Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Soap Box (M.E.M.)
Is there something about Florida you are a teensy bit unsure about?
After...
April 15th, 2021 19:41 - Ignorance Reigns. (Goldfinch60)
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is loving you
And...
April 15th, 2021 08:15 - IN SCOTLAND - IN LONDON (Michael Edwards)
Picture up to usual standard, Michael (cheeky!).
Politics a bit lost on...
April 14th, 2021 08:20 - Life Book. (Goldfinch60)
With that kind of optimism you could go on forever.....You will be into...
April 14th, 2021 08:04 - She sung to the sea and I wrote poetry (Poetic Dan)
No you are NOT already there, Dan -the evidence to be found in your...
April 14th, 2021 07:45 - Golden Beach (DesertWords)
Surprised me (recalcitrantly anti love poetry) - I really felt this one....
April 13th, 2021 19:24 - Doggerel Dave Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Except to owe you a mere one dime
Is I feel, Andy something of a...
April 13th, 2021 07:25 - Notes to Gogo (Ifeanyichukwu)
Thanks for providing a window into a very different, textured world to...
April 12th, 2021 21:41 - What\'s Best For Her, But I Still Want More (JWKP98)
Lust unrequited is something everyone experiences sometime or other - hard...
April 12th, 2021 05:17 - Truthful Lives. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t think I lie - and I do know it has got me into much trouble over...
April 12th, 2021 02:46 - Verum est Fatum (Quemis)
I\'ll vote with orch.... While you are there, if you are going to be, you...
April 12th, 2021 02:20 - Something to think about from Alan Watts (Accidental Poet)
Zen then?
Bought the sixties back as if there were no intervening years.
April 11th, 2021 18:15 - she submissive (Poesiaemonologo)
For BDSM read Bloody Dismal Sexual Manipulation.
April 11th, 2021 06:27 - Brave (Amanda Shelton)
Yes, I too would vote for the last stanza, Amanda.
April 11th, 2021 06:23 - Tides of Love (Asrealastheycome)
Don\'t normally go for love poetry much - too sugary mostly? This one...
April 10th, 2021 19:12 - Island Heaven. (Goldfinch60)
You know what I\'m going to put here , even before...
Yep - thanks for...
April 10th, 2021 01:43 - MOURNING THE MORNING (Joe Marcello)
Worms? They have their place and I have mine, where late and owls are...
April 9th, 2021 19:18 - Energy (Brimelow)
Its structure and terminology - I really got into this.
Alas - \'The...
April 9th, 2021 19:09 - Humble (Pacifique Niyitanga)
I get that, very neatly put, NP. To be unassuming can be a sign of...
April 9th, 2021 18:58 - INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards)
Go for it Michael. I\'ll wear the \'a\' I think, so long as it isn\'t...
April 9th, 2021 08:21 - Daffodils (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Daffodils have a special pace in my memory (and I don\'t mean \'I wandered...
April 9th, 2021 07:18 - Movement (Fay Slimm.)
Sometimes (quite often) your poetry is pretty dense, Fay. And this is one...
April 9th, 2021 06:25 - Patch (Rebmasters)
Go on - the jeans I observe (not wear) have been holed and worn through...
April 9th, 2021 06:11 - Autumn (Neville)
\'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one...
April 8th, 2021 19:00 - Boredom and Depression Are Not the Same. (Trenz Pruca)
A good open ended look at.......life, really.
Very clearly stated from my...
April 8th, 2021 00:42 - Depression (Bhoover56)
Walk (or run) away.
April 7th, 2021 18:35 - RAISE THE PINKY (Michael Edwards)
Ooo! Yer know where yer can stuff yer sanny \'an I don\'t mean down yer...
April 7th, 2021 04:37 - British Springtime. (Goldfinch60)
It is an addiction beyond all reason or comprehension - are you sure you...
April 7th, 2021 04:21 - Musical Opening. (Goldfinch60)
And your introductions to music I\'ve never encountered continue to give...
April 6th, 2021 05:19 - Smart Sister (Jerry Reynolds)
Wisdom > action > penalty > result.
Good \'un Jerry - poetic form more...
April 5th, 2021 19:14 - Mr Roberts (Doggerel Dave)
Hey Dan, many thanks for favouring this piece - I\'m more gratified than I...
April 5th, 2021 18:54 - Give anything but hate (Poetic Dan)
A very neat and entertaining little write, Dan....You\'ve written poems...
April 5th, 2021 02:12 - In my house (Thelala)
I\'m not religious, but I once heard of this bloke, Noah by name....
Good...
April 5th, 2021 00:04 - Perpetuating (SureshG)
Momentarily passing through.... I woz here - for a moment.
April 4th, 2021 22:43 - Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60)
Your own spin on the John Lennon, Andy? - and none the worse for that!
April 4th, 2021 22:37 - TAKING THE RISE (Michael Edwards)
Quite right too Michael – a good old semantic argument can be very...
April 4th, 2021 02:47 - SHOOTING DEBRIS (Joe Marcello)
I never write lousy poems..... :-)
Cleanest double entendre I\'ve ever...
April 2nd, 2021 22:50 - Have you ever (Thelala)
Suggest professional intervention - you don\'t sound very happy.
April 1st, 2021 20:10 - Obligations of Being (Brimelow)
Surprise!
One of the funniest things I\'ve read here for a while - Should...
April 1st, 2021 19:54 - Best of Both Worlds. (Goldfinch60)
Cracked that one , Andy - can I borrow your window when you are out...
April 1st, 2021 19:42 - Poetic nugget discovered today March 29th, 2021... (Rew4er2nail)
Bad time then....?
Feels exhausting. I do hope times now are better.
March 30th, 2021 19:59 - Dad Kid (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Neat little story, NP. I would think it is an experience some men and...
March 30th, 2021 19:52 - The Great Indoors. (Goldfinch60)
So - time for a mini interrogation
- \'Video unavailable--------in your...
March 30th, 2021 07:00 - miniature house (Germanamericanchurch)
Spot on Blue. You know that , depending on your audience, you will meet...
March 30th, 2021 00:30 - In the know (Olivia.)
So after \'Sick to Death\' it does appear that everything turned out well...
March 29th, 2021 21:37 - Arm Chair (AuburnScribbler)
An ode to a significant arm chair does me!
Starting from nothing, as I...
March 29th, 2021 18:10 - So Little Time (Goldfinch60)
Good One Andy - a succinct (as you note - so little time) endorsement of...
March 29th, 2021 05:11 - Little Songbird (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You have nothing to reproach yourself for Kevin - either with respect to...
March 28th, 2021 05:19 - This Wonderful Game. (Goldfinch60)
I understand - I do understand, Andy.
But to the fairly uninitiated, the...
March 28th, 2021 05:02 - “Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…” (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks Merissa.I don\'t know how I missed your post here - although I\'ve...
March 28th, 2021 01:26 - Memories (Jerry Reynolds)
I\'d vote for age, I think Jerry. Certainly childhood memories but others...
March 27th, 2021 19:33 - Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave)
No Charlie I am not suggesting you need to ‘do some work on...
March 27th, 2021 06:48 - FOOTBALL PUNDITS (Michael Edwards)
Wot is this football of which you speak? Not soccer perchance?
I enjoy...
March 27th, 2021 06:31 - A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello)
Yes Joe - Jarcher has the larger point re the environmental costs of car...
March 27th, 2021 01:18 - A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello)
To use white cars (in actuality a very logical solution to the problem of...
March 26th, 2021 18:32 - on the precipice..... (SureshG)
Sorry mate, there is noone out there - humans must sort it for themselves,...
March 26th, 2021 05:23 - Things Nearest (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you for the mention of the dandelion, Fay. Such memories of my...
March 25th, 2021 05:55 - Conversion (Fay Slimm.)
Great the way out was found, Fay. And should perchance it happen again,...
March 24th, 2021 07:02 - Before We Die (Neville)
Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for...
March 24th, 2021 06:33 - Fragments No. 4 “I Simply Refuse” (Gary Edward Geraci)
I \'d call that alienation, Gary. You accept things as they are, and place...
March 23rd, 2021 17:39 - Pit Vipers (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice one, Kurt. I do get a subtle hint that there may be the occasional...
March 23rd, 2021 17:29 - To Dorothy (Jerry Reynolds)
That\'s just the way it goes, Jerry.
March 23rd, 2021 17:23 - Soul serenity (Poetic Dan)
There is something in the line \"No tests on paper created this art!\"...
March 23rd, 2021 07:15 - The Census (Classicmister)
Is nothing sacred ? Wot about my privacy?
Actually never had any problem...
March 22nd, 2021 18:19 - I will never be ready (FredPeyer)
Don’t know if I’m ahead or behind you in the queue Fred, but I’ll...
March 22nd, 2021 17:57 - Even In The Darkness. (Goldfinch60)
Your optimism shines through in every write Andy. You don\'t even need the...
March 22nd, 2021 17:36 - Repose (Fay Slimm.)
So pastoral and romantic Fay - warms the cockles of my heart, even though...
March 22nd, 2021 03:55 - Just Maybe (A.H. Browning)
Good rhymer – impressive bunch of couplets there.
I don’t think you...
March 21st, 2021 20:30 - Miracle (FredPeyer)
Hey Fred – you come down on the side of Albert’s second supposition in...
March 20th, 2021 23:41 - Doctor Donkirsity (Gary Edward Geraci)
Satire, Gary? Last stanza seems at odds though - surely something had to...
March 20th, 2021 16:08 - We Battle at Dawn (M.E.M.)
Straightforward and well constructed, an easy read. Enjoyed. Must be a...
March 20th, 2021 16:03 - Underneath the Shadow of my Wings (Dove)
I feel safe as I read your work, Romantic B. Definitely no ambivalence...
March 20th, 2021 15:36 - Wild Beauty (Fay Slimm.)
I live in Australia which can be quite fanatical about the quality of its...
March 20th, 2021 06:09 - Time Just Disappears When Having Fun (Doggerel Dave)
And Jack the Lad (q.v.) has teamed up with a pair of criminal pranksters...
March 19th, 2021 23:22 - THE HAVES (Joe Marcello)
The rational approach to life wins the day, Joe?
I\'d vote for that....
March 19th, 2021 20:24 - Sorry....I think? (Purdy61)
I think it quite possibly does. And I state this as someone who expresses...
March 19th, 2021 20:18 - Drawer of Socks (Brimelow)
Yes I’ll pay that one – it is gently witty with an ironical view of a...
March 18th, 2021 19:49 - In Praise of the Fountain Pen! (Classicmister)
A harmless little hobby you have there Cmister, all neatly advocated for...
March 18th, 2021 18:06 - Poem, No Not a sex addiction! (AwHec8)
Short and to the point. You certainly know how to use words as weapons
March 18th, 2021 06:11 - Peepers (AuburnScribbler)
Don\'t hesitate Auburn S - the relief (albeit temporary) from irritation...
March 17th, 2021 18:00 - Catching the Drift (Fay Slimm.)
A well engineered set of chimes does lend something almost magical in the...
March 17th, 2021 07:02 - Roadwork Gods. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s obvious to me Andy, that your whole problem is embodied in the line...
March 16th, 2021 06:40 - Daily Door. (Goldfinch60)
Just keep on opening them, Andy.
I\'m sure that the doors you open will...
March 15th, 2021 05:56 - Magick of the Night (Goddess of the Mist)
Very picture laden, rhythmic , easy to read - enjoyed very much.
Forgive...
March 14th, 2021 23:51 - Poem, Men need to Change. (AwHec8)
Topical - good issue based nugget; I could read it, understood it, liked...
March 14th, 2021 19:27 - Free Birds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
The problems of urban living exemplified, Kevin - haven\'t
we all got one...
March 14th, 2021 19:19 - Useless (SunSearcher)
Well that didn\'t last long did it?
\'Sorry, I seem to have missed out on...
March 14th, 2021 19:07 - Tomodachi ya Koibito (Neville)
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck...
March 14th, 2021 05:56 - Peepers (AuburnScribbler)
Drops every couple of hours...heavier grade oil at night..wish I could...
March 13th, 2021 19:46 - Tudor Love-Note. (Fay Slimm.)
Verily Ye shall have my response forthwith, Madam..
Cor it ain\'t half...
March 13th, 2021 07:29 - Just for You (Neville)
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that...
March 13th, 2021 03:14 - A Lonely Cottage On The Moor (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A window like that can mean more to you than a great work of art. Nor can...
March 12th, 2021 17:33 - Short Story, And Now a Word From Our Sponsor! (AwHec8)
Hi Don.I believe we may have had this conversation before - still one more...
March 12th, 2021 17:11 - Meghan and Harry (Classicmister)
Dead correct - tabloids fill in their space with this flim flam in order...
March 12th, 2021 07:21 - Neutral In No Man\'s Land (JWKP98)
I\'d say you had some serious anger management issues. Seems you are...
March 12th, 2021 07:02 - A Tale of Loneliness (MendedFences27)
Never ever heard/seen what in essence is a shaggy dog story done with such...
March 11th, 2021 20:43 - Our stories matter (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve really put it altogether there, mate.
It almost feels like a...
March 11th, 2021 20:30 - Building A Truss (Everlong)
Pieces of truth scattered throughout that. And because I like rhymes, an...
March 11th, 2021 19:43 - 40 (Mrbleasdale)
At double that age, still figuring it all out.....
\"Grow old...
March 11th, 2021 19:26 - Never Forget. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Andy - felt you were speaking to me personally.
And.....spot on.
March 11th, 2021 03:10
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