Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Poker with the Devil. (Chris Duffy)
A smooth enjoyable ride, Chris. Only thing is, I\'m.not.quite.sure. if....
July 21st, 2021 07:08 - Opus (Neville)
Neville – that’s quite freaky... no, not freaky..disorienting –...
July 21st, 2021 06:40 - The Sixties, I Was There . (Goldfinch60)
Great piece of nostalgia – really took me back: if I could...
July 21st, 2021 04:58 - The Craghoppers Calling (Saxon Crow)
That piece is entertainingly excellent - and why did you tell us you had...
July 21st, 2021 04:29 - Pondering Sideways Glance (Flyingfish)
Yep - something I think I was aware of more or less subconsciously -...
July 21st, 2021 02:03 - Avoiding no more ready to explore (Poetic Dan)
Good on you, Dan. As a pure, practical journey which sounds like it will...
July 21st, 2021 01:13 - What Granddad bought from Amazon. (Chris Duffy)
My kind of verse Chris- even if it\'s teensy weensy, ever so slightly...
July 20th, 2021 17:56 - Coooeee - Oh no! (Orchidee)
I was going to inquire of Andy - it didn\'t feel right to have you...
July 20th, 2021 04:55 - Singing Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Are you sure about this, Andy? Even from far away it looks like madness to...
July 20th, 2021 04:45 - Retirement (Thekkinkkattil)
I was definitely built to be a gentleman of leisure forced to work most of...
July 20th, 2021 04:37 - I feel like chicken tonight (Saxon Crow)
A witty take on the fact that the World is and will be roasting.
Well...
July 20th, 2021 04:22 - Inequities - I (SureshG)
And so, Suresh, re your last two lines, is that really the position we...
July 19th, 2021 23:27 - Empty Chair (AuburnScribbler)
Neat piece, AS – enjoyed
Without Covid, lockdowns and on/off, the...
July 19th, 2021 20:13 - What Matters Most (Neville)
Relationship sans communication -
Crappy causation
Ain’t no privation...
July 19th, 2021 19:56 - Fraudulent Transactions. (Chris Duffy)
Covered that lot with a great rhymer, Chris
Emails can be entertaining if...
July 19th, 2021 18:30 - Be Like Fox (Saxon Crow)
Wind in the Willows on steroids...I cant\'t remember if W in the W had a...
July 19th, 2021 06:52 - Tides of change (TowodiGe)
Advice to be pondered upon, taken perhaps..but in total contrast to your...
July 19th, 2021 06:45 - No Longer At Home. (Goldfinch60)
That’s more like it, Andy. No more of your sweetness and light memories...
July 19th, 2021 04:53 - Oh Not To Be A Seagull (Surucipe)
Great read! And you continue to be \'content here\' Tuned into that...
July 18th, 2021 20:07 - Time Versus Love (Fay Slimm.)
Sorry Fay, but love (if indeed that\'s what we are talking about) old and...
July 18th, 2021 19:29 - Metaphoric bliss (Wackyheartache4)
I like much of your stuff. having only recently tripped over you!...
July 18th, 2021 19:22 - Enough is enough (Poetic Dan)
Yes Dan - Here from the first post on It\'s all said already - in your own...
July 18th, 2021 18:36 - Cathedral Bells (Neville)
Yep - Cathedrals, symbols of power and wealth.... me Atheist/Agnostic,...
July 18th, 2021 02:55 - Empty Words (Saxon Crow)
Just don\'t go away Sax.
l\'ve got a poem on this situation stashed...
July 18th, 2021 02:48 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
Ah Fay – sunset – change captured. Would be invidious to single out...
July 17th, 2021 22:05 - One More Four Letter Word (Neville)
With all the shifting sands of a relationship, the lie becomes a deep...
July 17th, 2021 21:55 - Never a Dull Moment (Saxon Crow)
So many elements - some of which made me smile with recognition, some...
July 17th, 2021 21:25 - Lorna (Rpgiii)
Fantasy poem obviously – if real then they both deserve a Darwin Award...
July 17th, 2021 04:59 - A SOLDIER\'S DAUGHTER (AzaleaTruth)
I never last with long pieces here; take in ten – twenty lines , scroll...
July 17th, 2021 04:35 - Age Of Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
Andy - I\'m not sure I had a graceful youth; not sure I have wisdom in...
July 17th, 2021 04:07 - meditative - IV (SureshG)
I\'ll go for that - not that i\'m anywhere near it yet, but definitely on...
July 16th, 2021 23:27 - Shoes. (Chris Duffy)
Whimsical piece. Fun
+18? Why?
Welcome to MPS . Please feel free to...
July 16th, 2021 19:55 - PER SENSE LESS (Joe Marcello)
The percent sign figures are probably the best - at least until the...
July 16th, 2021 19:46 - Active Messaging (Jerry Reynolds)
All that luxury, Jerry.....
July 16th, 2021 19:37 - Systemic (TowodiGe)
An angry piece which, I’m sure mirrors the experience and attitudes of...
July 16th, 2021 19:18 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (4) (Michael Edwards)
I understand the problem and the frustration very well, Michael and cannot...
July 16th, 2021 04:30 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (4) (Michael Edwards)
Privacy - if press was not courted....
Beyond that, I\'m with you all...
July 16th, 2021 03:50 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
I hope Nature lasts for you....
(Dept of Wet Blanket).
July 16th, 2021 03:47 - War of Contrition (Saxon Crow)
\'your silence\' says it all, Sax - why do you bother?
Great write but...
July 16th, 2021 03:39 - $50 Fortune Cookie (Jerry Reynolds)
Profound prognostications can mean SFA.
Beautifully entertaining read,...
July 15th, 2021 20:22 - Mark these Words (Neville)
Oh who are you kidding, Neville? - everyone does - look above, and below...
July 15th, 2021 05:19 - The Freest I\'ve Felt (Chloe Miller)
I agree, Uluru is a fine place. And your piece makes it easy to get swept...
July 15th, 2021 05:07 - Hippie Warning. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed why? In the next three days (three writes) I hope to read the...
July 15th, 2021 04:53 - War of Attrition (Saxon Crow)
Come back Boffington Town - you are out of lockdown - all is forgiven.
July 15th, 2021 04:49 - Wood-fired Kiln (Flyingfish)
Pottery and ceramics, among the highest of the arts. You capture the...
July 15th, 2021 01:54 - Fancy (Fay Slimm.)
I was creeped out by this - thank you Fay.
Now to try to get a good...
July 14th, 2021 04:36 - Upon a Small White Feather (Neville)
Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the...
July 14th, 2021 04:28 - Live As You. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice, Andy - but freeing yourself from other\'s expectations can be...
July 14th, 2021 04:12 - Demeaning Meaning (Flyingfish)
Great read - I really enjoyed the ride. For me, though, I may well get...
July 14th, 2021 00:53 - FREEDOM (Oscar Gonzalez)
Read your ‘About me’ with interest. A couple of thoughts: I don’t do...
July 13th, 2021 19:54 - You know it (Poetic Dan)
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got...
July 13th, 2021 19:29 - one in a million (SureshG)
Malthus was giving it to the world in the 18th century, but did anyone...
July 13th, 2021 19:14 - LOVELY SET OF WHEELS (Sold as seen) (Andy Hunter)
You\'ve been round a load of lousy lots a lot - ever get lumbered,...
July 13th, 2021 08:18 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened...
July 13th, 2021 04:22 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s a little creepy Andy - have you got some kind of access to my...
July 13th, 2021 02:00 - Buzzing Bees (Nightingale of Poetry)
A poetic tribute to bees very neatly penned.
On a more prosaic level,...
July 12th, 2021 19:52 - An Unfinished Life and Poem (Trenz Pruca)
I\'d settle for that, Trenz. Much in a very neat little package. Last...
July 12th, 2021 19:26 - Naughty Girl (Jerry Reynolds)
Booty? Wot off to the footy again.....
Seriously though - Every (or most)...
July 12th, 2021 18:58 - Whu do you hate me? (GC)
You are a little bit of an enigma. I don’t know to whom you address this...
July 12th, 2021 18:49 - Oaths (Catgotthecream)
Your piece describes the multi faceted nature of domestic abuse – broken...
July 11th, 2021 18:19 - Field Of Dreams Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
My Poetic Side -
A poetry writing school.
I’m learning a...
July 11th, 2021 02:11 - Stranger at Door (Flyingfish)
Your fun poem does nothing to convince me that the BBC is not going down...
July 11th, 2021 01:53 - Briefly (Neville)
Much of the world\'s phenomena I could feel much better about if that were...
July 11th, 2021 01:46 - A Challenging See-Saw (Laura🌻)
Good one there Laura. Reads as self talk which is definitely the way to go...
July 10th, 2021 17:24 - Without the Vow (Gary Edward Geraci)
Perhaps not just young people, you know, Gary - divorce has been around...
July 10th, 2021 17:11 - Such is Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.)
As you so rightly point out - it\'s a very nostalgic piece, Fay..... Few...
July 10th, 2021 04:12 - We all have darkness (Poetic Dan)
I certainly have stopped by, Dan – I cannot tell a lie.
That little...
July 10th, 2021 04:01 - Banished (Neville)
Well so long as the banishment was sincere, Neville.
You can feel the...
July 10th, 2021 03:36 - Hypocrisy - 2016\0 (Rossen V. Vassilev)
I think perhaps you might just conceivably have something there......Who...
July 10th, 2021 01:11 - Illusion (Tulipslove)
\'i\'m not used to writing poems\' - could have fooled me......
Welcome...
July 10th, 2021 00:44 - Smile/Frown (AstralAbaddon)
This one is a bit heavy. Felt a little uncomfortable after this read - and...
July 10th, 2021 00:39 - Paths V (Eugene S.)
A great little parable which should have garnered more attention. Many ...
July 9th, 2021 20:51 - Elsa (Jerry Reynolds)
\'Tropical Storm Elsa, which brought heavy rain and high winds to parts of...
July 9th, 2021 07:57 - Life #1 (Saxon Crow)
Thanks for the advice, Sax.
Where have you been?
Welcome back.
July 9th, 2021 04:46 - Sleeping on the Job (Neville)
Yeh - that\'s proof Stonehenge has been around too long, hasn\'t it, old...
July 9th, 2021 04:11 - meditative - III (SureshG)
Mmmm I’m not sure you worry too much, Suresh – you are going to put it...
July 9th, 2021 04:02 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
And so we did (me - hippie disguised as a straight), Andy.
Your entry...
July 9th, 2021 03:47 - Behold the Sweet Angel (Thomas Koron)
Should rise through the ranks very rapidly round here., where you may find...
July 9th, 2021 01:46 - cut and paste poem #16: bertrand russell and snagglepuss (Jon Nakapalau)
With snagglepuss in the mix I find it funny and, yes, a little...
July 8th, 2021 19:42 - I like her hair (Reeves :()
A lengthy but easy read – no obscurities there; you tell it like it is,...
July 8th, 2021 19:35 - Untitled - XLVII (SureshG)
With you absolutely here, Suresh. That quagmire can be more like glue...
July 8th, 2021 19:10 - Longboards & You (Poetic Dan)
I really like the happiness in your poem/song, Dan.
Ashamed to say...
July 8th, 2021 18:16 - WHO is fooling who? (Gary Booker)
I would settle for the first four lines Gary.
The fifth, ‘This...
July 8th, 2021 08:06 - Freshly Squeezed (Neville)
\' just waiting on winter\' - nothing more?
What did you get up to in the...
July 8th, 2021 06:14 - Beginnings (Fay Slimm.)
Not sure at that point It\'s love... but I have felt that moment... Nice...
July 8th, 2021 05:07 - SINS OF THE PAST (Michael Edwards)
True, Michael - but we can try to make amends to the offspring of the...
July 8th, 2021 04:54 - Babel Bagels (Flyingfish)
I\'ll vote for that as I go through the exit to wherever, John. Not...
July 8th, 2021 00:31 - Lock down Lessons (Thekkinkkattil)
A smart write - that\'s my decision.
July 7th, 2021 08:29 - Way Too Late (Neville)
How did you get away with it Neville? \'Bit dangerous, your confession...
July 7th, 2021 04:31 - On the outta (Flyingfish)
Yes there are a few places up and down that stretch of coast a bit like...
July 7th, 2021 00:18 - meditative - II (SureshG)
Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message...
July 6th, 2021 19:23 - The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove)
Thanks Dove. That had something of the flavor of folk clubs I frequented...
July 6th, 2021 19:01 - No Mean Feet (Neville)
A wee bit of tension going on there? They\'ve got one hell of a past,...
July 6th, 2021 06:38 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
The river\'s growth and passage captured in rich descriptive...
July 6th, 2021 06:00 - Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60)
Yep - it\'s one way to save the environment from all those farting cows...
July 6th, 2021 05:46 - Just look at the time (Flyingfish)
Yeh - it’s necessary to impose some artificial system of measurement in...
July 6th, 2021 05:38 - Seeing Both Sides (Flyingfish)
Memories from childhood,John? (can\'t believe you are still at it). Bought...
July 5th, 2021 21:47 - Car Talk (Langton)
That\'s an easy fun way to make the argument digestible Langton.
Should...
July 5th, 2021 19:13 - Bullseye (Catgotthecream)
So ?Alex? – Your name, to be addressed by? Or ‘Cat’?
I’m...
July 5th, 2021 18:57 - Lost and Found (Jerry Reynolds)
As above, really, Jerry. Congrats on a great moral tale. Just wish the...
July 5th, 2021 18:38
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