Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- False Prophets. (Chris Duffy)
Chris, I often have trouble reading pieces more than three to four stanzas...
July 4th, 2022 19:43 - Not gonna turn out well… (Tallisman)
Well crafted piece, Tallisman.
Maybe this says more about me than the...
July 3rd, 2022 19:42 - Time and being (Morwenna)
Well summarised, Morwenna - My twenty years of retirement (longer than I...
July 3rd, 2022 19:36 - Naughtiness in an elevator (Kitty the naughty poet)
Nothing like a little frottage to add spice to a day.....
July 2nd, 2022 20:06 - Aquarium (Sorenbarrett)
Where does this deep need for control come from?
July 2nd, 2022 19:59 - Believe (Sorenbarrett)
Well put, Soren.
But I don\'t have to believe at all because I don\'t...
July 1st, 2022 18:24 - Over population (Sorenbarrett)
Propagation without regulation.
June 30th, 2022 18:20 - Justices (Blueledge)
I\'d enjoy if you could expand on that a little....
June 30th, 2022 17:50 - Sorry ! (Justa_Geezer)
Last quatrain probably redeemed you!
June 30th, 2022 17:48 - Contentment (Morwenna)
How was that bench, Morwenna? Your contentment is infectious - I know of...
June 30th, 2022 17:44 - Hypnotic (Fay Slimm.)
To come in actual contact with a snake (and I don\'t mean bitten by one)...
June 30th, 2022 07:59 - Memory Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Yep - focus on the here and now before it becomes a memory, then lay it...
June 29th, 2022 19:05 - Conversation with a ghost (Jerry Reynolds)
Always better to think before you speak - lesson I will learn one...
June 29th, 2022 18:59 - FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 2 (Michael Edwards)
Make mine a dry white if you would be so kind; but there\'s nothing wrong...
June 29th, 2022 18:53 - Heartbroken Poet\'s. (Justa_Geezer)
I\'ll pay that one, Geez - even though I\'m past the pain caused by...
June 29th, 2022 00:45 - Turn the TV Off (Saxon Crow)
Provided you don\'t then transfer to social media, Instagram and all (do...
June 29th, 2022 00:26 - Easy Happiness (Morwenna)
One can only hope, Morwenna.
All that can be done is to make our feelings...
June 28th, 2022 19:20 - Be Less Sh*t (Saxon Crow)
Bumper stickier might just have something there, Sax - thanks for passing...
June 28th, 2022 00:44 - I Am Cloud (Fay Slimm.)
As an avid cloud watcher (this has led me to some dark places - such as...
June 27th, 2022 08:03 - Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence (Eugene S.)
Good laugh ,this one - dunno if it is just my mood, but it rang certain...
June 25th, 2022 04:54 - Pigs Flying. (Goldfinch60)
Good on yer, Andy - tell it like it is - let me tell yer \"It\'s the same...
June 25th, 2022 04:38 - What right have they? (Butterfly_nerd)
For my money I\'d like to see more of the content of your Comment embodied...
June 25th, 2022 04:34 - Well I Never… (Doggerel Dave)
Agreed, Michael – the bed has been made. But it seems no one (not here...
June 24th, 2022 23:35 - Addiction (EvenwheniLie)
Please don\'t even try - you would be on a hiding to nothing.
The will to...
June 24th, 2022 08:26 - Grumblings of a young old man! (Saxon Crow)
You Sir, are nothing but a pup.
Get out there dancing and prancing or...
June 23rd, 2022 07:19 - 1969-1971 (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Memories of the sixties - evokes memories I DO remember. -Thank...
June 21st, 2022 03:04 - The Jolly Little Cafe Where A Chestnut Tree Once Grew (Monologue) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Missed this one on first arrival, Alan (been away).
Great atmosphere...
June 20th, 2022 01:49 - Every Storm. (Goldfinch60)
Had absolutely no idea you had stormy moments, Andy. 😊
Advice,...
June 14th, 2022 07:36 - Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again! (Saxon Crow)
.....And fulfillment - great stuff, Sax.
June 14th, 2022 07:10 - 12th December 2019 (Blueledge)
I\'ve been away too long, so some of your debate re Blair and Cameron goes...
June 13th, 2022 08:30 - Not now, Fido! (Orchidee)
Wot a complicated life you and Fido live orchi. How you have lasted since...
June 13th, 2022 08:20 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
Re:
\"I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the...
June 11th, 2022 21:59 - Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville)
Re:
\"I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the...
June 11th, 2022 21:50 - Not A Royalist Poem (Saxon Crow)
As a portrait of the ambivalence felt by (I hope) many re Her Maj and...
June 3rd, 2022 17:09 - Giving Up Poetry (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky, Rocky
(from above where there is no link to place this in its...
April 3rd, 2022 01:30 - Another Wonderful Day, (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t really beat that, Andy - as a philosophy for today..........and...
April 2nd, 2022 16:48 - forever (Dusk arising)
Memories like that can save on central heating, dusk.
Worthwhile...
April 2nd, 2022 16:31 - LIMERICKS 100 101 & 102 (Michael Edwards)
You did make the ton - congrats, Michel. One can only await in...
April 1st, 2022 03:29 - Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet) (Rocky Lagou)
Hi Rocky; You have a good poem here, full of rich imagery and a deep...
March 31st, 2022 19:35 - Gutter Gardening. (Goldfinch60)
Andy - now listen carefully: rattle the jolly old piggy bank, call in all...
March 31st, 2022 03:35 - Because We Care (LMTobin)
Not much criticism or debate from me (surprisingly).
Nice use of...
March 30th, 2022 19:31 - Ukraine Rain (The Holodomor 1932-33) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
As a strong advocate of a historical perspective here (to the boredom, no...
March 30th, 2022 19:20 - Mary Had A Little Lamb 16. (Goldfinch60)
This site is going out of control.....
March 30th, 2022 02:56 - Dirty Water (Neville)
Context: who, Nev? \"sad,wish\", \"terrible\", \"grass, rain\" - wot\'s it...
March 30th, 2022 02:54 - THE FALLING LEAF (Thejaswini)
Would you care to review your 18+ ratings?
March 29th, 2022 08:32 - black lacquered nails [a rough exterior, one] (Ppetrichor)
I note you are a high schooler \'pretty good at prose\' - For your future,...
March 29th, 2022 03:40 - World Piano Day. (Goldfinch60)
Tickle them ivories (hope not - can you assure me those keys were made...
March 29th, 2022 03:26 - VIEWS FROM THE OTHER SIDE OF FENCE (Michael Edwards)
You got my vote,...
March 29th, 2022 03:20 - I made a beeline bustle (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
(In case you missed it when I put it up...
March 28th, 2022 21:06 - Forever Young (Paul Bell)
Feels like bonking in bed is bad for you. Wot about behind the altar or...
March 28th, 2022 19:42 - Zen Tree (Neville)
Didn’t hear any Zen going on there Nev (tin ear?), but what I did hear,...
March 28th, 2022 04:11 - ONCE (Michael Edwards)
I escaped London in the eighties - with a genuine British Brolly as a...
March 28th, 2022 01:03 - postcard home to mother russia (Dusk arising)
Sir, I am pleased to inform you that you are appointed to the position of...
March 27th, 2022 19:09 - Alzheimers (Bella Shepard)
Thanks Bella for a portrait which is true and to the point, encompassing...
March 27th, 2022 06:02 - On the Cusp of a Sneeze .. (Neville)
Even I can discern the absence but faint hope embodied there , Nev. Thanks
March 27th, 2022 05:21 - Pirate life (Kitty the naughty poet)
Hi Katie. Which pirate films specifically? I have a deep and abiding...
March 27th, 2022 05:12 - Our Place (Lee Imuede)
I understand your anger - but \'it\'s the same the whole world over\'; ...
March 27th, 2022 04:57 - A NO VOTE (Joe Marcello)
I\'m not a great fan of space technology,, but to avoid disappointment,...
March 25th, 2022 18:38 - i will comfort you (Dusk arising)
Had you waited a long time to make that offer, dusk?
My somewhat literal...
March 25th, 2022 18:23 - Nameless (Fay Slimm.)
The bloody splashes in each of your neatly balanced lines speak of many...
March 25th, 2022 18:05 - SPECSAVERS CHALLENGE (Michael Edwards)
We get Specsavers ads here, Michael..not sure I\'ve seen that one.....
March 24th, 2022 04:08 - Woof Woof! (Orchidee)
Where the hymn toon to go with that? Missing the hymn toon...
March 24th, 2022 04:03 - Taking it Slow (Neville)
Should appear on the Antiques Roadshow - they love \'em there...
March 24th, 2022 03:59 - Back Together. (Goldfinch60)
Back to earth here, Andy: you both came off the croquet court and tested...
March 24th, 2022 03:50 - quicksilver clouds (Jon Nakapalau)
Got a surplus here - want some?
A vivid picture though, painted with...
March 23rd, 2022 19:59 - Urges (Fay Slimm.)
You find some outstandingly beautiful images to go with your rich script,...
March 23rd, 2022 07:14 - A FINE TO-DO (Michael Edwards)
Ah but definitely beyond limerick Michael; increased complexity in tune...
March 23rd, 2022 05:42 - Don\'t Tell Anyone! (Goldfinch60)
Fraud! you ain\'t got no covid - you should ha been in intensive care by...
March 23rd, 2022 05:30 - The Toaster (Paul Bell)
Gotta be a brown toaster. Something to grade your toast with.
Some...
March 23rd, 2022 01:02 - Comfort and Joy (Paul Bell)
Attachment - what a burden, what a curse.... a shed, a daughter..... a...
March 22nd, 2022 20:24 - I hope my Death Comes Unannounced (Garry)
Precisely.... over and out.....
March 22nd, 2022 20:05 - Weird Family (Chris Duffy)
Don\'t believe a word of it Chris, in your case: but as a forensic study...
March 22nd, 2022 19:56 - Not Just An Old Fella Passing (Neville)
Another relatively long one – thanks Nev.
For me the real message...
March 22nd, 2022 19:43 - the tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog (Dusk arising)
I was going to have a go - you actually did a rhymer...hypoc...nah, you...
March 22nd, 2022 07:27 - Poet of Pain (Kevin Michael Bloor)
How many poems have you? If they are all like this,..... No slacking -...
March 22nd, 2022 07:04 - beneath the heavens (Dusk arising)
Long time since I\'ve seen such a paean to perspective, dusk.
March 21st, 2022 03:09 - Pain In The Proverbial. (Goldfinch60)
Take very good care of yourself (and your partner), Andy. Take it very...
March 20th, 2022 07:49 - worth (Jark)
And?
March 19th, 2022 06:55 - I MISS YOU (Michael Edwards)
Wot, Michael – no limerick double ‘0’, with prefix one?
Surely it...
March 19th, 2022 06:12 - Being Kind. (Goldfinch60)
As you so rightly point out Andy, a smile ‘does not cost...
March 19th, 2022 05:35 - Peace Like My River. (Goldfinch60)
Just stay with the river, Andy.
Don\'t extrapolate; it doesn\'t work.
March 18th, 2022 19:20 - Prosperous People (Orchidee)
Andy! By the Lord or something or other, wot\'s going rong wid you?
Don...
March 18th, 2022 04:28 - Parents (Jennybee89)
And in dysfunctional families?
March 18th, 2022 02:25 - Even When it’s All Over It’s Not Necessarily Over (Neville)
I\'ll always vote for you when you do a long \'un (which is not often...
March 17th, 2022 17:47 - You Are (Fay Slimm.)
I haven\'t had much experience Fay, but I will give it a try - how could...
March 16th, 2022 19:17 - Vengeance Verities (Orchidee)
No wonder you and KP have had a bit of a tempestuous relationship,...
March 16th, 2022 06:26 - Darkness To Light. (Goldfinch60)
My favourite anthem for years, but if it ain\'t working, why?
March 16th, 2022 06:10 - LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99 (Michael Edwards)
So multi disciplined, Michael: L’s one and three – Relationship[...
March 16th, 2022 05:52 - Taunting Muse. (Goldfinch60)
Need to find a heavy duty kind of bog paper, Andy. Write round the...
March 15th, 2022 03:43 - LIMERICK 91 (Michael Edwards)
Limited number of orifices available, Michael...but corr... the picture...
March 15th, 2022 03:32 - Condiment (Neville)
Expectations..... and did she cut the mustard in the end, Nev?
Sorry -...
March 14th, 2022 07:36 - VPL (Paul Bell)
A larf a minute....no hang on.....more frequent than that...
Being an...
March 13th, 2022 20:15 - The Decline of Recollection (Neville)
I did not read your piece as necessarily relating to dementia , Neville,...
March 13th, 2022 19:51 - The Decline of Recollection (Neville)
Surely you don\'t want to start a debate on voluntary euthanasia here,...
March 13th, 2022 04:48 - Saline Songs (Fay Slimm.)
The rhythmic crash and flow of the waves and the tang of the salt all...
March 12th, 2022 07:38 - Something Else Entirely (Neville)
If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one...
March 12th, 2022 07:27 - Russians (Dusk arising)
Those words are so right, dusk.You made them very accessible there.
So...
March 12th, 2022 07:17 - how transient (Dusk arising)
Who cares? Earth an insignificant piece of matter in an immense universe ...
March 11th, 2022 03:51 - Seeing the Light (Jenny.g)
The change a parent should undergo as their offspring grows and develops...
March 11th, 2022 00:22 - Why? [*⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️* Certain words in this poem may be upsetting to some] (-MercyMent@l-)
Your response feels coherent to me, Mercy.
\'Why?\' is a question you...
March 10th, 2022 18:54
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