Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Stuck Between the Lines (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
This is fun with issues which mean much to me:
Peanut butter, crunchy,...
October 12th, 2022 23:27 - Brilliance Or Kindness. (Goldfinch60)
Yes kind people still do exist -
And found everywhere in our midst.
I...
October 12th, 2022 07:08 - The Illusion of Freedom (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I\'d endorse your view - even if I wouldn\'t/couldn\'t express it quite...
October 11th, 2022 04:46 - to be agreed (Arqios)
Well yes - I personally have managed to disagree agreeably on several...
October 11th, 2022 04:42 - The F-Bomb (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Yes, can be over used - particularly today by stand up comedians.
I use...
October 11th, 2022 04:01 - Ferrari Club (Gary Edward Geraci)
Should not someone introduce you to Andy Goldfinch, Gary? He\'s a bit of a...
October 11th, 2022 03:51 - Forever Memories. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes I do,
But not often.
Mostly I rue –
This don’t...
October 11th, 2022 03:32 - A Few More Things Remembered (Neville)
50i\'s did it for me, Nev - although never found any lady to attach...
October 11th, 2022 03:19 - Goodbye (Tallisman)
Tallisman: Apologies for the first paragraph of my first entry above. ...
October 11th, 2022 00:57 - Strindberg Principle (Arqios)
Prior to here, he was a playwright, after, he is by all accounts a...
October 10th, 2022 20:20 - Road to Heaven (Thekkinkkattil)
I feel that for your own good you should shut up about your current...
October 10th, 2022 19:48 - Not Just Any Old Day at the Office (Neville)
Too much Nev. Not sure why. I pride myself in an awareness of the...
October 10th, 2022 04:28 - Bad To Better. (Goldfinch60)
A self-help book by yourself is needed:
Then ”See page seven four nine...
October 10th, 2022 04:12 - Goodbye (Tallisman)
Do not depart. I’m a rhymer. If you haven’t discovered that already,...
October 10th, 2022 03:46 - Turn That Page. (Goldfinch60)
I find a conundrum presented here:
How can I avoid a turn of the...
October 9th, 2022 23:14 - Kanye West (EvenwheniLie)
Yes - I\'ll let Paul have that one, think - anything more would be a...
October 9th, 2022 17:57 - Waiting for you (Tallisman)
Worthwhile expending energy in a response when it might disappear
October 9th, 2022 17:43 - Untitled - LXIII (SureshG)
I get it Suresh - a truth in a nutshell.
A whole story there still to be...
October 9th, 2022 17:37 - The Teddy Challenge (Tallisman)
Not reinstated your \"controversial\' piece yet then? 🙂
October 8th, 2022 23:45 - Optimism and Pessimism Met for Lunch (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Depends.... on the situation....
Fun write.... Glass half full?
October 8th, 2022 18:38 - Something Greater (Fay Slimm.)
“A bright corner where care melted old scars.”
Fay - don’t normally...
October 8th, 2022 18:32 - When it’s time (EvenwheniLie)
You are a rhymer extraordinaire. Do you consider your style rap? I\'m not...
October 8th, 2022 05:19 - Good Friends. (Goldfinch60)
A friendship such as yours is without peer:
History, understanding and...
October 8th, 2022 02:12 - What Didn’t We Find in the Attic (Neville)
Not there (the bodies) \'cos there\'s no room for \'em... LOL. Selective...
October 7th, 2022 20:22 - Reality From My Dream. (Goldfinch60)
There’s always hope old lad - why not?
Your mantle piece is full of...
October 7th, 2022 05:24 - Blocked by Viola Davis (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
If ever a pin here needed a comment from author, this is it, C: Agojie,...
October 6th, 2022 18:53 - Off On Vacation! (Bella Shepard)
Have a good trip, Bella. Visited the falls from the Canadian side early...
October 6th, 2022 18:39 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations on your happy day:
Venerable age to reach without...
October 6th, 2022 06:39 - The Age of Gold (Orchidee)
Orchi - you have no time to be messing around here - onward, go
October 6th, 2022 06:34 - The Teddy Challenge (Tallisman)
Ok - but why did you delete it? Is this place a wet place where all...
October 6th, 2022 05:12 - not to be messed with (Arqios)
Thanks Rik - just let\'s hope Cheshire cat hasn\'t gone feral. Lady in...
October 6th, 2022 05:00 - Excuse Me I Love You She Said (Neville)
Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine,...
October 6th, 2022 00:59 - Critical race theory (EvenwheniLie)
I\'m not qualified to analyze all your issues stated there, but I\'ll vote...
October 6th, 2022 00:55 - Mirrors (Sorenbarrett)
Man made god in his own image then flipped it. The rest is history.
October 6th, 2022 00:50 - Life (Sorenbarrett)
You take on big themes, soren.
\"In the end one dies.....see it as a...
October 6th, 2022 00:46 - Do you believe? (Sorenbarrett)
Funnily enough, soren prior to my arrival here I had used the word...
October 6th, 2022 00:24 - Commissioned (Fay Slimm.)
I believe (no, not believe – am certain) you are right, Fay. I like...
October 5th, 2022 18:33 - Man in the moon (Tallisman)
WHAT HAPPENED TO \" Not defeated!\"???
October 5th, 2022 18:06 - Bird Feeding. (Goldfinch60)
My partner is of the same mind.
Lorikeets and cockatoos find
Five pm,...
October 5th, 2022 04:35 - looking for a real bargain (Arqios)
Rik: The trouble with \'screenshot and then posted as an image\' is that...
October 5th, 2022 04:00 - A moment of grace (Morwenna)
I love train rides, Morwenna -your piece captures perfectly the kind of...
October 4th, 2022 17:57 - Tory Scum (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'s it - get it off your chest - you might just conceivably have...
October 4th, 2022 17:49 - Poor teachers (Little margaret)
Not \"victims of circumstances\" - victims of politics. And incidentally ...
October 4th, 2022 17:43 - take two (Arqios)
\'If only\' - but it ain\'t, Rik, is it?
Fires floods and military...
October 4th, 2022 17:35 - Myself Ahead (Insanely Hilarious)
Someone who bills themselves as \'Insanely Hilarious\' obviously has a...
October 4th, 2022 04:19 - Dame Janet Baker. (Goldfinch60)
Oh getting somewhat esoteric here:
And your musical knowledge knows no...
October 4th, 2022 04:07 - Witchdoctor (Sorenbarrett)
Plus the right to refuse treatment...
A dire warning - well versified...
October 4th, 2022 01:14 - A woman scorned (Sorenbarrett)
Apologies I have a very literal mind (always doing this here). Your...
October 4th, 2022 01:07 - Invasion of the Boring Guy (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Come on - most (99%) of the guests in your video looked pretty interesting...
October 4th, 2022 00:46 - Each Night (Bella Shepard)
A complete experience, Bella - no trouble to sleep soundly that night..?...
October 3rd, 2022 20:58 - The smile. (Chris Duffy)
\'Afternoon Chris
Met with Amazon...no smile.
Burning? Burning? How are...
October 3rd, 2022 20:52 - Heady Times (Fay Slimm.)
It may be just my mind, Fay. Permission to find this highly erotic.....?
October 3rd, 2022 18:39 - star gazing (Arqios)
Don\'t mention star gazing to this lot Rik - most live in the Northern...
October 3rd, 2022 07:30 - The True Value of Dreaming (Neville)
I\'m sure an essential truth is there fined down to a perfect definition,...
October 3rd, 2022 07:21 - Last Dance (Lorna)
You make me nostalgic for times quickly passing. Too sad, Lorna.
October 3rd, 2022 07:10 - Coffee Days. (Goldfinch60)
Sir, you are someone who shows much restraint -
Such abstinence - you...
October 3rd, 2022 02:34 - sunrising sunset (Arqios)
Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between...
October 2nd, 2022 23:34 - Remembered (Fay Slimm.)
Oh how I wish I could write like that after I returned from a time travel...
October 2nd, 2022 19:12 - NIGERIA INDEPENDENCE POEM by Muhammad Danlami Muhammad (Sir. MDM) (Grand Magazine)
Three (no four!) poem pieces together on the same day, subject Nigeria. Is...
October 2nd, 2022 18:49 - Inconsequential Wonderings (Neville)
An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human...
October 2nd, 2022 18:42 - The smile. (Chris Duffy)
Smile not here yet, Chris, although the packages certainly are. A read I...
October 2nd, 2022 18:32 - Lexical Expansion (Lord Montgomery)
Lord Monty: I rarely do this , but since you are such a language...
October 2nd, 2022 06:09 - Forego Grudges. (Goldfinch60)
I detest others who give me advice.
But I will make an exception for...
October 2nd, 2022 01:32 - Write It Down, Write It Out. (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Good advice in your comment. Unfortunately the little voice in my head...
October 1st, 2022 20:57 - A day out at the beach (Morwenna)
A subtle change in consciousness beautifully pinned (no mistype -...
October 1st, 2022 20:50 - the purpose of pain (Lonelyraccoon)
If you come out of that experience with insight, it was valuable because...
October 1st, 2022 20:34 - A Love Story (MendedFences27)
That title - l very nearly passed this by - almost didn\'t...
October 1st, 2022 20:29 - and I try to be brave (Arqios)
Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I...
October 1st, 2022 07:53 - What! No Strawberries! (Goldfinch60)
Eton Mess British? I had no idea:
Should I remember this, or let it...
October 1st, 2022 02:06 - Ian (Rocky Lagou)
Motherland - Mother Earth - happening all over. You are not unique.
But...
October 1st, 2022 00:53 - I Heart My Heart (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Awwh You just stay in that good place - the pain isn\'t worth the
September 30th, 2022 19:43 - The Maze (Jerry Reynolds)
Point taken , Jerry - though I do believe that piece of advice has come a...
September 30th, 2022 19:23 - Kicked you in the cooch (Edthepoet)
A little disillusioned with virtual interaction, Ed?
Should be more of...
September 30th, 2022 08:53 - A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Coffin (Aa Harvey)
Well that\'s a relief - time to move on, perhaps?
September 30th, 2022 08:41 - That Special Time. (Goldfinch60)
‘Early to bed, early to rise..”
Andy, I think you have cracked...
September 30th, 2022 02:21 - A Certain Kind of Highness (Neville)
Dunno how I missed this before, Nev - mind if I keep and use at a timely...
September 30th, 2022 01:51 - The Hero Filling Station, near Sheffield, by Cumwell Lane (AuburnScribbler)
As a poem about a filling station open late in Sheffield, it has no peer,...
September 29th, 2022 20:28 - Let Me Be (Bella Shepard)
If I reach back into my very early childhood Bella, it does sound like a...
September 29th, 2022 20:12 - behind each poem (Arqios)
Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more...
September 29th, 2022 05:27 - Greeting Cards (Lord Montgomery)
Which will go first? The Hallmark shop or my cramped hand reduced to...
September 29th, 2022 05:21 - A Bus Stop in the Rain (Gene Rockwell Gant)
Well told interaction - Thanks.
September 29th, 2022 05:12 - Lament for a past world (Jerry Reynolds)
Ignorance was bliss.... and we have every right to view the past with what...
September 29th, 2022 05:09 - Stepping Stones. (Goldfinch60)
Whole life is a learning experience;
Mistakes should certainly be...
September 29th, 2022 04:54 - What Abuse? (Goldfinch60)
Now I have a funny presentiment
That you ain’t going to like wot I...
September 28th, 2022 08:38 - If People Were Ringtones (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Your poetry fun; your visuals stimulating, full of life. I like both. Many...
September 27th, 2022 20:40 - We don\'t need another Sequel (Shetonya Latryce)
Understood half (say three-quarters) of what was going down there - and...
September 27th, 2022 20:32 - If this is my life I\'d rather be dead than alive (Rick Singh)
Difficult to know what to say. No background. Your name? yeh Ok......
September 27th, 2022 05:08 - Morning Mozart. (Goldfinch60)
I sensed the invigoration you felt,
Experienced your wonderful day.
Is...
September 27th, 2022 01:41 - Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope (Ccpegus)
Five repeats...clever or what? I gave you what i consider to be very...
September 26th, 2022 21:32 - Sprinkle some crack on ‘em (EvenwheniLie)
I\'m out of breath and run through after that....!!!
September 26th, 2022 20:15 - Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope (Ccpegus)
Let\'s hope persistence pays better than the subject of your piece....... ...
September 26th, 2022 20:07 - Snaggletooth The Snitch (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always...
September 26th, 2022 19:51 - Apartment A (J.Edse)
I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be...
September 26th, 2022 19:44 - These Old Cats: Diary of a Single Black Female (Shetonya Latryce)
You think it\'s only old guys trying to get inside your pants? Still best...
September 26th, 2022 19:23 - Liminal Deliverance (Quemis)
Oh cheer me up, why don\'t you?
I do see a truth there (I think) - all is...
September 26th, 2022 19:10 - On My Way (Lorna)
Hi Lorna - apologies in advance for this: I\'m quite literal minded and...
September 26th, 2022 18:57 - Just Unbelievable! (Goldfinch60)
My prejudices challenged - how lovely:
I love this because my name is...
September 26th, 2022 04:12 - That Creation. (Goldfinch60)
Had to get the ice cream van out by eight.
This week I’ve really had a...
September 25th, 2022 06:41 - TV Soaps (Chris Duffy)
More than that, a belly laugh Chris.
Good job I live alone - no one...
September 25th, 2022 02:19 - Always read the label. (Tallisman)
A serious warning lightly told, T.
September 25th, 2022 02:06
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