Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Thank you (Saxon Crow)
Great stuff, Sax.
The adjustments and compromises parents have to make as...
November 25th, 2021 21:35 - Absence (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler)
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post...
November 24th, 2021 20:26 - gangsta rap influenced me (Austinherlein)
A little background on your Profile page might be good. I\'d like to...
November 24th, 2021 20:16 - Ma Petit Serviette (Neville)
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended)....
November 24th, 2021 06:41 - four and counting (Dusk arising)
Certainly convinced me kiddo - you conquered the old one two three and I...
November 24th, 2021 01:03 - ICE CREAM (Jerusha PS Barnabas)
Got an essential truth and bundled it up into a good piece of...
November 24th, 2021 00:52 - Penitus (Coyote)
Been out There and found no evidence of either Heaven or Hell. In here?...
November 24th, 2021 00:37 - Mother without a child (Lisa Gibson)
I don\'t know your current situation, but I would have thought that the...
November 24th, 2021 00:34 - Linger (Neville)
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my...
November 23rd, 2021 19:51 - Be To Me (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I really was pleased to read that you were motivated by the...
November 23rd, 2021 19:33 - You (Jay-Lee Jane)
I think they got your message.....short and to the point - nicely...
November 22nd, 2021 06:10 - A Man Of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
Great, ain\'t it Andy?
Retirement - the best time of my life, and your\'s...
November 22nd, 2021 06:02 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
Lost for words here, Fay - I can feel it - the embrace and rightness of...
November 22nd, 2021 05:52 - An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville)
Thanks Nev for a lesson all should see and cogitate upon:
\'Love\' a term...
November 22nd, 2021 05:43 - An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville)
Where was yer British reserve? Well for them as hasn\'t got it , a...
November 21st, 2021 19:53 - Don\'t Think Too Much. (Goldfinch60)
Once that was me, but now the living is easy and I have no...
November 21st, 2021 19:47 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (1 - 3) (Michael Edwards)
You do a great line in shorties, Michael - these are up to standard.
I...
November 21st, 2021 19:25 - The Guy Who Wasn\'t There (Coyote)
Great to see you back and on form, C.
Perfect proof that context is all...
November 21st, 2021 18:48 - Omega Sunset (an ode to Yeats) (Coyote)
The trouble with subject specific pieces such as this, on a site such as...
November 20th, 2021 04:15 - Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
Yeh...............................................................Oh where...
November 20th, 2021 03:54 - VIVID ART (Th3rdeye)
;Let\'s see a little more context (Public profile?) They gravestones in...
November 20th, 2021 03:37 - The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville)
Orchi is obsessed with these women he believes you keep throwing up onto...
November 20th, 2021 03:17 - What Failing Memory? (Goldfinch60)
Get the humour, Andy - but if there\'s any soupcon of truth in that, then...
November 20th, 2021 03:09 - MY ACCOUNT (Abu Wafi Palathumkara)
I just sometimes do not feel the need, at this point in my life, to spend...
November 19th, 2021 21:40 - Unsincerely Yours (Neville)
Maybe I\'m just not that deep - I\'ve lingered with past relationship for...
November 19th, 2021 21:19 - The Quick-Fix Manual To Keeping a Woman Happy. (Gunnar)
Go nuts mate - but these are very localised fires you are aiming at, and...
November 19th, 2021 03:35 - Who (Fay Slimm.)
Is this the definitive Fay, embedded in country you so clearly love?
It...
November 18th, 2021 20:42 - The Quick-Fix Manual To Keeping a Woman Happy. (Gunnar)
Come on guys/fellas – you’ve had your fun; now retract in case some...
November 18th, 2021 20:23 - THE CATWALK QUEEN (Andy Hunter)
Great stuff, Andy - sometimes, just sometimes fantasy can be better than...
November 18th, 2021 20:03 - forgiveness is a scam (Angela-a)
Your poetry I like, feels neat and sophisticated.
However, this site...
November 18th, 2021 19:58 - Compulsive Engagement (OllyPlease)
I have at present no view of you or your work. There\'s nothing of you on...
November 18th, 2021 00:06 - Magic (Fay Slimm.)
Easily explained in terms of surface tension and all that, yet so damn...
November 17th, 2021 06:21 - bloody tower (Dusk arising)
A medi-evil tale vividly painted with a skilled hand and his...
November 17th, 2021 06:13 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
\'Was the Titanic weren\'t it? \'Cept there was no time to mend her.........
November 17th, 2021 05:42 - Nothing to see here (Jvhernandez921)
Is this a one off - nothing more to say, or are you going to get out there...
November 17th, 2021 05:32 - Let Us Walk Holding Hands (Trenz Pruca)
Verbal communication redundant - perfect harmony, perfect...
November 16th, 2021 06:34 - Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville)
That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind...
November 16th, 2021 06:26 - spelling (Dusk arising)
\' got a feeung s gettn o y\'re wok us mu8ch us et doosd min,...
November 16th, 2021 06:19 - when you are feeling unloved (Jon Nakapalau)
How many possibilities have been lost because withdrawal was the...
November 16th, 2021 05:31 - Walking With Trees. (Goldfinch60)
I agree - I love the autumnal colours if I happen to spend time in the...
November 16th, 2021 05:19 - Teef Time (Orchidee)
Has she got teef troubles ? I wouldn\'t know, but this I do - You\'ve gone...
November 16th, 2021 05:10 - The First Time I Played Croquet With My Dad (Saxon Crow)
I really shouldn\'t be putting up anything here at all....family matter...
November 16th, 2021 04:52 - Voices echoing (Depressionofbecca)
This is perhaps a \'where fools rush in....\' type contribution:
I know...
November 16th, 2021 00:28 - Dark Desire (Jerry Reynolds)
\'Social Disease \' is probably the only way to look at it....but when...
November 15th, 2021 19:19 - Can we survive this? (Mae Spragg)
A cry from the heart - difficult for me to unpick, but I would venture...
November 15th, 2021 19:00 - Lawnsome (Neville)
Your\'e aggravating my dyslexia, Nev - dodgy haikus fook it up...
November 15th, 2021 18:17 - ATTITUDE (Andy Hunter)
Great write Andy - but roles are what most play in life (I know I\'ve had...
November 14th, 2021 17:18 - South Artesian Street (Sdaven19)
You are certainly going to have to practice some of your intercultural...
November 14th, 2021 00:21 - The Poet (Miss Pain)
And a rewrite would not have worked, I suspect....
Any detail available...
November 13th, 2021 19:25 - Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville)
.....and we might just still make the 1.5 metre rule if you were to lean...
November 13th, 2021 06:47 - Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.)
The cycle which is fundamental to everything, including the Universe,...
November 12th, 2021 19:24 - THE ICE CAPS ARE MELTING (Andy Hunter)
Got to vote for that, Andy.
Overpopulation and the powers that endorse...
November 12th, 2021 19:07 - No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville)
Smells (and I mean this in the best possible sense) a little like a Zen...
November 11th, 2021 18:59 - Fate #1 (Saxon Crow)
Sorry, mate - I have too pedestrian a mind to come to grips with this.
November 11th, 2021 00:37 - Churches (Gwennie Jewel SAMPÉ)
As a complete non believer, I remain, however convinced that for SOME the...
November 10th, 2021 17:41 - no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising)
That got me where it hurts most, dusk. Yes, mine.
Beautiful piece of...
November 10th, 2021 07:04 - Waiting For What. (Goldfinch60)
Are you starting to weird up, Andy? this is the second piece on...
November 10th, 2021 06:53 - Musings (Orchidee)
Walk away, mate - walk away. Start your own church. Probably a bit late,...
November 10th, 2021 06:35 - Sweet Stupor (Fay Slimm.)
\'Time to get up\' - oh the lethargic response which isn\'t me, but is -...
November 10th, 2021 06:21 - they never leave you (Dusk arising)
Linger not, stranger; shed no tear.
Go back to those who sent us...
November 10th, 2021 00:53 - CAPTAIN FOR A DAY (Andy Hunter)
Yep - \'daft\' would be the self criticism I\'d apply to myself should I...
November 9th, 2021 18:57 - The magic of Venice (Sund1951)
Since I\'ve very recently put up a short verse relating to my first...
November 9th, 2021 05:16 - Cooking Curse. (Goldfinch60)
But how\'s your digestion, Andy?
You obviously need Digestive Biscuit...
November 8th, 2021 04:02 - grin and bear it (Dusk arising)
Unspeakable really dusk – though I’ll try.
A picture of a great...
November 7th, 2021 19:32 - No Chips! (Goldfinch60)
Apparently the semiconductor shortage is world wide, so my apologies for...
November 7th, 2021 00:59 - I went for a drink with an Irishman (Saxon Crow)
Your mate Barry - he\'s the Irishman? OK - that\'a a relief....otherwise...
November 6th, 2021 07:05 - cutting the mustard (Dusk arising)
Is \'tongue in cheek\' a get out clause with respect to your criticism,...
November 5th, 2021 18:51 - Wake (Saxon Crow)
Hey Sax – as a fan of Stanley Holloway, you will be familiar with his...
November 5th, 2021 00:22 - Cupiditates Spina (Charles_newOwner)
Precisely - all too often love and lust are conflated; let\'s separate...
November 4th, 2021 18:57 - Kitten (Neville)
Nothing like the old role play to get \'em at it....
That\'s lowered...
November 4th, 2021 03:57 - Madly Flowering. (Goldfinch60)
Since you are the perennial optimist, Andy, this must be cause for...
November 4th, 2021 03:50 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards)
What needs to be said about Creationism beyond your few dissecting...
November 4th, 2021 03:42 - 3 a.m. (HannahElisabeth)
Now I don’t want to be picky, but somewhere I thought there were some...
November 4th, 2021 03:34 - Crashing Pinballs (M.E.M.)
I get this completely, those thoughts are slippery little buggers aren\'t...
November 2nd, 2021 20:15 - Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville)
Bustle and rush to where? absolute futility....Nah I\'ve already made this...
November 2nd, 2021 20:00 - Oh woe! (Orchidee)
Well at least none can accuse you of product misrepresentation - the label...
November 2nd, 2021 19:52 - Storm Petrel Rising (Neville)
Smelt the salt the sea and the foam tangy in my nostrils, never saw no...
November 1st, 2021 07:52 - Too Long (Fay Slimm.)
Great mood and atmosphere there, Fay - something I know quite well -...
November 1st, 2021 07:35 - The Glory Of My LIfe. (Goldfinch60)
Your joy, your happiness radiates out from these pages every day, Andy -...
November 1st, 2021 07:26 - somewhere else (Dusk arising)
I\'ll vote for that, dusk - your piece that is, not the situation it...
November 1st, 2021 07:19 - I\'ve already been; (HannahElisabeth)
Hannah - I cannot find a single argument to muster against anything or...
November 1st, 2021 00:13 - their sunday habit (Dusk arising)
It\'s a great little statement, dusk - paints a pretty accurate picture,...
October 31st, 2021 20:00 - gain the future (Dusk arising)
Gain the future from deep in the past.... a creepy one dusk - but non the...
October 30th, 2021 07:33 - Halloween Horror (Orchidee)
Garn Orchi - if you are going to believe in him, then believe he can do...
October 30th, 2021 07:27 - Best (Fay Slimm.)
Passion this is - good for you Fay.
October 30th, 2021 07:19 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards)
Got a good laugh out of your last two lines Michael. Wicked...
October 12th, 2021 16:14 - Bucket List (Figuring-it-all-out)
Nothing wrong in being a dreamer, and I cannot see anyone do anything but...
October 7th, 2021 06:38 - Did It Rain? (Goldfinch60)
No idiocy there, Andy - you took a calculated gamble given the uncertain...
October 6th, 2021 06:05 - Tall tales. (Chris Duffy)
Taller than that - needed oxygen by the time I reached the end.
Thanks...
October 5th, 2021 20:05 - Riches To Riches (Orchidee)
Commented upon end of orchi/Marie dialogue.
October 5th, 2021 19:59 - Friend (IamUnicorn)
This about cyber friendships? Glad I\'m not a part of it...
Welcome to...
October 5th, 2021 01:28 - Cobweb House (Figuring-it-all-out)
Not too sure about all the weird content, but I\'m a sucker for a decent...
October 5th, 2021 01:20 - Wishful (Fay Slimm.)
Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece.
Now I fully understand what...
October 2nd, 2021 18:58 - A Very Bad Accident. (Goldfinch60)
Did no one bring a spoon, Andy? \"Be prepared - that\'s the Boy Scouts\'...
October 2nd, 2021 04:55 - Aliens are here! (MendedFences27)
Yes MF - the brain has to be altered, I think ....Not too much parody...
October 2nd, 2021 02:27 - To the Greatest Generation (From an Aging Baby Boomer) (Lennewo)
Keep at it, mate - Lets hear more about you. Perhaps a little long; short...
September 30th, 2021 00:11 - The Ballad of Clancy\'s Leaning Horse (Len Varley)
Please don\'t apologise - you are giving Banjo a run for his...
September 28th, 2021 07:20 - Insane? (Simple-Man87)
I am forced to tell you the answer is – yes. Or at least you have been...
September 24th, 2021 07:19 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards)
That\'s that then - I don\'\'t want no more posies.
When \'s (7)?
September 23rd, 2021 19:20 - A PRECAUTIONARY LETTER FROM CORONA VIRUS (Maira)
I do take precautions, but I\'m sorry - I do worry
How is it all going...
September 23rd, 2021 19:06
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