Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• On the Cusp of a Sneeze .. (Neville) Even I can discern the absence but faint hope embodied there , Nev. Thanks
  March 27th, 2022 05:21
• Pirate life (Kitty the naughty poet) Hi Katie. Which pirate films specifically? I have a deep and abiding...
  March 27th, 2022 05:12
• Our Place (Lee Imuede) I understand your anger - but \'it\'s the same the whole world over\'; ...
  March 27th, 2022 04:57
• A NO VOTE (Joe Marcello) I\'m not a great fan of space technology,, but to avoid disappointment,...
  March 25th, 2022 18:38
• i will comfort you (Dusk arising) Had you waited a long time to make that offer, dusk? My somewhat literal...
  March 25th, 2022 18:23
• Nameless (Fay Slimm.) The bloody splashes in each of your neatly balanced lines speak of many...
  March 25th, 2022 18:05
• SPECSAVERS CHALLENGE (Michael Edwards) We get Specsavers ads here, Michael..not sure I\'ve seen that one.....
  March 24th, 2022 04:08
• Woof Woof! (Orchidee) Where the hymn toon to go with that? Missing the hymn toon...
  March 24th, 2022 04:03
• Taking it Slow (Neville) Should appear on the Antiques Roadshow - they love \'em there...
  March 24th, 2022 03:59
• Back Together. (Goldfinch60) Back to earth here, Andy: you both came off the croquet court and tested...
  March 24th, 2022 03:50
• quicksilver clouds (Jon Nakapalau) Got a surplus here - want some? A vivid picture though, painted with...
  March 23rd, 2022 19:59
• Urges (Fay Slimm.) You find some outstandingly beautiful images to go with your rich script,...
  March 23rd, 2022 07:14
• A FINE TO-DO (Michael Edwards) Ah but definitely beyond limerick Michael; increased complexity in tune...
  March 23rd, 2022 05:42
• Don\'t Tell Anyone! (Goldfinch60) Fraud! you ain\'t got no covid - you should ha been in intensive care by...
  March 23rd, 2022 05:30
• The Toaster (Paul Bell) Gotta be a brown toaster. Something to grade your toast with. Some...
  March 23rd, 2022 01:02
• Comfort and Joy (Paul Bell) Attachment - what a burden, what a curse.... a shed, a daughter..... a...
  March 22nd, 2022 20:24
• I hope my Death Comes Unannounced (Garry) Precisely.... over and out.....
  March 22nd, 2022 20:05
• Weird Family (Chris Duffy) Don\'t believe a word of it Chris, in your case: but as a forensic study...
  March 22nd, 2022 19:56
• Not Just An Old Fella Passing (Neville) Another relatively long one – thanks Nev. For me the real message...
  March 22nd, 2022 19:43
• the tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog (Dusk arising) I was going to have a go - you actually did a rhymer...hypoc...nah, you...
  March 22nd, 2022 07:27
• Poet of Pain (Kevin Michael Bloor) How many poems have you? If they are all like this,..... No slacking -...
  March 22nd, 2022 07:04
• beneath the heavens (Dusk arising) Long time since I\'ve seen such a paean to perspective, dusk.
  March 21st, 2022 03:09
• Pain In The Proverbial. (Goldfinch60) Take very good care of yourself (and your partner), Andy. Take it very...
  March 20th, 2022 07:49
• worth (Jark) And?
  March 19th, 2022 06:55
• I MISS YOU (Michael Edwards) Wot, Michael – no limerick double ‘0’, with prefix one? Surely it...
  March 19th, 2022 06:12
• Being Kind. (Goldfinch60) As you so rightly point out Andy, a smile ‘does not cost...
  March 19th, 2022 05:35
• Peace Like My River. (Goldfinch60) Just stay with the river, Andy. Don\'t extrapolate; it doesn\'t work.
  March 18th, 2022 19:20
• Prosperous People (Orchidee) Andy! By the Lord or something or other, wot\'s going rong wid you? Don...
  March 18th, 2022 04:28
• Parents (Jennybee89) And in dysfunctional families?
  March 18th, 2022 02:25
• Even When it’s All Over It’s Not Necessarily Over (Neville) I\'ll always vote for you when you do a long \'un (which is not often...
  March 17th, 2022 17:47
• You Are (Fay Slimm.) I haven\'t had much experience Fay, but I will give it a try - how could...
  March 16th, 2022 19:17
• Vengeance Verities (Orchidee) No wonder you and KP have had a bit of a tempestuous relationship,...
  March 16th, 2022 06:26
• Darkness To Light. (Goldfinch60) My favourite anthem for years, but if it ain\'t working, why?
  March 16th, 2022 06:10
• LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99 (Michael Edwards) So multi disciplined, Michael: L’s one and three – Relationship[...
  March 16th, 2022 05:52
• Taunting Muse. (Goldfinch60) Need to find a heavy duty kind of bog paper, Andy. Write round the...
  March 15th, 2022 03:43
• LIMERICK 91 (Michael Edwards) Limited number of orifices available, Michael...but corr... the picture...
  March 15th, 2022 03:32
• Condiment (Neville) Expectations..... and did she cut the mustard in the end, Nev? Sorry -...
  March 14th, 2022 07:36
• VPL (Paul Bell) A larf a minute....no hang on.....more frequent than that... Being an...
  March 13th, 2022 20:15
• The Decline of Recollection (Neville) I did not read your piece as necessarily relating to dementia , Neville,...
  March 13th, 2022 19:51
• The Decline of Recollection (Neville) Surely you don\'t want to start a debate on voluntary euthanasia here,...
  March 13th, 2022 04:48
• Saline Songs (Fay Slimm.) The rhythmic crash and flow of the waves and the tang of the salt all...
  March 12th, 2022 07:38
• Something Else Entirely (Neville) If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one...
  March 12th, 2022 07:27
• Russians (Dusk arising) Those words are so right, dusk.You made them very accessible there. So...
  March 12th, 2022 07:17
• how transient (Dusk arising) Who cares? Earth an insignificant piece of matter in an immense universe ...
  March 11th, 2022 03:51
• Seeing the Light (Jenny.g) The change a parent should undergo as their offspring grows and develops...
  March 11th, 2022 00:22
• Why? [*⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️* Certain words in this poem may be upsetting to some] (-MercyMent@l-) Your response feels coherent to me, Mercy. \'Why?\' is a question you...
  March 10th, 2022 18:54
• Oedipus (Neville) Hey Neville - wot about a video? Why not go to yusporn or ask one of...
  March 10th, 2022 03:28
• My Rose Coloured Spectacles (Marrianna) Light and bright - escapist of course, but non the worse for that.
  March 9th, 2022 18:53
• Why? [*⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️* Certain words in this poem may be upsetting to some] (-MercyMent@l-) Don\'t see why anyone should enjoy that. But the question has to be...
  March 9th, 2022 00:29
• Homes for heroes. (Chris Duffy) Do not reflect Chris, on what has been done before. Some (not all)...
  March 9th, 2022 00:22
• I Would (Fay Slimm.) I never knew you cared... Such rich language, Fay - so rich , I don\'t...
  March 8th, 2022 19:02
• Same Old Blue Jeans (Neville) Wot flares? Do try to hang onto them just a little longer.... they will be...
  March 8th, 2022 18:09
• THE INNER LIMITS (Joe Marcello) A good example of one of those \'common sense\' saws which float around...
  March 8th, 2022 17:59
• horrible (Dusk arising) But politicians and war machines of each and every country never learn, do...
  March 8th, 2022 07:01
• Please don\'t stop the rain (Rrodriguez) Entirely possible to have too much of a good thing, you know - as many...
  March 7th, 2022 23:47
• accolade (Dusk arising) Yeh? Well then, Happy Birthday, dusk....................I hate to boast,...
  March 7th, 2022 18:21
• Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (Rozina) Both Robert and Neil have it. I would like to add though that alcohol is...
  March 7th, 2022 06:30
• Total Success. (Goldfinch60) A bigger load of old rubbish I\'ve have never come across. At no time in...
  March 7th, 2022 04:23
• Untitled (ModernBard) Hey ModB - A bit late I know, but better late....... The links you make...
  March 6th, 2022 21:25
• Not Wanting to be Famous (Neville) Nearly missed this one, Neville -sorry. Today no time to be famous when...
  March 6th, 2022 06:35
• SNIPPETS (3& 4) (Michael Edwards) Three is me; I need to put that somewhere - got a fridge magnet? Four,...
  March 6th, 2022 05:58
• Encroachment (Fay Slimm.) Same kind of situation occurs along parts of the east coast of Australia,...
  March 6th, 2022 05:39
• my muse went meowsy (Dusk arising) Can\'t avoid this one. The end of line words .- are they special? some...
  March 6th, 2022 00:50
• The Fridge (Paul Bell) I kept up with the fridge (I think...) Seemed safest. But wot about the...
  March 5th, 2022 21:48
• Connection (Fay Slimm.) Phew! You are getting quite raw lately, Fay - and nothing wrong with that.
  March 5th, 2022 06:04
• When You Were Mine: Villanelle (Dove) Dove, you really are a master of the Villanelle, so very well...
  March 4th, 2022 19:10
• To what end? (Doggerel Dave) I reworked this piece in the hope of greater clarity. No change in...
  March 4th, 2022 18:43
• CONFLICT (Andy Hunter) A great overall view in disciplined verse. Thanks Andy
  March 4th, 2022 18:05
• Spiders (Nikemomma.org) Please don\'t squash. Try to control your arachnophobia and if possible...
  March 4th, 2022 05:10
• Youth\'s Blood (Fay Slimm.) That is pared down and very savage, Fay - absolutely spot on.
  March 4th, 2022 04:59
• LIMERICKS 94 95 & 96 (Michael Edwards) (After number three, before all the zoophilia set in:) 😜 A...
  March 4th, 2022 04:31
• the light we see we dont see (Dusk arising) Rich, gut tearing poetry, dusk.
  March 4th, 2022 04:09
• я з тобою україно  (Dusk arising) Echoes of WW2. Avoidable until it is too late. Thanks dusk.
  March 3rd, 2022 21:51
• The Tale of Brulee (Neville) And as the truck moved off, there would be no more laying around. The joy...
  March 3rd, 2022 06:30
• We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.) Beyond the colouring of my hair, which I will not do, I\'ll follow you...
  March 3rd, 2022 06:18
• The Sweet Sublime (Kevin Michael Bloor) You are just getting old, mate -nothing more.
  March 3rd, 2022 04:33
• O leaders (NafisaSB) Sussed out several of your poems - so I know your heart is very much in...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:28
• Second Gift. (Goldfinch60) What\'s to understand ? Get on with it and enjoy!
  March 3rd, 2022 04:08
• Wild Boar (Thekkinkkattil) Perhaps the crucial question: Are your boars indigenous or an introduced...
  March 3rd, 2022 04:05
• Cocktails For Putin (Jerry Reynolds) And, Jerry? My literal mind hasn\'t encompassed the implications of...
  March 3rd, 2022 03:57
• Wine (Zhangyuyouyu) Your profile states you are 16..... I was much older when I made that...
  March 2nd, 2022 18:22
• When Can We Have Peace? (Zhangyuyouyu) I will post today a sliver of an answer to that question. You look like...
  March 2nd, 2022 18:18
• THE REAL KNUCKLEBALL (Joe Marcello) Avoid penury - make that learning curve vertical ASAP. Truth to be found...
  March 1st, 2022 21:02
• Attack (Fay Slimm.) I can feel the ambivalence Fay, in your perfectly calibrated piece (which...
  March 1st, 2022 05:01
• LIMERICK 89 (Michael Edwards) Ah, the story of many a poor innocent human thrust into a dysfunctional...
  March 1st, 2022 04:43
• Between Squalls (Neville) This is a shock, Nev - obviously more than tonsillitis. Intend to share...
  March 1st, 2022 04:03
• Symbols Of Music. (Goldfinch60) An education is mine, provided I stick around long enough. Thanks for the...
  February 28th, 2022 20:11
• Sleep? (Rozina) Topic worthy of note, Rozina. Threats from my public radio that anything...
  February 28th, 2022 20:05
• Missing (Spilleronsheet) No dreams... none possible in such a situation. A pure statement of fact....
  February 27th, 2022 19:46
• Reef (Neville) Now that\'s autobiography rich in detail, Neville - I\'d like to read more...
  February 26th, 2022 05:23
• LIMERICK 90 (Michael Edwards) Like yer little \'Wot no...\' man (presumably \'man\') in car, Michael...
  February 26th, 2022 05:13
• One Of Two. (Goldfinch60) Wot, one of two knees? Don\'t worry Andy - the other one will be there for...
  February 26th, 2022 05:08
• I give it away (Poetic Dan) I definitely feel you have, as expressed in the poem, resolved something...
  February 24th, 2022 20:43
• Another South West Coastal Path Miracle (Neville) An enigma of a write, Nev, rich in small detail. But had this one ended...
  February 24th, 2022 04:31
• Who\'s God. (Goldfinch60) All I ever want to express about the Holey (note the added \'e\')...
  February 23rd, 2022 06:10
• Just a Series of Thoughts (Neville) Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half...
  February 22nd, 2022 22:06
• LIMERICK 87 (Michael Edwards) Limerick provided too many visuals, Michael - definitely needed the...
  February 22nd, 2022 21:46
• Five Beatles and a Groupie (Neville) Aah - but who got their end away........in the end? 😊😊😊
  February 21st, 2022 21:57
• Learning to Lean (Fay Slimm.) Thanks for the poem, Fay. Very appropriate timing for what, if reports are...
  February 20th, 2022 20:43
• Henpecked ! (Chris Duffy) A relationship richly painted there, Chris. You make me realize a part...
  February 20th, 2022 20:34