, 2021 17:43 - The Miracle of Life (FredPeyer)
Fred, what a beauty! After the first stanza I thought \'I must make...
February 28th, 2021 17:36 - Irish Renga on the second day of Purim (Jerry Reynolds)
What a jolly jape of a collection.
Poets included in your selection
Will...
February 27th, 2021 18:59 - New year (Tom Campbell)
Well, covid provided the motive for a rattling good piece of verse.
Many...
February 27th, 2021 05:46 - Let’s Talk Scars (Neville)
You’ve certainly put me on the road to a heavy dose of...
February 27th, 2021 05:34 - Goldie Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
‘Oh mirror, mirror on the wall
Can’t you reassure me at...
February 26th, 2021 20:02 - The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands (Samer Amin)
Hi Samer.
I find the format of your entries here difficult to cope with,...
February 26th, 2021 19:46 - When I Lose (Jerry Reynolds)
Can\'t do anything other than give you a double thumbs up for this one,...
February 26th, 2021 19:17 - Mad Dark Humour (Orchidee)
I find this one of the most tasteless entries I\'ve ever encountered, here...
February 26th, 2021 07:28 - Poem, Do You live by the Truth? (AwHec8)
No going back to the political project then?
February 25th, 2021 19:30 - What\'s The Point? (Merissa)
I\'ts hard not to give advice when you confront with a poem like...
February 25th, 2021 16:47 - one day while walking on the beach (Trenz Pruca)
Very humorous; a few other comedians have done this at MPS - typically...
February 25th, 2021 16:35 - Disparate Love (Jerry Reynolds)
Uncertainty and ambivalence, eh Jerry? Brought to the surface an old...
February 25th, 2021 16:30 - Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice, Andy.Sometimes that takes much effort. You are no doubt aware...
February 25th, 2021 06:25 - Home Sweet Home (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks Andy. He was a symbol and souvenir of my time at that place which,...
February 25th, 2021 06:04 - Reality in the USA! (AwHec8)
I\'d vote with Jerry here, Don. a series of half a dozen small poetic...
February 24th, 2021 17:28 - Scream Graffiti. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one, Andy. This kind of insider information is something I really...
February 24th, 2021 05:38 - Working Mom (Merissa)
Hi Marissa, Please, if you wish, read this. Yes, it is one of mine, and I...
February 24th, 2021 01:17 - Too much water under the bridge (Olivia.)
Keep at it. In this and your previous similarly well written poems,...
February 23rd, 2021 19:07 - Go Get Lost (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Language there singes the eyebrows a bit. And I can be quite potty mouthed...
February 23rd, 2021 18:52 - Bridged (Fay Slimm.)
Fay I don\'t know what to warble to you as I sup my beer in order to gain...
February 23rd, 2021 18:37 - Lockdown Grey (Neville)
It feels almost impertinent to comment on your situation over there, so...
February 23rd, 2021 18:18 - A Good Day. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - they do happen. those days are what make life special.
A polished...
February 23rd, 2021 04:18 - Dreams (Merissa)
A lot left unsaid there - you certainly made that plain without...
February 23rd, 2021 04:11 - You must write (Thewayiwrite)
You speak for yourself - manifestly there are other motivations (though I...
February 23rd, 2021 04:02 - I am worth more (Olivia.)
Interesting read. Seems you\'ve got personal relationships, romance and...
February 22nd, 2021 16:18 - Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave)
Finally,I\'d just like to add that the inclusion of \'“The Road Not...
February 21st, 2021 23:49 - I pray (Thewayiwrite)
Oh go on – beat yourself up, why don’t you?
Not sure of the last...
February 21st, 2021 21:33 - Enjoying my own company (Olivia.)
I\'ll vote for this. Great picture painted here.
So long as it doesn\'t...
February 21st, 2021 18:01 - Things We Do (Jerry Reynolds)
Got those bases covered, Jerry.
Any date time and place re the picture?
February 21st, 2021 17:55 - Ode to Piss-Poor Poet (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I\'ll vote for that, mate
February 21st, 2021 17:44 - The Fountain. (Goldfinch60)
Like this, you mean...
February 21st, 2021 04:13 - Pillow talks. (Chick)
Category: Sad ?
More than sad it\'s bloody awful.
A well constructed...
February 20th, 2021 23:51 - Just sitting around (FredPeyer)
Cheers, Fred
February 20th, 2021 22:35 - Piss-Poor Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor)
No worries - go for it....
February 20th, 2021 18:23 - Schooldays (Heatherbee)
They are - or rather, for me. were (a very long time ago). True though.
February 20th, 2021 00:17 - Do Not Tell (Pacifique Niyitanga)
It\'s a balance, isn\'t it? Between conciliation and forgiveness, and the...
February 19th, 2021 20:52 - Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave)
Cheers Munro. I\'d never have guessed irony was one of your talents.
February 19th, 2021 06:32 - Eyes Wide Open (Anthony M.J Butler)
Note two of your interests are Spirituality and Occultism. So if...
February 19th, 2021 06:29 - Predict or live? (Poetry_Lover)
Because if, just if we are able to do something about the immediate future...
February 19th, 2021 06:15 - Is It Art? (Goldfinch60)
You two have an obsession with that bed. You have mentioned it before....
February 19th, 2021 05:59 - Cheap Soup (FredPeyer)
Thanks Fred. I wouldn\'t be on MPS if I didn\'t tell of my past...
February 19th, 2021 05:43 - Cruising on the Red Line (Daydreaming)
Within My memory are lodged several such missed opportunities. Each time I...
February 18th, 2021 22:55 - Unwanted Feelings (Merissa)
Depends what we are talking about here. There’s nothing wrong with...
February 18th, 2021 17:59 - Jailed in an uncompleted building (Ifeanyichukwu)
Phew! I don\'t feel at all qualified to respond with comment to this. It...
February 18th, 2021 17:28 - Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World? (AwHec8)
Change the channel seems like a good move, Don.
Have to get your news...
February 18th, 2021 17:14 - ON THE RUSH (Fay Slimm.)
And thanks for this one too Fay. As a born and bred East End Londoner, who...
February 18th, 2021 06:50 - Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks Fay - had to dispose of the irritation somehow, and although it...
February 18th, 2021 06:17 - 21 Again? That Old Chestnut (Orchidee)
Should you not consider upping the medication just a teensy weensy...
February 18th, 2021 06:05 - Hope In Chains (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Prefer \'Waste & Folly\' - a sound political judgement if ever I\'ve read...
February 17th, 2021 23:16 - Autumn (Thewayiwrite)
Found him out,did you? Good.
I hope you successfully walked away ...
February 17th, 2021 20:52 - Truth.. (AlitaOpal)
I\'d vote for that anytime. In particularly persuasive verse...
February 17th, 2021 20:32 - A republic, if you can keep it (SureshG)
These issues are so complex. ‘Republic’ and ‘Democracy’ each have...
February 17th, 2021 20:17 - They Won\'t Bite (Jerry Reynolds)
Nothing like the odd bum joke to keep things merry, Jerry.
Good laugh....
February 17th, 2021 19:37 - Unconfined (Fay Slimm.)
I understand completely the way raptors can enthrall, Fay. Australia has...
February 17th, 2021 05:44 - Seduction (Jerry Reynolds)
Should be framed and given pride of place in the MPS hall of fame....or...
February 16th, 2021 18:35 - Mysterious. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve enriched my appreciation of rainbows no end, Fay.
They\'ve always...
February 16th, 2021 07:33 - Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian (FredPeyer)
That one got me in, Fred. A well textured yarn which evoked memories of...
February 16th, 2021 07:00 - There is nothing to declare (Thewayiwrite)
That\'s not a \'random stream\' - your claim after your last poem; that\'s...
February 16th, 2021 06:46 - Satori (Neville)
Couldn\'t leave her essence alone?
A clear picture in very few words,...
February 16th, 2021 06:29 - of the parting (Dusk arising)
The delusion that everything is OK, the hope that it might all work out,...
February 15th, 2021 04:34 - Groundhog day (Heatherbee)
like it very much - you have certainly tuned into the zeitgeist today. Or...
February 15th, 2021 03:42 - Moon (TS)
Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - very soon man (humans) will be on the...
February 15th, 2021 03:35 - Tiredness (Thewayiwrite)
I read it, would like to give feedback but am too depressed now.
February 15th, 2021 00:27 - Valentine\'s Day 2021 (Rew4er2nail)
:-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
February 14th, 2021 19:04
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